"I Woke Up to an Emergency Alert on my Phone" [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime

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  • Опубликовано: 5 янв 2025

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  • @paunchycactus6459
    @paunchycactus6459 4 года назад +982

    Mrcreepypasta:"The monsters have been eradicated, I feel relieved"
    Me: looks at time......15 mins left "OH GOD"

  • @FLASHM97
    @FLASHM97 4 года назад +826

    Biggest plot hole.
    How did the phone battery last so long

    • @BubbleTEA-or8jx
      @BubbleTEA-or8jx 4 года назад +12

      Uniform_collector he had a charger?

    • @9bang88
      @9bang88 4 года назад +13

      Bubble TEA where did he plug it in

    • @kermitbaby3330
      @kermitbaby3330 4 года назад +7

      Draga Nam Sloboda the bunker maybe idk

    • @pifflesomepuffnadder855
      @pifflesomepuffnadder855 4 года назад +31

      He probably had one o' those mobile chargers that I've never heard of or seen before.
      It's either that or I'm just an idiot who's writing and extremely wasteful comment just so I can read it when I'm bored.
      What do you think?

    • @iisforimagiraffe9143
      @iisforimagiraffe9143 4 года назад +12

      He could have a power bank

  • @9bang88
    @9bang88 4 года назад +302

    Imagine falling backwards from firing a handgun lmao

    • @turtletoes4496
      @turtletoes4496 4 года назад +52

      First man to fire a handgun chambered in 50. Cal😂

    • @starryeyedgirls
      @starryeyedgirls 3 года назад +13

      pls i fired a gandgun when i was 7 and i was fine tf 😭

    • @thekyng809
      @thekyng809 3 года назад +10

      I mean if it was a 500 mag

    • @VampireQueenAmy
      @VampireQueenAmy 3 года назад +13

      Imagine not understanding how recoil works

    • @9bang88
      @9bang88 3 года назад +16

      @@VampireQueenAmy if you mean the writer yea lol

  • @saturnstar4258
    @saturnstar4258 4 года назад +294

    Listening to this during quarantine is so funny, dudes like "I dont think I can be here by myself forever"
    *Me, on day 15 with bowl 82927 of popcorn* "dont worry you'll get use to it, the voices start to become friends"

    • @strawberrytiramisu
      @strawberrytiramisu 3 года назад +8

      I’ve been doing the same thing (not going anywhere but the store and not hanging out with friends ) for going on 4 years. No regrets honestly. I had lost myself because before I went the homeschooled route I’d change myself to fit in. Now I do whatever I want and I’ve never felt so free and happy.

    • @harleen4328
      @harleen4328 3 года назад +3

      Same

    • @ONLINEHELP3R
      @ONLINEHELP3R 2 года назад +1

      True tho Saturn true true

    • @shawncollier571
      @shawncollier571 2 года назад +1

      I love my voices

    • @christopherkinsella3912
      @christopherkinsella3912 Год назад +2

      “Day 15”. You sweet, innocent, soul.

  • @buddypowe
    @buddypowe 4 года назад +488

    damn extrovert couldn't keep it together and stay put

    • @noyou3334
      @noyou3334 4 года назад +22

      Factsss

    • @hunterlutz6172
      @hunterlutz6172 4 года назад +4

      @buddypowe Love your Dbz-Themed profile

    • @the7thseven873
      @the7thseven873 4 года назад +35

      Being an Introverts has its benefits Stay inside = 😌✨ Peace of mind.

    • @CA-vy8et
      @CA-vy8et 4 года назад +15

      makeanewchronoplz lmao a few of my family members are like this and were the first ones to crack during quarantine...

    • @YoungPimpinOG
      @YoungPimpinOG 4 года назад +7

      Being ambiverted is lonely..

  • @Teboski78
    @Teboski78 4 года назад +218

    I find it hard to believe that a prepper dude with his own bunker wouldn’t have more than a single handgun as weaponry

    • @pho3n1xr1sing
      @pho3n1xr1sing 3 года назад +35

      Right one side arm and one box of ammo no prepper in the world is gonna be that poorly armed

    • @twilightparanormalresearch186
      @twilightparanormalresearch186 3 года назад +12

      Once I own a house (currently renting) I’ll have a bunker built for nukes, tornadoes, other disaster scenarios. And I’ll have a few firearms a handgun, shotgun, ar15 or ak47 doesn’t matter and Mabye a long rifle

    • @Teboski78
      @Teboski78 3 года назад +12

      @@pho3n1xr1sing unless this takes place in a E🤮urope & the weapon & ammo are illegal so it was hard for him to get more

    • @zt_g
      @zt_g 3 года назад +21

      @@Teboski78 He did say "torch" instead of "flashlight" so entirely possible that at least the author isn't in the US.

    • @mwbgaming28
      @mwbgaming28 2 года назад +5

      @@zt_g could be in Australia, we use the word torch

  • @winterseb1725
    @winterseb1725 4 года назад +529

    “And good bye”
    *HEY THERE KIDS ITS ME MR.CREEPYPASTA*

    • @solsasson2760
      @solsasson2760 4 года назад +10

      👏

    • @solsasson2760
      @solsasson2760 4 года назад +11

      The shit that freaks me out the most is how he knows I'm a kid like some Chris Angel shit

    • @davidmorningway6025
      @davidmorningway6025 4 года назад +7

      Some narrators let the mood slowly fade with music and ambience to keep the mood, but he just dives right in there. I guess when you have a 1.5+ M following you need to plug a few events, products and your wife's DnD tea co.
      Lol my dad is a face model for The cover of Dungeons n Dragons (The Marco Volo 3 set) he is the handsome blonde Hercules looking warrior. Funny he can't stand that kind of stuff but I'm a huge nerd, but also a buff nerd thanks to his trainings lol, but I digress 😇😎😈. MrCreepypasta.....ill send you an autographed cover for some tea lol....I actually think he only has one set that he keeps in his former model portfolio but I could be wrong lol. I still want some sleepy time tea with Valerien! Hahaha 🎧🎙💀

    • @winterseb1725
      @winterseb1725 4 года назад

      Austin Lynde-Peve not anymore 😞👊🏼

    • @kekelove2611
      @kekelove2611 4 года назад +3

      He scares me everytime🤣

  • @TheFirehands150
    @TheFirehands150 4 года назад +497

    Normal person: Yup, there are monsters outside so I'm gonna lock myself in and hide.
    Creepypasta guy: Curiosity got the better of me AND THE MONSTER SAW ME, JIM!!! HE SAW ME!!!

    • @nicholasryan7766
      @nicholasryan7766 2 года назад +5

      Yeah, dude's definitely a Chad, no doubt

    • @timohara7717
      @timohara7717 Год назад

      Nah bruh to avoid american endermen and the most common of reddit creatures, siren head evil man and pole people, you gotta outgoofy them or kill them

    • @KingJim97
      @KingJim97 6 месяцев назад

      I told you not to look outside

    • @blueferal8626
      @blueferal8626 5 месяцев назад

      Starts screaming and calling the creature the n word 🦖

    • @John-v5m
      @John-v5m 3 дня назад +1

      Well would you 100% believe what you saw?

  • @tyresemalik87
    @tyresemalik87 4 года назад +1021

    Am i the only one here who actually gets scared listening to the stories I swear to god it feels like I’m the person in the story

    • @EarthenCavy
      @EarthenCavy 4 года назад +73

      Dude, I was listening to "The Showers" in an RV, parked in the middle of a pitch-black forest, and I thought I was gonna crap my pants. I totally hear you, haha!!

    • @jayhuseby3660
      @jayhuseby3660 4 года назад +45

      I listen to these on third shift in an empty factory with just me and one other person in the place. There are lots of times I have to just turn it off and try to not be creeped out.

    • @warthunder5014
      @warthunder5014 4 года назад +22

      It used to be like that for me but I got over it after about a month and I sleep to these now I still have moments when I'm listening to one and it really freaks me out and I go lock my camper door and windows and I throw covers over them so nothing can see in and I cant see out

    • @hazard1126
      @hazard1126 4 года назад +3

      I o

    • @pasteldreams5413
      @pasteldreams5413 4 года назад +9

      Usually, no. But that's because I listen to creepypasta when I'm multi-tasking throughout the day, and rarely when it's dark outside.

  • @johntetzlaff94
    @johntetzlaff94 4 года назад +98

    40:30 wait a minute, there's still quite a bit left in the story....

  • @kaydee1338
    @kaydee1338 4 года назад +168

    Story: Dropping my gun and!........ LETS PLAY RAID SHADOW LEGENDS

    • @monkeysareswag4381
      @monkeysareswag4381 4 года назад +1

      💀💀💀

    • @Tiger0408
      @Tiger0408 4 года назад +3

      For me just now was a fortnite ad 🙄

    • @charlesblackwell327
      @charlesblackwell327 3 года назад

      lol I got an expedia ad at that same point thought it was part of the story for a moment.

    • @ZacAttackManiac
      @ZacAttackManiac 2 года назад

      Drop gun and... wtf RUclips I already play raid shadow legends...

    • @damkylan3
      @damkylan3 2 года назад

      That’s the true horror here.

  • @doc7orwho138
    @doc7orwho138 3 года назад +40

    "Dont lick random strangers on the street" XD
    thats one of the best quotes ive gotten from mcp so far

    • @zt_g
      @zt_g 3 года назад +4

      I feel like this is good advice, even without a pandemic. At least ask first; consent is important.

    • @harleen4328
      @harleen4328 3 года назад

      @@zt_g yeah

  • @princeblackelf4265
    @princeblackelf4265 4 года назад +288

    finally, been waiting for a complete version. oddly relevant for the current times.

  • @wintertimber1749
    @wintertimber1749 Год назад +13

    The narration together really ties the horror together. The panic in the voice at the right moments is incredible
    Edit: Ha sleep paralysis

  • @CalebLaw1
    @CalebLaw1 4 года назад +178

    I'd say dying in a mass explosion is actually probably one of the best/quickest/painless kinds of deaths. Not so bad.

    • @villagemarauder
      @villagemarauder 4 года назад +13

      Wouldn't it activate every pain receptor throughout your entire body?

    • @CalebLaw1
      @CalebLaw1 4 года назад +14

      @@villagemarauder Huh...I thought it would be over before you could feel anything. However, it'd probably be over in less than a second, so there's that.

    • @What-thaW
      @What-thaW 4 года назад +14

      I think Caleb is right because there’s a short delay to pain reaching the brain and therefore being felt / processed.
      It’s usually meaningless but explosions are pretty damn fast so your brain might just not be there anymore once the pain receptors’ signals reach it

    • @serpentshadws2020
      @serpentshadws2020 3 года назад +7

      @@CalebLaw1 maybe- I never had a bomb hit me so ya

    • @justcommoncurt
      @justcommoncurt 2 года назад +2

      That's a misconception like dying in space. It would be quick if you were close to the blast zone. If not your body would be hit with burns all over but it wouldn't kill you right away. As a defense mechanism your body would slow blood circulation and you'd likely be stuck on the ground in pain slowly dying from radiation poisoning 🙃

  • @adyn315
    @adyn315 3 года назад +29

    man gets relentlessly hunted by endermen: part one

    • @harleen4328
      @harleen4328 3 года назад +1

      XD yes i love this comment

  • @oofree4013
    @oofree4013 4 года назад +97

    And if it makes you happy, this was a parallel universe alternate ending, the ending in our universe included the carpet bombing actually working, and he made it to the shelter without a hitch.

  • @turtletoes4496
    @turtletoes4496 4 года назад +64

    When you raise your voice, you sound like a preacher

    • @Behemoth9030
      @Behemoth9030 4 года назад +1

      Don’t insult him.

    • @secrettoxin4718
      @secrettoxin4718 4 года назад +11

      Mike Horvath woah white knight who said it was an insult

    • @ThreeofMoths
      @ThreeofMoths 4 года назад +10

      @weeb ladka they said he sounded like a preacher, by that description, when he raises his voice, it fills with passion and valor, it's pretty obvious that they meant that, and didn't mean that he sounded like a religion fanatic, it's on you for misunderstanding and trying to speak for someone and taking offense to a comment that wasn't even directed to you.

    • @catsdogswoof3968
      @catsdogswoof3968 3 года назад

      @weeb ladka Kinda racist

  • @shashummga3477
    @shashummga3477 4 года назад +168

    The ending was pretty unsatisfying... I was hoping that we’d figure out more about these things and where they came from

    • @Wolf-jp4xi
      @Wolf-jp4xi 4 года назад +21

      They were creatures..And even though it wasn't real, you can't just expect a biologist to go and see what they are...Or, too much information.The guy/girl did do everything for their life so...Yea

    • @usernamepassword236
      @usernamepassword236 4 года назад +27

      Well not every story will end with the protagonist finding out how to stop them and saving the day it is much more reasonable that he isnt some super genius that can follow the clues and see how they were created

    • @caseywright3740
      @caseywright3740 4 года назад +11

      I mean I find this ending more realistic but I do think the ending could have been better

    • @caydenhancox7346
      @caydenhancox7346 4 года назад +4

      If you want to contact the og creator, there name is u/voidedconsience on reddit

    • @jenniferodell9228
      @jenniferodell9228 4 года назад

      @@aldeenztheman crack head's, they we're crack head's!

  • @NovaHendrixx
    @NovaHendrixx 4 года назад +9

    the panic in your voice is SURREAL! its absolutely insane how realistic you make them feel. i remember listening to the first half of it on one of those tts reddit stories channels. i was scared shitless but something about the emotionless robot voice made it slightly less scary. but your human voice and natural panic is so fantastically realistic i couldn’t sleep for the night. it’s now 9 am and i have not slept at all yet. i’ve been glued to my bed which has been transformed into a nasty pool of sweat. absolutely amazing 10/10 would shit my pants again.

  • @butter_akbar2688
    @butter_akbar2688 4 года назад +208

    You show emotion when telling these stories which is good it makes it seem as you were in the story
    Those monsters are smart they left his house I attacked because they knew that “he” was gonna lead them to other survivors

    • @catsdogswoof3968
      @catsdogswoof3968 3 года назад

      War lord

    • @butter_akbar2688
      @butter_akbar2688 2 года назад

      @@catsdogswoof3968 yes?

    • @timohara7717
      @timohara7717 Год назад

      I think I was talking about how American endermen are extemly strong and s

    • @timohara7717
      @timohara7717 Год назад

      ​@@butter_akbar2688 also you commented after the death of my channel

    • @butter_akbar2688
      @butter_akbar2688 Год назад

      @@timohara7717 that’s is tragic

  • @wendydornoc6374
    @wendydornoc6374 4 года назад +36

    I am having a hip replacement in 6 weeks.. I listen to story time a lot to get me thru the preoperative jitters.. Thanks..

  • @GlaciesA
    @GlaciesA 3 года назад +15

    I would've stayed in the bunker until there was 0 food left, just imagining having to deal with a bunch of ppl in a small closed space during an apocalypse sucks lol being alone is way better if you have enough to survive

    • @thetrollage1298
      @thetrollage1298 2 года назад +1

      With no entertainment and no human interaction even the biggest introverts would want and need actual interaction.

    • @GlaciesA
      @GlaciesA 2 года назад

      @@thetrollage1298 Yes just how I like It, no one, specially in what it looks like the end of the world or a huge area, the last thing I want is ppl unless I had no food or shelter, he had everything just needed to sit thigh until there was nothing left, nothing else matters, fuck ppl normally and extra fuck them in the extremes situations, I would've lived alone for as long as I needed

    • @catsdogswoof3968
      @catsdogswoof3968 Год назад

      ​@@thetrollage1298but they don't need too

  • @MeteoricCat3278
    @MeteoricCat3278 4 года назад +31

    He should've stayed in the bunker. Sure, he keeps talking about his sanity, but... At least he would've been safe.

    • @strawberrytiramisu
      @strawberrytiramisu 3 года назад +10

      I would’ve stayed in the bunker till I had no choice but to leave ngl

    • @joshXnovak1
      @joshXnovak1 2 года назад

      See, that’s the the thing about losing your sanity. You don’t make rational decisions.

  • @jentaylor2494
    @jentaylor2494 11 месяцев назад +1

    I've listened to so many of these stories but I always come back to this one. One of the best ever

  • @spontaneouslizard
    @spontaneouslizard 4 года назад +125

    knowing how people reacted to quarantine, the fakest part of this story is that people actually did stay in their houses when told to.

    • @jimmysuros6302
      @jimmysuros6302 4 года назад +17

      This scenario is extremely different from a pandemic. People would be more scared of these creatures than a virus.

    • @strawberrytiramisu
      @strawberrytiramisu 3 года назад +20

      @@jimmysuros6302 maybe. I feel like some people would still stay out just to catch the creatures on camera for the purpose of clout.

    • @vg4655
      @vg4655 3 года назад +5

      Damn that says a lot about our society

    • @duckmeat4674
      @duckmeat4674 3 года назад +7

      People did stay in their houses, we were promised 15 days to fight the curve

    • @antoninstrelba1948
      @antoninstrelba1948 3 года назад +1

      i mean.. covid and shit like this is something different

  • @supergang1279
    @supergang1279 4 года назад +19

    The emotion in his voice is amazing!! I love this one so much!!

  • @viewerdiscreationisadvised660
    @viewerdiscreationisadvised660 4 года назад +48

    Still debating if this dude was just insane (or high) the whole time. Possibly killing his neighbor, some random stranger and presumably himself all while hallucinating.

  • @kaiseranthony842
    @kaiseranthony842 4 года назад +63

    This is the only notification for RUclips I have ever immediately clicked on. Thanks

  • @grimmtvgaming7653
    @grimmtvgaming7653 4 года назад +18

    Man what a ending, I had to listen to the last 7 minutes like 3 times

  • @iamafanofmanythings3973
    @iamafanofmanythings3973 4 года назад +253

    If this is about covid I'll literally throw my phone

    • @call_me_mrhate165
      @call_me_mrhate165 4 года назад +18

      This story was written a while ago then voiced in parts then posted in parts there's not way it's about covid-19 my dude

    • @johnwesch5926
      @johnwesch5926 4 года назад +6

      Whey

    • @tylerkincade6576
      @tylerkincade6576 4 года назад +2

      John Wesch weigh

    • @Jolis_Parsec
      @Jolis_Parsec 4 года назад +8

      Hey, look on the bright side, bruh. At least you don’t have to worry about turning into a giant worm while getting chased by your evil grandpa who’s somehow been reincarnated as a snapping tortoise. Just sayin’. 🤣

    • @hunterbell2905
      @hunterbell2905 4 года назад

      I

  • @-Emonem-
    @-Emonem- 2 года назад +49

    They need to make a movie about this. Who’s with me?

  • @bigcountrymountainman9740
    @bigcountrymountainman9740 4 года назад +123

    the crazy thing about carpet bombing is the fact that it doesn't destroy like a normal explosion. It doesn't have an intense shockwave that goes out a great distance. It's called the AOE or area of effect. Carpet bombshave a small area of effect but whatever it lands on completely blows it to pieces. For instance if they would drop a bomb with a large in a housing complex it with level all the housesand the only thing we left was the foundation... And there would be a ring of debris where the shockwave ended. When Hiroshima and Nagasaki was investigatedthe following day there was a ring of bodies and debris about 25 foot thick all the way around the city where theshockwave stop. Because after it pushes it out so far it dissipates and then everything that's being pushed by the shockwavestops as well. But carpet bombing would make the town look like he said in the story, like skeletons. I fought in the second Battle of Fallujah in 2004, Kandahar and Kabul with small insertions in between
    MOS 0 3 1 7 and there was a small town just outside of Kandahar that was housing jahad and their caches. We had a b-2 flyover and drop, what's called a section, in which they destroy a very specific area. They flew up one side of the townand completely destroyed the right side and then the plane turn and came back and destroyed the left side. When it was all said and done it look like God sent an angel down with a big sledgehammer... There was no fire anywhere it was just all concussion from shockwave. There was a goat that was fused into a metal pole, we guessed it was from where it has hit the pole so hard from the blast.

    • @tylerkincade6576
      @tylerkincade6576 4 года назад +6

      Matthew Dixon yeah man it’s defiantly not what they make it seem like in the movies. But that’s a crazy story especially the part with the goat. That would be really brutal to see that. The power of the force of the blast is insane.

    • @bigcountrymountainman9740
      @bigcountrymountainman9740 4 года назад +4

      @@tylerkincade6576 the only reason I knew it was a goat was because of a leg bone apace of the skull in one horn. But like it didn't go inside of the pole, it fused to the pole. From what I understand it was because of where it was only around 50 yards from ground zero and the amount of energy on something that can get burnt at 180 degrees is nothing for that type of concussion that comes off of that bomb when it goes off. Kaboom

    • @lrn5152
      @lrn5152 4 года назад +3

      @@bigcountrymountainman9740 First off, Marine here. Semper Fi to you. Second off, that's some really interesting stuff. I'm a nerd when it comes to some things and this just made me happy to learn. In all reality I enjoy when I learn new things like that even if it's dark or not very enjoyable in real life situations. But damnit, that is awesome.Thank you.

    • @bigcountrymountainman9740
      @bigcountrymountainman9740 4 года назад +3

      @@lrn5152 hello brother. What's your MOS
      Glad I could emulate your thought process. LOL I'm just kidding lol.
      I throw out a few situations through combat experience and between myself and my father grandfather and Uncle I have a lot of knowledge that I've gained from past military men and legends. I can't tell you how many times I've had people call me a liar and call b*******on things that I say in my comments.... But things you see in movies in comparison to what actually goes on in combat or just ina military setting, people don't realize that they have been brainwashed and deceived by what Hollywood portrays.
      My grandfather was a very very famous army rifleman of the 506th E company 101st airborne paratrooper regimen by the name of William Guarnere.
      I've never watched the series that they made about the 506 easy company called Band of Brothers because I was so close to my grandfather and he just died a couple of years ago, so with that said, I don't think I could handle watching it. Because I saw an interview with Tom Hanks about him and he said that the guy that played bill guarnere, played him so well that even my grandfather said that it was like watching him watch his self. He fought from Normandy to Bastogne to wear him and his best friend Joe Toye had their legs blown off.

    • @bigcountrymountainman9740
      @bigcountrymountainman9740 4 года назад +2

      @@lrn5152 I meant to ask you in my comment while your MOS was but I don't know if I did or not. I went on a big rant LOL

  • @brookelinn2926
    @brookelinn2926 4 года назад +56

    I'm sad right now so I'm watching this to make myself scared instead 😁

    • @KandyBoy69
      @KandyBoy69 4 года назад +1

      @@brookelinn2926 yo

    • @bxdvibes6746
      @bxdvibes6746 4 года назад +1

      @@brookelinn2926 ay same

    • @kari7403
      @kari7403 4 года назад +2

      @@brookelinn2926 as, I hope you're not as sad now, 3 months later.
      👍😁

    • @bloomblo_panda7656
      @bloomblo_panda7656 4 года назад +1

      How your not scared 9 months later👍😁

    • @99thpeanut59
      @99thpeanut59 4 года назад +1

      Bruh he’s probably back to being sad

  • @AlfAllton
    @AlfAllton 4 года назад +7

    You have such a way of telling the story that always put me on the edge of my seat, I find myself so engaged... Thank you Sir.

  • @christoperdixon4212
    @christoperdixon4212 4 года назад +41

    Good story but there are several things i dont get. After the bombing why wouldnt the military mop up? Even in iraq we would always move in force after a strike with armor and gunship support and that was against humans

    • @gachadumpsterfire6722
      @gachadumpsterfire6722 4 года назад +6

      Seeing as how there was a mob of the creatures going after op the second the door to the bunker with more people in it was open, I'd say that either the creatures hid before the bombing and came out after the blast and took on the military, or actually survived being hit by the blast with not even a scratch(and took on the military). They were able to break down the bunker door(but not Craig's bunker's door, not sure why), so they would be a force to reckon with(unless the door was not the best). As for the all-clear message, it could either be a fake and the creatures know rocket science, or they stayed hidden when the military mopped up(but didn't check basements or cellars where the creatures could lay in wait), thought it wiped them out, and sent the message, not knowing how wrong they are. These are possible scenarios.

    • @dst4909
      @dst4909 4 года назад +11

      @@gachadumpsterfire6722 they didn't break the bunker door though. The man wasn't able to lock it in time, so they opened the door.

    • @thehalfzatoichi2869
      @thehalfzatoichi2869 4 года назад

      He didn't Write this...

    • @timohara7717
      @timohara7717 Год назад

      American endermen are to strong to ungoofy

    • @timohara7717
      @timohara7717 Год назад

      ​@@gachadumpsterfire6722 they did take down his door because he's an idot

  • @2p-blog-thing
    @2p-blog-thing 4 года назад +20

    That.... ending is going to stay with me.

    • @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective
      @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective 4 года назад +2

      2p-blog -thing not sure why but the ending actually made me laugh. Just the idea this poor asshole ultimately ended up killing a shit load of innocents because he didn’t wanna be lonely.

    • @harleen4328
      @harleen4328 3 года назад +1

      @@Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective same it made me laugh to

  • @bootyeater7331
    @bootyeater7331 4 года назад +26

    “Towards the sound of the sound”

  • @Sambasic
    @Sambasic Год назад +2

    the voice acting is SO good!!!!

  • @Andi-ex1js
    @Andi-ex1js Год назад +3

    Finally!!
    For the last hour i've been racking my brain to find this story again
    Looking through all the lockdown stories of my favourite creepypasta narrators.. And i found it!!
    This Story gave me nightmares.. Every now and then when i'm in bed i get anxious that the neighbor across the road can see me in my bed.. And what if it were one of those things and i'm doomed. It absolutely terrifies me

  • @trulyagoose
    @trulyagoose 2 года назад +8

    Reminds me of “My city has been cut off from the world, and I have a set of rules to survive”

  • @jaydengriffin5984
    @jaydengriffin5984 4 года назад +33

    Get whoever made this an oscar a grammy or whatever this was absolutely amazing and my favorite story ever.

  • @Huskq
    @Huskq 2 года назад +11

    Judging off the fact they can manipulate his alerts it's arguable that the creatures planned for him to lead them to the other survivors day one

  • @crazyblueantman7605
    @crazyblueantman7605 9 месяцев назад +2

    I remember listening to this story years ago, and i remember a comment that extended the story and it was amazing. Sad that i vant find the comment anymore

  • @pacthedoc4649
    @pacthedoc4649 4 года назад +14

    This is like my fifth time watching this and I'm still on edge throughout the story 🤣

  • @everettatkepgroovin
    @everettatkepgroovin 4 года назад +19

    I've been listening to these since sixth grade before bed, I'm 18 now

  • @JokerChany
    @JokerChany 2 года назад +9

    Can I just say how much I love the dancing skeleton in the outro? he just gives off such a presence that just halts the tension the story had and brings you straight back to reality

  • @moldybabyman
    @moldybabyman 4 года назад +4

    And yet again, like what happened when I was listening to 1205 7th street, I was chill and calm and then - - little dude dancing on the screen and I struggled to contain my laughter.

  • @aesthetic_apples888
    @aesthetic_apples888 4 года назад +2

    this guy has TALENT with his suspense voice

  • @kipras4699
    @kipras4699 3 года назад +3

    i wouldn't have left that bunker until there was no food and water.

  • @angelmarino3985
    @angelmarino3985 4 года назад +30

    This kind of sounds like a quiet place monsters

    • @carlindurfee7566
      @carlindurfee7566 4 года назад +10

      Yeah I thought that too but these can see too so even worse

    • @andrewdarby2729
      @andrewdarby2729 4 года назад +2

      My first thought!

    • @weilyonTOP
      @weilyonTOP 4 года назад +5

      A quiet place was a fucking scary movie that was only pg-13 and the creatures remind me of them a little bit, being violent and having claws, but the problem is, these monsters can hear, see, are very intelligent, and seem to be invincible to any weapons, while a quiet place the monsters are blind, less-dangerous, and can be killed by the right means.

    • @anonymousskelly6091
      @anonymousskelly6091 4 года назад

      That movie was freaky

  • @sirmatt101
    @sirmatt101 4 года назад +49

    this story would be creepy if the MC didn't just randomly find what he needs like crazy. it's like everytime he loses something he finds something else just as good, if not better

    • @catsdogswoof3968
      @catsdogswoof3968 3 года назад +5

      Well its not his fault contact the redditor

    • @23Tuv
      @23Tuv 3 года назад +6

      Video game logic

    • @Serph..
      @Serph.. 2 года назад +8

      He saw the quest markers

    • @imaghost2961
      @imaghost2961 Год назад

      I unfortunately have done that too many times. I’m writing this one zombie story and the main character found a farm full of stuff. He did have to kill the former inhabitants though. I guess I just wanted to have some nice stuff in between the dark horror type stuff. The main character has been living at that farm with his brother for like 90 chapters now. It’s my first time writing a huge story, so I panicked.

    • @sirmatt101
      @sirmatt101 Год назад +1

      @@imaghost2961 it happens its a trap a lot of writers fall into when they wanna make horror stuff, spooky shit happens but here's a basically deus ex machina warehouse full of shit for the MC to survive with and theres no real reason other then "lucky me"

  • @icel8828
    @icel8828 2 года назад +1

    Finally. I’ve been looking for what happens after part 2 for the longest time. Thank you

  • @jasonherrera4716
    @jasonherrera4716 4 месяца назад +2

    Weakest dude I have heard. Dude eff your mental health when monsters are trying to kill you.

  • @blitz4297
    @blitz4297 4 года назад +14

    always have loved your voice- please keep up the amazing work
    I plan on writing my own- hopefully, you'll read it one day

  • @DivineAdversity777
    @DivineAdversity777 4 месяца назад +1

    Tbh I adore MrCreepyPastas narrations…He and Dark Somnium are very familiar/comforting voices to me idk…

  • @bashitizingsmashmaster1155
    @bashitizingsmashmaster1155 4 года назад +27

    "I woke up to an emergency alert on my bonfire"
    Muster the Rohirrim

    • @sometimesidreamaboutsatori
      @sometimesidreamaboutsatori 4 года назад +1

      i was hoping this would be a caveman joke but i have no idea what you mean now that i clicked show more

    • @Behemoth9030
      @Behemoth9030 4 года назад

      bird executioner bruhhhhh you REALLY need to watch Lord Of The Rings...

  • @Seep1ng
    @Seep1ng 4 года назад +4

    This was so scary, that it helped me pull an all nighter thank you comrade!

  • @marlinskibarlinski26
    @marlinskibarlinski26 4 года назад +18

    This has been one of my favourite creepy pastas ever! Please, please can there be more of this type???

    • @Bruh1
      @Bruh1 3 года назад +1

      he doesnt write them. maybe read the subreddit. They have all kinds of stories :)

  • @breathebih4321
    @breathebih4321 4 года назад +29

    "I still needed to get my phone, for obvious reasons"
    I dont think your phone is gonna help you bud
    Unless for 😉

  • @bridgettgriffin4629
    @bridgettgriffin4629 3 года назад +1

    The cadence and tone of his reading had me scared af!!! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

  • @edwardicus4
    @edwardicus4 3 года назад +5

    *POSSIBLE SPOILER*
    "Human company was what I so desperately needed..."
    🎶THAT WAS YOUR FIRST MISTAKE🎶

    • @Man_Aslume
      @Man_Aslume 10 месяцев назад

      Ngl this us vs them mentality that introverts have is full of bs
      Unless you are mentioning something else if so then im a idiot

  • @Kennyken4044
    @Kennyken4044 2 года назад +1

    MrCreepyPasta actually got me into creepypasta reading back when he first started. First community I joined on amino too. Thank you for the great content and being part of the few joys in my childhood. 💜

    • @ovo5228
      @ovo5228 Год назад

      Glad someone else uses amino too

    • @Kennyken4044
      @Kennyken4044 Год назад +1

      @@ovo5228 used.. left years ago... too many pedos ^^'

    • @ovo5228
      @ovo5228 Год назад

      @@Kennyken4044 Same

  • @celesteross2474
    @celesteross2474 4 года назад

    I gotta tell ya the way you deliver a story its completely riveting,leaving your listeners pining for more

  • @xrystal89
    @xrystal89 4 года назад +54

    stops in the middle of the bloody road, knowing there are soul-sucking, body shredding, nightmare-inducing, fast af creatures close behind you...
    w
    t
    f

    • @CrazyGalaxyCat
      @CrazyGalaxyCat 4 года назад +7

      He probably wouldn't of gotten people killed if he just kept moving

    • @aesthetic_apples888
      @aesthetic_apples888 4 года назад +1

      Nobody:
      The Creatures: IM FAST AS FUCK BOIII

    • @Stupidcake9
      @Stupidcake9 3 года назад

      @@aesthetic_apples888 LOL

    • @John-v5m
      @John-v5m 3 дня назад

      If you're referring to the first moment, then he was probably just checking to make sure what he saw and to accurately evaluate the situation.

  • @WaterPickle
    @WaterPickle Год назад +2

    YES I FOUND IT AGAIN MY BRAIN WAS REMBRING THIS STORY AND BOOM I REMEMBERED THE NAME

  • @bc8796
    @bc8796 4 года назад +17

    A bit sad cuz I felt like we were sort of getting hints that op has some weird dark/mysterious past but nope. They just kinda dumb lol. Great story tho, one of the few that has genuinely creeped me out in a good while

  • @Cadesworth
    @Cadesworth 3 года назад +6

    Your incredible narration skills honestly carry half these stories. You're always able to mine quality out of them, no matter how poorly written they are.

  • @NotSoNormal1987
    @NotSoNormal1987 Год назад +2

    I'd of stayed in the bunker. I would be too afraid to leave. I can wait for the national guard to come knocking on the bunker door. I'm not new to nightmares or sleep paryalisis.

  • @Crimson-Hat
    @Crimson-Hat 4 года назад +2

    Imagine leaving the bunker and damning a bunch of other people to die all because you're not an introvert.

    • @John-v5m
      @John-v5m 3 дня назад

      Anyone would go insane: even an introvert.

  • @oreolover9321
    @oreolover9321 4 года назад +19

    I love the story but it's a shame that the dad was trying to do the right thing but he put everybody on danger

  • @traweigand4013
    @traweigand4013 4 года назад +1

    Great narration! You really put everything you've got into the stories. Had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! Awesome job!

  • @neurotictapeworm
    @neurotictapeworm 4 года назад

    I cannot stop listening to your voice, it's just so suited to every character you voice

  • @fuzzy_buddy8642
    @fuzzy_buddy8642 4 года назад

    The fact that these stories can deliver horrifying chills with only sound is crazy and am I the only one who has visual memory’s that u make up urself

  • @tanker-Sauce
    @tanker-Sauce 3 года назад +2

    Watching this in the middle of the night isn’t the best idea

  • @joshadkins4120
    @joshadkins4120 4 года назад +2

    I love this story!!! Especially with Mrcreepypasta performing it. Keep'em coming!! We're all waiting for the next brilliant choice you make...😁

  • @tronic6981
    @tronic6981 2 года назад

    This one of the only creepypasta’s that genuinely makes me scared and uneasy

  • @hunterwalker5715
    @hunterwalker5715 4 года назад +1

    A good story has two parts, a great writer and an exceptional teller and you Mr Creepy Pasta are one I haven't felt this scared in quite a while great job

    • @offtheradar-5802
      @offtheradar-5802 4 года назад

      An excellent *Penn* er and an excellent teller. 10/10

  • @yaroflores6981
    @yaroflores6981 4 года назад

    I’ve said it once I’ll say it again you are hands down the best creepypasta I’ve heard!! I like how you give life to the story by how you act it 🔥🔥

  • @alabastergreen7444
    @alabastergreen7444 3 года назад +1

    He got all those people killed because he felt lonely...

    • @thetrollage1298
      @thetrollage1298 2 года назад

      He didn’t know. It isn’t entirely his fault.

  • @ShokumaOfficial
    @ShokumaOfficial 4 года назад +54

    *checks comments for Corona jokes*

    • @5crassrocker
      @5crassrocker 4 года назад +5

      Oh, you want to hear a coronavirus joke? Ehhh you probably won't get it.

    • @ShokumaOfficial
      @ShokumaOfficial 4 года назад +1

      @@5crassrocker Ah, unfortunately I have already heard this one

    • @5crassrocker
      @5crassrocker 4 года назад

      @Hannibal Hyde I was. My night was ruined.

    • @bxdvibes6746
      @bxdvibes6746 4 года назад

      This is actually a story about how its gonna turn out
      the covid-19 virus in all reality is going to turn into this.
      this is a joke
      a bad and truthful joke.

    • @gjgr7772
      @gjgr7772 4 года назад

      @@bxdvibes6746 man I'm shitting myself right now cause you're probably right😦😦😦

  • @sekiro_the_one-armed_wolf
    @sekiro_the_one-armed_wolf 10 месяцев назад +1

    18:45 the glass? The gun was whatever but the glass was deafening?

  • @julieblake9728
    @julieblake9728 4 года назад +1

    Nothing like a good creepypasta to get me up in the morning

  • @bobiijae790
    @bobiijae790 4 года назад +2

    My last name is pronounced like surgeon but with a T but you didn't butcher and I totally appreciate it man! Thanks so much for the shout out. It was my first one ever I feel so awesome LOL

    • @bobiijae790
      @bobiijae790 4 года назад

      Please don't take it as me being not picky bcuz you can pronounce any way I was just so excited to get a shout out 😁

    • @catsdogswoof3968
      @catsdogswoof3968 Год назад

      Where would a t go 💀

    • @Man_Aslume
      @Man_Aslume 10 месяцев назад

      Turgeon?

  • @scottcol23
    @scottcol23 4 года назад +2

    This story was terrifying. I love it

  • @shiftedstarz
    @shiftedstarz 3 года назад +1

    dude i love your voice.

  • @toxix999
    @toxix999 4 года назад +1

    This is one of his best stories of all time love it

  • @earndoggy
    @earndoggy 4 года назад

    This story gives me hope. The more people like this person, the better my chances of survival.

  • @t-rexx4251
    @t-rexx4251 4 года назад +1

    This is my favorite story youve narrated.

  • @thatguy2291
    @thatguy2291 3 года назад +1

    Damn, it's been a good few years since I've listened to one of your videos. First listened to ya' back when I was like 14 and was just getting into creepypasta. Glad to see your still making awesome readings after all this time.

  • @gregomy8845
    @gregomy8845 2 года назад +1

    i finally found it bruh. i’ve been looking for the full story for over a year

  • @Wolf-jp4xi
    @Wolf-jp4xi 4 года назад

    I don't know why....This made my day SO MUCH BETTER! I don't know how, but I feel better...Maybe it was your voice...Maybe it was the AWESOME and ELABORATE story...Or both..But this video just made my day....

  • @sauravkumar-yj8ip
    @sauravkumar-yj8ip 4 года назад +1

    excellent.emotion in your narration was perfect.almost real

  • @dumakey8811
    @dumakey8811 4 года назад +2

    If those creatures existed i would get gone and sleep in a bomb shelter until i knew they were gone for good,maybe longer to be safe

  • @greglong7170
    @greglong7170 3 года назад +1

    Would have never left the bunker.

  • @jenniferodell9228
    @jenniferodell9228 4 года назад

    I love listening to you Mrcreepypasta. You have so much emotion in your story telling that keeps me on the edge of my seat the whole time.

  • @michaelmcdowell7096
    @michaelmcdowell7096 4 года назад +2

    On that corvid note it has about a 5% mortality rate and I have several high risk factors so for people like me, and all people really, play it safe so we can save ad many lives as we can; much love

  • @SillyNep
    @SillyNep 3 года назад

    I love these creature concepts, super terrifying, the smart ones always are

  • @bizichyld
    @bizichyld 2 года назад +6

    Listen to these as you’re falling asleep and you get some really great nightmares.

  • @donovanrichard1829
    @donovanrichard1829 2 года назад +2

    Anyone else imagine these are the stories that aren't mentioned in the SCP universe