This trilogy is awesome! beyond awesome! Its killing me waiting and hoping for #4 This is the third time I have listened to all three books. Also I have been listening to your other books in your channel, all are great! Thank you for everything you have given us. Totally amazing!
GREAT STORY!!! Man I love your writing!! I read a lot of books and dedicate at least 3 hours a day to reading. I stumbled across your work by looking for something to fall asleep to. Right away I had to save your work till morning! Too good to miss! LoL thanks for heads up on FORTRESS 👀
Finally got to listen it to the end, there is no denying how riveting each moment was seeing that no detail was wasted. No event was filler, everything came together for the great cause.
Okay I'll listen to so so many audiobooks on you youtube and I can tell the good one in the first 5 to 10 minutes and I got to say I think I found another G GOOD ONE
Okay so I just had to acknowledge this awesome bit writing with how Commander Felix was explaining about the differences between doing the what's Right and respectable despite the inherent difficulties and will choose to be or do the wrong thing because it seems easier and how people who don't understand will fight harder to do the wrong thing even it puts themselves and possibly others around them too much more trouble in order to do the wrong thing or to be wrong
chapter 9.. such an awesome Space Opera, trying to cherish it but here I am book 3. edit: Here I am again. I must secure copies of this, both audio and hard copies.
So . . . You're thinking of spawning a second trilogy in this universe? What will be the premise? Will all three deal with the immortals? Yes . . . I'm asking for the last chapter of the last book first. I really like to know there's a light at the end of the tunnel. That way I can better enjoy the journey.
Yes, but it will be on a whole 'nother level. Sodenia did not go down, but neither did the immortals. I don't want to spoil it for you but let's just say Andromeda is now in the picture. Stay tuned.
Really loved the story. I stuuggled a little until i realized it reminded me of an anime. Once i looked at it from the point of view of a school full of emotional insecure and idealistic kids everything made sense. Im guessing thats what you ment when you said you tried someone different. Some constructive criticism if your open to it. Plan out each character's personality deeply and give them more variety. Superficially they are all different but most of the characters seemed similar enough to be close friends or even siblings because of their thought processes. I struggled with the dichotomy of these people being the best at what they do but also very unconfident with themselves outside of their 1 nearly superhuman strength. It facilitates the kids saving the world and personal interactions between them, but everyone falling in love with the captain and the fallout there doesnt replace character development. Everyone seems to be introduced as themselves and they dont change throughout the series, but perhaps that was as intended. Either way ill continue listening and awaiting whatever new stories you release, the universe and storyline are very enjoyable
@@BrokeWrench thank you for listening. I purposely try to stay away from strong characters and focus on the plot and story. That being said I do feel like I have it in me, to deliver a well rounded story, but not until a few more books from now. A bad character can ruin a story quickly which is why I choose to make them enough ;). If you haven't already head on to Fortress which takes place in the future of this outcome.
And this is why you dont date subordinates in the military. You start putting them before the mission. Even putting everyone's future at risk in a shortsighted attempt to protect them now. Which could probably be explained as one of his personality traits i guess
Great story, plot and narrators through the series. My autism kicked in where he stated how fast he was traveling in miles per hour around 1 he and 27 mins or so into it. I know light travels at 186,282 mps, and they were traveling at roughly 8.2 times the speed of light for 10 hours, so how did you calculate their speed at 282,179,931,297,523,070 mph? Just thinking I may have missed something here? Did they travel through the ring?
Great question. Lever level 8 or The theoretical maximum, makes Sodenia's max speed unknown and not constant. It's shot in the dark if you will. But Kya would guestimate their 10-hour travel time thanks to their known distance to Doka of 8.2 thousand light years and their minimum constant of .82 lightyears per hour. By the time they got near Doka, they were overshooting it by quite some speed. The numbers were so large that Fain couldn't comprehend.
Not a book 4, but a trilogy and I am picking up where this one end in a sense. There's too much I couldn't fit in this book in order not to disrupt the trilogy. Fortress is coming sometime this year.
@@larssgt I appreciate the response, thank you. I've gotten kind of invested in the story/characters and would hate to think their tale ends here. And thanks for making these audiobooks available on RUclips. I grew up listening to radio serials in the mid-1950's and since my eyes have been aging and it's difficult at times to hold books for very long these days, audiobooks have been a bit of a salvation for me of late; kind of bringing me full circle back to the beginning of my literary adventures. Just wanted you to know your generosity has not gone unnoticed.
@@quentinmichel7581 like? Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men? The shadow knows! Mom introduced us to those stories when I was a child. It was on 8 track tapes. LoL
@@Obligate.Carnivore Yup remember that well... though my time was well before 8-tracks 😏. I listened in bed in a darkened room to the stories emanating from a tube radio on my bookcase with a dial glowing pink from a neon bulb. The Shadow, Inner Sanctum, Lights Out, The Lone Ranger... companions all. Some were entertaining adventures, mysteries, comedy ... and some absolutely terrifying. I've read many thousands of books since, but it's tough to match the primitive intimacy of the Storyteller at a flickering campfire. A wonderful time to grow up. (And kudos to your Mom. She gave you a gift beyond measure.)
Third book in and has no one mentioned to the barrator or author that the term for a workstation is " Console", not Counsole. There is NO "u", either present or pronounced, in the first syllable. Oh! and AFA weaponry.....it's not a "clip", it's magazine. Thankfully, that particular gripe was not mentioned but a few times.
Can we get a book where the aI aren't coming to destroy us. I mean like seriously what logic does that even make? Good book though comment not a reflection on quality of the trope
Ok im sorry. I absolutely loved the first two books. But this one was way too whining. I ff half the book. The story was great. The self pity was overwhelming. Keep the story going with more action and great story.
I’m sorry to say it as I’ve enjoyed the story but the plot point of removing the crew was just stupid even half a crew would make sense hell an actual bridge crew any soldier crew or whatever know your units strength is in its UNITY. Very Marry sue😂
Oh and you have analogue orders to a digital entity to analogue and to do it analogue you need personal I don’t think it was thought out. I find no pleasure in saying it. 😢
Oh and literally after the battle the only thing holding the acronian people is the leader his past and current honourable action which is there basis of being giving it over to a none entity in comparison come on man.
Thank you so much for posting your amazing audiobooks on youtube best wishes to you and your family
This trilogy is awesome! beyond awesome! Its killing me waiting and hoping for #4 This is the third time I have listened to all three books. Also I have been listening to your other books in your channel, all are great! Thank you for everything you have given us. Totally amazing!
WOW. Binge listened this marvelous peace of work!
Thank you so much!!
GREAT STORY!!! Man I love your writing!! I read a lot of books and dedicate at least 3 hours a day to reading. I stumbled across your work by looking for something to fall asleep to. Right away I had to save your work till morning! Too good to miss! LoL thanks for heads up on FORTRESS 👀
Thanks for listening. I'm working on Fortress 24/7 now so I can meet the deadline on the community post.
i have enjoyed the growth of this story. thank you.
It's always heartwarming to know someone enjoyed my stories. Thank for the feedback.
@@larssgt Dude. I am sixty five years of age. I grew up reading Tolkien, Heinlin, Peratchet etc. Take it from me you deserve the respect.
Finally got to listen it to the end, there is no denying how riveting each moment was seeing that no detail was wasted.
No event was filler, everything came together for the great cause.
Thanks very much
Okay I'll listen to so so many audiobooks on you youtube and I can tell the good one in the first 5 to 10 minutes and I got to say I think I found another G
GOOD ONE
Okay so I just had to acknowledge this awesome bit writing with how Commander Felix was explaining about the differences between doing the what's Right and respectable despite the inherent difficulties and will choose to be or do the wrong thing because it seems easier and how people who don't understand will fight harder to do the wrong thing even it puts themselves and possibly others around them too much more trouble in order to do the wrong thing or to be wrong
Outstanding!
Thank you
chapter 9.. such an awesome Space Opera, trying to cherish it but here I am book 3.
edit: Here I am again. I must secure copies of this, both audio and hard copies.
Excellent story
Damn this story was great man 🎉🔥
awesome...more please!
Glad you enjoyed it. If you haven't yet, check out Fortress.
Alr here I am on the 3rd book 🤌🏽🔥 and I’m loving the direction
Hope you can imagine the Immortals in all their machine glory.
So . . . You're thinking of spawning a second trilogy in this universe? What will be the premise? Will all three deal with the immortals?
Yes . . . I'm asking for the last chapter of the last book first. I really like to know there's a light at the end of the tunnel. That way I can better enjoy the journey.
Yes, but it will be on a whole 'nother level.
Sodenia did not go down, but neither did the immortals. I don't want to spoil it for you but let's just say Andromeda is now in the picture.
Stay tuned.
Bravo🎉
Really loved the story. I stuuggled a little until i realized it reminded me of an anime. Once i looked at it from the point of view of a school full of emotional insecure and idealistic kids everything made sense. Im guessing thats what you ment when you said you tried someone different.
Some constructive criticism if your open to it.
Plan out each character's personality deeply and give them more variety. Superficially they are all different but most of the characters seemed similar enough to be close friends or even siblings because of their thought processes.
I struggled with the dichotomy of these people being the best at what they do but also very unconfident with themselves outside of their 1 nearly superhuman strength. It facilitates the kids saving the world and personal interactions between them, but everyone falling in love with the captain and the fallout there doesnt replace character development. Everyone seems to be introduced as themselves and they dont change throughout the series, but perhaps that was as intended.
Either way ill continue listening and awaiting whatever new stories you release, the universe and storyline are very enjoyable
@@BrokeWrench thank you for listening. I purposely try to stay away from strong characters and focus on the plot and story. That being said I do feel like I have it in me, to deliver a well rounded story, but not until a few more books from now. A bad character can ruin a story quickly which is why I choose to make them enough ;). If you haven't already head on to Fortress which takes place in the future of this outcome.
is there a 4?... it needs a 4 :) we need more!
Fortress, which is a part of Sodenia's universe is coming to this channel in just few weeks.
@@larssgt YESS!!!!
And this is why you dont date subordinates in the military. You start putting them before the mission.
Even putting everyone's future at risk in a shortsighted attempt to protect them now. Which could probably be explained as one of his personality traits i guess
How good it is to be a subscriber.
Sweet
Great story, plot and narrators through the series. My autism kicked in where he stated how fast he was traveling in miles per hour around 1 he and 27 mins or so into it. I know light travels at 186,282 mps, and they were traveling at roughly 8.2 times the speed of light for 10 hours, so how did you calculate their speed at 282,179,931,297,523,070 mph? Just thinking I may have missed something here? Did they travel through the ring?
Great question. Lever level 8 or The theoretical maximum, makes Sodenia's max speed unknown and not constant. It's shot in the dark if you will. But Kya would guestimate their 10-hour travel time thanks to their known distance to Doka of 8.2 thousand light years and their minimum constant of .82 lightyears per hour. By the time they got near Doka, they were overshooting it by quite some speed. The numbers were so large that Fain couldn't comprehend.
OH thank goodness!! haha!
Right?!
Great story but a bit of an abrupt ending. I assume and hope there will be a Book 4?
Not a book 4, but a trilogy and I am picking up where this one end in a sense. There's too much I couldn't fit in this book in order not to disrupt the trilogy.
Fortress is coming sometime this year.
@@larssgt I appreciate the response, thank you. I've gotten kind of invested in the story/characters and would hate to think their tale ends here.
And thanks for making these audiobooks available on RUclips. I grew up listening to radio serials in the mid-1950's and since my eyes have been aging and it's difficult at times to hold books for very long these days, audiobooks have been a bit of a salvation for me of late; kind of bringing me full circle back to the beginning of my literary adventures.
Just wanted you to know your generosity has not gone unnoticed.
@@quentinmichel7581 like? Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men? The shadow knows! Mom introduced us to those stories when I was a child. It was on 8 track tapes. LoL
@@Obligate.Carnivore Yup remember that well... though my time was well before 8-tracks 😏. I listened in bed in a darkened room to the stories emanating from a tube radio on my bookcase with a dial glowing pink from a neon bulb. The Shadow, Inner Sanctum, Lights Out, The Lone Ranger... companions all. Some were entertaining adventures, mysteries, comedy ... and some absolutely terrifying. I've read many thousands of books since, but it's tough to match the primitive intimacy of the Storyteller at a flickering campfire. A wonderful time to grow up.
(And kudos to your Mom. She gave you a gift beyond measure.)
Hey maybe you could come up with a tech readout for Sodenia. And make that part of your animation for the next book.
That's the dream! I'll strongly consider it and try to make it happen for the next video.
Nice! Wait…. Those are hardcovers….. hehehehe
good story, i see elements of Dune and Mass Effect
Third book in and has no one mentioned to the barrator or author that the term for a workstation is " Console", not Counsole. There is NO "u", either present or pronounced, in the first syllable.
Oh! and AFA weaponry.....it's not a "clip", it's magazine. Thankfully, that particular gripe was not mentioned but a few times.
Can we get a book where the aI aren't coming to destroy us. I mean like seriously what logic does that even make?
Good book though comment not a reflection on quality of the trope
I thought of the Immortal as non-biological life as opposed to AI. But don't worry, the book I'm working on now fixes that right up.
@LARS ahh I see I missed that part. I bet you got some really good ideas brewing!
@@spacegear9379 it's more likely I didn't do such a good job at explaining it. Thank you for reading.
Ok im sorry. I absolutely loved the first two books. But this one was way too whining. I ff half the book. The story was great. The self pity was overwhelming. Keep the story going with more action and great story.
Pika acts like 13 year old. Not like an educated expert engineer. What a childish brat!
Soldering iron is pronounced as soddering iron.
Not souldaring.
Only in the US.😊
Lol
I’m sorry to say it as I’ve enjoyed the story but the plot point of removing the crew was just stupid even half a crew would make sense hell an actual bridge crew any soldier crew or whatever know your units strength is in its UNITY. Very Marry sue😂
Oh and you have analogue orders to a digital entity to analogue and to do it analogue you need personal I don’t think it was thought out. I find no pleasure in saying it. 😢
Oh and literally after the battle the only thing holding the acronian people is the leader his past and current honourable action which is there basis of being giving it over to a none entity in comparison come on man.
Love the story but that woman reading messes it up for me!!!
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Please stay away from the overly emotional female character "development".
It's taking away from an otherwise interesting series.
Fantastic story