BAND 9 IELTS Writing Task 2 SAMPLE Essay | PROBLEM - SOLUTIONS
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This essay is for academic or general ielts aspirants
Hi Asiya, I would like to thank you for your videos. I just received my academic test results - speaking 7, writing 7, listening 8.5 and reading 9. I didn’t have to attend a review class, I just followed your tips and practiced speaking with my friend. I just want you to know that you helped change my life. God bless you.
Very well done and good luck with whatever you took this exam for!
wth reading 9? how
Reading 9 ? This is impossible 😥
@@lally1094 it is possible. If I was able to do it, you can do it too.
@@not_jyx practice. I took the computer based exam. Asiya’s tips really helped a lot. Read and follow the instructions carefully. You can do it
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As non-biodegradable wastes like plastics continue to accumulate and contribute to environmental problems, ‘recycling’ has become a very important global topic. For some reasons, people have not developed the culture of promoting the re-use of materials. This essay will examine possible explanations for this and also present practical solutions to this issue
on the whole that's good. just do away with words such as "very" and "important", as these are strongly recommended against on the actual test
@@FrangoTraidor Thanks, got an 8 in the actual test in June though
My test is next week can you give me tips and materials pls
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Took the IELTS last week and I got an overall 8.5 and your videos helped a lot! Thank you so much ❤️
Hi hope you’re fine. How did you prepare mean any materials or you just followed this lady ?
Perhaps you're lying through your nose
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so clear explanation! thanks you a lot, I'll certainly practice taking all things you've mentioned into account
Hey! Let me know your thoughts on this essay.
Writing Task 2 (practice)
The environment suffers from severe damage because of the misuse and over-exploitation of the resources on earth. This problem escalates to its peak when many people do not recycle or reuse objects. If this misconduct continues, humans will be the cause of degradation of the environment and endangerment of exotic animals’ species. In this essay, I will address some main problems that lead to environment degradation and share simple ways to solve them.
The major reasons why many people do not recycle waste materials are lack of awareness and facilities. It is quite evident that this problem is mainly in third world countries or areas that authorities are unable to access. Firstly, the reason why people do not recycle is because they are not aware of the benefits of recycling. Recycling leads to less waste which naturally in turn keeps our surroundings clean. Besides, reusing materials is cost efficient and economical. One way to overcome this obstacle is to set up awareness campaigns with the help of social media or talk to people in your locality about it. Another action is to write to local newspapers and spread the word.
The second challenge is the lack of governmental facilities. Sadly, sometimes many people have no choice but to throw away waste materials because of the lack of appropriate organizations that can recycle waste. However, the solution is straightforward. We can reuse waste materials at home easily. For example, use old shirt as a kitchen rag, use soda bottles and plastic bags for storage, and donate used books to charities or schools.
In conclusion, the steps to solve environmental degradation are easy. I believe that it can only be solved if all of us come together and incorporate these practices in our daily life. Our small steps will create a better earth for generations to come.
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I read the inro only and already noticed a huge mistake you did. You're starting too far away from the topic. Here you're not supposed to talk about pollution and environment degradation, but about recycling only. What you said simply means "k, here are the ways we damage ecology" and then you can literary include like factories, cars, etc. Initially though you only needed to explore the recycling topic and nothing else.
You already deviated from the original topic. The question is asking "WHY" people aren't recycling the household wastes; however, you answered the consequences that may arise when people ignore reclycling.
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Here's my intro
Lately, recycling of waste materials has been a trend which has environmental benefits as well as job creation and innovation. Despite, reusing of waste has a tremendous possibility of contributing to individual, national and global economies, yet most people neglect its essence. With many reasons for failing to recycle waste products, lack of awareness raising and innovation skills on re-usable refuse are primary.
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Thanks to your channel, I was abe to get the concept of what I needed to do in my tests. SWriting was my hardest, but managed to get a 6.5 in it. Scored 8 in listening, 7.5 in speaking, 7.5 in reading and an pverall score of 7,5. I;m so happy.
I received my IELTS result today. I scored an overall 8 and I just want you to know that your videos helped me A LOT during my preparation before i take the test.
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Hello, what’s in writing section?
@@lesyafly7765 Sorry for late reply, for task 1 i got pie chart n a table about land degradation in 4 areas around the world, units measured in percentage. For task 2, i got why social media becoming increasingly common as source of news and is it a positive or negative development.
@@starling93 thank u, Fenny! what band in writing u scored ?
Reallly? with such grammar I can hardly believe you could score 8
@@milenamartirosyan6580 the youtube comment section isn't an IELTs exam. Stop being so daft.
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Thanks for all the effort you put in the video, was helpful
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simply excellent.! (as always)
Thanks alot ....your way of demonstrate, clear the doubts is brilliant ... This help me improve my writing task 2.
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Took the computer-based exam last 11/14/21 and I got my results today.
Speaking 8.5
Writing 7.5
Reading 9
Listening 9
Overall score 8.5
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Do you ever write in intro last line ( ..... discuss in upcoming paragraphs. ) ?
Or is it ok as she mentioned?
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Thank you Asiya!!! I prepared for my IELTS in a week by watching your videos and got an overall score of 8.
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I just received my test results I got 7.5 learning from your videos. Thank you
Hi, Asiya! Thank u so much for posting videos and making them free. Got my academic Ielts results, overall 8 with 9 in reading, 8.5 in listening, 8 in speaking and 6.5 in writing. Was a bit disappointed with my writing section, since i prepared for it and did my best.
Hey Asya... Thankyou very much for your super amazing tips... I have recently given my Ielts and achieved a great score following only your coop tips. The only thing that makes me sad is my writing score..
Here is my band score :
Listening : 8
Speaking : 7.5
Reading : 7
Writing : 6.5
Your videos are quite helpful thank you so much mam...
Great explanation and careful details and ideas discussed
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Hi..thanks for the video, it was very informative. I just had a doubt and wanted some clarification. In the first body paragraph of the essay, two reasons were provided. The first reason was highlighted using discourse marker "Firstly", but for the second reason you didn't use discourse marker " Secondly". So just wanted to check if this is correct from IELTS examination point of view.
Hi Asiya
Thank you for your videos and PDFs
They are really useful
Do I really need to provide two reasons when the questions ask "reasons" in the plural?
I've seen some content saying that I only need to write about one problem and solution to meet the task requirements and that writing more will make me have a 350-450 words essay, which I might not have enough time to write...
Is it really necessary to write two problems and two solutions?
This was the essay that I was able to write along following the instructions in the video:
Waste material recycling is a crucial activity that helps in maintaining a clean, safe and healthy environment. Un-recycled waste that ends up in landfills pollutes the surrounding environment in myriads of ways and this is a problem in many countries, where safe recycling practices are not followed rigorously. In this essay, we are going to discuss two reasons why this happens and also talk about what can be done to solve this problem.
The following are reasons as to why waste recycling seems to not be followed rigorously in many countries. First, there is a lack of awareness amongst people. For an idea to be considered seriously, they need to be exposed to it often. When they are not educated or reminded constantly about the importance of recycling, it does not gain much importance amongst people. Secondly, it is a widely accepted fact that to establish some practice into everyday routine, it has to be strictly followed. Not having stringent rules and mechanisms to keep bad recycling practices in check is one other reason why this is still continuing in many countries. Since recycling waste requires some effort, if there are no measures to keep things in check, people will always find ways to avoid this and stick to existing ways of dumping their refuse.
Now we will be discussing the various solutions that can help solve this problem. Creating awareness amongst the public can help address this issue. When people are educated about how harmful unrecycled waste is to the environment and the various advantages that waste recycling confers, this trend will change. The government and various NGOs can play a crucial role here by sending out posters, advertisements on TV, Radio, and Newspapers and also by running awareness campaigns in both residential areas and educational institutions. Thereby the community as a whole can participate in recycling waste. Alongside running educational campaigns, strict rules and regulations can be placed with respect to waste recycling. Laws can be put forth and regular checks can be conducted amongst the community to ensure people do not violate them and follow recycling practices as per standards. For example, there could be rules as simple as having two bins at home, one for dumping wet waste and one for dumping dry waste such as newspapers, cartons, and cardboard boxes. While initially, it might take some time for people to get habituated to these practices, over time this will become the default.
While avoiding recycling waste is a big problem in many countries, it is not something that cannot be solved. In this essay, we saw two reasons as to why this problem exists: lack of awareness amongst people and stringent laws and measures not being present to keep this problem in check. It is proposed that the Government and various organizations should pitch in to help solve this problem through awareness campaigns and also in monitoring waste recycling practices closely. By following these measures, I believe that this problem can be alleviated to an extent, thereby leaving our surroundings cleaner, healthier and safer.
that's a great essay but the requirement is around 250 words man
band 6
Thanks for the feedback! Agreed, it is a pretty long one.
Thank you mam.
This video is much helpful for me to increase my band score and I got more information about grammer and accuracy as i sawn in video..... 🙏
Just done with my exam, following were the topics-
Task 1- Write an application to an international company for a job, advertised by them.
•why are you interested in this job?
•what makes you a suitable candidate?
•ask them few questions.
Task 2- Many people find giving presentations or public speaking difficult. And children should be taught this in schools.
Agree or Disagree.
Really?
I thought task 1 is always a pictorial representation of something.
@@ivyo1503 maybe it's for general paper. I've heard in general task1 you need to write letter...
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Hi Asiya! Your essay samples answers are extremely helpful. Could you please produce an essay structure of discuss both views and give your opinion .
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I have a question in task 1 (General -writing) can we leave a line after Dear sir, and all the body paragraphs? Also in task 2, is it possible to a leave a line after every paragraph?
why there are 'firstly' but no 'secondly' ?
Your sessions were really helpful for me. I got my desired band in just two weeks. I just wanted to say thank you so much.
What band score you achieve ?
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Hi Asiya, Can we choose two reasons and describe each reason in one paragraph with the necessary solution for it? Else, is it always better to describe all reasons in one paragraph and the solutions on another? Please advice.
great videos. just a question- could I separate the paragraphs in the test? to make it easier to read?
Hi Asiya! I have been following your videos to prepare for IELTS General Exam & have excelled with your help! My scores just came & they are: L: 9.0, R: 8.5, W: 7.0, S: 7.5 (I had seen your multiple videos on speaking!)
Hi Naina, I wanna study for IELTS and I really appreciate your help if you're okay with it🙏🏼❤️
Hi Naina, congratulations and may I know if you have done self -review or had a coaching?
@@shiningshinin thankyou 😃.. had done self review 😃
This helped me to understand task two very well
Thank you
Thank you Asiya for all you do. I got an 8.0 overall band score, I watched some of your videos, they were really helpful.
Hi Asiya! How are you ? I am so thankful to your videos...my IELTS is going to be on January 22, 2022... I am training my essays according to your lessons. Would you mind to check If my structure (paraphrase + thesis statement + outlined ideas) is well located in my introduction paragraph below?
Task 2: Many argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. Do you agree or disagree?
After centuries, the current world experiences the possibility to understand or, at least trying to figure out, what and how the knowledge about everything ever seen is comprehended by human brains. Either being a student at the school or performing teaching skills as a teacher, nowadays the method has been changed to a new fashion about learning process, which is the internet-based lessons. This essay agrees that saving time and money through not being in-person at the education settings like universities, lead learners to the success as much as if they were there.
Passed the Ielts test but I keep on watching because I find amusement in listening to your voice and English 😊
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Hi Asiya! Thanks for the video. Is it OK to talk about the reasons and the solutions in a sentence in introduction part?
I have watched your videos 3 days before my exam and got 7 band. Love the way you explain each and every aspect. Thank you soo much Asiya.
Thank you .🌹
Hey Asiya, You mentioned that was for band 9 but were you following for band 7?
saludos espero se encuentre bien, veo que todos sus cursos no hay una gota de español y quisiera que me suguieran como prepararme para el ielst desde cero no se nada de ingles, alguna sugerencia
Today's ielts writing topic for computer-delivered GT was "In some countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. Some people think this is good and others disagree with it. Please discuss both views and give your opinion. Support with relevant examples
Just let me know how do you find it guys,
Body Part 1- Agree
Learning skills
Getting out of comfort zone
Practical knowledge
Body Part 2- Disagree
Believe in knowledge through educational institutions
Stereotype of working after certain age limit
Conclusion- I personally agree knowledge should go hand in hand with practical skills.
Hi Asiya!
Where can we get solved solutions of recent topics of writing task 2 that are provided in your workbook?
And can I get details about paid course please, like will we get study material or will there be one to one lessons and practice sessions?
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Working hard to come back every Tuesday :))
I really appreciate all the hardworks you are doing for us
Hlo mam do we write our thesis statement like that " Herein lies the overarching theme of present essay:grouds , feasible solutions along with conclusion ..... "
This essay is very helpful in order provide right direction in writing
Hi,what a wonderful explanation
I really enjoy your pronounce and teaching speed are very nice
It’s very useful for IELTS followers like me
Thank you soo much mam, cus of u i scored well 🙏
Asiya,you are exceptionally great
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So I took the IELTS today and my writing topics were, write a letter to your friend who you are watching the house for while he is overseas and tell him about the storm damage, describe the damage and suggest what needs to be done, this is for task one and task 2 was about whether or not school-leavers should get a job immediately or go to universities, discuss both ideas and write your opinion. Hope this helps
Thanks for sharing the topics
My test is on 10th july, please make a video on how much space should we give between paragraphs in a written form.
Very helpful, I was told that, the general statement does not need indented line. I'm confused, is it really true that the general statement for an essay doesn't need paragraph? And how should the paragraph be on the answer paper? Talking about the space you will leave before starting a paragraph, just need to be sure .
My ielts trainer tells me all the time to avoid words such firstly, secondly and so and categorised them as memorized words and have a potential to lower the band score. Is it true ?
It would be very helpful if u can also make some videos on each type of essay of task 2 . Same like this .
It will help a lot
Thanks
Hii mam welcome back .🙏🙏
You are so amazing ❤️ I like the way you speak English wanna speak like you ❤️❤️ lots of love from India ❤️❤️
Hello Asiya,
I am thankful for the help that i got from your videos. got 8.5 bands in speaking, an 8 band score in listening, 7 bands in reading and 7 in writing.
Hi! Asiya did i type your name right?
I want somebody to check on my writing task 1 and 2 is it possible for you to check on it so i will have an idea what my band score is.?
Hello asiya, i learned so many new things from your lessons but i have a doubt , in one of your lessons u taught not to use however to link sentences. But , in this lesson you used however in introduction. Could you please clarify my doubt.
could i structure it to write reason 1 and then solution in the first para and then the same for reason 2 and solution in para 2