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  • @JudgeDreadlock
    @JudgeDreadlock 2 года назад +195

    You are a complete legend. Anyone can call themselves a teacher but the skill you have is your ability to explain difficult concepts in the simplest language. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

    • @ghostface933
      @ghostface933 Год назад +2

      Fr my dawg👊

    • @tk11rj
      @tk11rj 5 месяцев назад

      Ai i got a question, say for literature If i'm to write 2 paragraphs for an extract, would I just do the same pretzel paragraph twice but with different quotes? thanks

    • @naseem6116
      @naseem6116 4 месяца назад

      @@tk11rjYes

  • @WhosParx
    @WhosParx 2 года назад +186

    If anyone thinks they might need this:
    25 Language Devices: Defined & Explained!
    1. Pathetic Fallacy
    Is when the weather or the atmosphere describes the mood.
    For example, when the weather is rainy people are sad and depressed
    2nd example, the dark night could symbolise something supernatural like 3AM Satan etc…
    2. Personification
    Is when a non-human is given human qualities.
    For example, the tree is waving to John as drives away.
    3. Simile
    When you are comparing two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’
    For example, his facial vision looked like a falcon’s eye
    4. Metaphor
    Is when you are comparing two things with is or are
    Example He is an orc
    5. Extended Metaphor
    Pick a metaphor and explain how --- > turn in to an extended metaphor
    Metaphor --- > Life is a rollercoaster. Now turning into extended metaphor add explanation so, Life is a rollercoaster you don’t know when you will be at the top or at the bottom, it will all happen in an instance, at the greatest heights you will be at the greatest heights and at times it will crash, but every day is never the same, just like in a turn in a Rolle coaster is never the same.
    6. Oxymoron
    2 opposite words side-by-side
    Example, the small giant
    7. Juxtaposition
    You explain an oxymoron.
    The small giant tip-toing trying to reach the top shelf, however, his small arms and puny fingers prevented him from grabbing the bar of jam.
    8. Symbolism
    Is when objects represent a meaning.
    For example, moon and the star represent Islam.
    2nd Example, if you get a priest you will think someone died.
    In Macbeth the dagger links to death.
    9. Semantic field
    Is where words are linked to an idea.
    For example, PPE, 2m and Hand Sanitiser, Head of Year link to COVID.
    10. Irony
    Is when events in the text surprises the characters. Something not expected!
    Mr Birling offering a 1000.
    Scrooge changing his nature.
    11. Rhetorical Question
    Question does not require an answer
    12. Hyperbole
    Is when you hype, when over-exaggerating.
    I am going to eat the whole restaurant.
    13. Assonance
    Is the repetition of the vowel sound.
    I am too cool for school. Oooooo
    14. Alliteration
    Words in a row begin with the same letter.
    15. Sibilance
    Is when words in a row have the s letter or the s sound
    Example: the snake was slowly hissing
    16. Euphemism
    Is when you say something in an indirect manner.
    He is not with us anymore.
    17. Emotive Language
    Is when the writer makes the reader feel emotional. By making them angry.
    18. Onomatopoeia
    Words describe the sound
    Boom bang skirr pop
    19. Ruel of 3 / Power of 3 / Triplets
    Words or phrases in a row describe something (3)
    The table is black, hard and wide
    20. Facts/ Stats
    Uses evidence to support their facts.
    50 % of the students prefer using email rather than social media .
    21. Plosive
    Reptation of harsh sound
    Words such as 'P' 'D' 'B'
    22. Zoomorphism
    Is when you give a person animal features.
    Example John barked at me / John shouted at me.
    23. Opinion
    24. Repetition
    Language Device and Structure.
    Is when the writer uses the words repletely to create an effect.
    Where is being repeated and why is that important
    25. Noun, Verbs, Adjectives, Adverbs
    Structure
    Flashback - when you go back in time ,3 days ago etc..
    Foreshadowing - when the writer gives clue about future ‘my heart was beating fast’
    Zoom in - focus on one thing for example ‘pen’ , ‘specific character ‘
    Zoom out - normally used to talk about setting
    Dialogue - when the character speak ‘hey there !’
    New character
    New setting
    Change in tone
    Short sentence - to build up tense
    Long sentence - add details and slow down the narrative
    Short /long sentence - may show importance in both
    Shift in focus - talks about object then talks about another object for example ‘pen’ to ‘table’
    Cyclical structure - similar stuff happening with beginning and ending
    Juxtaposition
    Extended metaphor
    Pace
    List
    Pov
    Overall tone
    Chronogical order
    Climax
    Repetition
    Links
    Mood , pathetic fallacy 1. Abhorrent/Heinous (means bad)
    2. Euphoric/Jubilant (means happy)
    3. Melancholy/Morose (means sad)
    4. Indignant (means angry)
    5. Swift/Rapid (means fast)
    6. Colossal/Gargantuan (means big)
    7. Minuscule/Microscopic (means small)
    8. Bemused/Befuddled (means confused)
    9. Astute/Shrewd (means smart)
    10. Feeble/Decrepit (means weak)
    11. Dash (means run)
    12. Plunge (means jump - may not always fit so be careful how you use it)
    13. Cordial (means nice)
    14. Lackadaisical (means lazy)
    15. Paradoxical/Outlandish (means strange)

  • @GeorgeSim-mc7jd
    @GeorgeSim-mc7jd 7 месяцев назад +29

    this is still helpful in 2024 cheers

  • @taztango6461
    @taztango6461 3 года назад +82

    Waiting for the video where you write a paragraph using prtezel. This video was great. i want to guarantee 8 or 9 answers in my gcse soPlease make a video on what can get you those 8 or 9 mark answers. Maybe comparing a 5 mark answer to 9 mark answer and explaining what separates them.

  • @aleenalailla04
    @aleenalailla04 3 года назад +33

    thx for this, it was bare helpful MashAllah 💕

  • @Bella-pe9is
    @Bella-pe9is 2 года назад +5

    This is so much better than point, evidence, explain. Thank you!!!!!!!!!

  • @Bhumitpal-g4d
    @Bhumitpal-g4d 4 месяца назад +1

    OMG!! I am in love with your technique,I wonder,how could someone be so perfect? lots of love from bottom of my heart❤️❤️

  • @astarbosh9782
    @astarbosh9782 2 года назад +4

    Kusme this guy better than my teacher. Taught me more in an hour than my teacher taught me in 2 years

  • @theeverlastingfather1111
    @theeverlastingfather1111 3 года назад +5

    Good job dude! I can't get enough thanking you.

  • @user-ie7gy5dv5c
    @user-ie7gy5dv5c 3 года назад +4

    this has helped me so much ! cant thank you enough for this

  • @ameerali3515
    @ameerali3515 3 года назад +7

    Sir could you please mark this. Thanks
    Paper 1 q3
    -The opening paragraph reveals to us that the Ford motor can was “old”, and “re-painted”, allowing us to identify the families financial constraints, creating sympathy towards them.
    -The change of focus in the second paragraph, reveals to us that Hartop “seemed to occupy almost all of the seat”, portraying his lack of sympathy and care towards the rest of his family, as he was “sprawling awkwardly”, on purpose, gradually building more and more sympathy towards Alice and his wife.
    -The change of focus in the the third paragraph is towards Hartop. Firstly, it tells us that Hartop “drove with great caution”, as the van “fussed and rattled”. This emphasise the lack of financial support that the family has, making us question why he’s put himself in such a harsh situation.
    -The change of focus in the 14th paragraph, reveals to us that Alice “stumbled against something on the road”. This portrays a sense of hope for Alice, as the short sentences build up a glimmer of excitement from the reader, as finding the chrysanthemums could be a turning point in her life. The final two sentences in the paragraph compliment the first, as Hartops van “was stationary”, so we feel happy for Alice, as we think she will become appreciated in the family, perhaps we will no longer feel sorry for her, but think of her as a lucky daughter.
    -The final paragraph served to constrast the last, as it emphasises the lack of understand Hartop has. Firstly, despite Alice’s tremendous efforts and attempts to retrieve that chrysanthemums, she “obeyed at once”, and “walked away”, indicating that she is completely worthless in the family, and despite their hardest attempts to prove her self worthy, is disregarded, and left consolidated. This makes us really feel sorry for her, as she vanished “without a word”, allowing us to identity her internal misery, and feel pity for her solemn life.
    Please mark out of 8. Thanks sir.

  • @ahmadqasim4773
    @ahmadqasim4773 Год назад +7

    "We been peeing since Year 7" 💀

  • @cc_hayden_6523
    @cc_hayden_6523 Год назад +6

    using this for my english lit exam tomorrow 🙏🙏

    • @chickenliver66660
      @chickenliver66660 Год назад

      how did it go? are u ready for tomorrow
      ?

    • @Cashewzeu
      @Cashewzeu Год назад

      @@chickenliver66660 i guess i am lmfao. LITERALLY LAST MINUTE REVISION LOL

  • @jumgkoo3079
    @jumgkoo3079 Год назад +1

    thank you so much ive got my english exam later today and im happy youre helpnig me revise for it

  • @rodrogamingyt6655
    @rodrogamingyt6655 6 месяцев назад

    You should create a playlist of the videos of writing a gcse level paragraph if you don't have one already it would make many people's lives easier since these videos help a lot

  • @shahzarbukhlaw5963
    @shahzarbukhlaw5963 3 года назад +3

    I'm using this for a test next week for inspector calls. Thanks sir

    • @R6siegecontent
      @R6siegecontent 4 месяца назад

      Did it help cuz I have mocks soon and my mate is saying I should use this

    • @shahzarbukhlaw5963
      @shahzarbukhlaw5963 4 месяца назад

      Crazy how I got an email notification, but yes. I got an 8 so that works

    • @shahzarbukhlaw5963
      @shahzarbukhlaw5963 4 месяца назад

      Thank you sir, I got 2 8s for English

    • @R6siegecontent
      @R6siegecontent 3 месяца назад

      @@shahzarbukhlaw5963 can you help me with video titles or anything mocks in a week I’m so cooked

  • @HonshuR
    @HonshuR Год назад +1

    You can add context in every paragraph in the link section to sum up how this is relavant to the question and how it actually relates to it. For example, if you are talking about Sheila and how she is suppressed, in the link you can specifically say that she was suppressed because she was a women and then go on to breifly mention gender roles during the 1920's. But nothing to take away from what Mr Everything English has said, he is the teacher after all 😂

  • @passingpoor
    @passingpoor 3 года назад +14

    Sir, thank you so much,
    you are an absolute animal.

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish 3 года назад +22

      🦍

    • @muhammadamin18732
      @muhammadamin18732 2 года назад

      😂

    • @hamzahwaheed9528
      @hamzahwaheed9528 Год назад +1

      You definitely didn't use a metaphor

    • @tk11rj
      @tk11rj 5 месяцев назад

      @@MrEverythingEnglish Ai i got a question, say for literature If i'm to write 2 paragraphs for an extract, would I just do the same pretzel paragraph twice but with different quotes? thanks

  • @bilushah1
    @bilushah1 3 года назад +4

    Sir is it possible if you can go through the whole GCSE literature and language paper in an actual GCSE paper
    Thanks for help

  • @fw_aman7601
    @fw_aman7601 2 года назад +3

    Thank you I’m not waffling in my exams anymore

  • @jakepronger7824
    @jakepronger7824 3 года назад +9

    Hi I’m a bit confused my exam board is edexcel and in English Literature paper 1 we have an extract from Macbeth where we get now credit for context references. By extension, in part b we have a question about a theme throughout the play and we are told here is where we link context and that we shouldn’t analyse in depth the techniques used but rather give them a passing reference. What would be your opinion? Great video btw

  • @lukekrawiec3522
    @lukekrawiec3522 2 года назад +2

    my go to teacher for English language, my actual teacher is about as effective as a micrometre is at measuring the size of an elephant

  • @532s
    @532s Год назад +3

    " we've been peeing since year 7 " 😆

  • @seyibale
    @seyibale 3 года назад

    You are super amazing! Thank you Mr. Everything English.

  • @williamnield7133
    @williamnield7133 2 года назад +5

    I was peeing before year 7 in fact I've been peeing since I was born. Will this be a problem?

  • @thamilineiinparasa7002
    @thamilineiinparasa7002 3 года назад +3

    Hi there, you have referred to this structure for literature. Does this count when comparing two poems.If it doesn't could you please kindly make a video on how to structuring a poetry comparison question. I have watched the video to compare poems the best but I feel like I need help on actually structuring the essy as I have a poetry mock next week. Your vids are great, thanks!

    • @Ishlino
      @Ishlino 3 года назад +2

      Im sorry for being 10 months late but comparing 2 prezels would precpre

  • @AO-pn9ev
    @AO-pn9ev 11 месяцев назад +1

    Dear Mr Everything English Sir,
    In my school, for some reason, we do AQA for GCSE English Language and Edexcel for GCSE English Literature. As part of Edexcel for literature, we are not marked on language or AO2, and mainly AO1 and AO3. Would this paragraph structure still allow me to gain maximum marks as apparently I’m not supposed to analyse language?

  • @GvlogsNarla
    @GvlogsNarla 3 года назад +1

    Thank you mr Genus can I use this method about Macbeth

  • @bernardperis5481
    @bernardperis5481 7 месяцев назад

    Please do a video on how o write three pretzel paragraphs on the unseen poem. (Part a)

  • @itzshad7359
    @itzshad7359 3 года назад +2

    Hi is this good please reply the writer of j.b priestley present sheila birling as materialistic and change throughout the play.
    as there is evident where it says “Oh its wonderful! Look mummy isn't it a beauty”
    the use of technique is the exclamation mark showing her emotion and an adjective because she is describing something as beauty.
    The word of beauty is a eutrophic word because she is describing something as a very nice object that she has.
    When sheila was arguing about Gerald Authur because of not spending any quality time with here sheila was annoyed and depressed about gerald not spending any time but when geard show her the ring her whole emotion of sheila has changed this also means that ring define as power and control because we can see sheila being angry and irritated about gealrd but when he show her a ring is a completely different things to her attitude so the ring has power and taking control of sheila.
    In the edwardian time the most important job was for a men to do all of their works and men had the most respect even women had to respect mens and they had to follow all there command and they can never disboy what a men said

  • @VypaGaming
    @VypaGaming 2 года назад +6

    I get grade 6s and 7s for following my paragraph structure called PETCEIEL (point, evidence, terminology, connotation, explanation, intention, effect, link). This works with the whole of English literature and any structure, form and language questions on English language

    • @feranmisekoni3778
      @feranmisekoni3778 2 года назад

      Are u fr? Pls my gcse is tomoz

    • @VypaGaming
      @VypaGaming 2 года назад +8

      @@feranmisekoni3778 1) Answer the question directly (answer the question in one sentence with no or very little explanation at all).
      2) Back up your point with valid evidence (write a quotation from the given text in the correct lines it states or out of the text if u have to refer out of the text, make sure that ur quote matches and refers to ur point and also make sure that u pick a quote that u know u can best analyse and pick a piece of terminology from).
      3) Pick a word from the quote to zoom into (pick a word from the quote to explain and analyse).
      4) Write "This... suggests" or "This... connotes... which suggests..." or "The... 'write the part of the quote here' suggests..." or "The... 'write the part of the quote here' connotes... which suggests..." (the first bit of "..." must be filled in with terminology, for example, adjective, simile, metaphor, dramatic irony, repetition, ecsetra. Make sure u use a language device on a language question on English language and a structural device on a structure question on English language and either on English literature, a connotation is something that u associate a word with, you'll write ur connotation after "connotes", for example, red connotes blood, light connotes happiness, ecsetra, make sure that everything u say refers and links to the question).
      5) Make sure u explain everything u say in as much detail as u possibly can. Dont stop explaining until u cant write anything else. U can write things like "because" and "furthermore" to develop and explain in further detail.
      6) What is the writer's intention (what is the message that the writer is trying to get to the reader when reading this quotation or how is he/she trying to make the reader feel, think ecsetra and why, for example, "The writer intended... because..." or maybe u wanna develop even further and in the next sentence u start with "Furthermore,")?
      7) What effect and impact does this quotation have on the reader and why? (U may say something like "The reader would feel... because..." or "The reader would think... because..." in the next sentence u could start with "Furthermore," to explain more and develop on this).
      8) Link back to ur point. In order to do this, it's simple, just write "As a result, its clear that...". In the "..." u must write the key part of ur point, for example, if my point is "Shakespeare presents Macbeth as powerful.", I would write "As a result, it's clear that Macbeth is presented as powerful."
      I hope this helps with your analysis questions on English Language paper 1 and 2 and your English Literature papers. :-)

  • @mahboobakhtar8737
    @mahboobakhtar8737 Год назад +1

    Can u use this for language

  • @Ekaterina-nc7cp
    @Ekaterina-nc7cp 2 года назад +1

    Can this only be used for literature and language not structure

  • @mahdikashem356
    @mahdikashem356 Год назад +2

    Can you use PRETZEL paragraph for English language too?

  • @bl4ckw4t3r
    @bl4ckw4t3r 2 года назад

    i have english lit today, thanks for this sir !

  • @Midladdermediocrity
    @Midladdermediocrity 2 года назад +1

    Mr bruff has some competition

  • @aesha9332
    @aesha9332 3 года назад +4

    Can you use PRTEZEL on English language or not.

  • @ArisIkitai
    @ArisIkitai 3 года назад

    Thank you Mr Everything English, this will surely help!

    • @davismiles2765
      @davismiles2765 2 года назад

      See this ruclips.net/video/Oy7R6ticmag/видео.html

  • @tabinkhan9559
    @tabinkhan9559 3 года назад +2

    Hi sir when you will make a macbeth act 3 video please reply my message thank you sir you are a elegant teacher for English.

  • @passingpoor
    @passingpoor 3 года назад +2

    Is this best for passages as well?

  • @0s7t3
    @0s7t3 3 года назад

    This is an updated version of your previous structure of so Im assuming is either much easier to follow or score more marks..?

  • @ogonna3298
    @ogonna3298 3 года назад +1

    This was really useful 😅

  • @lifeisbeautiful6951
    @lifeisbeautiful6951 2 года назад +1

    Please Can you upload the next video of this PRETZEL please🥺

  • @cricketshorts3880
    @cricketshorts3880 Год назад

    Can we apply this for our non fiction texts paper? In IGCSE EDEXCEL English language A?

  • @胡殷齊-c8e
    @胡殷齊-c8e 20 дней назад

    is this work on gcse paper 1 q2 and q4

  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Год назад

    Thank you teacher, you are a star Amen 🎉

    • @tk11rj
      @tk11rj 5 месяцев назад

      Ai i got a question, say for literature If i'm to write 2 paragraphs for an extract, would I just do the same pretzel paragraph twice but with different quotes? thanks

  • @mj_ldss
    @mj_ldss Год назад

    Got an exam in about 2 hours inshallah this works

  • @bamsibey4240
    @bamsibey4240 3 года назад

    Hey could you do one based on Macbeth and how you should represent him it I am doing bad in grades

  • @Erolsaurus
    @Erolsaurus Год назад

    "Enjoy your pretzel"
    Me eating chicken:
    Awesome video by the way!

  • @aaliyahhhhhhh335
    @aaliyahhhhhhh335 3 года назад +2

    What do you think about the rumours of GCSEs being cancelled ?

  • @shadosman4513
    @shadosman4513 3 года назад +1

    when aee u gona do that vidoe of u doing that pargapgh

  • @ningwlv8313
    @ningwlv8313 2 года назад

    @MrEverythingEnglish can this be used for literature and language

  • @shadowf6304
    @shadowf6304 4 месяца назад

    explain effect on reader?

  • @m2.solo0
    @m2.solo0 3 года назад

    Can you write the paragraph about Jekyll and Hyde please, I have finals in a week

  • @bilushah1
    @bilushah1 3 года назад

    Can you also please do about journeys end , Frankenstein, Romeo and juliet about language and structure paragraphs and overall content or plot summary
    Many thanks

  • @itzshad7359
    @itzshad7359 3 года назад +4

    can u please do a video of that structure and using on the inspector also can u include shelial pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee

  • @StephCurry466
    @StephCurry466 2 года назад

    this vid is very helpful, even when it's 1 year old.

  • @ReviewMania71
    @ReviewMania71 11 месяцев назад

    The spelling of pretzel should be this , am I right?

  • @unrealroblox6249
    @unrealroblox6249 2 года назад +1

    Legend

  • @hamzahwaheed9528
    @hamzahwaheed9528 Год назад

    Is this for english language or literature or both

  • @sadio8127
    @sadio8127 3 года назад +1

    Thank you 🙏

  • @saf1...
    @saf1... 2 года назад

    What paper do we use this on also what questions? 😀

    • @nuradin_4481
      @nuradin_4481 2 года назад

      It improves all of your paragraphs so all of them ig

  • @danielminns8316
    @danielminns8316 Год назад

    Top man thank you 🙏

    • @tk11rj
      @tk11rj 5 месяцев назад

      Ai i got a question, say for literature If i'm to write 2 paragraphs for an extract, would I just do the same pretzel paragraph twice but with different quotes? thanks

  • @rubaasma8689
    @rubaasma8689 2 года назад

    Can this can be used for both lit and lang?

  • @zainthe_c00lkid29
    @zainthe_c00lkid29 Год назад

    Definitely gonna use his structure because I find pearl comfusing

  • @stefansalvas1854
    @stefansalvas1854 2 года назад

    where would you put context?

  • @itzshad7359
    @itzshad7359 3 года назад +1

    thx you so much

  • @isaandhawaa6369
    @isaandhawaa6369 Год назад

    Hi teacher its me Isa Shiraz

  • @raishumsingh8009
    @raishumsingh8009 2 года назад

    Can this work for GCSE Language?

  • @HARSH-ICLOUD
    @HARSH-ICLOUD Год назад

    Thank you

  • @m2.solo0
    @m2.solo0 3 года назад

    Sorry but I didn’t really get the zoom in part could you do that for me please

    • @rohan_n23
      @rohan_n23 3 года назад

      its just zooming into words like adjectives verbs and you then express what they mean or illustrate

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins 4 месяца назад +1

    2:03

  • @innit_yt
    @innit_yt 2 года назад

    'weve been peeing since year 7'

  • @IgIssa
    @IgIssa 2 года назад

    thankyou

  • @w_sffer1658
    @w_sffer1658 2 года назад

    I am gonna sit my exam in like 1 hour 30 mins and I will update this comment to say how I did. Watching this pretZel video
    Update : I hate the extract but was easy to understand + I did ok on question 2,3 and 5 but Q4 no rime

  • @youeverjust
    @youeverjust 2 года назад

    so it's just basically a what-how-why paragraph...

  • @ameerali3515
    @ameerali3515 3 года назад

    Please sir, is it possible for you to mark my English language paper q3. Thanks.

    • @alludeYT
      @alludeYT 3 года назад +1

      Ask ur teacher
      Maybe they could ccause this guy is probably busy

  • @babytaitaii4477
    @babytaitaii4477 3 месяца назад

    i have my mocks tomorrow and im so lost yall don't be like me

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins 5 месяцев назад

    1:26

  • @Asianshadows
    @Asianshadows 3 года назад +1

    Third?

  • @theoneandonlyking707
    @theoneandonlyking707 Год назад

    PEMAZC > PRETZEL

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins 5 месяцев назад

    1:18 vak

  • @aminamustafa2711
    @aminamustafa2711 Год назад

    How to zoom in the words ?🤍

  • @shushshush9310
    @shushshush9310 Год назад

    i will enjoy my pretzel in about 2 hours🥨

  • @HARSH-ICLOUD
    @HARSH-ICLOUD Год назад

    Thank you