The Struwwelpeter by Tony Walker

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  • Опубликовано: 12 сен 2024
  • People have been asking for more of my own stories, so here's one. However, I have to warn you that I use the f-word in it and it is rather dark. It's possibly as dark as my Whitehaven Bodysnatcher, plus it has swearing (though it is necessary for the character I feel). So, if you prefer my sweeter stories, or don't like that word being used, I would avoid this one.
    It all starts with a man going walking in the Black Forest in Germany...
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Комментарии • 239

  • @karensmith2204
    @karensmith2204 Год назад +9

    TONY WALKER. !!!!!
    You are the best voice actor ever.
    How your voice can be so calm and help me drift off to sleep..........then the stories you write can be so Chilng, that I am scared on a texas afternoon in 105 ferenheight.
    True talent sir.

  • @jennifermcdonald5432
    @jennifermcdonald5432 7 месяцев назад +5

    A fantastic story Tony! The stuff you said about military personnel is so very true. No one can do or go through the things involved in war, 24 hours a day on super high alert, facing your life ending in a millisecond, or ending someone else’s, then come home and adjust to selling 📺 in a department store. Omg the terrible scares on brain and soul! Imo, we are a failure as a species, and war is a great example of that failure!

  • @mattvrabel2072
    @mattvrabel2072 Год назад +22

    Thank you for the commentary after the end of the story. As a veteran, it is much appreciated. We are all complicated. We all struggle with darknesses, it comes from being made of flesh and blood and meat and bone in a world like this. It is the struggle against our own darkness that gives our good any merit. Thank you for the tale, and for your thoughts on it.

    • @evelanpatton
      @evelanpatton 8 месяцев назад +1

      Thank you for your service to protect others. 💟☸️☯️☮️🕉️💜

    • @JennyLane8666
      @JennyLane8666 6 месяцев назад

      Beautifully said. Thank you for your service, my friend.

    • @oriana5623
      @oriana5623 4 месяца назад

  • @chuzzthefuzz1908
    @chuzzthefuzz1908 Год назад +9

    I remember Struwelpeter from when i was a kid - just mainly the amazing image - I never read it. Your story was great and as usual, you read it beautifully. As far as the language goes, it was okay by me. They’re just words and when they’re appropriate, why not?
    And I liked that the story had layers. I suspected fairly early on that Marcus wasn’t all he seemed. All in all, thank you!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +5

      But Marcus was exactly what he seemed to be

  • @Hannahxx1971
    @Hannahxx1971 Год назад +8

    I'd almost forgotten The Judderman, it was a great advert. Beware the Judderman when the moon is high....or night is still... Something like that, my memory aint what it used to be 😄 Great story! I kept it to watch in bed tonight. Thanks Tony.

  • @angelatheriault8855
    @angelatheriault8855 Год назад +8

    I have an uncontrollable urge to cover my head with the blanket and sleep with the light on. Thanks a lot, Tony.

  • @donaldmccleary9015
    @donaldmccleary9015 Год назад +6

    Nice connection to Edward Scissorhands.
    Thanks for your talk on war and people who return from them. As a combat vet your words ring true. Your comment on profits is spot on! As Alexander W. Drake said in "The Yellow Globe", "Only a man with a haunted heart can paint a haunted house." That is how many of us feel at times.
    I never knew you were a Reservist. Awesome!!
    You are a sage!

  • @vivwray6082
    @vivwray6082 Год назад +18

    Tony Walker makes verbal narration of every story seem easy. It really is not! ❤ You are truly gifted TW

  • @ChronoTriggerHappy85
    @ChronoTriggerHappy85 День назад +1

    Dude. Thanks for writing this. There is a lot in this. My poor poor stepfather came home with PTSD. Struggling with what he saw… and what he did. What he had to do. My god, you really captured something with the horror and ghost and fantasy side, then you ground it so so horribly in reality and it creates something more terrifying, more terrible, and more haunting than if it was actually a monster. Anyway, this one hit me.

  • @Boogie_the_cat
    @Boogie_the_cat Год назад +4

    I hit "play" and 3 minutes later it started raining IRL. Perfect!
    Nice to hear another T.W. original.

  • @michelleanderson943
    @michelleanderson943 Год назад +7

    When this popped up on my feed and I saw you wrote it, I knew I was in for a treat. I love you reading to me, but when it’s your own material I’m especially mesmerized. And you saw Peter Gabriel!!!

  • @donaldmccleary9015
    @donaldmccleary9015 Год назад +12

    I love how you link this story to Crogglin.
    This is a damn fine story, my friend.
    Fantastic job!

  • @susannowak5544
    @susannowak5544 Год назад +4

    Wow. This story, with its acknowledgment of the dark within us all…oh, so true! As was the noting about sending warriors out, and…not truly welcoming them back. I know a Dineh traditional practitioner, as he prefers to be called, and he pointed out that in his culture, as in many other more tribal traditions, there are ceremonies to readjust the warrior back to peacetime rôles. Hmm, eh..?
    Thank you again from me, who grew up with a copy of Strüwelpeter, as well as reading my mother’s old EC comics, The Crypt of Horror, etc… ( and my friends think I’m sweet…heh..)😉

  • @emnorfolk5559
    @emnorfolk5559 Год назад +9

    Wow... Creepy, spooky, nasty, with a twist! ❤ love it! Well done!

  • @jaceek2030
    @jaceek2030 Год назад +7

    What a great story, Mr. Walker! You're not only an excellent narrator, but an excellent writer as well. Bravo!

  • @jenniferno2402
    @jenniferno2402 Год назад +6

    Excellent. Love the classic/modern influence combo and great reading as always.

  • @matthewpilarski4857
    @matthewpilarski4857 Год назад +6

    Great story, and the German dialog was a nice touch

  • @janflower4068
    @janflower4068 Год назад +5

    I think you did a great job Tony on your German accent

  • @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos
    @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos Год назад +10

    This is superb! I am enjoying it so much. You have a knack for describing what it feels like to be in a strange house trying to sleep upstairs, and then hearing someone/something slowly climbing the stairs. (Like "My Niece Allison") It terrifies me. I get so into it that my heart pounds in my chest and I tense up, it's fantastic. (I'm commenting as I listen...) Okay, I swear I had not gotten to the part where Edward's "heart pounded in his chest" when I said the same thing. Fascinating, I am covered in goosebumps now. I like how you brought one of your other stories The Croglin Vampire into this.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      Very very kind

    • @blixten2928
      @blixten2928 Год назад +1

      Oh yeah, I forgot "My niece Allison"! I gotta re-listen to that one!

    • @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos
      @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos Год назад +2

      @@blixten2928 My Niece Allison is so good and so chilling! I have listened to it three times and it scares me in the best ways every time. I think about it after I hear it and I have questions, but maybe they are better left unanswered. Or unwritten...

    • @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos
      @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos Год назад

      @@ClassicGhost Every time I say "Struwwelpeter" it comes out of my mouth differently...

    • @TheFirefishe
      @TheFirefishe 10 месяцев назад +1

      ⁠Strew Vell Pay Ter (Tuh(r) )

  • @appalachianamerican7171
    @appalachianamerican7171 Год назад +4

    Excellent, deliciously dark tale Mr. Tony . 👍

  • @sugarfalls1
    @sugarfalls1 11 месяцев назад +4

    "and the promise of eternal darkness" yikes! Omg, you are an expert storyteller! Your scary voice and German accent are fantastic.

  • @kellycasperhanson4426
    @kellycasperhanson4426 Год назад +5

    Great story. I could feel and smell that dank house. Gave me shivers😬!
    Awesome narration.
    Very enjoyable👌.

  • @paulthompson52
    @paulthompson52 Год назад +3

    Totally had me going in the wrong direction for predictions. Very well done!!

  • @ainemoroney9965
    @ainemoroney9965 Год назад +6

    I was hoping the end was how it played out! 😊🎉
    Gold star for the story, German pronunciation and reading 🌟-may your talents reward you ❤

  • @meese9140
    @meese9140 Год назад +13

    Oh boy! Always excited to see an original tale from my favorite modern horror author :) will listen later

  • @TC.Lee33
    @TC.Lee33 Год назад +5

    Absolutely fantastic little story Tony, and extremely well read. I do love listening to a great, short, bedtime story but there are very few good British narrators with an authentic, relatable accent. I look forward to listening to many more from you.. well done.

  • @craigoliver8712
    @craigoliver8712 Год назад +5

    I thought of this advert before you mentioned it, think it went "beware the Jubberman when the moon is fat". Great story Tony+it is a disgrace how we+other nations treat our veterans, they should all have a job to come out to after their service

    • @SMichaelDeHart
      @SMichaelDeHart 8 месяцев назад

      Amen!! It's absolutely infuriating how countries (especially the United States) screws the men and women who serve. My father was a WWII Combat Veteran with the US Army Air Force in the South Pacific Campaign. The VA treated him well, but he never relied on them for health care, his Class A Transmission Lineman job for Appalachian Power Company in West Virginia paid well and had great coverage. I served 30yrs as a Firefighter/ EMS Medical First Responder, but never served in military.

  • @jessisage4708
    @jessisage4708 Год назад +4

    That was riveting! Nicely done Tony ❤❤❤

  • @MaggieatPlay
    @MaggieatPlay Год назад +6

    First impression on listening: Well done, you! I very much enjoy the stories you pen. Thank you, Tony.

  • @fetlock
    @fetlock Год назад +20

    I was blown away by this story. I found it oddly and compellingly poetic. The last sentence will resonate in my head for a long, long time.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +5

      It just came to me fully formed

    • @TheCrone
      @TheCrone 11 месяцев назад +1

      You should check out one of his books they're awesome

  • @Story-Voracious66
    @Story-Voracious66 Год назад +3

    Yay Tony!
    One of yours.
    Your thumbnail looks like "The Judder Man".
    Can hardly wait to hear it all.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      The judderman is a definite influence

  • @lesleykaygosson315
    @lesleykaygosson315 Год назад +9

    That was fantastic!
    Story ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
    Narration ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐❤

  • @blixten2928
    @blixten2928 Год назад +2

    Beautiful blend of the modern (Afghanistan war, phone flashlights) and the dark, awful, well-known folkloric. And your German is great!

  • @kevin-robertbrian8559
    @kevin-robertbrian8559 Год назад +4

    Really good scary story. Great reading.

  • @AlgorithmEngagementEntity
    @AlgorithmEngagementEntity 3 месяца назад +1

    Your expressions and creations are literally outstanding and evocative. The waffle is a substantial dessert. Thanks sir. Scratch the dogs.

  • @dougjamesberwick2625
    @dougjamesberwick2625 11 месяцев назад +2

    Another superb story, Tony. Great twist!

  • @politicalcorrectionfacilit2644
    @politicalcorrectionfacilit2644 Год назад +5

    Any thing to me is sweeter Than to see Shock-headed Peter

  • @scoutrifle6827
    @scoutrifle6827 Год назад +1

    I enjoy everything you do, Tony, but your original stores are by far my favorites.

  • @csj9619
    @csj9619 Год назад +3

    Great work Tony. I'm impressed.

  • @martiwilliams4592
    @martiwilliams4592 11 месяцев назад +2

    Gripping, also this time around. The accents, the comments, our Shadows. We are complex. Much needed, especially just now. Thank you!

    • @martiwilliams4592
      @martiwilliams4592 11 месяцев назад

      Could you say something--wherever you might be able to fit it in--about the Shadow? Also for those like me whose knowlage of Jung isn't put into any system as yet. Thank you again.

  • @sugarfalls1
    @sugarfalls1 11 месяцев назад +2

    I love to listen to your synopses. It's always interesting to listen to where the author got their impetus from and also lovely to get to know a little bit more about you! Thank you, Tony for such a well-written story! (I hope that wasn't too traumatic - you crack me up Tony! lol)

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  11 месяцев назад +2

      i’m glad this story has gone down so well

  • @ronaldmussulman2735
    @ronaldmussulman2735 Год назад +3

    Hi, I listened to your darkworlds story so I am not shocked by the darkness here. I'm going to listen again because I think different parts will stick out, some stories change. I just wanted to say thanks, I really appreciate your writing.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      Means a lot. so many years of rejection

  • @miladachudickova1096
    @miladachudickova1096 Год назад +3

    Thank you again for your honest, open and still thoughtful attitude to all these issues, Tony, you are really doing a marvellous job here, both as an artist and as a health care professional. Stay strong, stay brave, you are helping and inspiring the others so much!

    • @mq9893
      @mq9893 9 месяцев назад

      😊🍻

  • @angelaroberts2803
    @angelaroberts2803 10 месяцев назад +1

    Wonderful story.Now it's getting dark early and Halloween soon,I'm back listening to your stories.

  • @susanmercurio1060
    @susanmercurio1060 8 месяцев назад +1

    Wow, Tony! Another Tony Walker-written story. Sounds great, as usual. ❤
    34:20 or so "He had to go down into the cellar"? I would have packed up the sleeping bag and left the place.

  • @SueCooke
    @SueCooke Год назад +1

    WHOA! Now THAT'S what I call talent. Tony, you're bloody marvellous. Fantastic story. Would make a brilliant film. Thank you so, so much for all your hard work. Totally awesome.

  • @mistydevillier2197
    @mistydevillier2197 10 месяцев назад +2

    I have the children's book of srewwelpeter but I've never heard this version. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

  • @nalunoa
    @nalunoa Год назад +1

    Absolutely fantastic!!
    I must say, while I very much enjoy all your readings, I really really love your original stories! They have become somewhat of a highlight for me. This coming from a life-long horror literature enthusiast, from classics to modern and pulp.
    And I, for one, really enjoy your post story breakdowns, chats and thoughts. I look forward to them each time.
    At long last, I should soon be in a position to buy at least a couple of your books and will do just that as soon as I can.
    All the best, Mr Walker. And many thanks for all your fine work, sir!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      Great praise indeed. At the moment my books aren’t available but i hope they will soon be again

    • @nalunoa
      @nalunoa Год назад

      I too hope they will be again soon. For me, and all the others who will undoubtably enjoy them. In the meantime, I'll support in other ways as soon as I'm able.
      Many thanks for the reply, sir.@@ClassicGhost

  • @hathorearthfyre
    @hathorearthfyre Год назад +3

    Ooooooooh, spine-tingling story. Yes, darkness and light exists within us all. Exploring our darkness is important to achievng balance. Some reject the light. Thank you for this.

  • @shroomyk
    @shroomyk Год назад +1

    Kind of interesting thinking the inspiration for at least the look of Edward Scissorhands (one of my favorite movies btw) was inspired by the illustration of Der Struwwelpeter. I can definitely see it. I also remember the commercial you are talking about. lol This is why I love your commentaries at the end.
    Your thoughts on veterans at the end are great too. I wish governments wouldn't send poor young men to go do violence and have violence done to them, and then completely neglect the men who return.
    Although I am not a veteran and have not seen combat, I have C-PTSD and many people would think I overreact to certain things, when really my nervous system is sort of wired to be defensive now. It is quite a task to not let those defenses cause harm to others or to let the anger of what happened take over the loving and gentle parts of myself.
    Thank you Tony for sharing both the light and the dark with us.

  • @simonkeys17
    @simonkeys17 Год назад +1

    The Metz drink advert was The Judder man. This is what I was thinking when I read this fantastic story. One of your best performances to date. Thanks.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад

      The Judderman deserves his own story

  • @louiseselfe616
    @louiseselfe616 3 месяца назад +1

    Great depiction of the gruesome folk character! And a superb reading.
    I too have a fascination for puppetry , automata and all manner of dancing jerky creatures ... remember Raggedy from Rupert the Bear? Twiggy, jerky thing of nightmares that he was.
    I also loved those Metz adverts: "Beware the Judderman my dear, when the moon is full" has long been a catchphrase in my household. 😆
    Also , I'm reminded of the stunning work of the early 20th century German director and animator Lotte Reiniger. She pioneered silhouette animation. Some of it is really dark and creepy (deliciously so!) and all of it is very beautiful. If anyone here isn't familiar with her work you can find some on RUclips.
    Compliments on your German accent too. (I was born in Germany coincidentally, but grew up in England). Thank you Tony for another great reading and composition!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 месяца назад +1

      Thank you very much . Yes, I d ok remember Raggedy! It’s the jerkiness I think

  • @70schild420
    @70schild420 Год назад +2

    Your mastery of languages is impressive!

  • @lyndabrennan4560
    @lyndabrennan4560 Год назад +6

    I don't mind swearing when needed Tony, one of your own too, can't wait to bedtime, not long now, hope you're well 🙏 💛

  • @DanHunterSportsWriter
    @DanHunterSportsWriter 5 месяцев назад +1

    Fuckinelll Tony!! What a piledriver of a story!! I've listened to dozens of your Classic Ghost Stories on Spotify but I think this might be the best one.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  5 месяцев назад +1

      My evil side was working hard

  • @oriana5623
    @oriana5623 4 месяца назад +1

    Holy sh^t. THAT was a great story. ✨️ Congratulations! And thank you, Mr. Walker.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +1

      thanks a lot.
      It always means a lot more to me when it’s one of mine

  • @SC-jh9qp
    @SC-jh9qp Год назад +3

    Great stuff. What a wonderful admixture of: fairytale; gothic horror; psychology; philosophy and politics. My bedroom door swinging open onto the dark landing half way through only added to the chills. Well I'm off to dip myself into an inkwell now... I mean have a bath. Keep up the great work. ❤️ 🙏

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +2

      If you hear singing in German in the middle of the night close the door.

    • @SC-jh9qp
      @SC-jh9qp Год назад

      @@ClassicGhost I will, don't worry 😀

  • @roxanavasilakis9435
    @roxanavasilakis9435 Год назад +1

    Hey dear Tony🌷, thank you so much 🌳

  • @stacycentral
    @stacycentral Месяц назад

    As I was listening, I thought "Hotel California." (Eagles) while studying for my master's in clinical psychology, I did a practicum in a state mental hospital. That was 50 years ago, but the experience remains. Thanks for this selection and performance.

  • @evelanpatton
    @evelanpatton Год назад +2

    My birthday upload & it’s by YOU- Yay! ❤Spooky picture! 🎉
    (Edit)
    Oh…I so wanted the full gothic descriptions of the puppetry theater!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +4

      the Puppet Theatre is another story... I'll write it!

  • @KarensOpinionsMayDiffer
    @KarensOpinionsMayDiffer Год назад +3

    That was really good!

  • @susanhague4719
    @susanhague4719 Год назад +2

    Loved this. Thank you so much!

  • @amandalee215
    @amandalee215 Год назад +2

    I am looking forward to this love your work

  • @markportwood4045
    @markportwood4045 Год назад +1

    Excellent, I’ve just listened to The Highgate Vampire for about the tenth time in a couple of years; I do enjoy a Tony Walker original, and here’s another one to discover.

  • @dismith73
    @dismith73 Год назад +4

    I like the swearing

  • @julierobinson3633
    @julierobinson3633 8 месяцев назад +1

    Cracking story. I remember the 'Millenium with Metz' adverts and the creepy figure.
    One thing has always struck me, we are all completely horrified at the idea of someone killing someone else - but we are almost all related to those who have killed. One of my Grandfathers - who died long before I was born - was in the first world war. The other fought in the second. Both will have likely have killed men -as that is what they were sent overseas to do. And these were not professional soldiers, who at least are hopefully trained in the mindset a little, but everyday men who one week were in Church hearing 'thou shalt not kill' and then a few weeks later were on foreign soil with fixed bayonets being told that for King and Country they had to do just that.

  • @LiaLe-mk9bf
    @LiaLe-mk9bf Год назад +2

    Love your stories! They feel like they could really happen to you too 😨😊❤

  • @MrsWilberforce2
    @MrsWilberforce2 9 месяцев назад

    Ya know, I really really liked this story! It was definitely dark (and super creepy) but it needed to be dark. Great work!

  • @nancynickerson4341
    @nancynickerson4341 Год назад +2

    Wow, well done, Tony!

  • @Story-Voracious66
    @Story-Voracious66 Год назад +1

    Don't look back.
    Just drive *this* car.
    Keep saying this.
    I think I know what you are...
    I saw Struwwelpeter in the ED the other day.
    His hair had begun to dreadlock, his beard was short and stragled, his skin was purple, he was bone thin, and he fidgeted constantly. Picking, relentlessly, jerkily, rearranging his blankets with his bony fingers.
    Man you really nailed it this time Mr Walker. Best yet in my opinion.
    Bravo.
    My late Hamburg mother in law was raised on Struwwelpeter, she would have been impressed too.
    (apologies to Mr G for bastardising his lyrics)
    If you ever have time, have a listen to Tori Amos's song "Waitress".
    Live version is best.
    It think it resonates with your talk.
    Thanks.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      i haven’t listened to her for a long time. i’ll go back

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      Oh yeah I know that one :)

  • @psychopomp888
    @psychopomp888 Год назад +3

    I loved the story , an it is truly relatable you don't have to be in the military either or witness physical killings. There are other types of murder, an trauma that helps us to know or shape our darkness. There is a saying that goes like this " That a Man can not Die in Peace until he has faced his own Demons. Take care to All....
    P.s This story had me wanting to hear Oscar Wilde's The Ballad of Reading Goal because there too , True Words have been Wrote as well.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад

      Thank you for this comment. Much appreciated

  • @joanieann6179
    @joanieann6179 Год назад +3

    Very appropriate for this time of war. How many young people are dying so the military industrial complex and big backup companies can get rich.
    Why not have peace talks?

  • @ellenmendoza7246
    @ellenmendoza7246 Год назад +1

    Was my favorite book as child..I'm 63 I read it to my children and many other people children it dark .. brilliant book

  • @bluegreenglue6565
    @bluegreenglue6565 Год назад +2

    oof! When I saw the title, I remembered the German story books my best friend owned that were gifts from her extended family in the old country. One of them was the collection you mentioned, and the image of Der Struwwelpeter with a big pair of sheers, having just cut off the thumbs of a naughty boy was horrifying and haunting. I had never seen anything but Disney versions of the old fairy tales, and couldn't believe people would read these to their children! : D Excellent story, Sir. Grim and gruesome, but also quite revealing. "See the soldier with his gun who must be dead to be admired." "The insatiable thirst for power has made idles out of mortals, gods into clay, soldiers into heroes, children into slaves..." There is a place in art, in life, in self-reflection for dark tales. Thank you very much.

  • @allysonlewis1576
    @allysonlewis1576 10 месяцев назад

    What a refreshingly different aspect to a subject very well covered. I bloody well thought this was brilliant. Excellent writing and narration. More please.

  • @deadletteroffice9356
    @deadletteroffice9356 6 месяцев назад

    Currently, you are my 2nd favorite Gen-Xer.
    (Holding steady in 1st is Anthony Bourdain-RIP) .
    I’ve listened to this story twice and was frightened both times. Worse though was the near constant references to rain and wet and cold and spineshivers -ugh!
    When you are in the US next, head to Montana!
    We have cowboys, bears, and loads of real ghost towns!
    Also an interesting dialect…
    Keep writing

  • @shakonoheyraven1639
    @shakonoheyraven1639 Месяц назад

    Another awesome story Thank you for sharing 💐💐
    🦋
    👣🐾

  • @martiwilliams4592
    @martiwilliams4592 Месяц назад

    "Soaking rain" days of it. How appropriate, Tony. Fortunately my flat isn't so dilapidated and Dog Nico is quite contented under the duvet. Ditto on everything from 9-10 months ago. Thank you.

  • @sleethmitchell
    @sleethmitchell 10 месяцев назад +1

    now, when i hear the word, 'vicarious', i immediately think, 'like a vicar.'

  • @mikefischbein3230
    @mikefischbein3230 Год назад +9

    That was great. F word didn't bother me at all. There's way harsher stuff going on in that basement scene than bad language.

  • @lobotron01
    @lobotron01 Год назад +1

    ❤ damn bro this is going to be right up there with one of your best and one of my all-time favorites you do have a talent that is for damn sure I should have done this a long time ago because I've lived it work for a while now but because of this story I began patreon for you because you're awesome please never stop

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      I just saw you sign up! Thank you :))

  • @lucysky384
    @lucysky384 Год назад +1

    I really enjoyed the imagery in this, and the swearing didn't bother me at all. Dark, but entertaining ....

  • @LadyEng
    @LadyEng Год назад +1

    I loved this story and I can relate very much in feeling this pleasure from scaring people. I always reflect on what it says about me.

  • @StalinLovsMsmZioglowfagz
    @StalinLovsMsmZioglowfagz Год назад +2

    Great AI pic, cain’t wait!
    Gotta admit I wanted Marcus to be Peter and the knife to have been a joke, a trick. Ah, weeeel. It basically happened in a different way.

  • @davidk6269
    @davidk6269 Год назад +1

    Bravo!!! Well done!

  • @thurayya8905
    @thurayya8905 Год назад

    I didn't notice that you swore in it, but it's fine if you did. Very well done story and I quite enjoyed it. I laugh at people who listen to dark stories and then complain if they are too dark. There's no hard and fast line, just a sliding scale. When listening to a story, we tend to identify with the main character and then don't want to acknowledge anything they do that we don't like -- but it isn't our story, we are the listeners. We have already given you permission; no sense in trying to take it back later.

  • @davidhughes8661
    @davidhughes8661 9 месяцев назад

    Great narration , especially the way a soldier would

  • @alieschabel3983
    @alieschabel3983 6 месяцев назад +1

    Great story, sir.

  • @debra333
    @debra333 11 месяцев назад +1

    Great concept realized. ❤

  • @meganmcnelis7136
    @meganmcnelis7136 Год назад

    You really portrayed Carl with empathy. I imagine your day job gives you insight into people's experiences (and medications...). The swearing bit was spot on--my dad was in WW2 and I never heard him swear much unless he was talking about the war. I agree with your thoughts on how our countries seem to simultaneously cut people off from means and advantages and then offer military service as the only way to acquire them.
    I'd like to know what kind of power banks these characters were carrying for their phones to last so long! Even an iPhone doesn't have that kind of battery life. 😄

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      lol. Very good point about the battery life

  • @amandine512
    @amandine512 Год назад

    More of these please! I enjoy your writing, F bombs and all.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      I am having a radical think about how i get my work out. Maybe books are a thing if the past. This is the first place this story had been published . maybe that’s the way to go

    • @amandine512
      @amandine512 Год назад

      @@ClassicGhost I guess my comment got deleted. :/

  • @robertkennedy3817
    @robertkennedy3817 8 месяцев назад +1

    Brilliant tony. For me it's either you or Edward e french

  • @martiwilliams4592
    @martiwilliams4592 Год назад

    Ditto ditto ditto also this time around, caught details I missed previously. Masterful as always, thank you, Tony. Agree, agree, agree. Still a pacifist...and yet... .

  • @jenniferlevine5406
    @jenniferlevine5406 6 месяцев назад

    Not too traumatic - no, but as you say a dark story. Well written and told tale. I won't say enjoyed (in keeping with your chat), but I appreciated the reading and your comments very much.

  • @TheCrone
    @TheCrone 11 месяцев назад +1

    Oh my!😂Such shocking language. Pass me my tea 🍵 please

  • @Bbergster
    @Bbergster Год назад +1

    That was great! I know u are a great writer by listening to u speak! Hope that nonsense u mentioned has cleared up. I steal words from everywhere I can. Figure someone else has already said it better…. 💜

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      Thank you . i am a word thief too.

  • @robynhenry2607
    @robynhenry2607 Год назад

    Love your Stories !! ❤❤

  • @dawnmorris5978
    @dawnmorris5978 Год назад +1

    Bloody hell that was Scary I was eating my lunch listening to this and with Bones and sinews and blood Nearly put me off my sandwich well done great story

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Год назад +1

      Nobody likes a sinew sandwich (except Struwwelpeter)

  • @matthbhhh2439
    @matthbhhh2439 Год назад +1

    I support you! Great

  • @hilaryeales1268
    @hilaryeales1268 Год назад +3

    Oh, not the effin' f word !!!!............😅