Dan Wells on Story Structure, part 1 of 5

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  • Опубликовано: 11 янв 2025

Комментарии • 78

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  13 лет назад +71

    I've gotten lots of comments about the music before and at the end of videos. Thank you for the feedback. Unfortunately I don't have the raw footage any more and can't fix the videos, but trust me that future videos won't have the same problem.

    • @TheWorld_2099
      @TheWorld_2099 4 года назад +6

      Thanks for acknowledging it..!
      Have an excellent day

    • @Angels_Ashes
      @Angels_Ashes 3 года назад

      I actually like the music. What is it called?

  • @proudmom514
    @proudmom514 12 лет назад +27

    Seriously? I am just glad that Dan is taking the time to share this information with us. Most writers would have tried to market this kind of literary advice. Fortunately, here we are on youtube watching it for free.

  • @itsatraplol
    @itsatraplol 4 месяца назад +3

    Whoa, never thought I'd see Matt Colville's name up on the screen when I'm watching one of my favorite authors teach me about 7 point plot structure! Worlds collide!

  • @crystinapierce6833
    @crystinapierce6833 3 года назад +6

    Been struggling understanding how to outline. He said “your resolution is not the end, it’s the climax” and it finally makes sense.

  • @kell_checks_in
    @kell_checks_in 7 месяцев назад +1

    This playlist is a precious treasure. Thanks so much!

  • @hayngrl101
    @hayngrl101 13 лет назад +8

    Watching this again, 2 years after it was recorded, and a month after seeing it live at LTUE 2012. It's that good, and motivating. Thanks Dan.

  • @protercool8474
    @protercool8474 2 года назад +13

    "Brandon Sanderson, he's a fantasy writer you may have heard of."
    I'm pretty sure this is exactly how Dan would say that today, only he'd be grinning and the crowd laughing.

  • @SpoonsForks
    @SpoonsForks 8 лет назад +184

    WHY THE MUSIC

    • @kell_checks_in
      @kell_checks_in 7 месяцев назад

      Agreed, but it does eventually fade out. I have sensory processing disorders and wicked sensitive hearing (short version: my central nervous system is busted) and have to forego MANY videos with blocking music through the entirety of the video. (WHY do people do this?) At least for these, it stops so we can focus on what's being said.

  • @dexteralex3118
    @dexteralex3118 3 года назад +2

    Watching this in 2021, already an established writer, but there is something about this that makes me want to learn from scratch again. Such good content. ❤️

  • @Leto85
    @Leto85 6 лет назад +30

    Intro's over at 2:35.
    From there on, I see similarities with K.M. Weiland's approach, so I'm curious to see where the two methods will deviate.
    Good video! I'll definitely watch the rest of the series.

    • @ryanratchford2530
      @ryanratchford2530 5 лет назад +1

      Leto85 Thankyou very useful every time I rewatch thid

  • @jarhar007
    @jarhar007 7 лет назад +4

    Great information. I've watched these videos numerous times, because it always helps to remind myself of the awesome way that Dan breaks down story structure.

  • @LoesungFeuer5
    @LoesungFeuer5 9 лет назад +9

    It took me a whole Year and hundreds hours of writing to understand this fully.

  • @townsendstephen
    @townsendstephen 8 лет назад +5

    I loved this. Much needed. I have done most of my writing by gut feel and needed this structure. Better books from me in the future.

  • @carriewrites9477
    @carriewrites9477 10 лет назад +5

    This is wonderfully useful. I can't wait to apply these three ideas to my story idea. Thank you for your wisdom.

  • @anthemofink
    @anthemofink 2 года назад +3

    Holy crap. Never expected to see DM Matt Colville listed in there! 2:51 The dude's a river to his people.

    • @abomidog
      @abomidog Год назад +2

      I friggin shouted when I saw his name there! Forgot he was a part of that book. How awesome is it these writers can connect (even indirectly)! The trust I have in Matt Colville gives me even more motivation for trying out this story structure 😊

  • @FitBitsPT
    @FitBitsPT 12 лет назад +2

    literally just finished your first book; this was then followed by a google search which lead me to the above video, 1 down 4 to go.

  • @alotofbaddecisions2046
    @alotofbaddecisions2046 4 года назад +2

    2:49 nice surprise to see Matt Colville here

  • @asaskald
    @asaskald 7 лет назад +1

    Very informative and insightful. Thanks! I'll check out that recommended book in the description.

  • @arthurlandon8756
    @arthurlandon8756 8 лет назад +10

    This is good. I'm a big writing excuses fan... but I would say that John Truby's 7 steps are a little more precise. He also has a 22 step structure which can follow the 7, but it's pretty full on!

  • @batdoe
    @batdoe 14 лет назад

    I like all 5 parts of this talk. Will be watching the matrix soon.

  • @captainnolan5062
    @captainnolan5062 3 года назад

    Thank you for posting this, the content is very helpful.

  • @PuppyPetshopsTV
    @PuppyPetshopsTV 10 лет назад +3

    VERY insightful! I can see how a lot of these points can be applied to my own book, and how doing so during my revision process could drastically improve my book! Going straight to part 2! >:D

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  12 лет назад +2

    Unfortunately we can't. I no longer have the original video, and can't edit the music out.

  • @ItsyBitsyChelly
    @ItsyBitsyChelly 13 лет назад +1

    Fabulous!! Thanks so much for this !

  • @helium73
    @helium73 6 лет назад +1

    Discovery vs Outline writers. I was watching one video where they forced discovery writers to use outlines and outline writers to use the discovery method in order to improve their writing. I guess I've always been a discovery writer because I'd use notebooks and if I didn't just start I didn't fill the whole notebook up.

  • @noahway13
    @noahway13 12 лет назад +1

    Great personality and info. Screw the negative people.

  • @cameronfairbairn
    @cameronfairbairn 9 лет назад +92

    This is really great content but that music being jackhammered over the top of the sound is so annoying I want to headbutt the wall.

    • @jarhar007
      @jarhar007 7 лет назад +4

      Yes the music lasts too long. I still get all the information that I need from the videos, and it's not quite that annoying to me. I suspect it's not nearly as annoying to you as you would have us all believe.
      It's a free video on RUclips. Thank you to the person who posted!

    • @fergal2424
      @fergal2424 6 лет назад

      Tis only a few seconds at the beginning and end like

  • @abcadef6171
    @abcadef6171 7 лет назад +8

    My notes on this, for those that can't deal with the intro/outro: pastebin.com/KaXrUTkN

    • @sry8895
      @sry8895 7 лет назад +1

      Very helpful Abca Def, thank you! :)

    • @egyvalaki2774
      @egyvalaki2774 7 лет назад +1

      That's great! Thank you!

    • @TheSangson
      @TheSangson 7 лет назад

      You fucking win the internet, that's great. Thanks for doing this!

  • @CPollaers
    @CPollaers 4 года назад +1

    It would be great if this was in 7 parts

  • @SpiritedHeart94
    @SpiritedHeart94 Год назад +2

    Is it just me, or are most horror writers actually really funny in real life?

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  12 лет назад

    Thanks so much; I appreciate it! And thanks for watching the channel!

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  12 лет назад +1

    Glad you're liking the video and enjoyed the book.

  • @jessicagilbert4197
    @jessicagilbert4197 11 лет назад

    Love these videos

  • @faith5584
    @faith5584 10 лет назад +1

    This was great very helpful.

  • @SherylMotivatorTate
    @SherylMotivatorTate 12 лет назад

    found this to be both helpful and interesting thank you

  • @javencummins1426
    @javencummins1426 2 года назад

    Important things to go back on.
    7:55

  • @sspsllc
    @sspsllc 12 лет назад +8

    Can we lose the music background? Don't need it.

  • @dirkvoltaar
    @dirkvoltaar 2 года назад

    Dude is interesting and all, but I wish he’d shut up so I can hear the music.
    09:18 - Music comes back in. Hell yeah.

  • @honeyluv32690
    @honeyluv32690 3 года назад

    awesome thank you.

  • @JohnKennedy-tm9wl
    @JohnKennedy-tm9wl 3 месяца назад

    Nice intro

  • @kennielaur8015
    @kennielaur8015 8 лет назад +1

    Is there a transcript for this available?

  • @SamuelDaram
    @SamuelDaram 13 лет назад +1

    Talk starts at 0:30

  • @monsterfurby
    @monsterfurby Год назад

    Apart from the fact that maybe one should actually say factually true things about the plot of the examples one is using, this is definitely good advice.

  • @zhorian1071
    @zhorian1071 6 лет назад

    Surprisingly how I imagined him to look

  • @cheunky
    @cheunky 10 месяцев назад

    Got a gta loading screen for a writing lecture

  • @InfernoBlazeKiller
    @InfernoBlazeKiller 11 лет назад +1

    It's philophers stone!

  • @2185wisai
    @2185wisai 10 месяцев назад +1

    young dan wells 🥵

  • @stadsridders
    @stadsridders 12 лет назад

    Dear James, do you have your slides online?
    Great talk by the way :-)

  • @Bondanalloy
    @Bondanalloy 11 лет назад

    Does he mean the Stark Trek TNG RPG Narrator's Toolkit?

  • @kawa69
    @kawa69 2 года назад

    It's so weird because this guy shares the exact same name as me, and I'm also an aspiring writer

    • @theonlysinoda
      @theonlysinoda Год назад

      Cruel world brother, infinite timelines and in this one he's the real and you're the copy

  • @logeyewill
    @logeyewill 11 лет назад

    I bought it?

  • @tangobayus
    @tangobayus 12 лет назад +1

    great content. ending music comes too soon and too loud

  • @danbuffington75
    @danbuffington75 3 года назад +1

    2:54 The secret sauce...

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  12 лет назад

    I'm not sure. I'll have to take a look. I'll let you know probably in a day or two.

  • @danwells1958
    @danwells1958 11 лет назад +1

    Gabe, as I say in the video, this system is not mine; I did not make it up, and therefore no one can steal it from me. It's a common technique which I assume Cathy is also drawing on for her books. I know you're trying to help, and I appreciate that, but angry attacks and crass name-calling are not the way I want to be represented online. Your language is out of line, and I encourage you to apologize to Cathy. Note: I do not use gmail, so this is a new account I set up to respond here.

  • @doro626
    @doro626 12 лет назад

    4 people must like the Star Wars role playing rules better.

  • @hannahscottp4389
    @hannahscottp4389 6 лет назад

    WHY THE MUSIC OVER THE SOUND?!

  • @logeyewill
    @logeyewill 11 лет назад

    RELAX KATHY I OWN YOUR BOOK. IT WAS WELL SAID ALSO.

  • @logeyewill
    @logeyewill 11 лет назад

    YEAH, GOOD GUY TODAY BUT WHAT'S IS ARC

  • @Ophethxxd
    @Ophethxxd Год назад

    You have to pay the years
    Learn and focus for years
    Fail and fine tune your craft for years
    Then you will have unlimited income and unlimited freedom and lifelong skill
    7/13/23

  • @jmellenen2608
    @jmellenen2608 7 лет назад

    A point of order on your production. Your music, if that is what you call it, is supposed to be completely faded down by the time you start speaking!