obviously the rain made him transport back in time as the gate room was not manned or had the alarm going.. lol It was a great concept, not bad graphics for a fan production.
This is a neat surprise of a recommendation. I love me some Stargate content. Also, I love the casual line of "our ships" implying the use of a proper space fleet post SG: Continuum.
Wow. Loved seeing Marcus "Harriman's great-great grandson" Churchill in something new! I once had an idea for a Star Trek/Stargate crossover myself, and may yet write it still, so of course I am very curious to see what you come up with!
Loved it. The CGI was amazing. At first I actually thought you guys had built one. The gate room looked amazing too. Only 1 small critique: I would have given the guy at the gate someone to talk to. Nobody has a conversation like this in reallife, and felt off. The writing itself was pretty good. it just needed someone to "bounce ideas off". Oh and the "anniversary thing" felt a bit abrupt, if they had someone there, THEY could have mentioned that, would have made the ori joke funnier I think. Looking forward to the next part though :)
Loved it can't wait for the next episode, you guys did a great job. Not a critique, but I would recommend you use a Rite in the Rain notebook instead of a Moleskine like Teal'c did in S1E6 The First Commandment. It's waterproof and is what the military actually uses. 👍
@@SGUDistantHope honestly…. I was thinking if that’s a Stargate prop in the background whoever made it 👍 , spent the rest of the time trying to work out who the main actor looked like , The furlings were a nice touch , (one thing that always annoys me - and it has nothing to do with the scrip or the actor) is whenever someone does an inner monologue (to the audience ) to progress the story and tell the information , they don’t really do it in a pasts tense , like they should know this/ it already, and are just going over the facts , like- That’s eight planets now, …(flips though book) what is this Baal clone after? Sigh .. I can’t ..munch on chocolate 🍫 figure what’s he’s after, that last one was… what ? killed over a year ago by the Tok,ra (munch ) so why now? and with such force that he’s completely obliterated the locations , (munch) and several of these planets didn’t even have a Stargate on them (flicks page) , (munch) hmm… wait! ( 💡) moment, - Didn’t oh what’s his name …mention when he came back they stumbled upon something about one of these had a furling dig site yonks ago… (finger skimming the page ) I think I know what this is … (fu*k I forgot ((I actually have forgotten what he said about the woman )) also telling his CO - I’ve got important information to tell you but first let go the gate to SG command I’d feel better once we’re off this planet to tell you ) Sorry , it’s just because I’ve been doing some writing of my own past tense (due to covid I couldn’t get to do some research so it’s on hold atm) , it’s how I’d write it , definitely not what you were expecting for a response , but I do want to see the next part 🙂
filmography is pretty good, the setting and lighting are also good, the focus on the guy eating his candy bar was maybe a little long, the audience didn't need to see him eat the whole thing lol the music could have been just a tad louder, the acting was actually pretty good in some places, but the whole monologue of him speaking about his gift to his wife or whatever was probably better not used, i mean it was funny, but it didn't really add to the story, but he dropped the topic at random and started talking about the Ori. also i'm American and i can understand your accent, but sometimes you guys speak a little too quickly to the point where your words tend to slur and the audience is lost in translation. the gate actually looked pretty good even though it was CGI. but overall it was a good effort and i enjoyed the video.
The SGC is recruiting Brits now? You’d think that’d be more of an SGA thing. Or is this an all Brit team like how Russia forces them to have an all Russian team?🤔
@@paullopez6620 Thanks! Much appreciated, several more Stargate films to come and then we plan to do a separate crowdfunded to finish the Stargate Saga with a bang! Hopefully fans will come out and support us when that day comes!
It was created as a "bonus" short, when another actor was not able to come to a shoot. It was designed to be a "day in the life" and gentle re-introduction into the world of Stargate along with setting up certain story elements for future SG Projects. It was just meant to "feel" like Stargate and for the audience to not think anything beyond "im watching Stargate"...given the amount of VFX involved and high end props/costumes...i think we did rather well for this first new film.
Hi Claude, That would be a shame to limit casting in that way. I would rather let Marcus use his proper accent then try and American and have people complain about it and give a weaker performance. What did you think of the actual film?
Excellent! The music is great, too - I appreciate the music throughout.
Minor nitpick: nobody bothered to transmit the IDC code from a GDO device prior to stepping into the gate. Somebody'sa gotta open that iris...
obviously the rain made him transport back in time as the gate room was not manned or had the alarm going.. lol It was a great concept, not bad graphics for a fan production.
Thanks, I enjoyed your SG short. If it were a meal, that was a tasty starter and I am now hungry for the main course.
Furling love
Please keep this one going! I miss Stargate and it was amazing just to hear the music and “feel” of the movie and series once again.
Great MORE please. And thanks!
This is great, thank you so much for taking the time and effort to make this.
This is a neat surprise of a recommendation. I love me some Stargate content.
Also, I love the casual line of "our ships" implying the use of a proper space fleet post SG: Continuum.
Nice really Nice a lot of Stargate SG1/Atlantis Vibes looks Amazing to be Fan Made
Ended just as it was getting good! Awesome work!!!
LMAO Same kind of tree's...That's hilarious!
Very nice Shorts" episode!
I loved the casting, the sets. You all did a marvelous job! I am so looking ahead for more episodes.
How dare you tease me with furlings
Hey, the actual show did it a few times, so why can’t a fan film?
Thank you for making this. As a big SG fan this was great to see. :)
Nice work.
You did an awesome Job, Sam! You and your crew did the series proud. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Awesome job on this fanfilm you guys did great.
Great job. Looking forward to more SG-1/SG-ATL adventures.
Great Job! I really enjoyed this.
I really enjoyed watching this short film. I would love to see a continuation of this story. Well done.
There have been 2 additional parts filmed (longer ones) and we will be croud funding a final epic part which will have a large space battle etc! :D
That was surprisingly good! Looking forward to seeing more.
Where in Sam hill did you get those costumes amazing 🤩
Great work!
Thank you. Looked and sounded great. I'm not certain about that colonel guy though ,lol.
Great work :-) , cant wait for the next part
Lovely, Sam!
finally, a newd fan made Star Gate SG-! Can't wait for more.
Good work, great acting and the set and backdrops/scenery/props were really well done......more soon please.
Wonderful! So looking forward to the next part!
Great job commander. Can't wait to see the rest of it.
The guy is obviously insane. He's talking to himself. :)
Perfect! I love it!
Amazing VFX as always, Commander! The gatecontrolroom was absolutely stunning. I can't wait for your next Trek/Gate Short.
A good short story with a partial plot. Not too shabby.
Thanks! And its hopefully a good lead in to the future stories (one of which is already fully shot)
I loved the credits, lol.
Not sure why I’m only setting this in 2023, but it is outstanding! Qapla’
Qapla? Wrong franchise. You mean Kree!
Been eagerly awaiting this one!
Me 3
Wow. Loved seeing Marcus "Harriman's great-great grandson" Churchill in something new! I once had an idea for a Star Trek/Stargate crossover myself, and may yet write it still, so of course I am very curious to see what you come up with!
Super job Samuel Cockings, wondered if Stargate would draw you back, great return, super job by all, keepem coming
well done!
love it!!!
Loved it. The CGI was amazing. At first I actually thought you guys had built one. The gate room looked amazing too. Only 1 small critique: I would have given the guy at the gate someone to talk to. Nobody has a conversation like this in reallife, and felt off. The writing itself was pretty good. it just needed someone to "bounce ideas off". Oh and the "anniversary thing" felt a bit abrupt, if they had someone there, THEY could have mentioned that, would have made the ori joke funnier I think.
Looking forward to the next part though :)
In his defense, I typically have conversations with myself like that. It helps me prioritize the information I'm collecting.
I talk like this to myself and now you have me worried lol
When he started talking about his wife: I was worried he would be killed in minutes.
Oh the memories!
Great job Samual with the FX, as usual. Great to see your dad the Ambassador! Did a good job too.
Gordon Freeman
Oh man, great video! Where did you get your vest? I've been looking for one forever!
Well done well thought out maybe you should apply for the new series
Loved it can't wait for the next episode, you guys did a great job. Not a critique, but I would recommend you use a Rite in the Rain notebook instead of a Moleskine like Teal'c did in S1E6 The First Commandment. It's waterproof and is what the military actually uses. 👍
What about using a GDO to send a code for opening the iris? Felt like that detail was overlooked.
Eek
So new IMDB doesn’t have it listed .
Yep! Wanted to release it as soon as I had it finished! :D What did you think of it?
@@SGUDistantHope honestly…. I was thinking if that’s a Stargate prop in the background whoever made it 👍 , spent the rest of the time trying to work out who the main actor looked like ,
The furlings were a nice touch , (one thing that always annoys me - and it has nothing to do with the scrip or the actor) is whenever someone does an inner monologue (to the audience ) to progress the story and tell the information , they don’t really do it in a pasts tense , like they should know this/ it already, and are just going over the facts , like-
That’s eight planets now, …(flips though book) what is this Baal clone after? Sigh .. I can’t ..munch on chocolate 🍫 figure what’s he’s after, that last one was… what ? killed over a year ago by the Tok,ra (munch ) so why now? and with such force that he’s completely obliterated the locations , (munch) and several of these planets didn’t even have a Stargate on them (flicks page) , (munch) hmm… wait! ( 💡) moment, -
Didn’t oh what’s his name …mention when he came back they stumbled upon something about one of these had a furling dig site yonks ago… (finger skimming the page ) I think I know what this is … (fu*k I forgot ((I actually have forgotten what he said about the woman ))
also telling his CO - I’ve got important information to tell you but first let go the gate to SG command I’d feel better once we’re off this planet to tell you )
Sorry , it’s just because I’ve been doing some writing of my own past tense (due to covid I couldn’t get to do some research so it’s on hold atm) , it’s how I’d write it , definitely not what you were expecting for a response , but I do want to see the next part 🙂
@@SGUDistantHope just found out - apparently there’s to be a new tv series called the Ark on sci-fi by the Stargate Writers.
@@SGUDistantHope do you mind if I tell you what I think Q is up to here since I don’t want to possibly spoil it for anyone if I’m correct.
If she doesn't forgive you about fighting the Ori... (Shrugs)
Doesn't she know how important fighting for humanity's, including hers survival is? 🤣
just a very small nitpick... they didnt use there IDC XD
I mean...they may have between the DHD to the gate ^^ But yes...totally forgot about that I will be honest!
And when part 2 ?
We are filming it this summer, Part 3 has already been filmed and part 4 will be crowd funded on Indiegogo!
@@SGUDistantHope thank you, I will wait
@@abstegro4979 Indeed! Do support the indiegoog if you can! We cant make the EPIC last chapter without the fiancés!
Good start.
Dont swear though.... It just dosnt fit in.
filmography is pretty good, the setting and lighting are also good, the focus on the guy eating his candy bar was maybe a little long, the audience didn't need to see him eat the whole thing lol
the music could have been just a tad louder, the acting was actually pretty good in some places, but the whole monologue of him speaking about his gift to his wife or whatever was probably better not used, i mean it was funny, but it didn't really add to the story, but he dropped the topic at random and started talking about the Ori.
also i'm American and i can understand your accent, but sometimes you guys speak a little too quickly to the point where your words tend to slur and the audience is lost in translation.
the gate actually looked pretty good even though it was CGI.
but overall it was a good effort and i enjoyed the video.
The SGC is recruiting Brits now? You’d think that’d be more of an SGA thing. Or is this an all Brit team like how Russia forces them to have an all Russian team?🤔
great work! but I miss the german synchro :D
Whats the German synchro?
Second!
Using SG1 annoys me a little. There are other SG teams. Use them and expand the lore.
Our team is SG-11 in this film :) Its even on their patches
@@SGUDistantHope went back and watched again. Totally missed it and it is very clear to see. By they way, good job all around.
@@paullopez6620 Thanks!
Much appreciated, several more Stargate films to come and then we plan to do a separate crowdfunded to finish the Stargate Saga with a bang! Hopefully fans will come out and support us when that day comes!
@@SGUDistantHope just subscribed so I do not miss anything.
I have my own Project Stargate. If you are open to new scripts in the future maybe we can work together. Cheers
-Jeri Yzmith
🥱
imagine a stargate and babylon 5 crossover
I don't think guns should be given to people who talk to themself as enthusiastically and schitzophrenically as this guy.
Hay, missions get boring :) some people talk to themselves.
i miss stargate, this didn't do it for me. good effects though
Wow so the majority of the "episode" was the guy walking around....Meh..
It was created as a "bonus" short, when another actor was not able to come to a shoot.
It was designed to be a "day in the life" and gentle re-introduction into the world of Stargate along with setting up certain story elements for future SG Projects.
It was just meant to "feel" like Stargate and for the audience to not think anything beyond "im watching Stargate"...given the amount of VFX involved and high end props/costumes...i think we did rather well for this first new film.
You need Americans, if you are going to do American shows. 🧐wot?
Hi Claude,
That would be a shame to limit casting in that way. I would rather let Marcus use his proper accent then try and American and have people complain about it and give a weaker performance.
What did you think of the actual film?