Amazing video no i want to know so much more about the sea of the fallen stars. Im going to use it in an campaign especially the dragons eggs that fell down and all the lore, just amazing!
The effort put into these lore videos is so good. I love it. I hope you are having fun making them and dont run out of ideas. These resonate with me so much, I am even enjoying playing them as ambient background while I do my real life stuff.
So glad to hear you are enjoying them :) Hearing that people are enjoying them is what makes creating them so much fun. There are plenty more tales and legends to tell so I am sure I won't be running out of ideas anytime soon 😁
Nicely put together, keep this up and I suspect your sub count will start rising quickly. The art is really nice, tons of lore, the only critique I'd make (and it's a small one) is the repetition of certain descriptive terms used. Not a problem, but I think the script could benefit from a bit more variation. Overall though really good vid, well done.
@@sleighthand best of luck! Your a part of a select group of RUclipsrs that I have grown to love! Keep the lore of the Great Sage alive! Need any tips, feel free to reach out to your fellow lore content creators! I know AJ Pickett is very kind and can give some good pointers. Sorry, don’t mean to tell you how to run your channel, just want to let you know you aren’t alone!
You’re making some very awesome videos! I don’t know a lot about the Forgotten Realms! When I started playing D&D it was in Mystara, using the BECMI rules - and by reading the Dragonlance books I also learned about Krynn. But I left the hobby behind, and it’s only recently that I’ve returned to it! Sure, I was aware that the Forgotten Realms existed, as I went to boarding school with some who played AD&D and even bought a couple of D&D books from one of them. So do you write the texts yourself or are you reading aloud from various sourcebooks? If I may offer a couple of advise then I would suggest that you turn the volume on the background music down a notch, (I would personally prefer it wasn’t there at all, but I do know that others probably like it, as they feel it gives them a different and much more immersive experience. Another suggestion would be to get yourself a Thesaurus - that’s an advice for everyone who wanna do "professional" writing! A long time ago, I did some writing for educational purpose, and the editor gave me the same advice. It’s basic about avoiding to much repetition of the same words. Now don’t get me wrong, sometimes intentional repetition can be an effective form, especially to stress a point, but in general it’s worth trying to avoid it! Although, sometimes I personally find it a bit hard, especially in English because it isn’t my native tongue, but also in my own language, which is probably due to me writing so much more in English that I start forgetting useful synonyms my regional peers would understand and appreciate! Now this is only suggestions, and please don’t take it as any form of harsh criticism, because it’s definitely not intended as such - I really enjoy your videos a lot!
great dragons show up on the Sea of Fallen Stars like giant squids ruining your ship where not bad enough now you got to worry about your ship burning up from a enemy dragon
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Amazing video no i want to know so much more about the sea of the fallen stars. Im going to use it in an campaign especially the dragons eggs that fell down and all the lore, just amazing!
The effort put into these lore videos is so good. I love it. I hope you are having fun making them and dont run out of ideas. These resonate with me so much, I am even enjoying playing them as ambient background while I do my real life stuff.
So glad to hear you are enjoying them :) Hearing that people are enjoying them is what makes creating them so much fun. There are plenty more tales and legends to tell so I am sure I won't be running out of ideas anytime soon 😁
Nicely put together, keep this up and I suspect your sub count will start rising quickly. The art is really nice, tons of lore, the only critique I'd make (and it's a small one) is the repetition of certain descriptive terms used. Not a problem, but I think the script could benefit from a bit more variation. Overall though really good vid, well done.
Thanks :). I'll definitely keep that in mind for future videos and vary it up more
Great video, using maps and markers might make the tale easier to follow. 2 cents from a consumer. Subscribed and can’t wait to see more lore videos.
Welcome to the channel and thanks for the watch and sub. I'll definitely look at that for future videos to make things more clear.
@@sleighthand best of luck! Your a part of a select group of RUclipsrs that I have grown to love! Keep the lore of the Great Sage alive! Need any tips, feel free to reach out to your fellow lore content creators! I know AJ Pickett is very kind and can give some good pointers. Sorry, don’t mean to tell you how to run your channel, just want to let you know you aren’t alone!
Thank you for your information video
Thanks for watching it :)
You’re making some very awesome videos!
I don’t know a lot about the Forgotten Realms!
When I started playing D&D it was in Mystara, using the BECMI rules - and by reading the Dragonlance books I also learned about Krynn.
But I left the hobby behind, and it’s only recently that I’ve returned to it!
Sure, I was aware that the Forgotten Realms existed, as I went to boarding school with some who played AD&D and even bought a couple of D&D books from one of them.
So do you write the texts yourself or are you reading aloud from various sourcebooks?
If I may offer a couple of advise then I would suggest that you turn the volume on the background music down a notch, (I would personally prefer it wasn’t there at all, but I do know that others probably like it, as they feel it gives them a different and much more immersive experience.
Another suggestion would be to get yourself a Thesaurus - that’s an advice for everyone who wanna do "professional" writing!
A long time ago, I did some writing for educational purpose, and the editor gave me the same advice. It’s basic about avoiding to much repetition of the same words.
Now don’t get me wrong, sometimes intentional repetition can be an effective form, especially to stress a point, but in general it’s worth trying to avoid it! Although, sometimes I personally find it a bit hard, especially in English because it isn’t my native tongue, but also in my own language, which is probably due to me writing so much more in English that I start forgetting useful synonyms my regional peers would understand and appreciate!
Now this is only suggestions, and please don’t take it as any form of harsh criticism, because it’s definitely not intended as such - I really enjoy your videos a lot!
great dragons show up on the Sea of Fallen Stars like giant squids ruining your ship where not bad enough now you got to worry about your ship burning up from a enemy dragon
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Hopefully there was some valuable info you managed to find in the video :). Thanks for the watch
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