DON'T GO || UNOFFICIAL WARHAMMER 40K AUDIO NARRATED BY A VOX IN THE VOID || LAMENTERS
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- Опубликовано: 12 сен 2024
- Incredible Lamenters short story by TiredEagleofManwe
Original text can be found here :
Don't Go: www.fanfiction...
A big thank you to them for allowing me to adapt their work into audio format, and a bigger thank you to my Daughter for helping me with the recording.
Music: 'The Exodus' and 'I walk with ghosts' by Scott Buckley
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I also would like to thank everyone who has helped me on this journey so far, the regular listeners on my channel and all of the wonderful creators that have aided in spreading the word about my channel. It means the world to me and, what better way of saying that then releasing a more emotional Warhammer themed piece!
Love you all
#LAMENTERS
#WARHAMMER40K
#AVOXINTHEVOID
A Vox in the Void
Alternate ending:
Dreadnought Brenevier launched a barrage of heavy bolter fire before turning to shield a squad of Battle Sisters from the enemies' response.
"Many thanks, venerable one." said the Canoness leading the Sororitas, her weathered face showing her years of service. But those years had not dulled her battlefield senses, as a Heretic soon learned with a bolt round to the head, as he tried to sneak toward the armored group with a krak grenade.
"You should be evacuating with the rest," the Dreadnought boomed, "The line will not hold for long."
"It will so long as we draw breath," the Canoness called back, directing her Sisters to another group of incoming Heretics. "Besides, I would not dishonor the sacrifice of your brother Astartes with cowardice. For those we cherish...."
"We die in glory," Brenevier finished automatically. He paused once he noticed what had happened. "You have fought alongside Lamenters before."
"I have. I never miss an opportunity to repay my... *_our_* debt to your chapter."
_"That is more than what can be said for my cousins...."_ Brenevier grumbled, decades of bitter dreams breaking through his usual stoicism.
"Some of us recognize the valor of your warriors," the Canoness agreed with a wry smile. "I will never forget my first experience with the Lamenters. It will be almost 70 years to the day."
70 years.... The Dreadnought mused. That was right around the time he was entombed. At the defense of...
"You were at the battle of Corillia?"
"Hive Holdenmire," she nodded.
Another brief pause. "I do not recall any Sororitas on that front." He turned to face the Canoness. "Where in the city did you--"
For the first time in that campaign, Brenevier was dumbstruck. Not even the impact of autogun fire would pull his attention.
Mounted on the center of the Canoness's chestplate, surrounded by numerous prayer seals, was a smaller piece of parchment. Despite years of fading, one could still recognize the unmistakable outline of an Astartes's power armor, its crude proportions betraying the childish hand that drew it. Next to it was an equally crude drawing of a red heart, the heraldry of the Lamenters.
"Canoness...." Brenevier began slowly. "I do not recall hearing your name."
"Molada", she said, briefly looking up from her bolt pistol sights to meet his gaze. Despite the unchanging facade of the Dreadnought armor, she couldn't help but be drawn in to its piercing gaze.
_"Molli..."_
"....Breni??" A tear welled up in her eyes, breaking the usually hardened veneer of her face. "Emperor's Grace, it really is you." A heaving breath. "You did stay with us....."
A rocket crashed onto Brenevier's shoulder, the explosion finally breaking him from his stupor. Once again the Dreadnought unleashed the fury of his heavy bolter against the incoming Heretics.
"I am afraid this happy reunion will not last long if the line breaks." Brenevier growled.
"So be it," Canoness Molada said, wiping her soot-stained face with her pistol-hand before loading a new magazine. A vicious grin was now growing on her face. "We will have no choice but to break the enemy before that happens."
Brenevier turned slightly to meet her eyes. Even through the Dreadnought armor, Molada could tell a similar grin was growing on his battle-scarred face. "So be it."
Brenevier raised his ceramite arm in exuberant defiance. *"FOR THOSE WE CHERISH!!"* He roared before charging straight at the Heretic mob.
*"WE DIE IN GLORY!!"* the Sororitas roared back, joining their brother Astartes in the charge.
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Fun fact: "Molada" means "giver of life", while "Moli" means "rebellious" (or in this case, "defiant") :D
This is truly fantastic!!!! I'm sure the author would love to read this!
@@AVoxintheVoid Thank you so much! ☺While I'd wish for this to someday get the full audio adaptation treatment, simply seeing your reaction is satisfaction enough! 😄
Yes, this is how it ends
Making a grown man cry shucks 😢
I'm as much in awe reading the comment section as I was listening to the video.
Would it be possible for some of these very talented subscribers to do a what happens next story in installments entered through the coment section, voted on with likes then baught to life through narration and repeat the process to form a longer story.
The Lamenter shows the Iron Warrior what it means to be Iron within and without. Unbreakable resolve that the Iron Warriors can only pay lip service to. He sees what he could never be no matter how often he chants their motto. He sees what he couldve been, what he abandoned, and he smashes the mirror. Yet, even in pieces, it reflects his failures.
You're wrong.
The Lamenters aren't simply crude and brittle iron which can be broken.
They're the finest tempered steel or even diamond, for those worthless wretches do not truly understand what it really means to be strong, for all they do try so damn hard to justify their treachery and project their own failures onto others because they were too weak to stay loyal.
The Iron Warrior is nothing but a weak piece of scrap iron who's trying to project his pathetic weakness onto an astartes he knows, that he *knows* is a thousand times the man he will *ever* be, even if given 10,000 years to do so.
You misread his reply, he was saying the iron warrior failed to be iron within and the Lamenter shows the resolve to stand by his beliefs regardless of the consequences.
They do not fight for the imperium they fight for humanity
For those we cherish we die in glory!
Everytime a lamenter dies, the emperor sheds a single tear.
I don't think big E has enough fluids left in him for that.
No wonder he's dessicated...
This guy ladies and gentlemen...
THIS vox guy....
Magnificent.
Thank you Frank!! Really appreciate your listens and kind words
*Sees child's drawing of a Lamenter*
Ah, good. I needed a punch in the feels. They've been getting numb. Here we go then.
21:26 "you stayed" it wasn't even the fact that everyone else abandoned them but the survivors themselves gave up too, but it was the the lamenters who stayed and inspired them to keep going despite how hopeless the situation was
The Ultramarines are all like courage and honor, boys like Angron said you know nothing about courage and honor, but Lamenters at the other hand... Absolutely beautiful, they are true sons of Sanguinus.
angron is the last person I'd consider knowing anything bout that subject
@@christianwarrior3169 In regards to his last stand and his rebellion on Nuceria, he knew everything about Courage and Honor. When he was taken away from his Last Stand with his Slave Brothers and Sisters dying and him surviving is when he stopped knowing Courage and Honor as he descended into Anger and Madness.
@@PolarisTheMorrigan Then why did you not save his brother and sister, Emperor!? You say it is because Nuceria had aready join the imperium and you did not want to destroy the planet production capability. But I would argue that the loyalty of a Primarch, a being that can -with his legion- conquer an entire sector, far outwiegh the benefit of keeping a planet ruled by tyrant that would be more than happy to backstab you if given the chance.
@@PolarisTheMorrigan Yet when given power, what did he do? Did he uplift those suffering under the reign of tyranny? Did he tell his sons the importance of liberty? He had his sons implanted with the same abominable technology which tortures him. He turned his legion into a legion of unhinged murderous lunatics. Angron was no better than the High-Riders of Nuceria he despises so much.
Edit: changed "the" to "those"
Its ironic with angron because he had such a unique power he was capable of taking away people's pain and woes and what not but then the nails drove him mad before that he was very honorable
The Emperor wept, Sanguinius wept and I as well.
This really hit me hard. To the point of tears.
Thank you for the listen my friend. Do not mourn brother Brenevier...💪
Wept like a fucking baby. Brenevier was truly one of the Emperor's Finest.
Upon holy Terra, in the Throne Room itself, a tear rolls down the face of the Emperor's ravaged body, shed to honour the sacrifice of one of his greatest warriors and even through endless layers of buildings and earth, the Bell of Heroes can be heard tolling.
The "Please don't go, please stay" broke me. Voice actors did a great job just reminded me of my daughter. Just to hold her, wanting to stay and say you're safe.
Yeah that was me and my daughter 😊
Ciaphas Cain took 99% of all the luck the Lamenters have. Poor yellow bois cant seem to catch a break. :)
FU
The Lamenters ideological concept makes me want to adopt their battlecry with how tragic all their stories are.
Damn here I am an adult man crying over fictional chars, yesterday Bob and Tala and now that beautiful soul of an astartes. Don't tell anyone.
Shows the sheer strength of the writing don't you think? Who would have thought a story about giant potato loving hulks would be so moving
@@AVoxintheVoid The writing is superb combined with your narration. Gav and Bob are simple Brutes, but the saying blessed is the mind too small for doubt fits perfect here. Unwavering loyalty to their emperor and to their friends. Whoever wrote this nailed it and your narration makes Gav sound like that lovable simpleton. Also nailed
No shame in it, brother. A boy weeps for his own sorrows, a man weeps for the sorrow of others.
10/10 FOR THOSE WE CHERISH WE DIE IN GLORY
Thank you for the listen, means the world to me
I am terrified that the Lamenters are seen only to suffer, fail and die. While tragedy is the key theme of the Chapter, what is tragedy without hope?
I despise the thought of the Lamenters being seen as a joke, and I feel they deserve the odd win more than once.
In saying that, they have truly endured. When they were first mentioned, both the Lamenters as well as the Scythes of the Emperor were mentioned as DESTROYED by the Tyrannids!
They got a second chance and 40k is richer for it.
As for this tale, I shed a tear by the end. Stellar work!
Fantastic post. I'm always humbled by the fans knowledge and love of the lore. Thank you for the kind words
@@AVoxintheVoid
Thank you for the beautiful video.
As an old player finally dipping into astartes, the lamenters seem to win as well as ultramarines. Unfortunately their victories are always soured by something. they get windfalls on things where other chapters would have been complelty eradicated (by enemy or inquisition). They are truly a chapter of pure hope.
Then the internet grabbed them, turned up the grimderp and now can't exit the rhino without tripping on a rock and shooting themselves.
This story really points out how they constantly put themselves in those situations. By caring for others, by wearing their hearts on their sleeve.
@@carlosfirpi1878
Just tae make my point more clear, I meant a win as in something that doesn't hurt them on some level, ya ken what I mean?
@@darthlazurus4382 Ah. Gotcha then.
The fact Lamenters are able to cry for each other, and for normal mortals, explains the Lamenters perfectly. What type of Space Marine Chapter would you get, if the Emperors mistake upon making them, was he forgot to take away their emotions? Take away their humanity? What would happen if Space Marines where left with their humanity? They would suffer horrendous loses and be looked at as being cursed by other Space Marines. What else would you get? Stories of Space Marines sacrificing themselves to save children, stories of putting themselves in front of ordinance even to protect one little girl. Stories of Space Marines, despite horrific loses, never giving up.
What is the point of defending humanity if one's humanity is lost in the defence?
Space Marines fight because the Emperor bred them to fight. Lamenters? They fight for the Hope of a better tomorrow.
Honor means nothing without sacrifice.
How it enraged the Iron Warrior that the Lamenter had something to believe in, something to die for. If he could have, I think he would have traded places with him.
What a beautiful story. Thank you for bringing it to life.
That's how pathetic the traitor marines truly are.
They supposedly have all this power and so on, but what does that really give them?
They have nothing to truly live or fight for, they're nothing but slaves, despite what they might say.
that's why he was so adamant on trying to break his will, so the lamenter would cave and the iron warrior could feel justified in being a traitor and a heretic
@@TheGhjgjgjgjgjgNo greater sacrifice than to die in the protection of others.
@@TheGhjgjgjgjgjghe's mad he couldn't be the iron warrior dantioch was
@@afriendlycadian9857
Damn straight he is.
The Lamenters are now my favorite chapter because of you
This
This is why I fucking love Blood Angels successor chapters. They all have unique morals, cultures, and colors.
Thank you acrobat, great comment
Dark Angels and Spacewolfs may be the greatest of warriors, Ultramarines and Raven Guards may be leaders, but the Lamenters and Salamanders are over all human, for those we cherish, we die in glory
*WE DIE IN GLORY MY FELLOW LAMENTERS*
Iron Warrior to the dying Lamenter:
"THINK, LAMENTER, THINK!!!"
Memes ahoy!
Unless you've been a soldier in real combat you'll never understand why all that suffering from a priceless warrior is far easily worth the life of 1 poor, malnourished child. I would die 1000 deaths by fire to save 1 child! You dont know the true blessings which await those who have given all for the forgotten
THE LAMENTER: “I SAVE MULLY”
@Silverknight171 "What will you have after 100 years fighting and dying for random HUMANS?!"
"Those I cherish."
You Think TRAITOR
The Emperor knows Brenevier's name, and he rests at his side.
The Emperor and Brother Brenevier haven’t fallen, they have become the Lamenter’s fury made manifest.
I'm in shame.
I always think of the Lamenters as a joke.
And now I'm broke in tears, remembering...they are Angels, brother Adrian. They are winged angels as you and your own brothers, and their sacrifice honor our fathers death.
For those who we cared. We die in glory.
I have followed the Warhammer 40k lore for almost a decade, but never have I heard a more compelling storytelling than this. This fleshes out that in the grimdark of it all, in a galaxy where near perfect demigods roam, perhaps it is in the most flawed that becomes the best of them, and that thereby in being flawed, the beauty of their forgotten humanity shines.
I enjoyed this reading inasmuch as I have loved your telling of loyalist World Eaters. I shed tears 3 minutes in. Well done for showing the humanity of the Lamenters in a grimdark universe where compassion is but a speck and a miracle. Words fail me brother. Ave Imperator!
Thankyou so much for your beautifully written response! Pinned!
Echoes of eternity. Siege of terra has some seriously emotional moments.
I will start warhammer because of this video.
I did not cry because I was focused on playing Mario Kart. Delfino Square, more specifically
Damn, this is the first 40k story ever to bring me to tears, and I'm a grown men. That scene with the dying Lamenter and how all the hivers laid their hands upon him broke me. I think the Lamenters are my favourite loyalist chapter now. I don't really know what else to say apart from thanking you once again for all those beautiful stories that you gift to us. You really are the best 40k story channel I know of. For those we cherish, we die in glory.
Thankyou kindly reaper. It's a beautifully written story and I was honoured to bring it to life. I have a new one coming out in a hour and a half if you're around! For those we Cherish..
@@AVoxintheVoid Always
Same
IRON WARRIOR: "Hah! Everything you've done today has been for NOTHING, Son of Dorn! This world is--"
LAMENTER: "S...son of Dorn? But I'm not an Imperial Fist."
IRON WARRIOR: "Of course you are! You have yellow armour!"
LAMENTER: "I'm a Lamenter!"
IRON WARRIOR: "Yes, keep lamenting, Imperial Fist! Just like all your brothers who cried at the Iron Cage! MWAHAHAHAH!"
"Then Lament your death, traitor. I will bring you down with me, that I promise!"
*melta bomb goes off, killing both the Iron Warrior and the Lamenter*
we are unlucky, but we are not pushovers.
Jesus this is a gem of a comment 😂
“I told you I’m not an Imperial Fist!”
“You- You’re not?”
“No! But that guy is!”
*An Imperial Fist soldier is seen building towers like he is in Fortnite*
@@Franz0818 Before you attack, you MUST FORTIFY.🗿
Lamenters are so stubborn in their defense of the innocent, that Iron Warriors mistake their steadfastness as coming from Dorn himself.
This one got me instantly tearing up at “Molly is…” he calls her by her name he probably knew the name of each child he saved. Remembers their faces too.
"For those we cherish we die in glory" this made me cry, awesome awesome work tanks
From 4:42 to the end, i kept cried, cried like little child and i am proud of it. The beauty and sadness of this touch my heart, everything was great, the story, those voices, all great. "For those we cherish, we die in glory!" and For Lamenters, i lament in tears!
Iron warrior "your primarch is dead"
Breneveir "that may be so but alteast he loved us, unlike yours. He hates you".
Nice.
From the Imperial Firsts vs Iron Warriors video.
👍
This was an absolute masterpiece, it broke my heart and reforged it into steel. God bless you man, I really appreciate your hard work and efforts in making this story come to life in my mind. It was so real and so full of hope, inspiration, selfless sacrifice and service. Man I just wanna go volunteer somewhere now. There is good in people and it's worth hoping for and it's worth reminding people that they are worth loving. Take care Vox, you and your crew are truly cherished by us.
Pinning this comment. Thankyou so much for the kind words. I'm humbled it had this effect on you brother
its not easy being a GREAT man but i will always remember you T_T
Aiken brother
Damn I thought he was going to become a dreadnought. RIP valiant cry boy marine
This is a masterpiece, truly! i was expecting the Sanguinor or the Legion of the Damned to come to his aide but to hear normal everyday citizens rallying to fight was even more wonderful.
I really really appreciate your comment my brother. Glad you enjoyed it. Sloane did an amazing job with the writing on this one
Tu'Shan: "Lamenter, we did not fight together, but I heard your story. And you will be avenged by my hanmer"
... Thank you, for making this. The Lamenters recently became my favorite space marine chapter, and this video tells why. If I ever had to live in the blighted galaxy of the 41st millennium, this is the example I would try my damndest to live up to.
Goddamn Onion-cutting ninjas, doing their thing while lsitening to this glorious praise to the Emperor's finest! Magnificent work! You absolutely bring it to a whole new level with each new story!! LOVED THIS!!
Thank you david! Always uplifting when you comment!
Somewhere in the Immaterium, Sanguinius' soul is weeping for these true sons of his each time they fall...
True Angels for any human that gets to be in their presence
Dammit man...why can't we just have this kind of a tale as an everyday thing? Anyone ever deployed and had to deal with kids in war zones know exactly this feeling. Why do we do this as a species? Well done. Peace to everyone.
I about burst into tears at work while listening to this, this makes me want to collect space marines for the lamenter chapter alone. Thank you for such a wonderful dive into the lore of a universe I cherish so much!
I’m not gonna lie…. This was a tear jerker and I now have a better love and understanding of the Lamenters….. by the throne this was sooooo good.
To make a templar weep. Though the blood angels, and their successors are cursed with the black rage, and red thirst, they stand tall. No remorse, no respite, no fear! Die well Lamenter, may the emperor keep you. Rest knowing that your sacrifice moved this Templar, and allowed him to remember what we Astartes fight for. For those we cherish we die in glory!
This story broke me. It geniunely broke me. Was painting some minis while hearing this in your Space Marine playlist and had to stop because tears were running all over my face. I'm so grateful that I found your channel and compassionate stories. People like you make the hobby worthy. So thank you for the time & effort spent to bring them to life!
It's been almost a month since I've just gotten into 40k. After days of reading, learning some basics to the tabletop, ordering a few minis and paint and finding my favorite Chapter I can easily say this is the most I've genuinely cried in years, and I'm sure as hell not going anywhere. For those we cherish. . .
*WE DIE IN GLORY!*
This was a beautiful story. It shows the humanity that Space Marines can remember. Just like Nathaniel Garro did during the Heresy
The emperor gives the Lamenters the heaviest burdens because no one else can bear them.
They're not entirely alone, as the Salamanders, Ultramarines, and even Space Wolves to an extent care about the people of the Imperium.
majestic and your daughter's voice helps dring it to the next level.
Many thanks Arthur! It took a while to persuade her but I think she'll have the bug now!
"Do not lament my Chapter, brother.
Becouse for those we cherish, we die in glory"
The Captain ended the vox link to the other Astartes commanders. He turned and sighed. We knew our task, even though we would do it alone. The Captain looked over us sharply, we saw the pict feeds. The civillian corpses, it angered us. Other Chapters rarely understood us, bar others of the blood. Our faces where set, our purpose set upon our angelic features.My Brother-Sargeant clenched his power sword tighter in anger at what he saw as desecration of the Emperors loyal subjects. The company Chaplain then closed his sermon book loudly. at the alter, from where he had not moved since he came into the chapel. Everyone fell even more silent. But everyone had made their hearts course known by expression alone. The Chaplain, deathmasked could not find fault.
" You make me proud my brethren " he calmly spoke.
He continued...
" You stand as sure as our gene sire, Sanguinius did. The great angel stood at eternity gate. We Lamenters forever stand at the same gate. In our own way, for those who we MUST defend, just. Like. Him.In spirit rather then flesh. I see this gift burn in you all. The gift our Primarch left us before every other. ..."
I watched.. my brethren slowly moving into diciplined ranks which I joined. The last few brothers unlocking their helmets. Placing them before them on the ceramite floor of our strike cruiser. The Captain alone remains standing, the company champion kneels. The company banner in his left hand. Silence endures for a moment, broken when Chaplain Astiel moves over the raised platform in the chapel.
" We shall go unto them. As the Angel did. To stand against the tide. We shall burn the traitors from this world to whom they wish to lay claim. We will deny them this! For we stand, in the name of the Emperor and Sanguinius! This is your purpose! And your path is singular!
We came here the first. By your duty and on our Chapters honor! You Will be the last!"
I felt fire within my breast. My hearts surged. As the Chaplains words rang true as thunder trough the chapel. Not a split second later we all rose. Voicing the reply as we had for decades. A full ninteyseven astartes voices booming as one.
"May the Emperor protect!"
A split second later the warning lights sounded and the horns bellowed across the ship. Mere moments later our squad was in our designated drop pod and the lurch and sudden whine of its engine send us towards the planets surface. I knew no fear. And accepted that for the people I would readily lay down my life. I never doubted this. Not once.
Becouse for those we cherish. We die in glory.
What is this from? Wonderful post
@@AVoxintheVoid
Wrote it myself. I tend to do little short stories if the inspiration strikes me. And your audio really gets my mind pumping with inspiration.
@@thijshagenbeek8853 truly fantastic brother
Thank you
I never heard this story and this shit made me cry when I was at work. Sure I'm emotional when I dont even think about it but the way Vox delivers is just.. so hard hitting.
I am happy that it rained on my commute. It truly did. What an absolute masterpiece. Both written and voiced, my god... this will stay with me for a damn long time. Thank you for this.
I shouldn't be surprised at the quality of fan-writings due to the recent history of excellent fan animation. Such a talented community.
But damn. This one really hit me hard.
I've been supremely lucky with the quality of writing that's been sent my way. Thankyou for listening brother! Vox
Black hawk down, Saving private Ryan, lassie and this......are the only times men are allowed to cry. Another great narration, well done.
13 hours belongs on that list, but I agree wholeheartedly, brother.
This and bob & gaven have gotten my wife asking me if am ok
Lone Survivor. Never out of the fight.
Black hawk down?!
Don’t forget Gav and bob
Your video has finally answered a question that has vexed me for years. Which Space Marine Chapter is my favorite? For the longest time, I thought it was the Salamanders. The giant, onyx skinned sons of Vulcan, who gladly stay behind and defend humanity with Holy Fire. But the more I learned about these True Sons of Sanguinius, I realized that they are everything that the Emperor wanted his Space Marines to be. Those who would face insurmountable odds without fear or hesitation. Those who would face certain Death with Pride and Courage. Those who dive head first into truly unwinnable battles against the Galaxies' most fearsome horrors, if it meant just a few more of the Imperium's innocent citizens have a chance to survive. To be, not just the tip of the Humanities Spear, but a Shield against the Terrors. No matter the hardships and scorn unjustly thrown at them, they will never abandon their oaths to both The Emperor and Sanguinius. For Those We Cherish, We Die In Glory.
Godanm...this was so beautiful, it hit you in the feels, like a semi loaded with I beams. This broke me.
The Lamenters show true strength in the face of the corrupt and weak slaves of the Traitor Astartes, I felt myself crying for most of this, absolutely beautiful.
It is a beautiful tale. I was lucky to have been sent it to read
The traitors are but weak and pathetic cowards who try to constantly justify their treachery and project their failures onto others.
They hate the Lamenters, Salamanders, and a few other chapters because they see everything they could've been in those astartes and want to destroy them only because they are a constant reminder of that fact.
I wasn't ready for this. This has me in tears 😭
This is a masterpiece
Thank you for the kind words. Very different piece going live at 7 if you are about!
This is the best thing I ever heard from 40K you should do an animation individuals
I wish I had the animation skills! I'm at least helping with three wh40k animations that should be out by the end of the year!
Damn. Even re-listening to this hits me hard....tearing up bros 😭
Edit: Yup I cried...again
The lamenters are a rare thing they know they have transcended their regular human biology but In both mind and spirit the know themselves to still be human and hold more than just a dutiful sense of responsibility for the lives of humans they are perhaps one of the few chapters that would find it difficult to not to give up every ship in their fleet if it meant saving just a few more no matter the risk
I remember the first time I read this fanfic, I couldn't stop crying near the end.
Thank you for this video. The emotion in your voice really brought it all back to life again.
The Lamenters truly are one of the best Chapters the Imperium has.
They are a source of inspiration not only in the WH40k universe but also outside of it as well. They go through so much on a daily basis - getting fricked by the very universe, let alone most of the people who they serve along with. Yet they still hold themselves true to their duty - protecting the Emperor, the Imperium and the Civilians. It gives one inspiration to overcome their own problems and keep going strong.
May the God-Emperor watch over these noble men and give them the strength to keep fighting on.
Thank you so much for the amazing comment and insight into the universe. I was very lucky to be sent this amazing piece of work.
@@AVoxintheVoid Oh no, I should be the one to thank you. You did an awesome job at this. Keep it up! Looking forward to more content from you👍
That made me sad a little bit but I will stand fast FOR THE EMPEROR!!!!!!
Wow...that was phenomenal.
To your unending credit yet another fantastic creation.
The Emperor Protects!
Thank you kindly Nix. The Emperor does indeed protect. Fully appreciate your listen
"Sanguinius. It should have been him. He has the vision and the strength to carry us to victory, and the wisdom to rule once that victory is won." - Horus Lupercarl
The Lamenters are among the truest of Sanguinius' children...
"My blood is the line you will not cross!"
Incredably written. Brilliant.this should.be made into a short animated 3D film.
Ouch...The feels...Great background music, sets the mood very well. I was really hoping the Lamenter to become a Dreadnought and have a face to face with the Iron Warrior some years later, though.
Unfortunately he died in glory. 💔
@@AVoxintheVoid For those we cherish T___T
No Doubt they are sons Sanguinius is proud of !!!!
I cried. Deep and ugly. They are the nobility in the hearts of humanity. Imperfect, and all-too-mortal, but bright and unwavering until the final moment.
I love that they are all-too aware of the horrors of their(and our) universe, and of the depths of grief, but they continue on. They acknowledge it, but do not let it overwhelm them. Rather, they rise to meet reality and do all that they can... even if they might doubt themselves.
I think the only thing that would make me love the lamenters even more would be if they didn't believe in a faith or an afterlife. If they went into battle knowing that death could just mean complete oblivion. But that's something personal to my beliefs and not exactly common in 40k anyways.
I wish that I had the compassion and the strength of will of these paragons. Even if they are fictional, they inspire me to be better: to be physically and mentally strong, to love, and to sacrifice. To live and die in glory.
Touching tale of heroism, presented perfectly.
"Was it truly worth it, Lamenter of the Blood?....For those You Cherish, You die in Glory......Iron Within, Iron Without..."
What a beautiful tale.
Many thanks Jorge! I personally think it truly was worth it!
@@AVoxintheVoid Truly Glorious.
Exquisite, absolutely exquisite in every form of the word. The capturing of the essence of the defiance in the face of certain death, knowing the Lamentor is assured of his death. The voice of the little girl is the highlight of the piece, she did so, so well. The contrast of the loss of humanity of the cultists vs the guard.
Simply exquisite.
I hope you do a collab with the voice of das_man one day, his voice acting is of the highest degree. It’s a shame he deleted videos of his cannon 40k work due to it taking away money from black library. But even his fanfic stuff is great
That was an incredibly kind message to read. I have passed on your thoughts about my daughter's performance, made her morning. Thank you once again my friend
Excellent voice acting and production
Thank you Duncan, means a lot to read that. Thank you for listening!
Amazing story and voice acting. Best 40K story I have heard. Lamenters stories are always great, would just like to see them get a break.
Wow! That's high praise. Maybe check out "The Final Lamentation", one of my latest narrations. Theres a little redemption in there!
Will do. Just making my way through earlier videos. Just listened to Abomination - very good Warhammer 40k horror story.
This is the exact thing i didnt need to hear when im working. Had to run to the bathroom cause the feels started killing me twords the end 😅
THE FALLEN FOREVER BE REMEBERED AS THE EMPEROR'S FINEST
I seriously can not comprehend how beautiful the story, the script, the voice acting. Literally brought me to tears. Shame on hollywood!
Bro, you knock this out of the park.
Listening to this is way better than watching any TV show or anything completely pulled me in to the story
I need that night lord audio big dawg
It'll come soon...got a few projects to work on then I'll be straight on it. I'm listening to a night lords audiobook at the mo and it's incredible. Really interested in the bat boys now
This story had me tearing up. Bravo vox 👏👏
I've listened to this story countless times and still can't make it 60 seconds before crying uncontrollably.
Well I can see that my hype for this story was not miss placed, really well done
I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend, thank you for listening brother
@@AVoxintheVoid that is the best thing I ever heard audio 40K video and I found your channel off a Instagram please just keep up the work I like hearing yourself I love 40K and the emperor
@@AVoxintheVoid you should get that animated I'll be more often if you had an animated and you can see what's going on
@@jimmybarnes7178 thank you Jimmy, what a lovely comment to read
@@AVoxintheVoid you're welcome I can't lie I love your Channel this is the most best work I ever seen even though it's audio man it's good very good it's great
By the Emperor the moment Molly started speaking was when the waterworks threatened to take over. It takes a LOT for a piece of fiction to make me get wet in the eyes, and I applaud it when something like this does as such.
I'll let my daughter know! Thankyou for listening and the lovely comment
@@AVoxintheVoid It's stories like this that make the Lamenters one of if not the greatest of Space Marine Chapters. Sure they may not be the strongest, best-equipped or the most popular Chapter for the Imperium to call upon due to their heritage with the 21st Founding. And many in the fanbase have turned them into as much of meme as the Ultramarines. But in spite of how far the Galaxy goes to mess with their existence, the Lamenters tenacity and how far they'll go to protect and saves those that cannot protect themselves - an act that would make most other Chapters roll their eyes at - is something to be respected and commended.
I threw this on, ready to have a sleep...
Now, after a long sigh followed by a longer dumbfounded silence.. I'm ready to follow Sargent Atherolf to whatever end, rid my hive of off-world scum, and avenge brother Brenevere!
For those we Cherish Brother.
@@AVoxintheVoid really though, the standard is incredibly high, I feel like you need a little luck with the algorithm and you'll be a rocket ship.
Appreciate what you do
Brenevere found his glory. Now it’s our turn. Not until we cast those traitors back to the abyss.
Wow, this made me cry! 😱😭
What a tragically beautiful tale! Truly unforgettable.🙏
I am now chillaxed and have listened to your latest creation. I have different feelings about it - first of all your choice in music and your own quality voice acting combined, makes for a hit on the ol' emotions-nerve, I definitely felt it (terrible midnight for rain and all that \*sniff-ahem*). Tragic, grim-darkly so and that in itself is a sign of success considering the universe its in. It reminds me, in an odd way of the Chapter Founding video made by Baldermort (I mean this in the best of ways). The part of Khralk is another example of me wondering if your voice needed a good rest after that even if you consider the voice-modding that I'm sure you can do.
Brenevier was noble, defiant and dutiful and you made him sound like that. This was not even a question of what he wanted to do, though he did, but also what he had to do - like a proper space marine his duty is to fight and die for the Emperor (and Molli too, why not). Also Lamenters suffering is almost Textbook-lamenter, I feel so bad for those guys.
How did you get the voice of the little girl done?
So in this respect: Well done Mr. Vox and thank you.
I did start out saying that I have different feelings about it, but I think on reflection this is mostly due to the story itself rather than your performance. There is something about the story that seems a bit ...off to me. Which is a "me"-problem so this is simply my subjective opinion: The, for a space marine, excess in dramatic exposition and weeping is a bit much for the usual way I find them represented in lore - I nearly imagined it as a stage play. Don't misunderstand me I appreciate honorable ceremony and respectful leverance for a noble sacrifice. The Iron Warrior, even compared to your last Iron Warrior-based performance, sounds more like a Black Legion marine - An Iron Warrior is unlikely to care to gloat, to taunt or any such thing. Iron Within, Iron Without. Cold hard, brutal efficiency that gets the mission done, even though they are Chaos space marines. Also they despise mutation and demons. So the company he keeps is even stranger.
But! If I ignore this aspect (which I really can't, but I can still imagine, like I said I think the problem there is me, not you nor the story) its a good story and you brought it to life. The music really does make it work even more and I would dare bet that it is because you can't hear the music while doing the acting that you yourself don't shed a tear :P
Terrific video. Had tears in my eyes which is a first for a 40k audio drama, between the script, narration and music. The black library audio books sound like rank amateurs in comparison
That is an amazing post to read. Glad you enjoyed the piece my brother
Is it raining outside? I was not expecting an story like this today. Beautifully done.
This may be old but I just found it today love the story have always loved your channel brother may we all be as lucky to have a lementor protect us
I thought i was of iron when it came to this type of stories, indiferent to the portrayed and graphic yet fictional pain and suffering.
Yet i just come to realise that you've broken me with this marvelous narration, for i am in tears and i cannot help it.
You're an Amazing narrator.
This is an absolute masterpiece, truly conveys the tragedy and melancholy of the Lamenters. The staunch defiance in the face of death and the compassion for the layman is everything that embodies the rarest of hope in the 41st millennium and why the Lamenters will always be my favorite chapter of space marines. For Those We Cherish!
Lamenters are a whole world different to the others
I haven't listened yet but it is scheduled for my chillax part of the evening tonight. Looking forward to it!
I look forward to reading your thoughts about it. Enjoy your chillaxing time!
Dang Vox, why you gotta make me cry. First Gav and Bob and now a true hero, i need more of your work. This is such a beautiful thing you have made as tribute to our god emperor, may he shine his grace down upon you.
Really shows the humanity of the Lamenters. Some of the only good guys in 40k truly having respect and love for the citizens of the Imperium.
There is no greater death than one which befalls you when protecting innocents from the unending tide of darkness that wishes to consume them. I can only pray my own death will be so glorious..
Ty and please thank TiredEagleofManwe in my name for this story.
You are a really good storyteller. I had goosebumps in the beginning and was crying at the end. Please don't stop. This was wonderful ❤
My man that was an actual masterpiece and now anything I listen to from now on can’t even come close to the magnificence of this story
Holy feth...that was heart-wrenching, beautiful and well worth the wait. Thank you for narrating this. I hope this channel takes off faster then a White Scars assault squad very soon.
FOR THOSE HE CHERISHED HE DIED IN GLORY!
Thank you wolf poet, it was my pleasure to bring this wonderful story to life
For those we cherish, we die in Glory!