This is how not to do creative writing exercises. All theatrics no story, fancy words without meaning to assign them to. Over 6 minutes wasted on a story that has no actual story inside at all. Family of 4, family business, some truths, perfect image in the eyes of others, a golden child brother, breaking free from some "control". Random concepts thrown around without anything tying them together. Just... bad overall.
It's an exercise for a reason lol and also I was expecting this type of comment to surface and was waiting for it. Someone made a comment about one of the videos and his response was actually what you just commented 🤣 He wanted it the way this video is made lol
![[FULL STORY] I Walked Out of My Family’s Thanksgiving Dinner, and They Haven't Stopped Calling...](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/T-9blNcM5EY/mqdefault.jpg)
There are many gap on this story ?😅 without any properly answer on reasoning of many gap of why she doing
I made this generic story myself since one commented they wanted this style lol generic and to the point XD so here it is.
This is how not to do creative writing exercises. All theatrics no story, fancy words without meaning to assign them to. Over 6 minutes wasted on a story that has no actual story inside at all. Family of 4, family business, some truths, perfect image in the eyes of others, a golden child brother, breaking free from some "control". Random concepts thrown around without anything tying them together.
Just... bad overall.
It's an exercise for a reason lol and also I was expecting this type of comment to surface and was waiting for it.
Someone made a comment about one of the videos and his response was actually what you just commented 🤣 He wanted it the way this video is made lol
@@Raven2Stories He wanted a story without any actual details, that pull you into the world you try to present with your video?
Why? 😂😂
Dude....... I have no idea 🤣 I guess he wanted straight to the point cutting off the theatrics. Lol
I listened and delivered and I'm done lol