I know! One of the most vivid scenes in the whole book! But, budget and time; my whole take on the book- to concentrate on "him" and "her"... the pit is there, the water is there, but alas, not the cave. I'd love to go back and put it in.
@@rightpurdy did you focus a lot on the whole relationship has with her in the sea of sleep? To be honest, that and the lengthy trips he takes to these other dimensions are the least interesting parts of the book. The first trip, and where he sees the universe coming to an end are great, but could be seriously condensed. I could live without the whole "her" subplot altogether, as it felt very corny and forced. Just my 2c of course!
@@jamiesalmonsculpture8599 Those passages do get moody, but like "The Nightland', add a depth and realism for me. My thought, personally, the love angle was very important, even the reason for the whole story and the answer to whether the old recluse was "thought to be mad" or not. Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it. Take a look at this and, hopefully, it wil answer some of your questions. ruclips.net/video/QvDRH7cHPPM/видео.html
Looking great! Will you be including the whole bottomless pit and the water surge tunnel sequence with Pepper ?
I know! One of the most vivid scenes in the whole book! But, budget and time; my whole take on the book- to concentrate on "him" and "her"... the pit is there, the water is there, but alas, not the cave. I'd love to go back and put it in.
@@rightpurdy did you focus a lot on the whole relationship has with her in the sea of sleep? To be honest, that and the lengthy trips he takes to these other dimensions are the least interesting parts of the book. The first trip, and where he sees the universe coming to an end are great, but could be seriously condensed. I could live without the whole "her" subplot altogether, as it felt very corny and forced. Just my 2c of course!
@@jamiesalmonsculpture8599 Those passages do get moody, but like "The Nightland', add a depth and realism for me. My thought, personally, the love angle was very important, even the reason for the whole story and the answer to whether the old recluse was "thought to be mad" or not. Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it. Take a look at this and, hopefully, it wil answer some of your questions. ruclips.net/video/QvDRH7cHPPM/видео.html