Did anyone else just have this burst of nostalgia when he said “line leader”? I don’t know why I completely forgot that they did that in elementary school. I miss those days😂
@@Keecrayton ohh! i thought it’d be something like that, thank you for letting me know. In my school the class leader would by default stand at the front we didn’t have a name for that lol
I mean truthfully a good college essay imo and according to my teachers is to write something random that no one would expect, but it should still somehow relate to you and show *you* as a person (qualities, traits, etc).
ALRIGHT so If I went to ur college or whatever, I could just write something about how my cat gave birth 4 times in 1 year and she's old now with her old child
@@belph1ie Quirky omg! UwU anime waifu/husbando body pillow, ur gay and I cant relate! #Cool #Asthetic #Cant_relate #Snorting_my_dead_ancestors_ashes Edit: "Ur gay" isn't meant to be an insult thanks! :)
My English teacher literally spoke to me about my essay, saying that I should shorten the story I told and add more current news because I didn’t want colleges to think I peaked in the 4th grade 😳 this was an eye opening vid
@@irene-bz2yq be creative I believe in you. My essay which got me into my school was about being a shitty cross country runner, which was true, and it was essentially a story about how much I sucked and didn’t really do anything to change it
@@joesus3529 Yup! The experiences from being a minority is unique from person-to-person, and is heavily tied to identity. Colleges love that shit, although it can get repetitive
@@katieb1049 idk my sister said Hispanic because my grandpa is from the Dominican republic but she’s really white because my dads a massive Jewish person and his genes are only German snd Jewish.
I got a full scholarship by writing about sidewalks. I wanted to transfer to a school in DC because the school I went to was in the mountains. I wrote about how badly I wanted to go; that even the opportunity to be around sidewalks and not dirt trails was exciting. I still included my credentials of course. Anyways, just make it personal but professional.
Is my essay a 'pick me'? For my personal essay i've written about how my childhood has played into my responsibility skills as a young adult today; particularly abuse, and the eventual abandonment in the family which led to me having to grow up and learn many vital life skills pretty early on in life- again, specifically responsibility.
@@thebusybeanhomecafe4035 agree. It’s sounds more like how your bad experiences allowed you to mature and grow as a person. While you didn’t have the best childhood there was some good that came out of it. It’s sounds way better than “my childhood sucked plz let me in the school” lol
I remerber writing once an essay in hightschool and for some reason we needed to write about friendship, at the age of 16! Anyway I write it that way I asked than criticize what people consider friendship to be. Next class my teacher hand me my essay with the line "What you wrote was great, I loved it. But I don't think you have friends so a 4", in my country a 4 is like a B in USA.
If I have to put a time that I was a leader in a college essay, bro I’m screwed. I hated being a leader and was more of a follower. I hated attention and was scared to voice my opinions.
"I've won four honors, been in 5 clubs, been president of 2, been vice-president of 3, been-" Yeah, "Been a homeless person to see what it feels like, been food for the poor, been the principle, and been a good student."
The third one is exactly the same as my brother. He keeps bragging that I haven't done anything to the society and am useless to the economy. So much to say, but I won't now.
The first one was my friend during the low part of his relationship, HE WOULDNT STOP VENTING TO ME, HIM AND HIS GIRLFRIEND BOTH VENTED TO ME. They broke up no long ago and have been pretty quit, knowing them they’re one of them is yelling about squid games and the other is playing Roblox. Bro your like 10 years above the average Roblox players age.
Actually being black, gay, and autistic are LITERAL college essay gold. Put any of those things the right way in ur essay its basically guarenteed any school.
First line of my college essay ... .. My mother is in a psychiatric hospital every day an my father makes faces and gets paid to do that. Two people from the admissions committee hunted me down to tell me, “the first line in your essay MADE me want to read your essay.”
Kay bestie how tf are we supposed to write it then?! Are we supposed to write a creative essay about our interesting life and be ✨quirky✨? As an Asian, education is so strict and competitive we worked our butts off, took up commitments we aren't interested in, just to achieve the perfect "resume rehasher"
Well, i've been acepted to some of the best universities in the UK for a masters degree where the application is not through an exam but through an essay. 1. Think about your course and answer: why am I a good fit for this course? 2. Think about your history and answer: why do I wanna study this course? 3. Think about what you wanna do in your future and answer: how will this course help me in that future? 4. Think about your university options and answer: why is this university the university that will give me what I need? And fill out the rest with examples of your leadership (hopefully recent), your networking abilities, your interests, your hopes and dreams. Stay away from pity parties or the opposite, false confidence. Just be truthful, honest and review your life plan and add how is this going to help you with that plan. Hope it helps.
The last one my SIXTH GRADE HONORS TEACHER-but he says OH YEAH I DID THIS IN COLLEGE INFINITE LEVEL HONORS BUT YALL CAN DO IT UR SIXTH GRADERS 🥰🥰🥰 LIKE HUN NOOOO 😊
Did anyone else just have this burst of nostalgia when he said “line leader”? I don’t know why I completely forgot that they did that in elementary school. I miss those days😂
Wasn’t there also someone in the back of the line? I forgot their name.
@@iforgor5167 the back leader or keeper
could you tell what it means? I’ve never heard of the term but I feel like it was prolly called something else in my school.
@@mockingwizard when the teacher tells the students to line up and the “line leader” is whoever in the front guiding the line.
@@Keecrayton ohh! i thought it’d be something like that, thank you for letting me know. In my school the class leader would by default stand at the front we didn’t have a name for that lol
I mean truthfully a good college essay imo and according to my teachers is to write something random that no one would expect, but it should still somehow relate to you and show *you* as a person (qualities, traits, etc).
My sister made hers about how she hit a sign at a fast food joint she got a full scholarship to nyu
Unrelated but hello genshin guy
@@joesus3529 wow
@@joesus3529 your sisters a chad
ALRIGHT so If I went to ur college or whatever, I could just write something about how my cat gave birth 4 times in 1 year and she's old now with her old child
"Idk im just so different, im very different" gahaha-
You don’t understand. I’m literally so DeFerrNtè
quirky
@@belph1ie Quirky omg! UwU anime waifu/husbando body pillow, ur gay and I cant relate! #Cool #Asthetic #Cant_relate #Snorting_my_dead_ancestors_ashes
Edit: "Ur gay" isn't meant to be an insult thanks! :)
@@randomperson1weekago295 lmao
@@randomperson1weekago295 you forgot the ✋😭🥱💅✋😭🥱
My English teacher literally spoke to me about my essay, saying that I should shorten the story I told and add more current news because I didn’t want colleges to think I peaked in the 4th grade 😳 this was an eye opening vid
Think about blinking
my college essay was completely a made up story LMFAO and i got accepted. but i mean they didn’t have any way of knowing i was lying so
What was it about?
Wish I could be this creative but I know they'd be able to see through it cause I'm bad at lying lol.
@@irene-bz2yq be creative I believe in you. My essay which got me into my school was about being a shitty cross country runner, which was true, and it was essentially a story about how much I sucked and didn’t really do anything to change it
Oh? Any tips?
You can lie as much as you want. As long as you dont lie about the work you did because usually they want references.
When he called nessa barrett out i almost died laughing
My essay finna be like “I just wanna be accepted, also I’m a adopted” since apparently colleges eat that adopted shit up
Best essay trans gay adopted black/Asian woman
@@joesus3529 Yup! The experiences from being a minority is unique from person-to-person, and is heavily tied to identity. Colleges love that shit, although it can get repetitive
@@katieb1049 idk my sister said Hispanic because my grandpa is from the Dominican republic but she’s really white because my dads a massive Jewish person and his genes are only German snd Jewish.
Hopefully you write acepted and not excepted tho. Because excepted means to be left out while acepted means to be let in. Juts FYI
@@luisaramos6862 juts not a word fyi
Ngl The worst kind of Essays series is hilarious 😂
I got a full scholarship by writing about sidewalks. I wanted to transfer to a school in DC because the school I went to was in the mountains. I wrote about how badly I wanted to go; that even the opportunity to be around sidewalks and not dirt trails was exciting. I still included my credentials of course. Anyways, just make it personal but professional.
For my college essay I actually wrote how I absolutely detested the subject and what made it change over time and why I now feel passionate about it
did you got accepted?
Is my essay a 'pick me'? For my personal essay i've written about how my childhood has played into my responsibility skills as a young adult today; particularly abuse, and the eventual abandonment in the family which led to me having to grow up and learn many vital life skills pretty early on in life- again, specifically responsibility.
It's only a pick-me if it sounds like you are trying to make them feel sorry for you.
@@thebusybeanhomecafe4035 agree. It’s sounds more like how your bad experiences allowed you to mature and grow as a person. While you didn’t have the best childhood there was some good that came out of it. It’s sounds way better than “my childhood sucked plz let me in the school” lol
You explained how you grew from the experience, which is good AFAIK
Not the Nessa Barrett 😭😭😭
When I wrote my essay I took into consideration that if it were me I wouldn't waste my time reading something that I didn't find interesting.
Me, who has written all three types of college essays before: 🙃
My parents made me write a resume rehash essay. I hated it but I got into the college I wanted (ASU) so it could be worse.
Most painful are the ones that start with Webster definitions
Wasn’t having the best day but this definitely made me laugh lol 😂
I remerber writing once an essay in hightschool and for some reason we needed to write about friendship, at the age of 16!
Anyway I write it that way I asked than criticize what people consider friendship to be.
Next class my teacher hand me my essay with the line "What you wrote was great, I loved it. But I don't think you have friends so a 4", in my country a 4 is like a B in USA.
I'd be hella pissed off if that happened to me.
Wow. That is honestly so sad 😞
That's fucked
Your teacher is awful!
Wtf, thats messed up!!
When I was at 5th grade, I used "the one who peaked in middle school" type on my first essay.
the third one sounded like ✨gilderoy lockhart✨
My college essay was just submitted an essay of the following or an essay that you had previously written. I did a previously written essay.
"Idk i just think i'm a very broken person trying to live life" ✨NESSA VIBES✨
The fact that the last one was so bad, he didn’t even continue it
Can you post a video of what a good college essay looks like? Your videos are very helpful.
“Your mum would even reject you” got me dying😂😂😂
"Been-" last words of some dude-
If I have to put a time that I was a leader in a college essay, bro I’m screwed. I hated being a leader and was more of a follower. I hated attention and was scared to voice my opinions.
but this trait could let you talk about how you’re a team player who can take direction and work well with others
I donno, a lot of the guys I know that peaked in middle school did better in College than the guys that peaked in high school
‘… even your mom would reject you’
My guy it don’t matter how good it is my mom would still reject me
Are u asian?
The clubs in question..
my mom who would reject a decent one even for the college: dont you say?
So we got the Cry baby essay, the Line cutter essay, and then the guy who was the leader of all the origami clubs and gamer clubs
'If I put In my essay, I put in the hours of work and observance to be become a polymath'
Will they even consider me?.
NOT THE NESSA BARRETT 😭😭🤚
My mom already did.
thank god i never did those
The line leader one got me laughing
I hate that I peaked in 4th grade :(
I think I would be the 3rd type just to the point
"I've won four honors, been in 5 clubs, been president of 2, been vice-president of 3, been-"
Yeah, "Been a homeless person to see what it feels like, been food for the poor, been the principle, and been a good student."
Ngl that peaked in middle one hit me, I would of been like I was high homer roll all of 8th grade
Legend says his still typing til this day
He really called Nessa out. 😂
The cut off I’m done 💀
Here I am watching about college essays after I finish one.
Chad thundercock
Peaked in Middle school
The Nessa Barrett quote 😭😭
The last one was so painful that even the video couldn’t continue reading it.
Imagine writing about peaking in elementary school
The first one had so many ellipsis
You may comment something that you will forget in a few minutes but this RUclipsr may remember your words forever so use words kind
I like the last one, and the second one was kind of funny line leader
The third one is exactly the same as my brother. He keeps bragging that I haven't done anything to the society and am useless to the economy. So much to say, but I won't now.
The first one was my friend during the low part of his relationship, HE WOULDNT STOP VENTING TO ME, HIM AND HIS GIRLFRIEND BOTH VENTED TO ME. They broke up no long ago and have been pretty quit, knowing them they’re one of them is yelling about squid games and the other is playing Roblox. Bro your like 10 years above the average Roblox players age.
I don’t know why but writing about myself is just difficult for me.
My college essay gonna be "I'm black, female, trans, gay, mexican, and autistic". Guaranteed full ride to Harvard babyyy
They gonna reject you 💀
Actually being black, gay, and autistic are LITERAL college essay gold. Put any of those things the right way in ur essay its basically guarenteed any school.
@@mindlessryan7435 yes but if thats just your entire essay and thats it then you wont get accepted
@@Infamous_Kitty nah they'd prolly be like "omg so postmodern, this is art, you're in"
@@realCyng 💀
gigantic run-on sentences. i'm mainly talking about youtube comments, but still notable nonetheless.
I'd probably start with
Throughout my life, it's been a sketchbook, folded pages, messed up sketches, and much more.
Bro the last one 💀 been. beenbeenbeenbeenbeenbeenbeenbeenbeenbeen
Last time I had line leader was in like 3rd grade, also theres no lines in 6th grade
The second is fire
That last one would be me with some adding of personality and spice
The way the video just cuts off at the right time in the end 😂😂
Why am I getting these recommended now 😩 I just turned in my application form last week! These could have helped me a lot
i muted the sound,and when i made the sound bigger he said "youre mom would even reject you"
Moral of the story: dont be sassy, don't act perfect, and dont make plain jokes.
Nessa barret wrote the first one 😫😫
First line of my college essay ...
.. My mother is in a psychiatric hospital every day an my father makes faces and gets paid to do that.
Two people from the admissions committee hunted me down to tell me, “the first line in your essay MADE me want to read your essay.”
The first one... do people actually do that?
the last one is just yapping💀
nessas broken line i am sobbing
Been the president of 2, been vice president of 3 and been 3 kinds of collage essays that are...
The third one just flexes his leaderships in life
Any essays starting with
"Killed a bird once..."
Kay bestie how tf are we supposed to write it then?! Are we supposed to write a creative essay about our interesting life and be ✨quirky✨? As an Asian, education is so strict and competitive we worked our butts off, took up commitments we aren't interested in, just to achieve the perfect "resume rehasher"
Well, i've been acepted to some of the best universities in the UK for a masters degree where the application is not through an exam but through an essay.
1. Think about your course and answer: why am I a good fit for this course?
2. Think about your history and answer: why do I wanna study this course?
3. Think about what you wanna do in your future and answer: how will this course help me in that future?
4. Think about your university options and answer: why is this university the university that will give me what I need?
And fill out the rest with examples of your leadership (hopefully recent), your networking abilities, your interests, your hopes and dreams.
Stay away from pity parties or the opposite, false confidence. Just be truthful, honest and review your life plan and add how is this going to help you with that plan.
Hope it helps.
@@luisaramos6862 Thank you so much for the advice 🥺 college and uni applications always stress me out. I wish u all the best in your studies/work ✨❤️
I’m gonna try the 2nd one wish me luck
This is the 1st time that I’ve ever seen it say 100k usually it’s more or less but for u I think it should be like 500k - likes
not gohar shading nessa Barrett 😭😭😭😭😭😭
Wait you had line leaders in middle school I would just run out of the door like everyone else
You forgot me the robot with nothing interesting and just pure monotone
Put “I can throw a ball far”
Jokes on you, I don’t need essays to get rejected…
My essay would be "dawg i don't know how i got here lol"
I feel like I would do the last one
The last one my SIXTH GRADE HONORS TEACHER-but he says OH YEAH I DID THIS IN COLLEGE INFINITE LEVEL HONORS BUT YALL CAN DO IT UR SIXTH GRADERS 🥰🥰🥰
LIKE HUN NOOOO 😊
Last one probably me
The fact that you cut the last one out- 😭😭
Legend says the last guy kept typing
legend says he's still talking about what he's done
And you didn’t have to cut me off-
Been part of five clubs, been president in 2, been vice president in 3, been- Three kinds of college essays
You need to make videos about middle school topics like this, cause I'm in middle school and need tips.
I feel like I would do the last one only it would be very short
"I WaS tHe LInE lEadER"
IDC YOU GONNA MAKE ME LUAHG YOU PUT THIS IN ANYTHING YOU WRITE
So what should an essay be like
I swear to god I'd believe that most gen z that are applying for college uses the pick me essays, they're just that miserable
The first one would work in America
i would apply to a college just to tell them that im too good for them with no intention of ever going to any college ever
I think my writing skills aren’t up there but thankfully it’s not down there either
Nice video!