How to Build Suspense in Writing

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  • Опубликовано: 7 мар 2021
  • Want to keep your reader on the edge of their seat? Suspense is a vital arrow to have in your literary quiver as a writer, even if you don’t write a particularly “suspenseful” genre. (Yes, it’s totally possible to have your readers in suspense even with a genre like contemporary romance!) In this podcast, authors Kate and Abbie are going to show you a few different awesome ways to build suspense and tension in your story.
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    Connect with Kate on Instagram (@lonehawkwriter) or her blog: www.heretocreateblog.com/
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Комментарии • 34

  • @thesamuraiman
    @thesamuraiman 3 года назад +16

    If you're in 3rd person, I feel like you could describe things the characters sees but doesn't quite understand. Put something in the scenery. The reader might question it, but the character might just look over it. 🤔🤔🤔

  • @juliaherkel8051
    @juliaherkel8051 3 года назад +19

    To channel my inner Abbie for a moment, I would truly say that to make suspense suspenseful, ask yourself, "Why does it matter?" ;) The moment you make something personal, it can truly become suspenseful because the reader knows it matters to the character.
    That aside, awesome episode! I was listening to it while making salad, and got a few weird looks from family members when I would randomly agree out loud with you guys. 😆 Wireless headphones are great, except when they're not.
    I also talk a lot during movies. (Maybe it's a writer thing?) I try to remember to not say EVERYTHING I think of out loud, because I've accidentally spoiled stuff for my family when I called a plot twist ahead of time before. 😅
    A great example of suspense and tension would probably be Inception, or The Dark Knight Rises. (A story mining episode on those would be really cool! 😉)
    And, to end this comment, here's a question I have: how do you both like to go about brainstorming? I personally have a tough time coming up with new ideas (weird, I know), and you both seem to have very different writing processes, so I was wondering how each of you like to go about doing that. :)

    • @KAEmmons
      @KAEmmons  3 года назад +6

      So glad we could be your salad-making soundtrack! More story-mining episodes are on the way...

  • @hellofromdavid
    @hellofromdavid 3 года назад +18

    The best way to keep a reader's attention is to make your writing: (1) interesting (2) flowing (3) credible (4) engaging (5) purposeful (6) entertaining (7) thought-provoking (8) satisfying (9) beautiful (10) intriguing, and (11) good company. _Tease_ your reader, and promise them (imply) a pay-off. Make your writing worth reading. If you do this then people will always ask for more.

    • @Yatukih_001
      @Yatukih_001 11 месяцев назад

      And don´t forget.........to ask.......the question.........´what if X, Y,Z was scary´. That is how Stephen King made it into becoming the world´s most mentioned name in the field of writing.

  • @ailsa2434
    @ailsa2434 3 года назад +1

    Four minutes in and I'm already reeling from the way Kate linked the words "suspense" and "suspended," as in having a few things suspended in the air and wanting to know how they tie up. I KNEW listening to this podcast was going to be a good idea :) Okay, I'm going to keep listening now.

  • @dilraising1007
    @dilraising1007 3 года назад +17

    Yay! Suspense. This podcast couldn't have come at a better time! I was just working on this, thank you! Huge fan :).

    • @KAEmmons
      @KAEmmons  3 года назад +4

      Yay! Stoked that this episode is coming to you at the right time. :) thanks for being here

  • @kennedypatton7874
    @kennedypatton7874 3 года назад +9

    Great Examples with Suspense:
    The Queen’s Gambit (Great Prologue)
    Anne with an E (Interesting Cliffhanger)

    • @leonmayne797
      @leonmayne797 2 года назад +1

      The Queen's Gambit also makes chess suspenseful (like they said you can make anything suspenseful if there's a strong internal conflict relating to it)

  • @heathicusmaximus8170
    @heathicusmaximus8170 Год назад +1

    I never thought about suspense being that feeling that "I have to see what's coming". I just didn't know what it was called. Excellent talk!

  • @liamurati8318
    @liamurati8318 3 года назад +4

    OMG!!!! I am literally dancing on my seat right now!!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH for building an episode answering my questions! (now going back to the episode lol)

  • @juliacoldwell1095
    @juliacoldwell1095 Год назад

    This was helpful. I always find these episodes help explain something I might know instinctually but can never put my finger on it or put it into words in order to repeat the same effect in my writing. This is some of the clearest writing advice I've come across in my research of writing advice, it is vague, but also specific every time to every story. So thanks to you both for the helpful tips. It also helps me understand why I enjoy other stories/movies so much, because the events matter to the characters, etc. :)

  • @Amy_Mi6
    @Amy_Mi6 3 года назад +6

    @Kate&Abbie ... Would you guys be up for doing a special episode where you just react to/give commentary on a movie you’re watching for the first time together? It’d probably be a bear to edit but I feel like it would totally be worth it :D

    • @KAEmmons
      @KAEmmons  3 года назад +4

      I LOVE this idea! Thanks so much for listening, Amy. We're stoked this one helped!

    • @Amy_Mi6
      @Amy_Mi6 3 года назад

      @@KAEmmons 😃💜💖🥰

  • @naomijohns4334
    @naomijohns4334 3 года назад

    Y'all are like my role models! When you mentioned watching movies and talking about the story/characters during it, I was like "That's so cool!!! I would love to watch a movie with y'all!" It's so funny cause my sister and I love talking about story structure and internal conflict and all of that (especially while we're watching the movie)! Thank you for this podcast, it has been really great for me in my writing journey!
    Keep going! Y'all are amazing! Don't give up.

  • @thesamuraiman
    @thesamuraiman 3 года назад +2

    The nail in "A Quiet Place" is also a good example of "chekhov"s gun"

    • @leonmayne797
      @leonmayne797 2 года назад

      Same with the pair of scizzors in The Outfit. The climax is seemingly over and they still haven't been used, leaving the audience on edge with the feeling that it might just be a bait climax (it is).

  • @Amy_Mi6
    @Amy_Mi6 3 года назад +1

    This is one of the topics I struggle with so thank you for this one! :)

  • @lise4369
    @lise4369 3 года назад

    Kate is great, love Abbie and glad I found Kate now too.

  • @thesamuraiman
    @thesamuraiman 3 года назад

    💜 Good topic. I kinda need this. My book isn't full on thriller/suspense, it's a fantasy/adventure, but I do want some moments to be suspenseful.

  • @kennedypatton7874
    @kennedypatton7874 3 года назад +4

    Hello, just want ask if you could make a video about Judgement vs Critiquing. I just finished reading the Lisa Cron books the information was very helpful but It feels like it closes me into a box. And normally find myself judging films or T.V. Shows a little too harshly and I often forget most writers don’t have the same knowledge as I do. I hope you understand-K.P.

  • @taylorduarte6725
    @taylorduarte6725 2 года назад

    I would love watching movies with yall! 😂😂😂 my husband is used to how i watch movies now. He even comes up with how it could've been done better with me 😂😂😂

  • @lise4369
    @lise4369 3 года назад

    24:25 me with my husband... Lmao
    He's gotten used to it. Keeps the remote close to pause it for me lol

  • @Millicent07
    @Millicent07 3 года назад +1

    I'm in love with you guys 💗 sister relationship goal 😍

  • @lindseyberrum
    @lindseyberrum 3 года назад +1

    😊

  • @kimparone3616
    @kimparone3616 Год назад

    Can you do something about understanding the psychology about the villain and understanding their goals?

  • @PinupSticknerd
    @PinupSticknerd Год назад

    Setup reaction action :: manga

  • @janaeporter3513
    @janaeporter3513 Год назад

    Katie: “-Why did I stop watching this series? Answer those questions and you can avoid-“
    Me: “Cobra Kai.”
    Katie: “Pitfalls…”

  • @thesamuraiman
    @thesamuraiman 3 года назад +1

    Speaking of studying good stories: The Last Airbender.
    That is all. 😂

  • @alejandrarodriguez8410
    @alejandrarodriguez8410 3 года назад

    I love so much this comment

  • @tolvfen
    @tolvfen Год назад

    "Finding secrets to discover, and not reveal how it is"

  • @PeterMacansky
    @PeterMacansky Год назад