6 Tips to Write the BEST Roommate Essay | Ivy League Supplemental Essay Masterclass

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  • Опубликовано: 25 дек 2024

Комментарии • 26

  • @gobelfury
    @gobelfury 2 месяца назад +4

    I watch a new video thinking what else could be new but every time I am thoroughly delighted. This is GOLD!! Thanks, Kevin❤️

  • @michaelman6700
    @michaelman6700 2 месяца назад +5

    bro reads college admissions like a book

  • @demarcuscousins-d1w
    @demarcuscousins-d1w 2 месяца назад +1

    Extremely high-quality videos beyond the BIG consulting firms trying to only get you to buy their services dude amazing. I know you focus on essay writing a lot and have some videos that dive into other sides of the college admission process like the activities list but have you thought of a video about how to write your honors section?? Probably very similar to your video on activities but I think it would be really helpful, especially for questions like if you should be including stats/acceptance rates or more description in the 100 words
    Keep it up!

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  2 месяца назад +1

      Thanks Demarcus! That's a great suggestion - I'll work on it brother

  • @NathnaelAyizohibel-h4m
    @NathnaelAyizohibel-h4m 2 месяца назад

    Thanks, your content really helps. Keep them coming!!!

  • @wollve
    @wollve 2 месяца назад

    new editing style is sick

  • @Harmony_Plate
    @Harmony_Plate 2 месяца назад

    Hey Kevin, this is an amazing video -thank you so much! This is a little off-topic, but what’s your favorite battle/who’s your favorite bboy? The first breakdancing video I ever watched was Neguin (my favorite) vs Lil G from Red Bull BCONE (2010). That said, I think my favorite bboy battle is Mounir vs Hong 10. Btw, your breakdancing is so good!!

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  2 месяца назад

      WOW what a great question Harmony! I'm a little biased, but my fav bboys have always been the more original/funky ones, like Alkolil, Phil Wizard and Issue. Favorite battle oofff that's a tough one... I'll have to think about it!

    • @Harmony_Plate
      @Harmony_Plate 2 месяца назад

      Glad you liked the question (also my name is Ajay, Harmony Plate is the name of my cookbook haha). Those are some great picks for your favorite boys! I remember Alkolil’s rounds had such crazy flow and his originality was amazing-I remember his Battle of the Year win in 2014 and then his insane sets in that upset against Lilou in Red Bull BCONE. I like the other picks with Phil Wizard and Issue because they definitely fit that original style (and the musicality is off the charts)!

  • @ElizabethJennifer-x6h
    @ElizabethJennifer-x6h 2 месяца назад

    Hey kelvin, I really love your content and I've been learning a lot of things from it. I wrote a roommate essay on how I love to discover new ideas, my love for music , football and movies, and also the necessary things she needs to know about me. But after watching this video I had an idea to write about my Christmas tradition as a Nigerian, after watching your video. I completed it already it involves my tradition, I'm also a cook, I talked about how I will cook, talked about how I want to attend events and explore traditons in college with her. But I don't know which of the essays to pick, I would have prefer editing it, but I'm from a low-income family. Which of the two do you think I should choose?. I'm one of your subscribers, so I will also be joining the live tutorial tomorrow, I will be expecting your reply, thanks😊.

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  2 месяца назад

      Writing about Christmas as a Nigerian is a really cool detail -- I'd definitely include that!

    • @ElizabethJennifer-x6h
      @ElizabethJennifer-x6h 2 месяца назад

      @@elevatedschool Thanks 😉

  • @Learwithfacelaughing
    @Learwithfacelaughing 2 месяца назад

    Hi Kevin !
    I am Gelson Kafumanessa, my first language is Portuguese and I would like to go into Stanford. Thanks!

  • @michaelyang287
    @michaelyang287 2 месяца назад

    THANK YOUUUU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOUUUUUIIIIII

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  2 месяца назад

      You're welcome!! Thanks for watching M Yang 287 :D

  • @marthaudeh7263
    @marthaudeh7263 Месяц назад

    Please can you help me with my own essay

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  Месяц назад

      Yes of course! Just sent it over to us here: www.elevated.school/editmyessay

    • @marthaudeh7263
      @marthaudeh7263 Месяц назад

      @@elevatedschool thank you so much

  • @Abbas-v5p
    @Abbas-v5p 2 месяца назад

    Hey bro I am from India .Your fees is too much for me .But I want to apply for the essay my draft is ready.Please do something to help me

  • @RKRich1
    @RKRich1 Месяц назад

    What is weirder than dipping sauces in a closet?

  • @waterthecan
    @waterthecan 2 месяца назад

    that gobbledygook essay was a masterpiece in short supplementals. wow!
    (i don't know why i watched this...i'm not applying to any school with a roommate essay, thank god. it was very clearly informative though, and i will be sending it to my friends who do have to write one, since it seems super useful! thanks for this series!)

    • @elevatedschool
      @elevatedschool  2 месяца назад

      Thank you so much!! Wow this comment made my day