Personal statements - Finding a formula

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  • Опубликовано: 17 окт 2024

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  • @amybean1607
    @amybean1607 6 лет назад +560

    pretty sure this put me into an existential crisis

    • @rikarth3991
      @rikarth3991 5 лет назад +28

      as an individual whose still searching for the purpose of existence, i felt that

    • @brahimabdelfateh332
      @brahimabdelfateh332 4 года назад

      maby

    • @kennyg6097
      @kennyg6097 4 года назад +5

      Amy Bean oh my god, i swear i thought i was the only one.
      I literally lost hope in myself since it turned out i'm quite miserable

    • @luciaiacono2419
      @luciaiacono2419 3 года назад +1

      Omg it's so nice I'm not alone here

    • @amy-janecrouch4468
      @amy-janecrouch4468 3 года назад +2

      Glad I'm not the only one

  • @davidleshchiner5351
    @davidleshchiner5351 6 лет назад +298

    American Universities: Tell us everything about yourself, your feelings, don't be shy brag about your achievements, tell us a story
    British Universities: Be excited, brag a little bit, but not too much that's just arrogant, also book r cool

  • @TheNugettinage
    @TheNugettinage 6 лет назад +138

    As someone who has applied to universities in multiple different countries, I have to say, UCAS and the materials they provide are legendarily good. The way the application process is made easy and intuitive, the check list format that allows to save and go back and finally mark as done, the fact that every single text box on the page has at least some kind of a pop up box that helps explain what you need to write in, and of course these videos which are a great starting point in trying to put together the perfect application... Just, if anyone who works with UCAS is reading this, take this home; good fucking job.

  • @raghadkhalid4970
    @raghadkhalid4970 9 лет назад +107

    This is literally the most helpful video about personal statements.

  • @-scieng-6592
    @-scieng-6592 9 лет назад +345

    Great! now how should I start?

    • @nexusace828
      @nexusace828 8 лет назад +111

      00:00

    • @LilyCat2399
      @LilyCat2399 7 лет назад +5

      lol

    • @willsetra4009
      @willsetra4009 6 лет назад +15

      M . Did u end up getting into uni ?

    • @태나-n3g
      @태나-n3g 5 лет назад +3

      *MOOD* bro lol

    • @ateamacad
      @ateamacad 4 года назад +1

      A good way to get started is by looking into the course you're thinking of applying to and thinking what propels you towards this. For further help check out: ruclips.net/video/2wkEHNYVUOc/видео.html

  • @Agnus958
    @Agnus958 9 лет назад +173

    I actually found it quite enlightening to write my personal statement. You discover a lot about yourself, I'd say.

    • @maryat8260
      @maryat8260 9 лет назад +2

      +Andre Rygaard I totally agree!

    • @Phantomdirt
      @Phantomdirt 9 лет назад +98

      +Andre Rygaard This is true, I can now identify every pattern on my ceiling.

    • @TheRupertLitterbin
      @TheRupertLitterbin 8 лет назад +29

      i discovered im a lot sadder than everyone else thought

    • @gamaltk
      @gamaltk 5 лет назад +3

      @@TheRupertLitterbin Well it does give you a starting point to improve your life! :)

    • @youknow7294
      @youknow7294 4 года назад

      Oh hell nah

  • @rufusdrumknottvgc
    @rufusdrumknottvgc 10 месяцев назад +2

    Used this to write my personal statement when I was applying for university, now I'm showing this to my little sister to help her write her personal statement years later 👍

    • @Ucasonlineofficial
      @Ucasonlineofficial  10 месяцев назад +1

      👍 That's fantastic! We're glad to help, and wish her the best of luck with her application!

  • @VickyAgo
    @VickyAgo 4 года назад +28

    Oh, it wasn’t scary until I opened this video. I’m full of anxiety right now 😂

  • @Rina25tir
    @Rina25tir 3 года назад +12

    I've already submitted my application to the New York University. I realize I have followed all of these tips in my Statement of Purpose and Personal History. Wish me good luck guys!

    • @thebulletkin8393
      @thebulletkin8393 2 года назад +1

      How did it go?

    • @Rina25tir
      @Rina25tir 2 года назад +11

      @@thebulletkin8393 I got admitted. I am replying from the NYU Physics Department right now. ^_^

    • @emilycarter8922
      @emilycarter8922 2 года назад

      You might want to check this out ruclips.net/video/5ZUgT5cgTg0/видео.html

    • @champagneproblemz7386
      @champagneproblemz7386 9 месяцев назад +1

      @@Rina25tir YYAYYYYAYYYYY

  • @Swftzx
    @Swftzx 9 лет назад +236

    Still have no idea what to say, I just need a opening sentence lmaooo

  • @JulienFroude
    @JulienFroude 8 лет назад +34

    An absolutely brilliant video. I'm inspired... I'm going to go write now!

    • @jomz7152
      @jomz7152 7 лет назад +5

      im so insprired im gonna write one just for fun

  • @SentoK1
    @SentoK1 9 лет назад +17

    This is actually a superb video on how to write a personal statement, thanks !

  • @hello.5435
    @hello.5435 7 лет назад +54

    *screams* OMG IT'S HELPFUL BUT I'M STILL SCARED.

  • @muhammadsheharyar7138
    @muhammadsheharyar7138 7 лет назад +14

    The best video is i have ever seen which really motivated me ...

  • @pabloyagani
    @pabloyagani 2 года назад +1

    I have never done a personal statement before but this has helped me to get started. I was completly clueless before watching this video.

  • @LOL-kq2dd
    @LOL-kq2dd 7 лет назад +12

    4:29 Legend has it that he/she is still writing those drafts

  • @rawsushi4053
    @rawsushi4053 4 года назад +9

    Anxiety and Constant Depression are hitting me behind my head.

  • @sotiriatsiata877
    @sotiriatsiata877 8 лет назад +8

    Thank you so much Jane Marshall.. Your video is so inspiring :) Greetings from Greece!!

  • @tymeyer9327
    @tymeyer9327 3 года назад +6

    And what are you supposed to do if you aren't inspired about the course you are applying for. I mean, that's where I'm struggling to write something meaningful.

    • @AreebsStudy
      @AreebsStudy Год назад

      Are you at university? Also if I may ask, why are you applying for a course you're not inspired to pursue?

  • @shadowpeakseries
    @shadowpeakseries 3 года назад +1

    I've watched this like five times - it's so good! Anyone else think she sounds like Emily from Friends?!

  • @KAVIIX
    @KAVIIX 4 года назад +2

    How do i even start? do i say "Hello i am X and i'm from (...)"??

    • @ateamacad
      @ateamacad 4 года назад

      You could always start off by brainstorming your ideas for the course you're thinking of applying to. Check out some of these TIPS: ruclips.net/video/2wkEHNYVUOc/видео.html

    • @KAVIIX
      @KAVIIX 4 года назад +1

      @@ateamacad Oh so i dont have to give a small introduction?

    • @ateamacad
      @ateamacad 4 года назад

      @@KAVIIX No you don't need to waffle. Just get straight into it. This link will help: ruclips.net/video/2wkEHNYVUOc/видео.html

  • @schlongersaurus
    @schlongersaurus 4 года назад +10

    I havent done anything what am I supposed to write about

  • @DekuStickGamer
    @DekuStickGamer 8 лет назад +31

    8 drafts, got it. If I do it in more, I will kms.

  • @cannonball117
    @cannonball117 5 лет назад +28

    True story, that first twenty seconds gave me so much goddamn anxiety in college I decided to have a gap year

  • @mth8012
    @mth8012 6 лет назад +3

    Doing mine now wish me luck !

  • @areebhussain321
    @areebhussain321 Год назад +1

    Thank you, Jane.

  • @hellothere4485
    @hellothere4485 9 лет назад +3

    writing mine now,fingers crossed :)

  • @salmanezar7584
    @salmanezar7584 6 лет назад +1

    Wait-I have a question. Is it..relevant to write about your musical talent in this personal statement? The video kind of mentioned it, and I was wondering if it seems relevant to write about my piano skills there (lol) please help.

    • @ActuallyAudacity
      @ActuallyAudacity 6 лет назад +2

      Hey there! Yes, you can write about your musical talents! Make sure you put it at the end though. It's all about you. First, make sure you have everything relevant first. You can then put other experiences and hobbies you have.

  • @gabrielroque6664
    @gabrielroque6664 8 лет назад +23

    This video is inspiring.

  • @georgiakyriacous6946
    @georgiakyriacous6946 5 лет назад +2

    What a fantastic video. thank you I really needed this today x

  • @robaalfaham2910
    @robaalfaham2910 7 лет назад +20

    Guys so many people advising to write 4000 words it's 4000 LETTERS for ucas which is about 45-50 lines

    • @elliotfalkner8909
      @elliotfalkner8909 6 лет назад +4

      47 lines maximum

    • @elliotfalkner8909
      @elliotfalkner8909 6 лет назад +3

      also 4000 characters. spaces are included

    • @aanchalsaxena1135
      @aanchalsaxena1135 5 лет назад

      Which is like 500 or so words

    • @ahtshamyaqoob6554
      @ahtshamyaqoob6554 4 года назад +4

      Omdddddd thank you soooo much ffs I came her so scared thinking how I’m gonna write that many words since I’m more of a get to the point guy and I see ur comment bro ur acc a life saver

    • @camstanley
      @camstanley 4 года назад

      @@ahtshamyaqoob6554 you applying through clearing too lol?

  • @lauraleeforstedt3643
    @lauraleeforstedt3643 8 лет назад +98

    *Where can I order an essay?*

    • @gobsmackerz2244
      @gobsmackerz2244 7 лет назад +8

      Lauralee Forstedt Isn't that cheating if it is for college/university? You are supposed to write it by yourself

    • @lsedge7280
      @lsedge7280 7 лет назад +7

      Yeah, I'm pretty sure it is completely cheating. It is meant to be after all a *personal* statement.

    • @vei_chou
      @vei_chou 4 года назад +1

      You can get good essays online
      But you will get the best from yourself

  • @brat6359
    @brat6359 4 года назад +1

    Thats video let me more excited about the ps thank you💗

  • @fender636
    @fender636 9 лет назад +1

    Very good. I like the song at the end :)

  • @oscarreece8801
    @oscarreece8801 9 лет назад +10

    What if you're applying for 5 courses that aren't all the same?

    • @rabii3983
      @rabii3983 9 лет назад

      Change them a slightly depending on what you're applying for

    • @lemonadepie9631
      @lemonadepie9631 8 лет назад +21

      +rabya imaan but the same personal statement goes to all the universities you've applied to.

    • @AeromaticXD
      @AeromaticXD 5 лет назад

      Yep this is what’s happening with me

    • @shilangyu
      @shilangyu 5 лет назад

      Same here, she keeps emphasising how we should focus on our specific course when in UCAS you apply to many with the same PS. Im so confused, should I write more generally?

    • @AeromaticXD
      @AeromaticXD 5 лет назад +1

      K4kshi talk about overlapping skills and experiences which prove you can do the course.

  • @philemonmbaru8010
    @philemonmbaru8010 6 лет назад

    thank you bt where can i get an application letter tht iam from east africa

  • @HarshPatel-fj8sj
    @HarshPatel-fj8sj 4 года назад +1

    I am writing my personal statement now for 2021. I don’t have any work experience so what should i say/mention in my personal statement ? Please help me what would be better for me

    • @animestudio3811
      @animestudio3811 4 года назад

      Same question. I have taken an online course however I too don't have any work experience or internships for that matter

    • @SnotGirrrl
      @SnotGirrrl 3 года назад

      That’s fine, just be honest. Maybe mention on hobbies you do, or life experience you have had that would be relevant?

  • @CalmDownGiraffe
    @CalmDownGiraffe 9 лет назад +2

    This was really helpful, thank you!

  • @whitsfiryellnogobyye
    @whitsfiryellnogobyye 2 года назад +2

    Jesus! Anxiety triggering much? I had to reduce to playback speed to get a chance to take this explosion of info in.

  • @mahfoozalam2662
    @mahfoozalam2662 5 лет назад +2

    Thanks, it helped me a lot

  • @intosomethingsometimes2193
    @intosomethingsometimes2193 4 года назад +3

    This was overwhelming to be honest. But watching it three or four times, I guess I’m ok now

  • @megan6240
    @megan6240 3 года назад +1

    My sixth form wants my application done in two days wish me luck xx i am having a breakdown xx

    • @Ucasonlineofficial
      @Ucasonlineofficial  3 года назад

      Hi Megan,
      Thanks for your message. We are here to help. Please do let us know if we can help you with anything.
      Harry🙂

  • @annalee164
    @annalee164 9 лет назад +1

    very realistic advice! great!

  • @rodsalomon6524
    @rodsalomon6524 5 лет назад +2

    I loved this.

  • @simplyme922
    @simplyme922 9 лет назад +2

    Very helpful. Thank you.

  • @blusterybumblebee3958
    @blusterybumblebee3958 7 лет назад +4

    First draft done ! :D

  • @TheHaavardo
    @TheHaavardo 7 лет назад +1

    So according to the information in UCAS they tell me to write between 1000 and 4000 words, what would a admission tutor think if I had a 1000 word letter? That im not suited for the course or that i can be the right person because I manage to write quality stuff in few words? Hmm...

    • @robaalfaham2910
      @robaalfaham2910 7 лет назад +4

      Havardo 4000 letters NoT words!!!! It's only like a4 size document (about 50 lines)

    • @shilangyu
      @shilangyu 5 лет назад

      Not even letters, it's characters, so even less

  • @aliyousefi9969
    @aliyousefi9969 9 лет назад +2

    So.. instructive and precise. :D

  • @rastaxpchannel
    @rastaxpchannel 5 лет назад +4

    I want to study so that _I can get a job. How does that sound? Isn't honesty still a virtue these days?

    • @yty1941
      @yty1941 4 года назад

      That sounds alright, but I'm afraid using just grades cannot separate the top students nowadays...

  • @_SliK_
    @_SliK_ 3 года назад +2

    Primary = Best time

  • @nourhani8149
    @nourhani8149 5 лет назад +1

    Good job ❤💜👏👏

  • @johnharrison671
    @johnharrison671 4 года назад +1

    I'm applying for two different courses, but this whole video was about writing about a specific course. How tf do you write a personal statement for two courses...........

    • @Mmonaliza10
      @Mmonaliza10 4 года назад +2

      If these two courses are similar you have to write in general why you are good enough to be their student. Just try to find advantages in yourself what are generally universal in both courses

  • @etoxica
    @etoxica 8 лет назад +35

    uh uh i'm wiring mine now; wish my luck guys

    • @rajatbucha371
      @rajatbucha371 8 лет назад +1

      Break the leg.. Go for it!!!

    • @etoxica
      @etoxica 8 лет назад

      rajat bucha It's going good at the moment! First paragraph nearly complete :D

    • @rajatbucha371
      @rajatbucha371 8 лет назад +3

      Great!!.. I am still struggling with "How to start" :(

    • @etoxica
      @etoxica 8 лет назад

      rajat bucha hahaha i have not wrote anything after my not finished first paragraph..
      we're all in this together fam

    • @stkparsa
      @stkparsa 8 лет назад +1

      +emmaisfabulous me*

  • @Lemon.Boyye.
    @Lemon.Boyye. 6 лет назад

    Cheers Jane

  • @mrgarkeiner
    @mrgarkeiner Год назад

    wow that was so interesting. now i am able to cook.

  • @crazydeee
    @crazydeee 4 года назад +1

    How to link all these steps ughhhh!!!

  • @OLAR0
    @OLAR0 8 лет назад +2

    THANK YOU VERY MUCH!

  • @raerae6235
    @raerae6235 6 лет назад +1

    Love this ❤️

  • @chenmike7957
    @chenmike7957 3 года назад

    excellent lecture

  • @oa961
    @oa961 2 года назад

    I have a question do I need a passport for applying?

    • @Ucasonlineofficial
      @Ucasonlineofficial  2 года назад

      Hi there
      Thank you for getting in touch.
      International students need to enter the passport details on the application form.
      If you are living in UK. You don't need to add it on your application form. There is possibility that the unies may ask you for ID verification, this could include your passport. Especially if you are requesting home status.
      Hope this helps
      Sue😊

    • @oa961
      @oa961 2 года назад

      @@Ucasonlineofficial I already have a passport but it's expired

    • @Ucasonlineofficial
      @Ucasonlineofficial  2 года назад

      You can apply without having to enter any passport details - that is fine to do.
      Daxa

    • @oa961
      @oa961 2 года назад

      @@Ucasonlineofficial thanks for responding

    • @Ucasonlineofficial
      @Ucasonlineofficial  2 года назад

      You're welcome!

  • @owenmills6357
    @owenmills6357 9 лет назад +6

    hi guys. am ten and writing my personal statement. i like spaniels.

  • @federicomartinengo5432
    @federicomartinengo5432 6 лет назад

    Thanks!

  • @philippaleask6466
    @philippaleask6466 5 лет назад

    good vid x

  • @kellarajab8534
    @kellarajab8534 5 лет назад

    what accent is she speaking?

    • @kellarajab8534
      @kellarajab8534 5 лет назад

      is it british?

    • @krugaowodeha-ashaka5144
      @krugaowodeha-ashaka5144 5 лет назад

      It is, some type of it.

    • @Yuskebub
      @Yuskebub 4 года назад +3

      Um... well you’re watching a UCAS application video that’s directed for people to go to university sooo....

  • @charliexayvier6903
    @charliexayvier6903 Месяц назад

    Me who doesnt even know what course im interested in despite my endless research and deep dives : cool so uh cheese

  • @aishaghafoor6506
    @aishaghafoor6506 6 лет назад

    Helpful

  • @stormyzvox2185
    @stormyzvox2185 5 лет назад +1

    Just to let everyone know, I started my personal statement and got a week before the deadline. fck.

  • @AuspiciousAustin
    @AuspiciousAustin 11 месяцев назад

    12k subs is crazy lmao

  • @brahimabdelfateh332
    @brahimabdelfateh332 4 года назад

    she means a lot of perrsonal statement ..

  • @louier9033
    @louier9033 4 года назад +2

    bruh how tf am i meant to write this shit i havent even found a course i like yet

  • @sambrooksmed9068
    @sambrooksmed9068 8 лет назад +1

    HOW MANY WORDS GUYS?

    • @15lial1
      @15lial1 8 лет назад +6

      4000 characters including spaces.

    • @hello.5435
      @hello.5435 7 лет назад

      Alex LI *screams*

    • @robaalfaham2910
      @robaalfaham2910 7 лет назад

      Sam Brooks Med letters not words!!!! It's about 50 lines for ucas 4000 words is late 15 pages 😏

  • @InsaneClipszz
    @InsaneClipszz 4 года назад +2

    ITS SCARY ITS SCARY ITS SCARY no it’s not

  • @abenis.5750
    @abenis.5750 6 лет назад +1

    uh uh uh uh it takes me weeks to write 1 paper!!!

  • @Aaron-hk3ki
    @Aaron-hk3ki 3 года назад

    Many drafts later but I got there in the end😭😭😭

  • @maehedmann-highmore8890
    @maehedmann-highmore8890 7 лет назад +1

    lit

  • @harrypope8021
    @harrypope8021 2 года назад

    Wow

    • @harrypope8021
      @harrypope8021 2 года назад +1

      Calm the f*** down

    • @Vimkrit
      @Vimkrit 2 года назад +3

      Great comment Harry really shared your opinion

    • @AreebsStudy
      @AreebsStudy Год назад

      @@Vimkrit fr

  • @jushereinit
    @jushereinit 5 лет назад

    well

  • @connseysesil970
    @connseysesil970 4 года назад

    If you could see my face while watching this. Smh

  • @dr.dietersedlacek2951
    @dr.dietersedlacek2951 3 года назад

    Cool! This video is not helpful. Examples only for things to avoid...it tells you what you musn´t do and not how to do it.

  • @graffygerry
    @graffygerry 9 лет назад +2

    ucas no existe, son los padres

  • @maryshen5969
    @maryshen5969 2 года назад +1

    I don’t suppose every student has something they’re THAT passionate about. The tone of the speaker in this video sounds so excited… but really, I just want to study something I have a bit of interest in and can make a living off of. This person makes it sound like if you’re not super passionate and excited about the course you better go pick trash in the streets and never mind about higher education????

    • @jc_80
      @jc_80 2 года назад +1

      It doesn’t mean you have to write in caps with exclamation marks, this video was just to inspire applicants into giving their best shot as it’s a very daunting time it’s encouraging many to stand out from the crowd and really demonstrate to the Uni why they should invest in them, if applicants don’t give their all they won’t even be considered for an interview, There’s only so many places and the Uni wants to invest in students that are most likely to complete the degree course, if people apply that show they are not really bothered either way they will be looked over and their place will be offered to someone else

    • @urdeddog5124
      @urdeddog5124 Год назад +1

      also lie and exaggerate it man, that's what I did

  • @alexandradelliou
    @alexandradelliou 3 года назад

    2021: 399

  • @alydakonik9810
    @alydakonik9810 9 лет назад +4

    .

    • @noluckst2
      @noluckst2 8 лет назад

      +Roseanna Bagni How many cheques are you cashing in ?

  • @phatpat7629
    @phatpat7629 4 года назад

    help

  • @baltic1940
    @baltic1940 2 года назад +2

    The intro to this video is so unnecessary that you'd think UCAS doesn't want you to apply. Surprised the editor didn't add a fucking flatline sound effect after the increasing heartbeat lmao. Good video, Horrible off-putting intro

  • @PietraVDavis
    @PietraVDavis 3 года назад

    AHHHHHHHHHHHH

  • @waterlemon5434
    @waterlemon5434 4 года назад

    2 days to go. SHIT

  • @thyzaza
    @thyzaza 4 года назад

    2spooky5me

  • @andydacosta8722
    @andydacosta8722 2 года назад +1

    Annoying tone.