"I’m a cop and I keep getting called to the same house" Creepypasta | Scary Stories from Nosleep

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  • Опубликовано: 23 янв 2025

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  • @Darksomnium
    @Darksomnium  6 лет назад +2933

    Hope you like this series! let me know what you think!
    For anyone who may be confused. this story is from a female perspective. The main character is female.
    Edit: I just noticed that this video had midroll ads, i always make sure to turn them off so that they dont interrupt the story, i just removed them. sorry about that!

    • @black_panda6445
      @black_panda6445 6 лет назад +32

      Love this Series ❤ but isn't there more to this Storie?

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  6 лет назад +91

      yes but thats technically a different story, ill be starting that this weke :)

    • @Brutallyhonest78
      @Brutallyhonest78 6 лет назад +23

      Where's the next part to the story? I love your channel but your killing me with all the stories not being completed. I check the 24 hour game and others everyday to see if more parts have been added.

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  6 лет назад +32

      @@Brutallyhonest78 but this one Is finished :O

    • @Brutallyhonest78
      @Brutallyhonest78 6 лет назад +15

      @@Darksomnium ok you say technically a different story you be starting. Is there more coming or no. I need more damnit. Lol

  • @Nihilistically
    @Nihilistically 5 лет назад +6359

    If anyone is interested, the author of this turned this story (and subsequent parts) into a full length novel, 'Patch Lane' by S. F. Barkley. She is also currently working on a sequel.

    • @cassandrawhite1594
      @cassandrawhite1594 5 лет назад +55

      Joshua Baulch Thank You!

    • @rjwoods2600
      @rjwoods2600 5 лет назад +57

      Really? This is really interesting

    • @lornaduwn
      @lornaduwn 5 лет назад +102

      Ahhh...there are more parts. I thought it ended abruptly without explaining some details.

    • @boo8073
      @boo8073 5 лет назад +48

      I would like this but it has 69 locks now and I gotta respect the drip

    • @boo8073
      @boo8073 5 лет назад +12

      likes*

  • @tomhollberg9851
    @tomhollberg9851 5 лет назад +3286

    It's not uncommon for a cop to be dispatched to the same location due to the otherworldly beings known as "Meth Heads" and they will cause a domestic disturbance, forcing you to return *OVER* and *OVER* again.

    • @maxelldenomie3915
      @maxelldenomie3915 4 года назад +52

      must b from experience, huh

    • @slimvdd75
      @slimvdd75 4 года назад +36

      its a small town. things like tht might be common.

    • @aaronmiranda6757
      @aaronmiranda6757 4 года назад +75

      Just be glad it's not heroin addicts. You can turn your back on a tweaker for hours and nothing much has changed. But never turn your back on a heroin addict.

    • @kaley4788
      @kaley4788 4 года назад +7

      😂😂😂 👏🏻👏🏻 omg!

    • @Wishfull171
      @Wishfull171 4 года назад +45

      Had to just cut out a friend I cared for because she’s married to someone addicted to meth. He also has mental health issues from it too. Apparently with no where to go I let them stay here but one night he said such terrible and sexually graphic things behind her back that were completely delirious. Stuff he’d claim he knew but was so out there with absolute no evidence. She admitted to me that he was coming off meth while they were there the last day I finally said they couldn’t stay anymore. They were eating all my groceries and the place was a wreck not to mention the constant drama and them fighting. He basically sabatoged the home they were going to move to hours away from their city and his new job, both in my town. I’m pretty sure it’s because the withdrawals were too much and he wanted it so bad he was making sure they didn’t move. Maybe I’m wrong, but after being convinced the new landlord would sleep with her and talked of being able to kill him and not get caught, I told her I’m sorry but can’t handle it. He’s very strong and not stable, that much I could tell. Shes completely in denial and doesn’t believe anything I say, won’t leave him no matter how bad. They went back to their city and I blocked them on everything. It doesn’t help that I could feel he liked me and was attracted to me, as well as said and did a lot that made me feel so uncomfortable. I’m worried they might come back but thankfully, my bf and I are moving in a month, so I feel better knowing they won’t know where we’ll be living.

  • @elizbialek
    @elizbialek Год назад +194

    It's refreshing to hear a story where the author did their research and got the correct way police and dispatch talk and all the extra things that they do/ go through. It sounds so much better and just totally makes the story better.

    • @lesterjdb
      @lesterjdb Год назад +21

      The author is named S F Barkley she's a real police officer that writes horror stories. This is a short book called "Patch Lane"

    • @augustsmith9553
      @augustsmith9553 Год назад

      Women dont belong in the police force

  • @kristinnmar8415
    @kristinnmar8415 5 лет назад +2556

    You know its a good one when you are 12 minutes in and think its over

    • @XICUTRMN
      @XICUTRMN 5 лет назад +21

      Kristinn Már fr I thought the same thing

    • @BoomBoom-hk6qp
      @BoomBoom-hk6qp 5 лет назад +7

      Me too

    • @fate1615
      @fate1615 4 года назад +3

      Yup

    • @noah-tl1gv
      @noah-tl1gv 4 года назад +16

      It feels like it’s over because there’s more than 1 part, so it feels like it ends like 2 different times before the real end

    • @cassanova4126
      @cassanova4126 4 года назад +2

      Right I had to pick my phone up was like wtf thought this was an hour long

  • @psalms27sneadspd46
    @psalms27sneadspd46 5 лет назад +2325

    I am actually a police officer on the night shift in a small Florida town and I'll tell you I'm on patrol listening to the story and I'm scared thanks for posting

    • @Steezealways
      @Steezealways 4 года назад +14

      Ha nice

    • @rvyyvn
      @rvyyvn 4 года назад +9

      I wanna be a cop:(

    • @KiwiTheRetroGal
      @KiwiTheRetroGal 4 года назад +25

      Beware of alligators.

    • @mikoyyuy13
      @mikoyyuy13 4 года назад +4

      Psalms27 Sneadspd Florida.... strange place

    • @magpie_crust
      @magpie_crust 4 года назад +1

      But you have an NYPD cap on? Stolen Valor?

  • @rix6269
    @rix6269 4 года назад +757

    "wait i have to give her medicine? i have a cat now?"
    you rarely choose to have a cat. u just...fjnd them and they never leave, and then you have a cat

    • @MortyKaiShalom
      @MortyKaiShalom 4 года назад +46

      Or dropped off by a family member who "thought you'd want a cat"

    • @rix6269
      @rix6269 4 года назад +62

      @@MortyKaiShalom or my favorite, u pick up a stray in intention of rehoming them but now ur REALLY attached so it's your cat now

    • @MortyKaiShalom
      @MortyKaiShalom 4 года назад +17

      @@rix6269 "Had I gotten rid of it the day I said I would..."

    • @kimdodson6089
      @kimdodson6089 3 года назад +8

      The cat now owns her lol especially a black one!

    • @michaelbull1566
      @michaelbull1566 3 года назад +25

      I have two cats, both were strays. They informed me that they were moving in with me. I was adopted by them

  • @hellodarkness5644
    @hellodarkness5644 5 лет назад +9258

    "He treats me like a daughter" wait what? Up to that point thought this was from the male perspective lol.

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +570

      haha xD

    • @hacker007300
      @hacker007300 5 лет назад +175

      Same

    • @mollybennett3291
      @mollybennett3291 5 лет назад +519

      It took me a hot minute to realize it was from a girls perspective too.

    • @MistyEry
      @MistyEry 5 лет назад +85

      Same here. Same here

    • @kumokundomo9705
      @kumokundomo9705 5 лет назад +295

      Thought the same thing. Realizing I'm biased.

  • @lightkeeper1238
    @lightkeeper1238 5 лет назад +3711

    That wasn't really a creepypasta in my opinion. It WAS a friggin AWESOME crime thriller tho

  • @punkrckr6889
    @punkrckr6889 4 года назад +471

    Sgt. calls at 0800 and says "get your ass out of bed, chief wants to see you!!"
    *Shows up to the station 11 hours later*

    • @joshuamcleod3442
      @joshuamcleod3442 4 года назад +36

      They have some wierd shift timings

    • @leonkennedy9912
      @leonkennedy9912 4 года назад +47

      I was thinking the exact same thing but thought I didn’t hear it right lol

    • @jasonlmrcolon
      @jasonlmrcolon 4 года назад +6

      Yeah I heard that lol

    • @keltaruusutravels4024
      @keltaruusutravels4024 3 года назад +20

      Like a boss.

    • @happiercat4777
      @happiercat4777 2 года назад +18

      I heard that too, I think it was meant at 0819 hours but was either misread or messed up in some other way.

  • @cnow82
    @cnow82 4 года назад +384

    My dad was a police officer for 33 years. I used to ask him for crazy cop stories for bedtime (I’m a weird person.) This was delightful to listen to for bedtime.

    • @amandaredd3057
      @amandaredd3057 2 года назад +21

      I don't think that's weird. That's effing rad

    • @augustsmith9553
      @augustsmith9553 Год назад

      Women dont belong in the police force

  • @Pr0fila
    @Pr0fila 6 лет назад +545

    At 6:55 „And he treats me like his daughter“ Dude pls tell us at least the name of the protagonist, I was imagining a buff dude policeman and then I hear this. I was laughing my ass off

    • @Daniel-ye5uj
      @Daniel-ye5uj 6 лет назад +4

      Honestly i dont even know if the protagonist is a girl or a dude

    • @williamfawkes8379
      @williamfawkes8379 6 лет назад +9

      Well, technically a grizzled veteran cop may treat a young rookie cop like his daughter even if it is a dude. Officer Barkley isn't the most charismatic person after all.

    • @hunterferguson5675
      @hunterferguson5675 6 лет назад +12

      There are some hints that shes a she other than the daughter line, like when the cheif asks why she didnt get a male officer to help with the rusted lock, but this is not the first video in which I've been blindsided by the gender of the character several minutes in. I do wish hed make it more cpear at the begining of stories like this.

    • @DanielDiaz-ru6uz
      @DanielDiaz-ru6uz 6 лет назад +1

      LOOOOL yeah. I was confused for a sec.

    • @BrotherGrimm1013
      @BrotherGrimm1013 6 лет назад +2

      Yeah that bit caught me off guard too

  • @WhyIs.ThisHere
    @WhyIs.ThisHere 4 года назад +780

    This seems less like a creepyasta and more of a “who is the killer” movie. Still very entertaining

    • @tomhollandwife6542
      @tomhollandwife6542 4 года назад +1

      like the scream movies ! haha

    • @Netherdan
      @Netherdan 4 года назад +53

      Listening to the whole thing, yes. But when you get each update separately (as the written story probably went) it seems like:
      1) haunted house; 2) time traveling dead body; 3) a thing that can actually happen irl.
      Turns out #3 makes it creepier

    • @stevewalter4552
      @stevewalter4552 Год назад +6

      Yeah, I enjoyed the first half of the story, but when it turns out it's just some guy it really took me out of the story. Not bad by any means, just not what I was expecting.

    • @Taricus
      @Taricus Год назад

      Murder Mystery or just Mystery (It still usually means just cracking a case, without the Murder part included)

    • @augustsmith9553
      @augustsmith9553 Год назад

      Women dont belong in the police force

  • @frankietheheathen4513
    @frankietheheathen4513 6 лет назад +649

    I’m pretty new to this channel but I listen to a lot of no sleep channels. Dark Somnium is the best at this. There are a few really good narrators out there. But between the original music (and timing of the music) along with his delivery and cadence , this is hands down the best out there. This channel should have way more subs.

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  6 лет назад +24

      Thank you so much!

    • @biadefaturiyele8600
      @biadefaturiyele8600 5 лет назад +5

      Try slumber reads you will love him too oo.

    • @blake102989
      @blake102989 5 лет назад +4

      You haven't heard Naturestemper then. Somnium is very good but the voice of Naturestemper gets you good.

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +9

      Nt is awesome:D

    • @blake102989
      @blake102989 5 лет назад +2

      @@Darksomnium you and him should do a collaboration, that would be the ultimate story

  • @drewelement27
    @drewelement27 5 лет назад +511

    This is actually getting a full release as a novel this month. The story isn't over yet!

    • @hamburger495
      @hamburger495 5 лет назад +18

      Drew Fugate it didn’t feel like it was over! Only felt like a fragment! Like why was everyone blonde and blue eyed?

    • @morgan9125
      @morgan9125 5 лет назад +10

      Chealsi lopez Arian mafia maybe?

    • @baphomew
      @baphomew 5 лет назад +6

      Do you know what the title is?

    • @probablyjoeyy
      @probablyjoeyy 5 лет назад

      What? What? Omgomgggggg

    • @ApolloTheDerg
      @ApolloTheDerg 5 лет назад +3

      Baphomew Patch Lane I believe

  • @adamdonnelly3912
    @adamdonnelly3912 4 года назад +442

    the title: "I'm a cop, and I keep getting called to the same house."
    the picture: scp 096

  • @Jack-yq3uw
    @Jack-yq3uw 5 лет назад +605

    Someone should make a movie of this story, I would watch the shit out of it

    • @anthonyhiggs2406
      @anthonyhiggs2406 4 года назад +3

      Same

    • @consumedsalad5053
      @consumedsalad5053 4 года назад

      as much as I want to add a like to you comment I can bc I want to keep it at 69

    • @marissasnow8828
      @marissasnow8828 4 года назад +10

      need to make a movie out of all these stories especially how to survive in hell its one of my favorites and its actually the first i listened to if you havent listened to it i suggest it

    • @jenskjar2259
      @jenskjar2259 4 года назад +1

      Same

    • @glassdiamond2185
      @glassdiamond2185 3 года назад

      @@consumedsalad5053 Lol. My like just made it 269.

  • @germanpw1000
    @germanpw1000 5 лет назад +1206

    Up until I heard the phrase "he treats me like a daughter" I thought the officer was male.

  • @R25-k9b
    @R25-k9b 4 года назад +499

    here are some sequels to this story.
    - I'm a cop and i keep getting called to a different house
    - I'm a cop and i don't get called to the same house anymore
    - I'm not a cop and i don't get called but there is a house
    - i'm a cop and i keep calling a house to come too me
    - I'm a call that keeps housing a cop

    • @wolfman7284
      @wolfman7284 4 года назад +86

      "I'm a cop and I called in sick today"

    • @hamartia3449
      @hamartia3449 4 года назад +67

      I'm a house and i keep calling a cop

    • @inactive7519
      @inactive7519 3 года назад +33

      -im a cop and I can't keep housing to the same call

    • @Twxn-Leezy
      @Twxn-Leezy 3 года назад +10

      @@wolfman7284 I'm dying🤣🤣🤣🤣

    • @Stacypro78
      @Stacypro78 3 года назад +14

      I'm the same and a house keeps calling the same cop.

  • @kandaceashlie9116
    @kandaceashlie9116 5 лет назад +342

    I came across this by accident and I am totally excited , I love this story so far and the narrator is awesome. I am definitely gonna sub .

  • @atdeigo1415
    @atdeigo1415 Год назад +49

    I love how this story went from a time travel ghost murders story to a grounded and logical conclusion although I thought the story was headin towards a route where our protagonist was either the dead girl or she was gonna be performed on by the doctor in a gruesome way or sum but it was refreshing to hear a non paranormal story

    • @fauna5328
      @fauna5328 11 месяцев назад

      I thought the body was frozen, considering the clothes she was wearing was also from the 90s.

  • @tommielecompte1584
    @tommielecompte1584 5 лет назад +2223

    are we just gonna ignore the fact that my man just talked for 55 mins straight?

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +157

      haha xD

    • @strawberrypencl
      @strawberrypencl 5 лет назад +126

      Ahh, the magic of editing

    • @trenchwifegonzalez5207
      @trenchwifegonzalez5207 5 лет назад +8

      😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

    • @tapiiee
      @tapiiee 5 лет назад +25

      he stopped a couple times between each update

    • @Miktai
      @Miktai 5 лет назад +29

      And i laid on my bed and listened the whole time. Couldn't sleep because i was so excited all the way that what's gonna happen next.

  • @kroneyt1493
    @kroneyt1493 5 лет назад +2040

    It's very odd hearing a distinctly male voice describing himself as a female.

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +245

      haha yeah it was just a good story that i thought would be fun to narrate, but i dont want to change the authors work so instead of removing those parts or changing it to a guy, i just narrate it as is. I hope you like the story otherwise!

    • @michelleparker270
      @michelleparker270 5 лет назад +31

      You still do a fantastic job and the story was great. Had me hooked from the title on. Nice voice by the way

    • @brianmitchell8477
      @brianmitchell8477 5 лет назад +8

      Come to Frisco you'll get used to it!

    • @Girlpower648
      @Girlpower648 5 лет назад +27

      @@Darksomnium It doesn't sound weird or "odd" at all to me. Continue to narrate female stories too. This is great 💛

    • @teirdalin
      @teirdalin 5 лет назад +9

      It's 2020.

  • @noneyabones
    @noneyabones Год назад +12

    I wasn’t expecting it to be so grounded in reality! A lovely change from often cheesy stories. Great pick!

  • @lynfreecss5166
    @lynfreecss5166 5 лет назад +133

    25:58 got me bad. imagine being alone in your room with your lights out and 600 percent volume then a loud scream comes out while you're about to sleep. just like that. i nearly died. goodness.

    • @taylorr1653
      @taylorr1653 5 лет назад +7

      Thanks for the warning. I’m in my Uber listening with my headphones in. Would have scared the shit outta him if I screamed lol

    • @GODS.REQUIRE.SACRIFICE
      @GODS.REQUIRE.SACRIFICE 4 года назад

      Why were you about to sleep to a creepypasta. that’s scary

    • @kermit2.041
      @kermit2.041 4 года назад +2

      @@GODS.REQUIRE.SACRIFICE stay strapped or get clapped 🤷🏻‍♂

    • @ashley3626
      @ashley3626 4 года назад

      i was reaching across my body to grab my glass of water when haley screamed😂

    • @Jesteban-fu8qy
      @Jesteban-fu8qy 4 года назад +2

      That happened to me. I had been listening to scary stories and was just about to fall asleep. It was a pretty messed up story so I was imagining a guy draining a girl's entire body and then filling her up with some other person's blood, but all of it ran out because he slit her throat and blood was gushing out. Just as I was about to fall asleep the girl jumped at my face and screamed. I jumped up and couldn't fall asleep for atleast an hour.

  • @CreepyClownGirl
    @CreepyClownGirl 5 лет назад +345

    Freaking fantastic and immersive, kept me on the edge of my seat and wanted more. Very well done.

  • @daniell1483
    @daniell1483 3 года назад +2

    I think this is the best pasta I've heard yet on this channel. Nothing overdramatic, the dialogue flows smoothly, there is just the right amount of detail. Really fantastic writing on all levels.

  • @TheRiot406
    @TheRiot406 5 лет назад +509

    Dead lady's gas receipt is my exact bday

    • @jachowl4467
      @jachowl4467 5 лет назад +12

      Scary

    • @bettyschneider5268
      @bettyschneider5268 5 лет назад +5

      KODIAKCAN .... Really! 😲 🎂

    • @bettyschneider5268
      @bettyschneider5268 5 лет назад +8

      KODIAKCAN .... @10/20. My mom's birthday 🎂 is October 21.. Mine is 27... Lol 😆

    • @bettyschneider5268
      @bettyschneider5268 5 лет назад

      ......

    • @D1NKERR
      @D1NKERR 5 лет назад +6

      mine is august 13th which was the date of the second call, I think.

  • @jaceek2030
    @jaceek2030 6 лет назад +20

    Love your narration of this story. The added extras like the static when dispatch calls and the effects like knocking and creaking doors just make it so much better. Thanks for sharing!

  • @averyswondrousworld542
    @averyswondrousworld542 4 года назад +31

    Okay, no, I know this is two years old but I have to say it. I’ve been binging a lot of your videos lately as sorta “background noise” while I draw or play video games on my phone but most of them I’m able to really tune in to. This one. This one really really gave me chills. Your sound editing and reading is amazing in all of your videos but the way you delivered that last line freaked me out so bad I actually started tearing up in fear. _That was amazing._

  • @gaylelim6672
    @gaylelim6672 5 лет назад +94

    Didn't realize this was almost an hour long i guess I'm in for a treat

  • @ParthPandya1992
    @ParthPandya1992 5 лет назад +101

    Yt just showed this in the recommendations and I'm glad I sat through the entire video. Excellent story, great narration and voice over with engaging sound FX! I have subscribed!

  • @ellisn4545
    @ellisn4545 4 года назад +2

    Not a lot of people who make these kind of videos take the time to put in accurate subtitles. Thank you so much for taking the time to do so.

  • @luuver12345
    @luuver12345 4 года назад +113

    Wow, this was in my recommended videos and I had never heard of this channel before, but decided to give it a chance. I'm SO glad I did. This was an incredible story! So much better than the cheesy creepypastas that you usually see

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  4 года назад +10

      Thanks so much elizabeth! I'm so glad you liked it :)

    • @augustsmith9553
      @augustsmith9553 Год назад

      Women dont belong in the police force

  • @anthonyhayes1267
    @anthonyhayes1267 5 лет назад +458

    Favorite part: Cat didn't die
    Least favorite: Called them suits instead of the alphabet boys

  • @asaari1088
    @asaari1088 4 года назад +88

    When I saw the thumbnail the scp had me thinking this was a ghost story, I was wrong but oh SHIT was I immersed. This story and narration was incredible.

    • @jackal292
      @jackal292 4 года назад

      @@lauraungureanu2270 didn't ask

    • @jime48
      @jime48 2 года назад

      @@jackal292 well I did so stfu

  • @azndreamers209
    @azndreamers209 5 лет назад +167

    Damn if this was made into a tv series, I'm pretty sure it would be pretty popular.

    • @autumndawn1019
      @autumndawn1019 4 года назад +1

      IamRyu ikr!! I would LOVE to see this as a tv series!!!

  • @nezumizeta4460
    @nezumizeta4460 5 лет назад +55

    Dude, this story's awesome, and Barkley is one badass police officer

  • @couchman-sw6jy
    @couchman-sw6jy 2 года назад +50

    Your videos allow me to paint a vivid picture in my mind of the stories. Love seeing when the video is an hour long. Thank you :)

  • @rudyslifeandmusic8366
    @rudyslifeandmusic8366 5 лет назад +97

    I just cleaned my room in a flash when listening to this story

    • @KaitlynAnderson23
      @KaitlynAnderson23 5 лет назад +1

      Rudy's Life And Music I’m putting off cleaning my room to listening to this video😂🙄

    • @nikkiderringer
      @nikkiderringer 4 года назад +4

      It gets done a lot quicker when you're listening to a good story. I use stories like this while I do my daily cleaning.

  • @jenniferb.awesome
    @jenniferb.awesome 5 лет назад +60

    Feds: you won't be receiving anymore 911 hangups from this address anymore.
    Dispatcher: We recieved a 911 hangup...

    • @rodd7058
      @rodd7058 5 лет назад +1

      jennifer b.awesome i’m confused on that ending part could you explain?

    • @jenniferb.awesome
      @jenniferb.awesome 5 лет назад +1

      @@rodd7058 I interpreted it as that they got another call from patch lane but the person hung up just like before. It could also be from a different address though. I think they purposely left it a little confusing.

    • @Netherdan
      @Netherdan 4 года назад

      911 hangup vigilante, solving cold cases one spook at a time

  • @randymcmullen538
    @randymcmullen538 4 года назад +12

    EXCELLENT STORY! The story’s narration was great, the pacing of the story was really good... held my attention from beginning to end and left me wanting more! Hope to hear more soon!

  • @moirapledger9153
    @moirapledger9153 5 лет назад +56

    I'm new, but I love the appropriate use of sound effects, especially the cat scream. Most readers overuse one screaming clip in particular which to me, loses the effect of horror

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +2

      ah thank you!! :)

    • @fovosprodromus5020
      @fovosprodromus5020 2 года назад

      Omg yeah I can't stand corny screams like that. For me, subtle spooks is far more creepy than screams or jumpscares like in video games

  • @baphomew
    @baphomew 5 лет назад +27

    I just found this channel in the related videos, I wish I found you sooner! I think you're my new favorite narrator, love all the sound effects and the way you tell the story. It really brings it to life, keeps my attention as well. Also love that all the pieces of this story are in one video!

  • @kisaknight626
    @kisaknight626 Год назад +1

    I love investigative stories like this. Kind of like piecing the puzzle together with the narration

  • @elizabethmauer4797
    @elizabethmauer4797 5 лет назад +18

    I fully expected this to end like an old ghost story I heard as a preteen decades ago. The orator finds a line from the telephone box and follows it to a grave. Very good crime drama, and well read.

  • @mrssodapopstar
    @mrssodapopstar 6 лет назад +255

    Start @43:22 if you’re listened to all of the previous sections.

  • @JonJonWilli
    @JonJonWilli 4 года назад +299

    I have a past situation of my own. WARNING: this is a whole essay here it's alot. I almost wanted to make a "storytime" video on RUclips about this.
    This was in 2015(about the same time of my profile photo)
    I'm in Florida , moved here years ago. The First year of being here I worked night shifts at Dollar Tree and walked home at 12am, I got followed by 3 woman once, they looked attractive and pretty fit, about 20s to early 30s by my guess and my guard is dropped more against woman, but they gave me chills, I asked myself why, my stomach hurt out of nowhere it hurt bad but it was more of a feeling than a pain, I can't describe it, similar to butterflies in the stomach but was more intensive but it was like my body knew something bad was about to happen. Something told me to run but I dismissed it.
    They had colored backpacks on well it looked colored in the streetlight, and full black, leggings and some nice jackets with lots of strap things same outfits(I'm not good with woman apparels)
    and the middle one was wearing a similar looking outfit, all white,
    some big spiked boots on the ankles there was spikes and a spiked choker from what I could tell and they wouldn't react or respond to any of my efforts to greet them or communicate and I felt stupid partially yelling and getting no response back, I turned around and just kept walking they just followed me, about 4 car lengths staring right at me I dared not let them within 10 feet but I thought if they had guns they would have stopped me by now, the streets were empty pretty much even the roads, a car here and there. I didn't wanna go home risking them finding where I lived, I tested if they were actually following me and took a false route to my house and they followed and seemed to be walking faster
    My heart was racing the whole time and I pulled out my phone and they started running after me immediately after pulling my phone out, I started running but dropped my phone, I kept running they were faster than I expected (I was a runningback at 17, a year prior) they got within 5 feet from what I could hear but my adrenaline kicked in I cleared a good distance and couldn't hear them anymore and I just kept running and running for about minute until I reached a streetlight to a main road and I wanted to go back for my phone, but I went to a nearby house instead,
    my first thought was "I'm a black man, knocking on someone's door at midnight ..
    And I thanked God that he keeps me safe at night wherever I go I knew there was alot of prejudice in the city I live in but I knocked anyway.
    An elderly white man at the window I stood 5 feet from the door to give space, he turned the light on and had a bat in his other hand half cracking the door asking what business and nerve I had, and he saw I was out of breath I told him everything and he told me to come inside and use his phone. I didnt wanna go in his house and asked if he could bring it out and he said "yeah so you can run off with it? No sir."
    So I went inside the phone was right by the front door on a desk thing, and realized I didn't know any of my families phone numbers by heart.. and set the phone down as he watched I explained it to him and he said "Jesus Christ you kids these days too reliant on technology" and he offered me a ride I said I'd walk and he strongly recommended I didn't walk and he already grabbed his keys in hand and insisted taking me home. I exclaimed we didn't know each other and that I interrupted his sleep and that he could go back to sleep, he dismissed it and said I reached out for help and he's gunna help and hopes I return the favor to someone in the future I vowed I would.
    He had a nice car but I didn't know the make. It looked like an eclipse .
    I told him about my phone and he said I did right in staying distanced and running they seemed to have planned for who knows what if I tried to stop and talk.
    My phone was gone from where I dropped it I was devastated but I made it home, I didn't tell my parents about any of it because of how reactive and emotional my mom is about even the smallest things. I came in told them it was a long day and that I lost my phone and will buy a new one, I went to sleep and that was the end of that night. I left out alot of details because I'm typing an essay here.

    • @themaindude3218
      @themaindude3218 4 года назад +29

      Wow man this was very interesting I would love to see a story time.

    • @abigailb9144
      @abigailb9144 4 года назад +5

      Yeah! Fr id love a storytime too! Thats wild

    • @meralEdwtDawlatly
      @meralEdwtDawlatly 4 года назад +10

      You ever wondered what happened to ur phone or ever called it ?

    • @amandastevens5788
      @amandastevens5788 4 года назад +11

      I just read your experience,sorry to hear that you went thru that...may I ask what you left out of what happened?

    • @lindarudolph370
      @lindarudolph370 4 года назад +8

      I enjoyed reading that, wish there was more to it..Like did you see them again, did you ring your phone etc...Was really a good read..

  • @NovaSypher
    @NovaSypher 5 лет назад +16

    the end with the hang up gave me literal chills.

  • @diegomedina6214
    @diegomedina6214 5 лет назад +60

    The ending was perfect, it was everything i wanted it to be.

    • @MoistMeUpDaddy
      @MoistMeUpDaddy 4 года назад +6

      Just it ending on her getting another 911 hang up was perfect

    • @Netherdan
      @Netherdan 4 года назад +3

      911 hangup vigilante is on her side now. She'll solve a lotta cases and be regarded as a highly competent officer, get every promotion and bonuses she deserves and will end up becoming the youngest sheriff of the town

    • @iamV10010
      @iamV10010 2 года назад

      I thought it sucked. Like. Really bad.

  • @xvenomxreap3rx
    @xvenomxreap3rx 4 года назад +13

    Oh how I love listening to these stories when it's somewhat late at night. Some people think I'm mad to listen to horror this late but there's nothing like it.. not even horror movies
    Edit: imagine if that last 911 hangup was Patch Lane against.. that would be a big "NOPE" situation

    • @beetosbeef
      @beetosbeef Год назад

      I only listen to these to fall asleep 😴

  • @thekimmy4143
    @thekimmy4143 6 лет назад +65

    Soooo excited all parts are on one video!!!! Yay!!! Great story and fabulous sound effects!!!!!😁

  • @jjchick95
    @jjchick95 5 лет назад +136

    haha im with eveeyone that when "he treats me like a daughter" def caught me off guard also. that this was a male

    • @robloxgirl7998
      @robloxgirl7998 5 лет назад +3

      It's from a female perspective

    • @coda5710
      @coda5710 4 года назад +1

      @@robloxgirl7998 NAH REALLY

  • @_motho_
    @_motho_ 4 года назад +31

    this story is LITERALLY "who was phone?!"

    • @TheCCPlayer
      @TheCCPlayer 3 года назад +6

      But no one asking ”how was phone?” :(

  • @rachelmontgomery295
    @rachelmontgomery295 5 лет назад +63

    I don't know how I haven't found your account sooner! This was incredible!! Very well done.

  • @StrikeWyvern
    @StrikeWyvern 5 лет назад +137

    Fell asleep while listening to this, dreamed that he opened the padlocked door after chasing the guy and there was nothing but a skeleton.

  • @CJLOVE72
    @CJLOVE72 4 года назад +18

    This story got me to sub to the channel. OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was so creepy I was praying the sun would come up faster cause I started watching while it was still dark out. I love a good horror/creepy story any day. Thanks for keeping me on the edge of my chair till the end. :)

  • @danielbennett1812
    @danielbennett1812 5 лет назад +13

    You got a sub bro. Accidentally clicked it instead of another RUclipsr.
    Glad I did, you editing and cadence are great.

  • @patdepaula6618
    @patdepaula6618 5 лет назад +78

    This is definitely the best narrative I've heard, with riveting a story

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +3

      thank you :D

    • @anthonyhayes1267
      @anthonyhayes1267 5 лет назад +1

      If a story is riveting, does that make it well pieced together? (Sorry I couldn't resist)

  • @melon6825
    @melon6825 Год назад +3

    this channel has been my favorite for horror stories for a while now. Please dont stop what you're doing!

  • @nathansams6035
    @nathansams6035 5 лет назад +322

    Do you know a locksmith? No but I know you can buy bolt cutters at home depot?

    • @kawaiikokutan7686
      @kawaiikokutan7686 4 года назад +1

      She probably wanted to still USE the lock....she would still need a locksmith at some point..

    • @SquooshyCatboy
      @SquooshyCatboy 4 года назад +6

      Some things can’t be broke with bolt covers.
      *Pulls our the 50 BMG*

    • @DrumsyPleaseShave
      @DrumsyPleaseShave 4 года назад +1

      As a worker of home Depot I can confirm we do still have bolt cutters even after Corvid 19, for now anyway

    • @Im_Not_Loss
      @Im_Not_Loss 4 года назад +2

      In a part of the story cut out by Somnium the grandmother of the girl mentions that bolt cutters weren't an option because the girl didn't want the landlord to find out

    • @kraigblair7919
      @kraigblair7919 4 года назад

      @@SquooshyCatboy You prolly can't break it on account of the "Bolt Cover" protecting it! But i bet if you bought some good BOLT CUTTERS you could probably CUT the lock off lol

  • @alexbuenosdias
    @alexbuenosdias 5 лет назад +284

    I feel the one who made the calls in the start was the spirit of the woman who died in the cellar

    • @alisasharnin5157
      @alisasharnin5157 4 года назад +54

      I think it was the cat

    • @DaOats
      @DaOats 4 года назад +21

      Alisa Sharnin yeah it was the cat

    • @DaOats
      @DaOats 4 года назад +8

      😼😼

    • @TiredTabbs
      @TiredTabbs 4 года назад +10

      LA TROCA definitely the cat

    • @EzeICE
      @EzeICE 4 года назад +2

      Naaaah it was easily the cat though.

  • @zoggsbox6461
    @zoggsbox6461 4 года назад +103

    Me: sees thumbnail
    O5 council: SCP 096 HAS BREACHED CONTAINMENT!!!

    • @toxintheraptor9055
      @toxintheraptor9055 4 года назад +2

      Me to but it mite be the Russian sleep experiment

    • @Archerdon88
      @Archerdon88 4 года назад +7

      @@lauraungureanu2270 aye because that *IS* official SCP-096 artwork, dunno why this guy used it for his thumbnail though seems a bit weird

    • @OTST04
      @OTST04 4 года назад

      Yep same

    • @ireallyhadnousernameprepar3908
      @ireallyhadnousernameprepar3908 4 года назад

      I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought about scp 096

  • @huntermontgomery8456
    @huntermontgomery8456 5 лет назад +15

    That was beyond fantastic. I have listened to this twice now. Kept me hanging for more. Really amazing narration of an awesome story.

  • @maximusxvii6889
    @maximusxvii6889 6 лет назад +18

    Excited to hear more of the story, it's well composed and you do a great job on it.

  • @BeRightBack131
    @BeRightBack131 Год назад +3

    This is a FANTASTIC story! Thanks for posting this.

  • @DocBree13
    @DocBree13 5 лет назад +7

    I loved this! I loved that it was a mystery (that was actually solved/not left open-ended) and that all the episodes were bundled - would really like more like this one!

  • @botgetclapedyt573
    @botgetclapedyt573 5 лет назад +277

    off topic I love typing on pc this is my 1st pc ever and I love it

  • @Indyawillis85
    @Indyawillis85 3 года назад +3

    I didn’t think I’d enjoy this story so much. Very well written.

  • @davidozity
    @davidozity 5 лет назад +26

    This was actually such a good story, I loved it so much

  • @williamsova4663
    @williamsova4663 6 лет назад +45

    this is an awesome release man!! The best voice in creepypasta!

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  6 лет назад +3

      thank you so much!

    • @itsdillon1217
      @itsdillon1217 5 лет назад +2

      will sova, between his voice and NaturesTemper I can’t pick but Dark definitely has better, more interesting stories

  • @aaxiel2788
    @aaxiel2788 4 года назад +2

    I just found this video today and honestly I loved it. The real or fake the best kinds of creepypastas are the ones that are realistic, though the fake ones like Tales from the Gas Station are also pretty great. Thanks for getting be back into creepypastas, it's honestly what I needed with the current pandemic stuff going down.

  • @LoveWillAlwaysBeMine
    @LoveWillAlwaysBeMine 5 лет назад +20

    I’m so glad I just found your videos! Your voice is amazing & this story was awesome ! I could not click off ❤️😭

  • @p.odoublem.y9392
    @p.odoublem.y9392 5 лет назад +52

    Good story.
    Subbed.
    But i gotta say when i heard "treats me like a daughter" i flipped it 😂😂😂😂

  • @ches_c
    @ches_c 4 года назад +5

    I love listening to stories like this! The realistic quality of the story makes it scarier.

  • @dorian1764
    @dorian1764 5 лет назад +39

    Outstanding story. It kept me hanging on thought the hole thing.

    • @mokenfriendz7677
      @mokenfriendz7677 5 лет назад

      Whole**

    • @robinright825
      @robinright825 5 лет назад

      Moke n Friendz- you forgot ‘throughout’.
      If you’re going to call someone on a mistake they made, it helps if you don’t make one also. LOL.

    • @mokenfriendz7677
      @mokenfriendz7677 5 лет назад

      @@robinright825 meh.. lol

    • @SquooshyCatboy
      @SquooshyCatboy 4 года назад

      Robin Right
      Forgetting isn’t really a mistake, but whatever.
      Also, if you’re going to call someone on a mistake they made, it helps if you don’t make one also, lol.

  • @kovajp7357
    @kovajp7357 5 лет назад +13

    My friend just shared a link to this on facebook and thought to myself why not listen to it?
    I never regretted clicking this vid.

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +2

      Aww thank you!!

    • @Dog-po1yx
      @Dog-po1yx 5 лет назад

      @@Darksomnium I like how you are still reading comments on this video

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +1

      I try to read all comments and reply as much as I can :)

  • @swaygle
    @swaygle 2 года назад +4

    I love that this wasn't supernatural but a legitimately interesting and plausible story.

  • @angelaloraine2413
    @angelaloraine2413 4 года назад +8

    My dad is a cop and I've always admired how dedicated a lot of them are to delivering justice. Great story!

  • @taraburbank5344
    @taraburbank5344 6 лет назад +19

    Dark Somnium, I Loved the whole series and Awesome narrating!

  • @SilverLightDarkSoulsLover1998
    @SilverLightDarkSoulsLover1998 4 года назад +4

    Dude. I just gotta say, I love your channel. Thank you so much for these stories. You're consistent with your uploads, and just have such an amazing storyteller voice. I've said it before, but I'll happily say it again. Thank you for the entertainment! You're doing an awesome job. :)

  • @jvvandmrw4ever
    @jvvandmrw4ever 5 лет назад +72

    Omg I was laying here at 326 am and I just got married I am almost asleep my married name is Michelle kline and with your story I just found out I have been dead for 20 years lol creepy AF when I herd you say my name chills went down my spine and had to tell you thanks for the scare

    • @craiggamingandmore
      @craiggamingandmore 5 лет назад +7

      what?

    • @nothx2985
      @nothx2985 5 лет назад +1

      @@craiggamingandmore did you.. listen to the story?

    • @luemin3592
      @luemin3592 4 года назад +2

      no thx when the officer ran through the fingerprint identification, it found out the woman was named “Michelle Kline.” Did YOU listen to the whole story 😐 Timestamp: 20:54

  • @jbeats1930
    @jbeats1930 5 лет назад +30

    I do not normally like creepy stuff but this was a excellent story!

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +3

      thank you im glad you liked it!

  • @MissMollyDoll311
    @MissMollyDoll311 4 года назад +6

    This is a hidden gem. Fantastic story telling and narration 👌

  • @kathyannalexander4506
    @kathyannalexander4506 6 лет назад +16

    I am a new sub. This was an excellent story. By the way u have a wonderful voice.

  • @kathall6422
    @kathall6422 6 лет назад +25

    I love this series, appreciate all the hard work and effort u put in 4 us, love from Lindsay, Ontario, Canada.

  • @scottwells8064
    @scottwells8064 Год назад +2

    This is just plain amazing. It's not often a story can keep me from running errands because i can't stop listening. So well done.

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  Год назад +1

      Glad you enjoy it!

    • @scottwells8064
      @scottwells8064 Год назад

      @@Darksomnium Now I juat have to go hunting for the teased sequel lol

  • @thegiantasiansticker9776
    @thegiantasiansticker9776 5 лет назад +629

    hello, how are you?
    here's some coco ☕️

  • @maschiroib.1692
    @maschiroib.1692 5 лет назад +175

    And he treats me like a daughter.
    HOL UP

  • @cristensaradyn1018
    @cristensaradyn1018 3 года назад +3

    This story was fantastic, and the last 15 seconds gave me chills! This was excellently written

  • @-unholy1832
    @-unholy1832 5 лет назад +12

    Such an amazing story, gives such suspense.

  • @ccpoisonivy
    @ccpoisonivy 5 лет назад +76

    FYI... two-thirds through, and yes, you now have a cat. This is how you get a cat.

    • @nikkiderringer
      @nikkiderringer 4 года назад +7

      Pretty much. You find a cat (or cat finds you) and *boom* it decides it's gonna live with you. Not much you can do about it. You now have a cat.

    • @SquooshyCatboy
      @SquooshyCatboy 4 года назад +3

      Hey, can confirm. Found one in my trashcan. Looked and smelled dead. But amazing. She hasn’t moved for a while now..

  • @pallavishrotriya230
    @pallavishrotriya230 3 года назад +7

    Hey som! I would love it if you narrated more stories like this. This was an entire movie! It wasn't just a creepypasta, it was a crime mystery thriller kind of story...it was so amazing.

  • @readidusseau6245
    @readidusseau6245 5 лет назад +8

    That story about the 911 call on Patch Lane ,, " LOVED IT !!! "

  • @Varatri
    @Varatri 5 лет назад +19

    every time i hear that radio noise, i think "noice"

  • @CalsGirl97
    @CalsGirl97 4 года назад +2

    This was a great story, at first you feel it may be paranormal but when you realize it's a real person with clever ways to get around and keep watch it's chilling.

  • @justwonderingcrafts6313
    @justwonderingcrafts6313 5 лет назад +78

    It took me so long to realize it's from a womans point of view lol... I'm an idiot

    • @Darksomnium
      @Darksomnium  5 лет назад +3

      No your not, I'm a guy so it's understandable you wouldnt know that without the story saying it a bunch Haha

    • @MOTORCYCLES-ANDGUNS
      @MOTORCYCLES-ANDGUNS 5 лет назад +1

      @@Darksomnium IS IT BASED ON A TRUE STORY?

    • @milekiticevsin3290
      @milekiticevsin3290 4 года назад

      @@MOTORCYCLES-ANDGUNS u don't know what a creepypasta is dont u?

  • @jullianmorales9584
    @jullianmorales9584 5 лет назад +12

    This guy is perfect, glad I found you

  • @firefly5677
    @firefly5677 4 года назад +2

    What a fantastic story. The author is really talented; the end gave me goosebumps. Great narration as well.

  • @accidentprone2543
    @accidentprone2543 6 лет назад +6

    Absolutely incredible story
    And even more incredible narration
    Fantastic!