What If Ghostbusters II Was Better? - FanScription

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  • Опубликовано: 3 апр 2019
  • Ghostbusters 2 disappointed many fans of the original and took the franchise in a different direction. But what if it kept the tone of the first film? What if the story was more inventive and expanded the Ghostbusters' technology? In short, what if Ghostbusters 2 was better? Rob Walker brings you his version of this high profile sequel featuring the art of Lucas Durham and the voices of Doug Walker, Malcolm Ray, Heather Reusz, Aiyanna Wade, Jim Jarosz, Walter Banasiak and Tamara Chambers. When there's a story that needs fixing, who ya gonna call? FanScription
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    Ghostbusters II is a 1989 American film directed and produced by Ivan Reitman and written by Dan Aykroyd and Harold Ramis. It stars Bill Murray, Aykroyd, Sigourney Weaver, Ramis, Ernie Hudson and Rick Moranis. The sequel to the 1984 film Ghostbusters, it sees the Ghostbusters reunite to combat a new threat to New York City.
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  • @ChannelAwesome
    @ChannelAwesome  5 лет назад +124

    What should we cover in a future episode of FanScription?
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    • @christenorio9555
      @christenorio9555 5 лет назад +2

      Review Netflix big mouth!

    • @noenya8047
      @noenya8047 5 лет назад +11

      Channel Awesome The live action sleeping beauty movie Maleficent :How to make a better villain movie

    • @cjwrench07
      @cjwrench07 5 лет назад +8

      Matrix Revolutions.
      Where they actually reveal Zion is just another level of the Matrix, that’s why Neo could control a squid, and maybe they were all just an experiment of slightly future humans to make a Truly sentient AI.
      With it requiring the 7 version of “The One/Neo”(experimental AI) to get to that point of true choice not based on just an algorithm, but real wants, needs, and desires.

    • @gageperuti5519
      @gageperuti5519 5 лет назад +10

      Do the Schumacher Batman films. Both of them. If you can't, at least do Batman and Robin.

    • @deshawnedwards6412
      @deshawnedwards6412 5 лет назад +1

      Doug for next Disneycember can you do
      Collage Road Trip
      George of the Jungle 2
      The Game Plan
      Race to Witch Mountain
      Bedtime Stories
      G-Force
      Prom
      Max Keeble's Big Move

  • @Evanski
    @Evanski 5 лет назад +379

    10:23
    "Are you telling me the universe runs like New York city? We just ship our trash across the river and make it Jerseys problem?"
    "More or less."
    *"I love it!"*

    • @PannierLaw
      @PannierLaw 5 лет назад +23

      I honestly don’t see a difference between that and real life...

    • @JoshuaWebbYT
      @JoshuaWebbYT 4 года назад +18

      That actually sounds like something they would say lol.

    • @ackbarfan5556
      @ackbarfan5556 4 года назад +10

      Evanski I loved GB2, but that line sealed it. I want this version more.

    • @nicholastosoni707
      @nicholastosoni707 4 года назад +8

      Although there IS the remote possibility of a more powerful entity tunnelling through from that world into ours. At the risk of invoking another, similarly-named franchise, need I remind you of Prime Evil?

    • @michaelnelson1127
      @michaelnelson1127 3 года назад +4

      That line actually made me laugh out loud.

  • @mr.e5947
    @mr.e5947 5 лет назад +395

    That line you gave Peck towards the climax of the script was amazing
    "Three things: My mother said I was being petty to those men, I trust my mother way more than I trust anyone in the world, and she's been dead for 14 years" simply wow.

    • @KyrstOak
      @KyrstOak 4 года назад +6

      Really? I thought it was sort of empty and hollow.

    • @Deathshead1923
      @Deathshead1923 4 года назад +56

      @@KyrstOak I personally like the idea of making Peck a more three-dimensional character instead of just an obstructionist prick.

    • @ermacmacro7136
      @ermacmacro7136 3 года назад +52

      @@KyrstOak Well in both movies, he's been thrashing the Ghostbusters because he thought Ghosts weren't real. If his own dead mother talks sense into him, that would make him change fast

    • @crazyjack66
      @crazyjack66 3 года назад +18

      I loved it too. I could even see William Atherton acting that scene.

    • @experiment0789
      @experiment0789 3 года назад +25

      @@KyrstOak I personally like the idea of making Peck a more three-dimensional character instead of just an obstructionist prick, and while a little cliches it's kind of humorous to hear this grown man talk about his mom... that and I the fact that she being the reason he begrudgingly (I imagine) starts believing in ghosts is for me totally reasonable.

  • @BugsyFoga
    @BugsyFoga 5 лет назад +287

    "HERE WE GO AGAIN"
    -Every cheap Sequel ever

    • @ImpinAintEazy
      @ImpinAintEazy 5 лет назад +7

      Coughepisode7cough

    • @dippin4dots
      @dippin4dots 5 лет назад +3

      Nathaniel Foga mama Mia didn't even try to hide it

    • @tjjordan4207
      @tjjordan4207 5 лет назад +5

      How about "OH GREAT, HERE WE GO A- Wait, that was new"

    • @AbMaSync
      @AbMaSync 5 лет назад +5

      How about "They're/He's/She's back"

    • @MovieFan1912
      @MovieFan1912 Год назад +1

      Home Alone 2, anyone?

  • @gailcbull
    @gailcbull 3 года назад +100

    I love the idea of ghosts of Viggo's past victims getting to take their revenge on him. That would've been a lot more satisfying then positively-charged pink slime. I also love the idea of the statues becoming possessed by evil spirits as though the ghosts are using the statues as armour. It creates a nice continuity with the positively-possessed Statue of Liberty, and the role art plays in the return of Viggo.

  • @BoundaryBreak
    @BoundaryBreak 5 лет назад +212

    I know theres lots of detractors for the second movie. But I loved it

    • @themoviecritic1092
      @themoviecritic1092 3 года назад +2

      Same

    • @usern4metak3ns
      @usern4metak3ns 3 года назад +5

      It was dope and came from the heart.

    • @JimmyNotes
      @JimmyNotes 3 года назад +8

      I actually prefer the second Ghostbusters movie. I mean, they turned the Statue of Liberty into a megazord. 🤯

    • @usern4metak3ns
      @usern4metak3ns 3 года назад +10

      @@JimmyNotes I definitely enjoyed the peaceful and restoration aspect of the second ghostbusters. Really heartwarming concept that a psychokinetic ooze can feel strong emotions of Love and Hate. Totally a yin yang gang movie.

    • @jahimjauh-hey5653
      @jahimjauh-hey5653 2 года назад

      Same

  • @missemeriin
    @missemeriin 5 лет назад +162

    I love the voices, but Heather is probably my favorite as snarky Dana

  • @Tadicuslegion78
    @Tadicuslegion78 5 лет назад +294

    I don’t know what Rob is considering next. But I can think of a couple: Conan the Destroyer, Batman Forever, the original X-men trilogy

    • @kylemorello4787
      @kylemorello4787 5 лет назад +10

      I've got three animated examples: foodfight, cartoon all Stars to the rescue, and drawn together.

    • @ChannelAwesome
      @ChannelAwesome  5 лет назад +30

      +Tadicuslegion78
      Thanks for the suggestions!

    • @cjwrench07
      @cjwrench07 5 лет назад +5

      Channel Awesome matrix Revolutions. Please. Matrix 2’s ending was setting up such and amazing twist, and instead they went the safe “you’re all free now, and the world it as peace” final movie.

    • @louisduarte8763
      @louisduarte8763 5 лет назад

      @SmashStomp Inc Maybe that's how the script was written; notes taken during a D&D game.

    • @kylemorello4787
      @kylemorello4787 5 лет назад

      @@cjwrench07 yeah, that does sound pretty generic.

  • @simontrainbrainz6038
    @simontrainbrainz6038 5 лет назад +427

    This fan script would have made more money, sold better, and would be kick ass if they made this.

  • @ninjamaster3453
    @ninjamaster3453 5 лет назад +185

    Thing i hated most about 2 was that the entire city and world forgot that trans dimensional ghosts that trashed the city before their eyes 4 years prior.

    • @usern4metak3ns
      @usern4metak3ns 3 года назад +20

      What are you talking about? That was a massive gas leak that caused hallucinations amongst the cities population... No ghosts or marshmallow men...

    • @Sphiinxs
      @Sphiinxs 2 года назад +8

      @@usern4metak3ns what the hell are you talking about

    • @sarahsims6164
      @sarahsims6164 2 года назад +4

      @@Sphiinxs it's a joke.

    • @MovieFan1912
      @MovieFan1912 Год назад +5

      One would think that the Ghostbusters would be commended for saving the world after their run in with Gozer, but instead, everyone just acts like it never happened.
      It makes as much sense as making the moon landing a front to investigate an alien spacecraft that crash landed on the moon.

    • @Farlomous
      @Farlomous 8 месяцев назад +5

      Just finding this comment and at the time I thought it was dumb too. Sadly tho, it foreshadowed the future really well in that once the big bad is defeated, the powers that be slowly stop reminding people and then they start to say untrue facts about it. Then they start attacking it until now it was a bad deed to fight the bad thing and it was misunderstood.

  • @xanderrey1879
    @xanderrey1879 5 лет назад +95

    Oh my f***king god I love this movie. I’m a fan of GB 2 to be honest, but I do need to exclaim “this would have been awesome!”

  • @neffyboy
    @neffyboy 5 лет назад +122

    While I like Ghostbusters 2, it would be interesting to see this version of it.

    • @dragon-tamer7956
      @dragon-tamer7956 5 лет назад +7

      The word you're looking for is BETTER.

    • @videogamehunter820
      @videogamehunter820 4 года назад +2

      I stand by you. For what it is, I enjoy what we got but this is pretty good.

  • @illuminocalypse5210
    @illuminocalypse5210 5 лет назад +81

    This version is really good - too good, frankly. To the point that it almost pisses me off that we got what we got instead of something more like this. It COULD have been done!

  • @TimeLordParadox
    @TimeLordParadox 5 лет назад +64

    I liked the original sequel. But this is a million times better. :D

    • @minekurtmininer216
      @minekurtmininer216 8 месяцев назад +1

      Especially because of how we got this foreshadowed by Nostalgia Critic

  • @KRSStudios
    @KRSStudios 5 лет назад +46

    FanScription:
    What If Dorothy Never Left OZ

  • @matthewrooney8834
    @matthewrooney8834 5 лет назад +146

    Well done rob, you gonna make this a series

    • @WalterCulture
      @WalterCulture 5 лет назад +10

      It’s already a series! Check out our other episodes!
      ruclips.net/p/PL0AQIMR-tpolSV_hNOJ_V2GJhq3heZpfv

  • @thefonzkiss
    @thefonzkiss 5 лет назад +79

    End credit scene - Walter Peck gets possessed or finds some haunted artefact, teasing another sequel.

    • @residentgrey
      @residentgrey 5 лет назад +12

      He can be forced to start another team after a major experience or another portal opening. Someone can steal the portal cannon/mine plans if not the weapon itself.

    • @BananaHoovyJ.Rabbit
      @BananaHoovyJ.Rabbit 2 года назад +5

      Actually, this should lead into the video game

  • @RVDDP2501
    @RVDDP2501 5 лет назад +96

    I really enjoyed this, I'd really like to see more of these, Alien 3, The Fly II, The Lost World: Jurarric Park, RoboCop 2, The Blues Brothers 2000 and Son of the Mask to name a few :)

    • @JacobNovember
      @JacobNovember 5 лет назад +6

      Blues Brothers 2000 is a prime candidate. The movie as it stands, I refuse to acknowledge exists. Aside from losing Belushi, that movie had problems.

    • @nitro-verse5311
      @nitro-verse5311 5 лет назад +3

      Say what you want about robocop 2 and the fly 2 but everyone cant deny that the last fight with crane was kickass and the fly vomiting a dudes faces off was metal AF

    • @dustywaynemusic6297
      @dustywaynemusic6297 5 лет назад

      Robocop 2 is a masterpiece

    • @Ultizer
      @Ultizer 5 лет назад

      Robocop 2 wasn't that bad honestly, it was no Terminator 2, but it was decent.

    • @RVDDP2501
      @RVDDP2501 5 лет назад +2

      @Sean Bassett * slaps head * how did I forget MIB 2?

  • @BugsyFoga
    @BugsyFoga 5 лет назад +161

    Then Ghostbusters 3 might've been a thing way before

    • @dnmstarsi
      @dnmstarsi 5 лет назад +22

      Yep and the game years later would've been the unofficial Ghostbusters 4.

    • @cjwrench07
      @cjwrench07 5 лет назад +8

      dnmstarsi that game is the official GB3, until the new GB3 movie proves itself.

    • @dnmstarsi
      @dnmstarsi 5 лет назад +2

      @@cjwrench07 You misunderstood my comment, dude.

    • @lostbutfreesoul
      @lostbutfreesoul 5 лет назад +5

      Yeah, but 3 writes itself after you have already established other dimensions existing.
      Imagine if the ghostbuster's 3 team used the same doorway trick only happened to stumble onto ghostbuster's 2 dimension. Then you have the possibility of two similar overlapping dimensions beginning to collide and the mayhem that causes. That EPA guy can have the smuggest of looks on his face as they are shut down for a third time for starting a twisted "apocalypse."

    • @tylerdenaro639
      @tylerdenaro639 5 лет назад +2

      I hope that they do a Ghost busters Three in the future because that would be a great movie too watch 😂😊😁😉🙂

  • @MatCor-ty7zi
    @MatCor-ty7zi 5 лет назад +79

    "Are you telling me the universe runs like New York City? We just ship our trash across the river and make it Jersey's problem?"
    "More or less."
    "I love it!"
    This made me smile.

  • @kingjammm3500
    @kingjammm3500 5 лет назад +205

    I would want this version!
    It seems like a more logical and contempt story
    I would rather see this version then the actual version it seems more logical and with the lore it's an amazing fan scription.
    I love it
    I also love how you added Winston into the story more I always hated how he wasn't even there.
    I love that there was no baby , more lore based story , i like how fana and Peter are fiances instead of dating then leaving each other , it's more structural and is very in line with the story
    Edit:OMG thank you all for the likes!!!!

  • @emanuelrojas2
    @emanuelrojas2 5 лет назад +50

    Nostalgia Critic got his wish

  • @oryanstudios2252
    @oryanstudios2252 4 года назад +24

    I love pecks monologue about his mother. It's great to give him a more well rounded character, while doing it in a clever creative way. Cudos!

  • @Spindler2007
    @Spindler2007 5 лет назад +39

    Wow. This would have been amazing to see. It still has that darker feel the actual sequel had while keeping the humour of the first movie. When you mentioned how the court case should have played out with the slime coming up and releasing the Scolari Brothers, I thought to myself "that is exactly how I thought that should be like when Doug reviewed Ghostbusters 2".
    I definitely liked the idea of Vigo being powered by fear instead of anger. Seeing more ghosts including "good" ones to help fight Vigo is a great idea. The idea of Vigo wanting to marry Dana due to her past experiences with the supernatural is an interesting concept but I couldn't help but think of the ending of Beetlejuice where he tries to marry Lydia before the Maitlands stop him. Still the new plan for Vigo is an interesting concept.

  • @MythoMead
    @MythoMead 5 лет назад +41

    I personally liked the ideas and changes to the script, and the use of iconic statues and land marks as well as artwork in the museum is brilliant. Vego is all about possession so having his haunting reflect that is a great change.
    Now here is a challenge, can you fix the Super Mario Bros movie?

  • @Foustdoodles98
    @Foustdoodles98 5 лет назад +14

    I really love this script! 34:06 I also love the parts where it's drawn, like it could fit in animation! I love how Janine is designed in the Ghostbuster suit, she looks hot!!

    • @gianinabadami5341
      @gianinabadami5341 Год назад +1

      I liked her part in this one too. Tho I find it interesting her being in love with Lewis was kept in this version. I still think her in love with Egon is better. Especially how it was carried over to GB Afterlife. Maybe Lewis's love interest could be a random character. Like one that saw him on the news of the Gozer attack

  • @elizabethhurlbut1475
    @elizabethhurlbut1475 5 лет назад +17

    That was a brilliant retelling of the Ghostbuster sequel.

  • @Madam_StarFall
    @Madam_StarFall 5 лет назад +34

    Imagination is a beautiful thing. I could see this playing in my head and it was a lot of fun. Thank you

  • @rodster6campingprepper
    @rodster6campingprepper 5 лет назад +12

    For the most part I like it as it is though I wish we'd seen the ghostbusters interact with Slimer and explain why he's haunting the firehouse and that Egon and Ray use him to study. Some of the dynamic between Slimer and Peter from the cartoon would have been fun to see on screen too.

  • @michaelwalsh9616
    @michaelwalsh9616 5 лет назад +14

    I'd love to see this script adapted into a comic

  • @DarkKnightofAnime
    @DarkKnightofAnime 5 лет назад +32

    yep definitely a better take on the sequel especially the Walter Peck stuff, although some of those puns kinda made me facepalm

  • @thrillergirl021
    @thrillergirl021 5 лет назад +49

    Wow, I love this fan script idea for the channel, I hope to see more in the future!

    • @WalterCulture
      @WalterCulture 5 лет назад +1

      We have 3 other episodes up already! Check them out!
      ruclips.net/p/PL0AQIMR-tpolSV_hNOJ_V2GJhq3heZpfv

  • @Vercalos
    @Vercalos 3 года назад +7

    OK. I actually like Ghostbusters 2, but I really really *really* wish we had this version.
    I just almost fell out of my chair laughing at the scene you just described with Peck's little heart-to-heart

  • @Sci-FiActionMovieReviews
    @Sci-FiActionMovieReviews 5 лет назад +33

    When he said, Ray should mention the ancient burial grounds to Peck and Peter tells him not to ruin the surprise. I would have said don't ruin our chances for a potential client.

  • @JoeltheSwedishDragon
    @JoeltheSwedishDragon 5 лет назад +21

    Dunno about yourself(and I also thought the original sequel was okay at best), but as a whole, this script sounds waaay better than what we got, mate.
    So good that it could easily be made, whether back then or today.
    And if it's to be made some time in the future as an animated fan-adaptation at least, with the voice work of you guys, I'd be so happy to help animate it.

  • @braincandyproduction976
    @braincandyproduction976 5 лет назад +9

    Your cut is so much better and now I wish I could see it on screen. Damn, it's so good!

    • @ChannelAwesome
      @ChannelAwesome  5 лет назад +2

      +Brain Candy Production
      Thanks for the kind words!

  • @TheHeroExodus
    @TheHeroExodus 5 лет назад +18

    Hmmm a whatif i can follow almost 100%. Change a thing or 2 and you'd be golden ponyboy.
    Shame 2 wasnt like this. Im sure it would have spawned a third within the 90s and maybe a 4th into the 2000. It'd probably rest a while afterwards but atleast ramis would have gotten to be a part of em.
    R.I.P. Harold "Egon Spengler" Ramis

  • @CassDaMan1138
    @CassDaMan1138 5 лет назад +135

    I actually liked Ghostbusters 2.

    • @neffyboy
      @neffyboy 5 лет назад +17

      I like Ghostbusters 2 as well.

    • @gtsgreatteacherscathach5550
      @gtsgreatteacherscathach5550 5 лет назад +16

      Same here but I wished this version was a thing now, but still I enjoy Ghostbusters 2.

    • @Slayerlord0
      @Slayerlord0 5 лет назад +4

      @@gtsgreatteacherscathach5550 Same.

    • @Fractorification
      @Fractorification 5 лет назад +8

      Me too, but this is waay better.

    • @CaptAwesumNo1Zone
      @CaptAwesumNo1Zone 5 лет назад +11

      You guys are not alone, I STAND WITH YOU, YOU ARE NOT ALONE.

  • @Czah5
    @Czah5 5 лет назад +12

    That episode of TRGB when Peter gets possessed literally gave me nightmares as a kid.
    (FYI, this concept movie was so amazing that I am pissed now that it wasn't the movie)

  • @oakenshadow6763
    @oakenshadow6763 4 года назад +6

    "Alright, a blond bimbo! Nobody Linda Blairs me! Say hi to your kitten for me!"
    You can hear him start to laugh at the end, and could that not make you crack up?
    30:37

  • @Slayerlord0
    @Slayerlord0 5 лет назад +11

    I'll always like Ghostbusters 2 but...yeah, I kinda wish this was a thing, now.
    Gotta say, though. During the "upgraded" ghosts run amok scene, need to keep the scampering fur coat and the Titanic gag. Best part of the whole movie.

  • @theaychgee
    @theaychgee 5 лет назад +32

    Good God some one get this guy in touch with the people that can make this happen..... damn good.

  • @Craxin01
    @Craxin01 5 лет назад +35

    Someone invent a time machine so they can pitch this over the original version!

    • @delyon5344
      @delyon5344 2 года назад

      That would cause the bootstrap paradox

    • @Craxin01
      @Craxin01 2 года назад

      @@delyon5344 Not sure I know what a bootstrap paradox is.

    • @delyon5344
      @delyon5344 2 года назад

      @@Craxin01 there’s videos that explain it a lot better than I can. It might also be closer to the grandfather paradox.

    • @Craxin01
      @Craxin01 2 года назад +1

      @@delyon5344 Grandfather paradox is you killing your grandfather before he has a chance to conceive your father, thus you were never born so couldn't go back in time to kill your grandfather. The little I saw looking up bootstrap paradox is a self-contained loop where A leads to B and B leads back to A ad infinitum. Not sure if I got that right though.

    • @delyon5344
      @delyon5344 2 года назад

      @@Craxin01 yeah so the grandfather part of that paradox is the example. If you replace the grandfather with the ghostbusters 2 movie when you send the new script back you kill the ghostbusters 2 original which prevents you from ever going back with the new script.

  • @teaguehansberry3135
    @teaguehansberry3135 4 года назад +12

    I loved what you did with Winston's character in this would be sequel!

  • @Lesley_RedRhody
    @Lesley_RedRhody 5 лет назад +51

    Rob, you had me until you called Ray an idiot. He’s not! Childlike? Perhaps. An aspect of his personality that was greatly exaggerated for the animated series. Not that there’s anything wrong with that. 😉
    Seriously, though: As much as I respect your opinion and can appreciate the effort it takes to write for FanScription, you’re wrong about Ray. Dan Aykroyd is the mother fucking *KING* of exposition! If I remember correctly, he wrote most of his own dialogue. When it comes to delivering lines that have any kind of paranormal jargon- dates, cultures, religious beliefs, you name it- Aykroyd sells it like he absolutely, positively knows what he’s talking about! He did the same thing in Sneakers.
    By the way, I have nothing against the idea that Vigo should have possessed Peter instead. I just wanted to throw my humble objection in defense of my fellow Southpaw!

    • @alexixeno4223
      @alexixeno4223 5 лет назад +12

      Agreed. He was just childlike is all. Which is why I think he was the usual target for those type of things in the cartoon.

  • @matteoar
    @matteoar 5 лет назад +11

    The Peck scene would have been hilarious. Now that I think about it, this whole plot would have been great.

  • @RedArmyReenactor
    @RedArmyReenactor 5 лет назад +16

    God this would have been so much better of a movie! I would love to hear what they think it would be like if they kept the kid but made it the child of Vinze (sp?) and Zuul? And Vigo wants this child specifically because it was conceived while Louis and Dana were possessed by Sumerian Demigods!

    • @LextheRobot
      @LextheRobot 5 лет назад

      Then the film would have needed to come out in 1985 instead of 1989. Unless the child gestated for an extra four years.

    • @RedArmyReenactor
      @RedArmyReenactor 5 лет назад +1

      LextheRobot why? Since the 1930’s we’ve been making movies that are set before they’ve come out. Why couldn’t they make the movie set in 1986?

    • @LextheRobot
      @LextheRobot 5 лет назад +1

      @@RedArmyReenactor Good point. I'm just used to fans recurringly asking "Wait, is Louis Oscar's father?" without doing the math between the two existing films.

  • @DigiRangerScott
    @DigiRangerScott 5 лет назад +67

    What if HE-MAN was a Ghostbuster?

    • @andrewwblanchard6037
      @andrewwblanchard6037 5 лет назад +17

      BY THE POWER OF GRAYSKULL
      DON'T CROSS THE STREAMS

    • @ninjamaster3453
      @ninjamaster3453 5 лет назад +6

      It would've flopped harder than the 1987 live action movie.

    • @RedCloude
      @RedCloude 5 лет назад +3

      Well, Skeletor does look like a ghost. though it would be interesting if Skeletor gets haunted and calls He-man for help.
      Skeletor: He-man help I'm being haunted by some ghosts. Nnyaaaaaahh!

    • @Ironcabbit
      @Ironcabbit 2 года назад

      Then he’d be Jake Kong or Eddy Spencer.

  • @BuckarooBanzai84
    @BuckarooBanzai84 2 года назад +5

    Ok, I'll concede one more thing; I agree Winston was dealt a bad hand in this one. He went from being the everyman-character we were supposed to relate with, to being practically a cartoon. That being said, I'm glad you still agreed that Liberty was an essential element. (But yes, she should've had more to do.) =)

  • @amandaallen5038
    @amandaallen5038 5 лет назад +17

    Holy hell, why aren't you writing Ghostbusters movies!?

  • @denzelperry7024
    @denzelperry7024 5 лет назад +12

    The courtroom scene in 2 with Louis being fed his statement by Venkman is golden. Sorry, Ghostbusters 2 is superior for me for this and other reasons I can't be bothered to convince you with. Wouldn't change a single thing.

    • @thefonzkiss
      @thefonzkiss 5 лет назад +2

      Intriguing opinion. Totally wrong but intriguing. One or two funny scenes doesn’t make up for the rest of it being shit. Just about every friggin scene in the first one has comedy gold in it.

    • @denzelperry7024
      @denzelperry7024 5 лет назад +1

      @Dodge Morningstar it's my story and I'm sticking to it 😊 it is my sincere opinion indeed, thanks for appreciating that even in disagreement 👍

  • @roboticgamer4645
    @roboticgamer4645 3 года назад +3

    Peter:Who could this happen?
    Dana:Maybe it's the "protection" you got at the dollar store.
    Me: *WOOOO*

  • @primetimemonkyhours743
    @primetimemonkyhours743 5 лет назад +6

    Pecks Mom Joke was genius

  • @pickering86
    @pickering86 3 года назад +4

    If I were to add one thing, during the final battle with Vigo, the rush of ghosts almost pulls him through the portal, or just past the doorway and he starts pulling himself back out. Then we hear a roar and the giant monster they'd seen when testing the new traps crashes its huge head through the doorway, swallowing Vigo in one bite. It pulls itself back inside and then they close the portal.

  • @napamodesto8001
    @napamodesto8001 5 лет назад +12

    This was actually very good! I only wish Hollywood writes like this.

  • @Goremaid
    @Goremaid 5 лет назад +18

    I love the first week of the month cos I always enjoy this show (and that sounds cheesy but I genuinely mean it)

  • @DuelScreen
    @DuelScreen 5 лет назад +14

    Love it. Would have been a better movie but there's a problem. This would create an opening for a third movie. 😄

    • @dustyrose192
      @dustyrose192 2 года назад

      if these guys wrote it could work

  • @goob_goob_gooby_goob
    @goob_goob_gooby_goob 5 лет назад +8

    "I love it!"
    Also, for the new film coming in 2020, they need to bring back Walter Peck. They could have do his usual hating the ghostbusters thing, then have him let them bust ghosts near the end of the middle but nearer the end.
    #RessurectThePeck

    • @goob_goob_gooby_goob
      @goob_goob_gooby_goob 2 года назад +1

      Well, sucks to be you... me... I mean, Afterlife was great but unfortunately no Peck :(

  • @jamesanderson1930
    @jamesanderson1930 5 лет назад +14

    Loved to see Walter and Rob tackle tmnt 2...

    • @dnmstarsi
      @dnmstarsi 5 лет назад +5

      And 3.

    • @Heisenkirk2000
      @Heisenkirk2000 5 лет назад

      @Blake Mallard which 2, SotO or OotS?

    • @nitro-verse5311
      @nitro-verse5311 5 лет назад

      @@Heisenkirk2000 yes.

    • @Ultizer
      @Ultizer 5 лет назад

      2 is a mess, almost as bad as 3, they don't even use weapons, they removed Casey & for some reason they didn't put in Bebop & Rocksteady. it needs a total rewrite & to allow turtles to use weapons again, turtles should have a little violence to it even if it's for kids.

    • @jamesanderson1930
      @jamesanderson1930 5 лет назад

      Really they could do any of them. The best turtles movie we got was the 2007 animated version. It can’t be that hard to make a love action turtles movie.

  • @timmoore9855
    @timmoore9855 5 лет назад +9

    "A sequel about nothing is incredibly difficult to do."
    Waiting for Godot 2: Electric Buggaloo

  • @billymccrary2246
    @billymccrary2246 5 лет назад +11

    What if Rocky was the Blue Turbo Ranger in Turbo: A Power Rangers Movie?
    What if The Amazing Spider-Man 2 were different?

    • @nitro-verse5311
      @nitro-verse5311 5 лет назад +1

      Ur first suggestion completely washes away the second I mean Where did u think of that man? Hahaha

  • @christophestevenson1448
    @christophestevenson1448 5 лет назад +7

    Wow. This could be done as a cartoon.

  • @rodddossantos1437
    @rodddossantos1437 Год назад +2

    Well, obviously this would have been better than the ‘89 sequel, but I wish more people would experience and talk about the video game (the newer one). Very cinematic and written by Harold Ramis & Dan Aykroyd, and voiced by the original cast of actors.
    It really is something quite special.

  • @69wandering
    @69wandering 5 лет назад +7

    Dammmmnnnn I would have loved this version!

  • @BrianJNelson
    @BrianJNelson 3 года назад +3

    Yours is a much better version. I always thought GB 2 was pretty weak and I was disappointed.
    I had a really good idea for a third movie that required them to start franchises in other cities and then eventually reunite with their new teams in St Louis, this time using the Gateway Arch as a giant "ghost portal". I would have loved to have written this script.

  • @sammylane21
    @sammylane21 5 лет назад +9

    But Peck can't go against them when he himself witnessed same said 100ft Marshmellow Man in downtown Manhattan as 1000's had the same. We even see Peck stare up to Mr. Stay Puffed moments before it crushes the roof off a Church building...... which is right next to Diana's building.

  • @BBBHuey
    @BBBHuey 5 лет назад +3

    Ghostbusters 2 could've had the Ghostbusters still in business after the Gozer incident. Ever since they destroyed the Stay Puft Marshmallow Man, its marshmallow (still containing the kinetic essence of Gozer) would've spread out across New York. Turning New York into a semi-permanent hotbed of ghostly activity.

  • @dylanogg347
    @dylanogg347 4 года назад +5

    Personally, I friggin' love Ghostbusters II, but I would watch the Hell out of this film!

  • @JackedThor-so
    @JackedThor-so 5 лет назад +7

    Holy hell, this would be the best thing ever - WAY more interesting and satisfying than what we got!

  • @LinkMEP
    @LinkMEP 5 лет назад +14

    Ghostbusters 2 is WAY better than the reboot, what you smoking?

    • @ArsyaUtomo
      @ArsyaUtomo 5 лет назад +2

      What are YOU smoking?

    • @LinkMEP
      @LinkMEP 5 лет назад +2

      Arsya Utomo reality

    • @ArsyaUtomo
      @ArsyaUtomo 5 лет назад

      @@LinkMEP dude you have bad place to live.

    • @LinkMEP
      @LinkMEP 5 лет назад +2

      Arsya Utomo I don’t live there, I smoke it.

    • @medalgear654
      @medalgear654 3 года назад

      @@LinkMEP dude you kill me👏😅

  • @Undeadpriest94
    @Undeadpriest94 5 лет назад +3

    I had a very similar idea for a blog: Cinimatic Repair. The idea was to take a movie that had a solid core with potential to be good but repair all its problems. I'm not upset that you guys are doing something like this. In fact, I'm happy that somebody else is doing this kind of stuff. Keep this up.

  • @jessespringer7723
    @jessespringer7723 5 лет назад +13

    Blues brothers 2000

  • @Prettywhite4awhiteguy
    @Prettywhite4awhiteguy 5 лет назад +6

    I like it and sets up a sequel that would have Winston, Jeannie and Lewis as the main characters, might've been direct to video but I'm 39 and as a kid I would've liked that

  • @DelcoRanz93
    @DelcoRanz93 5 лет назад +6

    For the Montage scene I'd actually like to see a combination of ghosts as well as the possessed Statues because my favorite part from the original version's montage was the Titanic, though the model would have to be reworked for accuracy regarding the damage caused by the Iceberg as well as the split and the implosion caused by the trapped air in the back half of the ship.

    • @gianinabadami5341
      @gianinabadami5341 Год назад +1

      Also we could still have Cheech's character say Well, better late than never.
      Along with having him in other scenes

  • @robart1979
    @robart1979 5 лет назад +9

    This is really great Rob good job man I couldn't have come up with anything better and now all we need to do is invent a time machine

  • @PeterHowe228
    @PeterHowe228 3 года назад +4

    I would love to hear what Ghostbusters 3 would look like if it had been the sequel to this version of Ghostbusters 2 that took place in the mid 90s (94/95/96)

  • @theretrobro3826
    @theretrobro3826 5 лет назад +3

    22:13...Now THAT'S good writing!

  • @kisekhan2818
    @kisekhan2818 5 лет назад +6

    I would pay to see this on the big screen , maybe a animated one so we get all the cast in( even the ones who are gone from this world)

  • @6094598
    @6094598 4 года назад +4

    what Doug brought up in the Nostalgia Critic review on this was at least a good foundation and what Rob did was a good expansion

  • @mikecabral2420
    @mikecabral2420 Год назад +2

    Peck's three reasons are hilarious and surprisingly heartfelt and I feel like it could actually work and feel genuine without feeling unearned or corney.

  • @LeonGarnet
    @LeonGarnet 5 лет назад +4

    The chain reaction from this "What if?" would be awesome, GB2016 wouln't exist and maybe GB3 wouln't become an over hyped Goosebumps tv movie but instead the passing of the torch for the characters of Extreme Ghosbusters... I need to jump to that alternative reality now.

  • @VandalSauvage
    @VandalSauvage 5 лет назад +27

    Yeah, looking back on it, Ghostbusters II didn’t need to happen.

  • @pauloltman4960
    @pauloltman4960 10 месяцев назад +2

    22:44 that "three things" just gave me like legit chills!!

  • @DiamondBatToons
    @DiamondBatToons 3 года назад +2

    This was actually REALLY REALLY Good! As much as I liked the original, this was SO MUCH Better!! I LOVE The visual art y'all made and I LOVE what you did with Winston! Hell, I even Liked the idea of a mid-credits scene!
    Although, if I had to change ONE thing in the mid-credits scene, instead of having Janine, you should've had an unknown actor and have it be the scene of the ROOKIE FROM THE VIDEO GAME putting the pack on and end it there, thus starting the VIDEO GAME Story as if it were like a subtle sequel! (Ghostbusters game would be like a GB 2.5 if you will) That would've been AWESOME!

  • @joshuacritchfield3564
    @joshuacritchfield3564 5 лет назад +5

    I like your treatment and think it would have been good. I like the original the way it is, but I'm not so in love with to the point that I can't stand others not liking it. I disagree with the idea that the first me was about nothing. It was about these guys starting a business and the challenges of doing so under these circumstances. Plus, Dan said it was met to be a throwback to the Abbott and Costello type horror comedies. As for making something out of your idea, maybe do it as an animated for adult audiences.

  • @Spindler2007
    @Spindler2007 5 лет назад +4

    I've just had a really interesting idea.
    What if this version of the movie was made but done in animation?
    I got this idea when I remembered seeing some lost episodes of Doctor Who released on dvd but done in animation.
    This could have a mix of audio from the actual movie along with new sound effects and new voice overs from the original remaining cast and some voice actors.
    What does everyone think?

  • @crazyjack66
    @crazyjack66 3 года назад +2

    I wish I had an animation team so I could bring this treatment to life.

  • @brandonprater4613
    @brandonprater4613 5 лет назад +2

    I personally loved this idea! The only thing I may have added (maybe), would be having the ancient cult that was referenced in the original be Viggo's victims who became the river of slime. But that aside... the dialogue, the ghost dimension, the Statue of Liberty fight, as well as everything/everyone from the sequel you managed to keep in the story... I'd watch that movie! Great FanScription, looking forward to the next!

  • @justinduffy5834
    @justinduffy5834 5 лет назад +3

    I like how rob has his own series now

  • @kamiinazo2133
    @kamiinazo2133 4 года назад +5

    This would have made a good movie and I love that you kept the statue of liberty in the end. You kept the best of the original, ditched the bad and made it better.

  • @zeo1chris
    @zeo1chris 5 лет назад +2

    PLEASE! at the very least SOMEONE makes an animatic of THIS version!!!! TY Rob

  • @dillonchaddick695
    @dillonchaddick695 5 лет назад +2

    I've always thought that a good Ghostbusters 3 movie could adapt the Ghostbusters Extreme series from the 90s, but toned down to be not as annoying with a couple of the original Ghostbusters coming in as cameos to say that it is a bad idea. Written right, it could be pretty good and could even pay respectful tribute to the Ghostbusters who have gone to the beyond.

  • @bashcrash9148
    @bashcrash9148 5 лет назад +6

    I like Ghostbusters 2 and don’t care who knows it.

  • @austinroundsgallery83
    @austinroundsgallery83 2 года назад +3

    I got an idea for the next Fanscription episode: *What if Ghostbusters 3 was made?*

  • @jenniferschillig3768
    @jenniferschillig3768 2 года назад +2

    So glad you kept Peter and Dana together! That's one approach to sequels I've always disliked--as you put it, the "here we go again" business, undoing some resolution from the first (for example, a romantic relationship) so the whole thing can happen all over again--instead of, say, DEVELOPING said resolution. That's what I loved so much about the Mummy movies--they kept Rick and Evie together and developed them as a couple/family.

  • @idontwritecomments
    @idontwritecomments 5 лет назад +1

    You still need that scene with them yelling in the tunnel to hear the echo. "Winston"... makes me laugh every time.

  • @gregmcmahon957
    @gregmcmahon957 2 года назад +3

    I really love this Ghostbusters 2 fanfiction .

  • @MovieFan1912
    @MovieFan1912 Год назад +3

    Why didn’t we get this as the sequel? It recaptures what made the original good while also adding in new things to keep it interesting. You know, the things a sequel SHOULD do.

    • @armorpro573
      @armorpro573 5 месяцев назад +2

      I guess the movie executives thought differently

  • @williamwong1982
    @williamwong1982 2 года назад +2

    I would love to see this applied to Secrets of NIMH 2 and approach it by adapting the sequel novel Rasco and the Rats of Nimh but also putting your own spin on it.

  • @yaraaltro
    @yaraaltro 3 года назад +2

    Okay, somebody should hireRob for reboot writing, he gets more of it than many screenwriters we now claim we hate do.