Forgive my ignorance, but tell me if I'm right on what exactly the Flowerfell AU is: Underfell with the added twist that every time Frisk dies a new flower grows on them and it eventually kills them permanently in a long and depressing story where Frisk and Sans bond and Frisk ends up sacrificing their soul to free the monsters.
I'm writing a Flowerfell fic and this inspired me so much, here's a snippet as a small token of my gratitude: I'm sure you've heard the story, or red riding hood and the wolf. But what happens when the wolf falls in love with the innocence of her brown locks, the way she skips down the path with the golden flowers growing over her hands and wears them like a crown, this is that story. Long ago, in a world not so far away from ours, a young girl fell into the depths of the darkness of the caverns. "W-Where am I?" She asked, small hands tracing over the golden flowers that had shielded her from death's icy hand, she wondered if she was dreaming or maybe if this was the afterlife but neither seemed fitting for the winding caves her eyes traced until she could see nothing but darkness. She got up from the bed of golden flowers and wandered through the caves aimlessly until she saw something glint in the darkness. "What's that?" Frisk asked herself, it was near her the top of her shoe's hight, it looked like a long clear string that stretched across the cave's floor, Frisk decided against touching it and stepped over the string. After avoiding various traps she came to a small home, it looked very unkempt almost to the degree it looked abandoned, yet the thick smell of pie mixed with a stronger scent of death around the home. "Maybe I can ask how to get back?" Frisk asked, she really needed to stop talking to herself, a small growl was heard along with a twig's snapping, this startled Frisk enough for them to land flat on their back. "G-Go away T-Toriel, I'll hurt-" The voice was cut off when they found a girl, lying on the ground, the flower's torn petals shook slightly from the draft. "You..." The flower trailed off, Frisk backed up until she hit the wall of the cave, a talking flower? She was definitely going crazy. "H-Hey, don't worry, I'm not gonna hurt you." The flower said, Frisk whimpered slightly in fear, how could she know the flower was telling the truth. "W-Well, I'm Flowey, Flowey the flower. You're not from here are you?" Flowey asked, his once menacing tone much softer. "Frisk..." The girl mumbled, the flower cocked an eyebrow. "I'm F-Frisk." She stuttered, the flower nodded as if he was about to say something when a figure appeared. "Ah, there you are you little weed." The voice said, Flowey's eyes widened with shock and fear. "Quick, get out of here!" Flowey whispered urgently, a goat monster with blood red eyes turned the corner. "Oh? Well, well, well, what have we here? The last soul we need to break the barrier, stay still and this will be easier for both of us." The goat monster Frisk assumed to be Toriel said. "RUN!" Flow shouted, several pellets hitting the goat monster to distract her, but as a fire ball lunged in her direction Frisk felt their leg hit by an unpleasant fire, Frisk screamed in agony, the sound bounced off the walls. "I said, STAY. STILL!" Toriel yelled, both sounds colliding in the echo as Frisk tried to stand but their legs refused, two more burning sensations over their back as they felt themselves give in. | RESET | "Oh? Well, well, well, what have we here? The last soul we need to break the barrier, stay still and this will be easier for both of us." Toriel said, wait, this had happened before. Frisk was able to dodge the attack this time but was nailed down by several other attacks, she noted a small flower on her hand. | RESET | Another flower appearing on her arm, the same burning pain encasing her body as her screams echoed off the walls. | RESET | They made it away from Toriel but a tripwire triggered deadly spikes rising from the floor, red being the last thing she could see. | RESET | Another flower | RESET | | RESET | R E S E T . . .
I really like it! If you don't mind some comments, I'd just double check on some of the sentences because there were a few that were run-ons. Also, maybe choose a different word than "unpleasant" for the fire? It just seems too flat of a word for the sheer agony of being burned by fire, y'know? Otherwise, I adore your imagery and writing style! (Also, post the link here when you post it! I'd love to read it!)
+ThoughtsOfALeo You should put that story on Quotev your storys really good and if you have a google account you can sign in from there it is much easier and if you make one and write this story tell me your account and I will read it your story needs to be seen :)
Flowerfell is such a wonderfull AU, my favourite one too. Such a romantic, yet sad and depressing story, which did not stay for long. Sans, even if he is a monster, his heart is so pure when Frisk comes around. Falling in love is such a good feeling ❤
Oh my goodness, this is utterly beautiful. I'm going through a hard time right now and this arrangement is so soothing and peaceful and helps me a lot. So thank you a ton for this arrangement. I want you to feel hugged right now!
Amazing work as usual!! I really felt the feels of the whole game and the AU. It takes me back to when I first clicked the first video of a let's play and fell in love with the game :3
+Destiny Salinas Haha yeah the other two are reeeeally hard to catch. They're in the string parts, mostly towards the beginning, if you want to keep looking for them. ;3 Thank you!!!
+Lia1291 I actually have been listening to this repeatedly for the other tunes (and because I love it). Just a guess, but do I detect a little of a slowed down Megalovania in this? 😊
Listening to this on 0.75 cos oh ma lord its glorious also the 17 people that dislike this video r hella jealous keep making amazing things like this!!
I just got out of a different comments section where I called someone a bloody fucktrumpet. This is a very soothing song and I'm grateful for it. I need to sleep and be calm.
I apologize for not showing you this sooner (things have been keeping me busy as of late), but I used two of your songs for my comic dub of Qin-Ying's "Flowerfell" and especially credited you for your music. Here's the comic dub, if you would like to watch it: ruclips.net/video/sLmKuxbf1Po/видео.html
Whoever the artist was for the background, the fact that they made Frisk's mouth bleed adds to the sadness and pain of this AU...It's almost like they're dying right there...
Flowerfell: One of the only AUs that makes me cry no matter what every time I see it anywhere... I could be in the mall (true story here) And if I say a picture or heard a song about Flowerfell (in this case I saw somebody with a Flowerfell Frisk and Sans shirt) I burst out crying no matter where I am, public, alone, with friends... anywhere... ;-; Friiisk
I detect megalovania and its raining somewhere else.. hmmmm listens intently wait .... IS THIS SOME SICK TRICK TO GET US TO LISTEN TO THE WHOLE SONG >:O XD
Haha no, there really is another piece in there. Very briefly with the beginning of the higher strings. But I do like sneaking other themes in my arrangements. It's fun! ;w;
+fell Sans haha actually that's one of my favorite parts. I love how it resolves a measure or two later. I LOVE playing with discord and dissonance. If it's done well, the tension and release is really rewarding. ;w; I'm glad you like the piece overall, though.
Lia1291 To each their own! I do think how it resolves is a wonderful device for the song and adds to it but it's not always my cup of tea. Keep up the good work!
Every year, a human tosses a flower down. The flowers souls weren't strong enough. Every flower tossed gets ripped to shreds. Idk why in wrote this but, whatever
totally don't wanna cry forever this is fine
hi!
I love your Undertale song lyrics and voice 😊
You should ask to make a cover with this song! Ah it would be so pretty :)
*sits in a pool of tears*
perfectly fine
i would love to make a cover of this song
"I'm not crying, My eyes are just sweating. Wait, No. That's gross. Yeah, I'm crying."
-Gumball, The Amazing World of Gumball
Papyrus:HEY!I DIDN'T CRY!!There was,something in my eyes...
Sans: what was that?
Papyrus:TEARS!
I swear, somewhere in there I heard It's Raining Somewhere Else.
You're right. :3c
+Lia1291 WHOO!
Undertale?
*Megalovania in early at start with the instrument is the violin.
maybe home too
fallen down,ruins and it's raining somewhere?
i think so
i hear a bit of megalo though
megalovania, it's raining somewhere else, and asgore/heartache
@@dreem6644 Bergëntrukung?
*uses heelies to escape my feelies*
Troy Connar Morgan *dabs*
*YeEt*
*Your heelies have fricken Broke. You shall neva escape le feelies.
THIS.
Mine are red so it'd just remind me of this AU and wheelie me into the feelies
Forgive my ignorance, but tell me if I'm right on what exactly the Flowerfell AU is:
Underfell with the added twist that every time Frisk dies a new flower grows on them and it eventually kills them permanently in a long and depressing story where Frisk and Sans bond and Frisk ends up sacrificing their soul to free the monsters.
pretty much, also with a kind Flowey helping Frisk.
+Margareth - chan *whispers* that happens in underfell too..
Do you not notice it is named Flower*Fell?*
FriskyTehUndertaleTrash read le comment again
she/he wanted clarification
I was replying to someone else's reply.
this made my heart ache. and also made me realize i still have a heart
preach it 😔
I'm writing a Flowerfell fic and this inspired me so much, here's a snippet as a small token of my gratitude:
I'm sure you've heard the story, or red riding hood and the wolf. But what happens when the wolf falls in love with the innocence of her brown locks, the way she skips down the path with the golden flowers growing over her hands and wears them like a crown, this is that story.
Long ago, in a world not so far away from ours, a young girl fell into the depths of the darkness of the caverns.
"W-Where am I?" She asked, small hands tracing over the golden flowers that had shielded her from death's icy hand, she wondered if she was dreaming or maybe if this was the afterlife but neither seemed fitting for the winding caves her eyes traced until she could see nothing but darkness. She got up from the bed of golden flowers and wandered through the caves aimlessly until she saw something glint in the darkness.
"What's that?" Frisk asked herself, it was near her the top of her shoe's hight, it looked like a long clear string that stretched across the cave's floor, Frisk decided against touching it and stepped over the string. After avoiding various traps she came to a small home, it looked very unkempt almost to the degree it looked abandoned, yet the thick smell of pie mixed with a stronger scent of death around the home.
"Maybe I can ask how to get back?" Frisk asked, she really needed to stop talking to herself, a small growl was heard along with a twig's snapping, this startled Frisk enough for them to land flat on their back.
"G-Go away T-Toriel, I'll hurt-" The voice was cut off when they found a girl, lying on the ground, the flower's torn petals shook slightly from the draft.
"You..." The flower trailed off, Frisk backed up until she hit the wall of the cave, a talking flower? She was definitely going crazy.
"H-Hey, don't worry, I'm not gonna hurt you." The flower said, Frisk whimpered slightly in fear, how could she know the flower was telling the truth.
"W-Well, I'm Flowey, Flowey the flower. You're not from here are you?" Flowey asked, his once menacing tone much softer.
"Frisk..." The girl mumbled, the flower cocked an eyebrow.
"I'm F-Frisk." She stuttered, the flower nodded as if he was about to say something when a figure appeared.
"Ah, there you are you little weed." The voice said, Flowey's eyes widened with shock and fear.
"Quick, get out of here!" Flowey whispered urgently, a goat monster with blood red eyes turned the corner.
"Oh? Well, well, well, what have we here? The last soul we need to break the barrier, stay still and this will be easier for both of us." The goat monster Frisk assumed to be Toriel said.
"RUN!" Flow shouted, several pellets hitting the goat monster to distract her, but as a fire ball lunged in her direction Frisk felt their leg hit by an unpleasant fire, Frisk screamed in agony, the sound bounced off the walls.
"I said, STAY. STILL!" Toriel yelled, both sounds colliding in the echo as Frisk tried to stand but their legs refused, two more burning sensations over their back as they felt themselves give in.
| RESET |
"Oh? Well, well, well, what have we here? The last soul we need to break the barrier, stay still and this will be easier for both of us." Toriel said, wait, this had happened before. Frisk was able to dodge the attack this time but was nailed down by several other attacks, she noted a small flower on her hand.
| RESET |
Another flower appearing on her arm, the same burning pain encasing her body as her screams echoed off the walls.
| RESET |
They made it away from Toriel but a tripwire triggered deadly spikes rising from the floor, red being the last thing she could see.
| RESET |
Another flower
| RESET |
| RESET |
R E S E T . . .
I really like it!
If you don't mind some comments, I'd just double check on some of the sentences because there were a few that were run-ons. Also, maybe choose a different word than "unpleasant" for the fire? It just seems too flat of a word for the sheer agony of being burned by fire, y'know?
Otherwise, I adore your imagery and writing style!
(Also, post the link here when you post it! I'd love to read it!)
+ThoughtsOfALeo You should put that story on Quotev your storys really good and if you have a google account you can sign in from there it is much easier and if you make one and write this story tell me your account and I will read it your story needs to be seen :)
can you give us the link when your done?
Toy Foxy TheFox Totally!
awesome :3
I have never clicked so fast
it's so peaceful
I really love Flowerfell, but I also despise it for how easy it was for it to make me cry.
Don't despise it for that
If a story and a song can consistently do that to me, it's earned my respect.
What? I'm not crying. I'm nOt cRYIng I'm NoT cryIGN IM SWEATING THROUGH MY EYES IM SWEATING THROUGH MY EYES IM NOT CRYING IM SWEATING THROUGH MY EYES
xD lol
“Knock knock...”
**silence**
“F-flower...”
**not a sound is heard at her grave**
“Flowers y-you today, sweetheart?”
**but nobody came**
I love this au! It's personally my favorite.
Zach Woomy mine too bro
Flowerfell is such a wonderfull AU, my favourite one too. Such a romantic, yet sad and depressing story, which did not stay for long. Sans, even if he is a monster, his heart is so pure when Frisk comes around. Falling in love is such a good feeling ❤
HAHAHAHA!
THIS SONG IS SO STUPID, IT'S NOT SAD AT ALL...
It's not...
Sad at all..
...
**secret sobbing**
Dtskang21 thats me
Buttercups is sadder
I admit, I cried there
Here, I'm totally fine, I can't sense the feels
It’s ok to be sad. I felt the sadness of loss over and over again. I’m stuck sad because of it keeping up a facade.
The 6 people that disliked this are just jealous because they can't make such beautiful music like this.
I love this so much
10, unfortunately.
*Cries* THIS IS FINE.
I saw this and internally flipped out... I'm so glad I subscribed! You music is always beautiful!
I'm literally checking my soundcloud every few minutes to see if this will upload on there XD
+Flavor Variety It's up on Soundcloud already. There's a link in the description for it if you want. ^__^
Imagine Frisk just looking over at the trees and the smiles of the people at the surface, once she's gotten out.
But wait-that'll never happen.
Doctors: "It's impossible to cry forever."
Flowerfell: "Fool.."
it's 2018, and i'm still listening to this beautiful song :')
can I use this on my flowerfell speed paint? I'll give credit! and also good job! it sounds beautiful ;_;
As long as you credit me. That's all I ask. ^__^ Have fun!
0 dislikes congrats here truly isnt anythign anyone could hate about this masterpiece huh?
Oh my goodness, this is utterly beautiful. I'm going through a hard time right now and this arrangement is so soothing and peaceful and helps me a lot. So thank you a ton for this arrangement. I want you to feel hugged right now!
Ah, I'm sorry! I pray that things will go better for you. //hugs I'm glad I could be of some help.
Wow... you're amazing. This is amazing. How does it only have 33 likes?! Well, it has 34 now.
Oh my, this is so good! Perfect arrangement, I love it so much
It gives me mellow feeling from the senere instruments and tempo,
pretty music...
I love this
I have listened to this since 2016 and i still love it until now 💕👍
Amazing work as usual!! I really felt the feels of the whole game and the AU. It takes me back to when I first clicked the first video of a let's play and fell in love with the game :3
Lovely
tears in my eyes
Ce coup de poignard dans mon kokoro omg.
How adorable is this song... ;u; good work !!
I can only name "It's Raining Somewhere Else" besides the main tune you used. It's a lovely piece! I could listen to this all night! ❤
+Destiny Salinas Haha yeah the other two are reeeeally hard to catch. They're in the string parts, mostly towards the beginning, if you want to keep looking for them. ;3
Thank you!!!
+Lia1291 I actually have been listening to this repeatedly for the other tunes (and because I love it). Just a guess, but do I detect a little of a slowed down Megalovania in this? 😊
+Destiny Salinas yes you do! It's in the bass strings. ;3
+Lia1291 Yay!~~~
+Destiny Salinas there is fallen down I think
this is BEATIFUL, I love this remix of fallen down, I also think I heard a bit of the ruins, heartache, and it's raining somewhere?
Why did this make me cry?? This AU is so depressing
This is beautiful.
Wow this is amazing
This also happens to be the first thing on youtube i've watched that has so many likes but no dislikes. So good job there XD
This is beautiful!!!!
Amazing... so... so moving and thought provoking.
Thank you.
oh my god.
it's so soft.
it very relaxing....
i like this so much.
Wait. I sped this to 1.25 and it sounds almost just like the normal song .-.
DANGIT I RUINED IT FOR MYSELF QAQ
Listening to this on 0.75 cos oh ma lord its glorious also the 17 people that dislike this video r hella jealous keep making amazing things like this!!
I love this video
Wow…it’s so calm and melancholy at the same time. Feels even more so when I realize this is now from 6 years ago….geez, I’m old-
I love the music
I would want this to play at my funeral
I hear Fallen Down, Megalovania, and Sans/It's Raining Somewhere Else.
When I listen to this song, it reminds me of some calming lullaby and I get sleepy when hearing it...
I just got out of a different comments section where I called someone a bloody fucktrumpet. This is a very soothing song and I'm grateful for it. I need to sleep and be calm.
So glad people are having some sanity for once and there are 0 dislikes.
If you read FlowerFell with this music it makes much more beautiful and sad.
This is relaxing and calm i like it C:
I love this music ❤️
Fallen down, It's raining somewhere else were all i found.
Underrrated. This deserves more likes
*The feels of this song...
*...
*It fills you with liquid DETERMINATION
I apologize for not showing you this sooner (things have been keeping me busy as of late), but I used two of your songs for my comic dub of Qin-Ying's "Flowerfell" and especially credited you for your music. Here's the comic dub, if you would like to watch it: ruclips.net/video/sLmKuxbf1Po/видео.html
i have found my new love
I heard It's raining Somewhere, Fallen Down, and a smidge of Heartache
This is my new favorite au! Please go ahead! Ask me why I'm not afraid to tell!
This song can help to sleep better
it was nice but when its raining somewhere kicks in that the tears just don't care anymore
Woah, this sounds so nice...
Whoever the artist was for the background, the fact that they made Frisk's mouth bleed adds to the sadness and pain of this AU...It's almost like they're dying right there...
Endless petals, falling from the sky
Petals, fell from the one he used to love...
Flowerfell:
One of the only AUs that makes me cry no matter what every time I see it anywhere...
I could be in the mall (true story here)
And if I say a picture or heard a song about Flowerfell (in this case I saw somebody with a Flowerfell Frisk and Sans shirt) I burst out crying no matter where I am, public, alone, with friends... anywhere...
;-; Friiisk
we need more of these!!! I mean pleas make more. ha...ha...ha....
Omg congratulations you have a new subscriber I love this song so much
This is too peaceful and emotional for my wellbeing. I think I need help.
i'm not crying.
I'm not crying.
I'M NOT CRYING
OH HELL NAW I'M CRYNG
It's amazing that even after 3 months this video doesn't have any dislikes
lmao
* secretly crying *
This is saaaaaad Someone give me a tissue
Everyone:*No one gives you any*
Me:Well dame alright i see yall
Fallen Down, sans., and ruins
Awww....
your amazing ;w;
I don't know the connection between this and flowerfell
that doesn't mean that i don't like it, Great remix!
You Lia have talent..
que música mas bonita...me hace sentir relajada💖
I detect megalovania and its raining somewhere else..
hmmmm
listens intently
wait .... IS THIS SOME SICK TRICK TO GET US TO LISTEN TO THE WHOLE SONG >:O
XD
Haha no, there really is another piece in there. Very briefly with the beginning of the higher strings. But I do like sneaking other themes in my arrangements. It's fun! ;w;
I don't know if I like the bits if discord with the bass/cello when it's first introduced but it sounds beautiful regardless.
+fell Sans haha actually that's one of my favorite parts. I love how it resolves a measure or two later. I LOVE playing with discord and dissonance. If it's done well, the tension and release is really rewarding. ;w; I'm glad you like the piece overall, though.
Lia1291 To each their own! I do think how it resolves is a wonderful device for the song and adds to it but it's not always my cup of tea. Keep up the good work!
Wow 0 dislikes RUclips HAS ANOTHER GOOD TASTE and ive only seen 1 mmore like this with 1 dislike
we have 5 people to kill *chara face*
Alley Gamer 7 now =)
EdgyBitBrat Aka Trash U JINXED IT BRO
Forever can last for an eternity, or mere moments.
WHO'S CUTTING THE ONIONS?!?! *crys in corner* 😭
I really like what you do^_^ when is the next song?
Pretty soon. I have another piece ready to be uploaded. I just need to upload it haha. Thank you! ;w;
+Lia1291 what will it be this is already great!
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Doesn't Fallen Down usually play when Toriel is there?
brb crying blood
I swear everytime I hear something from flowerfell I want to just flood the whole world with tears 😭😭😭😭😭😭
Every year, a human tosses a flower down. The flowers souls weren't strong enough. Every flower tossed gets ripped to shreds.
Idk why in wrote this but, whatever
I'm not crying! I just caught something in my eyes!
What was that?
Tears ;^;
Flowerfell have a sad sountrack ever
ouch, my heart ;-;
This is my favorite au i have to be honest
who put onions next to the video!
Im not crying at all... a bone just hit my head thats all
*crys like a waterfall*
*heavy emotional breathing* fuCK
Aaaahhhhhh. FUCK THE FEELS THIS IS SO GOOD
p-put it at 0.25 it sound kind of... pretty I don't know but listen
It's erm, interesting when you put it at 0.5...
1400 upvotes and not a single downvote?!? What witchcraft is this?