Some feedback, if you want it: your introduction should give us some basic details before heading into the history. Where exactly is this structure? When was it made? Why is it abandoned (?) now? The history of how we got "here" becomes a little tedious when we don't know when, where, and what "here" is. Eight minutes in, I stopped and went back to the beginning because I thought I was missing something.
Hmm beehives... Cool
Some feedback, if you want it: your introduction should give us some basic details before heading into the history. Where exactly is this structure? When was it made? Why is it abandoned (?) now? The history of how we got "here" becomes a little tedious when we don't know when, where, and what "here" is. Eight minutes in, I stopped and went back to the beginning because I thought I was missing something.