The part where it seemed like the entity was trying to get in the car was terrifying. Some glass, pieces of metal and a gun that didn't have much means of protection, we're all this guy had while he was at death's door.
I listened to this while I was stoned as I fell asleep and it was even more terrifying. I woke up with half memories of it and felt like the narrator 😂
Stories like this are awesome. Phycological dredd, mysterious creatures, abandoned homes/structures. As always, great narration. Been years creeps, and gotta say, never a disappointment.
So the previous victim shot his own family I reckon. He said he shot intruders and he cried over it but didn't know why he cried. The entity made him forget who his family were, he saw them as intruders and shot them. Some deep part of him knew what he'd done so he cried.
@MalleusSolum Maybe, but the author, Saturdead, likes to fill his stories with small details like that without spelling them out of the reader. My thoughts were that there could have been two guns, and it's just another thing that the narrator had forgotten. Another thing that stood out to me was the lighter. It seemed really odd to specifically mention that they didn't smoke anymore but still carry around a lighter, just in case. I was thinking that there might have been a second person with him that he completely forgot about. Maybe they sacrificed them to the thing so that they could leave unharmed. If that was the case, it also could have been the person he came with who was trying to open the car door at the end, but by that point they had already forgotten what they were doing and why they were there.
The ending gave me the chills, this is horror that creeps in, the ominous feeling that is all over the house, and the entity.... God damn, what a great story!
This is the second story where if you enter a house and start the fireplace, you're f*ked. The other one was about a guy almost freezing to death in the woods and finding a cozy house with a fireplace and a huge library of diaries. Basically, we should avoid abandoned houses with a fireplace and a preserved library.
@@zuttoaragi8349 I'd love to see a movie with a creature like that ngl. And I want it to be told from the main character's perspective so that we don't know WHAT is going on until they figure it out themselves. Scary shit
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Film Theory: the reason the entity didn’t attack the narrator was because it either: A. Remembered what the shotgun does, but not how ( similar to how the narrator knows what the entity does, but not in what way) as it didn’t get to absorb that knowledge or that knowledge nutrients was spent before the knowledge of the gun’s purpose B. It didn’t care to remember how many shots the shotgun couldn’t hold, or wasn’t able to siphon it C. Only wanted a certain quantity of memories or one specific one and left when it had its fill D. Isn’t actually a physical creature and can’t easily affect physical objects, so it’s more efficient or fun to just attack mentally
It sucks when you have a lot of common knowledge that ruins the set up or pay-off of a good creepy story. "No one has ever lived here." "Then why all the furniture?" Right, because houses up for sale NEVER have any setting furniture. For that matter, there are houses on bomb testing ranges that are fully furnished up to and including foods. There are tons of reasonable, non-creepy reasons for an old abandoned house that's fully furnished.
Creepy carving on a dilapidated shack where nobody goes definitely beats cold feet. Come back in the morning. This is a time to be a coward with no shame.
No, that's entirely the point. It's a creature that consumes memories. Your memories of itself, recent memories, older memories. It's meant to be disjointed and strange, because that's how it affects the character.
Love your narration,, recently got into a new narrator as well,, his sound effects and the fact he has a girl do the parts that are women definitely slap but no one compares to you my boy
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This is the most unfocused writing I’ve ever heard, and even though the author is attempting to convey a dozen ideas at once none of them go anywhere…..
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He forgot to pick up his cat from his mom's place!!!
The true horror in the story
Lol “I get the feeling I lost something” yeah homie, your cat.
I like how the fireplace and entity were connected. Start a fire and the wood is consumed. The entity is summoned and memories are consumed.
The part where it seemed like the entity was trying to get in the car was terrifying. Some glass, pieces of metal and a gun that didn't have much means of protection, we're all this guy had while he was at death's door.
My 1st thought would have been. “ no one has ever LIVED in this house? But how many people have DIED here?” Yes I listen to a lot of scary stories lol
I thought along the same lines as "no one has ever survived this house"
i would have read it the same way, so how many died here then......🤘🏻🤘🏻
I thought the same thing.
I listened to this while I was stoned as I fell asleep and it was even more terrifying. I woke up with half memories of it and felt like the narrator 😂
Same, I had to go over the ending again because that was spooky.
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This sounds like something Stephen King or RL Stine would do.
Yeah, this would be scary while stoned. Sounded like a bad trip.
Weed isn't an empathogen. Absolute lie.
Stories like this are awesome. Phycological dredd, mysterious creatures, abandoned homes/structures.
As always, great narration. Been years creeps, and gotta say, never a disappointment.
So the previous victim shot his own family I reckon. He said he shot intruders and he cried over it but didn't know why he cried. The entity made him forget who his family were, he saw them as intruders and shot them. Some deep part of him knew what he'd done so he cried.
That's what it felt like to me as well
Didn’t think of that but yah I agree
I thought to as well. Did anyone else notice that the narrator calls the gun a rifle and a shotgun interchangeably?
@@Satans_Little_Helper Yeah I noticed that. I think that's just the writer not understanding the difference.
@MalleusSolum Maybe, but the author, Saturdead, likes to fill his stories with small details like that without spelling them out of the reader. My thoughts were that there could have been two guns, and it's just another thing that the narrator had forgotten. Another thing that stood out to me was the lighter. It seemed really odd to specifically mention that they didn't smoke anymore but still carry around a lighter, just in case.
I was thinking that there might have been a second person with him that he completely forgot about. Maybe they sacrificed them to the thing so that they could leave unharmed. If that was the case, it also could have been the person he came with who was trying to open the car door at the end, but by that point they had already forgotten what they were doing and why they were there.
The ending gave me the chills, this is horror that creeps in, the ominous feeling that is all over the house, and the entity.... God damn, what a great story!
I love his voice it's so soothing you wouldn't know he's narrating a scary story 😊
I think that just makes the story more creepy
This is the second story where if you enter a house and start the fireplace, you're f*ked. The other one was about a guy almost freezing to death in the woods and finding a cozy house with a fireplace and a huge library of diaries. Basically, we should avoid abandoned houses with a fireplace and a preserved library.
What is the title of the other one? It sounds good and I'd like to listen to it!
@@RaeIsOnRUclips Cabin in the Mountains. It's very good.
Thank you so much! 💙
@@RaeIsOnRUclips MrCreepyPasta about 7 months ago, I think. That's the one.
This is one of my favorite creepypastas I’ve ever heard, the story and concept are so cool!
Someone else did this recently, think it was Jordan Grupe Horror.
It was such a good story.
I'm happy to hear the great McPasta's take on it.
This was modern lovecraftian terror done excellently.
Excellent cadence, as always. Thanks again for passing along some eeriness and trepidation.
This one scared me I have the fear of not having complete control of my senses and memories
I have a family member who has dementia… it made me wonder if this is what they feel like as the disease progresses…
one of the best stories i've heard so far.
I just listened to the whole thing! Great story
As a DnD fan, this dude was attacked by a False Hydra.
As another DnD fan and player ...These things are fucking terrifying.
@@beetlejuulz Possibly one of the single most terrifying creatures ever.
@@zuttoaragi8349 I'd love to see a movie with a creature like that ngl. And I want it to be told from the main character's perspective so that we don't know WHAT is going on until they figure it out themselves. Scary shit
@@beetlejuulz That'd be an amazing movie. I'd never watch it for fear of shitting my pants, but I know it'd be amazing.
My favorite scary stories channel ❤️ the narration is incomparable
Excellent narration as always... and a very well written story!
Your great at changing the tone of your voice depedning on seriousness of stories.
A nice tale. A nice tale indeed.
i really enjoyed this story. it's made even better read by you. thanks creeps!!
never underestimate the power of OLD GREG !!!
Ever drink Bailey's from a shoe?
I got a mangina!!
Pleased to meet you.
New subscriber here, love your content! Listening to your story telling eases my anxiety even when the story is terrifying 😅 ❤
There's a selection of stories he's written himself- most of my favorites from the last ..decade? Are on that list ;)
I dont want to set the world on fire. I just want to start a flame in your heart ❤️
Ink spots
i've lost all ambition, for worldly acclaim
@@samusfan2334I just want to be the one you loveee
LOL The first thing I thought of when I read that was Fallout 4 😂❤
Thank you for the upload as always
This story really sends shivers down my spine! Great narration - had me hooked from start to finish!
I also feel like crying now great narration 😢
So is it like... newly built or...?
Me: these edibles ain’t shit
Me 20 min later:
Discovered upload! Dopamine unlocked!
Saturdead strikes again! Love it.
Sounds like actual carbon monoxide poisoning
Made me feel some typa way cause i cant comprehend wtf i just listened to.... makes me think its trancended through the story 😂
Great story and narration! I was immerged.
Happy New Year!
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Wow, very interesting story.
This was very creepy!!
The way they did the memory cutting back and forth was pretty interesting.
About the best bed time story ever
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This story is amazing! What could be more terrifying than something you cannot remember or even comprehend!😨💛🤍💜🖤
This is a great story!!!! loooooooove it!!!! 🙌🏾🙌🏾
10/10 story
The story is awesome
Oh yeah brotha
Did anyone else notice that the narrator calls the gun a rifle and a shotgun interchangeably?
I can't remember...
Gonna be honest. That bugged me. 😂😂
This is a brilliant writer
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Film Theory: the reason the entity didn’t attack the narrator was because it either:
A. Remembered what the shotgun does, but not how ( similar to how the narrator knows what the entity does, but not in what way) as it didn’t get to absorb that knowledge or that knowledge nutrients was spent before the knowledge of the gun’s purpose
B. It didn’t care to remember how many shots the shotgun couldn’t hold, or wasn’t able to siphon it
C. Only wanted a certain quantity of memories or one specific one and left when it had its fill
D. Isn’t actually a physical creature and can’t easily affect physical objects, so it’s more efficient or fun to just attack mentally
Funny.. I would of thought the door carving would of said.
" Abandon all hope, ye who enter here " 😏😊😊
Mmm 2017 good times
2 in Missouri and one to the west ...how did he end up in fuckin Minnesota? Minnesota is north of Missouri
It sucks when you have a lot of common knowledge that ruins the set up or pay-off of a good creepy story.
"No one has ever lived here."
"Then why all the furniture?"
Right, because houses up for sale NEVER have any setting furniture.
For that matter, there are houses on bomb testing ranges that are fully furnished up to and including foods. There are tons of reasonable, non-creepy reasons for an old abandoned house that's fully furnished.
Creepy carving on a dilapidated shack where nobody goes definitely beats cold feet. Come back in the morning.
This is a time to be a coward with no shame.
so the entity is amnesia ? mixed with schizophrenia ?
even young people can get premature amnesia
Am I just stupid or was this one hard to fully comprehend
No, that's entirely the point. It's a creature that consumes memories. Your memories of itself, recent memories, older memories. It's meant to be disjointed and strange, because that's how it affects the character.
I feel like there was no cursed house. No entity. Rather, this was a depiction of the experience of someone with late stage dementia.
A guy with an English accent talking about Missouri and Minnesota. 😅🤔👍
Yeah weird how people of all backgrounds live in other countries
Love your narration,, recently got into a new narrator as well,, his sound effects and the fact he has a girl do the parts that are women definitely slap but no one compares to you my boy
i love this channel but try out Mr.Creeps he's Awesome & also Dark Somnium
@@Mr.Morningstar_502 yeah I been listening to the dark somnium that’s my new narrator,, I do like Mr creeps but his voice just doesn’t do it for me
@@joshlyerla6991I was about to say dark somnium lol
Did anyone else imagine her looking like the old woman from Recesse?
yoo what's up early crowd
The sky
I ain't no taco man that's for sure.
is not collecting or consuming
is just catch and release
Damn
Maybe it's just me but I couldn't swear on my life what my dad's eyes look like and I saw him this morning. Is that like a core memory?
What did he lose??
his sanity
nap time!!
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Idc what this says. I was 1st by miles
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NO ME!!!!! I WAS FIRST!!! LIAR!!!
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This is the most unfocused writing I’ve ever heard, and even though the author is attempting to convey a dozen ideas at once none of them go anywhere…..
Nonsense
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These be such good stories I just wish they were narrated by someone better
You’re old enough to do better and not be rude. Shame on you.
Kind of like attacking Dementia. Terrifying really.
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