It's not that hard to do better than Disney - they've reached quite a bottom. That's not to say what the fans are doing deserves any less respect, though. Quite the opposite. To be fair, I'm sure a lot of people at Disney's SW division do care about the franchise but they still end up making crap due to being told to do so by their higher ups. Like Kathleen Kennedy, who would put all kinds of muppets in leading positions (directors, writers, etc.) just to satisfy some agenda, play on nostalgic feelings and cater to certain groups. But at the end of the day, do you really need Disney to put in effort when the fans make stuff THIS good? I really don't care personally, because no matter how well or badly done a fan film is, you know was made with actual passion for Star Wars that only independent people outside the influence of big corporations could maintain.
Yes, this is good. From the opening scene, the cinematography set the tone and the mood. The view from perspective at lakeside. The evening fire burning as we see a person approaching..prefect.
Great work!!! I really enjoyed this this. Loved the Oahu locations as they are such are great fit for a SW story. I also like the additions of the Pete’s Pirate Life swag. Subscribed.
Looks great! Would love to see more. One small request, (well two) closed captioning would be great for us folks listening on phones when we are supposed to be working and cant turn volume uo... and slow down the title scrolling sequence a bit or steeping the angle as it goes up so those of us on phones, with older eyes can read it easier. Other than that I'm an instant fan! Live the idea ,the cast, photography, especially love the story! Most people forget there has to be a great story a d not just bigger explosions a d gorier gore to make a great show, a d you've got something here! Keep it up!!
Hey Drew, Jonas, Allison, Jake, Strat, Justin and Austin - Thank your for that great masterpiece. Highly appreciate your work. Can i ask you which camera u used and if you come out of the media business?
this is quite the fan film I would to learn more about the characters in a part two maybe or within a bigger project that I'm planning on doing with other creators too :)
Hey Drew so well done wow!!!! AMAZING! What did you edit your lightsabers in??? After effects??? Best looking lightsabers I've ever seen in a fan film.... like top notch hollywood stuff my man. Well done!
This is amazing 👏 I'm trying to make my own. Any tips for a newcomer to how to make a Star Wars film? Also, could you do a tutorial how you did the lightsabers?
Dear DL Creative, I'm tell you the truth. I'm deaf, but where's CC on the RUclips? I know you're surprised me. I hope you're read my text. The Force be with you.
honestly needs a bit more refinement. You cant just add light sabers to a script and call it fan. What makes cinematography different for SW? Study the wipes. Timing. Depth of field is all wrong, the sequences too long. Script needs a bit. Audio needs well layering will help tremendously here. I don't know your history and background and I am comparing it to iconic work so I give this a 4/10 as it is far better than most. Watch the films again and try to see the essence. Without the light sabers this looks just a vacation movie with 2 dudes, a fallout shelter with some candles, and some fishing line. However, if this is your first film kudos, you can only go up from here. I do encourage you to make more and find your own style. You do have skills that need to be developed. Slow down the camera. Find better points of camera views, eye level is not always best. The drone shot was interesting but did not flow from previous to next scene. Experiment with emotion in the scene based on camera position and audio comp. Everything is coming from your cast, they must flow with the environment. The NPC are the candles, have the dude move one to show the dance or wind from the door opening blows a few out. Muted lighting. Remember its 4 dimensions not 2. Your almost there but just short. Remember you're on another planet were everything is most likely covered in dust and rust. Certainly not vibrant. Slow the lines, deliberate and lost is the key. Good luck!
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Yeahh man another fan movie its allways exciting to see one of them
TOP FREAKING NOTCH MAN!! That lightsaber battle looked like it was straight out of a feature film!
Haha thank so much man! What a journey it was to get the fight to where it ended up.
This definitely has some potential and is already far above many of the other SW short films out there. Can’t wait for part 2 to expand the story!
Just epic!!!!!
Seriously almost all of the fan projects are 100 times better then any film Disney does
It's not that hard to do better than Disney - they've reached quite a bottom. That's not to say what the fans are doing deserves any less respect, though. Quite the opposite. To be fair, I'm sure a lot of people at Disney's SW division do care about the franchise but they still end up making crap due to being told to do so by their higher ups. Like Kathleen Kennedy, who would put all kinds of muppets in leading positions (directors, writers, etc.) just to satisfy some agenda, play on nostalgic feelings and cater to certain groups. But at the end of the day, do you really need Disney to put in effort when the fans make stuff THIS good? I really don't care personally, because no matter how well or badly done a fan film is, you know was made with actual passion for Star Wars that only independent people outside the influence of big corporations could maintain.
Yes, this is good. From the opening scene, the cinematography set the tone and the mood. The view from perspective at lakeside. The evening fire burning as we see a person approaching..prefect.
Dude - GREAAT MOVIE!! TOP NOTCH.
Bravo, there is a fan film competition going on right now that you may want to enter The Fan Film Director’s Choice Awards
What a wonderful, fantastic film!! Everything is top notch!! I’m looking forward to part two
This turned out better than I ever could’ve imagined! Love working with you bro bro
I wouldnt have it any other way. Thank you for all your time and dedication to it!
This was amazing
The storyline the fight scenes the shots everything was cool
10/10
Absolutely beautiful! What a wonderfully made film! Really excited to see more!
Hello there. This is great for episode one, will watch later for the second one. Thank you to served for all of star wars fans around the globe
You're incredibly talented Drew! So honored to be a part of this project!
You crushed it man thank you for bearing with me and all the time you put into it!
Yes sir drew!! I’m about to watch it I’m so exited
This is really cool can't wait for episode 2
Okay but seriously, this needs more views NOW
This was such an epic movie!!
Thanks Amir! Glad you enjoyed it!
This was epic! I’m definitely looking forward to part two.
Oh wow, one of the best characterisation and character arcs I've seen from a fan film, fantastic! The effects were beautiful!
Very Cool Film
For a short movie this is incredible!
Wow, amazing work - hope you will publish part 2 !!! 🤩
I got inspired watching this!. Really great
Really. This is so good. Please keep on doing this. The music, the atmosphere. Really good work!
Very Niceely done. Would love to see more.
Nicely done!!! Cannot wait for the next episode!
🔥🔥 this belongs on Disney +
Great work on this one 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
An absolute masterpiece 🥹
Great work!!! I really enjoyed this this. Loved the Oahu locations as they are such are great fit for a SW story. I also like the additions of the Pete’s Pirate Life swag. Subscribed.
Yes I'm incredibly grateful to have this beautiful island to film on! It worked great! And yes those work great for interesting looking props!
I'm hooked! Hoping there is a part two, three, four ... Excellent, excellent work!
Incredible work man! The cinematography, the music, the sabers. Need more 😍
Thank you so much! Jonas did an incredible job with the score!
More lightsaber!!!! Killed it!
this is gas man, more people need to see this
Great work...
Incredible ⚡️ Proud of you brotha!
Hey that was really good I'm truly inspired, I think I'll make another soon! Great work
AWESOME WORK MAN!! Such a good watch
This is incredible!!🔥
Looks great! Would love to see more. One small request, (well two) closed captioning would be great for us folks listening on phones when we are supposed to be working and cant turn volume uo... and slow down the title scrolling sequence a bit or steeping the angle as it goes up so those of us on phones, with older eyes can read it easier. Other than that I'm an instant fan! Live the idea ,the cast, photography, especially love the story! Most people forget there has to be a great story a d not just bigger explosions a d gorier gore to make a great show, a d you've got something here! Keep it up!!
Some really good work bro!
This is SO good!! 👏👏👏👏👏
This is rock solid! I'd love to work with you guys! Where are you based?
Hey Drew, Jonas, Allison, Jake, Strat, Justin and Austin - Thank your for that great masterpiece. Highly appreciate your work.
Can i ask you which camera u used and if you come out of the media business?
We shot everything on the Canon R5 and the last scene on a Black Magic
this is quite the fan film I would to learn more about the characters in a part two maybe or within a bigger project that I'm planning on doing with other creators too :)
The camera work, visuals and lightsaber choreography better than that we’ve seen of recent Disney Star Wars content
Hey Drew so well done wow!!!! AMAZING! What did you edit your lightsabers in??? After effects??? Best looking lightsabers I've ever seen in a fan film.... like top notch hollywood stuff my man. Well done!
Unreal!!!
good Job!
So sick!!!
Dude this was really amazing! When are we going to get the sequel?
Beautiful work!
The adventures of Retardo, the Magnificent Bastard... who does nothing but make faces at his enemies.
All the way up
even though nothing happen
****
🔥
This is amazing 👏 I'm trying to make my own. Any tips for a newcomer to how to make a Star Wars film? Also, could you do a tutorial how you did the lightsabers?
Dear DL Creative,
I'm tell you the truth. I'm deaf, but where's CC on the RUclips? I know you're surprised me. I hope you're read my text. The Force be with you.
Let me know when this masterpiece blows up
Wait is there a main channel? No way you this is your first upload it's too good.
The angry guy was kind of annoying for being angry. Decent film though
i see form 6 Niman here
Wow....wheres the rest
DUDE
honestly needs a bit more refinement. You cant just add light sabers to a script and call it fan. What makes cinematography different for SW? Study the wipes. Timing. Depth of field is all wrong, the sequences too long. Script needs a bit. Audio needs well layering will help tremendously here. I don't know your history and background and I am comparing it to iconic work so I give this a 4/10 as it is far better than most. Watch the films again and try to see the essence. Without the light sabers this looks just a vacation movie with 2 dudes, a fallout shelter with some candles, and some fishing line. However, if this is your first film kudos, you can only go up from here. I do encourage you to make more and find your own style. You do have skills that need to be developed. Slow down the camera. Find better points of camera views, eye level is not always best. The drone shot was interesting but did not flow from previous to next scene. Experiment with emotion in the scene based on camera position and audio comp. Everything is coming from your cast, they must flow with the environment. The NPC are the candles, have the dude move one to show the dance or wind from the door opening blows a few out. Muted lighting. Remember its 4 dimensions not 2. Your almost there but just short. Remember you're on another planet were everything is most likely covered in dust and rust. Certainly not vibrant. Slow the lines, deliberate and lost is the key. Good luck!
go to see the fan film “the hunt”
Geez, you Star Wars junkies are the worst. A masterpiece? Why, because it had lightsabers? Bad dialogue, bad acting, and a pointless plot.