Hi there, I'd like to make some observations as constructive criticism. I think you might want to consider working on your composition a little bit because in some of the photos almost half to a third of the image is made up of the background & void space which can be distracting but would be fine if it were more out of focus (using a larger aperture would be a way to achieve that or you could close the distance between you & your subject to "fill" the frame with them) also in several photos you cut off parts of your model and in some cases I think you could have shot in portrait instead of landscape & vice versa landscape instead of portrait.
Appreciate the sharp eye! It’s like you’ve got X-ray vision for composition flaws. You’re absolutely right-sometimes the background does feel like it’s trying to steal the show. Definitely going to play around more with aperture and framing next time. Always learning, always growing (just like the amount of empty space in my shots, apparently)! Thanks for the constructive feedback!
@@jamesjuranke I will say that you did nail a few of them really well as well as a few being 90% there with just needing a tiny adjustment to nail it too.
Love that carpark as a shoot location! ive done it once, but also felt a little judged by the office workers overlooking it haha. nice pics
Thank you! Haha yes you get that sometimes on a roof top car park!
Great color! Wonderful photos and model
Thank you 🙏
@@jamesjurankethe green cast is intentional ?
Yes part of the film 🎞️ ☺️
Hi there, I'd like to make some observations as constructive criticism. I think you might want to consider working on your composition a little bit because in some of the photos almost half to a third of the image is made up of the background & void space which can be distracting but would be fine if it were more out of focus (using a larger aperture would be a way to achieve that or you could close the distance between you & your subject to "fill" the frame with them) also in several photos you cut off parts of your model and in some cases I think you could have shot in portrait instead of landscape & vice versa landscape instead of portrait.
Appreciate the sharp eye! It’s like you’ve got X-ray vision for composition flaws. You’re absolutely right-sometimes the background does feel like it’s trying to steal the show. Definitely going to play around more with aperture and framing next time. Always learning, always growing (just like the amount of empty space in my shots, apparently)! Thanks for the constructive feedback!
@@jamesjuranke I will say that you did nail a few of them really well as well as a few being 90% there with just needing a tiny adjustment to nail it too.