IELTS Writing Task 2: Opinion - Ideas & Introduction

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  • @carloskjloj
    @carloskjloj 4 года назад +77

    Creativity is known to be a crucial way of expression. Therefore, individuals must be given freedom to express their thoughts and ideas in any particular way they want, such as music, films and pictures with no restricions from the government. This essay will put forward several reasons as to why there should be no limitations when artists desire to express how they feel.

  • @solashomoye6388
    @solashomoye6388 4 года назад +54

    Creativity is an expression of one's personality and experiences through various forms, including words, music, pictures and so on. While some believe that there should be government restrictions on the kind of contents produced by artists, I agree that these limitations could impact the quality of a creative artist's work, and limit the artist's freedom of expression.

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  4 года назад +8

      Excellent!

    • @alifahamed8138
      @alifahamed8138 2 года назад +1

      In writing task 2 yuh have to avoid so on. So don't use so on. However, your writing was amazing

    • @OhiSandhu
      @OhiSandhu 2 года назад +2

      @@alifahamed8138 , after work..was it correct?

    • @anonymous5k434
      @anonymous5k434 2 года назад

      @@OhiSandhu Yes you can use after as it helps you to make complex sentences

    • @OhiSandhu
      @OhiSandhu 2 года назад

      @@anonymous5k434 i know that i was talking about comma.
      Btw i cleared ielts with 7.5

  • @blessingoluwole2130
    @blessingoluwole2130 3 года назад +66

    Thank you so much Alex 🤗. You played a significant role in making me pass IELTS with an overall of 8.0......L 8.5, R 7.5, W 7.0 and S 8.0.... I sincerely give God all the glory 🙌. If I can do it, you can do it too. Trust me....study hard and pray harder 🙏. God will do it for you too. Amen 🙏

    • @sandybell6906
      @sandybell6906 3 года назад +1

      Congrats
      What is u strategy about listening and Reading?

    • @OhiSandhu
      @OhiSandhu 2 года назад +2

      Listening is easiest part..whts the strategy in it..if u r watching this video n understanding it thn u cn understand listening too...
      Infact reading n writing r tricky

    • @thedivyeshpatel
      @thedivyeshpatel Год назад

      These words are motivated me a lot for doing well

  • @LalindaDias
    @LalindaDias 4 года назад +41

    This is my introduction.
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    Creative artists work are an expression of their ideas and beliefs. Often, government take offense of these art forms and ban them from getting published. Many believe that it is a violation of their right to express themselves: however others believe that government intervention is required to maintain social stability. This essay will discuss why it is important to give freedom to creative artists to express their ideas in whichever way they wish.

  • @fernandofajardo6359
    @fernandofajardo6359 4 года назад +44

    Hey Alex... I just received my score a couple of hours ago (Overall:7.5, L:8, S:7.5, R:7, W:7) and I TRULY wanted to thank you for help, YOU and Jay were crucial to reach my dream score (7 or above in the 4 sections)... I love you both and I will recommend your channel as much as I can.
    BLESSED!
    The PPF method and the writing strategies were absolutely valuable.

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  4 года назад +6

      Ohhh fantastic news, Fernando! Thanks for sharing - so happy we could help you. Enjoy life beyond IELTS! 👍🥳🌟

    • @andiiinnn
      @andiiinnn 4 года назад +1

      How long did you prepare for ielts?

    • @smartphone472
      @smartphone472 4 года назад +1

      Hi dear im interested for ielts what can i do

    • @shakilamumtaz2833
      @shakilamumtaz2833 4 года назад

      Hi Fernando, congrats for the great result. I have an IELTS General exam on the 13th of June so I need your help in writing. I would be grateful if you could share the writing material that you have. It could truly help me to achieve 7 bands in writing. If you are willing to share your material please reply so that I can share my email id.
      I am looking forward to hearing from you.
      Thanks

    • @jashanwalia3040
      @jashanwalia3040 4 года назад +1

      @@shakilamumtaz2833 can u plz help me in reading??

  • @sanakirmani
    @sanakirmani 3 года назад +33

    Creative expression has been a crucial tool to educate and empower people over the years. Since it's also subjective, people may interpret it in different ways leading them to react either positively or negatively. However, imposing restrictions on creative work means stifling important voices; voices that could potentially bring about enormous change in society.

  • @MonssterHD
    @MonssterHD 4 года назад +39

    Since the beggining of human civilization, humans have expressed themselves through a myriad of unique and different modalities. Some people believe that an artists work should be regulated by govermental bodies and third-parties.
    Personally, I believe that art in any of its forms, whether it is film, music, poems and other, should not be goverened in any way that may infringe an artist's freedom of expression and imagination
    (edit; i went ahead and finished it tell me what u think)
    Firstly, setting boundaries on art is a form of censorship, which restrics one's rights of freedom of expression. Violating these rights often results in a more ethnically homogenous and a less culturally diverse population. For example, in some nations governments impose restrictions on some types of music that can be streamed on the radio, deciding for the artist as well as for the public what is deemed appropriate and what is not. This often results in some cultures feeling left out, because their music is not allowed to be expressed. Thus, making some communities unwelcome in their society due to the governmental ostracization of certain types of musical expression.
    Secondly, impeding on a person's artistic work can be used as a form of propaganda. Controlling people's expression of ideas means that authorities can drive their own narratives, often motivated to rule and retain power over the general public. This can be seen in countries run by tyrannical governments, blacklisting certain movies which have an alternate political point of view that goes against their own agenda. Therefore, uncensored art is imperative in a free and open democratic country.
    In conclusion, this essay explored why i entirely agree that there should not be any govermental oversight or control on an artist's work, because not only does it violate human rights but also is used as a tool to drive propaganda, creating a less diverse and a more totalitarian civilization.

  • @tosinawodoyin3513
    @tosinawodoyin3513 4 года назад +15

    Thanks to Jay, Alex and the ES IELTS team. Your videos were of great help in preparing for the IELTS test, of which the results are out and I did well with overall 8 band. R: 7, S:7.5, W: 8, L: 8.5

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  4 года назад

      🙌🙌

    • @mrd2352
      @mrd2352 4 года назад

      Any advice about preparation for writing?

    • @Teacherziska
      @Teacherziska 4 года назад

      good job! and could you tell me the place you did the test?

  • @jhessyOliveira
    @jhessyOliveira 4 года назад +10

    The main asset most artists have is undoubtedly their creativity. Nevertheless, how they use it is still a debatable issue, which leads people to argue whether the authorities should or should not interfere in it. With that in mind, I strongly believe that no one should restrict ideas expression under penalty of allowing political or economic censorship.

  • @preetkalia3526
    @preetkalia3526 4 года назад +22

    It has been said that Creative artists ought to be provided liberty to present their arts in front of society in the form of picture music and film.

  • @samraarfain3696
    @samraarfain3696 3 года назад +16

    My introduction
    Over the decades, creativity has become a important tool to express thoughts and ideas in different parts of the globe. As a result of this, the incorporation of creative fields of study like arts and music across different institutions is highly debatable. I personally agree with this statement and in this essay will give reasons why schools should include art and music as a part of their curriculum.

    • @yaraababneh7917
      @yaraababneh7917 2 года назад +1

      "a" should be "an" because "important" starts with a vowel. also. you should write "in this essay I will give.

  • @SoroushHP
    @SoroushHP 3 года назад +3

    Creative arts have always been a great method to express feelings and ideas for humans around the world. Some people believe that there should be no governmental laws for creative artists, regardless of how they express their ideas throughout their works. I completely agree with this statement and consider it one of the most important aspects of freedom of speech.

  • @raveenagupta7502
    @raveenagupta7502 4 года назад +3

    The word creativity itself speaks a lot by its own, it clearly depicts that artists plays the crucial role when it comes to imagination, vivid ideas and expressions and government should not put stringent restrictions on their work. As an avid admirer of art I completely support the artists and their artistic talent.

  • @roby1577
    @roby1577 2 года назад +2

    This is the intro I wrote for the task ; D
    Due to a large number of individuals pursuing creativity, differing styles of expressions are being showcased throughout varied backgrounds. However, regarding the matter, people argue that there should be government rules and regulations in relation to the type of artistic demonstrations that one is allowed to express. This essay will further state not only why I believe this act is neither practical or morally ethical but also how it is likely to deter the individual development of such people in art.

  • @talkwithdoctorkay
    @talkwithdoctorkay 4 года назад +5

    Thanks to Jay, Alex and the entire E2 language team. just got my results today
    overall band:8.0
    listening : 8.5
    reading : 8.0
    speaking : 7.5
    writing : 7.0

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  4 года назад

      Greaaaatttt!!! 🥳🌟

    • @Drannn54
      @Drannn54 4 года назад

      Korede Adelaiye can u write some advices for boost your ielts score? How u prepared for ielts test?

    • @talkwithdoctorkay
      @talkwithdoctorkay 4 года назад +1

      For All I just followed everything the E2 experts taught,from watching all their RUclips videos ,to surfing the E2 website through and through.In addition, I got online tests with answers and practiced alot.
      You See that PPF method for speaking? works magic.

    • @Drannn54
      @Drannn54 4 года назад +1

      Korede Adelaiye PLS!!! Explain me, how you get a high score with ppf method if u don’t answer to theirs question? Some of examiners could say that u didnt answer to theirs question, and so?

    • @aminujamiu758
      @aminujamiu758 3 года назад

      How do u prepare for listening?

  • @prashantmishra1994
    @prashantmishra1994 6 месяцев назад +1

    Hi Alex! Your lesson is unique because you add new dimension to learning for the IELTS.
    Thanks & regards.
    As for introduction of the essay:
    Artists are the mirror of the society because they reflect human emotions.
    Creative works have been fundamental to the progress of human civilization.In my analysis, the government should not interfere with the creative performances of the artists through any medium be writing,acting,painting and other such acts.

  • @bilikisjimoh8991
    @bilikisjimoh8991 4 года назад +2

    Artists are generally becoming more free in expressing their creative ideas either in words, pictures, music or film. Although some people believe that the government should place restrictions on their expressive ideas. This essay will put forward the positives of allowing these creatives express themselves with no form of limitations.

  • @ys2880
    @ys2880 3 года назад +2

    In modern society, art and music subjects have been considered to be easy subjects and don't need to learn in schools. However, others believe these courses are still important to develop during childhood. This essay will discuss why I strongly agree that art and music subjects are substantial throughout primary school, and available as optional electives at secondary school or high school.

  • @Deepak4201
    @Deepak4201 4 года назад +7

    There is no doubt that art is the best and most effective method of expression. Nowadays, it is also the topic of hot debates wherein people argue about the liberty given to the artists. Personally, I am a big supporter of all forms of art, but I still believe that artists must not be given full freedom to do their work as it may lead to many social issues.

  • @sreetharramalingam4186
    @sreetharramalingam4186 4 года назад +1

    Hi Alex, tx for your video. This is my 1st essay and I work in it industry.
    In today's world, bloggers, artists and media personals are using digital platform to express their views on every burning topic or issue. Personally, I feel government shouldn't enforce any form of restrictions or conditions to them which will supress their views and freedom of expression .

  • @MrVipsy11
    @MrVipsy11 4 года назад +3

    Thank you very much E2 with ur updates and videos I secured 7 band in first attempt.

  • @jackjill3723
    @jackjill3723 4 года назад +6

    Thank you to this channel. Got overall 7. L: 7.5, R: 7, W: 7, S: 7. This channel helped me a lot. 😇

    • @iceilgar8105
      @iceilgar8105 4 года назад

      hello, how did u practise ur speaking?

    • @jackjill3723
      @jackjill3723 4 года назад +1

      Hi there. The best tip I think is to PRACTICE speaking in english. Also, try to listen to podcasts and movies (the english ones). Finally, always always answer the question, give reason and example. I hope this helps 😇

    • @iceilgar8105
      @iceilgar8105 4 года назад

      @@jackjill3723 where r u from?

    • @iceilgar8105
      @iceilgar8105 4 года назад

      @@jackjill3723 actually, it is not enough.. There is something lacks.. U can only get 6, 6,5 maximum

  • @ANIQAMARYAM-gy6wk
    @ANIQAMARYAM-gy6wk 11 месяцев назад +1

    For decades, art has been the vital source of entertainment and pleasure for a particular society. Artisans such as, directiors, music composers, painters and poets must given the authority to communicate with the course of language they like to prefer. In other words, these entities are the soul constructor of any cultural civilization.

  • @nirali-rathod
    @nirali-rathod 2 года назад

    creativity is something which is exceptional , free and unique from everything in any form possible. Artists portraits their thoughts through various mediums. As some people believe there should be limitations on artists in way of expressing their art I personally think there should not be any restrictions on them as creativity does not come out under control.

  • @chukwuemekaihedioha5837
    @chukwuemekaihedioha5837 4 года назад +1

    Please score my introduction;
    Every society always has a few individuals who are known for their uniqueness and creativity.A type of such people are creative artists, who express their exceptional ideas through arts. I fully agree that they should enjoy liberty to display their art and no laws should restrict their work. My reasons for this opinion will be illustrated in this write-up.

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  4 года назад +1

      *Such people are...
      otherwise, beautiful! 👍

  • @tajchitapure
    @tajchitapure 4 года назад +2

    Introduction.
    Art is an important tool which is used for the deeper thinking and visualize the inner thoughts as a humans being . Many artists uses different tool to draw there imagination into creative way , computing is one the most advance equipment which help the artists. In my opinion the artist should get all the types of resources which they want to utilities it.

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  4 года назад +2

      Thanks Tajuddin. In the second line: Many artists USE different toolS 👍
      It’s a good effort but your opinion isn’t super clear yet - having resources is different from having freedom of expression.

  • @arnavtanksale3284
    @arnavtanksale3284 4 года назад +1

    Thank you Alex and Jay for your videos and tips on IELTS. Your tips and video lessons were very helpful for me! I gave my exam on 20 Dec. and received my result today! I scored 7.5 overall. Reading 8.0
    Listening 8.0
    Writing 7.0
    Speaking 7.0.
    Thanks a lot for your lessons!!

  • @shaunwong7268
    @shaunwong7268 2 года назад +3

    In today’s modern world, artists have been given a plethora of ways to express their creativity。Some believe that these artists are free to express their thoughts without restrictions, while others may disagree. Personally, as a digital artists, I think artists should be allowed to express their creativity as long as it does not involve sensitive content.

  • @lahiruekanayake289
    @lahiruekanayake289 4 года назад +6

    Artists often use their creative works such as films, music, and painting to express their personal opinions, especially on politics and social issues. Although historically, this has been a perfect way of freely pushing their own ideas to the society, we have seen may incidences where governments have imposed restrictions on how artists should not use anti-government phrases or some distribution channels for their works. As a supporter of freedom of speech, I am strongly against government intervention on any media personals, including artists.

  • @taiwoadewinle5652
    @taiwoadewinle5652 2 месяца назад +1

    Creativity is a major aspect of arts that can be abstract or real. Creative artists should at all times have the liberty to convey their thoughts in whatever form they deem fit in doing so. The government should not place embargoes on what they do. In my opinion, I totally agree that there should be no limitations on how these artists express their feelings

  • @RogerOhayashi
    @RogerOhayashi 4 года назад +2

    Thanks, you have a nice approach and speak very confidently. I've already took some IELTS courses but I really liked the way you talked.

  • @aishwaryamohankumar3272
    @aishwaryamohankumar3272 3 года назад +7

    The ability to create art of any form and it’s expression often comes from a space of freedom and individuality, more like they are the two hands of the artist itself. Being an art enthusiast myself, I fully agree that there should be no restrictions in what form artitsts chose to express or what topic or emotion their art revolves around because I believe imposing restrictions alter the beauty, essence and idea behind the artist’s creation. In this essay I will discuss why freedom of expression is of paramount importance to an artist and why the government should only encourage and leverage art to impact the society positively.

  • @kamalpreetkaur4784
    @kamalpreetkaur4784 4 года назад +2

    Hi Alex. Herez my introduction
    Creativity knows no bounds. A creative mind excells better when it is set free. It lays unproductive outcomes when it is bound by several restrictions from various government bodies inorder to restrict them from expressing their innovative thoughts. This essay will argue why government bodies should completely irradicate all the restrictions that are imposed upon these creative artists inorder to express their creative skills.

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  4 года назад

      Clear opinion - Nice! Thanks for sharing 👍

  • @geoffreycurrie5949
    @geoffreycurrie5949 3 года назад

    For 'in the middle', if you argue one should and one shouldn't, you need a double thesis. You also need to make 100% sure you fully explain why in the paragraphs. I never advise to do this as it is tricky and you can easily become disorganised and unclear.

  • @rheyannrenonos
    @rheyannrenonos 3 года назад

    Being one of the unique artists is an imperative job to many individuals in the society. Some people say that the government should not limit the freedom of sharing the ideas and knowledge of many creative artists all over the world. I completely agree on this statement for several reasons.

  • @cosmasalexglocturuza3747
    @cosmasalexglocturuza3747 Год назад

    The world of art is an ever-evolving field, with content creation taking the Centre stage these days. Some people believe that creators of art should not be regulated by the government, while some individuals are of a different opinion. In this essay, I will strongly highlight why I think there is need for control of released artwork.

  • @mahbubamoon4529
    @mahbubamoon4529 3 года назад +1

    Amazing! I really love how the lessons suffice all learning styles! This is completely leaving out Alex's excellent explanation! I also love how she never forced any rule on anyone.. honestly though the way she explains her rules, you will forgo other options in a jiff, and rather stick to her advice!

    • @emilycarter8922
      @emilycarter8922 2 года назад

      ruclips.net/video/-CBvaLNKeRw/видео.html

  • @jibranzeb6205
    @jibranzeb6205 4 года назад +9

    I feel it's easy to write an essay when you're disagreeing, maybe because of Jay's tips

  • @deepaaswini
    @deepaaswini 2 года назад

    It is commonly arugued that creative artists who have rights to exhibit their thoughts in various forms such as poems, images, songs and movies, therefore states should allow them to do as they want to be. I completely agree with this notion and this essay will elaborate it further.

  • @naodabk5929
    @naodabk5929 2 года назад

    E2 writing tips are helpful. I scored 7.5 in writing (September 15, academic exam), Thanks E2

  • @ofeoritsemurphy-akpieyi1112
    @ofeoritsemurphy-akpieyi1112 4 года назад +1

    Messages can be expressed in various ways. The art of expressing ones view through words pictures or music is a way of passing down a message and also trying to connect with their audience in a different manner. Everyone should be given the freedom of expression but in order to prevent chaos there should be a limit to that expression. This essay would argue towards restrictions made by the government.

  • @asusual929
    @asusual929 4 года назад +3

    In my opinion, individuals have the freedom of numerous rights from which they can express themselves. Also, it can help them to achieve their dream profession.

  • @Abdullah-te5rm
    @Abdullah-te5rm 3 года назад

    Because substantial increase in the freedom of artists play a pivotal role in the cultivating of next generation of citizens and leaders.Personally being a strong supporter of creative artistic I completely agree with this .

  • @WyattSanders-e9e
    @WyattSanders-e9e 6 месяцев назад +1

    It cannot be denied that with the advent of media governments have established certain censorship on TV and newspapers. However, some believe that creative artists should be given the opportunity to express themselves the way they want and there should not be any laws that would constrain their freedom. I entirely agree with this statement as it can pave the way for improvements in our society by exposing common and important issues which, otherwise, would remain obscure because of censorship.

  • @harmanrandhawa3191
    @harmanrandhawa3191 4 года назад +2

    Artists often tend to produce extra-ordinary art while working with freedom. While it is possible to generate more fresh and superb ideas with freedom, it can highly publish unsuitable and gibberish work. This essay will discuss both the opinions and provide evidence why there should be some government restrictions to avoid publishing of gibberish work.

  • @ghracylove9287
    @ghracylove9287 2 года назад

    Creativity is when someone is able to transform his or her imagination into music, pictures or word which mostly entertain and ignite the emotions of others. Some people believe that restriction should be placed on the ideas of creative artists by the government. In this eassy will express my displeasure on the idea of government to setting limitations on ideas of creative artists and give reasons to buttress my point.

  • @dorismbila2928
    @dorismbila2928 4 года назад +1

    Hi E2 here is my answer:
    Art has always been a means of communication between people around the world. Although some people believe that creative artists should have limitless freedom to express themselves, others believe that there should be boundaries and the government should have a level of control over the expressiveness of these artists. In my opinion, I believe that the government should be able to restrict certain expressions portrayed by artist.
    Ps: this is just english not my honest opinion.

  • @OneNerdTube
    @OneNerdTube Год назад +1

    The curriculum in schools mostly include a multiple subjects. However, there is a debate that art and music must be declared compulsory for every student. In my opinion, art sujbects must be taught to every student, while the music should be optional.

    • @OneNerdTube
      @OneNerdTube Год назад

      @E2 IELTS Can you please share your thoughts on my introduction. How much i can score for this kind of introduction?

  • @sureshbabubonthu
    @sureshbabubonthu 4 года назад +1

    Hi Alex, please verify my intro..
    In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the topic that artists must have freedom to express their thoughts with no boundaries set by law makers of the society. Some people favours it and others to go averse. I strongly agree to have no restrictions on artists to express their innovative expressions. The followed paragraphs would shed light my opinions with an appropriate example.

    • @sukhwinderkaur-kc3yn
      @sukhwinderkaur-kc3yn 4 года назад

      There is no need to write contemporary era and things like that...examiner got irritated by these things also no need to write general statement

  • @krishnachaitanya7104
    @krishnachaitanya7104 3 года назад +1

    People often deal with challenging perspectives through art. Government restricting artist’s creative expression such as literature, music, pictures and film will hinder that precious process. Personally, I believe people should have complete freedom in expressing their ideas. In this essay I will discuss few reasons for my position and the need for critique of such works.

  • @Fah845
    @Fah845 3 года назад

    My introduction: Expressing personal opinions and beliefs often play part on the creative process of an artist. Such liberty reflects on the results of the work they perform and can be offensive for some people, leading to many social problems. In my opinion, artists have the power of influence on society, therefore they should not be totally free to express their ideas and thoughts. This essay will discuss why limitations are important and their role regarding art and living in society.

  • @poojamohan8582
    @poojamohan8582 2 года назад

    Creativity is the aesthetic art of expressing one's thoughts, imagination and undoubtedly, it is the very essence of any art form. While some people believe that creativity is at its best when the artist's mind is absolutely free from any restrictions whatsoever, others think that publishing content without any vigilance could be a possible threat to the people and could influence them in a wrong manner.
    I strongly believe that some sort of restriction is inevitable to make sure that the impact of the art is not a negative one.

  • @Prat_San
    @Prat_San 2 года назад

    Creativity is as much a form of expression, as one’s speech is. When one thinks about freedom of speech, freedom of creativity goes hand in hand. ‘Whether freedom of creativity should go unrestricted?’ is a major area of debate in recent times. Although it may sound plausible at first to allow complete freedom of speech or creativity, this essay will argue that why restrictions by government are essential.

  • @indianvoyager9305
    @indianvoyager9305 3 года назад +1

    In terms of creative field, artists from all around the globe are on thier peak. As they have gracious amount of freedom in their professions, although it is debatable that they should restricted by the officials on their content creation or not. In my opinion, they have a enormous impact on their audience's thought, and their behaviour, thus it is require to implement limited boundaries on their art making process, because it can lead to many social problems.

  • @payalchawla6034
    @payalchawla6034 4 года назад

    Creativity is a fundamental way to put forward our expressions in a simplified manner.Therefore,there ought to be no restrictions for the artists to express their thoughts and ideas in words, pictures, music, movies and so on ,or in whatever way they are suitable and so what i believe is that authorities should not impose certain strict legislations against individuals who believes in creation and freedom should be given to them. As a supporter of creativity, I completely agree with the above notion and will substantiate my viewpoints in the paragraph below.

  • @raho1819
    @raho1819 4 года назад

    My Introduction
    Expression of ideas has always been a fundamental to every individual. Since the beginning of evolution, artists have found diverse ways to exert this right and hence any government restriction to the same would make the idea of freedom obscure. My personal belief is that there should be no restriction by any authoritative entity on the liberal communication of ideas and opinions of artists.

  • @suedayigit6215
    @suedayigit6215 4 года назад +2

    Artists express their creativity in all sorts of possible ways, such as pictures, statues, poems etc. Some people think that governments should have a power above the artists and could be able to restrict their ways of making art. I strongly believe that artists should always be independent from governments or other entities when creating their work.

  • @nishabamrah5850
    @nishabamrah5850 3 года назад

    Individuals who are blessed with creativity , must have the right to express themselves , in what ever way they wish to, without any legal considerations. An artist's work has always been beneficial. It is very rare that they have a negative impact on the society.

  • @taimurzahid7877
    @taimurzahid7877 4 года назад +1

    Art is considered an important part of culture and history and plays a pivotal role in shaping the thinking of the masses. Freedom of speech for the artist is important to raise awareness and educate the people on things that could be less prominent before. While this is necessary, I believe some level of restrictions or censorship is important to protect cultural values and prevent hate speech.

  • @danakenzhesarina6601
    @danakenzhesarina6601 3 года назад

    Creative freedom is the essential part of art making process which cannot be restricted in any way. However, it is often debated whether artist should be given freedom of thought by government or their works should be censored. In this essay, I will argue that
    artists shouldn't be restricted to express themselves as it affects quality of art and their human rights.

  • @rumman611
    @rumman611 2 года назад

    Expressing new ideas to the world in several different ways is something that creative artists do, which mostly creates positive impacts to the world. There is a debate about these artists' freedom, about how they can or cannot express their creative ideas. In my eyes, it is necessary for the creative artists to have the freedom of expressing their own ideas as long as these don't break the laws & create negative impacts.

  • @ihtishamkhan3309
    @ihtishamkhan3309 Год назад

    Creativity is the process of expression of one’s experiences in music , Acting, painting and so on. Some people believe that there should be no hurdle’s for artists to show their skills and make their future bright. I feel that Government should make it easy for artists to polish their skills and decrease the hurdles in their way.

  • @lovejohal4156
    @lovejohal4156 10 месяцев назад

    There is no prohibition by regime on individuala who adore to illustrate their emtions with the assist of creativity . like., paintings and movies. In my opinion, this is an extraordinary way to express their feelings and authority should also give support to them

  • @archanvlogs2079
    @archanvlogs2079 3 года назад +1

    Dear Alex, Your videos are excellent & the way you are expressing it to write in the IELTS is extraordinary. I am learning so much in terms of IELTS Writing Task 2 from your videos. Please request to see my introduction & correct.
    Creative artistic freedom is a freedom to imagine, create and distribute diverse cultural expressions and emotions through different platforms. Government have intervened in what artists decide to draw, sing or film. This essay will argue that the involvement of higher authorities should be prohibited for creativity to be the norm and for real ideas to sprout.

  • @susanthaperera7978
    @susanthaperera7978 2 года назад

    Your teaching is very excellent.

  • @mayurpujara
    @mayurpujara 3 года назад

    It is important to allow liberty of artistic expression in whatever way or form it requires, because, the intervention from the authorities could discourage the creative essence of art. This essay describes how uninterrupted creative expression has changed the world in a positive way.

  • @lindachipaika7807
    @lindachipaika7807 2 года назад

    I am sooo grateful, I passed with an overall of 7.5,thank you thank you.

  • @amirbeisenov7048
    @amirbeisenov7048 3 года назад

    Artistic creations of a human is not just a piece of some colorful or weirdly-shaped substance, it inclusions one's belief, current mindset, and overall state. However, by some individuals, it is claimed that authorities encroaching into one's creation is a must whereas others uphold the belief that an artist ought to have the freedom to publish their art in every way one desires. This essay firmly agrees with the second assertion, as it considers that invading someone's embodiment of their mind is a human right infringement, and blocking or banning one's artistic expression might be a personal reason that exposes government.

  • @sandeepkour5729
    @sandeepkour5729 2 года назад

    Creativity is considered as a great way to express the feelings in the form of art .so I believe that there should be liberty to the individual to enhance their skill as well.

  • @belencalderon6433
    @belencalderon6433 4 года назад

    Freedom is a human right, it is in our essential as people and we do not have to lose it as a part of a society. Artistic expressions are used by artists but also by common people in order to show their point of view about a subject or simply a feeling, then books, paintings, songs or movies are the way they demonstrate their freedom to the world to say what they want. So, definitely I think that the government must not restrict any aspect of creative artists’ freedom.

  • @poolguy266
    @poolguy266 3 года назад

    In current scenario of 21 century creativity should be attach to particular individual to express themself towards the activity such as music, drawing, and whatever they want to do. This essay gonna exhibit several reason why there should be no restriction while artist expressing their feelings towards it .

  • @elibarikimtesigwa7771
    @elibarikimtesigwa7771 3 года назад

    Creativity in the art is what it make it unique. Artists should be allowed to use their creativity skills without restrictions to express what is in the societies. In this essay, I totally agreed that, Creative artists should not be restricted by the government when they use their skills to express themselves.

  • @ankitallawadhi9738
    @ankitallawadhi9738 4 года назад

    At the present moment, we are living in a world where many people disrespect artists because of their work which in their opinion is a wastage of time. There should not be any kind of restriction on artists to express their ideas. I partially agree with this notion.

  • @waltermwanza8805
    @waltermwanza8805 3 года назад

    I like the recommendation on how to get ideas and topic related vocabulary.

  • @kenny_ajibade
    @kenny_ajibade 2 года назад

    Creativity has always been a medium of expression which can be through various forms, including words, movies, art etc. Imposing governmental restrictions means to invade into the private space of artists and limit their medium of expression. I will put forward in this essay reasons why there should be no limitation to artists creativity and how they feel.

  • @stellak-fb6ln
    @stellak-fb6ln 10 месяцев назад

    In this world, everyone has freedom to state their own ideas including creative artist. Some people believe this freedom need to be stricted by government while the others think creativity can not be ended. Personally, I agree with this statement and this essay will talk about the reasons.

  • @arshdeepkang408
    @arshdeepkang408 3 года назад

    It is undeniable that creativity often comes with no restriction. It is irrefutable that Some people think that Providing artists authority to express themselves is the best gift given to them by government. I ,however, partially agree with it. The arguments to support my view will be given in upcoming paragraph.

  • @chibuzorahumaraeze418
    @chibuzorahumaraeze418 3 года назад

    When the word "artist" comes to mind, one would think of Da Vinci for instance. However artistry has taken up a whole new look over the years. Creative artists develop their ideas themselves and usually have different ways of expressing it in forms of pictures, sound, and visuals. However, I believe they should be limited by the government in the ways they pass their message unto the general public.

  • @samiulahsan
    @samiulahsan 4 года назад

    In today's contemporary society, freedom of expression is highly valued and appreciated by many. While executive authorities in lots of countries control the media and limit the rights of an artist, I strongly believe that creativity should be encouraged in order to promote free-thinking and problem-solving.

  • @nguyenngochung5777
    @nguyenngochung5777 3 года назад

    It is a much-debated topic whether art-associated bodies should not be restricted in their ideas via various forms both conventional and digital, thus governmental interference should be diminished to a minimum. Given that creativity should not be restricted, I personally opine that they should be supervised to exclude any elements of indecency and immorality.

  • @oyagbesanolusegun2633
    @oyagbesanolusegun2633 2 года назад

    Creativity and originality in artistic works are cardinals to excellence. To achieve this, creative artists should be unrestricted in the way they project or display their ideas. I strongly believe that regulating or restraining the natural flow of ideas through some body of Rules and cautions only impair innovation and excellence.

  • @RamSingh-tj7fg
    @RamSingh-tj7fg 2 года назад

    Artistic individuals are quite essential for us to create and invent new things in our society. They should have to be allowed to go in their own way for having comment art. because that is how we found and created many precious ways of at.

  • @anya2624
    @anya2624 2 года назад

    I'm kind of confused with structure of the opinion question such as do u agree or disagree and your opinion.
    So in this question what should I do?
    Introduction+ opinion
    Body 1 : agree
    Body 2: disagree
    Conclusion: opinion+ overall summery
    OR
    Intro+opinion
    Body 1: agree
    Body 2: agree
    Body 3: opinion
    Conclusion: overall summery
    Which one is the structure? Anyone?

  • @akinfenwatemitope5235
    @akinfenwatemitope5235 2 года назад +1

    This is so informative. Great work Alex

  • @busayobanjoko
    @busayobanjoko Год назад

    Artist should be allowed to express themselves in anyway possible whether through word of mouth, drawings, music or even drama, anyone that pleases them. No Restriction what do ever should be placed on them. I completely agree with this opinion because it allows them to maximize their God given talent allowing them put out their best work.

  • @SticksnStones9
    @SticksnStones9 6 месяцев назад

    Artists have always been a voice of the society. There has been a debate whether they should work within boundries or not. I personally agree that freedom of art should be without limits in any form because of its unstructured nature and for better productivity.
    First of all, any form of art which put into some sort of rules, limits and regulations are taking away the uniqueness of the artistic product itself. Following the formats leads any task to become mundane. For instance, so many artists such as Van Gogh, Picasso used faulty methods to create their one and only masterpieces.
    Secondly, artists who are set challenges to show their ideas produce less art. For example, poets whoever are shut by the government didn't go any further with their writings.
    In conclusion, even though art in general has basic regulations within itself, creative work is not necessarily need to follow all these rules by the book but put their work whicever they desire.

  • @josephkonboye5952
    @josephkonboye5952 3 года назад

    Arts as a profession has brought a lot of benefits in the society. Freedom should always be given to creative artists to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish such as in words, pictures, music or film. Government should not restrict what these professionals do in creating value and benefits to the society.

  • @vandanaaggarwal4493
    @vandanaaggarwal4493 3 года назад +1

    Expressing your ideas and thoughts in words , images or by movies is one of the difficult task. however, allowing artists to show artistic expression in their own way is considered to be good without imposing government restriction on it.

  • @tiayahfoumene8156
    @tiayahfoumene8156 Год назад

    My own introduction:
    Nowadsys, arts remains an easy way of conveying information and facilitating entertainment. Some people are of the idea that government of states should allow artists to freely express themselves by creating any type of art that suits them. In my opinion, arts can be harmful to the public if it passes across the wrong information, so artists need to be cautiouned about the kind of content they create and the manner in which they convey information.

  • @gayansameera5064
    @gayansameera5064 2 года назад

    Expressing ideas in an artistic way is a widely spoken topic among people nowadays. The flexibility to convey any idea in creative artistic way should be fully permitted without imposing any restrictions on artists. This essay will discuss the importance of giving full freedom to artists to bring out their idea into reality in any form as they wish.

  • @akindeleloveth2180
    @akindeleloveth2180 4 года назад

    Creativity plays an important role in the life of any artist, so there should be no restrictions by government in whichever way is being expressed. Am in total agreement to this.

  • @THEGREAT567
    @THEGREAT567 3 года назад

    Creativity is a skilled and rare type of art. Artists that have the ability to create should be given the right to show their works in whatever manner they please without government interference. In this essay i strongly agree that creative artist should be able to express their idea freely without restrictions.

  • @Simplyoyin
    @Simplyoyin 3 года назад

    It is undeniably true that creativity in its own way plays a pivotal role in the development of a country. Therefore, artists should be given the free will to creat their contents either by words, pictures, music or film. Albeit, some people think there should be a limitation by the government on what they do. I however, think they should be given unlimited freedom to express their ideas.

  • @kingjulienmadagascar
    @kingjulienmadagascar 2 года назад

    Everything that has been and will be present in this world is an outcome of creativity. Freedom is vital for the proliferation of this creativity along with the artists that create it in first place. That said, I would ardently support the idea of free expressions without restrictions in society for the sake of creativity.

  • @jolyssescalunod9788
    @jolyssescalunod9788 4 года назад

    Debates and Laws about freedom of expression has been already in discussion for many years mostly in developing countries under a democratic governance. Professionals like creative artists are being affected by this sudden shift and also their daily life. Personally, as an advocate of Art and freedom. It is essential to a nation to maintain its freedom of expression because it promotes awareness to many relevant issues that helps to improve humanity and camaraderie in a growing country.

  • @jaspannu7647
    @jaspannu7647 4 года назад

    creativity provides the expression of ideas of artist.some ought to believe that to present the content in best way, they need the right to express it according to their will and also lawmaker should remove constraints.however i contrast and believe that restrictions play vital role for controls on problems associated with creative works

  • @adriana9774
    @adriana9774 3 года назад

    Since democracy and freedom of expression exist, not just artists, but citizens in general have the complete freedom to express their thoughts in any way they consider the most proper. Although some people still complain about that, I consider it is important that government does not object to those ways of expression, as that has always been the function of art, to communicate and express ideas and postures without restrictions.

  • @mareysaad6597
    @mareysaad6597 2 года назад

    Art is generally of paramount importance everywhere in the world and it is increasingly popular. Many people believe that artists should be completely free when expressing their ideas in whichever way. In this essay, I would argue that some serious limitations should be implemented by the government to protect the society.

  • @bhavinr.m2354
    @bhavinr.m2354 3 года назад

    Expressing ideas in the form of books, paintings and songs are the right of every artists also government should not take actions on artists for expressing their creativity. I fully agree with given statement and this essay will discuss the reasons why artists needed full freedom of expressing their ideas without any restrictions of government.
    😀😀...thak you for checking my work....😀😀

  • @maggiemorett9148
    @maggiemorett9148 3 года назад

    Nowadays one of the most thought provoking topics is the freedom of expression. It has been said that artists should not express their ideas throughout artistic creations because some of them can be against the government's values. It is known that restricting artists to express their ideas is a way to control freedom of expression. This essay will show why it is necessary to give artist freedom to express their ideas in their own way.