''The Day the Salesman Came to my Door'' | TERRIFYING EXCLUSIVE NEW STORY FROM THE VAULT
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- Опубликовано: 22 сен 2024
- ''Exactly, miss. You're fine but fine isn't good. And good isn't great. What you need and so well deserve is something better. Something...''
This one fits the old adage perfectly: be ever so careful of what you wish for, as you might just get it!
I'm still exhausted after my marathon 2-hour narration last Friday, so I hope you can be satisfied with a shorter offering this evening. This one is deliciously evil, but also a little bit heartbreaking.
I'm back with you, as always, on Wednesday and I'll be resuming my 'extreme Wednesday' schedule. See you again soon, my lovelies...
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From an original story by Miss Lau [original title: 'Mr. Salesman'], kindly shared directly with me for the express purpose of having me exclusively narrate it here for you all:
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Background music by Dr. Creepen van Pasta (freely available for use by other Creepypasta / No Sleep narrators):
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Video - ‘Waiting for Inspiration’ by Luis Lodos; used in adapted form under the conditions of the Creative Commons CC BY-SA 3.0 license:
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That was a very interesting and subtly creepy story. I love a good build up and this one delivered. Great job Doc.
glad you enjoyed it :-)
I could listen to you read the nutrition labels on bread... You're just so relaxing!! Thank you!
you're very welcome!
Thanks for making my day better yet again doc.
my pleasure!
Well what did she agree to? Wonderful story dearest Dr. I do love when you voice the bad guy, that delicious purr in your voice! Mmmmmm! Till Wednesday dearest Dr.
really nasty one coming up next
Dude, you could persuade somebody to dry hump a goddamned beehive after hucking a few rocks at it with that damn accent of yours. 😆 Freakin verbal silk or something.
As always thanks for the much needed escape into the strange and unknown, Doc.
Thanks for the kind words... quite a disturbing thought, though!
Toaster Drewdle I want a meet and greet. King Spook and others too. We all need this! :)
Dr. Creepen But eloquent nonetheless hahaaha
A meet and greet? Like some sorta convention?
Hell, I’d be happy with some sorta mega collab between all the masters. These stories fuel me.
Also, at least the good Doc knows the power he wields and thinks twice about using it for such...strange ends I suggest. 😆
Toaster Drewdle Haha indeed he does >-< but yeah a meet up would be amazing... I am forever hopeful ^-^
Ooooo that was delightfully wicked. That knife twist at the end though...brutal.
definitely an evil one
Hello Dr. Just wanted to say i listen to you nearly every night while i work and i hope you keep the stories coming.
nice story tonight!!! cheers dr creepen !!! This story so far is doing great as always,cant wait to see how this ends!!!!
My dark darlin u make Monday's something to look forward to.
Love ur voice. Its the last sound I hear tonight. Pleasant nightmares😉
and to you!
I never would have let the slimy " demon " inside the house, " IT " could have drowned outside in the rain for all I cared!
wise decision!
Thank u again for the great story. I appreciate your hard work and it's very, very appreciated
Moral: don't screw the door-to-door salesman!
absolutely
Thank you dear Doctor. Hearing your stories help clear the horrible drugery of daily life.
Crystal BlackHeart true
Damn son! I just left my family temporarily but still quite a long time for a better future. This story just messed me up, but I'm sure as hell so greatful to not have such a horrible experience.
"His suit was as dry as an old lady's private parts". That's simultaneously the funniest and grossest thing I have ever heard...
The Dr. should have far more subscribers. THE best narrator on YT
I get THE PROPOSITION story feel from this🤗🤗🤗🤗
That reminds me... :-)
I thought for sure that the baby would be dead or a mutant or something, apparently the baby turned out to be a mutant after all, mr. salesman is born again!
never goes away that damn salesman!
he was probably a demon that needed a human form to make his will manifest so he goes to people and grants them their wishes, filling their lives with misery in exchange for granting their one true desire// oh and this is where the black eyed children come from, i guess.
Great Power Cool!
Mr. Sexy, you could sell anything and someone would buy.
Thank-you for giving something special to look forward to after the work day.
my pleasure as always!
Amazing story loved every moment great job
Loving the nod to final destination 😁
yep!
A veritable Monkey's Paw kind of deal. Well done.
I needed a moment with my Limoncello (a bit sinister around the lemonade part 🍋) & another moment to be glad that you've not taken up door to door evil salesmanship...we'd all be doomed! 😥
Limoncello eh?
Rainy day. spiked tea on the back deck with the Dr. 😏
Hey Dr. Creepen
Love your stories and voice
very kind of you :-)
Hello Dr. I'm excited as always to listen to your voice and most importantly and likely an awesome story. I love love love the stories you pick to read to us. So far there has been only one in the mass of stories I haven't been a fan of. But I trust you!
CrazyStellaRockin Did you ever listen to him narrate the Doors of Stone?
Wow!! That’s some next level super villain shit!!
totally!
Fantastic as usual!
Just right to get the week off to a great start!! Rest those vocal cords for Wednesday!
Beautifully done doc like always.......🌹💗💋
thank you :-)
The doctor has the cure to my blue mondays!
I try my best!
Someone needs to "escape"...He he he. Very nice story!
yes!
Dr. Creepen, watch a movie called Demonic (2015). You will understand the “escape”.
Thank you for your time and effort , you help me not lose my shit while at work.
glad to help!
Better late than never (goddamn temperamental internet connection!)...
Time to sit back with my bowl of ready-brek...and listen.
Doesn't quite have the same ring to it...
Hi doc! Hope you are great, have an awesome weekend!
and you!
Great story dr. Your voice lulling and crisp as always 🖤
enjoy!
I always wander why I'm sleeping in class....oh wait, its because of your lovely voice work Dr.Creepen. Much love from the poet.
Seems the closer the weekend get's the more time i have to watch your vids, Doc! Thanks much! ^^
As always a great narration .
You could literally sell ice in Anartica .
I am really glad to see your subscription numbers getting higher and higher , you definitely deserve them .
But I have to wonder , will you remember all your fans that have been with you since the early times?
Just a little jab , as I have noticed that the more subscribers channels have the less they respond .
Either way I hope for nothing but the best .
I really try my best to maintain my relationship with all you guys... it saddens me that I don't have enough hours in the day to reply to everyone!
well that was a twist wasn't it.can't wait for the next one loves to you and yours dr.
THAT SALESMAN WAS NOT NICE !!!
I’m hooked!!
👍👍Almost caught up Doc💜💟
What up! Hope your Monday is going well
same to you!
The scariest story Dr. Creepen could ever tell? Reading the nutrition label on one of my energy drinks 😭
ouch!
69 comments before me! :0 Just what I need to relax! Nice to hear you Doc!
thank you... hope you're doing ok!
A salesman is got a dream boy
indeed!
I'm gonna listen to this after all my assignments are done for the night :) I'll be back :)
NobleGamingM600 You wouldn't get any work done while listening to him.
Cadillac Deville Nope he is too good of a story teller ☺
good work ethic right there
Thankgod for that, I expected the baby to have passed. I was literally sat here full of dread x
Ooh, a Moral Monday with Dr.Creepen.... this should prove interesting O_o
I'll make preliminary assumptions that this won't be anything even in the same realm of Rev. Barbers in N. Carolina /giggle ;)
Peace and be well,
Jules
I absolutely love that final destination reference.
That final destination reference though
Very good story Dr.. Wondering exactly what Mr. Salesman was actually up to?? LOL Thanks Doc!! Always love to hear what you have to say!! Have a Terrific week!!
you too, Loretta!
Wow... So ALLLLLLLLL of her family were forfeit to get her husband back... Nooooooooo... Well that is a kid I am glad to steer clear of! Nice stuff! Hope you are well Sir and your missus too :)
not a good deal!
Love your intros & "outros". I've got my favorite drink.
As always you rock my friend I really love the story thanks
Amazing story, thank you doc
I Very Much Enjoyed This ONE❗️❗️❗️❗️❗️★★★★★★★★
happy you enjoyed it
Games And Movies Entertainment 🎆. Me too !!! 🎆
Very cool take on the monkeys paw concept.
She really should of read the contract lol twist indeed. Most enjoyable thank you very much
Seems I’m a little early for my appointment... Not a problem, I hope. Haha.
I hope someday u can collab with Lazy Masquerade 👍
I'm up for it but I don't think he does collabs
I like the music on this one. Is it a new composition? I don’t recall it on your other vids.
all new compositions... had a bit of free time at the weekend!
omg was the saleman reborn omg
She made a Deal with the 😈 himself.. LoL 😂😂 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
well i wont be opening the door to any sale man lol
niccole hoody hi would you be interested in buying this amazing new vacuum? Let me in it would only take a sec, or 2 I have a pretty good sales pitch 😉
good idea!
:) yep
sry i have a new got this year still new thx anyway :)
I'd only open my door for Mr. Sticks and only Mr. Sticks.
Great job MISS LAU. !!!!👍😸. You too DR. SEXY HUNK !!!
Oh for our dose of heavenly angelic musical medication to our ears, dear Doctor Creepen's wonderful voice. Thank you Doctor Creepen for being so awesome.
Yesss his voice it's so Lush Slurty and Sexy as Hell 👏 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
Sexy Grandma Darkness
Oh for sure Grandma. Much love back to you Grandma too.
Thanks, Tiff 😀 and he's Amazing And Awesome!!! Much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
thanks as ever for your kind words!
Dr. Creepen
You're welcome Doctor Creepen.
About 17 minutes and 40 seconds in am I wrong when I think that was a reference to the first final destination?
I thought so too
7:43 Cue cutaway to dana carvey's Church lady impression: "could it be ....satan? (echoes) "
Loved this one.
If Dr. Creepen were a salesman, he could sell wood to a forest!
;-)
Wait, waiiiiit a minute...don't look further if you don't want a spoiler, but, was her new husband the fricken salesman!? Wrecked! Or just the baby which is how he lives on through rebirth? Awesomeness.
I'm guessing it's the baby
Dr. Creepen Agreed :)
Realized I was giving the story away with my last comment..lol. Great narrating
But did you remove it tho.
Yes
Emily Ivers oooooookeee
Who the hell would let a door to door salesman in there home nowadays!
H͟͟e͟͟l͟͟l͟͟ y͟͟e͟͟a͟͟h͟͟! P͟͟e͟͟r͟͟f͟͟e͟͟c͟͟t͟͟ t͟͟i͟͟m͟͟i͟͟n͟͟g͟͟!
T͟͟h͟͟a͟͟t͟͟ w͟͟a͟͟s͟͟ a͟͟m͟͟a͟͟z͟͟i͟͟n͟͟g͟͟!
glad you liked it!
Dr. Creepen t͟͟o͟͟d͟͟a͟͟y͟͟ i͟͟s͟͟ m͟͟y͟͟ b͟͟i͟͟r͟͟t͟͟h͟͟d͟͟a͟͟y͟͟! I͟͟ a͟͟m͟͟ 35 t͟͟o͟͟d͟͟a͟͟y͟͟! U͟͟g͟͟h͟͟
excellent, as usual, good doctor. lemonade with vodka? that may become my new favorite drink.😆 LUV YA!!!!😙😗😍😍😍😍
The quill and the contract should have been the tipoff!
Nobody ever asks the price of their torment😂😂
+Dr. Creepen
🌿👀 Good story, exceptional use of your voice acting 🌟
Some new music in there as well, very enjoyable. Thanks Doc 😸😽
Nice, hope you are well Dear Dr. peace=)
and you :-)
Jump cuts are rather noticeable, did you get someone to edit this one? Otherwise, it's a great video as always.
not sure what happened; I think I accidentally did something while editing
OMG DC your voice is mesmerizing. I would die if you were by my ear.,😍😍
"And his suit was dry as an old woman`s private parts" :X hahaha good one! But not quite true, because most of the time incontinence keeps the underpants of old housewifes soaking wet the whole day.... But at least the protagonist made one hell of a deal! The ending was a nice surprise because I am sure she was so thankful all these years for Mr. Salesman to get rid of her pesky relatives and for all that money and inheritance and for that happy and rich life with his husband, that she almost wanted to adopt Mr. Salesman.
The plane crash part reminded me of Final Destination lol
Ohh those damn contracts with the devil. There is ALWAYS fine print, and for some reason no one cares to read it. And even if they do, something will go wrong and he’ll get the best of you. There’s simply no way to win. Unless you’re able to withstand horrible trauma, losing far more than you’d ever gain.
Love from the Motor City!
another excellent narration.10 out if ten doc.The smooth English accent is better than the American ones.go on my mate.
Did anybody else catch the final destination reference?
I did!
Yes yes yes your the only comment I can find that spotted it
Wow...really loved this story ! But who was the salesman ? The devil himself perhaps ?
so that's where the black eyed children/monster children in creepypastas come from.
I like how your videos are so spooky but your voice makes them less terrifying.
The tommy taffy type voice pissed me off
ALTERATION
?
? There was no tommy taffy voice
i quit listening at " dry as an old womans private parts"
Guess she should have read that contact hey?
Careful what you wish for 😬
Happy Monday 🙌 Dr Creepens I hope that you and Everyone else has a Spectacular Night 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
That's right you never let them in . But if he has a voice like yours well it's safe to say I'm F@#ked . Lol loved the story and as always I appreciate your amazing work
This sounds like "the proposition"
‘Twas a twist!
I cant find the two hour story where is it?
I have to ask you, if you continue putting out videos at the rate you do, and my favorite drink is, oh I don't know, a pitcher of hard whiskey, you're going to be shaving off a years from my life if you keep telling me to sit down with my favorite drink.