RWBY Evermorrow AU | EP05 | All Roads Lead to Roman

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  • Опубликовано: 6 сен 2024
  • DISCLAIMER: This project is not endorsed by Rooster Teeth in any way. Views, opinions, and thoughts are all our own. It is a fanwork and is not for profit. Rooster Teeth, RWBY and all properties therein are trade names or registered trademarks of Rooster Teeth Productions, LLC.
    © Rooster Teeth Productions, LLC.
    Teams RWBY and CRDL venture to Chalk Dustworks in pursuit of Roman Torchwick, who recently escaped jail.
    Evermorrow is a story that takes place in a world where Beacon didn't fall (among other changes), so Team RWBY & Friends are free to continue their education at Beacon - though it'll still be challenging!
    Evermorrow also has its own twitter account at @ RWBYEvermorrow where you can read a LOT more lore and stuff. We have an FAQ at rwbyevermorrow...
    VOICE CAST
    Ruby Rose: Avery Marie (‪@ave_r_ie‬ )
    Weiss Schnee: Silent Wisteria ‪@Silent_Wisteria‬ )
    Khaki Fallow / Cardin Winchester: Critmagnet (@KevinGerardVA)
    Blake Belladonna: Nicole Shara (@scarletpiano13)
    Dove Bronzewing: Nektis Noir (‪@NektisNoir‬ )
    Yang Xiao Long: Zippy (@ZippyDoesVoices)
    Sky Lark: Caboose (‪@caboosecomposes1941‬ )
    Roman Torchwick: Levilagann (@LeviLagann)
    Russel Thrush: Tarquin Irusa (@Tarquin_IrusaVA)
    Neopolitan (Efforts): Calxiyn (‪@calxiyn‬)
    PRODUCTION:
    Written & Illustrated by: Kaleidoarms
    3D ASSETS:
    Endertinman - General 3d Help, Torchwick's Semblance, 3d Locker Room Set
    Xacrom - General 3d Help, 3d Locker Room Set
    Proxy - General 3d Help
    Sy - General 3d Help, Crescent Rose model & rig
    Misc Environment Assets from Telltale Games
    CASTING HELP
    Kenkoy - General Casting Assistance
    Sytokun - General Casting Assistance
    Dapper Phantom - 3d Beacon Courtyard Set
    Joe Ranman - 3d Beacon Courtyard Set
    NinjaSteeve - 3d Beacon Courtyard Set & 3d Beacon Amphitheater Set
    Zahlen - 3d Beacon Amphitheater Set
    Endertinman - General 3d Help, Torchwick's Semblance
    AUDIO
    Various RWBY Score Tracks - Jeff Williams & Alex Abraham
    Score Help - Edelweiss (@a_mellowtea)

Комментарии • 309

  • @josephsuh5204
    @josephsuh5204 9 месяцев назад +397

    “I’m the Yang, let’s fight! Punch, punch, punch!” Love the RWBY Chibi reference right there.😂🤣

  • @JoE_the_InFernO
    @JoE_the_InFernO 9 месяцев назад +109

    9:18 damn. Roman really said
    "Shut up,Side character".

  • @lunathenightwolf1276
    @lunathenightwolf1276 9 месяцев назад +247

    I like how you gave Cardin teammates actual personalities and semblances to distinguish them and not have them be bland and forgettable like they are in the show

    • @kidprime6863
      @kidprime6863 7 месяцев назад +19

      I can't remember but did Cardin always have a Brooklyn accent?
      But yeah, I will agree with you. Plus, not all three of them necessarily have to be bullies like Cardin. At least one or two of them can be legit. I would love to see them argue with Cardin about his leadership skills.

  • @oscarstainton
    @oscarstainton 9 месяцев назад +247

    Sky's ability is equal parts hilarious and unsettling... I'm glad he's on the good guys' side.

    • @undeadprinceofchaos3731
      @undeadprinceofchaos3731 9 месяцев назад +9

      It really is when you think about it. Imagine the possibilities that one can do with an ability like that!

    • @blackultraego140
      @blackultraego140 9 месяцев назад

      Cual es no se mucho ingles

    • @oscarstainton
      @oscarstainton 9 месяцев назад +3

      @@blackultraego140 En esencia, el talento de Sky daría mucho miedo si fuera utilizado por los villanos.

    • @gundhamtanaka9487
      @gundhamtanaka9487 9 месяцев назад +9

      I'm gonna be honest, my idea for Sky's semblance was to allow him to create foggy clouds. So his enemies don't see him coming for the attack

    • @Deeps429
      @Deeps429 9 месяцев назад +10

      Also the fact his last name is Lark, larks are know for mimicking other birds

  • @mariapazgonzalezlesme
    @mariapazgonzalezlesme 9 месяцев назад +283

    Ruby and Torchwick's color rivalry / symbolism.
    A new antagonist faction "Natural Order." And the irony of Khaki, he hates faunus yet his surname "Fallow" is a deer.
    Sky copying Team RWBY.
    The Queen Neopolitan.
    And Torchwick with a SEMBLANCE!
    *Loved everything about this episode.*

    • @umwha
      @umwha 8 месяцев назад

      How is two characters wearing the same colour a ‘colour rivalry / symbolism’?

    • @nocx4592
      @nocx4592 6 месяцев назад +2

      I'm guess that's a foil of Adam's name literally meaning "man".

    • @mmangalisomasinga432
      @mmangalisomasinga432 5 месяцев назад

      @@nocx4592 The Adam vs Fallow fight gonna be fire

  • @RoyalMePlenty
    @RoyalMePlenty 9 месяцев назад +72

    I love Roman's semblance. Rwby actually planned for him to have a semblance that could allow him to place things in a pocket dimension, and was going to be called Deep Pockets. But they couldn't find a way to have him use it much, so they scraped it and eventually gave the semblance to Fiona years later.

    • @dragonsvideos6737
      @dragonsvideos6737 9 месяцев назад +8

      Yea they also wanted to show how people like Roman-and by extension Arthur watts-could be decent fighters without a semblance.

    • @kidprime6863
      @kidprime6863 7 месяцев назад +1

      I forgot all about that. It would've made him an even more deadly adversary if they kept it in. Imagine if he could put people into it. He'd be a walking Trojan Horse.

    • @user-di2bm3py7q
      @user-di2bm3py7q 6 месяцев назад +1

      They should have gave him fire powers like the human torch or firestorm because he’s the candle whip man

    • @dragonsvideos6737
      @dragonsvideos6737 6 месяцев назад +3

      @@user-di2bm3py7q that’s cinder’s semblance though, minus the whip

    • @user-di2bm3py7q
      @user-di2bm3py7q 6 месяцев назад

      @@dragonsvideos6737 I thought she used weather powers to make glass in the air and the fire was from magic

  • @RukoRuby
    @RukoRuby 9 месяцев назад +71

    "I'm the Yang, let's fight! Punch, punch punch!" Bruhhhh I'm deaad 😂😂😂

  • @virtualmoon7757
    @virtualmoon7757 8 месяцев назад +42

    The intro fits RWBY so well

  • @marialourdesalmeida6361
    @marialourdesalmeida6361 7 месяцев назад +8

    I'm loving this series. I'm loving This AU. You made team CDRL have character and personality. Dont stop

  • @diegoblacutt8994
    @diegoblacutt8994 9 месяцев назад +62

    - 1:20 i always wonder why there wasn't something like this one regular Rwby. It makes total sense.
    - 5:01 wow , now that's a really useful semblance when there's a need for a distraction or to confuse the enemy in a hurry. This is why i loved what You do with characters like sky.
    - 5:45 i guess weiss wil have to pick the roll of both babysitter and Big sister 😅.
    - 8:07 Interesting , he seems to have been a Top student on his old Combat school like pyrrah. Also nice way to justify his desing with the eyes closed 😑👍.
    - 8:18 Nice jacket my elegant man 🧥 👌.
    - 9:20 NO FREAKING WAY 😃. Roman's original Semblance?! I did not see that coming. (For the ones who doesn't know his semblance was gave to Fiona the faunus Lamp on v7).

  • @ThatKaitoDan
    @ThatKaitoDan 9 месяцев назад +103

    Soooo would a Remnant version of Dave & Buster's be "Dove & Duster's"?
    Love the dynamics of the pairs and the new wrangles to the rest of CRDL. Very great stuff!

  • @rixarts14
    @rixarts14 9 месяцев назад +23

    If only the canon CRDL were this entertaining.

    • @dragonsvideos6737
      @dragonsvideos6737 9 месяцев назад +3

      Pyrrha beating them up and jaune standing up to Cardin was entertaining imo

    • @MasamuneNoirFilms
      @MasamuneNoirFilms 3 месяца назад +3

      They never had the chance to be entertaining, the show was terrible at character development outside the main cast. They introduced all these characters developed none of them. Then the school blew up and we never see them ever again.

    • @antyep
      @antyep 3 месяца назад

      I Think it was due to change in management cuz you know…Monty died. But even with the main characters they suck at developing them, especially Ruby.

  • @andrewsung3965
    @andrewsung3965 9 месяцев назад +21

    After watching fixing rwby from celtic phoeniz i went to watch how other people do their own take on rwby, with this being one of them.
    Roman torchwick's voice does remind me of the late billy kemetz
    So far, execution and personality seems spot on.

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 9 месяцев назад +4

      Glad to see another fan of FRWBY. I too am excited to see more fan materials of RWBY made by fans of the show. I don’t know if you heard of it but there is another one that will come out eventually called RWBY Dust Queen, there is already a trailer and Q&A out.

  • @revanius2213
    @revanius2213 4 месяца назад +4

    'Always thought Semblances were overrated myself' reference to Roman Holiday, nice. Also a call back to how Fiona's semblance was supposed to be Roman's but they never figured out how to introduce it.

  • @JosephFrazier-ps2hb
    @JosephFrazier-ps2hb 9 месяцев назад +52

    Love the ideas you came up with for CRDL’s semblances. I’m taking those as canon until proven otherwise :3

  • @Chuckles_the_Jester
    @Chuckles_the_Jester 9 месяцев назад +148

    ohhhh, neo was NOT happy with cardin threatening to kill her hubby

    • @bonniefazman9065
      @bonniefazman9065 8 месяцев назад +18

      Yup, leave it to Cardin to put his whole LEG in his own mouth.

    • @literallykanade
      @literallykanade 8 месяцев назад +3

      her WHAT 💀💀💀💀

    • @Chuckles_the_Jester
      @Chuckles_the_Jester 8 месяцев назад +3

      @@literallykanade i'm guessing you haven't read roman holiday, it's more or less a joke in that they are a ship

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 8 месяцев назад +3

      And we already saw what she’d be like without him in the show, so she is definitely not taking that threat lightly.

  • @naturescorruptedinfactorie8062
    @naturescorruptedinfactorie8062 9 месяцев назад +57

    I love all the new ideas in the AU

  • @observer2484
    @observer2484 9 месяцев назад +12

    Getting closer to proper episode length. Also, this is pretty nice.
    - A human supremacist group makes sense, and given that Torchwick was somewhat racist towards faunus in canon, it makes sense that he would work with people like that. Also, new enemies is a welcome presence.
    - New attires are welcome change.
    - Team CRDL getting semblances is excellent, and those make so much sense.
    - Constrast between Torchwick and Ruby is more apparent in a good way now that the criminal uses red colour.

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 9 месяцев назад +3

      I don’t really think Roman cares about political ideologies when it comes to business, Whether it’s Cinders group, White Fang, and now the Natural Order. From what I heard Roman’s racism was confirmed to be just typical views of humans towards Faunus in Remnant.

    • @observer2484
      @observer2484 6 месяцев назад

      @@EthanIlchert Even so.

  • @marcksman7896
    @marcksman7896 9 месяцев назад +43

    Loving it so far. glad to get some in depth history with CRDL. hope their more competent in this AU.

  • @AgionAgion
    @AgionAgion 9 месяцев назад +67

    In a twitter tweet, you mentioned that we would not like the guy next to Roman. But damn, you REALLY nailed it with his origin, his group, and his voice.
    Kudos to the VA, they did an amazing job portraying this character.

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 9 месяцев назад +3

      What exactly did the twitter tweet say about Khaki and the Natural Order?

    • @trolledfordrip
      @trolledfordrip 8 месяцев назад +3

      i think they meant the guy was going to be an ass

  • @coreymajtyka460
    @coreymajtyka460 9 месяцев назад +19

    Great episode, love to see what you have planned next.
    The Natural Order is an interesting new villain group to serve as a counter to the White Fang, and a funny coincidence considering I've been tooling around a similar group in my own fanfiction.
    I've been looking forward to meeting Khaki since first seeing the Evermarrow intro and it didn't disappoint, his name sounds simple and clever to me at the same time and I love it. His weapon and voice are cool too.
    The reveal of Torchwick's semblance was great and I loved Neo getting pissed at Cardin threatening to kill Roman, romantic or not that's still her dumb dumb.

  • @Numatruehome
    @Numatruehome 9 месяцев назад +13

    HOLY CRAP THANK YOU, the one thing I hated in the original, which was a biiiig problem while the white fang was in the original story, was the flawed representation of activist groups and hate groups, being that all they did was make an activist group, turn them extreme without any representation of one of the major causes for activist groups going to far, terrorist hate groups who start pushing and doing terrible things in the name of their prejudice. It is one of the many real thing that happens and while a lot of activist groups have been able to stand strong in moral, there are a few or people as individuals who lash back and it ends up creating a harder struggle for equality because the hate group succeeded in getting the people they oppress to lash back, like a Bully who is able to pull you down to their level and say “see, I told you I was right.” And then they use the instances of the activist group fighting back as confirmation of their prejudice. Then bystanders end up being unable to see what is right and wrong because they think both sides have an argument when really, what started as oppression became a war of ideals rather than the straight fight for equal rights it should have been, bravo.

    • @Codigo12
      @Codigo12 6 месяцев назад

      X Men mostly do a grear job having someone like Magneto as their Bad guy.
      But there, the human supremacists were actually threatening to everyone.
      I mean, we should have saw Blake fighting against some human supremacists and her team giving support.
      We didn't even received some equivalent to Kelly which is dissapointing.

  • @abbycollins4820
    @abbycollins4820 9 месяцев назад +12

    Really loved the different interactions between RWBY and CRDL. My favorite dynamic’s probably Cardin and Yang.
    How you characterized the individual members of CRDL was fantastic!
    Out of the CRDL boys Cardin is the most fun to watch while Dove is shaping up to be the most interesting. I like how self aware Dove is about how his team kinda sucks.
    The info about dust Weiss gave was super cool world building and depressingly realistic.
    Makes sense there would be a Faunus hate group in this world.
    Super excited for what’s happening next!!!

  • @maxsotomayor3674
    @maxsotomayor3674 9 месяцев назад +11

    It felt like Blake was going to hit him if he dosen't shut up. (Raphael Vibes) 5:26

  • @josephsuh5204
    @josephsuh5204 9 месяцев назад +18

    I love how you showing us every different types of Semblance’s. I can’t wait for more.
    🌹❄️🐈‍⬛☀️

  • @queenathena5219
    @queenathena5219 9 месяцев назад +15

    I’m surprised you got calxyin to voice Neo it’s fitting

  • @benjaminklaassen4722
    @benjaminklaassen4722 9 месяцев назад +7

    Okay, I gotta admit; Sky and Dove's Semblances are actually pretty awesome. Kinda makes me wonder what Cardin and Russel have.

  • @spencermalley10
    @spencermalley10 9 месяцев назад +9

    Another home run.
    Glad to see that Roman's struck out on his own and I'm really digging what you've been doing with Cardin and his team. Adding a Faunus hate organization is really something the show should have done a long time ago.

  • @TheDonGio
    @TheDonGio 9 месяцев назад +17

    I love how different type of Characters Team CRDL is and Cardin having a Brooklyn accent is a brilliant idea I tip my hat to the actor voicing him

  • @l.warner3951
    @l.warner3951 9 месяцев назад +14

    Honesty I like what you did with Team CRDL and creating a new faction which adds to the world building.

  • @palettepeachy4096
    @palettepeachy4096 7 месяцев назад +4

    I’m so happy to see Neo like I’m actually really happy please give her the spotlight she truly deserves

  • @m.sydneyvern2260
    @m.sydneyvern2260 9 месяцев назад +4

    Wow you gave Team CRDL actual character and individuality. This is soo much better than the core show

  • @enitenit2791
    @enitenit2791 5 месяцев назад +2

    9:49 "World's most blatant emblem" LMFAO also Roman calling Dove a "Honeyed Ham" really got to me it's 2AM I can't do this-

  • @StarforceOnAir
    @StarforceOnAir 5 месяцев назад +3

    Love, love, LOVE Torchwick's Semblance. He's a thief, so of course he's got an ability to stash and summon items from a pocket dimension!

  • @MarkZschiegnerII
    @MarkZschiegnerII 8 месяцев назад +3

    I am loving this series now. I have to keep watching. But I missed the episode when it dropped. But I am here now.

  • @virtualmoon7757
    @virtualmoon7757 9 месяцев назад +7

    I prefer the way this show is going over the way the actual show went by a long shot

  • @NintendoSegaGuys
    @NintendoSegaGuys 8 месяцев назад +3

    Feels like watching good old volume 1-3 RWBY again.

  • @matheusdemello2323
    @matheusdemello2323 9 месяцев назад +10

    It’s Napoleon Ice Cream!

  • @neofulcrum5013
    @neofulcrum5013 9 месяцев назад +5

    5:07 bro sounds jealous that’s she got a bigger weapon lol

  • @nihilism4901
    @nihilism4901 9 месяцев назад +8

    What if Neo's weapon was like the penguin's umbrella.
    Where it could Fire out missiles,
    Or automatic Lasers like from
    Zeus's Cane in Tron.
    Among other things.

  • @Deeps429
    @Deeps429 9 месяцев назад +3

    This is offical RWBY to me, the designs, mannerisms, the continuation of Vol 2 without the 'events of 3' and the dynamics of the teams.
    CRDL, Each member feels unique and has personalites and moral agency, Cardin is their leader, but they don't agree with his actions 100%
    Blake and Sky, nice combo, also Sky having a semblance to mimic voices while also his last name sake Lark can mimic other birds in real life.
    Yang and Cardin, abrasive yet most likely will try to fight neo toghter to some degree.
    Weiss and Dove, the logical girl with the 'easily slow dove'.
    And the fact you are moving to animated scenes while keeping the stills which is what gave your episodes personality.
    LOVE IT ALL

  • @solicius_6459
    @solicius_6459 9 месяцев назад +5

    This may be the first episode i've watched but the rest surely won't stay unwatched

  • @MrLightningbob
    @MrLightningbob 8 месяцев назад +14

    I’m really enjoying this series!
    As one who is doing a full rewrite of RWBY myself, I gotta applaud you for getting this series done this way and hope to see more.
    As for my own series, got 96 chapters written up so far and two more half done. Let’s just say that things during V4-5 are much different than what RT gave us and V2-3 have their own unforeseen twists.

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 8 месяцев назад +2

      Nice, what's the name of it? I would like to read it sometime.

    • @christopherbravo1813
      @christopherbravo1813 8 месяцев назад +1

      really? sounds awesome! where can we find it?

  • @BanBootlicking
    @BanBootlicking 9 месяцев назад +6

    A comment of approval for the algorithm.
    Love this AU!

  • @Avarstia_Owain
    @Avarstia_Owain 7 месяцев назад +3

    I have to say: I love how CRDL has been characterized in this, I kinda love Sky

  • @mrqrow_
    @mrqrow_ 9 месяцев назад +8

    Love the CRDL Dynamic!

  • @xxlasthopexx2603
    @xxlasthopexx2603 9 месяцев назад +5

    Never thought I would see Torchwick go for a semblance, guess Neo helped him unlock it. Interesting see how this goes, since that dude was able to stay toe to toe without one for a while.

  • @LiveAndLearned
    @LiveAndLearned 8 месяцев назад +3

    This is the start of something great, since vol3 ive wondered "what wouldve happenef if beacon didnt fall" well your anwsering

  • @missplatinumstars
    @missplatinumstars 2 месяца назад +1

    You actually gave CRDL fleshed out personalities and pretty cool semblances... More than the original show ever did. I love it!

  • @Lightning_Aiden
    @Lightning_Aiden 9 месяцев назад +16

    This series is very good so far and I can’t wait for episode 6

    • @CatKun-2000
      @CatKun-2000 9 месяцев назад

      As someone for like RWBY a lot I can’t wait for more episodes

    • @maxwellrochette9646
      @maxwellrochette9646 9 месяцев назад

      Looking forward to it as well.

  • @jashawnwhite9590
    @jashawnwhite9590 9 месяцев назад +9

    7:13 you press the Torchwick button

    • @AmaneTheKomainu
      @AmaneTheKomainu 9 месяцев назад +3

      Which is also called the death button

    • @antyep
      @antyep 3 месяца назад +1

      ya shouldn't had did that

  • @randominternetman8177
    @randominternetman8177 9 месяцев назад +5

    easily the highest-quality rwby fan-product i've ever seen. animation could use a little work but i bet it'll just get better and better with time
    *now give me the playlist.*

  • @tomasziskierka9557
    @tomasziskierka9557 9 месяцев назад +5

    This episode is two times longer than last one. Very Good.
    Also Cardin's diplomacy is on another level.

  • @DragonBee259
    @DragonBee259 9 месяцев назад +5

    Babe wake up Evermore is updated 🏃🏽‍♀️💨💨💨

  • @borrelsworddragon9276
    @borrelsworddragon9276 9 месяцев назад +6

    “I’m the Yang, lets fight”

    • @ZIPPY-VA
      @ZIPPY-VA 8 месяцев назад

      "Punch punch punch!"

    • @antyep
      @antyep 3 месяца назад

      @@ZIPPY-VA now Chop chop chop!

  • @robertbidian7324
    @robertbidian7324 9 месяцев назад +4

    9:20 Oh joy now Roman Torchwick has now become Roman Gambit Torchwick.

  • @rosepetal2770
    @rosepetal2770 9 месяцев назад +38

    The Natural Order really said “Make Remnant Great Again.”

    • @dragonsvideos6737
      @dragonsvideos6737 9 месяцев назад +4

      The name for the group sounds like a really good counter to the Faunus. I like it.

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 9 месяцев назад +3

      @@dragonsvideos6737 What kind of organization structure do you think the Natural Order has?
      Is it several different groups or does it have a centralized leadership?
      And if it’s as powerful and influential as the White Fang?

    • @dragonsvideos6737
      @dragonsvideos6737 9 месяцев назад +4

      @@EthanIlchert I think the organization is more a collective group and if it does have a leader then it’s just him. But I’d like to see a council and have them be maybe a little more organized and strutted than the white fang led by Adam. if it’s as big as the white fang there may be a Faunus arc where there’s an all out war and it results in everyone realizing that fighting gets them nowhere but in the end some people don’t change.

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 9 месяцев назад +1

      @@dragonsvideos6737 That would be interesting to see. Imagine if those guys tried to take over their kingdoms in an effort to establish their own fascist regimes in order to start a war with the Fang and Faunus.

    • @dragonsvideos6737
      @dragonsvideos6737 9 месяцев назад +2

      @@EthanIlchert I bet Salem would pounce on that and really create some tension, but then how would she get the relics if that’s going down?

  • @jaxxtileston2780
    @jaxxtileston2780 9 месяцев назад +4

    i love neo's outfit 10/10

  • @Silent_Wisteria
    @Silent_Wisteria 9 месяцев назад +6

    I was in agony recording some of those lines. But hey, you got a laugh out of me. :D

    • @kaleidoarms
      @kaleidoarms  9 месяцев назад +1

      You had some seriously long monologues to get through so I don't blame ya for the bloopers!

  • @frontierding4593
    @frontierding4593 9 месяцев назад +13

    The last hour has been spent with myself showing my friends the wonders of the RWBY fandom with all the various AUs , animations, rewrites etc.
    Then after watching Openings 1-9 we stumbled upon your teams Evermorrow project.
    Absolutely blown away, the style changes like the humanist group, RWBY going into a 2nd year with that being fleshed out among other things are just awesome.
    All the new outfits hit their mark in my opinion and I have had to now add Evermorrow to the guilds watch-together-list for when EP06 drops.
    Best of luck to the project team!

  • @WolfySparks101
    @WolfySparks101 5 месяцев назад +1

    i genuinely love this its amazing, the writing is immaculate it feels like vol 1-2 era rwby and still keeps the tone , its not trying hard to be bleak or edgey, characters have personalities and semblances and so on. i just im in love i feel joy i havent felt for rwby in so long and have longed for, please keep up the good work man because this is awsome this is what the rwby community needs. if u were the main writer for rwby it probably wouldnt of had such a tragic fate.

  • @goncalocarneiro3043
    @goncalocarneiro3043 9 месяцев назад +2

    ... This existed and I never noticed?! What the crap! Alright, from the beginning.

  • @playerstation5624
    @playerstation5624 6 месяцев назад +2

    Sky semblance seem very good since he can fool his enemies into either leave an area or fall into a trap however the problem with that is that he need stay in hiding but make sure the enemy can hear him to use his powers plus that would only work a few times until the real person whose voice sky is using knows what going and tell they're crew to ignore what they're voices tells them to do

  • @Numatruehome
    @Numatruehome 9 месяцев назад +4

    Torchwic has a SEMBLENCE, I can’t wait for the next episode

  • @gundhamtanaka9487
    @gundhamtanaka9487 9 месяцев назад +3

    "Atlas" we get to see how Team CRDL's and roman's semblance works

  • @vinny8589
    @vinny8589 9 месяцев назад +3

    Not gonna lie the artwork improved drastically from Ep 1. Two, the fact your going down an alternate-story path honestly is a massive improvement. Small important suggestion though, consider adjusting the Dust mines run by the Schnee Company to be Open-Pit Mines. This makes more sense since there's less likely hood that the Grimm could attack Miners & Staff, since there's no where they can hide to do so Open-Pit mines can be easily guarded compared to far more dangerous closed underground mines. The fact those exist could actually add a sense of world building Weiss could state the Company changed from the Far more dangerous Underground Mines to Open-Pit Mining both as a safety precaution against the Grimm and to prevent possible risks to the miners and staff. Which would be true. Remember Grimm love Dark and enclosed environments for hunting "Prey." Why would anyone want to risk their employees' safety if the simpler solution is just blast enough of the mine open so they can see what their doing and avoid unnecessary dangers to begin with? Weiss is pops is a penny pincher after all but he also runs a business safety is one of his responsibilities as the company's president, nobody safe nobody works right? I'd like to hear your thoughts on this suggestion please?

    • @Codigo12
      @Codigo12 6 месяцев назад

      Makes sense.
      I mean, Jacques is an asshole but one thing is being shitty with your employees and other is risking your own operation.
      Also, it could still reflect the SDC being evil. I mean, an open mine is more destructive to the envioroment and sometimes are Open with explosions that can affect the air polluting it with metals and such.

    • @vinny8589
      @vinny8589 6 месяцев назад

      Ding DIng Ding You got it! You figured out the underlying "EVIL" of the Dust Companies. On the SURFACE they're "GOOD" but below that..well every company has a dark secret or 10... Another could be "DUST Experimentation" on the Fanus. After all Dust would've been needed to be tested out on SOMEBODY at some point right? Weiss herself even stated Dust can be Harmful if the proportions are wrong. What if She only knew the Surface Level of that Harm, But her Father was fully aware of the horrific side-effects Too much Dust exposure would cause? Dust from what we've gathered in the Original series is like a double-edged sword so that could also work as an explaination for the White Fang's movement shifting from simple words and protests to violent action. Thoughts?@@Codigo12

  • @SchneeflockeMonsoon
    @SchneeflockeMonsoon 9 месяцев назад +1

    Ruby’s spider-man-esque quippiness is delightful.
    I hope Weiss’ red belt indicates a path which will make her and a certain someone much happy. Smooth out the edges on one, mature the second, reinforce one another.

  • @ArtDrago1092
    @ArtDrago1092 27 дней назад +1

    7:37 I love the tone of voice 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

  • @tadeuszjastrzebski1386
    @tadeuszjastrzebski1386 9 месяцев назад +4

    Just discovered this show. Love how professional it feels! Definitely recommending this to my friends.

  • @Takeda10K
    @Takeda10K 9 месяцев назад +5

    Excellent work! I like the expansion to Team CRDL you’ve done. Having them and team RWBY work together is great set up!

  • @VexenDmitri
    @VexenDmitri 8 месяцев назад +1

    This AU made me realize the great things we could've gotten. It gives us more Roman and makes me love CRDL as a team. Looking forward for more. ❤

  • @Romanisbestboi
    @Romanisbestboi 9 месяцев назад +3

    9:58 SICK ASS FOOL
    ALO ROMAN WITH A SEMBLACE CAN SOLO EVERYONE

  • @justinisp9361
    @justinisp9361 9 месяцев назад +3

    Oscar getting double-teamed by Ruby and Penny in a hug might be my favorite part of the opening.

  • @pirateraider1708
    @pirateraider1708 2 месяца назад +2

    The "Natural Order" was something the original series desperately needed. The closest thing we ever saw to any of the racism or discrimination the faunus claimed to suffer from was the results of their own criminal actions. Having an actually racist group taking extreme action against them really helps fix that.

  • @roxislalonde1905
    @roxislalonde1905 9 месяцев назад +3

    I love Sky's Semblance it is so cool and low key funny

  • @TheCommentaification
    @TheCommentaification 9 месяцев назад +2

    I just wanted to thank everyone working on this project. I've been following RWBY since the beginning and have grown to hate the original series as it went on. Out of all the volumes pass 3, I only enjoyed 7. Volume 7 gave me a breath of fresh air that gave me hope in a more grounded setting but was immediately shot down back into overdramatic situations in Volume 8. I always wanted the characters to be more fleshed out in terms of their training and maturity before stepping out into the world which is why I've wished for a long time we could return to the school setting. Sorry for the long explanation, but again I want to thank everyone from the bottom of my heart for creating this. The writing and the VAs did a fantastic job capturing the characters and I will be supporting this AU as if it was the original instead.

  • @jimbatter5246
    @jimbatter5246 9 месяцев назад +3

    I'm glad this took so long and I love Cardin voice and Crdl as a whole

  • @luissalero3971
    @luissalero3971 9 месяцев назад +1

    Man this is so greatly done, from the music, the character interactions, the villains. Loved that team CRDL gets actual personalities that are memorable. Congratulations to the voice cast. Like all others, I cannot wait for what comes next.

  • @airplanemaster1
    @airplanemaster1 4 месяца назад +1

    1:12 Not gonna lie: I 100 percent expected that group walking up to the building to be CRDL, and the camera/pov change to view Team RWBY with CRDL missing from beside them.

  • @dreadrath
    @dreadrath 7 месяцев назад +2

    Ha, color-coordinated Ruby and Roman. Makes sense actually given their ideological opposites and weirdly good foils to eachother's worldviews and personalities. Kinda makes me hope they're forced to team up in future just for the comedy gold of them annoying the hell out of eachother.

  • @dinoskywalker3515
    @dinoskywalker3515 3 месяца назад +1

    I just called Cardin “bone-head” twice when he was about to go in and try to take on Roman himself.

  • @marielb2924
    @marielb2924 9 месяцев назад +3

    Oh yeah this is great I was not expecting to get an episode this soon, keep up the hype train!

  • @MasquedMocha
    @MasquedMocha 7 месяцев назад +2

    1:53 he is my new favorite

  • @Riddler-jq8fw
    @Riddler-jq8fw 9 месяцев назад +3

    Torchwicks semblance! Finally!🤩

  • @lorddarkheart1716
    @lorddarkheart1716 9 месяцев назад +1

    I don't know how I got here, but I enjoyed binge watching the episodes available. Now I wait for more.

  • @doggozwei281
    @doggozwei281 9 месяцев назад +1

    Just found and binged the series. The writing is great & the voices are spot on! Found a really good cast for this.

  • @user-bq7bs2wp4e
    @user-bq7bs2wp4e 9 месяцев назад +4

    Finaly my man Torchwick Gets to show off his semblance. It was a shame they never found a way for him to show it off in the show, then again you just did right here and made it battle capable. I am both interested and kind of scared were you take the natural order, at this moment it has some interesting paths it can take but also some bland paths and a path that I think would be just horrible to take, I will wait and see.

  • @lunarcreations
    @lunarcreations 8 месяцев назад +3

    This project is so cool!! Kinda happy the rwby series screwed up so cool fan series like this try to write the show better lol. Best of luck to everybody on this!!

  • @superbatzbatazr7723
    @superbatzbatazr7723 3 месяца назад +1

    I gotta say, love the episode.I love torchwick in this and it's ten out of ten

  • @good7bad13
    @good7bad13 9 месяцев назад +3

    Fantastic work guys!! It definitely captures the feel of Early RWBY in all it's charm!

  • @KeeKage37
    @KeeKage37 27 дней назад

    Gardens teammates actually have personality’s, and we get an anti Faunus group that gives reason for the white fang’s existence!
    This series is a treasure trove.

  • @Numatruehome
    @Numatruehome 9 месяцев назад +2

    5:20 I have only known this guy for five minutes but I love him

  • @parkermaisterra8532
    @parkermaisterra8532 9 месяцев назад +1

    Love these team combo's especially personality wise.

  • @unlimitedblack
    @unlimitedblack 9 месяцев назад +1

    Well if you're going for something that matches the tone of the first few volumes, I'd say you've nailed it. And yeah, the expansion on CRDL in terms of giving them Semblances and distinct personalities is excellent.

  • @greyjedi4794
    @greyjedi4794 7 месяцев назад +2

    Outfreakin g standing

  • @morrisl123
    @morrisl123 9 месяцев назад +1

    We’ll be watching your career with GREAT interest!

  • @aquajeth4965
    @aquajeth4965 2 месяца назад +1

    I was feeling pretty iffy since each episode before this one was pretty short, but I'm pretty excited with the setup here. I'll continue to watch with great interest.
    "I'm the Yang. Let's fight! Punch punch punch!"

  • @ismaelkelvin6830
    @ismaelkelvin6830 3 месяца назад

    10:36 "It's over Torchwick! I have de High Ground"

  • @MrPatriot112
    @MrPatriot112 9 месяцев назад +3

    Nice work! You guys are getting better and better! I especially liked that Roman has a semblance similar to Gambit's Mutant powers. Also, love that the Humans of Remnant have their own version of the White Fang?
    P.S.: ....Can I borrow the 'Natrual Order' (N.O.) for my fic for my OC to kill?

  • @jacabo136
    @jacabo136 7 месяцев назад +2

    These are great, just finished watching all of em