Shorts are so hard to do, but you pulled it off. Great concept and story, a cool costume, tasty color, solid cinematography, believable foley, good Aperture lightening :) and great eye lights. Why do people forget about eye lights? As a colorist, I hate it when I get dead eyes. Would be nice to see a BTS lighting breakdown in the future (hint).
How does this not have more views? The cinematography is absolutely stunning and inspiring. Good on you and I am excited to see more from you, keep it up !
Higher Quality version with fixed dialogue audio - vimeo.com/572169966 Also, thanks for all the support on this! Super fun project with lots of BTS to follow.
wow, love this! Off the bat... that beautifully slow push-in during the opening scene in the car (didnt notice it until the 2nd watch) pulled me right in! The storm/rain scene was very believable, loved the lightning through the bathroom window (perfect with the sfx) to light up the area briefly , let me guess... Falcon Eyes F7? The colour throughout is amazing! And the handheld as your struggling to get the umbrella to cover/protect the flower was perfect... not too crazy, just perfect to show the urgency with still being able to make out the scene nicely. Oh, and of course, the story itself. So, yeah, love this!
This was good because of your lighting techniques and some of your camera movements were awesome. the story however wasn't developed properly for us to get in it. I didnt feel your loss or even a connection to warrant such an extreme reaction. The character development allows us to feel something, good or bad. Still very impressive. your hard work and effort is applauded!
At 03:05 you can a woman in the window… :) Spencer, THIS IS AWESOME! The story got me really hooked and the cinematography was stunning. I really enjoyed it.
Awesome job Spenser! I really enjoyed it. Would it be possible to get a version on Vimeo or anywhere else with a better compression? It was a bit noticeable on the 30 first seconds of the short. Cheers!
Wow Spenser, this is great! Loved the subtle sci-fi. My only issue was the sound mix when you were buying the seed at the begging, really hard to hear your characters voices. The rapid cutting between the brother in law and you and your girl at the end was phenomenal! Great short, look forward to a breakdown. Cheers!
Well done. Great effort and nice hard cuts betweens scenes. I personally think the rain soundeffect was too loud out of balance ...dialoog in the rain wasn't easy to follow.
Hey Spenser, many comments praise the cinematography - and I agree - but what is significant is that you managed to create the atmosphere and suspense. It was actually interesting to watch. You could develop something similar to a feature-length. I also must mention that your and Amanda's acting is quite good - you both have the screen presence and make believable characters. The only creative criticism I have is that I would maybe adjust voice acting to be less "casual" to match the overall vibe of the story. Keep up the great work!
Great film! I really enjoyed it. My pea brain is still noodling the story in a good way. At first I was thinking he killed his wife but maybe she just died. Will definitely need to watch it again. Visually I was really impressed with the storm scene. Im excited to watch your how to make first short. Again, well done and looking forward to the next one.
How does the szenes not rustle with the low light? I have also an BM6KP but if I don’t have enough light, the material looks not good at all. :( could somebody help me?
Hi spenser. I would love to show u my short film. Is there any way we can do paid videocall? For some feedback . I would love to get your advice on some things . Much love
Awesome cinematography and unique lil story, my only gripe i guess, is unless we just werent really supposed to hear what you told the guy in the car in the rain, then i guess id call that just the difficulties of sound work in rain. Overall though it was really solid! And for anything to have only one single negative if it wasnt just a creative choice, id say thats a good thing! Lol
Love all the shots, sound design and color! What equipment did you use to stabilize most of your shots? And how did you protect your camera in the rain? Thanks!
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great job on the color. that's honestly what stood out most to me. the story was kinda confusing though
Shorts are so hard to do, but you pulled it off. Great concept and story, a cool costume, tasty color, solid cinematography, believable foley, good Aperture lightening :) and great eye lights. Why do people forget about eye lights? As a colorist, I hate it when I get dead eyes. Would be nice to see a BTS lighting breakdown in the future (hint).
Still my favourite bmpcc 6k short ever 😍
How does this not have more views? The cinematography is absolutely stunning and inspiring. Good on you and I am excited to see more from you, keep it up !
I loved many things in this short, just couldnt get the story and hooked overall !
Goodjob and keep it up!
Nice stuff! It'd be great if more youtubers in the "film" niche actually made films and put them up like you did here. Major props Spenser
What speed booster to use for a 18-35 on a 6k pro?
I just love that you used Makeup and Vanity Set music!!
Higher Quality version with fixed dialogue audio - vimeo.com/572169966
Also, thanks for all the support on this! Super fun project with lots of BTS to follow.
Everyone involved deserves a round of applause 👏🏻 great job, you guys!
I'm here for Charlie aka seedrunner2049's 'actorial' debut
Thanks.
Never again. lol.
This is so underrated, what a great job!!!! So professional
Epic. I’d expect good cinematography, but the plot certainly had my attention from the start too. Great effort from all involved 👏
best part of this film is that FADE tho SHEEEEEEEEEEEESH
Dope Spenser!!! Enjoyed it thoroughly and can't wait for more to come! Keep up the great work man.
Hey man!! This was awesome. This looks great!!!!
Fantastic work. Some of the best I've seen shot with the Pocket 6K. This film shows the potential of the camera when in the right hands.
Very nice job Spenser!! The mood of the shot at 3:24 gave me a Roger Deakins "Prisoners" feel 😉
Great job with the short! And kudos on your skill to capture in low light! 💪
wow, love this! Off the bat... that beautifully slow push-in during the opening scene in the car (didnt notice it until the 2nd watch) pulled me right in! The storm/rain scene was very believable, loved the lightning through the bathroom window (perfect with the sfx) to light up the area briefly , let me guess... Falcon Eyes F7? The colour throughout is amazing! And the handheld as your struggling to get the umbrella to cover/protect the flower was perfect... not too crazy, just perfect to show the urgency with still being able to make out the scene nicely. Oh, and of course, the story itself. So, yeah, love this!
Although the story is little confusing , the ambiance, colour grade, sounds effects literally brings goose bumps to my hands🔥
Great work! Amazing!
The cinematography in this was excellent ! I’m wrapping production on a short this week and this was quite motivating 💪
that was really well done. The storm scene were so beautifully crafted. Props to you and the team.
Great work, great story and wonderful color! Bravo!
Whoa, this one is your best so far! Congratulations!
This was awesome man wow. The technical side was incredible accompanied with the artistic vision/execution. Obsessed with the shots and color
I can see that you love Arrival- there's a subtle nod to it but by no means does it overreach to copying. Beautiful ❤️
Switch to hail was CLEAN!
This was good because of your lighting techniques and some of your camera movements were awesome. the story however wasn't developed properly for us to get in it. I didnt feel your loss or even a connection to warrant such an extreme reaction. The character development allows us to feel something, good or bad. Still very impressive. your hard work and effort is applauded!
This was off the hook! Boss work, Spencer!
Amazing work 💯💯💯💯🤘🤘🤘🤘Best film I've seen on this camera. amazing job well done!
This is solid. I've come to expect nothing less from you though. Great work.
Great cinematography! Was very pleasant to watch
killed the colors!!!
This was awesome! Can’t wait to see the BTS. Great job
someone should do a feature film with BMPCC 6k, camera is capable of producing great results.
Great work Spencer. Perfectly captured and composed.
Spenceeeeer. Great shots and story. We need you on Netflix 🤘🏾
Nailed it 💥💥
The lights were perfect. So does the mood
I particularly loved the ad right as the film grasped my interest. But alas, it was lost.
Nice job! What Lens do you use?
At 03:05 you can a woman in the window… :)
Spencer, THIS IS AWESOME! The story got me really hooked and the cinematography was stunning.
I really enjoyed it.
someone was bound to catch that haha
@@spensersakurai I caught it too but regardless, this is an amazing work of film, great job Sakurai!
Wow amazing. How is this so great? Of course the cinematography is what stood out 🔥
well shot. look great with the rain.
Good super short film 👋👋👋 And what are equipment, camera you can using... Tell me 🙏🙏
Canon FD Lens really? Wow! Great work Spenser
This was awesome!
i Love this ! was this shot in prores or braw ?
Braw
@@spensersakurai super dope work mann. Thanks for the speedy response.
Great work, great sound, colours are perfect and acting too. Great job.
good job really nice short film can I know which lens you used for this film ? thanks
this is beautifulest short movie!)
Awesome job Spenser! I really enjoyed it. Would it be possible to get a version on Vimeo or anywhere else with a better compression? It was a bit noticeable on the 30 first seconds of the short. Cheers!
Higher Quality with fixed dialogue audio - vimeo.com/572169966
@@spensersakurai 🙏
wow amazing work
which canon fd lenses did you use? i'm trying to self learn. great video. subscribed!
What do you have your camera in for the rain shots outside. A case? And what your rig set up like for some like this
Wow Spenser, this is great! Loved the subtle sci-fi.
My only issue was the sound mix when you were buying the seed at the begging, really hard to hear your characters voices.
The rapid cutting between the brother in law and you and your girl at the end was phenomenal!
Great short, look forward to a breakdown. Cheers!
Well done. Great effort and nice hard cuts betweens scenes. I personally think the rain soundeffect was too loud out of balance ...dialoog in the rain wasn't easy to follow.
Higher Quality with fixed dialogue audio - vimeo.com/572169966
Hey Spenser, many comments praise the cinematography - and I agree - but what is significant is that you managed to create the atmosphere and suspense. It was actually interesting to watch. You could develop something similar to a feature-length. I also must mention that your and Amanda's acting is quite good - you both have the screen presence and make believable characters. The only creative criticism I have is that I would maybe adjust voice acting to be less "casual" to match the overall vibe of the story. Keep up the great work!
Bro love the Grade, I want to see a version without the youtube compression going to crap in the shadows, Great job dude!
So dope!
Incredible !! A breakdown would be amazing just in case it crossed your mind.
Great movie in all aspects: story, cinematography, acting and directing. Congratulations! Do you have a behind the scenes?
It will be coming soon!
@@spensersakurai can't wait for it. I really like your videos. You did a really great job with this short.
What lens did you guys use?
Great film! I really enjoyed it. My pea brain is still noodling the story in a good way. At first I was thinking he killed his wife but maybe she just died. Will definitely need to watch it again.
Visually I was really impressed with the storm scene.
Im excited to watch your how to make first short. Again, well done and looking forward to the next one.
What software are you using ??
Man thats amazing, i forgot i was watching a youtube video.
Love the atmosphere!
We've got a young Nick Cage on our hands! I'm ready for your breakout in showbiz. Great short, my dude!
incredible
How does the szenes not rustle with the low light? I have also an BM6KP but if I don’t have enough light, the material looks not good at all. :( could somebody help me?
That was pretty dope!
How did you water proof it?
Very nice Spenser.
This was dope!
too much cool bro!
Speechless Well Done , how did you created that rain ?
Rain machine. I’ll talk about it in an upcoming video.
@@spensersakurai Thank You have a great day
What lenses were used?
very well crafted :o
This was so so good!
THAT WAS SO GOOD
Hi spenser. I would love to show u my short film. Is there any way we can do paid videocall? For some feedback . I would love to get your advice on some things . Much love
I'm wondering if you used that sprinkler to create the rain too
Goddamn, this looks good asf! 🙌🏾
Awesome cinematography and unique lil story, my only gripe i guess, is unless we just werent really supposed to hear what you told the guy in the car in the rain, then i guess id call that just the difficulties of sound work in rain. Overall though it was really solid! And for anything to have only one single negative if it wasnt just a creative choice, id say thats a good thing! Lol
Higher Quality with fixed dialogue audio - vimeo.com/572169966
@@spensersakurai higher quality cuz vimeo doesnt compress as much?
@@GabrielRodriguez-cb8hb right!
Great cinematic shots! Save the cat. Cheers
If nicolas cage had a kid, he would look like you :) great movie man! Really love it!
That was a dope premiere
Cool video! Tell me do you have all the light sources in your house with a good cri or are these ordinary light sources?
Loved the color and storytelling. The weather elements were a nice touch too
Great job 👏. How did you film those scenes under the rain? Love the light!
I’ll talk about this in the breakdowns!
@@spensersakurai Can't wait!!! awesome job, man! Loved it! Thanks for the motivation 🙏
Curte se querem saber qual microfone usado.
nail that acting man...
Beautifully done ❤️
Love all the shots, sound design and color! What equipment did you use to stabilize most of your shots? And how did you protect your camera in the rain? Thanks!
Great work can't wait for the brakedown
wow amazing
loved it
Biiiig Roger Deakins vibes from this!!!
brilliant ❤️