Excellent story!!! I had to listen to it twice, read it once, and rewind it in all those tiny details that are so important for this story. For those of you who don't have the time to listen to it several times or with a lot of attention, ( SUPER SPOILER ALERT), the story is about a supernatural building that makes you travel forwards or backwards in time depending on the direction you take in its hallway. I understood the floorplan of the building is round (imagine a circle with a belt of apartments in its outer side, then a hallway, and then at the center more apartments), if you walk counterclockwise you go to the past, if you walk clockwise you go to the future. OP lost his wife and he is trying to find her, there is a "security guard/supernatural time travelling being of sorts" that helps OP giving him instructions, but in the end OP goes back one extra lap than he needed to (he needed to go back 4 laps, but he did 5)
@@BeardedSerpent I Wasn't Confused, I just Wanted to Knöw Aböut the Big SPOILER.. We're there Many People NOT Understanding it..?? I Sometimes listen a 2cd Time and Read it as I Listen.. Do You Not Think Other's do Töö..?? Take Care. From 🇨🇦
Yes me too hes the only creepypasta reader that I can stand listening for hours on end I fall asleep to his voice every night I like mrcreeps and creepsmcpasta just not quite as much as this man
Fall is really getting me into the spooky feeling more than usual. Sucks that almost everywhere has pretty much ignored Halloween and gone straight to Christmas.
Kinda hard to do Halloween with covid stuff going around. Trick or treating, big parties, and some people just aren't in the mood for the festive decorations (at least where I am)
Last October I think I was listening to the gas station stories which I’m in love with btw! Please keep up the great work! I love your content and I will order me some tea one day I swear! Have a good day or night? Whatever time it is wherever you are. I hope you have a blessed day
The writer of this one is good. This was fantastic. You know a writer is good when you hear, or read, the story and can see it in your mind while listening or reading.
@@chance2413 Saying someone's not smart because of a mistake in pronunciation is not something a smart person would say, nor would they be thriving in the comments just to bash someone who's prosperous.
chance2413 they say never to make fun of someone who mispronounces a word, because it means they learned it through reading. People who read a lot are definitely intelligent. Out of the thousands and thousands of words that he reads, he maybe mispronounces a couple. Those aren’t bad odds my friend.
Then run out your apartment. Technically you wouldn't be walking out your apartment, you would be running out your apartment, so something terrible won't happen.
Wonder if anyone else gets this but. I spend a lot of time listening to creepypastas mainly in bed to sleep and most dont even sink in like I was not really listening but every once in awhile I hear a pasta that rily sinks in. This one did it for me its 4 in the morning and I was trying to sleep and now my heart is racing to hear the end
Now the weather has become awesome, that means my favorite month is ending. At least I have lots of horror stories to listen to and more MCP to listen to. Now if TFTGS #3 would finally be released....
Holy shit... that was a GOOOODEN!! The writer of THIS ONE has a higher I.Q.; That much is obvious! Thank you smart person for writing such a good story in an infinite mountain of, what I call, "crappy pastas". It takes quite a good one to impress me, not that I'm someone TO impress, but I'm just saying that in MY, humble, opinion... that was a very good one, and I'm impressed! Awesome job MrCreepyPasta... As per usual... you're one of the Bestest out there!!! 🤘🤘🤘🤘👏👏👏👏🥰🥰🥰🥰✌✌✌✌😍😍😍😍😈😈😈😈👻👻👻👻🤴🏽🤴🏽🤴🏽🤴🏽
Might be different for America, but here in Australia, working security, we can not accept any forms of cash and/or gifts as the government forbids it mainly because it has to be declared so they get there cut from the gift you got
He contemplates blowing up the apartment complex to kill all the "possible" duplicates of himself, and Carl, and everyone else. End the haunts, or so he hopes. Maybe he still hopes to get the job, but be placed somewhere else to live in? What's really confusing to me is, why did he encourage her to tell him about the job? Why not tell her not to? That would've ended the time shenanigans. Instead, he opts to say go for it, but then thinks he's have to FIGHT an army of himself for some reason.
Natures Temper has one from a few months ago about a haunted indian mountain. The name slips my mind, but it should be pretty obvious from the thumbnail.
The blacked out apts are him stopping himself the one telling the tale was his 15th go round and he made his 16th go round go there cause if he didn't something bad would happen to him or his wife and they would wind up there anyway
I was following until he called his wife to tell her to tell him to take the job.... Why would he say take the job after everything he's experienced because he took it?
I don't get this one. I get that there was tine travel stuff happening but other than that I have no idea what was going on. I'd hear MCP's voice express tension and fear, so I'd figure something pivotal was happening. But I didn't get what or why it was pivotal. Except for people's skin sloughing off, which is gross and terrifying anyway. I DO get that much. But if anyone know what this story is about and can explain it ... please do, and thanks.
@@austinobambino1360 because I’m listening to it and then watching the show at the same time. I don’t have to pay attention to the video just what I’m hearing and with the show I have to follow the subtitles and show
1408 Fucked the Shining and this Story is the Baby. I know this may seem fucked up , but I actually feel bad for the other guy who got kneed in the balls. Specifically on a kind of circumstances surrounding everything. I don't believe his younger version would behave in such a manner. Time travel can fuck you up
~ Prayer to Shin'nai ~ Shin'nai-san's guardians are... One, snake, two, monkey, three, crow, four, spider. Five, prepare for the feast when the evening mists arrive. Six, the badger runs along late with nare as a fix. Seven, the corrupt yomibito rise to oppose the mountain. Eight, death of the damned yomibito is the mandate. Nine, one soul per day now to bind. Ten, the mists rise away again.
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"This'll be good for us!" he said minutes after listening to his wife screaming for her life while being attacked by unspecified time demons 👀
Yeah that was somehow strange. Why not say "Don't ever move there!"
Don't know if you watch anime, but I'm thinking Steins;Gate, where you have to line everything up on the timeline to correct the differential.
@@8MoneyIzmyMission8l lovb 1
Excellent story!!! I had to listen to it twice, read it once, and rewind it in all those tiny details that are so important for this story.
For those of you who don't have the time to listen to it several times or with a lot of attention, ( SUPER SPOILER ALERT), the story is about a supernatural building that makes you travel forwards or backwards in time depending on the direction you take in its hallway. I understood the floorplan of the building is round (imagine a circle with a belt of apartments in its outer side, then a hallway, and then at the center more apartments), if you walk counterclockwise you go to the past, if you walk clockwise you go to the future. OP lost his wife and he is trying to find her, there is a "security guard/supernatural time travelling being of sorts" that helps OP giving him instructions, but in the end OP goes back one extra lap than he needed to (he needed to go back 4 laps, but he did 5)
Is there a part 2, it sucks that the story ends here
You’re an angel
WHY DID YOU WRITE THIS IN THE COMMENTS..???
@@rtempest12To help people understand? What's so confusing here?
@@BeardedSerpent I Wasn't Confused, I just Wanted to Knöw Aböut the Big SPOILER.. We're there Many People NOT Understanding it..??
I Sometimes listen a 2cd Time and Read it as I Listen.. Do You Not Think Other's do Töö..??
Take Care. From 🇨🇦
I'm dreading October ending. I've grown accustomed to the multiple daily uploads! 😭
And last month of not having a civil war.
Me too and keep political bs outta our creepy pasta comments lol
Yes me too hes the only creepypasta reader that I can stand listening for hours on end I fall asleep to his voice every night I like mrcreeps and creepsmcpasta just not quite as much as this man
@@thegamerdad4864 have you tried mr creeps and natures temper?
@@ashesofthefallen3266 MrCreepypasta, Natures temper, Dark Somnium and CORPSE senpai are easily the top 4 in my opinion.
Fall is really getting me into the spooky feeling more than usual. Sucks that almost everywhere has pretty much ignored Halloween and gone straight to Christmas.
I agree... Atleast the houses are decorated with Halloween decorations though
Kinda hard to do Halloween with covid stuff going around. Trick or treating, big parties, and some people just aren't in the mood for the festive decorations (at least where I am)
I’m in an unbelievable amount of pain; only the voice of my favorite creepypasta narrator can console me
You too?
Only thing that can ease my pain… more cowbell! 🐄🔔
I’m just so confused to the point where I think I’m on drugs now
Knowing what happens, I don't get why he would still tell his wife about the place. I thought he'd tell her the winning lotto numbers
Um... yes i would totally take advantage of that.
Yeah, it really looked like it was going to go that way. Otherwise, why have any focus on the lottery earlier in the story at all? Real strange.
I like the way you think!
A part 2 of this in the pov of the security guard in a tales of the gas station type vibe could be mind blowing-
Yeah, that's called human interaction. It sucks.
Jeez this one is a head trip
Here’s what you do: don’t walk outside the hallways. Crawl or jog instead. XD
Last October I think I was listening to the gas station stories which I’m in love with btw! Please keep up the great work! I love your content and I will order me some tea one day I swear! Have a good day or night? Whatever time it is wherever you are. I hope you have a blessed day
Stay out of the apartment. Problem solved.
Edit: Not as simple as I thought. Stay in the apartment?
That feel when the song Time Warp becomes your reality.
The writer of this one is good. This was fantastic. You know a writer is good when you hear, or read, the story and can see it in your mind while listening or reading.
i’d love to be a security guard that just says ominous shit to freak people out 12:24 had me cackling i love you patrice
Pretty sure 'patriss' is actually pronounced puht-rEEs (Patrice), and if i'm wrong about that, lord help anybody actually named patriss
I thought he was saying Patches
@@shizukaze i guess it could be the masculine/male form of "Katniss"
If something happens, then don't go into ur apartment. You can't leave if ur not in it. Then bad stuff won't happen.
Big brain time
His pronunciation of Patrice is killing me 🤣
He's not smart. Poor reader gets his rent paid by people who want him to read to them. Gotta love 2020
@@chance2413 I don't remember ordering this pitcher of salty tears, but I guess I have it now.
Anybody need a refill?
@@chance2413 Saying someone's not smart because of a mistake in pronunciation is not something a smart person would say, nor would they be thriving in the comments just to bash someone who's prosperous.
chance2413 they say never to make fun of someone who mispronounces a word, because it means they learned it through reading. People who read a lot are definitely intelligent. Out of the thousands and thousands of words that he reads, he maybe mispronounces a couple. Those aren’t bad odds my friend.
Stopping my jojo binge for this, hope you're proud
omg same 😭 i was rewatching diu
Nani?!
So either the apartments were built on a temporal anomaly, or the apartment complex IS a temporal anomaly.
It was 105° here.
I need Autumn temperatures to get here, now. So hearing you say “Happy Halloween!!” just made me happy. Thanks!! Crazy story.
Excellent story, very inventive and fresh!
Should have sent his wife the winning lottery numbers instead of the info about the job. Then again, she was the one that looked, not him.
Then run out your apartment. Technically you wouldn't be walking out your apartment, you would be running out your apartment, so something terrible won't happen.
you could also crawl, jog, skip ect
@@radiantinnbroadcasting509 True. Or hire a pizza delivery guy and make him run out your apartment for you whilst letting you have a piggy back ride.
Binge-watching for days. This one is exceptional in its storyline. Love it! It could go on and on and on. Too short! :)
I love getting into bed and seeing there’s a new video to fall asleep too
Wonder if anyone else gets this but. I spend a lot of time listening to creepypastas mainly in bed to sleep and most dont even sink in like I was not really listening but every once in awhile I hear a pasta that rily sinks in. This one did it for me its 4 in the morning and I was trying to sleep and now my heart is racing to hear the end
Now the weather has become awesome, that means my favorite month is ending. At least I have lots of horror stories to listen to and more MCP to listen to. Now if TFTGS #3 would finally be released....
ALRIGHT FINE you got me, I bought a large order of Dark and Stormy Night with an MCP sticker.
Carl is just Jerry in disguise....
And that is why I don't fucks with time I learned that lesion from the ending of Bioshock Infinite.
So this guy is unnerved because he doesn't have a shitload of neighbors and theres empty unfinished apartments.
God sometimes these characters are so mentally slow its hard to believe we’re talking about adults
Great story and narration btw
Introverts be like:
I AM SO CONFUSED THIS IS WACK
Oh I am going to put my DnD party through that building. It's gonna be fun.
Damn, a Pasta about my everyday life! That’s kinda cool
Now that was a mind bender! 🤯
Weird that the lottery story wasn't followed up on, assumed he'd tell her the numbers so they'd avoid the building altogether
Holy shit... that was a GOOOODEN!! The writer of THIS ONE has a higher I.Q.; That much is obvious! Thank you smart person for writing such a good story in an infinite mountain of, what I call, "crappy pastas". It takes quite a good one to impress me, not that I'm someone TO impress, but I'm just saying that in MY, humble, opinion... that was a very good one, and I'm impressed! Awesome job MrCreepyPasta... As per usual... you're one of the Bestest out there!!! 🤘🤘🤘🤘👏👏👏👏🥰🥰🥰🥰✌✌✌✌😍😍😍😍😈😈😈😈👻👻👻👻🤴🏽🤴🏽🤴🏽🤴🏽
When he called his wife from the store why did he call his wife and tell her about the “new job” near the end?
Because that's how it's supposed to happen
this is a good one
Yeeet new episode while at work!!!
Might be different for America, but here in Australia, working security, we can not accept any forms of cash and/or gifts as the government forbids it mainly because it has to be declared so they get there cut from the gift you got
41 MINS!! yes!!!! thank you !!
Fantastic story!
Everytime I wake up something terrible happens, real horror story!
So many found and lost them selves among the endless abyss of time
This one was def a head trip.
Yessss this was so well done! N I'm usually a hard critic lol
Damn I was hoping he got out 😪
Why am I watching this. It's bedtime
@Blunt Boy ah yes
I watch with my ears
Uhh I do it every bedtime
@Blunt Boy what you talking bout?? I sit & watch the the video glitch for 41 minutes !!!
@Blunt Boy lmao jk but I do see what you mean everyone says watch
Damn, this was a great one! Can we get a movie adaptation, please?! 😉
There is a movie like this, it's called primer
I remember the story but I like it I wanna hear it again
Does anyone know if there is a part two or some sequel of this?
Nah I’m not sure myself
The fact the dude has jerrys voice lol
Ok, can anyone explain to me what he decided to do at the end?
I’m confused
He contemplates blowing up the apartment complex to kill all the "possible" duplicates of himself, and Carl, and everyone else. End the haunts, or so he hopes. Maybe he still hopes to get the job, but be placed somewhere else to live in?
What's really confusing to me is, why did he encourage her to tell him about the job? Why not tell her not to? That would've ended the time shenanigans. Instead, he opts to say go for it, but then thinks he's have to FIGHT an army of himself for some reason.
TL;DR, he went insane and paranoid from the time shenanigans that the apartment complex put him through, and his reactions are no longer competant.
That's what I'm saying I'm thinking he was about say something different when he called
@@JustAFriendlySatanWorshipper
TL;DR = “too long; didn’t read”
The one guy sounds like Jerry from TFTGS lol
Holy shit I love this story!
So Circle as a creepy pasta
i love your stories!
Huh, time traveling building? Not bad. Not bad at all
does anyone have any recommendations of stories like this??? I absolutely LOVE time loops
Natures Temper has one from a few months ago about a haunted indian mountain. The name slips my mind, but it should be pretty obvious from the thumbnail.
have you read “The Strangest Security Tapes I’ve Ever Seen” it’s my favorite time loop story
Bedside Manor has lots of time slips, warps and rewinds.
I really enjoyed this one, but I wonder is there a part 2?
This made my brain hurt
7 minutes in, OH. HEY JERRY!!!!
Can someone give me the link to the song at the end? :)
Is that spongebob font? I like it.
Part 2 coming?
This story was fucking awsome
Does anyone have or know any stories like this I like creepy pastas involving time
Ugh…time travel stories. They give me anxiety.
The blacked out apts are him stopping himself the one telling the tale was his 15th go round and he made his 16th go round go there cause if he didn't something bad would happen to him or his wife and they would wind up there anyway
My guy just went to setealém lol
when is "Tales from the Gas Station volume 3" coming out on audioble?
I was following until he called his wife to tell her to tell him to take the job.... Why would he say take the job after everything he's experienced because he took it?
He’s the future das y it was a time loop a paradox
Jerry origin stories
I don't get this one. I get that there was tine travel stuff happening but other than that I have no idea what was going on. I'd hear MCP's voice express tension and fear, so I'd figure something pivotal was happening. But I didn't get what or why it was pivotal. Except for people's skin sloughing off, which is gross and terrifying anyway. I DO get that much. But if anyone know what this story is about and can explain it ... please do, and thanks.
Why are these guys still in that apartment building
So bro wanted to go back and do that stupid shit again? He hates his wife she gets killed repeatedly
3 years late but all I hear is jerry
Woo-hoo! More Mr. Creepypasta! DAILY!! Sigh...I'm even MORE sad that October has to end. Boo!
TIME LOOP!!!
Damn, I hope you've since learned how to pronounce the name Patrice
Pat Ris
I’m watching anime and listening to this so this is great🙏
Why both at the same time?
@@austinobambino1360 because I’m listening to it and then watching the show at the same time. I don’t have to pay attention to the video just what I’m hearing and with the show I have to follow the subtitles and show
@@austinobambino1360 oh and because it’s fun to do so lol
Dumb high 190 IQ over here !! xP
I start missing some of the story if I start reading too many comments & need to rewind a bit
Sames here.
You should heart this
You never know what’ll happen Mr. CreepyPasta
💔
"Every time I walk outside my apartment, something terrible happens". So basically youre the protagonist from Silent Hill 4.
I asked MCP for volume 3 of TFTGS what I got is terrifying
This sounds like a creepy pasta title
1408 Fucked the Shining and this Story is the Baby.
I know this may seem fucked up ,
but I actually feel bad for the other guy who got kneed in the balls. Specifically on a kind of circumstances surrounding everything. I don't believe his younger version would behave in such a manner. Time travel can fuck you up
Whats jerry doing here?
Here at 100 views
*Sees title*
Same.
Why the thumbnail look like justin whang
Can I just say how much I hate Audible right now? Where is Volume 3!?!
Wat
LUL
~ Prayer to Shin'nai ~
Shin'nai-san's guardians are...
One, snake, two, monkey, three, crow, four, spider.
Five, prepare for the feast when the evening mists arrive.
Six, the badger runs along late with nare as a fix.
Seven, the corrupt yomibito rise to oppose the mountain.
Eight, death of the damned yomibito is the mandate.
Nine, one soul per day now to bind.
Ten, the mists rise away again.
Why does this dude have ruin his good luck. Just be happy you have a job and a bigger apartment.