OMG! This is amazing, Rascal! The comment I left was yesterday's, but this is just INCREDIBLE! I love this, and I can't wait for more chapters!😍😍😍😍 And also: are you gonna do a whole movie like Alicia and the Kingdom of Starlight, since you've got Flazino pretty much story-boarded, or is it gonna be more like a published book? I'm genuinely curious🤔🤔🤔 I've fan-girled over your Wish videos for a while, so this is like heaven to me! I'm currently just writing out my 3rd rewrite, and I hope to maybe start animating it someday, tho I'm by no means an animator of any kind like you!
Thank you so much! I know you've been one of my biggest fans and followers of Wish stuff, and don't worry, I'm including all the animatics from the original film in this too. In fact, one of them will be in the next chapter! 😉 Also, yes this will be a full on movie rewrite! It would be cool if I happen to get some voice actors in the future for the characters, but I'm really happy with this format right now. Also, I think you could be a great animator, just keep practicing your skills!
Ok i gotta confess this is honestly the better version of wish I'VE EVER SEEN RASCAL GIRL IT'S SO GOOD AND SO DETAILED AND HAS EVEN MORE ORIGINALITY IN IT YOU'VE REALLY DONE VERY AWESOME SO FAR 🤩👏
RASCAL! THIS IS SO AMAZING! I am LOVING this soundtrack and I adore how descriptive you wrote the musical numbers! Love the dedication you put into this! Cannot wait for more!
Flazino one of the character that got deleted from Wish and thank you so much for adding him! If he was kept in the movie, he would've represented Prince Florian from Snow White & The Seven Dwarfs for Disney 100 since it starts with the letter F.
You're welcome! He's a character I could see with a lot of potential, just didn't get the reason why he was cut. He was actually really interesting from the little we know. Also, I totally missed the Prince Florian reference in the deleted scene! How cool would've that been?!
*inhales.................* OK, WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!🤩🤩🤩 This was amazing Rascal!! Your storytelling skills in this writing are on point and you really gave a good intro to this! Dang, Somehow I like the Queen better in this version, despite the evil..... Also I have to say I really love the sound effects!
THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!! 😭 I was really nervous about this, but I'm relieved that you and the others are loving it! Also, you're not the only one who's liking the villain version of Amaya, lol. For some reason that felt more natural for people to see rather than the film version. 😅 The next chapter will be up later on, so stay tuned!
Eeeeee! I'm so EXCITED😍😍😍😍 We'll be able to see what you and Saffro have been cooking up, and I wonder if her animatics will be part of the story! Ahhhhh! Thank you so much, Rascal!😍😍😍😍😍 I've written out 3 of my own, and am working on the third one, which is actually a combination of the previous two: The first one 'Tale of the Pure Wish' is 3 books long, with the second one being 5, I think. The 3rd one? Might be up to 10, and kinda feels like an actual book!😅😅 I don't know what to call the second and third one, since I'm mixing in some aspects of my own: Both Aster and the villain are vampires, with the difference being that Aster is only half-vampire, thanks to a curse placed on by the former, who's fully vampiric. The king and queen are Ashas parents, the friends are in it, though I had Safi and Dahlia secretly have feelings for each other, the goat, whos a girl that I named Valerie is also in, but both of them have very significant roles, especially her Saba. 'I'm a Star' has been replaced by 'Scars to your Beautiful', and Aster's parents are in it as the rulers of the star kingdom Cantros, but people call it the North Star in Asha's kingdom Draxton. A special credit shout out to PinkieMachineStudios since I took the idea for her evil king and queen and gave it to Aster's parents. Sorry if I stole your idea, Pinkie! I love youuu😍😍😍 Celestino has a younger sister named Evangeline who helps Aster get to earth as a baby, but she's accidentally killed by the villain, who's named Xaiver, but is thankfully brought back, albeit a vampire, and he plans to turn every human in the kingdom like him and enslave the more magical folks, with Asha being a part of his plan. When he does eventually see her as fully grown (she's 16, about to be 17 at the time), and is stood up from her, he can't stop thinking about her and goes into 'Hellfire'. Yeah, I know, could have copyright issues someday, but i just ADORE that song! He does eventually end up attacking her, but Aster comes in clutch at the last second, like right before she can pass out from pain last second. He finds her a few moments later either having a panic attack, which causes her to almost go blind from crying, or finds her almost dead trying to drown herself, which he gets her out from, but either way, the attack still happens. He realizes that he almost lost the most amazing person ever, making him more committed than ever to protect her, and he sings At All Costs, shocking Asha to her core when he reaches 'Love you as one does'. This in turn eventually stops her crying as she realizes that she feels the same way, and by the end, she's stopped crying completely and is smiles all around, and the duet ends with them kissing. Everyone is later unfortunately captured by they-know-who, splitting up the couple and throwing everyone else in jail. This technically dives more into the Hunchback of Notre Dame towards the end, both movie and play, with the duet in jail being from the show, and is a father-daughter duet instead of a more intimate moment, but both of them being a kind of goodbye to each other, with my take that her dad subtly vows to save her from dying at any cost, while Asha, while kinda scared, knows that even if they don't live to see another day, their story will live on, and by told by future generations, giving her more courage to face death in the face, even if she secretly wants to live, but knows that its a 0.1 chance of making it out alive. The whole next moment is the botched execution i.e gets saved at the last second, but it kinda turns a bit heated between the main villain and her parents and friends, to the point where he ends up mocking both them and her boyfriend, where to the point when her ultimatum is given, she's so furious by how calmly smug he is about all that she somehow ends up scratching the crap out of his face, which hurts him like hell, making the parents realize that its partly because of their magic and partly because of the curse. Mind you, he had done the same to Aster a while ago, and then to her almost a week prior, both of them having bleeding, scarred faces, so she technically gave him what was coming to him for all he put her through. One of her friends (Gabo) openly mocks about the scratched face by calling it 'a little boo-boo', which calms the former long enough to agree, then ends up spit taking Xaiver right on the scratched area, which doesn't really hurt or anything, it just shocks him. Once he gets over it, the whole speech from the movie happens, yada yada yada. The main change is that 3 of the the friends who avoided getting captured along with his aunt, try to snap Aster out of it, which kinda works, but considering his life-force is slowly being sucked away, he can't really keep up any sort of attitude until he accidentally snaps at them, almost making him cry fully. He then starts singing 'From Now On' from The Greatest Showman, with him fully snapping out of it thanks to his aunt, and his girlfriend getting set on fire, a pretty powerful one which slowly starts to knock her out, but is able to stay awake long enough to see the entire kingdom, Aster, and her Saba come to her rescue, and they help everyone who was caged up escape. Aster realizes what he got down here for, reaches Asha, untied her, and swoops her to safety. The ending is a bit of Hunchback's, my own, and the movie we got, where both Xaiver and his brother Jamie, who's also evil, battle the couple, and it concludes when Asha is stabbed protecting him, but its not too severe, since she had time to recover while unconscious, but this pisses off Aster so much that he ends up attacking Jamie - the one who gutted her, and ends up killing him when he tries to go after Asha to kill her. This shocks both him and Xaiver, since the former had never hurt anyone like that before, and Asha runs over to comfort him. They embrace, but he sees Xaiver out of the corner of his eye ready to kill them, so he spins her out to the other side, and is instantly stabbed by a dagger that's deadly to his people. This horrifies Asha, who's able to get him out of the way, and he soon falls to the floor. She checks him all over, and finds out that the curse has almost completely taken over him. Meanwhile, a dying Jamie comforts a devastated Xaiver, and is able to spot Aster also comfort a heartbroken Asha, and for the first time, he feels remorseful for someone other than himself or Xaiver, before he ends up dying and fades from in view in his brother's arms. A heartbroken Aster is able to tell Asha that she's his soulmate (or starmate), with her saying something similar before his fully black eyes flutter for good as his pale white body goes limp, and a tear falls down his cheek. Asha realizes that he's dead, and that there's a chance that he'll become undead, and she silently begs the curse to not take away the boy she loves as she starts to uncontrollably sob against him, not knowing that she's not the only one who lost someone. Xaiver confronts her about it, which in turn, lets her start to fight back with her own reasoning. This leads him to get so angry that he starts to physically attack her, with her not doing as much damage, until he realizes that he can completely change the entire kingdom by pinning everyone with dark magic to the ground, which horrifies her, and she calls him out on it and Aster like in the movie, which there's no going back for him if he could, as he repeats what he told her before slamming her a few times thanks to his staff, and essentially calls her stupid and throws to the edge of the roof next to Aster. She musters enough strength to hold him as she kinda freaks out, and then suddenly starts singing the reprise, pissing the latter off, but encourages the whole kingdom to help her get their fallen friend back. This ends up helping, since when it looks like she'll be blasted.. Boom! Aster comes back, not cursed anymore, and is actually himself again as he embraces Asha as she happily cries, with him wiping away her tears, and joins in with the kingdom in song, and thanks to his revival, this shocks Xaiver to the point that his powers go static when he tries to fully blast them, but they succeed in defeating him once and for all, with Asha seeing that he's gonna fall and tries to grab his staff to both help and disarm him (shoutout to HAH Studios), but he ends up kicking her in the stomach, which pisses off Aster to where he glows brighter than the sun, which blinds him, and causes him to trip backwards and fall to his death to the ground, with the staff getting taken in the process. Aster flies Asha to the ground after reuniting, and they also reunite with everyone else, who were freed during the song, with their hearts now glowing. Long story short, they clean up the kingdom, restore it to how it always should've been, and Aster and Asha get engaged, though I'm not sure if I'd have get engaged before they're captured or after the kingdom is restored. They all celebrate the upcoming nuptials, and they share a final kiss before we zoom out to the main book with the words 'And they all lived Happily Ever After' before the back of the book is shown with 'The End' shown is white and gold.
Hey, is there a Chance I can possibly join the Rascals at some point(?) (And my {Possible} RascalSona {That could be my Animal one at some point}-{either} still might be Cindy Bear from JellyStone Or Isabelle from Animal Crossing Maybe at some point I guess…{?})-(I’m kinda just not really sure at the moment…)
Hey there! At this point we're not taking new members due to some discourse with a few current members. We're trying to solve the problem right now, but we will be open to it later on!
OMG! This is amazing, Rascal! The comment I left was yesterday's, but this is just INCREDIBLE! I love this, and I can't wait for more chapters!😍😍😍😍 And also: are you gonna do a whole movie like Alicia and the Kingdom of Starlight, since you've got Flazino pretty much story-boarded, or is it gonna be more like a published book? I'm genuinely curious🤔🤔🤔 I've fan-girled over your Wish videos for a while, so this is like heaven to me! I'm currently just writing out my 3rd rewrite, and I hope to maybe start animating it someday, tho I'm by no means an animator of any kind like you!
Thank you so much! I know you've been one of my biggest fans and followers of Wish stuff, and don't worry, I'm including all the animatics from the original film in this too. In fact, one of them will be in the next chapter! 😉
Also, yes this will be a full on movie rewrite! It would be cool if I happen to get some voice actors in the future for the characters, but I'm really happy with this format right now.
Also, I think you could be a great animator, just keep practicing your skills!
Ok i gotta confess this is honestly the better version of wish I'VE EVER SEEN RASCAL GIRL IT'S SO GOOD AND SO DETAILED AND HAS EVEN MORE ORIGINALITY IN IT YOU'VE REALLY DONE VERY AWESOME SO FAR 🤩👏
THANKS, DUDE!!!
RASCAL! THIS IS SO AMAZING! I am LOVING this soundtrack and I adore how descriptive you wrote the musical numbers! Love the dedication you put into this! Cannot wait for more!
THANK YOU SO MUCH, JEB!!! 🤩 The next chapter will up soon, just gotta take care of a couple more tasks first! 😉
Plus I had to rewrite part of that song, it needed heavy editing! 😂
Such an amazing start, girl!
Boy, I can’t wait to hear more of this. 😃
Thank you so much!! 🤩🤩😁
As someone who liked the original Wish, I can say this is better!
OMG, THANK YOU!! 🎉
Flazino one of the character that got deleted from Wish and thank you so much for adding him! If he was kept in the movie, he would've represented Prince Florian from Snow White & The Seven Dwarfs for Disney 100 since it starts with the letter F.
You're welcome! He's a character I could see with a lot of potential, just didn't get the reason why he was cut. He was actually really interesting from the little we know.
Also, I totally missed the Prince Florian reference in the deleted scene! How cool would've that been?!
*inhales.................*
OK, WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!🤩🤩🤩
This was amazing Rascal!! Your storytelling skills in this writing are on point and you really gave a good intro to this! Dang, Somehow I like the Queen better in this version, despite the evil.....
Also I have to say I really love the sound effects!
THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!! 😭 I was really nervous about this, but I'm relieved that you and the others are loving it!
Also, you're not the only one who's liking the villain version of Amaya, lol. For some reason that felt more natural for people to see rather than the film version. 😅
The next chapter will be up later on, so stay tuned!
Although I never watched the Wish movie, the concepts and the rewrites make it worth watching!
True! It's actually really fun seeing all these creative fan arts, rewrites and even animations!
I may love the original Wish, but I must admit... Rascal, your story telling and choice of soundtrack is pretty impressive
Thanks, Brock! There's actually a few elements from the actual film left in here that I did enjoy. Especially Gabo's line: "What are you, five?" 😂
This is really good!
IKR
Thank you!!
Eeeeee! I'm so EXCITED😍😍😍😍 We'll be able to see what you and Saffro have been cooking up, and I wonder if her animatics will be part of the story! Ahhhhh! Thank you so much, Rascal!😍😍😍😍😍 I've written out 3 of my own, and am working on the third one, which is actually a combination of the previous two: The first one 'Tale of the Pure Wish' is 3 books long, with the second one being 5, I think. The 3rd one? Might be up to 10, and kinda feels like an actual book!😅😅 I don't know what to call the second and third one, since I'm mixing in some aspects of my own: Both Aster and the villain are vampires, with the difference being that Aster is only half-vampire, thanks to a curse placed on by the former, who's fully vampiric. The king and queen are Ashas parents, the friends are in it, though I had Safi and Dahlia secretly have feelings for each other, the goat, whos a girl that I named Valerie is also in, but both of them have very significant roles, especially her Saba. 'I'm a Star' has been replaced by 'Scars to your Beautiful', and Aster's parents are in it as the rulers of the star kingdom Cantros, but people call it the North Star in Asha's kingdom Draxton. A special credit shout out to PinkieMachineStudios since I took the idea for her evil king and queen and gave it to Aster's parents. Sorry if I stole your idea, Pinkie! I love youuu😍😍😍 Celestino has a younger sister named Evangeline who helps Aster get to earth as a baby, but she's accidentally killed by the villain, who's named Xaiver, but is thankfully brought back, albeit a vampire, and he plans to turn every human in the kingdom like him and enslave the more magical folks, with Asha being a part of his plan. When he does eventually see her as fully grown (she's 16, about to be 17 at the time), and is stood up from her, he can't stop thinking about her and goes into 'Hellfire'. Yeah, I know, could have copyright issues someday, but i just ADORE that song! He does eventually end up attacking her, but Aster comes in clutch at the last second, like right before she can pass out from pain last second. He finds her a few moments later either having a panic attack, which causes her to almost go blind from crying, or finds her almost dead trying to drown herself, which he gets her out from, but either way, the attack still happens. He realizes that he almost lost the most amazing person ever, making him more committed than ever to protect her, and he sings At All Costs, shocking Asha to her core when he reaches 'Love you as one does'. This in turn eventually stops her crying as she realizes that she feels the same way, and by the end, she's stopped crying completely and is smiles all around, and the duet ends with them kissing. Everyone is later unfortunately captured by they-know-who, splitting up the couple and throwing everyone else in jail. This technically dives more into the Hunchback of Notre Dame towards the end, both movie and play, with the duet in jail being from the show, and is a father-daughter duet instead of a more intimate moment, but both of them being a kind of goodbye to each other, with my take that her dad subtly vows to save her from dying at any cost, while Asha, while kinda scared, knows that even if they don't live to see another day, their story will live on, and by told by future generations, giving her more courage to face death in the face, even if she secretly wants to live, but knows that its a 0.1 chance of making it out alive. The whole next moment is the botched execution i.e gets saved at the last second, but it kinda turns a bit heated between the main villain and her parents and friends, to the point where he ends up mocking both them and her boyfriend, where to the point when her ultimatum is given, she's so furious by how calmly smug he is about all that she somehow ends up scratching the crap out of his face, which hurts him like hell, making the parents realize that its partly because of their magic and partly because of the curse. Mind you, he had done the same to Aster a while ago, and then to her almost a week prior, both of them having bleeding, scarred faces, so she technically gave him what was coming to him for all he put her through. One of her friends (Gabo) openly mocks about the scratched face by calling it 'a little boo-boo', which calms the former long enough to agree, then ends up spit taking Xaiver right on the scratched area, which doesn't really hurt or anything, it just shocks him. Once he gets over it, the whole speech from the movie happens, yada yada yada. The main change is that 3 of the the friends who avoided getting captured along with his aunt, try to snap Aster out of it, which kinda works, but considering his life-force is slowly being sucked away, he can't really keep up any sort of attitude until he accidentally snaps at them, almost making him cry fully. He then starts singing 'From Now On' from The Greatest Showman, with him fully snapping out of it thanks to his aunt, and his girlfriend getting set on fire, a pretty powerful one which slowly starts to knock her out, but is able to stay awake long enough to see the entire kingdom, Aster, and her Saba come to her rescue, and they help everyone who was caged up escape. Aster realizes what he got down here for, reaches Asha, untied her, and swoops her to safety. The ending is a bit of Hunchback's, my own, and the movie we got, where both Xaiver and his brother Jamie, who's also evil, battle the couple, and it concludes when Asha is stabbed protecting him, but its not too severe, since she had time to recover while unconscious, but this pisses off Aster so much that he ends up attacking Jamie - the one who gutted her, and ends up killing him when he tries to go after Asha to kill her. This shocks both him and Xaiver, since the former had never hurt anyone like that before, and Asha runs over to comfort him. They embrace, but he sees Xaiver out of the corner of his eye ready to kill them, so he spins her out to the other side, and is instantly stabbed by a dagger that's deadly to his people. This horrifies Asha, who's able to get him out of the way, and he soon falls to the floor. She checks him all over, and finds out that the curse has almost completely taken over him. Meanwhile, a dying Jamie comforts a devastated Xaiver, and is able to spot Aster also comfort a heartbroken Asha, and for the first time, he feels remorseful for someone other than himself or Xaiver, before he ends up dying and fades from in view in his brother's arms. A heartbroken Aster is able to tell Asha that she's his soulmate (or starmate), with her saying something similar before his fully black eyes flutter for good as his pale white body goes limp, and a tear falls down his cheek. Asha realizes that he's dead, and that there's a chance that he'll become undead, and she silently begs the curse to not take away the boy she loves as she starts to uncontrollably sob against him, not knowing that she's not the only one who lost someone. Xaiver confronts her about it, which in turn, lets her start to fight back with her own reasoning. This leads him to get so angry that he starts to physically attack her, with her not doing as much damage, until he realizes that he can completely change the entire kingdom by pinning everyone with dark magic to the ground, which horrifies her, and she calls him out on it and Aster like in the movie, which there's no going back for him if he could, as he repeats what he told her before slamming her a few times thanks to his staff, and essentially calls her stupid and throws to the edge of the roof next to Aster. She musters enough strength to hold him as she kinda freaks out, and then suddenly starts singing the reprise, pissing the latter off, but encourages the whole kingdom to help her get their fallen friend back. This ends up helping, since when it looks like she'll be blasted.. Boom! Aster comes back, not cursed anymore, and is actually himself again as he embraces Asha as she happily cries, with him wiping away her tears, and joins in with the kingdom in song, and thanks to his revival, this shocks Xaiver to the point that his powers go static when he tries to fully blast them, but they succeed in defeating him once and for all, with Asha seeing that he's gonna fall and tries to grab his staff to both help and disarm him (shoutout to HAH Studios), but he ends up kicking her in the stomach, which pisses off Aster to where he glows brighter than the sun, which blinds him, and causes him to trip backwards and fall to his death to the ground, with the staff getting taken in the process. Aster flies Asha to the ground after reuniting, and they also reunite with everyone else, who were freed during the song, with their hearts now glowing. Long story short, they clean up the kingdom, restore it to how it always should've been, and Aster and Asha get engaged, though I'm not sure if I'd have get engaged before they're captured or after the kingdom is restored. They all celebrate the upcoming nuptials, and they share a final kiss before we zoom out to the main book with the words 'And they all lived Happily Ever After' before the back of the book is shown with 'The End' shown is white and gold.
OH MY GOD, THIS IS AMAZING!!! 😮
*Arrived to the kingdom of Rosas*
great start
Thanks!! 🙏
@@RascalEntertainments np
*whistle* What a great start. Full marks!
(Take notes Disney)
Thanks, Lionel! 🦁
This is an interesting storytelling I would love to see more keep it up
Thanks, Nick! 😁
Awesome
Thank you!!
Hey, is there a Chance I can possibly join the Rascals at some point(?)
(And my {Possible} RascalSona {That could be my Animal one at some point}-{either} still might be Cindy Bear from JellyStone Or Isabelle from Animal Crossing Maybe at some point I guess…{?})-(I’m kinda just not really sure at the moment…)
Hey there! At this point we're not taking new members due to some discourse with a few current members. We're trying to solve the problem right now, but we will be open to it later on!
@@RascalEntertainments oh okay!
This is the best video you'e ever made! It's looks really excellent with better details! Keep up the good work, Rascal!
Thank you, Lucius!! 😁❤️
You're very welcome!
[Sorry for the late reply. ^^;]
I NEED MORE
Don't worry, next chapter is coming this month! 😉
..THIS IS SO MUCH BETTER ALREADY!!!!
Thanks so much, dude! That means a lot, cause I sure was nervous! 😂 Next chapter will be up soon!
Might as well let fans run Disney
😂😂😂😂
So far, the story's off to a great start✨️
Thank you!
Amazing
Thanks!
Very fantastic first part.
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks!!
@@RascalEntertainments yeah thanks and you're welcome!
Awesome
Thanks!!
@@RascalEntertainments You're welcome