And I'm still gonna "waffle" tomorrow. Because if you zoom in on the quote waffle, you'll finf out that waffle is a delicacy to most people so we can't do without it.
is there any way that you can give me any feed back on mine? My first paragraph out pf 4? The writer uses language to present a hyena as horrid, looking and scruffy. "Coarse coat is a bungled mix of colours." This noun phrase gives us an idea of what the hyena looked like and the use of the adjective "bungled" highlights how ridiculous and careless the colours were, almost as if they were plotted on carelessly, giving it a "bungled" look, the use of a simile "none of the classy ostentation of a leopard", shows us that compared to another type of cat, the hyena is incomparable.
Hey sir thanks for your helpful vids! Can you please do romeo and juliet aqa 2023 paper and english lang paper 1 2023 paper as well? Pleaseee and also an inspector calls😭😭
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"that's probably because you're waffling" 💀
And I'm still gonna "waffle" tomorrow. Because if you zoom in on the quote waffle, you'll finf out that waffle is a delicacy to most people so we can't do without it.
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The waffle check
It’s at 6:02
Your essay templates really helped in my litrature paper 1!
Thank you
Sir, is it better to use the priest story or intruder story?@MrEverythingEnglish
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Do you have any workshops on AQA gcsc English equivalency test please
@@Arjannumma1 id use the intruder one because everyine uses the priest
@@haithamkhan4782 alright thanks bro
Hi sir ur predictions may have been incorrect but the quotes were very helpful and I managed to use them a lot
Yes, I do edexcel, and I got violence, almost nowhere related to withces.
@@ukstudent1 did you do 2024 paper?
@@MiddleG007 Yh I did?
the goat has posted! revising for my retake as i failed last year been watching all the vids from last year 👍
Same man hopefully we don't fail again😅
How have you been revising if you don't mind me asking
@@muzaffarchoudhury901 just been watching these and doing past papers and learning more devices etc
Same here
Same
3:09 colourful and black
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Can you please help with questions 3, 4 and 5 for English Language paper 1, please, thanks
hes done it on his channel already abt a year ago
edexcel maths cooked me today 😓
Me as well
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Its the fact that Edexcel Foundation was actually easy my brain just absolute shut down as soon as I started
It was absolutely terrible
@4mel1axo it was nastyyy, paper 1 was meant to be easy 💀
what is the PRETZEL structure? as in what does it stand for
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4:02
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cheers sir
“This hyena is butters” 💀💀
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can you do a video on the effect ?
He already did. Skim through his channel you will find it, i think it was about a year ago.
I hope someone replies to this comment but it the pretzel method for 1 paragraph or is it split into two for 2 paragraphs?
It's used separately in each paragraph, and for question 2 focus on the effect in order to obtain the higher marks.
You do 2 paragraphs. Each paragraph is a full pretzel paragraph. Ur basically doing Prtezel twice
Should you not always talk about Imagery on this question?
"When books were golden, when imagination soared, when the world was filled with stories which ran......" is that rule of three too?
yes
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Your tapped
Brooooooo chem tomorrow
This guys PRTEZEL Structure and the Zoom in video he made a few months ago saved me from grade 5 to 7-8
mine went from 3 to 6
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16 min ago is crazy
@@superr5375 minutes ago is crazzyyyy
@@superr537 what
Do the pretzel paragraphs have to be detailed or basic in terms of completing each of the letters
"room is spacious, COLORFUL, BLACK"????whaaaa
How can a room be colourful and black at the same time?
when its dark
Cheers boss
can we use this for Edexel question 3
Language device is language device no matter whether AQA or Edexcel
How about if i used only one PRETZEL paragraph sir.
You'd get less marks mate
is there any way that you can give me any feed back on mine? My first paragraph out pf 4? The writer uses language to present a hyena as horrid, looking and scruffy. "Coarse coat is a bungled mix of colours." This noun phrase gives us an idea of what the hyena looked like and the use of the adjective "bungled" highlights how ridiculous and careless the colours were, almost as if they were plotted on carelessly, giving it a "bungled" look, the use of a simile "none of the classy ostentation of a leopard", shows us that compared to another type of cat, the hyena is incomparable.
Hey sir thanks for your helpful vids!
Can you please do romeo and juliet aqa 2023 paper and english lang paper 1 2023 paper as well? Pleaseee and also an inspector calls😭😭
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can you do paper 2 in the half term so we are prepeared for it and practice it in the half term
I have PPE today thanks so much
When we zoom in, do we have to zoom in on a single word or can we do a phrase aswell?
you can do both
thanks sir
What is prtezel
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