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Norville 'Shaggy' Rogers - The Keeper. An aspiring inventor that watched 'Ghost Busters' way too much as a kid. Created a way to 'keep' souls after the traumatic death of his dog.
A terrifying opponent who is not above keeping your mother's soul for a week solely to make 'Yo mama' jokes.
Daphne Blake - The Summoner. A young Necromancer that can summon compatible vessels for souls given to her by The Keeper, using her own bones as the catalyst. Takes 13 calcium tablets a day much to the displeasure of her local doctor.
Fred Jones - The Trapper. Young Master to the infamous Jones Family. Inherited his father's passion for trapping with a tad too much fevour. Traps and binds souls to the vessels created by the Summoner in flesh and blood. Hate's changing his shirt.
Velma Dinkley - The Harvester. An abomination that sucks the soul out of everything they touch. 
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My god this took WAY longer than it should've. I think I hate lips now. I know the interest in dunking on 'Velma' has floated away a bit but OH WELL. I still wanted to draw my take on them! Of course with a bit of lore sprinkled on top just for youu~ Hope you all enjoy!
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Norville 'Shaggy' Rogers - The Keeper. An aspiring inventor that watched 'Ghost Busters' way too much as a kid. Created a way to 'keep' souls after the traumatic death of his dog.
A terrifying opponent who is not above keeping your mother's soul for a week solely to make 'Yo mama' jokes.
Daphne Blake - The Summoner. A young Necromancer that can summon compatible vessels for souls given to her by The Keeper, using her own bones as the catalyst. Takes 13 calcium tablets a day much to the displeasure of her local doctor.
Fred Jones - The Trapper. Young Master to the infamous Jones Family. Inherited his father's passion for trapping with a tad too much fervour. Traps and binds souls to the vessels created by the Summoner in flesh and blood. Hate's changing his shirt.
Velma Dinkley - The Harvester. An abomination that sucks the soul out of everything they touch.
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How did she write that in 3 minutes
I just noticed that the whole gang looks deathly pale and corpse like, but “Velma” looks normal. I like that story telling there, like something is keeping her young and vibrant but everyone else looks like they’re getting the life sucked out of them.
Damn I wouldve never noticed it lmao
I don't think their life force is getting drained, I think that's symptomatic of their emotional response to what's going on. Whatever's controlling her, by contrast, isn't upset, scared or worried at all.
I mean the lore does say Velma sucks out the souls of living things. Maybe the rest of them are slowly being drained by it, kinda like a chain smoking type of thing
It’s also hella exhausting trying to cage the beast inside of Velma…
I'm pretty sure it's because they are scared, they can't sleep, they think she'll do something to them.
And probably she already doing something to them...
Velma being possessed makes way more sense than her being an abusive, sociopathic monster to begin with.
To quote Jon Arbuckle, are you /srs or /j?
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@@Ty-cx3gv I quote this meme so much 😭
@@Ty-cx3gv they’re definitely /srs
In a neutral sense
Edit: Then again, you have a good point, this is better if we wanted a good scary adult cartoon
Seeing Velma crying with a smile , acting odd and that all she wrote was "That's not me" over and over make me thinks this might be a nod to the horror movie 'GET OUT' .
I thought it was like Adventure Time when the ice king was about to marry a princess that he cursed.
I don’t know either of those, but I think it most likely is a reference to the famous scene from “The Shining”. You know, the “All work and no play makes Jack a full boy”.
@@stinky1426 I thought it was "dull boy" not "full boy", but I guess I must've been wrong.
@@gracencole2139No, you ARE correct; that commenter likely mistyped
@@LizzieourWorld k
Things i noticed
1. Velma is the only one that starts looking at the camera.
2. Velma starts crying when they open the journal. Possibly meaning she wants help and is hoping that they could help.
3. The tears could be about how her friends care for her
4. She states she is vegan after the comment about the dog. Possibly meaning she ate the dog.
5. She doesn't blink
6. Everyone looks tierd while she looks awake and fine. To the point where she looks creepy
Also the fact her colors are more saturated than the others.
shes demon possessed
Things I noticed.
The video.
Dope ass drawings.
If you look at the harvester art - you see scoobys tag in her stomach.
Also that the tears are yellow, this can mean A) her head is filled with that yellow liquid, possibly the thing that’s controlling her, B) she’s crying blood, but her blood has zero iron on it, which means that the body is dead and being controlled like a puppet
Now THIS is horror. No jumpscares, emotions that feel real, characters that feel alive, it makes you sit on the edge of your seat and a plot that feels mysterious
seriously. this is the kind of horror that needs to become the norm. genuine, real feeling fear. I like Five Nights at Freddy's and things like that, but it just isnt the same as genuine horror like this
Jumpscares can be good though why do so many people hate them
honestly, yeah! if this was the kinda horror that was common, id be able to say that i like horror! but unfortunitly, a lotta "horror" stuff isnt actual horror, just "ooh jumpscare, big loud thing go stomp stomp! oh you have access to a gun and ammo and could easily kill it? no. just no. no reason just screw you."
@@oblozs10 Idk why but I would say probably cause they kill the vibe sometimes?
@@oblozs10 people don’t like them because jumpscares require set up to be good. Like they need a whole buildup but most modern horror doesn’t give jumpscares enough tension for it to be good, thats why it seems really cheap nowadays.
"She offered which was already wierd because she's allergic to them, man"
The way he delivered that line was heartbreaking
The entirety of his part was honestly perfect, the emotion was so strong, and you could feel what was happening :]
Wait. does this mean it is implied she ate something she is allergic to?
@@phantom-ri2tg Velma killed Scoob, bro.
@@Scarlettheredninja Yes I figured eating him would be fatal.
@@Scarlettheredninja RUH RO RAGGY
Shaggy talking about Scooby was very well done. It was like he was slowly spiraling into insanity just thinking about it
As someone that has fallen into insanity over a scarily similar situation. He played it perfectly to the point where I had to smoke a fat blunt to calm down. Sounded exactly like me with my therapist ngl. Kodoos to the actor who showed how truely angering to insanity it is to just not know the truth even though deep down you already know it.
The whole idea of Velma not being normal was really nicely interpreted with her staring into the camera unlike the others who would look around.
the only time she looks away is when she says “I’m completely fine”, and people generally look away from others eyes when they’re lying
You can also see her eyes is in uneven in the end
She LITERALLY fixed the whole Velma show in a 5 minute video
For sure. If you are gonna make an adult version of a kids cartoon. Make it interesting. Velma failed here. But this is perfect.
@@whatswrongwithmybrain Exactly! It would have better if they just made a series that made the "mysteries" of the original series being all in her head, and she was just insane in an insane asylum it would have been better.
a child could fix that show in 2mins lol ney just smashed the universe into species and built a better space time continuum
@@electrobob992 To be fair if velma was'nt as bad as it was everyone would have hated that with how it trivialises the entire series. But as it is now yeah it would be better.
I believe this is called "speedrunning"
I love how, in a weird and creepy way, Scooby is still the main protagonist without even existing anymore. He's the reason why everyone got together to talk about Velma, and he's on a drawing with all of them. It's a really creative way to take him out, without actually taking him out.
Something like this is what they should've done in Velma if they really couldn't use Scooby, maybe his disappearance could've been their first mystery
agree while Scooby isn't here physically his presence is very much felt and noted
@@cottoncandyswirl8289 yeah, if they had put some effort, the original series could have done something cool
But you know... Unfortunately hbo seems to only want fast money over making a good series 😭
I think Scooby was quite literally "taken out" in this version.
If you read the descriptions in the pinned comment that kind of is him just in different stages of their necromancy process.
"THAT'S NOT ME" over and over and over again... this hit me in the throat. imagine the sheer desperation of being possessed and the only thing you can do is write in a book while whatever possessed you is sleeping... filling the ENTIRE book top to bottom, front to back with the only thing you need people to know
There was a little boy, years ago, whose personality changed completely. His mother took him to several doctors, and they all diagnosed him with different mental disorders, and medications as I recall. Nothing changed. Then one day, he walked up to his mother and handed her a sheet of paper, with one word written on it:
“HELP”
Turns out, he had streptococcus, which triggered an autoimmune response that was attacking his brain. Thankfully, they were able to save him and he returned to normal, but it likely would have killed him before long.
There was another animation which keeped the creepy atmosphere like this one, this time with scooby doo being a sentient monster, pretty freaky stuff. I love how the community has turned this shitshow of a TV show into the most anxiety inducing animations ever
Edit: the animation I mentioned is called velma meets the original velma by avocado animations
Oml, thank you. I mixed up this video and that one together in my head and thought they were the same vid. So when I came back to watch this and didn't see the terrifying Scooby-Doo and nobody talking about it, I was sooo confused and thought I was going mad. Lmao
Knowing the real velma was still able to witness what she did with the dog is SO HORRIFYING
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@@RinkachiVilar what
@@criqket probably the likes or something
It was the real Velma who was crying because she KNEW what happened to Scooby.
@@sparklingsn What happened to scooby?? What I miss?
Love the part where Daphne explains she’s seen what mental illness is and that Velma is different. The way she says it is so foreboding. Props to the VA
Reminds me of the times she talks about her mother having mental breakdowns every once in a while in mystery incorporated
lol
@@Pastelpurplecryptid her occasional odd comments about her parents (mostly her mother I believe) were interesting ngl.
@@Pastelpurplecryptidnever seen much of that series (due to the shows being random but the same on my tv) so I don't know any info about the characters.
But Daphne knowing what the symptoms look like because of her mother is a good detail.
@@twist_ending7545 not just her mother, she also said that her dad was left alone in the house for 1 week and they found him crawling around naked or something? 💀 It's a miracle she turned out as stable as she did lmao
Not gonna lie, your versions of them look better than the original. Like, Velma for example, her design reminds me of a sweet little girl that won't harm a fly. Actually adorable.
Yes. The lines are smoother somehow. She has those big eyes like what other versions of Velma imply with her glasses. The glasses here are like a mask to hide behind. And I love that in her character design. Large eyes are associated with innocence and curiosity. There are also eyes wide in fear like they can’t believe what they’re seeing. Like, this Velma knows her situation and she’s so afraid and desperate. She’s so cute and looks just so sweet. Like, it’s tragic that this little lady has been possessed. And the body horror of eating your friends dog with no control over your own body. Gosh.
Yeah, all of them look so much nicer. Ig I wouldn’t have minded the race swapping if THIS was the style lol. And also if the writing was good ofc.
I like how the message of Velma having killed Scooby Doo is both literal in their world and figurative in our world.
It's funny how this is the second animation I've seen that actually added some interesting lore to Velma and made me wish so badly this was cannon.
I see you've also watched the funny avocado man's animation
Well on this channel this is canon, thank our lord and savior Neytirix for this gift to the mortal realm
Jokes aside I haven't watched any of Velma, the reviews other YTers have done have been more then enough for me so I can and will pretend this is canon because I like Ney's story writing way more then most shows ^^'
what's the first? I've seen meatcanyon's comedic twist, which was great.
@@discordiacreates6669 Same.
funny avocado man reference
The "serious adult animation" that we all actually wanted
@@p-__ I'm Sorry I need you to run that by me again
@@p-__ How little attention do you get in your life?
@@p-__ ?
@@p-__ Ok at least the stupid "My videos are better" comments actually make sense 💀
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what the fuck, say that again i don't think i get it
Was not expecting to go there with Daphne accidentally mentioning her Mom's mental illnesses-
and wow this concept is cool, Velma being possessed like this makes for such an interesting story.
I love how they all managed to have the iconic "SB" symbol of Scooby's collar along with their own "created version" of Scooby, Shaggy has the ghost of a dog, Daphne has bones that resemble the ones of a dog, Fred has literaly a flesh dog with the Scooby colar, and Velma (most likely) ate a dog
Seeing all the characters talk about her, then her showing up all smiley creeped me tf out, like the bald guy from silence of the lambs, also very very nice
You mean "Hannibal"?
The bald guy
The bald guy...? Are you referring to... Doctor Lecter? He's a man of taste, I'm pretty certain that he would have a hard time, uhm, swallowing your description.
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Just…. Wow!😲
Neytrix is so unbelievably good at writing horror, it’s truly stunning, turning a show everyone hated into something actually truly enjoyable
Oh~ Most definitely~
I wish they did this instead
I thought you said Netflix
It's Velma done right
That's true dude. So true.
honestly the best thing to come out of the velma show is how many people have taken to redesigning the characters in much better ways, and making the story what it was originally supposed to be. The people of youtube gotta rise up and make a webseries about this to give them justice.
Questions I would be super stoked to see the answers to:
What was Daphne’s mom like in this storyline? ‘Cause all signs certainly point to a horrible experience.
What kinds of things did the group gang get up to prior to the possession? I know Fred said a little bit about the whole setting up traps in haunted houses, but that’s mainly him, I would think. And they’re all in high school rather than working together as a business, so it’s more like them hanging out casually and I doubt they always were doing paranormal-related stuff. How did all of them meet even, and become such close friends?
What exactly is Velma’s demon? All we know about it is that she seems to have “contracted it” (for lack of a better phrase) after the gang went looking for some cove of crystals and she went missing for a full day.
What are Velma’s limitations as far as her possession? She seems to have slight control if she’s crying after the therapist brought up Scooby and her writing “That’s not me” in the journal she gave him.
If, based on the posters, Shaggy has the soul of Scooby, Daphne has the bones, and Fred has the flesh, what does Velma have?
Is there any significance to how Shaggy said Velma was allergic to dogs and when Velma said she was tearing up because of her “allergies playing up a bit”?
Are there gonna be fight scenes? Like with Velma and/other people/demons? I’m pretty sure Shaggy had to katanas on his back and some glowing grenade-looking things. That would be SO cool.
Going by the posters and the descriptions of the characters by Neytirix, is Scooby going to come back reanimated by Shaggy, Daphne, and Fred? Would that process give him the ability to talk and do some of the things he could in the original shows?
God there are SO many cool ways this premise could be developed!
I thought Velma had control over Scooby's organs (which would include the skin)
It was kind of a running gag in Mystery Incorporated that Daphne's parents were "weird", so it's cool how that actually got worked into the lore here.
@@willofthewinds3222 "harvester" brings eating/jaw imagery to mind for me, so maybe she's a devourer with control over Scooby's teeth?
she ate the dog man
@@error-try-again-later i think it means she 'harvested' scooby doo. devoured him and broke him into parts for the others to use. Its an intersting implication that the thing isnide of velma, while horrific, has a purpose, and did this to empower them to fight something. Could even be its about as benevolent as something like this can be, it wants to help but it has such little comprehension of humanity that this is its idea of helping.
I love how a 5 minute has more personality and writing than an entire show with budgeting
Yeah they shoulda given Neytirix the budget, and we maybe woulda gotten a good show
Yeah better than Netflix adaptation
@@averageytviewer6893 she might turn VELMA into a horror/dark cartoon which is sound interesting
She pretty good at doing a horror stuff
@@seikotheserval5341 This is horror? Am I a psychopath or is everyone else in the world just a massive pussy?
I love how Velma’s got the most vibrant colours of the video, makes her feel even more out of place
EXACTLY WHAT I WAS THINKING, the first thing I noticed though was the eyes, bright, gleeful, energized, she’s not the real Velma, though it has her skin
@@megeelee I think whatever has Velma is sharing a body with her. She's still there and conscious but it has more control but can't see
Also she doesn’t move almost at all. All of the others, even if they aren’t moving as much as Shaggy was, they still had small moves to accompany their speech, but she was almost completely still besides handing the journal over and the slight eye movement she makes when saying “completely fine!” It’s got a large amount of uncanny value in it and it’s fascinating to see it done in such extremely subtle ways.
Her eyes also look very wide and fearful even though she's smiling. The other characters had more realistic expressions so it sticks out.
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On some real shit, this has got to be the creepiest part, aside from Velma. The way she just goes silent and stares for a moment is just fucked
THIS is how the new Scooby-Doo should have been. Darker, more twisted. SERIOUS. Like there's actual weight to the stakes at hand.
A big detail thats easy to miss is that Velma isn't exactly "gone" as the other gang members claim. Whatever is inside her is controlling her body to an extent but it seems like she's still alive and concious.
She started crying when the interviewer said her friends are worried about her, and she wrote on the diary "Thats not me" repeatedly so others would notice, which also confirms the *thing* inside her cannot see.
Or it CAN see but can only control her temporarily and she wrote her journal while it wasn't present.
@@ODSTD56 I think it would've gotten rid of the journal if it knew
@@elajzcz6651 good point and probably a Crystalline fungus that gained sentence by devouring parts of the brain wile leaving the consciousness of the host and the host probably still have a limited control on her hands and Scooby has been probably devoured by the creature that is controlling velma
I just love deep and dark story it just hooks you in and only release’s you when you’re done
@@ODSTD56 Or it’s illiterate and thought it would be suspicious if nothing was written down so let Velma actually write something.
@@tonyhakston536 hmmm that’s probably it
I never expected the phrase “Oh, definitely not, I’m vegan!” to be so scary given the context. I hope these characters make some more appearances in other videos of yours, as this was thrilling!
Vegans can be pretty scary sometimes...
@@kyuokuo you see the scary thing is that she jumped to that of all things
She ate Scooby-Doo 💀
@@p-__ How little attention do you get in your life?
It took me a few seconds to realize "Why would she reply that ?" and, OMG, the implication is horrificly good.
creepy part about this? Velma saw everything. LIKE SHE SAW WHAT HAPPENED TO SCOOBY.
I love the way you portrayed Fred. Hes not a jerk like in the Tv show. He deeply cares for Velma and even says he is in her friend group. I think thats amazing. Good work love the art and animation. I think i have watched multiple times in about two days. Keep up the good work. Love your videos.
I love that each one of them has a piece of Scooby. Shaggy has his soul, Daphne has his skeleton, Freddy has his body, and Velma has.. the remains.
She is the harvester after all
Don’t you know? She’s Vegan…
I think the scooby piece on Velma is skin or organs I think?
@@Raider_Zero she harvest the dog
and what was left was divided between the other three
The remains? In what way?
Edit: Never mind, I get it now.
If you did a web show of this. Just interviews of her progress or any sort I feel like it would be a bigger hit then the train wreck that is Velma. I love your designs for the interviewed and the magazine covers so much better.
Seeing each of them contributing to Scooby. Shaggy with the soul, Daphne with the skeleton and Fred with the muscles and organs.
With them saying that she’s different I like to see that Velma once could have provided the skin. The Sealer? She’s often seen as the more level heading of the group, keeping everything together? I don’t know but still, bloody amazing as always anyway.
Proof that the characters Mindy DESIGNED are still useable. Just not the horrible show writing.
I know right, they made a comedy action show that didn't make sense, man I want a serious one pls ik it's 2023 but this is fire
Im not angry about the character designs, im annoyed. It’s just the absolute shit writing
I mean, the raceswap in the show was pointless, but usually people that change the races of preestablished characters do horrible writing because they have the creative talent of a boulder
Now if it was "horror show" writing, we might be onto something.
@@lagartopunkarra Yea 9/10 race swaps of poorly written characters is so they can get away with laziness essentially.
The part were shaggy was like “it doesn’t make sense he should still be there but there’s nothing” gave me straight up chills down my whole body
Part of me wonders if he has any cameras inside his house, and if he does that makes it so much more terrifying that he doesn’t know where Scooby went
@@strangeacelegume he said his place had cameras, along with his neighbors, and since he also mentioned that they didn't leave once meant he checked the cameras and saw nothing happening.
yet Scooby wasn't there when he arrived, so it's pretty bone chilling terrifying
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I mean... am I the only one getting the obvious hint that she ate him? Or devoured/harvested in some other way.
Mostly because either Scooby is somehow hidden in the house and Shaggy cannot find him - but the fervent "He's not there" from Shaggy seems to imply he really isn't there - otherwise him being hidden would be sort of a letdown "No actually he is there." "Oh"
So if he's not there theres really only a couple way he could have gone, namely down the drains or inside well.... you know.
Which is perhaps again hinted at when Velma is asked about her "having a Dog"... And he first instinctive response is she's vegan. Now obviously - making fun of the "vegans will always tell you theyre vegans" stereotype is likely. But more likely, especially with how taken aback the psychiatrist is - is that Velma's first thought was genuinely of having... eaten Scooby. Her tears after this moment could also perhaps be "for Scooby", assuming as we see after - that "this" is not the real Velma. And that the real Velma had to watch whatever has overtaken her... eat her friend's dog... Tears, would be appropriate I feel.
Then again - could just be that she was crying over what a pathetic mess was made out of the show :p God knows thats also a tragedy worth spilling tears over xP
Same
This... is actually pretty interesting. And not just because comparatively ANYTHING is 10000x more interesting than Velma, I mean this is legit a really good concept and I'd watch this as a show.
Also love the subtle hints that Velma is trapped in her own body and she's trying to warn everyone that she's possessed. From writing "that's not me" in her journal to crying. Cool ass concept.
I like the detail in the opening section that Velma is coloured more saturated than the others. Shaggy, Daphne and Fred have these dim and greyish colours like their surroundings blending them in, but Velma is coloured much more harshly and stands out much more than the others, this differentiates her from the others, implying something is wrong.
There's so much more in this video and the illustrations that come with it, i'm honestly amazed by the work put into these videos. ⦿◽︎⦿
you literally created a more compelling story in under 3 minutes than the entirety of "Velma." If they wanted to elevate scooby-doo to an adult audience, what you did there would have been a MUCH better way to do it. Kudos
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@@ShantesTravelThingsyou got a better idea, buddy? C'mon, we all know you've got more in you than just an eyeroll. Share with the class!
saying "it's better than Velma" doesn't mean anything. if the bar is wedged between the floor tiles, even a coin could roll over it.
i am being a pedant, but otherwise yeah this shit is good!
Velma isn't cannon because there's no Scooby doo
@@9Jaker9 Never said it was cannon. The creators said they wanted to "elevate Scooby Doo to an adult audience." and in order to do that, they got rid of scooby, among other terrible decisions.
Honestly the creepiest part of this that gives it a good horror factor is that all of Velma's friends are distressed. Each looking like and sounding like they are the breaking point or completely given up. Yet all of their distress is because of Velma, then when we finally see her, she seems the most stable till you hear the off handed "no I'm vegan" then the notebook.
It would be a good story to explore, where no one believes them because Velma's false persona points to her being the normal one and them being the crazy ones, combine that with the fact no one is going to believe supernatural events.
ohhhhhh!! and then they transform themselves to try and capture her all the while Velma sheds her human form bit by bit. Hence the drawings at the end.
@@enzo4164Yea, and she keeps that unsettling smile the whole time too.
At first I was thinking that given they labeled a bunch of disorders on her people would not be viewing her as normal. but thinking on it that could be part of the trick. As it slowly learns to act more human it would pretend it is the result of the drugs. and this would further make people disbelieve her as it could be seen as them interfering with her recovery.
The sad thing is that Mystery Inc still cares about Velma and each other adding another level of tragedy to the whole thing.
She also didn't blink once.
Bro the fact the real Velma is still conscious is a really cool fact, Velma crying and the writing saying it’s not her trying to message people
They could genuinely make a great adult horror story using Scooby-Doo characters. Not every villian in the Scooby-Doo universe is just some clown in a mask. Actual ghosts and demons canonically exist in the verse and the Mystery gang has even encountered them.
The show could literally start with this premise that Velma encountered a spirit/demon who was too tough to defeat and just straight up possessed her.
You see, THIS is the kinda spin the series needed, the way you portray the characters and little quirks or nicknames, it leaves its own story interpretation to be held, its a billion times better than what was regurgitated by Mindy.
Agreed. I WISH we got this
*Regurgitated*
We need a Scooby-Doo series set in a grim-dark/horror setting, preferably with the gang's work being hampered and covered up by glow in the dark federal agents.
She made the characters look fire, she changed the plot, and she kept their designs. This is a show I would 100% watch.
fr Im stealing the trapper idea for D&D, that sounds like a really good concept.
@TheRealPyrocinical96 Absolute Unit honestly all of them would make for perfect PC's in a horror setting.
@@forgetfuldullahan5468 Fr thou like a Tank/Summoner hybrid with stuns in d&d sounds like a very interesting and cool idea.
Agreed 100% would watch a show based on these characters
i'd definetly watch a show like this, a darker scooby doo that. instead of fake ghost stuff they are facing real paranormal horrors to keep the world safe from the shadows.,
This would make a very interesting premise. When the gang went to the Crystal Cove, Velma went missing. She would be found the next day.
Unknowingly to the rest of the gang, some entity from the cave has possessed Velma. Possibly causing her to go on a murder spree with Scooby being the first victim. She would later on kill other residents of the town.
Fred, Shaggy and Daphne have to find a way to save Velma before things get worse.
I've rewatched this so many times now. They animated intro with great voice acting, the way the song and speedpaint are edited together, and of course, THE ART ITSELF- fantastic, I would love to see these as posters.
Also gotta love the concept, I would totally watch an adult Scooby-Doo show with this kind of concept, so much better than the garbage we were given.
Each of them having a aspect of scooby honestly fits.
*Shaggy* the one who always bumps Heads with the supernatural first, the closest to him, has his spirit
*Daphne* the one who completes the group, who is always there to find the keys to solving the mystery, has his skeleton
*Fred* the one who always makes the plan, the one who carried them to victory, has his muscles
*Velma* the one who always figures out the truth, the one who always makes sense of the mysterious, -has his skin-
I concur except with Velma one. She figures out how everything actually works, the truth so she has his organs. That includes the skin.
@@3triplezero0 the joke with velma's "thats not me" is that yes, she is a skinwalker. right on brother.
Holy crap, I love the interpretation!! But also @@3triplezero0 is right, Scooby's complete set of organs (including skin) is what makes her look so much like a biological mutilation.
The skin that holds everyone in there proper places ;)
I like that the metaphor for velma being a skinwalker not only ties her to an aspect of the missing mystery scooby
and like the other commenter she holds people together, but its also of course because velma IS AN IMPOSTER
SHES SUS
THATS NOT MY VELMA
HASHKHSOFJAHGFUERTAG NOTMYVELLLMMAMAAA
A
* twittergasm *
velma saying she's vegan in response to having a dog is funnier than all of the jokes in the show
I mean more horrifying in context
omfg I _just_ got that, lmao
@@springfaux6991 true, true, but it's still pretty funny
i get it, and i wish i didnt
That means she eat the dog, right?
Wow this is much more interesting than the actual show
WHY DID YOU DO THIS?? THIS INTEREST ME EVEN MORE THAN THE ORIGINAL SCOOBY DOO. Now I'm here craving for it. Different race and color or not, THEIR DESIGNS ROCK! I especially love Shaggy. With that cigarette and uniform he looks so cool! Daphne's pointy eyes goes super hard with her uniform! Fred's traps looks very scary in this version, wow. The world they live in actually having suparnatural things like soul catching, necromancy, the ability to create blood and flesh... Not to mention the "weird" Velma still being part of the team... IT'S SO INTERSTING, IT'S NOT FAIR! I DEMAND AN ACTUAL SHOW OUT OF THIS! Please... :(
Two things :
1) Its great how you implemented fact that "new Velma" is just impostor pretending to be her, and explained why theres no Scooby anymore.
2) Face animations are fantastic.
So slight changes cause faces to show such diverse emotions.
It's quite a bit worse than that I think. It's not an impostor but a being that took her over. She is still alive in there but trapped behind the monster.
@@redholm that was what I thought. Judging by the diary having a message the real Velma is in there still.
@@Hi-kw5xf And her tears. Like the Monster didn't have 100% control over her entire body. Just the "main" parts.
Seconds in and already is better than the entire series lmao
Literally, anything is better than the original series
Bro it's like comparing gourmet to scraps. Of course this is better, but so is anything else
you can say that again
@@notme9915 A n y t h i n g.
being a facebook moderator and having to witness the worst humanity has to offer is still better than the Velma series.
Careful, u might hit ur ankle with such a low bar
Norville’s voice is perfect
This is a lot more interesting than that other velma eldritch horror fan video. Both yours and that one is very well made & brilliantly executed. I like this take better, it seems to keep the spirit of the characters in tact while exploring a new grim telling of them. I hope you can make this into a full story. I am intrigued on if the gang saves velma or survives or succumbs to the spirits.
Let's be honest, when Velma said "i'm vegan!" The line truly gave me chills to the bones.
The implications and context of that shit legitimately got me to rewind just to make sure I heard correctly
Vegans are scary
Can someone explain
@@ezekielshorizon6she ate scooby
As soon as Shaggy said his dog was gone but that it couldn't have just ran away because of the cameras I knew where this was going... doesn't make it any less terrifying
I love how each member of the gang has a part of Scoob but also have his name tag, Daphne with the bones, Fred with the flesh, Shaggy with the soul, and Velma with *anything that was left*
What would be left? His dignity?
@@linnysucksaweiner I feel like ur joking but his skin, teeth, etc. 😭
@@CemeteryDxll Fred got the flesh so the skin is out and Daphne has the bones meaning the teeth are out
@@linnysucksaweiner basically yeah
@@CemeteryDxll so there's nothing left 🤷
I am now, as always shocked how well your content alternates between funny, wholesome and downright disturbing.
This is my headcanon.
They're lying, bending the truth to make it coherent ("Scooby" being eaten being one of them). They found a way to summon demons and accidently dug a hole too deep for them to fill, the demons scattering all over the state. An especially powerful one possessed Velma and promised it would return their friend alive and mostly unspoilt under one condition.
Clean up the mess they made.
To me that doesn't make sense because why would they go to the police and not a priest to excite the demon from her body
@@simonealexis3062They went to a group therapist I think, not the police.
I like that,when velma says "completely fine" her eyes move's a bit, indicating that,in somewhere, velma is still here, giving us signs of the lies of the creature.
freaks me out how it went up, like she was getting possessed.
@dReliq that's the premise of this whole story
This is giving "velma meets original velma" vibes and i'm loving it!
I think this is goin to be very creepy
"Terror Scooby" making tweaks.
I saw that little video and I was thinking I would have loved to see that as the actual concept instead of a bad teenage angst and drama
One is a critic to the state of decade old franchises while also being a story of a eldritch creature wanting to have a happy life with mortals he loves but one of this mortals just refuses to forget and let the mistery unresolved yet the beast can help himself but to still love her despite she’s the cause of everything
Meanwhile the other is a history about a gang of kids being ruined by a thing possessing one of them and killing the dog, and a mistery of what are they gonna do next
Is he going to recover form he’s pet loss?
What is her connection with the paranormal?
Are they gonna save her?
One is a critic and a history of a impossible wish and the other is a unresolved history of a tragedy
Avocado studios and neytrix do slightly different types of horror, but they’re both amazing!
Bruh Neytirix made Velma look prettier than she actually looks in the original cartoon 💀
When Fred talked about losing Velma in a cove full of crystals (keep in mind I managed to avoid watching Velma) lemme just point out there was an episode from Be Cool where they lost her in a cave of crystals and she went crazy
I feel like the bright side of this situation is that Velma knows that she’s possessed. And even so, she can still take enough control of her body to write that message and put it in the envelope and give it to the investigator.
I feel as though the entity controlling her can't read or write so allowed her to write in this situation
The Mandela effect is probably what I think is going on. Probably something morphed her body or mind into something else or made her into an alternate. This theory sounded better in my head
Edit: I’m not surprised everyone is crucifying me in the replies so I will apologize for my lack of knowledge of the Mandela catalog and I hope this won’t start a war.
@@somethingtv8270 that's not what the mandela effect is at all
@@waffler-yz3gw - Out of curiosity, what *is* the Mandela effect? 8o
@@somethingtv8270 that’s not the Mandela effect that’s the Mandela catalogue
"One of them mentioned a dog you had a few weekends ago."
"Oh no, definitely not. I'm vegan!"
This is what dark comedy should've been
Watched this when it was new. Not surprised the algorithm steered me back to it due to Season 2 (really, the last half of Season 1) of Velma having finally released.
Still loving this.
my god, the detail of everything is so good and the music suits this theme extremely well. well done sir, well done
The way she tears up indicates two things:
1) Velma is still in there trying to fight off the monster from invading her mind and taking over her body, once she heard that the others deeply cared for her, she was heartbroken and moved into tears
2)Shaggy mentions that she’s allergic to dogs, when velma responded to the interviewer about a dog she had, she responds in a way which implies she ate the dog by thinking the interviewer meant if she ate a dog, And when she’s tearing up and says its her allergies, It could very likely be that she’s still eating scooby’s corpse
Or that the true Velma is crying over what her body was forced to do.
@@annieandelsieofarendelle3294 i mean she says "oh no im vegan" in response to the therapist talking about shaggys dog, then right after she starts crying and says its her allergies... which shaggy said she was allergic to dogs
Scooby snacks…oh no…
its both i think.
Oh I thought it was because they weren’t blinking
You all knew things were serious when Norville said "Call me Shaggy."
Taking a tag about the show and turning it into a terrifying short film is actually so smart, dude, oh em gee
I love how the gang (besides Velma) is using an aspect of Scooby Doo. Shaggy was his heart and soul so it makes sense (to me at least) that he would keep Scooby-Doos soul. Fred is a mastermind with traps so using the flesh of a dead animal would be perfect (and I hope shaggy doesn't mind since he has his soul). Daphne being a ( I want to say) necromancer and using Scoobys bones is fitting since she is supposed to be both caring and fierce. Like a rose. Beautiful but dangerous to touch. And Velma well she is the monster.
The skit at the beginning was a hundred times better than the actual show and as always the artwork is absolutely fucking incredible!
People say their art is perfect (which it is), but holy shit, the story writing is just top tier!
@@p-__ sounds like a fetish thing, therefore I choose to stay away from it.
I know this is supposed to be a deep,philosophical,sad animation but I love you for bringing Fred's ascot back
THE HOLY ASCOT!
I don't believe you understand the meaning of the word philosophical.
I wouldn't say deep or philosophical are the words I'd use necessarily, since there aren't really any bigger themes here. The story is just exactly what it looks like it is.
some of y’all really don’t know a joke when y’all hear one, huh.
@@kiddosneakybeaky3934 I do when the joke is actually funny
In Less than 30 seconds you made her more compeling and empathetic then the whole of her show.
You should totally do a Fanfiction Story of this .
God this was impressive. You took Garbage and turned it into an actually tragic horror
“That’s Not Me” scared me and broke my heart.
Same.
Yeah, it’s sad 😢
I like the idea that the original velma is trapped inside a fake velma
Love that everyone is jumping on the "Velma as a Horror" track. Its just so good and at least getting something out of that show.
It makes sense. It is creepy to have someone you know replaced by an imposter and that is what watching Velma feels like.
I wish they leaned into that instead of a shown by a terf with lots of ableism that romanticizes straight up sexual assault (kissing someone who is in a state that's closely to unconscious is sa by definition, especially because even before the state she didn't give her consent (btw even if she did if the person is now not able to that doesn't matter)) and try being "haha white people" while the director hates herself for not being white
0:35 Crystal cove reference
Anyone see the video where Scooby-Doo is a cosmic entity that keeps trying to remake the gang but Velma is always the one the becomes aware that something is wrong with Scooby-Doo? Love it!
Yessssss
The real Velma trying to communicate through the journal and get out of whatever the hell she’s in, is so sad. I love this so much, it’s like she’s trapped in her own body and can only cry. Gosh, it’s so perfect. The art style, the colors, the lip syncing, the frames, how we see it, the art at the end. GOSH. This is literally perfect.
It's like being paralyzed while in agony and your screams of pain don't come out,and instead is someone else saying that you are fine and all you can do is cry and wait for someone to understand.
Also I'm your 500th like 👍
@@xxvery_original_namexx9677 noice, I love your name. And your description. It’s so detailed and creepy, it’s perfect.
One of my worst recurring nightmares is this exact scenario.
Something in the house makes my body go outside and mutilate itself in grotesque ways, including repeatedly jumping from heights until my teeth crack.
Then it marches me back inside and my family is there, and I desperately want to tell them what's happening and to please help, but it forces me to only give a closed-lip smile. Something becomes my pilot, and I can talk about anything except that.
It reminds me of one of the plagues of the God of Pestilence Nurgle: A kind of Zombie infection that transforms your body into a living being independent of you, both your soul and your body are corrupted by chaos and worst of all, you continue Helplessly aware of everything your body is doing, even trying to cry on the inside or trying to scream for help results in a maniacal smile or psycho laugh coming out of your mouth
@@randomasshumanbeing2078 thanks, I've been thinking of writing a story involving this type of stuff for a long time but I'm scared that no one will like it so ur words brightened my day a little : )
Imagine a horror type Scooby-Doo series that actually acknowledges the source material
I believe Scooby-Doo Apocalypse also counts.
New Velma meets Original Velma also counts
Scoobynatural?
Alex Bale's Velma short, also
wdym
Scooby Doo is already a horror series
0:53 woah i have DID and its so weird seeing it out randomly idk
Dayum, they should have hired you instead of that Mindy Fraud.
And just like that, an actually dark, mature, and scary version of the Velma show was born - I'd love to see this in a fully fledged story as all of the crew eventually become monsters but try to keep close to their humanity - each time velma getting further away
Oh my, that sound so cool and seem like something i want to look up to!
If it's like the video then they'd most likely have to fight or trap the one inhabiting Velma.
Yes
Woah
The fact that *Velma* Said “Im Vegan!” Makes me think if she ate Scooby. Because Norville mentions that they didn’t leave the house but couldn’t be found anywhere.
...you don't say
Kinda implied, there.
“Your friends mentioned you had a dog.” “Oh, no. I’m vegan.” That’s some morbid humour, right there.
I think that's what people were meant to think when she said that..
Or she did some sort of ritual
You are definitely one of the coolest artists to ever exist.
Avocado's Scooby vs. Neytirix' Velma needs to happen.
YEESSS
This was brilliantly done, the idea that as friends they liked to solve mysteries and go into haunted houses for fun until one day a place turned out to be REAL and none of them know except velma... amazing all the hints from velma that something is off. The "No, I'm vegan." while crying was truly haunting.
That's the kind of mature spin-off fans were hoping for. A similar feel to the regular Scooby-doo formula but with a dark twist.
Not... what we _actually_ got.
I also love how fred, daphne, and shaggy have parts of scooby with them (flesh, bones and soul). It is quite vague but very interesting, like what happened to scooby, what did velma/or the entity with velma do, what exactly the titles are for and so much more. So much more potential on a youtube art video than what we got on a show out there
@@en9719 I thought that maybe Velma may have eaten Scooby-Doo just because of the I'm vegan comment
THIS should have been the show. Dead ass this is so cool. Everything, down to the pacing and dialog. It’s truly haunting and beautiful.
AGREED!
Yeap
Well if you want something kind of similar to a more darker scooby doo check out scooby doo Apocalypse it's a comic
DUDE If it was i would've watched the hell out of it
Yeah but you actually have to be creative to string a plot like this together. Creativity that Mindy Kailing and a lot of bigwigs lack nowadays
I’m going to be watching this for weeks. Possibly months. 😍 I love this SO MUCH!!! The Scooby-Doo show we wish Velma had been.
THIS I s a series I’d actually watch
Like it’d probably scare the shit outta me, but I’d watch it
this is ten million times better than the actual show so far
10 million times better*
I wonder if its legal to do a parody show
I think the one good thing to come out of 'Velma' are the amazing art pieces like this completely reconceptualizing it into something horrific and amazing.
Have you seen the Velma meets original Velma vid? Its so good.
@@madrex512 Yes, I absolutely loved it.
The placement of the scooby dog tag is unique for each character. For daphne it's in her palm, almost like shes holding a scooby snack. For fred its on the body of scooby as he pets him like previous incarnations have. For shaggy its near his heart. And Velmas is over her stomach.
But wait, what happened?
Come on I’m enthralled, with just this small bit of lore and I need to know more!
Amazing job and I really hope we see these characters again.
I'm so bothered the show wasn't like this. Velma feels like a show with Scooby Doo slapped on for marketing. This feels like an adult Scooby Doo. All of them are so likeable here and so much interest and mystery spawns from 2 minutes. I hope this becomes a series 😍😍😍
Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame
YES please!
well definely a bit exagerated, but it can surely be adapted, i like the dark ghost busters vibe of it.
no
@@aliceramdom.s why, so, SERIOUS?(joker vocie)
The thing I absolutely LOVE about these drawings is the fact that all of them have elements of Scooby that attributes to their powers
Shaggy has the spirit of scooby, along with the tag that he wears
Daphne has a dog(?) skull with scooby's collar tag
Fred has the corpse of Scooby with no skin
And Velma has it all.
I also love the detail that the teeth in Velma's photo seems to be her sweater, it's such a small but neat detail.
Daphne has all bones Scooby
not to mention, scoobys dog tag is in her abdominal cavity (stomach)- which is probably a design choice but, pairing that with the "no, I'm Vegan!" line adds more to it- at least for me.
It goes deeper too, the part of Scooby each of them has relates to the role they play on the team as well!
Daphne has Scooby's skeleton, the carcass that holds everything else together. She is the team's support and the one who funds their adventures. Without her, everything falls apart.
Fred has Scooby's muscles, the motor that drives the body forward. He is the de-facto leader and main "doer" of the team. Without him, the team couldn't function properly.
Shaggy has Scooby's spirit, because he is the emotional core of the team. He is the one who keeps things fun and lighthearted. Without him, the team could technically still function, but it would be hollow and soulless. Fittingly he is also the one with the greatest emotional bond to Scooby.
Its almost like the implication is that whatever possessed Velma devoured scooby and divided him to three pieces. His soul, his bones, his flesh....
Maybe the thing in her isn't malevolent exactly but it is still something... horrifying.,
The fact that "Dog" is at the end of the URL makes this a bit better
Ok...
We need this.
We want this.
We LOVE this.
Take notes Mindy!