Yeah, the sounds were all at the right spot, this is the best I've heard, all that's left is the fine tuning of everything. Just one or two things could make this a near perfect remake.
It sounds a bit different, mainly because of the actual music box sound. I think this sounds less haunting than the original because of that. The bass should hit a bit harder too, it was HEAVY in the real version. Also, in the hook area, the strings that come with the bass should hit harder too, they sound too smooth whereas in the real version they just ripped into the beat. Other than that, this is easily the best remakeI've heard, other than just having a filter being applied to the beat.
my book never arrived,some hotello pillow,Kai singing,blueys n sponge Bob. way comp us in off any meter,how do a single mom end this story,for a brighter future?
sitting back with some tissues, a big screen infront. sitting back with some zigzags, smoking a blunt I'm lonely as fuck, cause nobody want, me so im gonna stop this wanna be rapper shit and go do something useful with myself. goodbye people
Yo, yeah girl, Can you hear that? It's playing our song Are you sleepy? Take a nap You're not afraid of the dark? Are you? You hear the beat as it makes ya not wanna go to sleep I knock on Dakota's door, its locked so I go to creep Round the back, with binoculars, not cause I wanna peep But because I'm hungry she smells like tacos I wanna eat Visions of hot chocolaty marshmallows are so sweet With sugar plums, oh look here comes Marshall he's on your street He's placing hot smoldering charcoals beneath your feet Now walk on 'em, he's dancing with carcasses cheek to cheek Like a Thanksgiving turkey, or holiday ham Cinnamon sprinkled on toast, strawberry marmalade jam Flavor my favorite graham crackers with Jon Benet Ramsey I guess a modern day Jack the Ripper is all that I am Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box) But I can hear you my love, you keep calling me (My music box) And when we're world's apart, you mean the world to me (My music box) If you call, I'll come, I will answer (My music box) Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box) I hear my music box, playing a song for me (My music box) So when she twirls around do a whirl for me (My music box) Won't you be my private little dancer (My music box) I almost look comatose, who wants to be sober gross I foam like a Doberman, mouth open I overdose Put coke up my nostrils, in both my holes and I plug my nose My pupils quadruple in size, eyes are so bugged I know I put on my mother's make up, get naked and run around Wavin' the gun around, I think I'm down to a hundred pounds There's thunder, I wonder how come it rains but the sun is out The devils upset with his wife, they must be sluggin' it out I must be buggin' the fuck out, but what the fuck about? Voices are leading me up to the attic, I love my house They pull and they tug my blouse, the sound of a music box Comes from inside a toy chest, but what do I do, it's locked I pick it and open it but it's stuffed full of human parts I dig till I find it, I wind it up and the tune just starts Its playing a song, so beautiful and the room is dark The moon is full, I smell a funeral, guess I'll loom in the park Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box) But I can hear you my love, you keep calling me (My music box) And when we're world's apart, you mean the world to me (My music box) If you call, I'll come, I will answer (My music box) Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box) I hear my music box, playing a song for me (My music box) So when she twirls around do a whirl for me (My music box) Won't you be my private little dancer (My music box) I'm fixated on asphyxiating and breakin' this little chick's Neck like a pixie stick The sick Satan worshippin', bitches get horse-whippin's, I'm in the back, through the back door, slip in Through the crack leavin' the corpse drippin' The mortician of love, sent from above, Forced and treat 'em all ? stingy I've become Been doin' this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb Am I dreamin', is it real? Someone pinch me on the buns The time has come to tie her up, gotta roll me the ladder I'd had enough of the chatter, climb up to the window, look at her Then climb in and slowly shatter her brain matter and batter her With the bat, a matter of fact that will splatter her But before I do that, I'll have a chat to flatter her Give her two compliments, back-to-back, like Tabatha I'm your secret admirer, I'm back to ravish ya So strong is your fight, but your no match for Dracula Prolonging her plight, as I go back to stabbin' her Dismember her limbs, simple as that, cadaver her Zoom in with the lens, then pan back, the camera Stand back, cause here comes your man Jack, so Pamela Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box) But I can hear you my love, you keep calling me (My music box) And when we're world's apart, you mean the world to me (My music box) If you call, I'll come, I will answer (My music box) Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box) I hear my music box, playing a song for me (My music box) So when she twirls around do a whirl for me (My music box) Won't you be my private little dancer (My music box)
It sounds like you've hit a lot of bad notes. It could use some tuning. Also, your music box doesn't really fit with the song. Do you now what cymbal is? Your music box is basically like a cymbal, but the music box in the original song is more like a reverse cymbal without the big build up. If you listen closely, the music box's "hit" isn't perfectly in sync with the beat. However, yours is. Perhaps it would sound better if you either moved it just a liiitle bit forward, or get a new music box that's similar to the one in the original.
This was nearly 7 yrs ago & yes ik its not that great, i redid it a yr later but never uploaded it cuz i stopped posting music. I just worked with what i had at the time, fairly new to the music program but thanks for opinion
![Marshall Mathers [Instrumental]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/znwVWpknIXw/mqdefault.jpg)
Yeah, the sounds were all at the right spot, this is the best I've heard, all that's left is the fine tuning of everything. Just one or two things could make this a near perfect remake.
This is one of the best Music Box remakes I've heard!!! love it
Wish we could go back ..... I miss the old Eminem , the Eminem show and 8 mile
I love the new complex eminem. Takes time to digest but is just lyrically better
@@harshsinghbindra7471 agreed, I just kinda miss the old style, I think relapse and mmlp2 and recovery is some of his best work after being sober
This is great, I absolutely love it.
Good remake bro!
I'm loving it
amo esta musica...fazia anos que estava procurando.
beyonde dope bro congratulations
great remake!
excellent job, work on it. practise makes perfect. ;) - sheldon metat
Swag balls 😎
Pretty good, I like it.
It sounds a bit different, mainly because of the actual music box sound. I think this sounds less haunting than the original because of that.
The bass should hit a bit harder too, it was HEAVY in the real version. Also, in the hook area, the strings that come with the bass should hit harder too, they sound too smooth whereas in the real version they just ripped into the beat.
Other than that, this is easily the best remakeI've heard, other than just having a filter being applied to the beat.
Good Job!
Good job:)
Thanks
Is this free for use
my book never arrived,some hotello pillow,Kai singing,blueys n sponge Bob. way comp us in off any meter,how do a single mom end this story,for a brighter future?
foddaaa a música é foda
Is you selling this
Love this bro . You used FL Studio to make this didn’t you?
Yes, I have a better version since this but i dont rly upload anything on here anymore, ty tho
sitting back with some tissues, a big screen infront.
sitting back with some zigzags, smoking a blunt
I'm lonely as fuck, cause nobody want,
me so im gonna stop this wanna be rapper shit and go do something useful with myself. goodbye people
Where did u get this picture ?
Eminem The Punisher
Sounds dope, but it seems a little slower than the original.
Yo, yeah girl,
Can you hear that? It's playing our song
Are you sleepy? Take a nap
You're not afraid of the dark? Are you?
You hear the beat as it makes ya not wanna go to sleep
I knock on Dakota's door, its locked so I go to creep
Round the back, with binoculars, not cause I wanna peep
But because I'm hungry she smells like tacos I wanna eat
Visions of hot chocolaty marshmallows are so sweet
With sugar plums, oh look here comes Marshall he's on your street
He's placing hot smoldering charcoals beneath your feet
Now walk on 'em, he's dancing with carcasses cheek to cheek
Like a Thanksgiving turkey, or holiday ham
Cinnamon sprinkled on toast, strawberry marmalade jam
Flavor my favorite graham crackers with Jon Benet Ramsey
I guess a modern day Jack the Ripper is all that I am
Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box)
But I can hear you my love, you keep calling me (My music box)
And when we're world's apart, you mean the world to me (My music box)
If you call, I'll come, I will answer (My music box)
Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box)
I hear my music box, playing a song for me (My music box)
So when she twirls around do a whirl for me (My music box)
Won't you be my private little dancer (My music box)
I almost look comatose, who wants to be sober gross
I foam like a Doberman, mouth open I overdose
Put coke up my nostrils, in both my holes and I plug my nose
My pupils quadruple in size, eyes are so bugged I know
I put on my mother's make up, get naked and run around
Wavin' the gun around, I think I'm down to a hundred pounds
There's thunder, I wonder how come it rains but the sun is out
The devils upset with his wife, they must be sluggin' it out
I must be buggin' the fuck out, but what the fuck about?
Voices are leading me up to the attic, I love my house
They pull and they tug my blouse, the sound of a music box
Comes from inside a toy chest, but what do I do, it's locked
I pick it and open it but it's stuffed full of human parts
I dig till I find it, I wind it up and the tune just starts
Its playing a song, so beautiful and the room is dark
The moon is full, I smell a funeral, guess I'll loom in the park
Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box)
But I can hear you my love, you keep calling me (My music box)
And when we're world's apart, you mean the world to me (My music box)
If you call, I'll come, I will answer (My music box)
Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box)
I hear my music box, playing a song for me (My music box)
So when she twirls around do a whirl for me (My music box)
Won't you be my private little dancer (My music box)
I'm fixated on asphyxiating and breakin' this little chick's
Neck like a pixie stick
The sick Satan worshippin', bitches get horse-whippin's,
I'm in the back, through the back door, slip in
Through the crack leavin' the corpse drippin'
The mortician of love, sent from above,
Forced and treat 'em all ? stingy I've become
Been doin' this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb
Am I dreamin', is it real? Someone pinch me on the buns
The time has come to tie her up, gotta roll me the ladder
I'd had enough of the chatter, climb up to the window, look at her
Then climb in and slowly shatter her brain matter and batter her
With the bat, a matter of fact that will splatter her
But before I do that, I'll have a chat to flatter her
Give her two compliments, back-to-back, like Tabatha
I'm your secret admirer, I'm back to ravish ya
So strong is your fight, but your no match for Dracula
Prolonging her plight, as I go back to stabbin' her
Dismember her limbs, simple as that, cadaver her
Zoom in with the lens, then pan back, the camera
Stand back, cause here comes your man Jack, so Pamela
Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box)
But I can hear you my love, you keep calling me (My music box)
And when we're world's apart, you mean the world to me (My music box)
If you call, I'll come, I will answer (My music box)
Cos when the lights are off, I see the girls asleep (My music box)
I hear my music box, playing a song for me (My music box)
So when she twirls around do a whirl for me (My music box)
Won't you be my private little dancer (My music box)
Where is the lyrics"vocals"????
its a remake of the beat, not the song. so, there is no lyrics.
It sounds like you've hit a lot of bad notes. It could use some tuning. Also, your music box doesn't really fit with the song. Do you now what cymbal is? Your music box is basically like a cymbal, but the music box in the original song is more like a reverse cymbal without the big build up. If you listen closely, the music box's "hit" isn't perfectly in sync with the beat. However, yours is. Perhaps it would sound better if you either moved it just a liiitle bit forward, or get a new music box that's similar to the one in the
original.
This was nearly 7 yrs ago & yes ik its not that great, i redid it a yr later but never uploaded it cuz i stopped posting music. I just worked with what i had at the time, fairly new to the music program but thanks for opinion