@@asianspaghetti2844 my nephew is like 1. He cries and stuff during road trips because he’s a baby. Idk how you’d expect a baby to be educated. I also have a niece who’s turning 3 and she’s kinda the same but she’s starting to have more of an understanding.
My daughter is quite during road trips.. shes almost 18months.. But yeah that only last for so long... As I child I was mostly quiet all the time. Not all kids are the same
holy mother of god i fell asleep listening to this loud and the whole dream was narrated by this and i was living the story until i woke up.. scary ass dream.
it took place in my house too and mr creepypasta was basically my dad telling me the story in my dream all whilst the creatures were outside the house.
"there I saw it, a desert eagle" Makes things infinitely less scary knowing that the next thing that pops around the corner is going to be dead instantly
Because it is ALWAYS a Desert Eagle. An expensive, heavy, unreliable, unwieldy POS. Anyone who has actually shot one would agree it is just a range toy. This is like the equivalent of going "oh, a Ferrari Enzo. My first car!" and then escaping town with it.
@@ryanlaney8376 yeah. I've fired both a .44 and a .50 and I'll stick to my 1911 any day. Even with my especially huge hands, i still can't reach the mag release on either without readjusting my grip on the gun. Getting a good grip on the slide is impossible and the safety is hard to move. If you don't have a good grip, that thing will fly out of your hand.
@@ryanlaney8376 most whack part of the story is that the dude lives in a town of 800 people and doesn’t own multiple firearms and lacks knowledge of them😂
Okay so I hit the part where he saw fog outside the town and was like hmm reminds me of the Mist, and 20 minutes in I was like yup time to hot the comments and see if I was the only one who had that thought. Knew I 100% wasn't the only one, 🙅🏻 nope I was right 😆 Idk I love the mist, read the book and watched the movie and tv show all several times and this is 100% going to be something I fall asleep to on the regular now because I think this is a really really good twist on the mist and anything that can originally copy the mist and make it even better is something I can easily fall asleep to :D Props to the author for writing a story that has inthrawled my entire being. I'd love to meet this author and get an autograph because this is GOLD! I want to see this author continue to write and get to the point they can sell hard copies because I would absolutely support this author and buy every single book and I honestly don't read like I use to, but I would love to sit down by a warm fire when its snowy and read this story or others by the author well drinking a nice Coffee/ green tea/Kratom tea combo and not stop reading until I read the entire book/series. This author seriously has tallent that I personally feel others who have had stories on here don't always have. Maybe the Mist makes me nostalgic but this story is perfect!
The thing is the majority or even most of all the stories all the narrators on utube aren’t telling their own stories. They’re literally telling stories that other people wrote. People who have permission for them to tell the stories. Or free for everyone but still copywrited and so they can’t publish them themselves because they don’t own the story? Why doesn’t the person who wrote it? Three reasons why. First reason they’re stupid. Second reason they may not realize that the story is blockbuster material. The final reason is that despite how good the story is the fact is it’s the narrators voice who truly makes the story great. Anyone else telling the story would suck and the story would suck. And I lied. There’s a fourth reason. That reason is well compared to all the crazy political shit and all the wars going on or about to start and men thinking they’re women and all these pronouns fuck these crazy stories actually bring some sense of normalcy to our otherwise off the fucking chain real world bullshit. So yeah that’s why they don’t publish them haha. HOWEVER some of these narrators on here do write some of their own work and I know some have even wrote a couple novels and some of those said tales and novels are also narrated by them and given to us the audience for FREE. These guys are good right now but they’re playing the long game I’d give my work away free to if it contributed to me becoming hella famous one day making millions of dollars doing whatever so yeah.
I'm tired, so if you're joking, I can't pick up on it, (complex humor blah blah) so I'm not hating or anything, but the fan thing a joke, I didn't laugh st it, but it was humor. Again, if you were joking yourself, then sorry, lmao
I was gonna complain that I don’t like this story, but you’ve made me like it a little more. Thank you. (But seriously, I’m still hating looking around every time he says my name XD)
"Years of watching movies has told me nothing good comes from letting the crazy person ramble." Smart, but he still needs to learn to close doors behind him.
I would agree with this but when entering a new place it's always smart to have an escape rout that you know is there and leaving it open is just a way to sure of a quick escape not having to fumble around with door knobs locks and what not. I do understand the something may be following but that's when you have a little trap ready something like nails though a piece of wood pointing upward. Could just be enough.
I wanted to like that show but good Lord it was god awful. This is what happens when the show cared more about being Woke and PC than being scary or good
Yeah that woke garbage they called The Mist was one of the worst television shows I've ever seen and that is one of my most favorite movies at least top five they completely fucking destroyed that so by trying to be so fucking woke. But guess what everything is woke goes broke and so did the show.
seems like the only reason the fog is there is because the creatures need to be immersed in it to live, and can only remain outside of it for short amounts of time. pretty neat. amazing narration to a great story.
Ok, for some reason this story reminded of my dad, SO MUCH. The way my dad tells story's, the way you voiced the main charecter, the family. It is an extremely weird coincidence, but it made me think about my dad. Thanks for reminding me how much I love my dad MCP. :)
I enjoy the spin this story had from ACTUALLY telling his wife what's going down to the into the mist vibe and the fog coming back leaving the listener raising questions and coming up with ideas
I feel like the ending of this story is the author having had more in mind for the story but getting burnt out in writing it so he made an ending to it that he could easily continue in the future if he gets back in the mood of it. At least I hope that’s what it is because I really feel like there could be more to it
@@somerandomguy7235 yes i am and thank you. Im pushing pretty hard to be able to start releasing season two by halloween. I have about 18k words left to go before its finished. Then a little polishing
I LOVE the way this is written because it's mixed with both like ur just reading a story from a book or smth and also someone telling you a story from the top of their head and its amazing
I have to say main character knows exactly what it's like having a two-year-old at the toddler the same time you really don't need alarm clocks when they can come runing in your room.
I love their power dynamic, like they both work together, trying hard and saving their kids n shit like It's such an important part of the story I love it sm
*The family is being chased by a huge-ass monster which is gaining on them and crushed the end of the van* Addy: Yo I'm bored can I get a uhhhhh movie?
Let one of those creatures try to stare down my cat Quark... That creature will lose the fight by looking into the eyes of a demon. Hes a sweetheart, but he has the most evil looking eyes I've ever seen in a cat, its unreal how much it contrasts with his personality, if only YT comments let us post pictures. Its actually a bit of a joke with my friends because of how scary he looks when he stares at you, but he loves everyone,.
So the gas station on the edge of town is how I found your channel. Absolutely love the longer compilations to leisurely drive the miles o get paid to run. Great work and keep up the excellent work
I’ve listened to some of the top creepypasta storytellers on RUclips and you are far and away the finest of them all. You truly bring the stories to life, shifting your tone, speed, volume, and emotions in incredible fashion. Truly, no one comes close. You have a gift. I’ll be a patreon soon. Thanks!
the doors are usually locked and the steering wheel is locked in place when there isn't military personnel in them. this prevents people, especially during civilian lock-downs and martial law, from stealing them since these vehicles can be very dangerous when handled by someone who doesn't realize they are inside an armored 2 1/2 ton war machine.
Anyone thinks this story has a good relationship between 2 people and a loving family, I swear this story has got me feeling all kinds of emotions. One of his best narrations in my opinion. And I love how him and his wife are communicating instead one of them constantly hiding something from the other. Truly goals, of course, you wouldn't want the flame spiders, the lurkers, you know, the Red Mist....but seriously, couldn't have picked a better story to get me through school today!
I’ve been watching/listening to your channel on and off for the past 6-7 years now. I rarely comment, but keep up the good work. I wish I could thumbs up this video twice, so to someone who hasn’t liked the video yet, like it for me.
This is such a classic. Genuinely peak creepypasta, a beautiful blend of scp-like concepts and creepypasta storytelling format. Combined with the great characters, it's as close to perfection iv'e ever seen.
That was my favorite story he’s narrated. I know everyone, including me, really loves the Gas Station stories but something about that story just made it my favorite. Really well written
I remember listening to this one to work, two summers ago, and oh lord i got so into it! It was an experience to isolate myself with that, while there were many people around
Really that's dope I just like to listen to the stories I usually don't pay attention that kind stuff So it is good to know that the story will continue
I was just thinking the same thing lol i was like don't leave me hanging like that. A purple a grey fog emerged ok and then what? I saw someone comment they are working on a second season for this? God i hope so i was like the story can't end like that i want more 😀
Yay first comment, but I actually hope that MrCreepyPasta sees this. My good man, you have literally roped me into this huge, amazing fandom. You are probably my favorite RUclipsr at the moment, and your voice and enthusiasm when you read these stories is extremely refreshing. Thank you for your masterful work, and have a very blessed day!
Same here. Same reason why I’ve not listened to any of the Lily Madwhip series yet. Don’t feel like I can until the second season of it is all in one video.
Yea I always have to wait because I can't keep up with the multiple videos. I listen to these while delivering pizzas, so having one full video is alot nicer.
@Crotchwhistle Purple nope not at all. My family and I shoot a lot of guns. I was just pointing out the fact that even at the age I am today, if I shoot a 12 gauge without any ear protection my ears are going to ring. if I remember correctly, he shoots the gun while in a car with a 2 y/o in it. The child would most definitely be crying. I don’t know why you think I’m trying to sound “intelligent” but for someone who has L as their pfp I’m surprised that you aren’t trying to ask smart.
Wife: *relieved children are okay* Husband: *relieved dog is okay* Not that he didn't care -trust me, the guy really loves his family- I just thought it was hilarious to hear that he was so happy over his dog.
Finally finished this story. Made the first 2 hours of work fly by, and wow it is fantastic. It is like the last of part 2 that we should have gotten. MCP delivering another great narration.
This series got me through the pandemic and takes from the gas station. Thank you mcp for telling creepypastas for so long I have literally grown up listening to your narrations from being 10 to 20!
I mean neighbour vs direct family member? I'd definitely feel worse if I lost my mom or sisters or cats than I would over a neighbour or a friend or an acquaintance.
Finally a cast of characters that make sense..... Poor may...😭😭 Love it and wish the story didn't end I'm halfway through now. I'll update at the end..
This is the first creepypasta with over an hour long which keeps me listening straight from the start to the end. It's more like a movie. Like it. Thanks for making/reading this.
The fog expelled by the creature reacts to native life. That's obvious from the first part when he touched the fog. My theory is that the fogs' purpose is to help them find general places where food is and may be able to help them track prey. That's why the creatures were able to follow them over long distances.
Same It kinda sucks to get intrested just to have to wait for another fragment and wait again I get it takes time for a good story but its worth the weight vs 16 min at a time
I listened to these has he uploaded them...and honestly I get a Stephen Kings The Mist vibe from this story...it reminds me of that movie every time I heard a segment lol witch I really liked the most so I def enjoyed these story’s as well..
You're one of a few narrators I like. When I listen to your narrations I feel like I'm listening directly to the characters telling his story. Keep on bro, job well done.
Wow, that was really good!! ^^ I love that he and grace worked together as a team so well and made logical decisions instead of the usual cliche bad ones :) Thanks for reading it!
Listening to this while driving, got close to my destination and entered a very thick fog. Creepy coincidence that I'm still listening while sitting in the thick fog.🤔
UGH!!!! I love this story so much, I’ve probably listened to it 6 times since it dropped, and is the 1st recommendation I give to anybody wanting to check these stories out. I wish so badly there was more to the story 😩 soooooooo many questions and soooooo many cool ways for the story to go
I’ve only listened to one other video from you, but your voice over makes these so much better than the monotone voices from other pages. It actually sounds like someone’s telling me what happened first hand rather than being read a script by a sad high schooler
goddamn this is so realistic, the logical thinking of the mc, the youtube medic moment, the misses and the highlights of the creatures and his understandable misses (you cant hit heads as soon as you pick it up so its good to see a little panic) and the dog... the sad moment of the dog trying to fight the spider thingy with the instinctive attack mode of most french mastiffs, and the overall sullen moment of the last few minutes... that hurts me that the dog died like that... press f to the attack dog of the century
I like how youtube is mentioned but he never goes into anything about the comments. I assume the comment section also never loads but its just weird that all thats mentioned is RUclips does work
43 minutes in, Good for you Grace. We stan a queen. 50 minutes in, WE STAN A QUEEN! 1 hour in, MAY! NOOOOOO PUPPY! Hour and 10, GOOD! Hour and 15, SOBBING Hour 40, GOOD BOY BODIE!!!
I can't say enough about how much I loved this story ❤ ♥ 💖. You are a fantastic at what you do and give the crew the you work with many thanks as well. ❤❤❤
ye I have a feeling 2 seconds after a massive moo moo chases after your van while your dad fires multipule shotgun shells at it as your parents are screaming and the moo moo is screeching as a two year old you response would not be..."I want to watch a movie"
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Can we just talk about how relieving it is that he actually tells his wife what's going on instead of trying to hide it to "protect" her
yes! im so tired of people not telling their partner exactly whats going on. were a team lets figure this shit out together
RIGHT? Ffs so much shit can be avoided by just telling the truth.
yeah fr the couple here is actually like-able lol
When stuff starts to feel like you can relax that's when the s___t hits the fan
Doesn't tell kid much.
Hands up everyone that agrees this guy is the absolute winner of the Choose Your Wife game.
Fuckin tell me about it! I'm jealous of a fictional character!
Ugh ikr? My wife would probably shoot me with an arrow instead of the monsters...on purpose...
@@A_Stereotypical_Hereticdamn broski toxic relationship much? I mean shit if yall ain't happy js separate 🤨 or get marriage counseling
@@HANS0LO.9980 well it's a joke, but have you ever been married?
@@HANS0LO.9980🤦🏾♀️🤦🏾♀️🤦🏾♀️ went over your head 😅😅
"...gas station at the edge of town..."
*Clears throat*
The what?
the kid thats working there was probably talking to a glowing mushroom in the bathroom or something 😂
Breeze Warbrick or a cowboy. 🤣
Jerry
I was expecting a reference there. I mean that's already a reference but I was hoping he'd say something about the guy that worked there
Does it have any bodies in the stock room?
I can just imagine this story being told by addy when she's older "when I was a kid, something was wrong outside"
“And my dad had left a journal”
It’s funny bc my name is addy so whenever he said that name I perked up lmao
@@lovelysunshinee6646 lmao my name is Izzy so same
This would make an insane film or even a series
The most unrealistic thing about this whole story is the lack of screaming kids demanding snacks and potty breaks on a road trip. Lol.
Right
That doesn't happen if you know how to educate a child, and the protagonist doesn't seem like the typical idiot
@@asianspaghetti2844 bruh
@@asianspaghetti2844 my nephew is like 1. He cries and stuff during road trips because he’s a baby. Idk how you’d expect a baby to be educated. I also have a niece who’s turning 3 and she’s kinda the same but she’s starting to have more of an understanding.
My daughter is quite during road trips.. shes almost 18months..
But yeah that only last for so long...
As I child I was mostly quiet all the time.
Not all kids are the same
This quickly went from a coronavirus story to a The Mist remix
I got the same vibe as well. Frankly, I'd rather watch a movie based on this story. The Mist was just so depressing at the end.
Francois Grobbelaar
The book’s end is different, but not much better.
Most of the lead characters make it,..... but the mist remains. The new normal.
The alternate movie ending to the mist was really creepy, the entire planet was covered.
A better Netflix adaptation
Holy shit... I havent heard of this movie is years... Good film. Kinda made me scared of fog as a kid
I really enjoy how realistic his inflections are. I feel like I'm actually hearing a first hand account.
That's why he's literally _the best_ narrator on RUclips. It's disappointingly rare to find another Creepypasta channel like his. I've tried.
@@TwinTails100 have you ever heard of the dark somnium
TwinTails100 check out The Dark Somnium, one of my favorites, he expresses his emotions as good as mrcreepypasta
Mr. Sleepless agreed
I LOVE the Husband/Wife Team
i like this guys voice, he legit sounds like he's in the situation and not just reading a creepypasta
holy mother of god i fell asleep listening to this loud and the whole dream was narrated by this and i was living the story until i woke up.. scary ass dream.
it took place in my house too and mr creepypasta was basically my dad telling me the story in my dream all whilst the creatures were outside the house.
@@nascraa I can imagine how vivid that could get cause you literally have someone narrating you deam for you
Wow
That actually sounds pretty fun
Thats probably why people shouldnt listen to creepypastas before bed.
"there I saw it, a desert eagle"
Makes things infinitely less scary knowing that the next thing that pops around the corner is going to be dead instantly
"My first hand gun" 😆 lol
*A m e r i c a F u c k Y e a*
Because it is ALWAYS a Desert Eagle. An expensive, heavy, unreliable, unwieldy POS. Anyone who has actually shot one would agree it is just a range toy.
This is like the equivalent of going "oh, a Ferrari Enzo. My first car!" and then escaping town with it.
@@ryanlaney8376 yeah. I've fired both a .44 and a .50 and I'll stick to my 1911 any day. Even with my especially huge hands, i still can't reach the mag release on either without readjusting my grip on the gun. Getting a good grip on the slide is impossible and the safety is hard to move. If you don't have a good grip, that thing will fly out of your hand.
@@ryanlaney8376 most whack part of the story is that the dude lives in a town of 800 people and doesn’t own multiple firearms and lacks knowledge of them😂
that dude is a fucking trooper, the sheer badassery he displays in the face of almost certain death is phenomenal
That’s what you do when you have kids to protect.
And he was smart
I like how he kept his wife in the loop and didn't treat her like a delicate flower. She is obviously bad ass too and they make a great team.
The second dog was a 🐐
@@Aknapp382 yeah first one got fucked cause he wasnt a smart boy
I love how this went from being a quarantine story to just being Stephen kings’s the mist XD
The stand to the mist 😂
Bro for real
Yeah but corona edition
That's my thoughts in a nutshell lmao😂😂✌️👌
Okay so I hit the part where he saw fog outside the town and was like hmm reminds me of the Mist, and 20 minutes in I was like yup time to hot the comments and see if I was the only one who had that thought. Knew I 100% wasn't the only one, 🙅🏻 nope I was right 😆
Idk I love the mist, read the book and watched the movie and tv show all several times and this is 100% going to be something I fall asleep to on the regular now because I think this is a really really good twist on the mist and anything that can originally copy the mist and make it even better is something I can easily fall asleep to :D
Props to the author for writing a story that has inthrawled my entire being. I'd love to meet this author and get an autograph because this is GOLD! I want to see this author continue to write and get to the point they can sell hard copies because I would absolutely support this author and buy every single book and I honestly don't read like I use to, but I would love to sit down by a warm fire when its snowy and read this story or others by the author well drinking a nice Coffee/ green tea/Kratom tea combo and not stop reading until I read the entire book/series.
This author seriously has tallent that I personally feel others who have had stories on here don't always have. Maybe the Mist makes me nostalgic but this story is perfect!
People be writing full on novels under the creepypasta tag like bro....publish it this is good
The thing is the majority or even most of all the stories all the narrators on utube aren’t telling their own stories. They’re literally telling stories that other people wrote. People who have permission for them to tell the stories. Or free for everyone but still copywrited and so they can’t publish them themselves because they don’t own the story? Why doesn’t the person who wrote it? Three reasons why. First reason they’re stupid. Second reason they may not realize that the story is blockbuster material. The final reason is that despite how good the story is the fact is it’s the narrators voice who truly makes the story great. Anyone else telling the story would suck and the story would suck. And I lied. There’s a fourth reason. That reason is well compared to all the crazy political shit and all the wars going on or about to start and men thinking they’re women and all these pronouns fuck these crazy stories actually bring some sense of normalcy to our otherwise off the fucking chain real world bullshit. So yeah that’s why they don’t publish them haha. HOWEVER some of these narrators on here do write some of their own work and I know some have even wrote a couple novels and some of those said tales and novels are also narrated by them and given to us the audience for FREE. These guys are good right now but they’re playing the long game I’d give my work away free to if it contributed to me becoming hella famous one day making millions of dollars doing whatever so yeah.
This is just "The Mist" but it is good.
this is basically a novel, I've noticed a lot of people just use Creepypasta to make their horror stories instead of well, a creepypasta.
@@cholericimp1358 I wouldn’t say it’s the mist more of a spin-off/inspired by
Get the guy who did the movie version of the Mist to do a film of this, instant money👌
Y'all could've solved this by getting a giant fan.
that's kinda facts tho
LMAOO
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Uhm.. like a windmill but backwards? Nah those cause cancer.
I'm tired, so if you're joking, I can't pick up on it, (complex humor blah blah) so I'm not hating or anything, but the fan thing a joke, I didn't laugh st it, but it was humor. Again, if you were joking yourself, then sorry, lmao
Flaming raccoons? correction, rocco's brood has evolved.
Rocco was just trying to light his cig smh
Fuck why didn’t I think of that? Fucking Rocco!
Jack: Finally figured out what the weirdest thing at the gas station is. That giant behemoth
Rocco ate the spicy peppers oh no
Between the gas station on the edge of town, and the deep fog, I think the context clues are abundant. I would say Rocco's brood is a fair assessment.
Oh my God. FINALLY a smart and mostly composed main character
Honestly. You don't have to be a superhero to act with some damn common sense.
@@DanteTheEgregore still Its so often that charactets are just straight up retarded, fells nice to have someone relatively normal for a change
How about the beginning where he says something like, "the neighbors were still home, why didn't they respond?"
I was gonna complain that I don’t like this story, but you’ve made me like it a little more. Thank you. (But seriously, I’m still hating looking around every time he says my name XD)
Right
"Years of watching movies has told me nothing good comes from letting the crazy person ramble."
Smart, but he still needs to learn to close doors behind him.
He did say that he watched movies, not played SCP:CB. That's where you learn to close doors behind you
always remove the crazy religious person ever time in a horror scenario.
@@michaelwolf3451 What the hell does SCP: CB stand for
@@marshallzeke997 scp: containment breach
I would agree with this but when entering a new place it's always smart to have an escape rout that you know is there and leaving it open is just a way to sure of a quick escape not having to fumble around with door knobs locks and what not. I do understand the something may be following but that's when you have a little trap ready something like nails though a piece of wood pointing upward. Could just be enough.
This would make a brilliant survival horror game.
Already has. The last of us.
It’s actually similar. I think this story came from the last of us
This would make a good horror movie
Yeah definitely a movie
Similar to Silent Hill too.
I feel like it’d low key make a good horror rpg
34:50 "I heard an odd clicking" This man literally said the creatures made clicking noises, yet stayed oblivious
Haha I thought that too
Just had to replace "an" with "that"
Just when you think 2020 can't get worse, here comes the eldritch monsters and the sizzling fog.
At this point I welcome them
You know this is obviously inspired by The Color Out Of Space ... The movie was cool. Watched it last night. Check it out. Its exactly like this.
Honestly I'd let the eldritch monsters carry me into the void
@@problematique9389 where did you watch it?
Ah Yes The Goddamn Eldrich Monsters Can Take Me At Thid Point
This is what the TV series version of The Mist should have been.
I wanted to like that show but good Lord it was god awful. This is what happens when the show cared more about being Woke and PC than being scary or good
I'm done7171717171
This would have been 10 times better I want to see a well made movie based from this
Yeah that woke garbage they called The Mist was one of the worst television shows I've ever seen and that is one of my most favorite movies at least top five they completely fucking destroyed that so by trying to be so fucking woke. But guess what everything is woke goes broke and so did the show.
I actually loved the idea of the tv series but they could’ve executed it so much better I loved the massive plot twist tho
seems like the only reason the fog is there is because the creatures need to be immersed in it to live, and can only remain outside of it for short amounts of time. pretty neat. amazing narration to a great story.
I don’t think these creatures were evil, they’re just strange animals that hunt to survive.
I assumed with there pale skin, lack of normal eyes and need to be in the fog, I think they can't stand direct sun light
I don’t like that moo moo.
What moo moo
moo moo bad
Heh
Ok, for some reason this story reminded of my dad, SO MUCH. The way my dad tells story's, the way you voiced the main charecter, the family. It is an extremely weird coincidence, but it made me think about my dad.
Thanks for reminding me how much I love my dad MCP. :)
this is so wholesome to read i think my heart stopped-
Or maybe this guy is just your dad
"As I got closer it stayed in place, like some swirling cloud wall" Dark Souls PTSD kicks in
*proceeds to firebomb the cpara deamon from out side his arena and kill him*.
Smirks 😉😉🤪😉😉
I enjoy the spin this story had from ACTUALLY telling his wife what's going down to the into the mist vibe and the fog coming back leaving the listener raising questions and coming up with ideas
I feel like the ending of this story is the author having had more in mind for the story but getting burnt out in writing it so he made an ending to it that he could easily continue in the future if he gets back in the mood of it. At least I hope that’s what it is because I really feel like there could be more to it
Good news for you sir. Im about halfway through season two and will start posting the parts once the whole thing is complete.
cryptic_ nightmares that is fantastic news
@@cryptic_nightmares561 You're the author because this is amazing
@@somerandomguy7235 yes i am and thank you. Im pushing pretty hard to be able to start releasing season two by halloween. I have about 18k words left to go before its finished. Then a little polishing
@@cryptic_nightmares561 you can do it! I believe in you 100%. And I bet its gonna be as good, if not better than the first season!
Main Character: That was the shortest route towards my intended destination
Ad: *FRANCE*
I LOVE the way this is written because it's mixed with both like ur just reading a story from a book or smth and also someone telling you a story from the top of their head and its amazing
Soooo, during part three, whenever he heard the noise upstairs was anyone else ranting: NO NO NO, GET THE F*CK OUT OF THERE, OUT OUT OUT!!!
Same. It's always Americans in movies. I thought this must be an American trait
4:28 "I live in a small, and I mean SMALL town. Total population is about 800"
*Looks up population of my town*
*258*
you and him live in a Village at this point
@@leneerodriguez7346 why does being called a villager hurt so much?
800 aint even a town
I have to say main character knows exactly what it's like having a two-year-old at the toddler the same time you really don't need alarm clocks when they can come runing in your room.
Honestly one of the best stories I’ve ever heard. I would love to see this as a movie or video game
I love their power dynamic, like they both work together, trying hard and saving their kids n shit like
It's such an important part of the story I love it sm
*The family is being chased by a huge-ass monster which is gaining on them and crushed the end of the van*
Addy: Yo I'm bored can I get a uhhhhh movie?
addy's a baddy
@@vixxiiestixx she’s a toddler...
@@gustavo.210 mate it was a year ago
@@DuckyRubber pedophilia stops for nothing.
@@gustavo.210 I'm going to choose to believe that by "baddie" he meant badass
The way the narrator reads the tense parts has me on the edge of my seat! I can feel the fear in his tone.
>mysterious gas station at the edge of town
>strange fog
I don’t like where this is going
these people need a radio stat lol
@@Ceaseless_Thoughts *Flashback to the fog creatures that cause chaos at the Radio Station*
@@finlandball1939 honestly that story was amazing right
@@Ceaseless_Thoughts Yes, but this one is even better. I can’t wait for the next edition! I’m so into this!
@@finlandball1939 cool
R.I.P May you truly were a good girl
Thank you. I was scanning the comments to see if the dogs or kids died. Noping right on off to a creepypasta without pets or kids.
Let one of those creatures try to stare down my cat Quark... That creature will lose the fight by looking into the eyes of a demon. Hes a sweetheart, but he has the most evil looking eyes I've ever seen in a cat, its unreal how much it contrasts with his personality, if only YT comments let us post pictures. Its actually a bit of a joke with my friends because of how scary he looks when he stares at you, but he loves everyone,.
Purple Cat Same. Glad I caught it early before I got invested. Dogs and cats dying in these stories is a really cheap tug on the emotions.
@@megamovieman101 I always cry when animals die in things like these
May is the best girl... RIP
So the gas station on the edge of town is how I found your channel. Absolutely love the longer compilations to leisurely drive the miles o get paid to run. Great work and keep up the excellent work
I’ve listened to some of the top creepypasta storytellers on RUclips and you are far and away the finest of them all. You truly bring the stories to life, shifting your tone, speed, volume, and emotions in incredible fashion. Truly, no one comes close. You have a gift. I’ll be a patreon soon. Thanks!
Humvees don’t have keys. He could have just turned them on and moved them and left town lol.
I'm thinking the same thing through the whole video and didn't he say they had 50 cals on them
Yes thats true but it would have made for a pretty boring story if it had been that easy. .
I'm just gonna assume he didn't know that
the doors are usually locked and the steering wheel is locked in place when there isn't military personnel in them.
this prevents people, especially during civilian lock-downs and martial law, from stealing them since these vehicles can be very dangerous when handled by someone who doesn't realize they are inside an armored 2 1/2 ton war machine.
They also don't have door locks, really should have been simple to solve that problem.
Now i shall actually listen instead of just fall asleep to this story :)
RELATABLE
I said that to myself many times, still trying to get through all of it
So goddamn difficult, wish you guys the best of luck haha.
'The legend27'
Now that's a name I haven't heard in a long time.
Grace is a badass.
@Crotchwhistle Purple a badass mom
I was so into this story I nearly shit my pants when the mailman put my mail through the slot.
They still do that?
Bro, you had already shit your pants.
Anyone thinks this story has a good relationship between 2 people and a loving family, I swear this story has got me feeling all kinds of emotions. One of his best narrations in my opinion. And I love how him and his wife are communicating instead one of them constantly hiding something from the other. Truly goals, of course, you wouldn't want the flame spiders, the lurkers, you know, the Red Mist....but seriously, couldn't have picked a better story to get me through school today!
I’ve been watching/listening to your channel on and off for the past 6-7 years now. I rarely comment, but keep up the good work. I wish I could thumbs up this video twice, so to someone who hasn’t liked the video yet, like it for me.
I liked it for you, kind soul.
And me too, now you've basically given 3!
Make that 4
Go ahead and hit the like button twice
This is such a classic. Genuinely peak creepypasta, a beautiful blend of scp-like concepts and creepypasta storytelling format. Combined with the great characters, it's as close to perfection iv'e ever seen.
Can you please read the sequel to "I dared my best friend to ruin my life"? It's called "I dared my best friend to end my life"
That was my favorite story he’s narrated. I know everyone, including me, really loves the Gas Station stories but something about that story just made it my favorite. Really well written
I remember listening to this one to work, two summers ago, and oh lord i got so into it! It was an experience to isolate myself with that, while there were many people around
God bless you for helping me find it
@@johnnytay74 my favorite story is either I dared my best friend or Borrasca
@@tyrus71 borrasca hits different
This pasta was awsome but the ending left me hanging
Thankfully the writer has said they are working on a second season
Really that's dope I just like to listen to the stories I usually don't pay attention that kind stuff So it is good to know that the story will continue
I was just thinking the same thing lol i was like don't leave me hanging like that. A purple a grey fog emerged ok and then what? I saw someone comment they are working on a second season for this? God i hope so i was like the story can't end like that i want more 😀
I mean the OG goes to Steven King.
I cant wait to see if theres gonna be more to this 10 part series
Listening to this on a cold dark foggy night in the middle of the country with the only sound being my pigs, is freaky AF
Yay first comment, but I actually hope that MrCreepyPasta sees this.
My good man, you have literally roped me into this huge, amazing fandom. You are probably my favorite RUclipsr at the moment, and your voice and enthusiasm when you read these stories is extremely refreshing. Thank you for your masterful work, and have a very blessed day!
Oke what about Mr creeps
@@thecavalryprince8409 Kingspook is much better
@Crotchwhistle Purple never heard him, I might take a listen.
@@someweirdoguy6633 cool opinion bro
Aw those fog demons are _so_ cool, beyond horrifying but _such_ a facinating concept/design
One of the best, most intense creepypasta stories I've heard/read, and I fall asleep to them every night. Awesome
Geez, I absolutely adored this. I literally sat and listened the whole 2 hours ♡♡♡♡
Have to brag. For the first time EVER I have been able to not watch a single second of a series until all of it dropped. IKR? Just me? Thx, MCP. ;)
I always do it. I find it easier to listen all at once on runs or bike rides than switch from video to video
Same here. Same reason why I’ve not listened to any of the Lily Madwhip series yet. Don’t feel like I can until the second season of it is all in one video.
Yea I always have to wait because I can't keep up with the multiple videos. I listen to these while delivering pizzas, so having one full video is alot nicer.
I knew at least one of the doggos were gonna die the moment I heard there were dogs but still.. the poor puppy
Did they die if yes leave the timestamp
Ohh nooo I'm not there yetttt ;(
@@amandafrantz7737 One one did, but I don't know the timestamp for it.
you're telling me the 2 year old didn't ever react at all to a 12 gauge slug going off right next to her?
Day in the life of an American
@Crotchwhistle Purple nope not at all. My family and I shoot a lot of guns. I was just pointing out the fact that even at the age I am today, if I shoot a 12 gauge without any ear protection my ears are going to ring. if I remember correctly, he shoots the gun while in a car with a 2 y/o in it. The child would most definitely be crying. I don’t know why you think I’m trying to sound “intelligent” but for someone who has L as their pfp I’m surprised that you aren’t trying to ask smart.
This is going down as one of the best creepypastas I’ve listened to in awhile
Wife: *relieved children are okay*
Husband: *relieved dog is okay*
Not that he didn't care -trust me, the guy really loves his family- I just thought it was hilarious to hear that he was so happy over his dog.
The husband is me
Bruh I was so sad when the first dog died 😭😭. But the story was really great and the way the reader reads it makes it feel so immersive.
They have the quietest, most well-behaved children that ever existed. Barely a peep out of either one of them. 😂
Finally finished this story. Made the first 2 hours of work fly by, and wow it is fantastic. It is like the last of part 2 that we should have gotten. MCP delivering another great narration.
The whole time the daughter is like seems ok to me
Fr they seen scary ass things and cried about wanting to watch a movie
@@caitlins504 i have a 2 year old. Can confirm this is what happens.
“I wanna watch frozen” *almost gets crushed by a giant demon that you dad shot from a moving mini van* okay chill
Almost every line that Addie has in this story was taken from things she has said to me in real life and how she actually acts.
This series got me through the pandemic and takes from the gas station. Thank you mcp for telling creepypastas for so long I have literally grown up listening to your narrations from being 10 to 20!
I have been wanting to listen to this story forEVER and when u released the completed story I was sooo happy!!! Thanks MCP!! U ROCK!!!
Neighbor dies: ok
Dog dies: Goku scream
yes
As it should be.
I mean neighbour vs direct family member? I'd definitely feel worse if I lost my mom or sisters or cats than I would over a neighbour or a friend or an acquaintance.
Also, drop-kicking a weak woman 😂😂😂😂😂 that made me laugh so hard lmao
TO THIS DAY I SHALL SCREAM!!!
EQUAL RIGHTS EQUAL FIGHTS!!!
Finally a cast of characters that make sense..... Poor may...😭😭 Love it and wish the story didn't end I'm halfway through now. I'll update at the end..
you should probably know that season 2 has been actively releasing and is on this channel.
@@Theodore_LocusChwhere??
21:10 I’m only that much in but them seeing the creature on fire makes me think of the everything’s fine meme
this guy is a surprisingly good ctor, and he doesn't even need to put that much emotion, and i am so impressed.
MCP I absolutely love the way you bring these stories to life, thank you for introducing us to them ^^
This is the first creepypasta with over an hour long which keeps me listening straight from the start to the end. It's more like a movie. Like it. Thanks for making/reading this.
I love how he puts life into the story
The fog expelled by the creature reacts to native life. That's obvious from the first part when he touched the fog. My theory is that the fogs' purpose is to help them find general places where food is and may be able to help them track prey. That's why the creatures were able to follow them over long distances.
I've been waiting for this to be a completed and put together
Same.
Me too
Same
Same It kinda sucks to get intrested just to have to wait for another fragment and wait again I get it takes time for a good story but its worth the weight vs 16 min at a time
Damn, slaughter to prevail, video games, horror stories, and critical role. We the same person?
Best thing I've heard all year: "Demonic Flesh Straws" 😂😂
Wow I just spent the evening listening to this quite the story had me on the edge of my seat
I listened to these has he uploaded them...and honestly I get a Stephen Kings The Mist vibe from this story...it reminds me of that movie every time I heard a segment lol witch I really liked the most so I def enjoyed these story’s as well..
Exactly
It's more than just a vibe, it's almost a complete ripoff of it
You're one of a few narrators I like.
When I listen to your narrations I feel like I'm listening directly to the characters telling his story. Keep on bro, job well done.
Wow, that was really good!! ^^ I love that he and grace worked together as a team so well and made logical decisions instead of the usual cliche bad ones :) Thanks for reading it!
It's a good thing that I'm learning Blacksmithing because you don't need to reload a sword (Except in Attack On Titan).
And a gun blade from ff8.
The way he talks in tense moments is amazing keep it up i love your vids
Listening to this while driving, got close to my destination and entered a very thick fog. Creepy coincidence that I'm still listening while sitting in the thick fog.🤔
Stay safe , dude. Don't get caught dead by a spider and/or fog lurker!
UGH!!!! I love this story so much, I’ve probably listened to it 6 times since it dropped, and is the 1st recommendation I give to anybody wanting to check these stories out. I wish so badly there was more to the story 😩 soooooooo many questions and soooooo many cool ways for the story to go
The boss fight is behind the fog wall.
The boss is making the fog wall
the boss IS the fog wall
Quick find the man with the long nose and then talk to a gas station person and they will reveal them self as a god.
I’ve only listened to one other video from you, but your voice over makes these so much better than the monotone voices from other pages. It actually sounds like someone’s telling me what happened first hand rather than being read a script by a sad high schooler
goddamn this is so realistic, the logical thinking of the mc, the youtube medic moment, the misses and the highlights of the creatures and his understandable misses (you cant hit heads as soon as you pick it up so its good to see a little panic) and the dog... the sad moment of the dog trying to fight the spider thingy with the instinctive attack mode of most french mastiffs, and the overall sullen moment of the last few minutes...
that hurts me that the dog died like that... press f to the attack dog of the century
You got me shedding tears at work. Poor May
Same. This is the first time ever cried over a dog dying in a story. 😭😭😭😭😭😭
I like how youtube is mentioned but he never goes into anything about the comments. I assume the comment section also never loads but its just weird that all thats mentioned is RUclips does work
He can’t find the comments because of the new update
@@marcol1418 loooool this is the best respomse I could Have hopped for
This had me tense the entire time I listened to it. I like the emotion the reader added, it made me feel like this was very very real
lowkey highkey was hoping that the ending was them realizing that there was a mushroom cloud enlarging in the distance
now we are all sons of bitches
the part at 43:00 is so soft. The way it's spoken has so much love and tenderness in it. (almost made me cry)
43 minutes in, Good for you Grace. We stan a queen.
50 minutes in, WE STAN A QUEEN!
1 hour in, MAY! NOOOOOO PUPPY!
Hour and 10, GOOD!
Hour and 15, SOBBING
Hour 40, GOOD BOY BODIE!!!
I can't say enough about how much I loved this story ❤ ♥ 💖. You are a fantastic at what you do and give the crew the you work with many thanks as well. ❤❤❤
This is just the mist but less crab
🦀🦀🦀 Crabs are gone 🦀🦀🦀
The narrator of this story kept me entranced in the story. Awesome job!
This is a great beginning to something that could be even greater
This is the first story I've heard from MrCreepyPasta. It reminds me so much of the old-time radio shows, and I love it! I also loved the story.
These kids cannot possibly be this blissfully ignorant about what is going on.
They're 2 y.o and an infant. They probably wont remember anything when they grow up.
@@AzeKano gerard here musta missed that part seven times lol
ye I have a feeling 2 seconds after a massive moo moo chases after your van while your dad fires multipule shotgun shells at it as your parents are screaming and the moo moo is screeching as a two year old you response would not be..."I want to watch a movie"
Yeah, I thought maybe children didn’t perceive the monsters or something
@@thatonekidbd4424 lolz right, mom why can't I watch my tablet it isn't working anymore 😑
Separating part two from three was a commercial for Shudder...
Well played