How did she know the creature in the wrecked starship was a human? How could she take a step toward the man when she was kneeling down to see into the ship? How did they understand each other?
You keep changing the names of the characters! Pick the names and stick to them. Her name has about 15 different changes. His name has about the same. I hate to admit it, but yes, you’re right. It’s almost a waste of time if you’re gonna keep changing everything. Get it right or quit writing. If you don’t know how to write a story, we recommend that you go to school. In school, we pay attention. We learn to read and write correctly, and we even learn how to spell. They have there what they call teachers. These teachers will help you to learn. Can you say learn? Can you spell learn. This little option will help you in life. You can get good jobs. You can make money and all from the process of learning. That is why little kids go to school so they can learn and when they grow up, they can read and write and do all kinds of wonderful things for the human race. Perhaps one day you will be a great writer or do something significant for your family? 😊
bad narration and the subtitles are terrible. Unless you can correct mistakes in the subtitles it is better to leave them out. In all this shows a total lack of quality control.
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How did she know the creature in the wrecked starship was a human?
How could she take a step toward the man when she was kneeling down to see into the ship?
How did they understand each other?
I was holding back but this set up is off the rails. not even sure how many times its been used but it's a lot.
Next time try to create a woman with an alien appearance instead of an alien woman who looks exactly like a human...
You keep changing the names of the characters! Pick the names and stick to them. Her name has about 15 different changes. His name has about the same. I hate to admit it, but yes, you’re right. It’s almost a waste of time if you’re gonna keep changing everything. Get it right or quit writing. If you don’t know how to write a story, we recommend that you go to school. In school, we pay attention. We learn to read and write correctly, and we even learn how to spell. They have there what they call teachers. These teachers will help you to learn. Can you say learn? Can you spell learn. This little option will help you in life. You can get good jobs. You can make money and all from the process of learning. That is why little kids go to school so they can learn and when they grow up, they can read and write and do all kinds of wonderful things for the human race. Perhaps one day you will be a great writer or do something significant for your family? 😊
AI isn't' there yet
But it was nowhere to find 3 years ago... so imagine in 10 years...
bad narration and the subtitles are terrible. Unless you can correct mistakes in the subtitles it is better to leave them out. In all this shows a total lack of quality control.
I think the basis of the story is good, but too many assumptions and skipped segments, illogical progress, blah blah blah...
A Waste of time.... I would not recommend you listen to it. ❤🖖
If you don’t recommend it, why did you put a heart on it? You should’ve just said I don’t recommend reading your story or listening to it. Nuff said!
@mycastlecellar Dude..... have you heard of this concept of caring/love? 🤔🖖👍
@ why would I?