The Art of Character Development

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  • Опубликовано: 28 окт 2024

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  • @justsomerandomdudeontheint9859
    @justsomerandomdudeontheint9859 Год назад +105

    Harry Potter, Wings of Fire, and Avatar in one video? This must be heaven!

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад +30

      They're such great series :D

    • @kelpwing
      @kelpwing Год назад +9

      add Warriors

    • @GalaxyChoke
      @GalaxyChoke Год назад +9

      @@kelpwing don’t add warriors; it can become a hellhole O_O

    • @nightflyer1.1
      @nightflyer1.1 Год назад +3

      @@GalaxyChoke it can 😬. The 6th arc is crap- I’m still on the last book of it

    • @krztorooindustries
      @krztorooindustries Год назад +3

      I second this!

  • @TrickyTalon23
    @TrickyTalon23 Год назад +102

    *sees Snowfall in the thumbnail of a video discussing good character development*
    Yep everything seems in order here.

  • @Stefi_C
    @Stefi_C Год назад +44

    Me: sees thumbnail and title
    "The Art of Character Development"
    Great: Snape
    Amazing: Snowfall
    Iconic: Zuko
    *Perfection*
    Also, happy one year JMA! It's been great in this short of time listening to your analysis videos (today is also the birthday of Shakira lol).

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад +6

      Hahaha, coincidence? I think not.

    • @nightflyer1.1
      @nightflyer1.1 Год назад +3

      I know, Snowfall’s character development was amazing, and Zuko’s was iconic.

    • @raddragongaming9030
      @raddragongaming9030 Год назад +3

      @@JadeMountainArchive There is the hahahaha ;)

  • @Devonella
    @Devonella Год назад +11

    Amazing video JMA!! ^^
    Snowfall's book is one of my favorites because of her development, literally going from wanting to slap some common sense into Snowfall (even though I could understand why she was like that), to rooting for her when she changed the ice kingdom for good! It was just a really satisfying change, and I know it's not one of the most highly rated books in the series, it will forever be among the top of my favorites list because of the great experience I had reading it, as it was the first book I read without spoilers! ^^

    • @solar_9878
      @solar_9878 Год назад

      Is your favourite by any chance, book 10?

  • @tntkermit
    @tntkermit Год назад +9

    Not only was the character development amazing, but so is this video I feel like I could watch it over and over again and no get bored. Everything in this video fit in perfectly, the animations that went with the character development (very talented artist who made that animation btw) , the way you verbally and visually explained every thing to keep us capitavated but not distracted. Amazing vid Jma 10/10 would recommend. Great job Jma you really have come so far!

  • @katrina8231
    @katrina8231 Год назад +14

    You explain this very well, also I love the little bits of animation thrown in from time to time it looks so cool and very well made

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад +2

      Check out Meroaw's "Cold Cold Cold" for the original animations!

  • @Ranger51101
    @Ranger51101 Год назад +12

    Congrats on 20k dude it’s been a quick and enjoyable jounery

  • @smokescreen100
    @smokescreen100 Год назад +9

    20k in one year is honestly crazy for a new youtube channel. Well deserved

  • @anightwingcloakedinshadow5448
    @anightwingcloakedinshadow5448 Год назад +2

    Both Harry Potter and WOF on one video (some of my favorite book Series) AND a detailed explanation that is not difficult to follow!? WOW amazing video!

  • @crevice64_edits
    @crevice64_edits Год назад +8

    JMA so good at explaining stuff.

  • @danielstevens8610
    @danielstevens8610 Год назад +2

    As a writer I love videos about story analysis but was always sad the wing of fire community was too small to have stuff like this. Now, you made this, and my week is made! Great job!

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад

      I'm glad! If that's the case, you may also enjoy "The Art of Cliffhanging" and "How this kid's series did what $100,000,000 projects couldn't" videos if you haven't already seen them :D

  • @TrickyTalon23
    @TrickyTalon23 Год назад +15

    I had the lowest of expectations for Book 14 when it was announced because of the POV being Snowfall. After reading, it is one of my very favorite books in this franchise and 50% of that is thanks to Snowfall's phenomenal character development.

    • @FishDino1310
      @FishDino1310 Год назад +2

      As a snowfall fan, I can confirm that this is 100% accurate

    • @cheesesticks0
      @cheesesticks0 Год назад

      I agree yes

    • @musilovesbooks
      @musilovesbooks Год назад +1

      @@cheesesticks0 h o o t y

    • @timmy6890
      @timmy6890 Год назад

      I’ve heard of it and know what kinda happens
      I’m definitely interested on what happens in it

  • @CatsProLifeTips
    @CatsProLifeTips Год назад +1

    Jam!!! I could honestly use this as an English lesson in a school setting, I learnt sm abt writing fictional characters :)
    Ur super smart and deserve ur success!!

  • @olivermech8652
    @olivermech8652 Год назад +1

    Harry Potter and WIngs of fire are my Favorite series and it was so cool how you could talk about both of them :)

  • @pilotalex7888
    @pilotalex7888 Год назад +4

    HAPPY YT ANNIVERSARY JMA!!! WOW, we’ve come so far!!! You are a great person and make videos that always make my day. Keep up the great work! ❤❤❤

  • @SaigoKage
    @SaigoKage Год назад +3

    Congratulation on 20K! Your WOF videos continue to touch and inspire me. I love a new POV. Keep up the Great Work!

  • @krztorooindustries
    @krztorooindustries Год назад +1

    Ye ye Harry Potter, WoF, and Avatar mentioned in ONE video, THIS IS PURELY HEAVENLY JMA. by the moons! 🌙🌙🌙 I love you so much Ralph! ❤️ 💜😝🥰😘

  • @theambassador2527
    @theambassador2527 Год назад +1

    I love loud effects in the heart of the mountain, as the vibrations cause avalanches which is kinda sick ngl 0 cap. I am not playing with you, avalanches are kinda cool because the powdered solidify-ed water is falling off, kinda like how eminem fell off 0 cap (also kinda like how Ruth Kiske in 1995 fell off the zipline, plummenting 140 meters to his death, which I may or may not have sabotaged for a hefty $50,000). Truly a moment in time that has occured.

  • @OracleTeller
    @OracleTeller Год назад +3

    You have certainly come far JMA! Thanks for being one of my favourite CC! 💙

  • @krztorooindustries
    @krztorooindustries Год назад +2

    AWOOOO!!! 😊 HAPPY 1-YEAR ANNIVERSARY TO YOUR CHANNEL JADY-BOI!!! ❤️ 💜 🔥 THIS WAS A DRAG-TASTIC VIDEO AS ALWAYS ME MATE!!! Not to mention, I watched it together with my good amigo, @Deliverance and Dragons. He enjoyed the video as well!!! We loved it, man! 😍 😛🤘🥰

  • @gut853
    @gut853 Год назад +28

    Character development be like...
    Snowfall: amazing
    Zuko: ICONIC
    Winter: nonexistent😪
    Happy one year anniversary JMA! You've come so far in such a short time. Going back and rewatching that first video, it's obvious how much more comfortable you are with speaking on camera and sharing your WOF opinions with us now. So glad this channel got recommended to me a few months ago, and I can't wait to see where we end up at this time in 2024! 50 k maybe???
    👀

    • @Inkling_dbd
      @Inkling_dbd Год назад +8

      hold up, winter had alot of character development. Just compare winter in book 6 to winter in book 14

    • @TrickyTalon23
      @TrickyTalon23 Год назад +9

      *sigh* Winter had so much potential that was wasted. He's great by Book 14, but by then the story has moved on and he missed his moment to shine.

    • @jonaszrybarczyk2227
      @jonaszrybarczyk2227 Год назад +2

      His character development was about his understanding of his tribe
      Too bad nothing else changed in him

    • @gut853
      @gut853 Год назад +6

      @@TrickyTalon23 that's basically my entire problem with Winter. Yes, he's changed a lot by book 14, but the majority of the development happens off screen. So, the readers aren't really invited along for the ride. We just have to assume that he grew up and calmed down as a result

    • @pyronuke4768
      @pyronuke4768 Год назад +3

      @@TrickyTalon23 agreed. I wouldn't be so upset if Winter had just stuck around for the book 10 climax. Instead it feels like Tui unceremoniously whisked him off to the Ice Kindom because she couldn't figure out how to resolve the love triangle. Don't get me wrong, Moonbli is great, but it just feels so sloppily concluded.

  • @hysteric_forestt
    @hysteric_forestt Год назад +1

    This helps a lot. I am a small author, sort of- and I absolutely love wings of fire and warrior cats. I have SO many ocs (original characters) like Coppercut, Streak, Thrust, Moth, Sapphireshard, Fallenleaf, Sparrowspot, Sweetstem, and like probably ninety more. I love to write little paragraphs about thier backstories, and I love to spill out all the emotions I’m feeling into some depressing backstory of Mossmist’s or Shred’s. Shred is the one I put all anger and gruesome thoughts into, Mossmist the depression and sadness. I have so, so; so many ideas and honestly making ocs helps me feel way better! I have a whole notebook full of name ideas, even. My friends probably get bored when I start to explain all the lore behind Sharpblood or Blazefire or Calix. Snowfall is also a very underrated character.
    If you read til here you get a fun fact:
    Kinkajou won’t be getting her own book, even though she is Tui’s fav character, because Tui thinks she is developed enough and is right where she should be.

  • @savagegaming4333
    @savagegaming4333 Год назад +2

    Your videos make me so happy

  • @savagegaming4333
    @savagegaming4333 Год назад +12

    Your amazing 🤩

  • @nightflyer1.1
    @nightflyer1.1 Год назад +1

    So this is basically your channel’s one year anniversary. I remember how I found you by your Book 15 video. You had posted The Art of Cliffhanging video like 2-3 months earlier I think. You certainly have come a long way!🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • @Mx._M_o_t_h
    @Mx._M_o_t_h Год назад +1

    Happy anniversary jma you are amazing

  • @Hydra-s_GambitYoutube
    @Hydra-s_GambitYoutube Год назад +1

    best lecture i've had today.
    Also, fun character development story from my POV (Minecraft Storymode Spoilers!):
    Before I played MSS, I heard the character, Lucas, was bad and mean and absolutely crap. And once I finished the first episode, I thought, 'yeah they're right'. But the more we (my sister and I shared the experience) played, the deeper Lucas' character got and the more real he seemed. Between his insecurities to be weak to his self-doubt and blame for something going wrong, I began to pity him. By the end of season 1, Lucas went from the bratty leader to a supportive ally sending himself forward and honing on his abilities to find what he wants to actually do in the beginning of season 2.
    As much as I love the WoF storytelling, I think this deserves to be a good example put out there, even if it's cliche or mediocre compared to Zuko, Snape and Snowfall.

  • @malleableplatypus
    @malleableplatypus Год назад

    A good Snowfall character review?
    "I can see you're only interested in the exceptionally rare!"
    But, as always, amazing video! You bring up fantastic points and I agree with practically everything you say. :) All three characters have great development, and you know how to point out the expertise behind these characters.
    Happy 1 year anniversary! ^^

  • @Fritzafella
    @Fritzafella Год назад

    Happy first anniversary! You certainly have come such a long ways in making your videos in just a single year!
    I had to stop and play some bits back at .75x speed to really get some solid notes as you did a wonderful job at piecing together everything perfectly and concisely I had to pick it apart! Getting more tools in my kit as I keep chippin away at my novel is fantastic, and this really is just the PERFECT way to set up character development.
    And the supplemental videos! Aaaah!!! That animation vid you pulled from was perfect! And the examples of Snape and Zuko for the two main types of character growth are PERFECT! Snape doesn't really ever seem to change much, but our perspective of him DOES, but man Zuko goes through hell and back, (Literally. Fire nation? Firey pit?)
    This video really is the perfect testimant to how far you've come!

  • @Adhd_Coffee_Queen657
    @Adhd_Coffee_Queen657 Год назад

    I see Snowfall i click:) out of all of the Books a Dangerous gift was the best one i read. happy one year anniversary Jma! ❤

  • @burnsstronghold7213
    @burnsstronghold7213 Год назад +1

    Im so glad to see how far you have come on such a short time keep up the great and amazing work👍

  • @unknownwoffan8777
    @unknownwoffan8777 Год назад

    JMA this is such a good explanation of character arks.

  • @henryvaughan7283
    @henryvaughan7283 Год назад

    It’s weird how I love all of these

  • @naveedaqadir8596
    @naveedaqadir8596 Год назад

    This was so useful for the story I'm writing!! Tysm, awesome vid! Cgs on 20k in 1 year, hope this year will be just as awesome!

  • @darkstalkeris1812
    @darkstalkeris1812 Год назад

    This totally explains why Snowfall is so paranoid.
    Also happy anniversary!!🎊🎊🥳🥳

  • @Peace_and_Flowers
    @Peace_and_Flowers 3 месяца назад

    This is going to help me so, so much with writing!! It was explained so well, used great (and some of my favorite) examples, kept me engaged, and was super awesome!!! You run an awesome channel :D

  • @JustAnotherFanWing
    @JustAnotherFanWing Год назад

    5:12 "How to do anything" HAH.. Wikihow is a GENIUS!

  • @ashermacdonald6823
    @ashermacdonald6823 Год назад

    very intriguing video. I really agreed with and liked your point about how character development, in order to be great and satisfying, must be tied to the plot and themes of the series. Imo, the thing wings of fire does best is exploring characters, and showing the true and authentic versions of them, taking of each layer one at a time until the true dragon beneath is revealed. This goes even more amazingly with its themes of trust and compassion. It really makes a great series. I explained my idea very poorly, but comments help the algorithm, so ill just post it anyways, you deserve every view and sub you get, and definitely many more

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад +1

      It was a good comment! And I think you're absolutely right about how WoF handles its characters :D

  • @zachstigall-avery6617
    @zachstigall-avery6617 Год назад

    Wooo!!! I may have only seen your channel recently I am still proud

  • @GalaxyChoke
    @GalaxyChoke Год назад

    i LOVE THIS VIDEO, and once my braincells were filled with all the knowledge that you threw in my face, it all ended lightly with a beautiful little outro with some fancy music. i luv this (and you, of course)

  • @cmlsquad1506
    @cmlsquad1506 Год назад

    As always this vid gave me a better point of view about things; another opinion and explanation about something that no one ever bothered to analyze.

  • @spinosaurusrex11
    @spinosaurusrex11 Год назад

    Happy Anniversary JMA, I have learned more about WoF watching this channel than in all my time reading the series. Great job and congratulations.

  • @someone-pw3fd
    @someone-pw3fd Год назад

    Character development was always the most important of any series imo

  • @findleythegolden3054
    @findleythegolden3054 Год назад +1

    Congrats on 20k you totally deserve it

  • @gamer_fish
    @gamer_fish Год назад

    Amazing video as always. Also 1 YEAR ANNIVERSARY WOOOOOOOOO🎉🎊🎁🎈

  • @Inkling_dbd
    @Inkling_dbd Год назад

    congrats JMA! cant belive its been a year since your channel popped into my feed! Really cant wait to see where the channel goes in the furture!

  • @savvy1374
    @savvy1374 Год назад

    REEEEEE Happy 1 year!!!!!!!

  • @amyjensen3145
    @amyjensen3145 Год назад

    My two favorite series, WOF and Avatar, in one video. PERFECTION.

  • @propernoun1583
    @propernoun1583 Год назад +1

    Book 14 is one of my favourites. It does strangely not include any Pyrrhian content in the appendix, but that doesn't affect the story, it's just weird.

  • @NNNNNNNNNNNNNNl
    @NNNNNNNNNNNNNNl Год назад

    Thanks so much for the amazing literary analysis you present in this video. It is oddly similar to the way I map out character arcs in my own series. Well done! =)

  • @jonaszrybarczyk2227
    @jonaszrybarczyk2227 Год назад

    I’m happy you finally decided you take my offer (that you probably not remember) and talk about book 14 about development :D

  • @RosePetalYT
    @RosePetalYT Год назад

    Wow, my favorite books, movies, and tv show! Your channel has just leveled up for 100000% to 99999999999999%

    • @RosePetalYT
      @RosePetalYT Год назад

      Also a bit of time ago (I don’t have grammarly, I cannot spell) I sent you a meme that said ‘’HELLO FROM PANTALA” did you get it?

    • @RosePetalYT
      @RosePetalYT Год назад

      It had Sundew, Willow, and Bumblebee. It was in like a foresty setting

    • @RosePetalYT
      @RosePetalYT Год назад

      Now d percy Jackson and warrior cats

  • @campbellsoupceo
    @campbellsoupceo Год назад

    Some of my favorite series!

  • @Bella-si3cy
    @Bella-si3cy Год назад

    Happy anniversary JMA! Your videos are what keep me going through the week ❤

  • @enderskunk7515
    @enderskunk7515 Месяц назад

    Someone I like to bring up as a great example for revealatory development is Brom from the Eragon books (spoilers ahead for Eragon, Eldest and Brisingr)
    sure, this guy basically doesn't change at all during these books (at least not in the present time of the books, he did change a lot before the books started), but the reader's perception of him changes drastically throughout the story.
    He starts out as being seen as some random village story teller with little plot relevance (even if he know and shares stories the king disapproves of), then he decides to tag along when Eragon and Saphira head out to hunt down the Razac and is clearly more adventures and more plot relevant the he seemed, then it turns out he can use a sword and is damm good at it and it becomes clear that he definatly is more than a storyteller, then it turns out he can use magic for whatever reason, in Tyrm it's revealed that he has some kind of conncection to the secret rebell group, then he gets stabed and with his dieing breath reveals that he was a Dragon rider, but his Dragon was killed.
    the interesting part is that his character development is far from over with his death. In the next book it turns out he actually created the secret rebell group and that he used to admire some villian guy, who later killed his Dragon causing him to become his personal nemesis, who he manages to kill later (but still before the books). Yet another book later Brom turns out to be Eragons dad and we get the story of his love with said villian guy's wife...
    of course this entire thing is very oversimpliefied and probably makes little sense when you don't know the books, but my point is this guy's revelatory character development went on two and a half books beyong his death.

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Месяц назад

      Trueee! Brom is a fantastic example of revelatory development.

  • @Kiryu_02
    @Kiryu_02 Год назад

    Nice video! Character development is really important in wings of fire

  • @TheFirstFoxiconic
    @TheFirstFoxiconic Год назад

    Congrats for having your channel for 1 year!

  • @jettash0720
    @jettash0720 Год назад

    I only ever read the first two (and half of the third) WoF books but despite my love of dragons (and knowing Tui had been a part of the Warriors team), I couldn't properly get into them. That being said, I still love your videos as they're very informative and help me as a writer myself

  • @TableTaeFall
    @TableTaeFall Год назад

    This was so helpful on figuring out how she (tui) and other books so that

  • @Waterhorse6646
    @Waterhorse6646 Год назад

    This video was great! Love seeing how you’ve improved

  • @raddragongaming9030
    @raddragongaming9030 Год назад

    Epic as always I love these analysis videos so much!

  • @Salmontheseawing
    @Salmontheseawing Год назад

    You know it's a god day when JMA posts

  • @jackirish9022
    @jackirish9022 Год назад +1

    My dream one day is to right a book series like this one but way darker

  • @jgoodwin314
    @jgoodwin314 5 месяцев назад

    14 is like one of the best books!

  • @tinydragon9100
    @tinydragon9100 Год назад

    Character development was a slap in the face for starflight

  • @amira_856
    @amira_856 Год назад

    I LOVE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT, OH MY GOD
    Literally, almost all of my favorite characters have undergone some sort of huge character development.
    Series without character development is boring.
    Which is why, as much as I want to be a writer, I could never. I just cannot go that deep.

  • @Accelerated45
    @Accelerated45 Год назад +1

    I can't believe he only has 20k, this is amazing

  • @arandomstragnger2807
    @arandomstragnger2807 Год назад

    Humble hmm yes very humble little start into big Qibli man.

  • @ae0lus217
    @ae0lus217 Год назад

    Darn it I missed a JMA video. The Ralph fans are gonna hunt me down. Gotta bounce!

  • @snowfallkin
    @snowfallkin Год назад

    This was a good watch, thank you for this :)

  • @Blade1515
    @Blade1515 Год назад +2

    Tbh Lynx reminds me so much of Qibli, I can IMAGINE them working together to completely annoying the heck out of Winter and many other dragons in the series (Like so Jade Mountain Archive sees this)

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад +1

      I see all. They totally would hahaha

    • @Blade1515
      @Blade1515 Год назад +1

      I can imagine they kidnap queen wasp who can no longer see and just annoy the heck out of her as she tries to hit them but always can’t, actually that might be a little cruel but eh, she would deserve it

  • @The_Editor_X1
    @The_Editor_X1 Год назад

    Before I even read the title I knew what it was about when I saw Snowfall, Zuko and Snape
    I think another good character with development is Doctor Doofenshmirtz. He wasn't exactly a bad guy but he still became a fan favorite and ended up doing more good than bad overall and with the new seasons of phineas and ferb it looks like we'll be seeing more of him.

  • @Dilbydoos004
    @Dilbydoos004 Год назад

    Great video you are amazing. What am I supposed to say Happy Anniversary? I’ll go with that awesome video

  • @jerrycraft1259
    @jerrycraft1259 Год назад

    ABSOLUTE PERFECTION. LOVE THE DETAILED EXPLANATIONS and the end music. Absolutely benefited from dis video. I learned so much more. You never cease to surprise me with knowledge of writing and WoF. I never thought so cd live WoF more, but you made me love it more with every video of urs. I just wonder, do u think Tui planned it out from the start. Did she plan the ice wall to play a role in book 14 by letting Snowfall break it down? Like from when the wall was first reviewed a few books b4 I think.?❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🎉🎉

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад

      Interesting question! I think she probably did not have Snowfall's arc in mind when she first introduced the Ice Wall but likely had the ending of Snowfall's book planned out before writing the beginning. That's my guess anyway.

  • @soggybread9513
    @soggybread9513 Год назад

    Ahhhhhh this is great! I do have to wonder if this is the direction we're heading with Teal though....🤨

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад +1

      Hahahaha, there will indeed be a mix of revelatory and developmental change in that particular story line. Gotta practice what I preach, you know?

  • @ericapalumbo6453
    @ericapalumbo6453 Год назад +1

    i never thought about that before 🤔

  • @lucy_reads
    @lucy_reads Год назад

    i remember when i first watched one of ur vids

  • @gut853
    @gut853 Год назад +2

    Well since the captions seem to think JMA is a jam, I wonder what flavor he would be?🧐

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад

      Strawberry hahaha

    • @gut853
      @gut853 Год назад +1

      @@JadeMountainArchive excellent choice… said everyone but Darkstalker👀

  • @dragonflyerzx8465
    @dragonflyerzx8465 6 месяцев назад

    Snowfall is actually my favorite Wings of Fire character. Her story is so good.

  • @aurathespirit53
    @aurathespirit53 Год назад

    OHMAGOD YOU DID IT
    YOU ACTUALLY DID IT

    • @aurathespirit53
      @aurathespirit53 Год назад

      Also I just realized my fanfic is thin af and I need to heavily edit it

    • @aurathespirit53
      @aurathespirit53 Год назад

      Also also I just realized that in discord (which I don't use anymore) I had my status set to "offbrand qibli" How accurate I was.

  • @rylanwadehawkins3315
    @rylanwadehawkins3315 Год назад +1

    I know I sound like Jma rn but my fav character dev is Qibli's because he goes from abused insecure child to confident hero/sandwimh

  • @laka7007
    @laka7007 Год назад +1

    Congrats on 20k! (Also does this mean QNA part 2???)

  • @pyronuke4768
    @pyronuke4768 Год назад

    This summarizes in part why I felt like the Darkness of Dragons climax kinda fell flat. Qibli had a decent development in his desire to become an animus, but he's essentially the same character he is at the beginning of the arc. You can't say the same about Turtle or Winter or Moon, who are all pretty different from the characters first introduced in Book 6. Aside from other issues I have (Kinkajou's deus ex machina strawberry undercutting a possible villain redemption plotline, the supporting cast not having enough to do, a love subplot that feels more like a footnote, and a major character being unceremoniously written out of the climax) it feels like after so much buildup it just suddenly ends. The epilogue kinda makes up for it, but that's like getting a lollipop after being told you have a terminal illness.

  • @Hack_rJack
    @Hack_rJack Год назад

    Why does he not have at least over 100,000 subscribers after one year? He deserves way more than this!

  • @Eternitythenightwing
    @Eternitythenightwing Год назад +1

    hi jma! keep up the good work! when will the next tier list video be?

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад

      I'm working on a different recurring series right now (hoping to release the first video in a couple weeks!) and once that one finishes up I'll make some more tier lists :D

    • @Eternitythenightwing
      @Eternitythenightwing Год назад

      @@JadeMountainArchive horary! hopefully this new series is just as good

  • @SimWings
    @SimWings Год назад +3

    I’m gonna be the dumbass in the comments that no one likes, so prepare thyself
    I honestly loved Snowfall’s book, especially when I think back on it, the book as a whole (disregarding individual characters even tho that is literally what it’s trying to push) is really a calm before the storm
    Book 11-13 were the exposition of the dystopia that is Pantala then the rising action, and just as we’re reaching the climax…
    Book 14
    It forces you to calm down, to realize that yes, it’s a fantasy book and wars are the usual thing, especially since that’s how the other two arcs were formatted (more or less), but it brings new yet old ideas to the table
    Solving a war/incoming conflict peacefully?
    Cold-hearted character that’s actually just traumatized?
    Drama?
    Intrigue?
    All included in 14 but presented differently
    In 15, they tried talking with Wasp while captured, didn’t work
    Snowfall’s an IceWing, so was Winter
    They were raised in the same society, have the same sort of trauma/oppression, but Winter and Snowfall developed differently
    And the twists were so good, even when they did but didn’t serve the plot
    You weren’t expected Crystal, an IceWing, to be interested in someone from a different tribe
    You weren’t expecting Thorn, the past leader of the Outclaws and now SandWing Queen, to be a motherly fill in for Glacier so she could support Snowfall
    Now for the things I didn’t like
    Snowfall destroying the rank wall and dragons forming relations with scavengers
    Don’t get me wrong, Snowfall destroying the Racism Crown and the Great Ice Wall were enjoyable
    The crown for obvious reasons and the wall because they were so separated from the rest of the continent, which wasn’t great
    But the rank wall was one of the foundational pillars of IceWing society, which we didn’t get to see a lot of!
    And yes, you can argue that it isn’t good to be in competition beginning day 1, but that’s what made the IceWings unique, what made their society interesting
    Now you can also argue “hey, they’ve got their other animus gifts, stop wanting more dragons to be oppressed because of that wall”
    And uhh….no
    I’m gonna be the bitch everyone hates and say that the rank wall honestly should’ve stayed
    I care not if it symbolized something greater or that you don’t want our little popsicle babies to have self worth issues
    These are dragons
    They’ve said multiple times in arc 1 that it’s natural for dragons to fight for anything and everything
    I don’t care if I sound horrible, that’s my honest opinion
    I think the way we empathize with them is making us think that they’re exactly like us, the readers
    They’re not
    It’s great you empathize with them, that means it’s fantastic story telling, but when we transitioned to arc 2, it felt like we lost the fact of “these are dragons”
    Even in arc 3 when they made peace with the scavengers
    Why?
    Because in fantasy books like these, humans aren’t supposed to matter this much
    Although Wren finding Sky was cute, I just can’t with the way the other dragons and scavengers have made peace
    I just….
    It really rubbed me the wrong way
    Anyways, my ranting is over
    Have a wonderful day or night, wherever you are in this beautiful world!

    • @Hack_rJack
      @Hack_rJack Год назад +1

      This is beyond an essay (I read the whole thing btw)

    • @SimWings
      @SimWings Год назад +1

      @@Hack_rJack actually I’ve written opinionated essays before for school, and they were much longer, had cited sources, and had in depth analysis
      This was a baby in comparison for wat I’ve done for English classes
      But thank you!

    • @Hack_rJack
      @Hack_rJack Год назад +1

      @@SimWings I don’t think I would be able to read that then

  • @docfox4353
    @docfox4353 Год назад

    Happy Anniver

  • @theambitiousduck
    @theambitiousduck Год назад

    unrelated but cliffhanger would be an amazing nightwing name

  • @Ignys.Gengen
    @Ignys.Gengen Год назад

    I did NOT like Snowfall when I started the book. I was, initially, kinda disappointed she was the protagonist. But! Just like you said, the more I learned about why she was the way she was, and watching her change over the course of the story, she's honestly one of my favorites now. Right up there with the good sandy boy Qibli.

  • @Hexagonius-js8tl
    @Hexagonius-js8tl Год назад

    Great job! I subbed at 10k! your channel has been amazing so far, keep it up

  • @nfl-wonders9048
    @nfl-wonders9048 Год назад

    JMA doing math *gets Qibli as his answer* “ wow I got it right”

  • @adderfriends3478
    @adderfriends3478 Год назад

    video's still amaze me-

  • @arandomboye8799
    @arandomboye8799 Год назад

    I’ll be real, when I first read book 14 I didn’t like Snowfall because of her hate towards nightwings, but once I read on more and also discovered the crown was the reason for hating nightwings, I loved her character.

  • @kaliido_scope
    @kaliido_scope Год назад +1

    Book 14 was a really weird reading experience for me because I just found it extremely difficult to like or empathize with Snowfall. Even when knowing her inner workings and all the hardships thrown at her, I just couldn’t bring myself to like her. I found myself wishing I was reading from Hazel’s perspective instead cause I was way more interested in her than Snowfall. Hazel or Jerboa, because Boa’s flashbacks were the only part of the book I thoroughly enjoyed. Snowfall spent the book being rude to Lynx and everyone else, and by the time she had developed, the damage had been done for me. I couldn’t get invested in her arc so I didn’t like her by the end of it, to which her fully developed seemed generic to me. Clearly not everyone else thinks this way though. I really think it’s just a matter of preference for me, especially when you lay out the pieces like that.

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад

      Yeah, I also found it very difficult to read at first. I respected her more by the end though.

  • @Acticice
    @Acticice Год назад

    snowfall became my favorite character because of her character development lol

  • @Chui_Edits
    @Chui_Edits Год назад

    Tsunami and Winters character development exists: (Tui) “What is that”

  • @beaweeng282
    @beaweeng282 Год назад +1

    Zuko is so iconic all the copycats will never be like him

    • @gut853
      @gut853 Год назад

      Definitely one of the greatest written animated characters of all time

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад

      "The highest form of praise is imitation."

  • @shara7130
    @shara7130 Год назад +2

    I highly doubt this came out 16 seconds ago RUclips

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад

      It's certainly possible hahaha - had to come out at some point right?

  • @WeeeeeeeE__123
    @WeeeeeeeE__123 Год назад

    Another great series (tv show) that has amazing character development is shera and the princess of power

    • @JadeMountainArchive
      @JadeMountainArchive  Год назад +1

      Catradora is one of my favorite ships in media because of how well it's built hahaha

  • @sniperlizardshorts
    @sniperlizardshorts Год назад +1

    Why isn't JAM an English teacher? This is so useful!