for context, the title is the old label for what is now commonly reffered to as "chronic fatigue syndrome", and for those who do not have the time or want to read the yellow wallpaper, from the synopsis' that google has given, its the diary entries of a woman dealing with post-partum mental health issues, mainly (possibly only) depression, consistently put down for the old "rest-cure" they used to do for women going through emotional turmoil like hysteria or nervous breakdowns. you can get a good grip on the lyrics just from that context. :)
no clue what the yellow wallpaper is but for a school project DAAMMNNNVNKFGNKFKJRKJG this is lowkey one of my new fav songs..... up there with professional voca producers /gen
i decided to check out the yellow wallpaper after listening to this song and oh my GOD it makes this song make so much more sense. i can't stop listening to it i love it so much
Never did I ever think there would be a vocaloid song based on The Yellow Wallpaper but I can DEFINITELY say it was something I did not know I needed!! I think this song captures the general feel of the story very well and also your art is SO LOVELY and adds to the vibes even more! I also feel inclined to reread the story so I can appreciate this song better as a whole. This is such a cool song and you should be proud!! I hope you have a nice whatever time of day it is for you! :)
OHHHHHHHHHH. oh how i love this so very much... creepy in all the best ways!!!! i love literature so much so i was HYPED when i heard you were making a song based on the yellow wallpaper!! of course, i could talk for ages about just the yellow wallpaper but i think this comment would get way too long if i covered the book (and the context of it) as well as my thoughts on this song KNFDSHJKBG. you are so very lucky you have yet to post the lyrics beneath this video otherwise i would break it down. (also it's been quite a bit since i've read the story itself, so if i sound a little off about anything, i apologise upfront!!) so, just to preface this: you got down the vibes of *the yellow wallpaper* beautifully. like, seriously. you bring to the forefront the creepiness of a depressing story. most women don't creep by daylight, but this song certainly does, and i love it for that!! and even better, you still highlight what the story is: it's a story about women's rights and marriage, it's about psychological issues of the 1800's! it's a story about madness; it's the story of a lady who knew what was best for her illness, yet was held back because her husband thought he knew best-- because he's a doctor, dear, and he knows-- which leads to her insanity. (& eventually liberates herself despite it all(?).) it's incredibly interesting to me how you weave into the 'advice' that the narrator is given, and how she feels disdainful, and even doubtful towards johnny. the slightly higher pitch GETS MEEEEEEE. like. ugh!!! almost like they're little whispers in her mind. i'm enamoured with how you've done that! it's also interesting that you latched onto the mentions of her baby, because most take the context away from the story to pass it off as a scary story. which is precisely why i love this song even more, i don't see a lot of discussions about *the yellow wallpaper* being about post-partum depression. so even more points to you!!! ALSO ALSO, the desperation that leaks into the lyrics of the song. despite all the nonsensicalness, the absurdity, of it all. oh dear. i may just faint over the shock of it all!!! i am so very feral over this all. i can't even get my words entirely right FBSDHJBG. also the "i might have died, in hindsight / the moment Her and i locked eyes" OOOOGH. AUUGUHGUHGHUDUHGGHBF. I AM GOING CRAZY!! RUNNING IN CIRCLES CRAWLING ON THE FLOOR AND THE WALLS AND THROUGH THE ROSE BUSHES!! i srsly didn't expect nonliteral perspectives on the story to be taken into account!!! especially because it truly highlights the feminist parts of it, so that made me so very giddy and made me even more insane for this song.
this is so underrated!! i love it. also this song made me read the entirety of the yellow wallpaeper and i fucking loved it. i am really surprised ive never read it before. so genuinely thank you for introducing me to it and also for how good this songs lyrics are now that ive read the story
I ADORE HOW THIS SOUNDS!!!! i read the yellow wallpaper in my past eng class, its such a good read! i initially saw the premiere a few days ago and i was so hyped for this bc i never expected a vocaloid song about this (/pos), and you got the vibe of the story exactly, love the lyrics and art for it! ❤
hi wow this is probably my 15th rewatch of this and !!! there's not a lot of songs that give me chills every time i listen, but this has definitely earned a spot on the list !! 1:04 - 1:23 has been living in my mind since this has come out,, maybe i should read the yellow wallpaper ,,, anyways!! lovely song! lovely art! all to be expected! looking forward to the next thing you put out !!! :D
I love literature, I love songs based on literature, I love The Yellow Wallpaper, I love your songs…. This is going to be EPIC!!!! The premiere can’t come soon enough!! 💛
@@localanon2906 I posted this comment when the video was waiting to premiere! So the video wasn’t available to watch yet, but I could still come to this page, read the description, comment, etc. :) Now that the video is out, I love the song as much as I thought I would 💛
finally have 2 working headphones so i can appreciate the switching sides audio at the end…❤ and hear the extra harmony in the last chorus!! i love this song
revisiting this sorry for clogging your notifs oops. i LOVE the art, the way you draw and edit is so pleasing to me. Your artstyle has likely developed since this was like a year ago but i still feel the need to drop a compliment. i love the eyes.............
Hmmm i gotta think about what this song could mean...maybe a husband that has no use for his wife anymore or thinks she's crazy because she's to exhausted because of their born or unborn child? Atleast this is what i am getting from this. Because heck if i know what "women inside the wallpaper" means.
the fact i knew this was about the yellow wallpaper in the first minute before i even read the description DGSJHSF i love that story and u did a great job at conveying the protagonist's descent (or ascent, depending how u look at it)!!
I see a lot of people think this is about mental health but I think her wallpaper was just using arsenic dye that used to be popular before it got banned because it released arsenic gas slowly poisoning whoever's nearby like this singer for instance.
Every time I listen to this song I always think “There’s no way that this is all Gumi’s voice, she doesn’t have that kind of range” but I’m also an idiot, so I’d never know. Is this all really Gumi?
Hmmm relistening to this the woman this could be about could have died during the birth of her child and her husband hears her voice in the walls. Atleast this is what i get from this lol =:
HOW DO PPL MAKE INSTRUMENTALS LIKE THIS IM ON MOBILE BTW BUT IM GETTING A LAPTOP,,,, CAN ANY1 GIVE ME SUM ADVICE (IM A MINOR AND DONT HAVE MONEY THO,,,, I COULD ASK MY DAD THO IF MONEY IS A MUST)
hi! me personally i’ve literally been using the FL studio demo for the past three years… XD unfortunately you can’t save your projects with the demo, so when you’re making a project you kinda always have to keep the tab open until youre done lol. and several features aren’t usable with this version but hey, it functions great still for me ^_^ if i recall the demo doesn’t cost, tho my memory is a bit faulty ^^; if you need an alternative theres stuff like garageband or signal online midi editor :]
for context, the title is the old label for what is now commonly reffered to as "chronic fatigue syndrome", and for those who do not have the time or want to read the yellow wallpaper, from the synopsis' that google has given, its the diary entries of a woman dealing with post-partum mental health issues, mainly (possibly only) depression, consistently put down for the old "rest-cure" they used to do for women going through emotional turmoil like hysteria or nervous breakdowns. you can get a good grip on the lyrics just from that context. :)
amazing song, btw!
Shit happens when you listen to the song but don't read the lyrics lmao.
(I did that and interpreted it completly wrong)
GOD THIS FUCKS AND REALLY CAPTURES THE VIBE OF THE YELLOW WALLPAPER... I LOVE IT SM
no clue what the yellow wallpaper is but for a school project DAAMMNNNVNKFGNKFKJRKJG this is lowkey one of my new fav songs..... up there with professional voca producers /gen
i decided to check out the yellow wallpaper after listening to this song and oh my GOD it makes this song make so much more sense. i can't stop listening to it i love it so much
I love how this song is riddled with chromatic scales! Very nice! Not only that, but the changes in rhythm is very cool!
Everyone.. this is it.. the moment of truth. ANOTHER MASTERPIECE COMING OUR WAY
Edit: I have just listened to it and WOW. Just WOW. I'm speechless
Never did I ever think there would be a vocaloid song based on The Yellow Wallpaper but I can DEFINITELY say it was something I did not know I needed!! I think this song captures the general feel of the story very well and also your art is SO LOVELY and adds to the vibes even more! I also feel inclined to reread the story so I can appreciate this song better as a whole. This is such a cool song and you should be proud!! I hope you have a nice whatever time of day it is for you! :)
OHHHHHHHHHH. oh how i love this so very much... creepy in all the best ways!!!! i love literature so much so i was HYPED when i heard you were making a song based on the yellow wallpaper!! of course, i could talk for ages about just the yellow wallpaper but i think this comment would get way too long if i covered the book (and the context of it) as well as my thoughts on this song KNFDSHJKBG. you are so very lucky you have yet to post the lyrics beneath this video otherwise i would break it down. (also it's been quite a bit since i've read the story itself, so if i sound a little off about anything, i apologise upfront!!)
so, just to preface this: you got down the vibes of *the yellow wallpaper* beautifully. like, seriously. you bring to the forefront the creepiness of a depressing story. most women don't creep by daylight, but this song certainly does, and i love it for that!! and even better, you still highlight what the story is: it's a story about women's rights and marriage, it's about psychological issues of the 1800's! it's a story about madness; it's the story of a lady who knew what was best for her illness, yet was held back because her husband thought he knew best-- because he's a doctor, dear, and he knows-- which leads to her insanity. (& eventually liberates herself despite it all(?).)
it's incredibly interesting to me how you weave into the 'advice' that the narrator is given, and how she feels disdainful, and even doubtful towards johnny. the slightly higher pitch GETS MEEEEEEE. like. ugh!!! almost like they're little whispers in her mind. i'm enamoured with how you've done that! it's also interesting that you latched onto the mentions of her baby, because most take the context away from the story to pass it off as a scary story. which is precisely why i love this song even more, i don't see a lot of discussions about *the yellow wallpaper* being about post-partum depression. so even more points to you!!!
ALSO ALSO, the desperation that leaks into the lyrics of the song. despite all the nonsensicalness, the absurdity, of it all. oh dear. i may just faint over the shock of it all!!! i am so very feral over this all. i can't even get my words entirely right FBSDHJBG.
also the "i might have died, in hindsight / the moment Her and i locked eyes" OOOOGH. AUUGUHGUHGHUDUHGGHBF. I AM GOING CRAZY!! RUNNING IN CIRCLES CRAWLING ON THE FLOOR AND THE WALLS AND THROUGH THE ROSE BUSHES!! i srsly didn't expect nonliteral perspectives on the story to be taken into account!!! especially because it truly highlights the feminist parts of it, so that made me so very giddy and made me even more insane for this song.
this is so underrated!! i love it. also this song made me read the entirety of the yellow wallpaeper and i fucking loved it. i am really surprised ive never read it before. so genuinely thank you for introducing me to it and also for how good this songs lyrics are now that ive read the story
I ADORE HOW THIS SOUNDS!!!! i read the yellow wallpaper in my past eng class, its such a good read! i initially saw the premiere a few days ago and i was so hyped for this bc i never expected a vocaloid song about this (/pos), and you got the vibe of the story exactly, love the lyrics and art for it! ❤
This song is amazing!! Yet again, another hit for the Vocaloid spooky playlist!!
ANOTHER BANGER FROM VENESECTION!!!! I LOVE THE ATMOSPHERE OF THIS SONG SO MUCH ARGHHHHHH IT'S SO GOOD
I'm late, but i love this song so much! All of your other songs are amazing too, and the stuff on SoundCloud. The art is so cool too!
hi wow this is probably my 15th rewatch of this and !!! there's not a lot of songs that give me chills every time i listen, but this has definitely earned a spot on the list !! 1:04 - 1:23 has been living in my mind since this has come out,, maybe i should read the yellow wallpaper ,,,
anyways!! lovely song! lovely art! all to be expected! looking forward to the next thing you put out !!! :D
Honestly youve only posted a few songs, but youre literally one of my favs! Everything about your songs are just absolutely IMMACULATE
I love literature, I love songs based on literature, I love The Yellow Wallpaper, I love your songs…. This is going to be EPIC!!!! The premiere can’t come soon enough!! 💛
at the time I'm typing this, this comment says "4 days ago" and the video says "1 day ago". please explain
@@localanon2906 I posted this comment when the video was waiting to premiere! So the video wasn’t available to watch yet, but I could still come to this page, read the description, comment, etc. :)
Now that the video is out, I love the song as much as I thought I would 💛
yooo VERY nicely done!! this is going to get replayed so hard
this is so catchy omg i love this
What a masterpiece you created. I wanna read The Yellow Wallpaper now. I LOVED IT. !! I love all of your work. Still hooked on Give Or Take.
YOUR SO UNDERRATED OMG I wanna figure out what this songs about its creepy
it’s based off of a short story called “the yellow wallpaper” !!! and yes it is creepy in the best way possible
We making it out of our minds with this one 🗣🔥🔥🔥‼️‼️
This goes so hard I love it
Also I was like "It's giving The Yellow Wallpaper" then I opened the description and went HELL YEAH I love a good literary reference
it appears this is the final push i need to read the book/story
Absolutely worth it. thank you for the incredible song and the push to read it
WHY DOESN'T THIS HAVE MORE LIKES THIS IS SO GOOD ❤❤❤
Hello, venesection. It's lonely and dramatic, very passionate song.
This is so beautiful, my god.? I have not read “The Yellow Wallpaper” but, with my little knowledge of it, the lyrics are so cool…
Amazing work! Great job vene!!❤❤
THIS IS SO GOOD WHAT-
finally have 2 working headphones so i can appreciate the switching sides audio at the end…❤ and hear the extra harmony in the last chorus!! i love this song
revisiting this sorry for clogging your notifs oops. i LOVE the art, the way you draw and edit is so pleasing to me. Your artstyle has likely developed since this was like a year ago but i still feel the need to drop a compliment. i love the eyes.............
This sounds so good I love the way they harmonize!
if this dissapears off yt its cus i liked the song so much that i ate it
this is so good you deserve more reconicion!!
Hmmm i gotta think about what this song could mean...maybe a husband that has no use for his wife anymore or thinks she's crazy because she's to exhausted because of their born or unborn child? Atleast this is what i am getting from this. Because heck if i know what "women inside the wallpaper" means.
read the yellow wallpaper by Charlotte Perkins Gilman, that's what this song is based on
coming back to this banger
the fact i knew this was about the yellow wallpaper in the first minute before i even read the description DGSJHSF i love that story and u did a great job at conveying the protagonist's descent (or ascent, depending how u look at it)!!
YAY A NEW SONGGG 😋
this is so so so so so good
I see a lot of people think this is about mental health but I think her wallpaper was just using arsenic dye that used to be popular before it got banned because it released arsenic gas slowly poisoning whoever's nearby like this singer for instance.
WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORK SO MUCH THIS IS AN ABSOLUTE NEW HIGH YHESE LYRICS ARE FUCKING INSANEEEE THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD VENESECTION
This was amazing!!!
Every time I listen to this song I always think “There’s no way that this is all Gumi’s voice, she doesn’t have that kind of range” but I’m also an idiot, so I’d never know. Is this all really Gumi?
yep yep!! her original voice is definitely edited, but it's all from what was available in the vocaloid program ^-^
@@veneyweeney WHAT. I never knew she had such insane range like that- You did an amazing job at tuning her to be that way on this wonderful song!
HOLY AHIT THIS SPNG IS FIRE?!
Oooh this is going to be great
Hmmm relistening to this the woman this could be about could have died during the birth of her child and her husband hears her voice in the walls. Atleast this is what i get from this lol =:
This slaps
LETS GOOOO
Very normal about this song
Omg this sounds amazing can i make a slowed/sped up version of this?
of course!! make sure to credit the original ofc :3 tysm!!
@@veneyweeney thank u very muchh and ofc I will:D
HOW DO PPL MAKE INSTRUMENTALS LIKE THIS
IM ON MOBILE BTW BUT IM GETTING A LAPTOP,,,, CAN ANY1 GIVE ME SUM ADVICE (IM A MINOR AND DONT HAVE MONEY THO,,,, I COULD ASK MY DAD THO IF MONEY IS A MUST)
hi! me personally i’ve literally been using the FL studio demo for the past three years… XD unfortunately you can’t save your projects with the demo, so when you’re making a project you kinda always have to keep the tab open until youre done lol. and several features aren’t usable with this version but hey, it functions great still for me ^_^ if i recall the demo doesn’t cost, tho my memory is a bit faulty ^^; if you need an alternative theres stuff like garageband or signal online midi editor :]
@@veneyweeney tysm :DDD! means alot!
do you have a spotfy?
not at the moment!! but sometime tomorrow this song will be uploaded on my soundcloud ^_^
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What the hecc is the yellow wallpaper- /genq
a short story by Charlotte Perkins Gilman! its considered a classic in american literature
Can I use this for an animatic?🤭
of course!! just make sure to give proper credit, good luck with your project!!! :D
@@veneyweeneyAlright ty ^'^
I'd wanna be your friend.....
Never let them cook again 🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥
check your Stove
No way you got to my stove cuz you don't belong in the kitchen 🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥
@@MonarchMotherfly i got lost on the way to your mother’s room 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥⁉️⁉️⁉️
@@veneyweeneyi'm in your glass of milk
@@echo8481 NO
Hit em with the your in timeout till you stop acting crazy. Funny enough it's not gendered. I was in a ward to for that reason