This has also happened to me but in the opposite effect. I’ve had people walk by me or have pushed by me angrily. When I confronted them, only then, did they learn I’m profoundly deaf. Sometimes,guilt hits their faces,other times, they have a look of disgust towards learning a person is deaf.
if your up for it, heres a bit of criticism i get the racism angle and I do like it but 1. the guy could have just called out "miss" instead of walking spooky and at her pace, something he wouldn't do if he wanted to return the phone, which makes me think more "oh he couldn't use dialogue so he did this" rather than be invested in the story. 2. her being racist changes nothing. he doesn't smash her phone because of her response or even react, she barely does too and she doesn't look embarrassed at all. 3. this is more a situation than a short scene, no one changes or makes a decision. 4. the flashback is completely unnecessary, we got it. forgetting a phone is not a hard concept to grasp especially when there was no other reason he could have handed her the phone (considering the situation)
i agree maybe a shorter one like 4 seconds , and personally i would use the phone as a Transaction. but all in all it was fun to watch the actors faces and their reactions.
well filmed and paced but transparent and lack of talking does make him suspicious. perhaps revisit this scene with same actors and turn male into a victim
Self preservation isn’t a bad thing at all. If someone came behind me like that I’d scream and run. If I’m over reacting, we’d have a good laugh after Also. I hate it when people sit by me on a bench when they are many or on the bus especially when it’s very empty.
This has also happened to me but in the opposite effect. I’ve had people walk by me or have pushed by me angrily. When I confronted them, only then, did they learn I’m profoundly deaf. Sometimes,guilt hits their faces,other times, they have a look of disgust towards learning a person is deaf.
💯 Perfect ❤
This is good but the flashback insults the audience
if your up for it, heres a bit of criticism
i get the racism angle and I do like it but
1. the guy could have just called out "miss" instead of walking spooky and at her pace, something he wouldn't do if he wanted to return the phone, which makes me think more "oh he couldn't use dialogue so he did this" rather than be invested in the story.
2. her being racist changes nothing. he doesn't smash her phone because of her response or even react, she barely does too and she doesn't look embarrassed at all.
3. this is more a situation than a short scene, no one changes or makes a decision.
4. the flashback is completely unnecessary, we got it. forgetting a phone is not a hard concept to grasp especially when there was no other reason he could have handed her the phone (considering the situation)
The cinematography is top-notch.. Is this your first film as a director?
*This is exactly how "Among Us" (game) works.....*
no need to the flashback, but it's good
i agree maybe a shorter one like 4 seconds , and personally i would use the phone as a Transaction. but all in all it was fun to watch the actors faces and their reactions.
@@ronislivi 4 seconds??? you mad lad what
@@ronislivi how do you mean a transision?
Very nice and very realistic. Please continue to create your art' universe.
What a beautiful movie !
It's True
Wonderful!! What beautiful cinematography!! Crafted by a true artist!
Rare are today artists. Keep going and you will get far!!
well filmed and paced but transparent and lack of talking does make him suspicious. perhaps revisit this scene with same actors and turn male into a victim
Brilliant My friend
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Self preservation isn’t a bad thing at all. If someone came behind me like that I’d scream and run. If I’m over reacting, we’d have a good laugh after
Also. I hate it when people sit by me on a bench when they are many or on the bus especially when it’s very empty.
Amazing💮
Your video feels stylish ...
⭐⭐⭐Great👌 vid⭐⭐⭐
👌 natural
Good shorflim . making is wonderful.i am in India
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That was hella good
Nice
Love It💕❣️
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Great idea.. Can i adopt this story line???
Thank you.. you can if you could write my name on credit as the writer.. I would like to see it.
@@TheUmutGundogdu definitely all credits goes to you.. 👍
@@krithivassasidharan6808 look forward too seeing what u will create...
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such a nice place
it felt great at starting..but really now i want some dialogue, i felt that...i don't know but it's about balancing
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nigga i just wanted to watch something in class then this shit comes up
Moral of the story is "Dont be a piece of shit racist."
It could have been a strange Caucasian man and had the same results.