Reading My Common App Essay (Accepted at Ivy League, Stanford, USC, etc.)

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  • Опубликовано: 10 фев 2025

Комментарии • 37

  • @shidakiss
    @shidakiss 5 лет назад +26

    This was a beautiful essay. Seriously, one of the best on RUclips. Plus your voice and choice of music was so soothing. Congratulations on your accomplishments and keep inspiring the next generation with your positivity! From a fellow Guyanese girl🇬🇾🇬🇾🇬🇾

    • @cyand
      @cyand  5 лет назад

      this is such a beautiful comment and absolutely made my day! Thank you so much Rashida

  • @rasheedfreckleton3204
    @rasheedfreckleton3204 6 лет назад +33

    Your writing took me on the plane with you! Really enjoyed this essay

  • @salsabillafahira9878
    @salsabillafahira9878 6 лет назад +15

    I wasn't expecting you've lived in Indonesia before! Im indonesian as well :) and ur essay is soo beautiful and meaningful! How you put cultures into those words is amazing! Gotta start my essay for short exchange program and glad i found yours! Aku juga suka soto ayam lmao

  • @bebeerin
    @bebeerin 2 года назад +2

    love that you called an airplane an inspirational classroom bc of all the diversity on it. so creative

  • @AlleEsor28
    @AlleEsor28 4 года назад

    I've heard SO MANY essays on youtube and this is THE BEST, no CAP! congrats for writing an essay so meaningful!

    • @cyand
      @cyand  4 года назад

      wow this literally made my day! thank you so much

  • @gabbyc2236
    @gabbyc2236 6 лет назад +10

    insanely creative loved it!!!

    • @cyand
      @cyand  6 лет назад

      thank you so much! It was a lot of fun to write

  • @pumpkinlattesab
    @pumpkinlattesab 4 года назад +3

    ur essay is wonderful💞✨

    • @cyand
      @cyand  4 года назад

      thank you so much

  • @cyand
    @cyand  4 года назад

    Getting a solid ACT score was super important for me getting into Stanford. If you need to boost your SAT/ACT score check out SoFlo Tutors. They do amazing work and have tutors form top schools like Princeton and Georgetown. Learn more at bit.ly/Cyan-DAnjou

  • @CoachHallWrites
    @CoachHallWrites 5 лет назад +1

    Love your essay!

  • @ivyliao5462
    @ivyliao5462 6 лет назад +3

    so inspirational ❤️ thank you!

  • @Nakk256
    @Nakk256 4 года назад

    OMG that was so beautiful!

    • @cyand
      @cyand  4 года назад

      Claire Kafeero thank you so much!

  • @youngeskimo6929
    @youngeskimo6929 4 года назад +17

    Can y’all tell me the 3 things that she did well in her essay

    • @sylvihill5886
      @sylvihill5886 4 года назад +7

      What about Tone words, gotta have some of those

  • @ogpandas2018
    @ogpandas2018 4 года назад +1

    Nice essay! I've been working on my own common app essay and I'm hoping to get into Stanford. -a fellow indonesian

  • @LauraRibeirolauwrib
    @LauraRibeirolauwrib 6 лет назад +3

    One the best college essays I’ve ever read!! Do you offer any help to students who are applying right now like reading essays and providing feedback? I would love to have you read some of my essays.

  • @rodmoore3129
    @rodmoore3129 4 года назад

    This is sooooo good.

    • @cyand
      @cyand  4 года назад

      thank you so much!!

  • @sherlythinker
    @sherlythinker 4 года назад +3

    If I tell you that this essay brought tears to my eyes 🥺

    • @cyand
      @cyand  4 года назад

      and your comment did to me too

    • @sherlythinker
      @sherlythinker 4 года назад

      I'm Guyanese 🇬🇾BTW, applying to college this round as an international student... Wish me luck 🍀

    • @sherlythinker
      @sherlythinker 3 года назад +2

      Cyan I got into Stanford 🤗 OMG I can't wait to probably see you!

  • @applefilms3258
    @applefilms3258 6 лет назад +1

    This is amazing!

  • @krij2866
    @krij2866 5 лет назад

    your essay is amazing! what was your gpa and sat

  • @lucyhale7525
    @lucyhale7525 5 лет назад

    Hey, just wondering, do you read essays?

  • @Jamyaniyrae
    @Jamyaniyrae 6 лет назад

    For the common app did you have to get different letter of recommendations for every sxhool

    • @cyand
      @cyand  6 лет назад +1

      I pretty much submitted the same letters recommendations for all of my schools, with the exception being art universities vs. traditional universities. In those cases I would submit a rec. from my art school professor vs. a rec. from my math or French teacher, respectively. However, if traditional universities had the option of adding an additional recommendation, I would submit my art professor's one as a supplement.

  • @melikootje
    @melikootje 6 лет назад +1

    Hi, just wondering randomly: do you speak dutch?

    • @cyand
      @cyand  6 лет назад +2

      Ja, ik spreek Nederlands :)

    • @melikootje
      @melikootje 6 лет назад +2

      @@cyand gaaf!!

  • @alfonsosoteno6055
    @alfonsosoteno6055 4 года назад +1

    Great essay but your music is too loud at the end ...couldnt hear you!!!

    • @cyand
      @cyand  4 года назад

      alfonso soteno haha yup I noticed it too late as well, I posted the text in the description in case you wanted to read the last part!!