Comic Book Storytelling: 3 Scenes & the Ideas Behind Them

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  • Опубликовано: 28 дек 2024

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  • @Wolvie619
    @Wolvie619 11 лет назад +68

    Dang it! Now I wanna read more of your books! You are a sneaky salesman Mr. Crilly.

  • @Masterpaintingnowlearn2draw
    @Masterpaintingnowlearn2draw 11 лет назад +72

    Really like what you are doing

    • @TravisMcKim
      @TravisMcKim 11 лет назад +5

      I hope you are not talking about mark... because he is an amazing author/ novelist

    • @BronzeTheSling
      @BronzeTheSling 11 лет назад +22

      TravisMcKim What? All she's saying is that she likes what he does in his videos.

    • @ainsleyhoh4426
      @ainsleyhoh4426 11 лет назад +7

      Bronze TheSling I think TravisMcKim thought she was saying it like "Really? Like, what are you doing?" but what Learn2Draw meant was that she liked what Mark is doing. A simple misunderstanding (:

    • @BronzeTheSling
      @BronzeTheSling 11 лет назад +1

      Amen.

    • @daphney7877
      @daphney7877 10 лет назад +1

      Hmmmm….I think he is drawing.

  • @pieboy107
    @pieboy107 11 лет назад +34

    I absolutly love this video! Your voice acting is great!

  • @manicoquita
    @manicoquita 8 лет назад +10

    I'm soo hooked to your channel. I've been writing and drawing since I was little and have even written many short stories. unfortunately I lost most of my work to a house fire and have been in this start and stop mode for about 3 yrs now. I feel stuck. I'm actively writing and drawing again and hope to finish my first comic soon! thanks for the vids! you're awesome and I think I've had 2 of your books b4

  • @hollowinuyasha01
    @hollowinuyasha01 11 лет назад +29

    9:01 you giggled, don't lie

  • @battletalk9603
    @battletalk9603 10 лет назад +4

    Damn. The dialogue is so awesome. It's like real people talking. Great job Crilley!

    • @markcrilley
      @markcrilley  10 лет назад +1

      Skull Sliver Wow thanks! Glad you like it :)

  • @MarioDoiron
    @MarioDoiron 11 лет назад +13

    I really enjoyed how you dissected your story telling method, a window into the mind of the creator. Very illuminating, thanks!

  • @vegancomicnerd86
    @vegancomicnerd86 11 лет назад +37

    Love your old woman impersonation. :)

  • @mokrishkana5785
    @mokrishkana5785 11 лет назад +4

    Your story telling both in writing and narration is brilliant! xD
    And I love how you draw expressions, it's so classic, those shocked faces are the best thing ever! and when the guy was yelling as he's roughing up Brody his face...ahahaha LOL
    Good video! :D

  • @rininazuma4482
    @rininazuma4482 11 лет назад +1

    Your voice acting is great! it really made the story come alive, great job!

  • @upscbt
    @upscbt 11 лет назад +6

    More videos teaching how to create a comic, please! A video with tips for designing characters would be awesome!

  • @michaelmatthews1693
    @michaelmatthews1693 11 лет назад +11

    You should do a segment every now and then where people send art to you and you critique them

  • @gatheringleaves
    @gatheringleaves 8 лет назад +6

    For anyone wanting to buy this series but unsure, please do buy it, I just finished the third volume, it's epic!

    • @markcrilley
      @markcrilley  8 лет назад +2

      +Infinite Sky Thank you so much!

  • @ZeBlazeStar
    @ZeBlazeStar 10 лет назад +30

    Omg know I REALLY want your books XD

    • @markcrilley
      @markcrilley  10 лет назад +7

      Mg Teehee Thank you :)

    • @ZeBlazeStar
      @ZeBlazeStar 10 лет назад +7

      markcrilley
      OH MY GOD YOU REPLIED I ADMIRE U SO MUCH SENPAI I AM BUYING ALL BRODYS GHOST SERIES AND MIKI FALLS >.

    • @TheRealJufin
      @TheRealJufin 10 лет назад

      Mg Teehee His drawing books have helped me alot! definitely get them

    • @nhanvu8170
      @nhanvu8170 9 лет назад

      +markcrilley how did u draw the same thung

  • @bbqribz570
    @bbqribz570 11 лет назад +6

    now my inner monologue is going to be your voice narrating every manga i read lol

  • @BERIALWIGLAF
    @BERIALWIGLAF 11 лет назад +9

    who the hell dislike this wonderful videos??,... aw I see, let me guess, Someone who have always wanted to draw this well and never got to maybe??... Well that's what I believe.

  • @ImFrelled
    @ImFrelled 11 лет назад +11

    I really enjoyed this Mark, learning how a true pro goes about story boarding was very interesting. Thank you for the inside look at your thought processes in conveying your story to the reader in a visual way. Show don't tell indeed!

  • @ArtbyAtlas
    @ArtbyAtlas 11 лет назад +22

    Hey, Mark, you know what Brody can do, actually? Whenever Talia starts talking to him, he can always just pull out his cellphone and pretend he's talking to someone on that! lol
    Seriously though, great video. It confirmed a lot of different things I wasn't sure about, but had positive feelings about--the use of silence and ambiguity, namely. Thanks again. :)

    • @Naruku2121
      @Naruku2121 11 лет назад +9

      *****
      Then it's great comedic effect.

    • @GarnetLynne
      @GarnetLynne 11 лет назад +1

      not everyone can afford a cell phone and this is the future so would if there was not cell phones? it's Mark's story and this is how he does it

    • @GarnetLynne
      @GarnetLynne 11 лет назад +1

      sorry it sounded snarky, I wasn't being rude just thinking out loud as you said.

    • @ArtbyAtlas
      @ArtbyAtlas 11 лет назад +1

      Garnet Lynne Hey, I wasn't trying to impose or anything--I was just joking. :)

  • @VFD1613
    @VFD1613 11 лет назад +6

    Dude, your old grandma voice is awesome XD

  • @narutoqweavatar
    @narutoqweavatar 11 лет назад +1

    Mark, I have read many of your books but I never noticed just how funny your dialogue is. When ever Landon said "babe" I found myself rolling on the floor laughing. I don't know if it was you voice or the fact that I wouldn't have expected you to use the word "babe" in a way like that.
    Great video, as someone who really wants to make their own comics this was very helpful and funny :)

  • @ShinobiXte
    @ShinobiXte 11 лет назад

    Just by making this i realised how much you listen to your audience and every time you make a great episode to watch.. Thanks crilley

  • @poptii4986
    @poptii4986 10 лет назад +4

    I love that comic relief moment in the 3rd scene where Nicole calls over the wall and Landon has to stop beating up Brody to answer her XD

  • @scottlemay3386
    @scottlemay3386 9 лет назад +1

    Amazing Advice. :) you have a very unique yet effective way of telling a story.

  • @MrAXJarg
    @MrAXJarg 11 лет назад

    THESE ARE THE VIDEOS I ENJOY THE MOST, MARK! Getting inside the actual process of creating a manga book, and how to choose what goes into the panels. PLEASE MAKE MORE VIDEOS LIKE THIS ONE! Thanks!

  • @maryammohamed3344
    @maryammohamed3344 10 лет назад

    i love the way the way the story,dialogue and panels move in some sort of flow, its wonderful! u have inspired me to start one comic of my own, thanks so much!!

  • @tiffanymartinez8158
    @tiffanymartinez8158 11 лет назад

    Thank you, Mr. Crilley! Very helpful. :D I'm so glad I got to meet you last weekend!! Thank you for all that you do!!
    -Tiffany

  • @jessicacandy1471
    @jessicacandy1471 11 лет назад

    Mark,
    I used to suck at drawing.
    I watched and followed a few of your totrials. After practicing, I can draw manga/Chibi stuff on my own almost perfectly. I watch your videos for more tips. Thank you for your help.

  • @TheChibChibi
    @TheChibChibi 11 лет назад +16

    I have been subscribing to Mr.Mark Crilley for years now and has saw him constantly talking and showing his books which look very interesting, but sadly, it's very disappointing that I only saw Miki Falls series here in Malaysia but not Brody's Ghost series. The book looks very interesting and I really want it, but I can't find it anywhere in Malaysia. Every month I will go out to buy at least 5 new manga books, but every month, I still can't seem to find Brody's Ghost. Hummmm... What a shame...

    • @MayhemCause
      @MayhemCause 11 лет назад +3

      ***** She isn't English... So therefore she doesn't know English as well as you do.

    • @TheChibChibi
      @TheChibChibi 11 лет назад +1

      ***** Umm... Thank you for correcting... I guess... By the way, I don't like online shopping because I hate waiting my mom also won't allow it. But thank you for suggesting anyway and sorry for my bad english. I'm not english, plus I'm just 14. So I'm still learning.

    • @TheChibChibi
      @TheChibChibi 11 лет назад +1

      MayhemCause Thank you so much for supporting me~! :)

    • @TheChibChibi
      @TheChibChibi 11 лет назад

      ***** Cool,I guess we're the same then. But I'm not pure Malaysian though, I'm mix. Malaysian and Austrian.

    • @TheChibChibi
      @TheChibChibi 11 лет назад

      ***** Thank you for your help sir. I really thank you.

  • @j.mbarlow5952
    @j.mbarlow5952 8 лет назад +1

    some seriously solid insights to consider for my current WIP. Thanks Mark!

  • @therealr0bert
    @therealr0bert 11 лет назад

    "Highly useful" is a massive understatement. Thanks so much for these videos.

  • @margiel6270
    @margiel6270 8 лет назад

    I have to say, you're very smart Mark! I love how you lay out your scenes. It makes for easier understanding of the story while having a very cinematic feel. Plus the emotions that the characters had were so on point! Very realistic, indeed. Thank you for these videos! It really gives perspective to newbies like me hehe

    • @markcrilley
      @markcrilley  8 лет назад

      +Margie Lopez Thank you so much, Margie!

  • @LiveseyKnight
    @LiveseyKnight 11 лет назад

    It's nice when people go through how they thought panels work together and with others. Thank you for the video Mr. Crilley I enjoyed it a lot.

  • @felix56p
    @felix56p 10 лет назад +2

    I like it how Landon is so aggressive, but when Nicole calls to him a second time, he calms down.

  • @byronrhodes1659
    @byronrhodes1659 2 года назад

    This is great Mark! I appreciate your insight. Thanks for sharing your experience with us. I’ve never drawn a comic, but I want to. Keeping variation in the camera view, closeups for intensity, snaking dialogue boxes, and the part about the interrupting dialogue boxes overlapping is great!

  • @Frenchtoasty0s
    @Frenchtoasty0s 11 лет назад

    For miki falls i kinda like how the shading is done in a way that makes it have a slight aery feeling to it.

  • @TheAwesomePossum97
    @TheAwesomePossum97 11 лет назад +3

    Could you please make a tutorial on how to draw lines and curves in a flowing motion/ smoothly? Thanks!

  • @kaidraman
    @kaidraman 11 лет назад

    lol. I love how you did the old lady's voice in the Miki Falls one XD
    and I love how you, the artist and author of these amazing mangas, read aloud parts of your works to your fans! ^^
    It's definitely a treat!

  • @Bratzrock94
    @Bratzrock94 11 лет назад +18

    You should be a voice actor :D

  • @MouseyPeach
    @MouseyPeach 11 лет назад +3

    Thank you for this!! I wish I had gotten it a couple of weeks ago xD My final assignment for my illustration class is a 6 page comic based off of a short story and I am already in the inking phase of it :p This is still an incredibly helpful video, so thank you! :)

  • @captainzork6109
    @captainzork6109 10 лет назад +2

    This makes me want to buy these books!

  • @battougasharingan361
    @battougasharingan361 11 лет назад

    You have awesome voices Mark. I really felt the dialogue in your stories

  • @rorodorito2319
    @rorodorito2319 11 лет назад +1

    Wow!! Your comics look interesting to read! I wanted to get Miki Falls for Christmas, if I do, I'll read it right away!!!

  • @Netherium91
    @Netherium91 11 лет назад

    Thanks, i really liked this one! I laid down my pen for a while and haven't had time to do much drawing lately, but now after seeing this video i feel inspired to give comic creation a try. :)

  • @kaidraman
    @kaidraman 11 лет назад +18

    9:01
    lol
    He said doodies

  • @ivanjankov2709
    @ivanjankov2709 11 лет назад

    OUUUU YEAH. One of the most useful video (even for experienced artists) ! I would be grateful if you can do more videos like this. Or you can do the same tutorial but with another pages of your books.

  • @anthraxhehehe
    @anthraxhehehe 11 лет назад

    Thank you very much I was having problems with the face face face thing and now I have some cool idea I'm going to favorite this and re-watch it when ever I get stuck your awesome! Any videos about comic making are appreciated!

  • @hanimaniac1
    @hanimaniac1 10 лет назад +5

    Chris Sabot as Gabe
    Cherami Leigh as Talia
    Suggestions for Brody...?
    Caitlyn Glass as Nicole
    and Travis Willingham as Landon
    We got this *thumbs up*

  • @DueRag
    @DueRag 11 лет назад +15

    Hey mark you ever thought about this into an anime?

    • @CT_57
      @CT_57 10 лет назад +4

      I'd watch that

  • @TheAnuraag79
    @TheAnuraag79 10 лет назад

    Mark...its not about spoilers its just that youve described all u r books in all of our video other than u r mangas that is and personally i appreciate that thnx for improving my skills...

  • @osmand6364
    @osmand6364 11 лет назад +5

    looking at a one piece chapter now i realise how amazing oda is. Its so much work to make a page interesting Oo

  • @amandamestas5199
    @amandamestas5199 11 лет назад

    Extremely helpful and Awesomesauce!!! This is just what I needed thank you Mark!!!! I need to read all of those books.

  • @LifebyBertie
    @LifebyBertie 11 лет назад

    Great vid Mark, interesting to hear the story behind the story and how you come up with your ideas to create !!!

  • @buusama
    @buusama 11 лет назад

    Pretty useful pieces of advice, thanks! You should make further videos on this topic again in the future.

  • @Bathala
    @Bathala 11 лет назад

    I'm a huge fan of Brody's Ghost! I can't wait for the next issue! Seriously, great job, Mr . Crilley! You rock! Your art is amazing and your literature work is almost flawless! (I didn't like that bathroom scene very much, though. Talia caught me by surprise with that.)

  • @EthanVillanueva
    @EthanVillanueva 11 лет назад +1

    In film, a directors style and choice for why a shot looks a certain way and why some things are on frame and other things aren't, the term for that is called Mise én scene (Meez-awn-seen) it's a french term for "what's on screen" but was adapted to filmmaking to better explain a directors style of film making. It can also be applied to comic book making. Just a little trivia I think you could use Mark.

  • @BluFire29
    @BluFire29 11 лет назад

    This was a really interesting video! I really enjoyed the explanations of the three scenes.

  • @RoyFlush716
    @RoyFlush716 11 лет назад

    I like how the conversation flowed with the third scene (Brody's encounter with Nicole's new boyfriend). It comes off very grounded and realistic whereas many artists would've went over the top and had a huge fight break out. The way the discussion played it out is what I would expect to really happen if I was in that situation.

  • @RazKun
    @RazKun 11 лет назад +1

    Thank you Mark ^-^
    I really enjoyed this video. I'm studying 3D animation and one of the first steps in animating a scene is to sort of "block out the scene" as they call it i think. which is bassically doing a story board like thing where the image changed every 10 seconds or so, and then go back in and refine the keyframes and change the lengths around and what not. And i feel like if i try and keep up with some tips you have used here, it could come in great handy for making, even an animated scene (:

  • @STONEYDSP
    @STONEYDSP 11 лет назад

    Great video with the little secrects of Graphic Novel story telling. i did noticed @ the double page from the first example that you didn't take in account that the page would be folded ( the difference is noticible by Talia's skirt jumping over to upperbody)

  • @Beansareamagicalfruit
    @Beansareamagicalfruit 10 лет назад

    I was afraid you werent going to know what you were talking about when i first read this..but your artwork is very fine and your words flow awesomely! Great job!

  • @declan6602
    @declan6602 10 лет назад

    I love your videos mr crilley, they,re an inspiration that someday, if I try hard enough, I might become a great mangaka just like you.

  • @Hirashi679_
    @Hirashi679_ 11 лет назад

    Hello mark crilley awesome video you done here makes me want to read brodys ghost myself. Um down to the point I just want to say thankyou for mentioning me in your last video on how to draw chibi L. It meant so much that I jumped for joy and tears of happiness you have always been an inspiration for me. So I took the chance of drawing you a thankyou illustration on my part. I will post it up eventually. Again thankyou!

  • @NassassiN10
    @NassassiN10 11 лет назад

    Wow, I didn't know you were still making videos!! I watched you years ago :) congrats on 1 mill jeez man!

  • @Namby
    @Namby 11 лет назад

    Thank you so much this was really useful as I am just starting to write and illustrate my own comic story. I'd love for you to make another video like this soon :)

  • @blaruesfox1212
    @blaruesfox1212 11 лет назад

    Thank you for the tips, this was very helpful for planning the panels/scenes in my comic I plan to make

  • @richyjjsmith
    @richyjjsmith 11 лет назад +9

    You know, for an old Japanese woman, Yamada-san sounds shockingly Irish

  • @Emilylucy505
    @Emilylucy505 11 лет назад

    i would love to see more videos like this about storytelling and comic making :)

  • @JoyLyte
    @JoyLyte 11 лет назад

    This video was very useful, thank you a lot!! And I look forward to more in the future!

  • @3Bagermole
    @3Bagermole 11 лет назад

    Wow! Great video, very very useful. I really want to read Brody's Ghost now!

  • @benforddarrian42
    @benforddarrian42 11 лет назад

    U are a great artist i love your work and learn from u i hope some day i can keep gettin better and keep learning thanks alot man

  • @abbysinthe
    @abbysinthe 11 лет назад

    Very useful thanks! Also you should make a video where you just read the entire comic. Your voice acting is wonderful!

  • @forrestrobinson2754
    @forrestrobinson2754 11 лет назад

    Thank you so much for making this, every time i wonder what video you will make every friday you always meet my expectations:)

  • @pdonnelly
    @pdonnelly 11 лет назад +1

    could you possibly do a video about some tips for when you have to draw a small character in a panel for example the panel at 7:09 when you had to draw mkki and hiro in the background

  • @ericconnor3728
    @ericconnor3728 11 лет назад

    so nice drawings *_* I gifted a friend of mine the first book the other day :D I think I should also get those books ...

  • @Jitsuman
    @Jitsuman 10 лет назад +5

    Mark if they ever make one of your books an anime I think it would just be the book word for word because you seem to really know exactly where to put pauses and everything else. Haha

    • @markcrilley
      @markcrilley  10 лет назад +4

      Jitsu man Thanks :)

    • @hunterkillerslayer1264
      @hunterkillerslayer1264 10 лет назад +3

      markcrilley Yeah, every time I read one of your books or see clips of them in your videos I can immediately imagine it as a movie or show of some sorts. If I ever learn how to record this kind of stuff, Brody's Ghost would be the first thing I record. You make them so precise, so its easy to follow.

    • @ethanhamlin5566
      @ethanhamlin5566 10 лет назад

      markcrilley You should make an anime of Brody's Ghost it would b amazing :)

  • @MandoBadass1
    @MandoBadass1 11 лет назад

    I'd like to see a video about Panel Placement, Text Bubble placement, and you know, all that other useful stuff.

  • @melodymilktea
    @melodymilktea 11 лет назад

    I love your reading of the scene!

  • @AdnanyTB
    @AdnanyTB 11 лет назад

    I love these types of videos =) helps me a lot with my own project. I really need to get Mastering Manga 2! Thanks Mark =3

  • @alexgodraws1890
    @alexgodraws1890 5 лет назад

    Thx to him I finished my stories, all I have to do is get better at drawing so my artwork doesn’t look like it was made for cartoon fans, I’m making superhero comics

  • @naruto5682
    @naruto5682 11 лет назад +4

    i imagine the voice for yoko from gurren lagann fits perfectly ha

  • @dragonwithafez
    @dragonwithafez 11 лет назад

    Just got Mastering Manga, can't wait to get Mastering Manga 2!

  • @blue89girl
    @blue89girl 11 лет назад

    Your story telling skills are awesome xD I was so into the scenes LOL thx.

  • @Just.Celeste
    @Just.Celeste 11 лет назад

    Wow, this is the type of video that I find most useful! AWESOME idea :D

  • @AvivOrSuperKz
    @AvivOrSuperKz 11 лет назад

    Thanks you so much for doing this video !
    In my situation this video was absolutely helpful...
    Thank you so much !

  • @visionary93
    @visionary93 11 лет назад +1

    Now I GOTTA read those books.

  • @TDClark
    @TDClark 11 лет назад

    Do more videos like these please,drawing is cool and all but these are a lot more helpful to creators

  • @1mzaidi
    @1mzaidi 11 лет назад

    wow this is great Id love to see more of these kind of videos

  • @wingfeather3511
    @wingfeather3511 10 лет назад +2

    I really want your books amazing tbh x

  • @ravenhunter5574
    @ravenhunter5574 11 лет назад

    have read the first book of brodys ghost and i really like it and i ove yourmart, i wish i can be as good as you someday.

  • @thelastofrobyn2407
    @thelastofrobyn2407 10 лет назад

    You are soo talented Mark!! 😌

    • @markcrilley
      @markcrilley  10 лет назад

      Thank you! :)

    • @thelastofrobyn2407
      @thelastofrobyn2407 10 лет назад

      Omg thank you soo much for replying im soo happy.i wondering if you could help me..my friends and i are intrested in doing draw and time lapse videos but being the noobs we are...we dont have a clue how😫It would be soooooooooooooooooo amazing if you could help us out please?Bye and keep up the AMAZING ARTWORK! 😘

  • @MSadamgasm
    @MSadamgasm 11 лет назад

    i havent read your books but this vid makes me wanna start!!! drawn me in!

  • @tjanla2542
    @tjanla2542 11 лет назад

    At my school we have an assignment-make a comic book, and this is really helpful thank you!

  • @M_K-Bomb
    @M_K-Bomb 10 лет назад

    Great video. I learnt some new stuff and remembered stuff I forgot :)

  • @Zellow38
    @Zellow38 11 лет назад

    These kinds of videos ARE really helpfull Mark, THANKS! :D

  • @kristintheartist
    @kristintheartist 11 лет назад

    that was great, thanks mark! You sure have anatomy mastered.

  • @omfgdiamonds3129
    @omfgdiamonds3129 10 лет назад

    I loved Brody's ghost when's book 5 coming out.

  • @animelove56100
    @animelove56100 11 лет назад

    I live making comics so this was very helpful. Thank you!

  • @oliviaajangel
    @oliviaajangel 11 лет назад

    Mark Crilley could be the most endearing man ever haha. Great video, I feel like Brody is the type of guy who always gets the shit end of the stick.

  • @veronikaj.8714
    @veronikaj.8714 11 лет назад +1

    This really made me wanna read brody's ghost

  • @mollyl288
    @mollyl288 11 лет назад

    Thank you Mark, This was really helpful!