What If │Spoken Word Poetry
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- Опубликовано: 20 фев 2018
- "What if" is something that pops into my mind a lot when I'm feeling low or going through a tough time in my life. The past is the past, but it's hard not to think how different things would be if certain decisions weren't made.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
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Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx
"Took a chance and faced my demons earlier." I loved that line because so many of us try to run away from our demons in the hope that that will make them disappear. This was really well done. Keep writing.
Yeah, it's easier to run away and hope it gets better instead of face our demons more often than not. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!
Can't change the mistakes and regrets of the past but you can change the future.
Agreed
"What if" destroys you, let you live in your dream world which only makes you unsatisfied and sad. Every day gives you a new opportunity. Try new things, cut of people who have a negativ impact, souround yourself with inspiring ideas, right down your goals visualise them. Your mind creates your reality, learn to really control your mind, so powerful! read and listen personal development and I swear life will get so much better!
This made me cry, I have had the “what if?” Thoughts all me live. And yes my life isn’t that long but when a day feels like an eternity you loose track of time.
Yeah it's easy to start thinking about "what ifs" and feel like a day lasts forever but in the end life is worth fighting for
Mel's Thoughts if you say so... personally the only thing keeping me from the grave is how much of a coward I am.
@@MelsThoughts Give all your "what if's" to God through a personal relationship with His One and Only Son (John 3:16) and let Jesus turn those "What Ifs" into the beautiful life that He has waiting for you to except! God loves you and has a plan for your life to give you a future and a hope (Jeremiah 29:11), but you have to say yes to Him.
Be in my life ! There has so much confusion. Communication. I am same♥️
Mel your words is of blessings keep blessings us with your poems mel
Beautifully said.
I really needed this thanks, u are such a jem 🙏
You are already great,why should you care others, you born to be great
List of the life is too short if I wanna gonna know it’s so good for them
Yes
I would take it too and repair all my BS
I feel so helpless...I don't know what to...I am fed of my aimless life
I am shattered completely....but in front of others I always have to act strong normal....so that they didn't get to know that I am a big loser 💔
Your a beautiful person!🤩
Aww thank you!
lessten to the light inside you what you know is rite.
Permission to use this in our english class poem recitation.. 🙏 thanks very much..
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Tabitha Samte 😊😊
Can i use this?
I see on the road
Really love it Melissa !! Is there any way to use it on a work?
Léo Maigret Thank you very much! 😊 I'm glad you liked it! You can use it if you want, just credit me :)
Of course ! Where can i find it without the background music? :)
Léo Maigret Would you just like the written text or the video with the text but no background music?
It would be perfect for work if i could have juste your voice without background music!
Sure! Do you have an email I can send it to? :)
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"I'LL 'TELL YOU WHAT, I AM HERE, I'M 'YOUR 'FRIEND', I'LL 'TAKE' YOUR HAND, I'LL HELP, YOU THROUGH THIS, I 'DIDN'T 'KNOW', DIDN'T 'KNOW WHAT YOU WERE GOING THROUGH, THE 'MAZE' WAS SOO 'DEEP'& 'TRECHERIOUS', THAT I WAS IN, I 'TOTALLY', WOULD 'RATHER DIE', A 'THOUSAND' 'DEATH'S', THAN 'LIVE' WITH 'THOUGHT' OF 'HURTING' 'YOU'!!!... "I LOVE YOU", & I 'WOULD 'RATHER HAVE 'BEEN 'WITH YOU', A 'THOUSAND' TIMES MORE', THAN WERE I WAS, & HAVING 'LOST' ALL MY 👪 FAMILY, I 'REALLY' 'BELIEVE' ME, RATHER BE WITH 'YOU', 'LOVING YOU'!!! .. I DID, MAKE 'MISTAKES' OUT OF 'FEAR', & 'DECISIONS' OUT OF 'FEAR', BUT 'NEVER' AGAIN, WILL I MAKE 'DECISION'S' OUT OF 'FEAR', BUT 'THROUGH' THE 'CONFIDENCE', THAT 'COMES' FROM 'GOD' QUELLING MY 'FEARS!!!"...😘😘😘😍😍😍😊😊😊🎈🎈🎈🎈🌄🌄🌄🌅🌅🌅
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What if you know I don't ask that question but as a person we in hindsight look back and see how things should be but desperately trying to either run and let myself have a new beginning away from the love of my life because instead of embracing holding kissing laughing tears of joy all I feel is betrayed hurt tears of sadness. I can't sleep I can't eat sick of all these real life emotions about who I love. I really believed we were meant to be but every second of every day I miss her to constant silent tears because I am all cried out. Til the love of my life realizes how effortlessly she pushes me away and comes now or I look into her eyes let her see the pain I am in then walk away because if someone who says they love me so much but can't do anything except cause me to let her know how it feels to have a broken heart
I feel the same way it's been happening to me too
I look back and regret all the time. I resently let my girlfreind go and now my life is a missery she was the light in my life i let her go and now its to late to get her back 😭
I relate I was let go to is it killer but I'm scared to even say anything now social media obviously I am right now I totally understand and get it because the tide so have a good day whoever you are remember those people that feel the same exact way
Well it would be easier if we just settled all this. And you told me the truth to the way you've acted towards me. It would be the best way. You no I'm understanding.
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Good night.
Some time i think just wanted to stop all these things thaught everything
You cant change anything because things happen for a reason.
Why is this on my suggestions lol
yeah...the what if thoughts suuuuckkk
Hey Melissa! You have an Instagram ?
Is it really possible ? How could someone has exact the same lyf as i have , How could someone knows to complete my incomplete Rhymes n fill with genuine emotions , How could u be so me.... Tell me how ?
Tell me how i came to u in search of Some poems ,
tell me how i got All my life Encrypting in feelings of u ?
Tell me , do tell me...
It just goes to show how people can have a lot in common and relate to things without even knowing it :) I'm glad you liked the poem! Thank you for listening!
Yeah , there are some scripts which are meant to be Similar.U fighted ur demons n started to living over them , God bless u 😊 😍 Fan from india
The 3MineM- Show Yes that is very true :) I am fighting my demons and trying hard to be happy. Thank you very much fan from India!! 😊❤
Mel i'm part time traveller and i would love to meet you ,May i please Get your an evening... ?
Just live me alone
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Don't beat urself up
I'm sorry please give me a chance to show I'm here for you I love you .
It's almost like everybody is psychic can read my lights and my mind that's crazy
Read my life
yeah,,what if,,that a big word,,it seem to the way you told me how your life was be for,that i save you,,it's like it is now because of you,,i don't go no were,i don't do nothing wrong,so it not my fault,,all i ever done was love you,,and want you to love me,,but you never no i was around ,,so what if,,honey
Yes I can hear you and I'm the one that did wrong
Be the same
Make chances
Dankie tog jy het uiteindelik die lig gesien dat jy jou toekoms kan ingaan sonder my. Jy het sover gelewe sonder my so hoekom nie ook jou toekoms nie. Jy is en sal vir ewig aan jou verlede vasgepen wees waarvoor ek in elkgeval nie kans sien nie. As jy net uit jou gemaksone uitkruip en n eerlike vaste lewe wil ingaan sal dit ook beter met jou gaan. Jy sal nooit n nuwe verhouding aangaan want dit sal te veel van jou verg en so sal jou lewe net agteruit gaan want jy kleef net aan die verlede. So moet nooit weer na liefde smag nie want op jou manier sal jy dit nooit ontvang nie. Ek weet nie hoekom trou jy en jou vriendin nie maar nie, ek het nog nooit gehoor dat n mens jou lewe en tyd so mors nie. Sy plaas jou in daardie gemaksone.
My groot probleem met jou is jou onbetroubaarheid, ek het te veel deur die jare dit beleef.
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My love real life obsequious but some one miss understand everytime scould me irreversible now you very good for you break love but one think cinema fild don't love that better safe my life
Better change you mind forget everything enough I don't want anybody's entry my life I don't like India people you good or bad I don't care about that OK
Ok hear u
But iam not stay you total for
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