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  • Опубликовано: 28 дек 2024

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  • @SabC646
    @SabC646 8 месяцев назад +1420

    So now that we know Shayne and Courtney are married, we can all agree that Shayne’s bitcoin thing was the ultimate inside joke for the cast and crew

    • @hernameispekka_Rebecca
      @hernameispekka_Rebecca 8 месяцев назад +102

      Everyones reactions are spectacular in hindsight!

    • @nathanieldickens2509
      @nathanieldickens2509 7 месяцев назад +23

      I searched just for this! You’re right

    • @alina1216
      @alina1216 5 месяцев назад +30

      It makes sense why their delivery is always so “In sync” it’s because THEY HAVE BEEN TOGETHER AND I HONESTLY DIDNT KNOW. I’m a huge fan, been a huge fan since before Anthony left and I still never suspected a thing!!

  • @alyssawagner2004
    @alyssawagner2004 Год назад +3869

    It's iconic that Shayne and Damien's "romances" are the most intense in their own stories bc they both knew the other would be the most comfortable with it. We love best friends

    • @gigibeal
      @gigibeal Год назад +251

      *just* best friends.

    • @fantasygamer1769
      @fantasygamer1769 Год назад +229

      @@gigibealand nothing more

    • @the_richcat
      @the_richcat Год назад +216

      @@fantasygamer1769 Best friends who kiss a little

    • @lose_umi1811
      @lose_umi1811 Год назад +198

      @@the_richcat Friends who take off each other's clothes and just oil each other up

    • @grace_wh
      @grace_wh Год назад +2

      YEAH FRIENDS WHO JUST WRESTLE AROUND WITH NOTHING ON@@lose_umi1811

  • @devywevy2025
    @devywevy2025 3 года назад +12213

    Shayne: I'm pretty sure all of us wrote very different types of fanfiction.
    Shayne's fanfiction: *We're all dating each other at the same time*
    Damien's fanfiction: *We're all dating each other at the same time*
    Jackie's fanfiction: *We're all dating each other at the same time*

    • @audrey2749
      @audrey2749 3 года назад +943

      It’s like they’re trying to tell us something 😂

    • @blaszaczka
      @blaszaczka 3 года назад +1095

      Also Jackie: We're All Preganant.

    • @muscle2500
      @muscle2500 3 года назад +394

      We all have *secrets*

    • @GINSHOTGUN
      @GINSHOTGUN 2 года назад +184

      This is foreshadowing

    • @TheartistArson
      @TheartistArson 2 года назад +82

      I accidentally read this as he was saying that that was terrifying.

  • @sennacookie5043
    @sennacookie5043 3 года назад +8077

    These fan fictions are like a car crash: I don’t want to look, but I can’t look away

  • @puppetqueen26
    @puppetqueen26 3 года назад +6612

    Jackie’s was hands down the funniest, she did not hold back. Something tells me this isn’t the first time she’s written fanfiction…

  • @ellabradley4219
    @ellabradley4219 3 года назад +2266

    I love how Shayne and Damien made it so everybody is dating everyone but made each other the most extreme

    • @lis9691
      @lis9691 3 года назад +261

      Totally get why. Imagine doing the slapping sounds and moisture bit with anyone other than your best friend 😂 I imagine it would be more awkward with someone else. It worked for them and it worked out for all the shaymien shippers out there lmao

    • @ellabradley4219
      @ellabradley4219 2 года назад +40

      @@lis9691 literally, this is what I was thinking !!

  • @Bafael_Reyna
    @Bafael_Reyna 3 года назад +9643

    You can see how proud Jackie is about her script... And so are we, Jackie

    • @Sharye2001
      @Sharye2001 3 года назад +206

      This script definitely had me rolling 😂

    • @allisonyw
      @allisonyw 3 года назад +81

      Absolute magic.

    • @AvaAmarena94
      @AvaAmarena94 3 года назад +113

      Made me think that it wasn’t Jackie’s first time writing fanfiction, it was awesome😆👌🏽

    • @jackl.gansner6102
      @jackl.gansner6102 3 года назад +8

      so are we

    • @goblinboi8385
      @goblinboi8385 3 года назад +75

      i mean,,, if jackie wants to drop her AO3 user 👀👀

  • @bluebuffy9751
    @bluebuffy9751 3 года назад +4676

    This should’ve been titled, “Everyone hooking up for 34 minutes straight”

  • @apaulo.
    @apaulo. 3 года назад +5408

    “It didn’t hurt the baby , did it?” was the best shock ever.
    almost spit my water out. 😳😂

    • @castlegarden2999
      @castlegarden2999 3 года назад +241

      I don't know what was funnier, the line itself or the way everyone looked so shocked 🤣

    • @aperson0356
      @aperson0356 3 года назад +14

      I did lol

    • @rorzoi
      @rorzoi 3 года назад +73

      i had to pause it i was laughing in shock for so long i was *seriously* not expecting it to go there

    • @emmerson423
      @emmerson423 2 года назад +8

      I was smoking and I nearly choked

    • @kimberlywilliams98
      @kimberlywilliams98 Год назад +17

      That what happens when ya don’t tag yer fanfic’s

  • @danielcabrera8671
    @danielcabrera8671 3 года назад +7808

    "You a little baddy, you my baddy, growing our baddy" That will never not be funny

    • @gobby_kiwi
      @gobby_kiwi 3 года назад +114

      Raw

    • @joezr952
      @joezr952 3 года назад +41

      Damn I came down here to comment that and it’s the first comment 🤣

    • @Sampo788
      @Sampo788 3 года назад +25

      20:13

    • @alixx3622
      @alixx3622 3 года назад +63

      Smosh needs to make this a shirt and a pair of maternity (pregnant lady ) pants and a baby onesie that says, "I'm momma's baddy" and "im daddies baddy"

    • @cinesitcom
      @cinesitcom 2 года назад +5

      It’s such a funny line 😭😭

  • @sarahcollins402
    @sarahcollins402 3 года назад +6119

    Jackie’s script is INCREDIBLE. Please let her write more.

    • @scootybooty6701
      @scootybooty6701 3 года назад +161

      actually insanely well done

    • @thaesimir
      @thaesimir 3 года назад +115

      No, really. It's SO. FREAKING. GOOD!

    • @leinaamatsuji-berry561
      @leinaamatsuji-berry561 3 года назад +132

      She and Shayne wrote the Disney Channel Show video on the main channel and it’s so rock solid it’s nuts! Hope she can do more

    • @syra1541
      @syra1541 3 года назад +3

      @@leinaamatsuji-berry561 frfr

    • @bam0its0nina
      @bam0its0nina 3 года назад +63

      she went to film school! finally she's getting a chance to show off her writing chops

  • @jessiahmarielle
    @jessiahmarielle 3 года назад +3834

    "and i cannot breathe without my lungs" LITERALLY JACKIE WRITE A BOOK THIS IS TOO GOOODDD 😭😭😭

  • @2kjae789
    @2kjae789 3 года назад +2988

    “Im tired”
    “Im Noah”
    Why tf was that so funny

    • @neilcognito
      @neilcognito 3 года назад +37

      I kid you not,
      I laughed way to long at that.

    • @lauragesch3939
      @lauragesch3939 3 года назад +1

      @@neilcognito same here!! 😆😆😆

    • @vicboi87
      @vicboi87 3 года назад +2

      Delivery

    • @rarapas
      @rarapas 3 года назад +4

      That delivery was EPIC! I had to pause the video to laugh it out hahahahah!!!!!!!

  • @tramethozeine
    @tramethozeine 3 года назад +4852

    The best joke is absolutely "I'm tired" "I'm noah" congrats Jackie. I rewound that 5 times

    • @Travis7060312
      @Travis7060312 3 года назад +60

      "rewound"hello fellow old.

    • @tramethozeine
      @tramethozeine 3 года назад +43

      @@Travis7060312 I'm only 84 please stop

    • @mrdewarion
      @mrdewarion 3 года назад +95

      Let's also clarify that it's at least 50% Noah's perfect delivery what makes it so hilarious.

    • @fatmambodje2944
      @fatmambodje2944 3 года назад +2

      Go you go

    • @angelaoriel5912
      @angelaoriel5912 3 года назад +5

      @@mrdewarion YES

  • @noodle4pancakes
    @noodle4pancakes 3 года назад +4246

    Okay, but not only way Jackie's just the most amazing thing ever, but she was so considerate... Like... All of the very potentially too awkward bits she put herself in it first. First one we knew was preggers, the "spawn" joke, the "fat" joke, she took the brunt of everything so the flow never broke. Just amazing.

    • @wayababaya
      @wayababaya Год назад +66

      yeah i noticed too!

    • @cassiesayshi8174
      @cassiesayshi8174 Год назад +12

      What was the preggers and spawn joke again

    • @markangeloomayon1230
      @markangeloomayon1230 Год назад +47

      ​@@cassiesayshi8174
      18:35 - Her character was the first one to be revealed as pregnant.
      25:35 - The one with "carrying the spawn of Damian Haas".

  • @corpseofana5272
    @corpseofana5272 3 года назад +3148

    "Gets pregnant by a coworker noone ever ships me with" Lmaooo

    • @Demisearts
      @Demisearts 3 года назад +29

      Time to ship i guess😂😂

    • @BouncingTribbles
      @BouncingTribbles 3 года назад +6

      How does she know? Hmmmmm....

    • @alainasemler1505
      @alainasemler1505 3 года назад +77

      @@BouncingTribbles Jackie wrote the script as a fan, not a cast member

    • @alainasemler1505
      @alainasemler1505 3 года назад

      @@Demisearts nahhh

    • @BouncingTribbles
      @BouncingTribbles 3 года назад +14

      @@alainasemler1505 lol, obviously. My point was she's been reading all the fanfics... a lot

  • @kimmychanga090
    @kimmychanga090 3 года назад +6482

    We need merch that says “the smosh boys are fertile as shit” with a high five on it. Make it happen. Lol.

    • @NoThankUBeQuiet
      @NoThankUBeQuiet 3 года назад +40

      Shit isn't all that fertile

    • @seanlegumes8580
      @seanlegumes8580 3 года назад +238

      @@NoThankUBeQuiet But it is used as fertiliser. So in some ways it is fertile

    • @ReflectiveClipsTTV
      @ReflectiveClipsTTV 3 года назад +8

      YES

    • @unknown4957
      @unknown4957 3 года назад +49

      @@NoThankUBeQuiet the “as shit” is just a modifier of fertile. It’s just there to add, it’s like adding so to a sentence: I’m so tired. The so is modifying tired, and that’s essentially what “as shit” is doing to fertile.

    • @GoblinQueen.
      @GoblinQueen. 3 года назад +7

      Would buy!😭😂

  • @outofthegrey1
    @outofthegrey1 3 года назад +778

    Things I learned from this:
    1. Never have a secret affair with someone whose name sounds like "no one" (Noah)
    2. If you want to keep your pregnancy a secret, carry tampons with you in case a friend in the ladies room needs one.
    3. Speaking in a southern accent can wake someone out of a coma.

  • @thisisANGERACHEN
    @thisisANGERACHEN 3 года назад +4562

    Jacky's fanfic was straight up a Mexican telenovela

    • @heyhey9103
      @heyhey9103 3 года назад +13

      HSHSHHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAA

    • @PetrichorPal
      @PetrichorPal 3 года назад +8

      @@heyhey9103 HSHSHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHAAA

    • @ZeadBelmont
      @ZeadBelmont 3 года назад +45

      It was a "!Maldita Lisiada¡" away from being one

    • @milkyyyyway
      @milkyyyyway 3 года назад +10

      I love this comment so much lmao 💀

    • @asees5866
      @asees5866 3 года назад +19

      True! That baby thing had me slapping my own face twice.

  • @Marie.Jager.
    @Marie.Jager. 3 года назад +4973

    “You remember what happened to Anthony, dont you?!” EVERYONES EYES WHEN IAN READ THAT OMG STAHP-

    • @Rawt173
      @Rawt173 3 года назад +146

      I guess we'll just never know what happened after they broke up, will we....

    • @Travis7060312
      @Travis7060312 3 года назад +25

      im gonna be honest, i didnt really like anthony and I like smosh more now that he's gone.

    • @danielpleitez-martinez7638
      @danielpleitez-martinez7638 3 года назад +8

      Yea he chose to leave... lol

    • @theoriginalmeowcat
      @theoriginalmeowcat 3 года назад +5

      @@Travis7060312 honestly Anthony seems so overrated

    • @amyccc56
      @amyccc56 3 года назад +85

      @@theoriginalmeowcat overrated? he literally created smosh

  • @bluem0n0chrom3
    @bluem0n0chrom3 8 месяцев назад +248

    the first fanfic is actually shayne and courtney trying to keep their relationship hidden and private until marriage 💀

    • @benowens6539
      @benowens6539 7 месяцев назад +8

      I read this and was about to say that it aged really well, then I saw that it was only for my month prior to my reply

  • @belensanchezs5526
    @belensanchezs5526 3 года назад +757

    “No! I’m the dingus! For getting pregnant by the coworker no one ever ships me with!” I SCREAMED

  • @imzarxki
    @imzarxki 3 года назад +2431

    Just Jackie intensely reading the script while the others acted out the script, she's so proud.

    • @helloimellieful
      @helloimellieful 3 года назад +18

      Yes!!! I can relate to hard ❤

    • @Huschel1988
      @Huschel1988 3 года назад +12

      And powerful.

    • @ken-up1ee
      @ken-up1ee 3 года назад +12

      shes so cute

    • @dakotadad8835
      @dakotadad8835 3 года назад

      Stating things that happened

    • @sapphiruby
      @sapphiruby 3 года назад +22

      25:11 * Jackie nods in satisfaction *

  • @Samantha-yo1ht
    @Samantha-yo1ht 3 года назад +4127

    I think that they should do this again but they don’t know who wrote the script and they have to figure out who wrote it based off of clues in it. I feel like they would have a lot of fun with it and I would have fun watching it. 🤠
    Edit: thank you for the likes!!! 🙏

  • @cheyennemarie7075
    @cheyennemarie7075 3 года назад +4444

    Not Jackie writing Shayne laughing at his own jokes into the script 😂😂

    • @saisrivarshamalladi6138
      @saisrivarshamalladi6138 3 года назад +114

      Honestly she's brilliant😂😂

    • @aniyilator
      @aniyilator 3 года назад +55

      And that floppy hair line too, I wheezed 😆

    • @anitacsavajda6461
      @anitacsavajda6461 2 года назад +24

      And the screaming all the time 😂 She really threw him under the bus 😂😂

  • @SuperNolanMan
    @SuperNolanMan 3 года назад +1455

    “No one knows, behind closed doors, that we are *READING THE BIBLE.* “

  • @bethanycampione3558
    @bethanycampione3558 2 года назад +680

    Did anyone else get WAY too into Jackie's story? That literally could've come straight out of a soap opera!

  • @noodle1885
    @noodle1885 3 года назад +1751

    smosh being some variant of a polyamorous moresome in every fanfic universe is the funniest thing

  • @bobgavemeabiscut
    @bobgavemeabiscut 3 года назад +856

    why was Jackie’s so good??? like she knew the rules and played the game.

    • @jasminestiara
      @jasminestiara 3 года назад +103

      She knew what we wanted. She knew what she wanted. And delivered. Everyone goes home happy 😂

    • @theoutsiderjess1869
      @theoutsiderjess1869 3 года назад +54

      She killed it but shayne has nailed the funny cringe monstrosity that you can't stop reading even though it hurts your brain

    • @oliviag1119
      @oliviag1119 3 года назад +36

      She understood the assignment

    • @kisskissfallapart439
      @kisskissfallapart439 3 года назад +6

      i respect her for that (trail to oregon?

    • @bobgavemeabiscut
      @bobgavemeabiscut 3 года назад +3

      @@kisskissfallapart439 not what I meant to reference but yes :D

  • @leila9050
    @leila9050 3 года назад +1286

    I liked every story but Jackie’s was a masterpiece. The twists and turns, and nonstop hilarious jokes was great. Shayne breaking the fourth wall? “Growing our baddie”? Jackie is a genius.

  • @Orne97
    @Orne97 3 года назад +1392

    Jackie's fanfic sounded like the origin story of a cult living in a farm.

    • @StarkidPhil
      @StarkidPhil 3 года назад +61

      Cue Tommy running with an accordion singing Happy Midsommar

    • @ohmygosh7545
      @ohmygosh7545 3 года назад +3

      the fact that i was the 600, 60, 6 like is a like weird

  • @lindsaybullock7611
    @lindsaybullock7611 3 года назад +2206

    Shayne just screaming "SEEEEXXX" is the scariest thing he has ever done😂😂😭😭

    • @theoutsiderjess1869
      @theoutsiderjess1869 3 года назад +108

      Slapping moisture 😂

    • @tiffanyerskine916
      @tiffanyerskine916 3 года назад +30

      I kinda wonder of parts of that scene were just the two of them.playing off of each other, or if it was all written in. It was a little too perfect, lol.

    • @nicoe2010
      @nicoe2010 3 года назад +10

      That bit makes me giggle my head off every time I see that scene hahahhhahahahahaa

  • @dimensionalremi
    @dimensionalremi Год назад +364

    jackie's fanfiction being half the video on its own set a standard that it reached in the first 30 seconds. brilliant

  • @ramefy5551
    @ramefy5551 3 года назад +5676

    Courtney: "You think I'm a little baddy"
    Noah: ✨Rawr✨

    • @clye7788
      @clye7788 3 года назад +10

      was it roar or we are lol

    • @ramefy5551
      @ramefy5551 3 года назад +23

      @@clye7788 pretty sure it was Roar 😂

    • @clye7788
      @clye7788 3 года назад +10

      @@ramefy5551 cuz the subtitle says we are haha

    • @ramefy5551
      @ramefy5551 3 года назад +19

      @@clye7788 the subtitle is wrong, you can even see it if you read his lips 😅 20:25

    • @jeenako
      @jeenako 3 года назад +54

      it should be ✨rawr✨

  • @daytimedeity9643
    @daytimedeity9643 3 года назад +5712

    "Shayne and Damien who are actually ACTUAL boyfriends" lolol
    Also, Jackie's went from sweet Hallmark movie to dramatic Lifetime film REAL fast

    • @garytheman7163
      @garytheman7163 3 года назад +4

      ?

    • @daytimedeity9643
      @daytimedeity9643 3 года назад +33

      guys that first part was literally me just quoting the video itself (hence the quotation marks)
      i don't think they're actual boyfriends. that's just what one of the scripts said in the video......

    • @Jexpler
      @Jexpler 2 года назад +16

      But then it turns out that they're all dating each other so.....

    • @Vextri51
      @Vextri51 Год назад +5

      FACTS

  • @zzyzxsyzygy
    @zzyzxsyzygy 3 года назад +1722

    1:25 Secrets by Shayne
    8:03 Smosh’s Dark Secret by Damien
    16:42 Smosh’s Summer Secrets by Jackie

  • @MooreKismetOfficial
    @MooreKismetOfficial 3 года назад +1886

    I literally was just thinking the other day “when are they gonna do Smosh Pit Theater again?” 🥺🥺

    • @pvic6959
      @pvic6959 3 года назад +19

      smosh: Moore's wish is our command

    • @qqs403
      @qqs403 3 года назад +7

      Literally same 😭

    • @SammyFlowers
      @SammyFlowers 3 года назад +2

      SAMEEEEE

    • @zound8156
      @zound8156 3 года назад

      SAME AHAHA

    • @codyrogers9582
      @codyrogers9582 3 года назад +2

      Smosh Pit Theatre is my favourite

  • @jasminestiara
    @jasminestiara 3 года назад +621

    Everything else was plausible except Shayne being 6' 7".

    • @shigekax
      @shigekax 3 года назад +29

      Yeah he's easily 8'
      Forced perspective 😔

  • @elizabethwallace8714
    @elizabethwallace8714 3 года назад +550

    Okay, I agree with everyone that Jackie's script killed but can we talk about the fact that Noah *consistently* brings an A+ acting game to these?

  • @slashmacleod
    @slashmacleod 3 года назад +903

    "The eyes of a husky with glaucoma".....Damien, you delightful man.

    • @esinger23
      @esinger23 3 года назад +1

      Haii slash lol 😂

    • @slashmacleod
      @slashmacleod 3 года назад +1

      @@esinger23 ohai der, hope you're doing well!

    • @esinger23
      @esinger23 3 года назад

      @@slashmacleod I’m pretty good lol

    • @Sharye2001
      @Sharye2001 3 года назад +2

      I died on that part I said “Glaucoma?!?!” 😂😂

  • @kha0sv4ktor72
    @kha0sv4ktor72 3 года назад +640

    "im tired"
    "im Noah"
    now thats genius!

  • @rafaellucadetena9355
    @rafaellucadetena9355 Год назад +287

    The delivery of Nyortney just killed me. Im actually in heaven watching this now.

  • @kevinorleans961
    @kevinorleans961 3 года назад +1558

    Shayne : Im sick of being called shartney! It sounds like a skidmark
    Courtney : We can be each others skidmark
    Shayne : That does sound...Pretty sick,ok bet.

  • @kutabareproductions9917
    @kutabareproductions9917 3 года назад +1008

    Shane is literally whenever authors write themselves into fanfics

    • @justxxsunset
      @justxxsunset 3 года назад +32

      I HAVE READ TOO MANY OF THOSE FANFICS THINKING THEY WOULD BE OKAY AND I CAN CONFIRM
      THIS IS SHAYNE’S SELF-INSERT FANTASY

    • @christinajai5996
      @christinajai5996 3 года назад +2

      Very true

  • @JPRaynor
    @JPRaynor 3 года назад +426

    Petition to let Jackie write a 4 part short story fan fiction romance in the south for Smosh pit theater. I want to see what she can do with an arc

  • @lincolnluscombe8904
    @lincolnluscombe8904 3 года назад +555

    “That does sound pretty sick......... Okay bet.” Describes this whole video

  • @M3xicanAmerican1
    @M3xicanAmerican1 3 года назад +2942

    Shayne and Damien did a great job with their scripts and it was clear that they were going for more of a “parody” fan fiction that danced around the whole shipping thing and had more of comedic approach overall. But Jackie’s was just on another level. Fantastic Writing. She totally went all in on trying to capture the true spirit of a fanfic author. And with the help of everyone’s acting it made for a very entertaining display! Really great vid overall, hope they do more of these!

    • @Chris-io2cs
      @Chris-io2cs 3 года назад +59

      Well said, I totally agree. Jackie really went above and beyond. Even just the little things she put in like "I'm noah" were hilarious.

    • @creekstar7
      @creekstar7 3 года назад +38

      While we’re comparing Jackie’s to Shayne and Damian’s… I also appreciate that in Jackie’s instead of a buildup to the cast hooking up, THEY ALREADY DID and her story was more about the aftermath. XD

    • @madill930
      @madill930 3 года назад +6

      Dude she been slappin I’m with ya

    • @iliilianaana
      @iliilianaana 3 года назад +15

      she really has no choice but to drop her ao3 username

  • @lauragesch3939
    @lauragesch3939 3 года назад +485

    Damien sticking to his 5'2" persona in Shane's script is just perfect! 😆😆😆

  • @grungy_ghoull1467
    @grungy_ghoull1467 3 года назад +1872

    “It didn’t hurt the baby did it?”
    Me: *Nearly spits out DrPepper*

  • @StayEmilino
    @StayEmilino 3 года назад +356

    I lost it at “the spawn of Damien Haas”

  • @kafalotofeao462
    @kafalotofeao462 3 года назад +707

    Did no one notice how Noah's inner monologue referenced one of Courtney's dramatic diary entries? That's good writing right there 👏👏

  • @crazygoldenmoments2344
    @crazygoldenmoments2344 3 года назад +543

    Shayne's script is exactly what youd expect him to write..... A 2nd grader power of friendship anime script

  • @Itstenten8
    @Itstenten8 3 года назад +952

    “I really liked when you did the splits.” Jackie I can’t breathe.

  • @shriek_a_boo
    @shriek_a_boo 2 года назад +85

    "the eyes of a husky with glaucoma" made soda go up my nose 💀💀

  • @yakamoose
    @yakamoose 3 года назад +366

    “No, I’m the dingus for getting pregnant by the coworker no one ever ships me with!”
    💀

    • @cateyoung5705
      @cateyoung5705 3 года назад +14

      Cant wait for this to be in the next Smosh Pit Theater out of Context vid

    • @StarDustBunnies464
      @StarDustBunnies464 3 года назад

      🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • @alymayv8162
    @alymayv8162 3 года назад +697

    I love how Damien and shayne both have each other as a ship in their fan fictions elite friendship

  • @internetescapee7950
    @internetescapee7950 3 года назад +325

    At 25:10, I love how proud Jackie looks when Kimmy calls Damien her peach. The nod of approval haha

  • @TransGuyOnTheFly
    @TransGuyOnTheFly 3 года назад +1777

    Shayne’s script literally screams his type of humor😂. Every script shows their personalities, I love it!

    • @anomallie
      @anomallie 3 года назад +88

      I was thinking the same thing. It also got me thinking about how the fanfic writers’ each individual viewpoint of the other cast members’ characters are and how they went about incorporating that into their respective roles in each story. Shayne’s was so heavily ironic and covered many basic tropes and archetypes in an exaggerated way, Damien’s had a dark and gloomy overall setting with a flair for the melodramatic (which, to be fair, is typical for someone who watches a lot of anime), and Jackie’s was in a league of her own with a rainbow of a bunch of different flavours and styles, though it was most definitely *spicy* 🤌 .
      It was all great.

  • @shyaeverett8793
    @shyaeverett8793 3 года назад +452

    Something about the phrase “abundantly pregnant” really tickles me

  • @Swirlingflame
    @Swirlingflame 3 года назад +212

    Jackie was going so hard on Shayne the whole script, I think she wanted to see if she could break him lol.
    He kinda did break at 31:19

  • @jasonlieberman4606
    @jasonlieberman4606 3 года назад +844

    Shayne's and Damien's were definitely hilarious, but Jackie's just went above and beyond

  • @gilmourmcleod9133
    @gilmourmcleod9133 3 года назад +450

    Highlight was Jackie being so pumped about her own script that she mouthed along to the whole thing. Adorable.

  • @kiramerrill807
    @kiramerrill807 2 года назад +194

    « Thé smosh boys are fertile as shit » with shaynes reaction had me crying 😂😂😂

  • @roberthumphrey5119
    @roberthumphrey5119 3 года назад +935

    Not gonna lie, Shane's fanfiction might be the funniest thing I've seen on this channel.

  • @bookworm962011
    @bookworm962011 3 года назад +1588

    No shade to Damien or shayne but after Jackie's I forgot everything that happened before lol

  • @tretmm
    @tretmm 3 года назад +291

    “Didn’t hurt the baby did it?”
    Courtney: 👁👄👁

  • @graceschy8978
    @graceschy8978 3 года назад +431

    just to let you know shayne's fake wattpad username is now a real account that joined an hour ago 💀

  • @hayleyanderson4841
    @hayleyanderson4841 3 года назад +536

    I love that shayne straight changed how tall everyone was

    • @ft.jackjimmy7282
      @ft.jackjimmy7282 3 года назад +17

      imagine he also changed everyone's eye color and hair color?

  • @ailaarmstrong2375
    @ailaarmstrong2375 3 года назад +232

    18:38 when Damian said “it didn’t it the baby did it” everyone’s faces were priceless especially Courtney’s

  • @gennesispopovici5418
    @gennesispopovici5418 3 года назад +481

    “Noah hisses sadly”
    Noah: *hissss* ☹️

  • @DreamyCassie
    @DreamyCassie 3 года назад +655

    Jackie's script is EVERYTHING. And look how proud she is XD

  • @TacosMendoza
    @TacosMendoza 7 месяцев назад +53

    I love how at min 6:50 they LITERALLY told us that they were dating and everyone ignored it… now it’s 2024 and they are finally married 🥹🥹

    • @hernameispekka_Rebecca
      @hernameispekka_Rebecca 7 месяцев назад +13

      They must have laughed so much at that! All the reactions looking back are perfect! Good for them, honestly!

  • @kaimochi_930
    @kaimochi_930 3 года назад +685

    the fact they all end with everyone dating in a big poly commune

    • @pat6311
      @pat6311 3 года назад +24

      That's gotta be a real fanfiction somewhere lol

    • @lostotter1956
      @lostotter1956 3 года назад +7

      Goals lol

  • @NaTeesha85
    @NaTeesha85 3 года назад +929

    "We could be each other's skidmarks!"
    "OK, bet."
    🤣

  • @havehope2013
    @havehope2013 8 месяцев назад +39

    The wedding announcement makes Shane’s fan fic even funnier.

  • @SqweakySqwizard
    @SqweakySqwizard 3 года назад +228

    “You a little baddie, you *my* baddie. Growing *our* baddie”
    I’M SCREAMING

  • @danielleadams8066
    @danielleadams8066 3 года назад +762

    Honestly Jackie’s fanfic take the cake with: Kimmy- “I’m tired” Noah-“I’m Noah”
    Idk my but I laughed so hard

  • @Demi_P
    @Demi_P 3 года назад +154

    This is probably my fifth time going back to rewatch this video but I can’t get over how Shayne and Damien made each other boyfriends in both of their scripts 🤣

  • @FinalLegion89
    @FinalLegion89 3 года назад +314

    "and you just wear crop tops"
    Ian: "HEH"

  • @speckyproductions490
    @speckyproductions490 3 года назад +2571

    Jackie’s script is so funny that Shayne can’t contain himself, Damien’s quietly now terrified of Jackie, Ian can’t whether to be scared of or impressed by Jackie, Noah out-performed everyone, Kimmy will now do Jackie’s bidding willingly and Courtney’s thinking, “Olivia and I may have been out-weirded.” 😂😂😂

  • @maxbulge1064
    @maxbulge1064 3 года назад +150

    That "I can't breathe without my lungs" bit was poetry, and Jackie's face after it is everything!
    P.S. I love Jackie

  • @cici_citron3438
    @cici_citron3438 3 года назад +444

    Jackie’s fanfic was just the best thing ever.

    • @Demisearts
      @Demisearts 3 года назад

      "By the one no one ever ships me with" 😂😂😂

  • @C_analompe
    @C_analompe 3 года назад +487

    I love that Smosh has embrace the fact that they get shipped or get fan fiction, so their making their own!

    • @felixchua-wz7ge
      @felixchua-wz7ge 3 года назад +34

      if you can't beat them, join them

    • @sdaewdaws
      @sdaewdaws 3 года назад +8

      @@felixchua-wz7ge Yo nice advice, now I’ll buy a bunch of GPUs to mine Ethereum and be a pain in the ass to people that actually want a graphics card.

    • @felixchua-wz7ge
      @felixchua-wz7ge 3 года назад +6

      @@sdaewdaws now that's a special situation

    • @theoutsiderjess1869
      @theoutsiderjess1869 3 года назад +2

      I hope we can do more like the fans and smosh can add on to it and make a funny story together

  • @Alexneverknowswhattodo
    @Alexneverknowswhattodo 8 месяцев назад +36

    watching this after shayne and courtney are together is WILD. so happy for them

    • @mumbledmeatballs5629
      @mumbledmeatballs5629 8 месяцев назад +1

      I mean they were right lol they broke the internet 😂

  • @tiapavo
    @tiapavo 3 года назад +585

    I love that Shayne and Damien's fics each took around 8 minutes and Jackie's took the other 20 lmaooooo but she deserves it

  • @perryndyck8238
    @perryndyck8238 3 года назад +1795

    "so what do you say?"
    "i have pride, i have power-"
    "not right now, no."
    when i tell you i CACKELED

  • @hellscutie
    @hellscutie Год назад +46

    'Who drives a prius?' 'I drive a mazda' ABSOLUTELY took me out. Noahs delivery is everything.

  • @alyssawilson8172
    @alyssawilson8172 3 года назад +575

    All of their reactions when damien said "it didn't hurt the baby did it? " HAD ME😭😭

  • @emclaire7027
    @emclaire7027 3 года назад +317

    I’m so glad to see y’all being so open about being a sex cult.

    • @art3misa625
      @art3misa625 3 года назад +76

      a polyamorous vampire sex cult that lives in a farm and mines bitcoin

    • @Die_Eyes_7891
      @Die_Eyes_7891 3 года назад +5

      @@art3misa625 What a beautiful story 🤣

    • @runawayfaeIX
      @runawayfaeIX 3 года назад +3

      Finally!

  • @leahrichards3432
    @leahrichards3432 3 года назад +116

    Jackie’s script was a ✨masterpiece✨

  • @maxmustsleep
    @maxmustsleep 3 года назад +283

    "I'm tired"
    "I'm Noah"
    Is my new favorite quote

  • @brigham280
    @brigham280 3 года назад +185

    "Just friends and nothing more"
    And then they all kissed

  • @jamer2010
    @jamer2010 3 года назад +110

    Shayne's fan fic is like me starting out writing and literally spending 20 pages describing appearances and background lol

  • @MeredithHagan
    @MeredithHagan 3 года назад +163

    Shayne’s fic is basically just an episode of Grey’s - a group of coworkers who are all sleeping with each other.

  • @leinaamatsuji-berry561
    @leinaamatsuji-berry561 3 года назад +235

    Why did Jackie absolutely SNAP on the scripting though!? I literally screamed 😭

  • @Fanthomas1742
    @Fanthomas1742 8 месяцев назад +40

    Wow Shaynes story is kinda genius in retrospect

    • @hernameispekka_Rebecca
      @hernameispekka_Rebecca 8 месяцев назад +4

      For sure!! Like, he straight up just told everyone! The others faces are amazing!

  • @ikeford4963
    @ikeford4963 3 года назад +659

    "Slapping noises and Moisture" will stay locked in my brain forever

  • @theomino9603
    @theomino9603 3 года назад +305

    The fact that Jackie script is thicker than everyone else is making my day 😂😂

    • @cullenbrant2524
      @cullenbrant2524 3 года назад +8

      You're saying Jackie's script is thicker than a bowl of oatmeal?

  • @adrianna1227
    @adrianna1227 5 месяцев назад +17

    Courtney looking at shayne in the first like 10 seconds of the intro hits different after the marriage announcement-

  • @RafidW9
    @RafidW9 3 года назад +699

    I already miss Sarah's laugh in the background

    • @rhylie6671
      @rhylie6671 3 года назад +3

      ??

    • @ONLY_RR7
      @ONLY_RR7 3 года назад +26

      @@rhylie6671 their producer Sarah left Smosh a few weeks ago

    • @Blerdbrain
      @Blerdbrain 3 года назад +29

      Bro don’t do this to me bro

    • @kadinbowman3122
      @kadinbowman3122 3 года назад +7

      😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

    • @karinasvale
      @karinasvale 3 года назад +3

      Same 🥰