Remorse (alternative ending) -Mouthwashing animatic
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- Опубликовано: 7 фев 2025
- Animation, or rather an animatic, based on the game mouthwashing.
What if Jimmy had actually accepted responsibility and not played out a schizo-performance at the end. So this is my alternative ending.
#mouthwashing #animation #animatic
A part of me wanted Jimmy to say “hang on I’m right behind you" but I like that he knows that wherever Curly's going it doesn’t take him.
This looks amazing and it actually doesn't feel out of character. Despite the things he says, it seems like Jimmy knows deep down that he is in the wrong, his hallucinations are an evidence of that, but instead of actually facing his guilt he lies to himself, him saying that he fixed everything in the end it's just him lying to himself. So much that a lot of things his says are hypocritical when you play the game again.
What you did is essentially an ending where Jimmy stops lying to himself and actually takes responsibility from what he has done, he won't get punished for his crimes because he won't survive for long, but at least he now acknowledged what he has done.
This would’ve been a brilliant character arc alternate ending bruh. I feel like if discussed more maturely, this would’ve impacted Jimmy’s image. All the bad stuff he did is realistically irredeemable but as a person, he’d be relatively more respected or less hated with this character arc, showing that Jimmy could at least try to be a better person as far as he could go after the stuff he did
“May heaven welcome you.”
Made me feel something I can’t describe. Truthfully I feel like this fan end would have been the closest thing possible in the game and reality (If we were to put this game in a reality setting) to Jimmy taking responsibility, although in truths at the end of the day the only way to truly take responsibility would be turning yourself in. But that’s impossible because how long it would take to be saved so death would always be the next best thing. I like this fan end.
I really like how instead of the ending we get in the game "where Curly get's put in the cryo-pod" they instead all die because i doubt Curly even wanted to live when he couldn't do anything he was just a soul trapped in a body but with this ending he can finally rest in peace and not have to be suffering anymore.
0:52 No he was trying to slap him🙂👋
XD
AND THE CROWD IS.....WHERE IS THE CROWD ??? THATS SO UNDERRATED OMGGG
Curly dying instead of getting into the criopod is such a much better ending. Like bro was literally a burnt nugget, what did jimmy think he could possibly do back on earth 😭
Fr I wanted his suffering to end
THIS IS BRILLIANT, YOU MADE A (somewhat) LIGHTER ENDING YET IT'S STILL VERY REALISTIC
You can't make me feel bad for Jimmy. No matter how good the animation is, I won't feel bad
"You can't make me feel bad for Jimmy." No, that wasn't my goal. What was my goal? Good question you've pointed me to, I hadn't asked myself before.
What was I trying to convey with this animatic? Well, I'll try to answer that.
I've always wondered why a rapist rapes, a murderer kills. Don't they feel remorse? What can kill a man's conscience?Why are you the way you are? Were there circumstances in your childhood that broke you and twisted your morals? (Often rapists endured such abuse themselves in childhood.) Or was there more mental illness? Where's the root of the evil here?
That's right, this is AU. Where Jimmy was able to accept responsibility in the end, and that doesn't make him a hero. That doesn't absolve him of guilt, he's still a murderer and a rapist. But taking responsibility for the horror that he has created, and remorse, is the burden that he must accept. Conscience can sometimes be just as good a punishment as the law, if there is a conscience, of course.
Well, of course, I wasn't even close to Dostoevsky, and this work doesn't fully reveal those questions, but at least I tried.
I can feel sympathy for someone like Jimmy if he took responsibility lol. All the shit he done, while still remaining bad shit from him regardless. could’ve led to a pretty good character arc for him
@@JuvenArt13 ayo you're cooking...
Bro...now this au you made made me feel bad about him right now...and now jimmy will be always be hated by anyone.@@JuvenArt13
This is why media literacy is a thing bruh
I'm guessing in this universe that Jimmy still beats Curly but is now in a state of insanity-induced self-awareness. Just imagine his surprise when he isn't here to "feed" him painkillers.
The animation looks great, actually! I really love your art style. But one thing that I haven't seen anyone else touch on is Jimmy asking Curly if he wants to go in the cryopod and wait it out, or die at least somewhat peacefully. For the first time in this version of the story, Jimmy respects someone else's agency and autonomy by allowing Curly to decide his own fate, instead of choosing what would be "best" for Curly himself. It makes me wonder who this Jimmy could have been if he'd taken responsibility for himself much earlier in life, before he even signed on as copilot for the Tulpar. Unfortunately, there's a limit to how terrible you can be before there's no going back, and Jimmy blew past that a long time ago.
Woah, this was so powerful! And weirdly enough sad Curly died, though it would be for the better! Argh, this story is so tragic! Also love the tiny details like Curly's chest going up and down breathing, makes everything feel that much more alive!
... Well now I am hit in the feelings-
This is so well made, a different type of ending... I have nothing to say except a job well made, it really hits in the feelings-
Oh wow, i really really like this! The dialogue, the artstyle, it's all just wow. This all somewhat feels really canon, if Jimmy was to ACTUALLY take responsibility in the game. Although nothing, and i mean nothing could ever make the things he did okay, this truly would've been the best way to end things.
Hi
I returned with an animatic, after 2 weeks of absence (real life, study, etc.)
In short, I already wanted to give up and not post this video (since I was tired of it during its production), but my friends persuaded me to upload it to RUclips anyway.
Actually, the idea for this animation came to me back in October, but due to circumstances, I only finished it now and... I feel like I'm too late for the hype of this game.
Well, I hope 100 people who will see this video will like it.😭👍
I'm going to cry or something
Updated: Hooray, it was seen by more than 100 people! Thank you for being active in the comments, I was pleased to hear your opinion.
wowww👏 it’s sad that we all collectively know that Curly would’ve rather died than be frozen for another 20 years just to not get saved
Interesting AU ending. He always knew how reprehensible his actions were and to a point understood what he did is unjustifiable but he continued to delude himself to the end into thinking he was the hero, hence the canon ending. Honestly speaking, I don't really think it is any different than the canon ending. Like canon, he pretty much escaped his consequences and took the cowards' way out.
Really, I'd rather he live and spend the rest of his life atoning for what he's done. I don't think death solves anything but honestly speaking, this is the most possible alternate ending someone like Jimmy could've had and probably the most possible alternate progression of his character it if situations were slightly different. It's not out of the realm of possibility and of belief, given what we know of Jimmy, for this to be another ending. I can see this happening.
At least here, he didn't delude himself into thinking he was the hero and accepted that he was, in fact, the villain of this story. The only real silver lining to this.
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this is why i love Curly bro (This may not be canon, but i like this alternative ending because it would have actually made a better outlook of Jimmy honestly, Jimmy is getting too much hate to the point people wont even add him to animations and stuff like that. Im not defending him, but i just want to say that hes still part of the mouthwashing game and was the one who did most impact to the games incredible lore despite being probably the worst person or character in the horror genre, not saying that he is but he might be in some people's opinion, but then again im also not saying hes not a bad person in general)
Wow, good job! Animation is so smooth and your style is gorgeous. I really like when people create other versions of the canon story. In this AU, Jimmy made at least one right decision and realized how horrible he is, instead of painting himself as a hero. Makes me feel a modicum of respect for him, although I think the best way to take responsibility would be going to cryo pod. I also like how Curly somewhat tried to comfort Jim, as he probably did in the past. I doubt he fully forgave him, but perhaps he was a little glad that Jim at least admitted his wrongdoings. Btw, Merry Christmas 🎄❤!
Doesn't it take somebody else to put a person in a cryocapsule to trigger the freezing mechanism? It seems to me that if Jimmy had got into the capsule himself, it would not have worked, there would simply have been no one to turn it on. Or could the creocapsules on board the Tulpar be turned on from inside the capsules themselves?
@@kvellisakreojun5855I suppose they could, because if some emergency happened and all crew members needed to use them, then there would be no one left to turn them on from the outside (so, someone would have to sacrifice themselves) Thus, it should be possible to make them work from the inside. However, given how much Pony express "cares" about their employees, it can be otherwise
OH WOW! THAT WAS AN AMAZING ENDING, If only.
this is insanely good, i read your comment on your goal for this animation too, you’re an amazing storyteller
THIS IS SO GOOD!
This is so goood man, hits right in the feels T-T You really outdid yourself with this one, I’m so proud of you 🔥🥺
OH JUST GIVE US A GOOD ENDING 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I don't really know what to say, despite that this is great!! So glad I stumbled across your Video
I mean. At least curly is okay now
THIS GAVE ME CHILLS 😭 THIS IS SO GOOD OMG
THIS IS WONDERFUL! Obviously I still hate him, but the character development shines
OMG THIS GAVE ME CHILLS!!
Мне очень нравиться то что Джимми тут реально осознаёт свою вину и извиняется перед Кёрли, а может и перед всей командой
So... English is not my mother tongue, but I think I can express my opinion. Your video is beautiful and it is an ending that would be less bitter for everyone. I am a reasonably religious person and when I saw this scene with the sunset I remembered Saint Dismas, the criminal who was forgiven by Jesus while still on the cross, his name is not revealed, but Dismas means "he who was born at sunset of the sun" as a sign that his life only found purpose when he was dying and admitting that he deserved to die. Maybe it wasn't your intention, but I remembered that moment. But I don't think J*mmy and Curly went to the same place. Thank you for your attention.
For me too, English is not my first language) No, I didn't know about St. Dismas, but that parallel you noted is very interesting. Thank you for telling me about it
Dat is so cool :0
The true ending
I'm going to cry
True ending🙏
Not Curly comforting him 😢
Curly was always too nice. Even to cowards like Jimmy
WOW.
PEAKKKKK
The AUDACITY to say all of this
Goof staff. Too bad, that this is too out of character for him and it's not real...