This story has a ton of plot holes. the immediate one I caught is that the survivors entire plotline was warning the fleet about enemy reinforcements the fleet itself detects in literally the next paragraph, yet this information is somehow crucial for the story.
Kind of disappointing that they don't bother to listen to their content before they upload it. Most of the issues could have been sorted prior to release had they done that. I doubt i'll listen to any more which is a shame as without these obvious and quite basic issues it could have had promise.
It’s true that AI can stumble with continuity at times, but I’d argue it’s a tool-it’s all about how creators use it. If they don’t review and edit their content properly before releasing it, that’s on them. AI can assist, but the final quality is always a human responsibility!
Chen seems to be a reoccurring name. These stories have potential with some serious refining it could be a series of short stories or a series. The AI voice is getting rough, though.
27:31 Soooooo THE Defiant with Colonel -- I mean Executive Officer -- JACK O'Neil -- THE Jack O'Neil -- on the Defiant. OK, where is Samantha and Scotty, in Engineering? Or is Sam and Spock working on the quantum torpedos? Mmmmm and where is Sulu and Cisco? No no no . . .my head hurts. So where is Chen? Whenever Chen shows up, Very Bad Things Happen! Can't wait for the Space Marines, I mean Spartans, to show up, lead by The Master Chief.
The story has pretty good potential but there is a load of massive plotholes and quite a bit of stupidity. This seriously feels like a story written entirely by an AI.
This is the day when Humanity declared in one voice: "We will not go quietly into the night! We will not vanish without a fight! We're going to live on! We're going to survive!"
Of course, it could not be the United States because the United States would have set off within 20 minutes.Cause they already have a fleet because united states always has a fleet
The ai reading this doesn't understand french words .it also can't type as some of the names were never typed the same twice ,it spoiled a good story whether reading or listening. I'm sure the internet can do better.
Of course.There's another couple of fleets coming from Earth.Yet that you talked about before the major Fleet.Even coming so when are they gonna arrive?Just after the Zarconian fleet , Another Fleet of the United States arrives and then a couple days later, another, one of the United States fleets arrives.Or should I say Earth and Mars?Oh, and don't forget about all the other places that were sent to help too.Even if there are small forces that would still make a large force eventually with all the numbers
OK wait wait wait wait. You have JUST discovered Humans yet you already know they are expanding ingredients at an alarming rate AND you know their tech level 3 centuries ago?? What's going on here within the first few sentences?
I'm surprised that every place that humans would do would not make it so they have a way to defend it where the impossible odds because they have figured aliens and thought of aliens so long and thinking of all this invasions, they would have weapons with such amount of bullets and be impossible just to disappear just.Like that
All humanity, that's impossible special with so many worlds. And so many worlds with so much weapons. Earth has enough weapons to shoot off. Non-stop, at least in the United States, does for 4 years without even glinching shoot off millions of shots. A second of just missiles without ever running low.
Of course, every alien Vader that was captured.They're not gonna let them go ever.They're gonna make their way to earth and make their way to area fifty one and be locked up forever and no just be sentenced to life because of their crimes anyways so they'll never get back to their home
Well, send a message back to Earth, help.When we haven't met having a vision quickly.Fleet coming in if we're not here.Well we're gonna need a uninstall but I need you to use the backup's backs and revenge your death
i telll you you though, the galactic cancel sure does get around, and chen,and Rodrigues, and all the other people in these stories sure do get around. :)
How many times do we need to hear they were warned about the Humans, how Humans did not know what was coming, how did the colony get a message to Earth if the did not have FTL communications, how many stories have to tell us how much Humans have overcome, how do you hear booms from space, how is it the defense platform at earth is only kilometers away but earth is light years away, why can't the AI read properly a well earned dislike.
All these stories and it's the same BS every time, usually the same or very similar character names, human ingenuity developing tech beyond that of species eons older in days, it's ridiculous, and I'm getting tired of the AI written crap, a lot of the time also, the same thing said over multiple paragraphs using slightly different words, or in a slightly different way, but why is it always the bloody galactic council, those poor guys are always getting a bad rep, you know, just for once, I wish a story wouod be closer to the truth on what would actually happen if we went to war with a technologically superior race.
I agree. There is a distinct lack of imagination with these. There is little to no character building. No real difference in the plots. The other problem I have with this genre (If it can be called a genre.) is that the comedic stories all seem to be poking the listener in the chest with a finger the entire time to make sure the listener knows they're funny, which they are not. There are a few genuinely funny stories and a few genuinely interesting stories, but those are the exceptions to the rule.
Really, get a human to read these as your AI text reader is absolutely useless! "Readout" as "red-out", "reading" as "redding", "debris" with a non-silent s? And many other mistakes! Come on!
"If the Continuum has told you once, they've told you a thousand times, DON'T PROVOKE THE HUMANS."
😊❤ love the tng reference perfect my friend
I like these "fuck around and find out" stories about earth /humanity
It is a bit much at times
Commander Jack O'Neal! Stargate reference or coincidence I don't care
Best character ever. The jack sparrow of space.
Also Adama Batelstar Galactica
Just the AI going wild
I half expected Commander Chen to show up...
And the defiant
For clarification: defining a kill area is not a strategy it’s simply tactics or merely an operation if embedded in a battle plan.
This is why you don't publish the rough draft
This story has a ton of plot holes. the immediate one I caught is that the survivors entire plotline was warning the fleet about enemy reinforcements the fleet itself detects in literally the next paragraph, yet this information is somehow crucial for the story.
That's the problem with AI writing.
An AI does not remember, what it said a sentence ago.
Kind of disappointing that they don't bother to listen to their content before they upload it. Most of the issues could have been sorted prior to release had they done that. I doubt i'll listen to any more which is a shame as without these obvious and quite basic issues it could have had promise.
It’s true that AI can stumble with continuity at times, but I’d argue it’s a tool-it’s all about how creators use it. If they don’t review and edit their content properly before releasing it, that’s on them. AI can assist, but the final quality is always a human responsibility!
Chen seems to be a reoccurring name. These stories have potential with some serious refining it could be a series of short stories or a series. The AI voice is getting rough, though.
27:31 Soooooo THE Defiant with Colonel -- I mean Executive Officer -- JACK O'Neil -- THE Jack O'Neil -- on the Defiant. OK, where is Samantha and Scotty, in Engineering? Or is Sam and Spock working on the quantum torpedos? Mmmmm and where is Sulu and Cisco? No no no . . .my head hurts. So where is Chen? Whenever Chen shows up, Very Bad Things Happen! Can't wait for the Space Marines, I mean Spartans, to show up, lead by The Master Chief.
Unheated, they must be cold.
The story has pretty good potential but there is a load of massive plotholes and quite a bit of stupidity. This seriously feels like a story written entirely by an AI.
All of these youtube stories are written, read and rendered by AI
Going to need a long time to heal my injuries from falling in all the gaping plot holes. Crap.
This is the day when Humanity declared in one voice:
"We will not go quietly into the night!
We will not vanish without a fight!
We're going to live on!
We're going to survive!"
Of course, it could not be the United States because the United States would have set off within 20 minutes.Cause they already have a fleet because united states always has a fleet
And for God's sake : Don't Touch Their Boats !!
😂😂😂
Did they literally call him Jack O'Neill? Hahaha, SG1 fan detected
Marcus Chen strikes again
Someone wrote "rough draft".... so true. Really need to be edited in a big way.
The ai reading this doesn't understand french words .it also can't type as some of the names were never typed the same twice ,it spoiled a good story whether reading or listening. I'm sure the internet can do better.
Of course.There's another couple of fleets coming from Earth.Yet that you talked about before the major Fleet.Even coming so when are they gonna arrive?Just after the Zarconian fleet , Another Fleet of the United States arrives and then a couple days later, another, one of the United States fleets arrives.Or should I say Earth and Mars?Oh, and don't forget about all the other places that were sent to help too.Even if there are small forces that would still make a large force eventually with all the numbers
And of course , I sent it to all the other colonies that we set up anywhere between because I know everybody would come to help
Nice stori, will see wat it will be in realiti, I hope
Up...should have list to the comments...ugh...stopped at 10 mins in.
OK wait wait wait wait. You have JUST discovered Humans yet you already know they are expanding ingredients at an alarming rate AND you know their tech level 3 centuries ago?? What's going on here within the first few sentences?
I don't know why I keep listening to these :)
Just think of it as a lesson in how not to write stories. Guess we can learn something from AI
AI is good but it misses continuity of facts that it’s already stated.
*We are too much of a bastard for this galaxy, that's why they avoid us.*
I'm surprised that every place that humans would do would not make it so they have a way to defend it where the impossible odds because they have figured aliens and thought of aliens so long and thinking of all this invasions, they would have weapons with such amount of bullets and be impossible just to disappear just.Like that
"Never push to the pink skins to the thin ice."
New Eden, that's quite a ways away from Earth. If it's the place I'm thinking of which might be Pandora.
It’s a Prothean dig site
why does every story have a chen? why not a herbert or gary or judy or something better than every story having a chen!
“A defeening boom”
29:00 A bit clumsy.
Ope another scientist named Dr Chen. Looking AI written 😂
Number One, arm the DDT torpedoes.
Of course it's not over yet
We orbit a WHITE star. jeeze, sci-fi writers need to get it right.
Its AI written
Give them some leeway
“…armetta…”?!? Not ‘armada’? Please, stop writing. Forever.
Fun story
All humanity, that's impossible special with so many worlds. And so many worlds with so much weapons. Earth has enough weapons to shoot off. Non-stop, at least in the United States, does for 4 years without even glinching shoot off millions of shots. A second of just missiles without ever running low.
Of course, every alien Vader that was captured.They're not gonna let them go ever.They're gonna make their way to earth and make their way to area fifty one and be locked up forever and no just be sentenced to life because of their crimes anyways so they'll never get back to their home
To many unnecessary words.
What do you think will happen now
Said Alina to Marcus
Well by the looks of it and that little finger reaching for the other
I'D SAY BABY'S 😂😂😂
Teenage fiction. Every feelgood cliché imaginable.
.
and so many unneeded frazes.. testaments, tapestries.. all those parts could be removed giving this story at least some pace
Yes but who doesn't want to feel good
It's AI generated story like Chat GPT
Well, send a message back to Earth, help.When we haven't met having a vision quickly.Fleet coming in if we're not here.Well we're gonna need a uninstall but I need you to use the backup's backs and revenge your death
The Warning Unheated? 🤣
Ya, not that great. I've heard many stories like this already, was it made with AI?
@@wfirebaugh more than likely. they should be able to proof read the text before they publish in a perfect world. lol
Commander Jack O`neel..realy?.. :)
They even godt his rank wrong 😅
O'Neill, 2 Ls
You can tell the author was not a combat vet
Awful
Crap. New species discovered, full catalogue of Intel came with it or what? Not only superficial but deep knowledge. Sure.
i telll you you though, the galactic cancel sure does get around, and chen,and Rodrigues, and all the other people in these stories sure do get around. :)
Well, that doesn't sound like the United States at all, but it does sound like NASA 2.
The civilian part of it anyways.
Which doesn't make sense
Also fans of starcraft maybe
Another story written by an AI...
This is very bad.
*inhale intensifies*
It appears to me that time wasting and use chatter is the order of the day. Another last dish miracle that leads to victory ?
How many times do we need to hear they were warned about the Humans, how Humans did not know what was coming, how did the colony get a message to Earth if the did not have FTL communications, how many stories have to tell us how much Humans have overcome, how do you hear booms from space, how is it the defense platform at earth is only kilometers away but earth is light years away, why can't the AI read properly a well earned dislike.
At least once more
All these stories and it's the same BS every time, usually the same or very similar character names, human ingenuity developing tech beyond that of species eons older in days, it's ridiculous, and I'm getting tired of the AI written crap, a lot of the time also, the same thing said over multiple paragraphs using slightly different words, or in a slightly different way, but why is it always the bloody galactic council, those poor guys are always getting a bad rep, you know, just for once, I wish a story wouod be closer to the truth on what would actually happen if we went to war with a technologically superior race.
I agree. There is a distinct lack of imagination with these. There is little to no character building. No real difference in the plots.
The other problem I have with this genre (If it can be called a genre.) is that the comedic stories all seem to be poking the listener in the chest with a finger the entire time to make sure the listener knows they're funny, which they are not. There are a few genuinely funny stories and a few genuinely interesting stories, but those are the exceptions to the rule.
Yup, woke
weak sauce
Really, get a human to read these as your AI text reader is absolutely useless! "Readout" as "red-out", "reading" as "redding", "debris" with a non-silent s? And many other mistakes! Come on!
Ok, if they have debris from prior incursions, how is it the admiral said they were unknown to them