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What I don't like about stories like this is when the author starts off with the names of the characters, which feels forced-as if I'm already supposed to know who they are. What ends up happening is I create a mental image of them on my own at first since the author didn't supply one, only to have to reimagine them once again after a description comes out- whether physical or character trait descriptions. And it feels like a chore. It's disorienting because it feels like I am missing important information. Therefore, I cannot connect with the characters, even after they've been properly introduced after the initial introduction. I need to care, or at least be interested in the characters *right away,* or else they just feel like lifeless drones with no voices of their own.
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What I don't like about stories like this is when the author starts off with the names of the characters, which feels forced-as if I'm already supposed to know who they are.
What ends up happening is I create a mental image of them on my own at first since the author didn't supply one, only to have to reimagine them once again after a description comes out- whether physical or character trait descriptions. And it feels like a chore.
It's disorienting because it feels like I am missing important information. Therefore, I cannot connect with the characters, even after they've been properly introduced after the initial introduction.
I need to care, or at least be interested in the characters *right away,* or else they just feel like lifeless drones with no voices of their own.
Great point!
Great point. I never thought of it that way!
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