The Third Act Break Up in Romance - Conflict Versus Angst

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  • Опубликовано: 3 окт 2024

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  • @audreydenholm8615
    @audreydenholm8615 Год назад +2

    Yay for conflict! I'm here for the darker and angstier the better 😂 that said, this is such a helpful distinction - worth also noting that depending on the premise, quite often a black moment doesn't have a break-up in a real life sense but rather they stay together but without the relationship being full and intimate. Royal romances and if there's kids etc - this brings home the "it's conflict, not drama for drama's sake" message I think.
    And while I respect readers reading what they want and loving it, when I'm reading I'm gonna need an actual black moment to make the HEA more satisfying 😈

  • @katya_fhs
    @katya_fhs Год назад +1

    Ha. This is so eerily on point for my current project. Funny things is, RUclips hadn't suggested it to me until now!

  • @Mongoly8
    @Mongoly8 Год назад +1

    I really like this genre specific advice. Would love to see more on romance plots or more explicitly advice within the genre of fantasy romance. The fantasy aspect I feel somewhat confident with but I’ve recently been struggling with my romance plot.

  • @SunShine-qk4rb
    @SunShine-qk4rb Год назад +1

    Very helpful

  • @JoleCannon
    @JoleCannon Год назад +1

    I had a 3rd act break up, but ditched it. The new incident brought them closer together. One tried to push the other away, feeling he didn't deserve love, but his love interest refused to give up on him that easily. I think it works better for my story.

    • @susanbarnesediting7386
      @susanbarnesediting7386  Год назад +1

      That sounds great! Sometimes not having a break makes the relationship even stronger. Love it.

  • @Richardsonprincess00
    @Richardsonprincess00 11 месяцев назад +1

    Instead of the main characters, what about other characters in that case for breakups?

    • @susanbarnesediting7386
      @susanbarnesediting7386  11 месяцев назад

      You could certainly have other couples break up then as well, but you'll still need a big conflict between your two main characters in their relationship, since it is their story. Hope this helps!