Thanks everyone for the criticism, It's really helpful- I'm currently working on getting better in the editing style and Script writing so hopefully next video will be better!!
While it's not a deep dive. There's very little lore to the void. And the void has an agenda. Natah seen him, something only tenno, or i presume, tenno select, can do. He likes his tenno, he gave them their power. But am not going to really go into it cause oh boy it's a REALLY long arduous subject.
to put it kindly, your speach tempo makes it obvious you're reading from a script that you didn't write, and that it isn't written in a style that you're comfortable with orally. When I realize this in the first few minutes, it makes me very unconvinced of anything you're saying, and makes me doubt there'll be anything substancial in the video. I acknowledge that a shallow dive in 10 minutes can be interesting as a reminder, but then you need to write a script that is proportionally casual and without unnecessary detail, unlike this video. Good luck on your next video!
Thank you so much! (It is a script That I wrote, I write books as well as this so it’s actually very hard to go from novel writing to script writing you have no idea lol, I use the big words there.) Ofc once again, never made a video like this on Warframe so I am trying to get better with script writing and all that.
Damn. This was the first time I’ve done something like this for Warframe, I didn’t want to make it too long as I’ve been known to ramble. Been working on doing better with research and script writing in general for videos like this, thanks for the feedback!!! I’ll do better next time :)
@@Bloxomatic It looks like the format you've chosen might be better described as a quick overview rather than a deep dive. Thanks for making the content, and I'm glad you're sticking to it.
Thanks everyone for the criticism, It's really helpful- I'm currently working on getting better in the editing style and Script writing so hopefully next video will be better!!
While it's not a deep dive. There's very little lore to the void. And the void has an agenda. Natah seen him, something only tenno, or i presume, tenno select, can do. He likes his tenno, he gave them their power.
But am not going to really go into it cause oh boy it's a REALLY long arduous subject.
to put it kindly, your speach tempo makes it obvious you're reading from a script that you didn't write, and that it isn't written in a style that you're comfortable with orally. When I realize this in the first few minutes, it makes me very unconvinced of anything you're saying, and makes me doubt there'll be anything substancial in the video.
I acknowledge that a shallow dive in 10 minutes can be interesting as a reminder, but then you need to write a script that is proportionally casual and without unnecessary detail, unlike this video. Good luck on your next video!
Thank you so much! (It is a script That I wrote, I write books as well as this so it’s actually very hard to go from novel writing to script writing you have no idea lol, I use the big words there.) Ofc once again, never made a video like this on Warframe so I am trying to get better with script writing and all that.
deep dive? your video isnt even 10 mins long and you regurgitated the wiki. you didnt look at proof or explain any of the symbolism. -2
let him cook
Damn. This was the first time I’ve done something like this for Warframe, I didn’t want to make it too long as I’ve been known to ramble. Been working on doing better with research and script writing in general for videos like this, thanks for the feedback!!! I’ll do better next time :)
@@Bloxomatic TEDDY DELETE UR COMMENT OR I WONT BE ABLE TO SLEEP TONIGHT
@excusemeno9139 XD, nah it’s helpful :3
@@Bloxomatic It looks like the format you've chosen might be better described as a quick overview rather than a deep dive.
Thanks for making the content, and I'm glad you're sticking to it.