This story is full of contradictions right from the beginning. Chen says "We've been alone in the galaxy for so long..." and then talks about learning the hard way about hostile forces out there. Which is it? This contradiction continues throughout the story.
I like it. While the story is obviously made by AI, the effort to narrate it as a human makes it ten times better by default.
Admiral Chen? why does every leader in these stories have an Asian name. and often its a Latino first name and Asian last odd.
This story is full of contradictions right from the beginning. Chen says "We've been alone in the galaxy for so long..." and then talks about learning the hard way about hostile forces out there. Which is it? This contradiction continues throughout the story.
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