A HFY Story : Jess | 2250 ~Deathworld, War, Terran and Humans

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  • Опубликовано: 28 дек 2024

Комментарии • 113

  • @mattbrown5511
    @mattbrown5511 Год назад +90

    At least, humanity has a warning about the Galactic Council and their evil mechanizations. Jess is a true hero.

    • @lzot
      @lzot Год назад

      'machinations' not 'mechanisations'. Sry. Language nazi :p

    • @melkiorwiseman5234
      @melkiorwiseman5234 Год назад +3

      I think you mean "machinations" which is spelled similarly but with a very different meaning. 😄 (Crafty schemes; plots; intrigues) What you said means something like "using a machine to perform a function" or "converting a task to using machines instead of people." 😀

    • @bigswordlittleman3770
      @bigswordlittleman3770 Год назад

      ​@@melkiorwiseman5234 you are the, "uhm actually" guy.
      He already knows what it means idiot.

    • @WingManFang1
      @WingManFang1 Год назад +1

      Assuming it’s accurate…then again she has a cargo hold full of eye witnesses.

    • @bigswordlittleman3770
      @bigswordlittleman3770 Год назад +1

      @@WingManFang1 she also has the spy implants.

  • @MidnightSmoke
    @MidnightSmoke Год назад +106

    I really like the Jess stories. Here is a like and comment for the story, for entertaining me, to help your channel grow, and get you the recognition you deserve.

    • @Judas672
      @Judas672 Год назад +3

      Are there more of her stories out there?

    • @yomogami4561
      @yomogami4561 Год назад

      there's more?

    • @bunnybootsink9258
      @bunnybootsink9258 Год назад +6

      There are more with this protagonist but it's very few stories in total for this setting. The author deleted their account but the stories are still up. /r/HFY/wiki/authors/Kasern/

  • @GenStallion
    @GenStallion Год назад +18

    To those hopping for more. I am sorry this author has deleted their account, or they were deleted. May her actions serve as an example should we meet the wrong kind of aliens.

  • @merlinathrawes746
    @merlinathrawes746 Год назад +49

    Well even if Jess didn't survive, the ship got back to Earth and was reversed engineered. And MANY more agents would be sent out to discover the truth while a self-defense armada was being built. Somehow, I think the brown excrement is about to hit the rotary, air pushing device.

    • @chriscahill1005
      @chriscahill1005 Год назад +4

      hope they wore their brown pants

    • @chrstfer2452
      @chrstfer2452 3 месяца назад +1

      I bet that she wound up surviving. Coughing up blood and being weak doesnt stop someone--a human--from figuring out a way to survive. She probably fixed the life support in the bridge after firing a shot into all the unconscious officers, giving her the oxygen she needed. After that its a matter of bandaging with pressure and hoping at least one lung doesnt fill with blood (coughing up blood implies a lung puncture). Not ideal, but if the emancipated former slaves can get to the bridge to perform stabilization measures she'll be fine....
      Optimism of course

  • @DicePunk
    @DicePunk Год назад +9

    Holy crap the galactic economics and money game was such an inspired story element.
    Imagine a space organisation going around giving out FTL, then saying, "that'll be the equivalent of 200 years servitude thanks. We also take slaves."

  • @scotthinger6397
    @scotthinger6397 Год назад +37

    There had better be an ending to this story and I mean SOON! WITH ENERGY!!

  • @mnspstudioLOST
    @mnspstudioLOST Год назад +18

    The moment I realized this was a continuation of an earlier story I thoroughly enjoyed I was happy we were going to get the follow up. Well written and well read.

    • @kaliban4758
      @kaliban4758 Год назад

      yeah, i just hope Jess survives

    • @m.h.6470
      @m.h.6470 Год назад

      @@kaliban4758 unfortunately, it seems the original writer deleted their reddit account or got deleted, so there will most likely not be another follow up.

  • @FloatTheBuizel
    @FloatTheBuizel Год назад +5

    This is the story after the one called 'never trust a human'! Holy cow!

  • @GyorBox
    @GyorBox Год назад +10

    LMAO I love these stories where Humans are only behind technologically, but advanced or have the advantage every other way..
    Lol "Noodle Aliens"

  • @yomogami4561
    @yomogami4561 Год назад +11

    that's a terrible place to end!!!!!!
    thanks for the story and narration

  • @plexisgaming
    @plexisgaming Год назад +22

    Glad to hear your surgery went well. Keep up the good work.

  • @marvinjohnson2488
    @marvinjohnson2488 Год назад +2

    You are an evil,evil man,ending like that. Cannot wait for the sequel.

    • @CHRF-55457
      @CHRF-55457 Год назад

      There will be no sequel.

  • @masterpython
    @masterpython Год назад +4

    These aliens respect surrender surprisingly well.

    • @Allantitan
      @Allantitan Год назад +1

      Remember it’s not a warcrime the first time and against xenos 😂

  • @mackenziedrake
    @mackenziedrake 7 месяцев назад

    Onion ninjas... I'm sorry to see the author has deleted their account. This story is great, and exceptionally told. Thank you!

  • @nathandc
    @nathandc Год назад +5

    For the truth, for the algorithm, for the beard, and for the narrator!

  • @TheRandyWanker
    @TheRandyWanker Год назад +25

    This story needs continuation.

  • @alicefreist318
    @alicefreist318 18 дней назад

    Thanks as always for a great story. Looking forward to the next!

  • @lrmackmcbride7498
    @lrmackmcbride7498 Год назад +9

    Earth government is not going to be pleased for a variety of reasons.

    • @skoshman1
      @skoshman1 Год назад +3

      Not the least being all the paperwork for the recently liberated refugees.

  • @anathardayaldar
    @anathardayaldar Год назад +4

    Let me guess, the slaver's armor is no harder than styrofoam and their bodies are no stronger than a angry 12 year old.

  • @barelyasurvivor1257
    @barelyasurvivor1257 Год назад +4

    his account is deleted so we are probably not getting any more stories from him
    Darn It!.

  • @lupaswolfshead9971
    @lupaswolfshead9971 Год назад +14

    this sounds like a follow up to a previous story .

    • @joshroundtree8751
      @joshroundtree8751 Год назад +5

      It does doesn't it. I think it's the story about how you should never trust a human.

    • @ameliarosealdridge6468
      @ameliarosealdridge6468 Год назад

      ​@@joshroundtree8751that's exactly it!
      It goes "Why you should never trust a human", "Uplifted is a dirty word", "Luna Fall", "Jess" and there's one last one.
      Sadly the author straight up can't be found any more since they deleted their account, so you can only find their work via the HFY wiki in her name.

    • @bunnybootsink9258
      @bunnybootsink9258 Год назад +2

      This a continuation of "Never Trust a Human" that was narrated about a month or two ago. Author deleted their Reddit account but the stories are still up. /r/HFY/wiki/authors/Kasern/

    • @lupaswolfshead9971
      @lupaswolfshead9971 Год назад

      thanks i was trying to remember the story this continued from.@@bunnybootsink9258

    • @johns9652
      @johns9652 Год назад

      Was that the one where a Xeno captain is describing how his Human crewmember saved the ship, but lied about escaping with them/joining them and was left behind in the middle of a fight? That was a good story, so was this.

  • @williamcastro7483
    @williamcastro7483 Год назад

    We need more of Jessie! ❤

  • @Schwaapilz
    @Schwaapilz Месяц назад

    Very Roberta Draper got dropped into an alternate reality and ends up doing a Die Hard kinda vibes from this one

  • @RealArcalian
    @RealArcalian Год назад +2

    Greetings, Mentlegent!
    For the Rhyhtm that is Algo
    Was going great until the end, what a letdown

  • @victortahlor4038
    @victortahlor4038 Год назад

    Thank you for the reading

  • @doc701
    @doc701 11 месяцев назад

    I enjoyed this story,please write another chapter.thanks

  • @Ryu_D
    @Ryu_D Год назад

    Thank you for the video.

  • @WingManFang1
    @WingManFang1 Год назад

    Moar! 😢We need moar….well like a follow up or Sequel at some point… Hopefully the Author makes more on this story.

    • @m.h.6470
      @m.h.6470 Год назад

      the author's reddit account got deleted... so it's unlikely, that there will be a follow up.

  • @kurtismiller9544
    @kurtismiller9544 Год назад +4

    For the Skald and his family

  • @Allantitan
    @Allantitan Год назад +4

    “Spotting children amongst her”
    Xeno slaver: “why do I hear doom music?”
    Xeno slaver 2: “why do I feel the presence of an apex predator nearby?”

  • @fyrebat404
    @fyrebat404 Год назад

    this seems like a sequel to "all humans lie"

  • @stevenweaver3386
    @stevenweaver3386 Год назад +6

    Is this a sequel or part 2 to a story ",Never Trust A Human?"

    • @sjmcc13
      @sjmcc13 Год назад +2

      I think so, it is listed as same universe on the redit page.

    • @nadjasunflower1387
      @nadjasunflower1387 Год назад +2

      sounds like it is. it picks up right after Jess disobeyed her captain and joined the pirate / slaver ship so they could get away.

  • @insanecrazyman7637
    @insanecrazyman7637 Год назад +6

    ... I need to know if she made it, someone tell me that woman survived!!!

  • @Shadow.Dragon
    @Shadow.Dragon Год назад

    Great story; Excellent narration!

  • @SilverMKI
    @SilverMKI Год назад

    Woo! Jess!

  • @direwolf8703
    @direwolf8703 5 месяцев назад

    Do you do audio books cause I would love to hear you read some of my favorite books

  • @Friedrich-Wilhelm-1980
    @Friedrich-Wilhelm-1980 Год назад

    that engineer is a got dam hero!

  • @korthnanfortuna9675
    @korthnanfortuna9675 Год назад

    Jess is an Aussie. Perfect. XP

  • @bryanengland2466
    @bryanengland2466 Год назад

    She's a hero and a war criminal at the same time he he

  • @nathlech919
    @nathlech919 Год назад +6

    Surrendering yourself as a disguise to attack a combatant is (technically) a war crime :p

    • @skoshman1
      @skoshman1 Год назад +5

      But since humanity isn't in a formal state of war with the slavers, Jess is in the clear. She's only guilty of technical piracy on the high seas (even though it is space) and I don't think any human prosecutor would be inclined to charge her. Now if the slavers home government decides to prosecute and demands her extradition, I am sure the human government will send her to them - with a fresh commission, a large fleet, and an army group of Terran marines that had been told that if they get this over with quickly, they'd be back in time of the Marine Corps ball. Plus Greg from accounting.

    • @lord1todd
      @lord1todd Год назад +4

      Somehow I doubt the aliens are co-signers of Geneva Conventions.

    • @skoshman1
      @skoshman1 Год назад

      @@lord1todd But the Nations of Earth will be for the most part. Which means that the nations of Earth can introduce the Xenos to the concept of the Geneva Checklist. No worries though. Even if they were co-signers of the Geneva Conventions I doubt the aliens would care all that much and your point still stands.

    • @Gilhelmi
      @Gilhelmi Год назад +1

      Geneva only applies during war, and can be waived if major crimes are committed...........
      They are slavers, they have lost all hope of a peaceful resolution.

    • @CHRF-55457
      @CHRF-55457 Год назад

      She's not even a soldier too...@@skoshman1

  • @jeanannd
    @jeanannd Год назад +8

    YES, free the slaves!!!!

  • @najroe
    @najroe Год назад +1

    for the AlGoRiIThM and the narrator

  • @sam2x13
    @sam2x13 Год назад +5

    That was a butthead thing to do, ending the story the way it did. And here I got all invested and was loving the character. Please tell me that there are more stories with jess in it.

    • @m.h.6470
      @m.h.6470 Год назад

      Doubt it, as the author's reddit account was deleted... so they either don't want to continue or they can't (at least officially).

    • @Ryvaken
      @Ryvaken 11 месяцев назад

      Best part of the story. The I'm-not-a-soldier-I-should-be-dead turned cocky and got spanked for it.

  • @raymats0710
    @raymats0710 Год назад

    Shoots the panel.. what trickery is this.. lmao

  • @robertthompson5527
    @robertthompson5527 Год назад +1

    Always wondered what became of Jess

  • @olayinkaolokowo1113
    @olayinkaolokowo1113 Год назад +1

    I wish it continued

  • @kellyknowsdayway6517
    @kellyknowsdayway6517 Год назад

    My friend in high-school had the same name. That's funny.

  • @dholmes3307
    @dholmes3307 Год назад

    For the algebra rythm

  • @barelyasurvivor1257
    @barelyasurvivor1257 Год назад +5

    Always, Always, Always, set up door controls to lock when shot or destroyed, because setting them to open if destroyed is just stupid!

    • @Gilhelmi
      @Gilhelmi Год назад +2

      I agree.
      IRL, there are very few door panels or door locks that would open if you destroy it.
      Honestly, it is something of lazy writing.

    • @z3r0t0l3r4ns
      @z3r0t0l3r4ns Год назад +3

      Until you get trapped somewhere because some idiot spills coffee on the panel.

    • @russellgilson3536
      @russellgilson3536 8 месяцев назад +1

      Actually its a fire measure. Doors automatically open so people arent trapped and firemen can get in.

  • @SOLIAM
    @SOLIAM Год назад +1

    War crimes for the win?! Lol.

  • @caoryn
    @caoryn Год назад

    This is a followup to "Humans Lie", isn't it.

  • @JoseLay
    @JoseLay Год назад +1

    I need moaaaar...!!!!

  • @genericuser984
    @genericuser984 Год назад

    neat

  • @ThreeDogKing
    @ThreeDogKing Год назад +1

    Temper temper

  • @youngloki1
    @youngloki1 Год назад

    Holy plot armor lmao

  • @140kittykat
    @140kittykat Год назад

    My knee jerk reaction to the story ending was UH, RUDE!

  • @noahkleugh9323
    @noahkleugh9323 Год назад +1

    Sad

  • @christophergoodroe6244
    @christophergoodroe6244 Год назад

    the author deleted their account rip

  • @jonnycoathanger8399
    @jonnycoathanger8399 Год назад

    More

  • @merlinwizard1000
    @merlinwizard1000 Год назад +1

    5th, 11 November 2023

  • @CaptainKiLL83
    @CaptainKiLL83 Год назад

    Wait...is Jess australian?

  • @markuhler2664
    @markuhler2664 Год назад

    Outstanding story. Too bad the author has gone to ground.

  • @TheJeikou
    @TheJeikou Год назад

    Comment

  • @fishinfranks1065
    @fishinfranks1065 9 месяцев назад

    Coent

  • @greyman1k
    @greyman1k Год назад

    Great, great story....but the ending sucks. I prefer my heroes to live; oh, well.

  • @daebi37
    @daebi37 Год назад +1

    Too Mary Sue.

  • @bobboardman1156
    @bobboardman1156 Год назад

    Good.... except for Jesus f...... C...... bit.

  • @klappstock943
    @klappstock943 Год назад +1

    For the Algorithm the story and the voice 🎉

  • @gustawmajewski9911
    @gustawmajewski9911 5 месяцев назад

    .