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  • Опубликовано: 9 май 2024
  • ‘‘I caught it on the eight o'clock news: "Teenage girl found dead in dumpster outside of home." Above the headline was a picture…’’
    Tonight’s terrifying tale of the strange and macabre is all four parts of ‘The Blacktop Kids’ series by the wonderfully talented Corpse Child, kindly shared directly with me for the express purpose of having me narrate it here for you all:
    u/Corpse_Child/
    r/DrCreepensVault/comments/xn9z1t/the_blacktop_kids_final/
    Background music by me (freely available for use by other Creepypasta / No Sleep narrators):
    / dr-creepen
    / dr-creepen-vol-2
    Other music used is credited to the wonderful The Dark Somnium (intro) and the fantastic Tanner Stokes (end credits). The music is used here with their express permission.
    Video footage was made by me with whatever Go Pro Camera it is that I own... I hope you found it to be a relaxing backdrop for today’s story!
    Thumbnail image created using Adobe Spark, under the conditions of the Creative Commons CC0 license:
    spark.adobe.com
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    00:00:00 Introduction
    00:00:32 Part 1
    00:18:29 Part 2
    00:32:59 Part 3
    00:55:25 Part 4
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Комментарии • 161

  • @peppei666
    @peppei666 27 дней назад +13

    I’d just like to say thank you for not copping out and using AI of your voice to mass produce videos. So many creepy pasta channels now are just bad AI, there’s no cadence or emotion in AI voices. You’ll never be replaceable 💜

    • @jblask2
      @jblask2 13 дней назад

      Which ones do you know of that actually are using ai? I would like to avoid them

    • @peppei666
      @peppei666 13 дней назад +1

      @@jblask2 honestly there’s so many. But it’s pretty easy to tell because it reads poorly. Awkward stopping points and always calling a person he and she because ai doesn’t know the difference.

  • @Cat_festation
    @Cat_festation Месяц назад +29

    Sitting back relaxed ✔️
    Favorite drink ✔️
    Ready to listen ✔️
    Bring it

  • @damonx99
    @damonx99 Месяц назад +24

    Always a banger combo when Corpsechild and the Dr bring us a tale.
    Cheers to everyone!

  • @crystalkauffman3322
    @crystalkauffman3322 Месяц назад +22

    I thlnk I felt the same sadness you did! Great narration as always. I liked the story because it was realistic. I think too many happy endings set too many of us for unrealistic expectations.

  • @xeganxerxes4319
    @xeganxerxes4319 Месяц назад +9

    Your kid is murdered, and your boss gives you one week off and then is like ‘get back ere soldier’! Brutal.

    • @persephoneblack888
      @persephoneblack888 29 дней назад +1

      America. 😅

    • @brandonpepin3117
      @brandonpepin3117 28 дней назад

      Reality

    • @JustAnAverageWoman69
      @JustAnAverageWoman69 12 дней назад +1

      That's what my boss did after my father died from cancer in 2010. He told me getting back to work would make me feel better. No bereavement pay, either.

  • @Armeanu91
    @Armeanu91 Месяц назад +15

    Aw man, this one hurt!
    As a father myself, losing your kid once hits like nothing else. Losing him three times however proved that it can always be worse.
    You and Corpsechild managed to take me through all emotions yet again.

  • @jackalina91
    @jackalina91 Месяц назад +8

    That was a real tear jerker.
    Great story C.C!
    Great narration as always Doc.
    🤷‍♀️♥️♥️♥️✌️

  • @WhiteCatShirataki
    @WhiteCatShirataki Месяц назад +5

    Super freaky and heart wrenching.

  • @traceythomas3027
    @traceythomas3027 Месяц назад +12

    WOW..that was a really good story....Couldn't even take a bathroom break!! lol. Cr. Creepen, you're the best!!!!

    • @CompletelyRandomVideos
      @CompletelyRandomVideos Месяц назад +1

      Creepen is awesome but this story was the dumbest on his channel (possibly the internet). The author can’t be over 12 years old

    • @alemtorsaula
      @alemtorsaula Месяц назад +1

      ​@@CompletelyRandomVideosthey could possibly be 12, but where's your creepypasta?

    • @CompletelyRandomVideos
      @CompletelyRandomVideos Месяц назад

      @@alemtorsaulaMost of these stories are amazing and I know I couldn’t write a better story but this particular one, I am positive I could. The main characters shouldn’t be so dumb that it’s distracting and the situations should at least be anchored to some type of common sense reality. Some guy walking into a police standoff, having some long drawn out situation with a kid holding a knife & no other suspects are detained? The final scene was laughable. None of that would have ever happened like that. Just because I’m honest in my criticism doesn’t mean I think I’m some great writer

  • @allisonkellogg7951
    @allisonkellogg7951 Месяц назад +7

    Corps child is really good getting good at giving me the chills and the stories are getting better and better. Of course I don't think they would be so good if it wasn't for the best narrating done by the best in the business. Love to you and yours 💓

  • @vector1classified685
    @vector1classified685 Месяц назад +31

    Thanks Doc..appreciate the upload as usual.....folks don't forget to hit the hitch hiker button, least we can do, cheers guys.

  • @purpletalons7682
    @purpletalons7682 Месяц назад +4

    That was a great story. I enjoyed every minute of it. Love you 💜

  • @_THE_ASYLUM_
    @_THE_ASYLUM_ Месяц назад +5

    A delightful Corpse Child story, narrated by the only Dr im happy to see, the Creepen kind. Keep this kind of wickedly, amazing work up, dont know what id do without my dose of Dr Creepen. Lol

  • @kentworch
    @kentworch Месяц назад +4

    Thank you Dr Creepen for the awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always and props to the author on this one. It was really good.🖤🖤🖤🖤

  • @Dominik0-0
    @Dominik0-0 Месяц назад +8

    🖤🖤🔥👍great as always

  • @craigl5168
    @craigl5168 Месяц назад +3

    Corpse-Child and The Doc .. the most amazing superlative duo in the business!!! Oh yes, I am ready for another fantastical tale spun by Corpse and narrated in a superb manner by the Doc 😊😊😊😊

  • @timothyfreeby1031
    @timothyfreeby1031 Месяц назад +5

    Man, you and CC are a legendary combination.

  • @heartfireful
    @heartfireful Месяц назад +5

    Nice I could listen to my doctor while I cook 😊❤

  • @debra333
    @debra333 Месяц назад +6

    I see Dr. Creepen and Corpse Child...🎉❤😮🤔😘

  • @LilBearZen
    @LilBearZen Месяц назад +2

    I’ve gotten to calling you Scaremy Irons; absolutely love your voice and narration.

  • @SidewaysDays
    @SidewaysDays Месяц назад +2

    Got excited then realized it's a repeat, still a great story to hear again

  • @luvli-ladi4359
    @luvli-ladi4359 Месяц назад +2

    OK, I'm ready. Doc, take me away 😊

  • @Oocomeon
    @Oocomeon Месяц назад +2

    As ALWAYS BRAVO !❤❤❤
    LOVE YOUR VOICE AND EXCITEMENT OF HOW YOU READ THE STORIES.

  • @MrsCaranAmy
    @MrsCaranAmy Месяц назад +2

    I just got a chance to listen to this amazing story. It was well written and very excellently narrated. Thank you ❤😊🌟

  • @ichigonarutoj739
    @ichigonarutoj739 Месяц назад +4

    Thanks Doc!

  • @LibertyGoblin
    @LibertyGoblin Месяц назад +2

    This creepypasta broke my heart man. 😭

  • @CKlegion7272
    @CKlegion7272 Месяц назад +3

    This one actually got me dear Dr. I started listening after waking up from a nightmare involving my son. True horror. How do you do that?
    Greetings from Netherland

  • @Purgatoran
    @Purgatoran Месяц назад +2

    Love how relaxing but scary you narrate. Thanks for the story Doc, look forward to the next one.

  • @pocadon
    @pocadon Месяц назад +3

    Damn that's creepy! The scary part is i wouldn't be surprised if it happens or happened.

  • @taylorfain6957
    @taylorfain6957 Месяц назад +2

    Oh wow. This was amazing. Just as I expected. Thank you doctor for bringing us another excellent narration 😊❤

  • @RealAnimeBadGuy
    @RealAnimeBadGuy Месяц назад +66

    A Corpschild is always gonna be a good story.

    • @gdragonsgirl8273
      @gdragonsgirl8273 Месяц назад +2

      You got that right!

    • @dextermorgan1
      @dextermorgan1 Месяц назад +1

      Yep

    • @CompletelyRandomVideos
      @CompletelyRandomVideos Месяц назад +1

      Sadly this story was beyond absurd. Normally you’re right about Creepen but man was this one silly. I assume it was written by a 10 year old with zero real life experience

    • @49watersleeps
      @49watersleeps Месяц назад +1

      Every time

    • @SaneTXJane
      @SaneTXJane Месяц назад

      Hey @RealAnime…, FYI - the author writes under the name ‘Corpse Child’…

  • @aletheahusted3932
    @aletheahusted3932 Месяц назад +2

    I know this is going to be a great one. Not only narrated by The Doc but written by Corpse Child. ❤❤❤❤HELL YEAH!!!!!!

  • @johndelph1687
    @johndelph1687 Месяц назад +2

    Another great one Doc. This would literally make one hell of a movie. A one of a kind storyline.

  • @MsPiinkFllamingo
    @MsPiinkFllamingo Месяц назад +3

    Amazing, as usual. ❤

  • @tarshamiller1762
    @tarshamiller1762 Месяц назад +5

    Yes let’s go!!!

  • @fuindes_batwings
    @fuindes_batwings Месяц назад +3

    Awesome!!

  • @BenSS3
    @BenSS3 Месяц назад +2

    Another great story, thanks Doc & CorpseChild.

  • @dextermorgan1
    @dextermorgan1 Месяц назад +1

    Anytime I hear Corpse Child wrote the story, I'm in. That dude is one hell of a writer.

  • @kellyholmes4554
    @kellyholmes4554 Месяц назад +2

    Thankyou Dr Creepen for Corpsechild's story for us! ❤❤❤

  • @christinemayes3592
    @christinemayes3592 Месяц назад +2

    Brilliant story. Thanks ❤❤❤❤

  • @FloridaMan0561
    @FloridaMan0561 Месяц назад +2

    Heard the good Doc narrate a few stories from Corpsechild now and I’m starting to really enjoy the author’s stories. The good Dr. can make anyone’s stories great though,honestly!

  • @einienj3281
    @einienj3281 Месяц назад +2

    I can't believe it was over an hour, I could've sworn it was about 25-30 minutes.. time flies, eh?

  • @Loubear23
    @Loubear23 Месяц назад +1

    ❤ thank you Dr! One of the many excellent stories you’ve told! Thanks 😊

  • @childrolland
    @childrolland Месяц назад +2

    Great story. Thank you

  • @bobbiej.merritt5928
    @bobbiej.merritt5928 7 дней назад

    I just love your voice and what a story! I have been listening to you for a while now and enjoy all your stories! ❤

  • @juliephillips9248
    @juliephillips9248 28 дней назад +2

    New subscriber and well and truly hooked ❤

  • @CarlyKleve
    @CarlyKleve 29 дней назад +2

    Great narration. Thanks

  • @gerfmon1
    @gerfmon1 Месяц назад +1

    Great story, great narration. 👍

  • @sunnydisposition8347
    @sunnydisposition8347 23 дня назад +1

    I really enjoyed this story. TYVM!

  • @nikkijayne8661
    @nikkijayne8661 13 дней назад

    Quite sad at the end,but great story….love your voice 😊

  • @princessofhardrock3934
    @princessofhardrock3934 Месяц назад +1

    Always love a Corpse Child / Dr Creepen story!!🎉❤ This will be good!!

  • @MeganeLaFougere
    @MeganeLaFougere Месяц назад +1

    Narrator: "am I the best creepy pasta narrator on RUclips hahahahah might be! lol jk"
    Also narrator: **litterally murmurs** "'Kai!' I screamed at the top of my lungs"
    Hmmmhm

  • @annettew5740
    @annettew5740 Месяц назад +1

    Snuggled in at 10:30pm and ready to listen. The title sounds very familiar. Have you done this one before? Either way, I'm going to listen and 👍! Thanks Doc! Hope you and anyone reading this has a fantastic weekend!🤗💜🕷

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Месяц назад +2

    Well it’s been a while since I’ve heard this one and fortunately enough it was long enough ago that I didn’t remember what happened so in effect it was a new story. And as CC always does, it brought with it it’s own special kind of drama and that very hard to find unique quality as so many CreepyPastas today are just slight variations of another one. So you end up with a big bowl of just slightly more spice in each one but vaguely enough to even “taste” the difference. When the great authors such as the Corpse Child comes along it’s best to pay attention and give them the praise they deserve so it will motivate them to continue to bring us more of the same quality of stories that we all know and love. And as long as we keep the great Dr Creepen delivering them, well there’s just nothing left to ask for! With the one exception of your favorite drink 🍺. So thanks to you good Dr, and much Praise to CC for another gripping tale of brutal killing rascals amongst the neighborhood. You just can’t ever be safe enough! Excellent performance!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍🫡🫡🫡

  • @4Dionna4
    @4Dionna4 27 дней назад +2

    Who waits 10 actual minutes after knocking on someone's door? That is actually pretty creepy, especially if nobody answers and tells you to "hold on, I'm coming"

    • @livi9052
      @livi9052 17 дней назад

      there's a lot of details in the story that don't make sense. Asking your neighbor you aren't particularly close to about their recently deceased daughter, a cop showing a random civilian crime scene photos and getting him to play investigator.....

    • @kellykade
      @kellykade 15 дней назад

      I’m mad the dad didn’t find creepy the children in a circle near nighttime with a girl in the middle and KY saying I’m going to get mom back… when dad went with the detective he couldn’t tell him Maybe 🤔 1 reaosm right away the last time he saw he son and the weird stuff happening. Apparently none of that rang a bell immediately. Like the detective had to give him clues about a cult maybe… it’s was getting me mad actually lol

  • @MapleCheerUp
    @MapleCheerUp 21 день назад +2

    I wish the author had given a reason why/how the children got involved and what their motivation was. It was a pleasant story but left a lot of questions unanswered for me. It felt rushed.

  • @DarkPixxie
    @DarkPixxie Месяц назад +1

    Let’s gooooo love Corpsechild and the doc combo wooooo

  • @mistydevillier2197
    @mistydevillier2197 Месяц назад +3

  • @Stardust_7273
    @Stardust_7273 28 дней назад +1

    Wow, that was a great story but the ending was so hard to take. 😢

  • @MaliaMydnight
    @MaliaMydnight 25 дней назад +1

    Corpsechild is such a good writer! I'm a bit upset Kai didn't make it tho 😭😭😭😭

  • @kateg.1386
    @kateg.1386 Месяц назад +2

    Thank you, Dr Creepen!!❤
    I hope everyone has an amazing weekend! Stay safe out there ❤

  • @harrygrimley4352
    @harrygrimley4352 Месяц назад +1

    Hmmm 🤔. Thanks for sharing this with us.

  • @francodimitsy989
    @francodimitsy989 Месяц назад +1

    Fantastic.

  • @dascooter8287
    @dascooter8287 Месяц назад +1

    Great read Doc

  • @judyaldridge3744
    @judyaldridge3744 23 дня назад +1

    Your voice is so creepy that it makes ghost stories fun to listen to and to keep you in thriller suspense 😂😂😂😊😊😊

  • @Maeshalanadae
    @Maeshalanadae Месяц назад +8

    Ky has the most oblivious grandmother ever there. She should have known something was going on and yet asked nothing?

    • @felicityjohnston9276
      @felicityjohnston9276 Месяц назад +2

      and was leaving before he even got home with him,not bothering to wait to find out/help search!

    • @RockStar_Love
      @RockStar_Love Месяц назад

      ​@@felicityjohnston9276 yeah that struck me as odd too

    • @felicityjohnston9276
      @felicityjohnston9276 Месяц назад

      @@RockStar_Love ❤️

    • @katiecommon3614
      @katiecommon3614 14 дней назад

      This bothered me a lot. Why would she not just wait until he got back

  • @BruhChickenTho
    @BruhChickenTho 8 дней назад

    Stumbling on this after just seeing Season 2 of From and then the movie The Offering. After midnight. Good times lol

  • @saragog
    @saragog Месяц назад +2

    Another great narration and story ! Corpse child is one of my favourite writers.
    You always do the stories justice with the wonderful smooth voice of yours.

  • @privatejapan5599
    @privatejapan5599 26 дней назад +1

    This was really good. I thought it would be supernatural!!!🎉

  • @bloodycupcake219
    @bloodycupcake219 Месяц назад +1

    This is a great author.

  • @BenSS3
    @BenSS3 Месяц назад +1

    Oh nice, CorpseChild story, eh? This oughta be good, he just doesn't miss.

  • @thatmar1neguy
    @thatmar1neguy Месяц назад +1

    Another great story

  • @Lylicx
    @Lylicx 28 дней назад +1

    You sound like Mufasa, I love it.

  • @queensheebah8628
    @queensheebah8628 Месяц назад +1

    Me:Who could’ve been so mad to do that to her? Also Me: Bad asz kids with a score to settle 😮

  • @nicholejohnson3642
    @nicholejohnson3642 Месяц назад +1

    This story had me so edgy. This one was so good!!!

  • @user-qy6lz7uh6r
    @user-qy6lz7uh6r 2 дня назад

    Yeah, I'm not gonna bullshit Im a grown man and I cried when his kid died in his arms. That was heavy.
    My only critique would be that the interrogation scene was written in a way that you put it all together way before it's revealed. I figured it out about a minute into the interrogation, but the scene lasted like 10 minutes. it should have been either trimmed down a bit, or written so that the reader puts it together at the same time as the protagonist. I get that he was in denial, but it takes away most of the impact of the reveal when you've already long since figured it out by the time it's acknowledged in the story. Because at that point, the characters are just acknowledging something you've already processed and it feels drawn out.
    But know that I only give critical feedback to writers whose work I admire.

  • @ainnunyabidniz
    @ainnunyabidniz 28 дней назад +1

    ....why did no one give the father an inhaler? he sounds like he's always on the verge of an asthma attack

  • @jeffersonrobert77
    @jeffersonrobert77 Месяц назад +2

    He'll yeah made it in time came as soon as I got the notification Let's gooo

  • @InquisitorAstelon
    @InquisitorAstelon 27 дней назад +1

    Honestly, extremely obvious what was going to happen as soon a the kid said he wanted mom back. Dead girl. Kid says he wants mom back. Ah, yeah, he did a sacrifice.

  • @GWMarshallinva
    @GWMarshallinva Месяц назад +1

    Reminded me of Bradburys Zero Hour.

  • @TheFadingPaladin
    @TheFadingPaladin Месяц назад +1

    Love the story. The only real question im left with is why the cop didnt do anything to save the boy in the end.

  • @niccolehoody7317
    @niccolehoody7317 Месяц назад +1

    ❤ good story

  • @taylorfain6957
    @taylorfain6957 Месяц назад +1

    Let me express. As soon as I hear “by corpse child”. I lose
    Mind just a little bit. Because between corpse child and crim that’s how my life rotates. Talk about two amazing authors am I right?!

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Месяц назад +1

    Hello good Dr., I think you’ve made a good choice in abandoning the practice of a long poem to precede every story. Now Sure, an occasional poem for just the right story, might fit nicely and enhance it. But you know better than most that not all styles and patterns are one size fits all and having a pre-narration poem for every story doesn’t quite work and isn’t a win for each one. So once again, I applaud your choice:)

  • @thecartercrew3725
    @thecartercrew3725 Месяц назад +1

    As if kids regular kids aren't frightening enough...

  • @messedupdweeb
    @messedupdweeb 9 дней назад

    Such a sad ending, man. The other people around MC/OP are also sus. Like, all these horrible things are happening and there’s no ounce of urgency or concern. Makes me think there’s a bigger conspiracy surrounding everything.

  • @CNinjaa
    @CNinjaa Месяц назад +1

    Dr Creepen, you should consider upgrading your microphone and/or audio processing. Your voice is sort of muddled, and the t's, s's, and ch's are overwhelming the overall clarity. ❤

  • @rightonthefuton
    @rightonthefuton Месяц назад +1

    Poor Kai 😢

  • @tnjrcfl1
    @tnjrcfl1 Месяц назад +1

    CC read by the Dr, you know it's good... hit the damn buttons y'all...

  • @JeremyLaVance-hk2ob
    @JeremyLaVance-hk2ob Месяц назад +2

    I normally love any story by CC but I didn't care for this one. There were too many things that didnt make sense. Little things really but enough to distract me and take me out of it a bit. Dr C can make any story enjoyable though so still worth the listen!

  • @DontTreadOnMyLiberty
    @DontTreadOnMyLiberty Месяц назад +2

    Top 3 comments! Excited to hear this one!!!

  • @einienj3281
    @einienj3281 Месяц назад +1

    Ooo, a Corpse Child story! Thank You Doctor! 🖤

  • @user-nn3rc5yb9q
    @user-nn3rc5yb9q 5 дней назад

    Well.. Kai did get to see his mom in the end I suppose… 😭😭

  • @Gfish17
    @Gfish17 Месяц назад +2

    At the end of the story im thinking those kids if anything will try to start a cult from prison im assuming children get sent to maximum security prison.
    Prisoners fall prey to religion just like anyone else.

  • @cassandrawright2781
    @cassandrawright2781 Месяц назад +1

    Hey doc❤❤

  • @LuisaD93
    @LuisaD93 Месяц назад +1

    ❤😊

  • @user-kh1vm6gt4b
    @user-kh1vm6gt4b Месяц назад +1

    ✔️👍🏻👍🏻

  • @richardlynch5632
    @richardlynch5632 Месяц назад +1

    😎👍

  • @demoneyin9390
    @demoneyin9390 7 дней назад

    20:55 sheesh mom, what the hell? You didn’t hear about to neighbors daughter who was dismembered not even 24 hours ago?

  • @claredyj2015
    @claredyj2015 24 дня назад +1

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