What makes a poem … a poem? - Melissa Kovacs
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What exactly makes a poem … a poem? Poets themselves have struggled with this question, often using metaphors to approximate a definition. Is a poem a little machine? A firework? An echo? A dream? Melissa Kovacs shares three recognizable characteristics of most poetry.
Lesson by Melissa Kovacs, animation by Ace & Son Moving Picture Co., LLC.
#poetry
I don't know why but I am so glad that there's something machine cannot do while we can
夢族雪羽 Just let the machine make random things with a pencil, and if you are lucky, after one billion tries you have a short more or less good poem ;P
Something very useless
Cannot do Yet.
+Speedyjens well, someone's dead inside~~
夢族雪羽 Not for long
I've always liked Emily Dickinson's definition: "If I read a book and it makes my whole body so cold no fire can warm me, I know that is poetry. If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry."
That's powerful.
@@wutaeworld nice
The greatest
amazing amazing description.
did not know this, I will use it for my homework lol. Thanks!
As a translator, poems are the hardest pieces to translate but the eagerness to share it's beauty pushes us
Im sorry but it is impossible to know what someone felt and by the way had other views, and had a background unknown to us. when they wrote a poem. A poem is the result of the person’s own, unique thoughts. So, yeah impossible to translate.
@@ivceballos Was it Efim Etkind who said that there is no poetry difficult to translate, only lazy translators?
Well agreed!
i agree 100%
are u a 6 yr old to put minion on ur pfp
I've written hundreds of poems. I can't even count them. Always writing more. It's my great passion. I love reading others' poems too. My great fear is that I'll never be able to share them with an audience, stuck forever in my seclusion, obscure and hidden. Or worse, I will find a way to put it all out there only to be disregarded, rejected, or ridiculed.
My biggest fear.
Don’t say that you’re amazing believe in yourself my love
While I can't even write poems :/ 1) my vocabulary is very limited 2) Idk but it's hard for me to express what I feel into words
Hi! I hope you could watch the film Paterson. We'll wait you and your poems once you're ready. You are a good poet, trust yourself and continue writing more. Have a nice day ahead!
Would you share some of your poems?
Roses are gray,
Violets are gray,
I´m colorblind,
what shall I say...
hole - 1st drill press channel It was awesome
BigDogJang0 there's different types of color blindness
BigDogJang0 Monochromacy exists, although rare.
Jd D nice rhyme xD
Tyler of Twenty Øne Piløts said he raps because he writes poems that would take too long at a 'poetic pace' or words to that effect.
my teacher is gonna make us watch this in class I can smell it
opencabinets did she?
Mine did 3 days ago
Bruh same
what the hecc im doing that right now
Must be a very cool school you attend
This is why I don't completely understand people who think music lyrics or short poems on instagram aren't poetry. To me, it feels like it's everywhere, and can be made by anyone in anyway about anything. There aren't really any rules, which, I think, is what makes poetry its own unique thing.
That makes sense
Poems can be very short or very long and be good. Of all the poems I have written, one of my favourites is my shortest one.
Everyone writes so beautifully
Its so hard for me to put things down on paper
Don't get overwhelmed, the paper never judges you, you can write whatever you want and it would still be a meaningful verse. Everyone has something to contribute that creates our own meaning and understanding of the world
But you’re part of the everyone, so it’s your time to put it to paper :)
Keep writing
How is your writing now? If you keep at it, you’ll find it improves.
You don't have to show it to anyone to begin with. It doesn't have to be great. It will get better with time. Good luck
The woods are lovely, dark and deep
But I have promises to keep,
And poems to write before I sleep
Ephemeral Eternity Stopping by the woods a snowy evening!
Robert Frost is a LOVE
Ephemeral Eternity this poem makes my mind wander off into the wilderness of possibilities.
this makes me kind of sad, never knew why
Ephemeral Eternity agreed, there is also a kind of nostalgia attached to it.
my classmate in middle school when asked to create and read his poem in front of the class, stood quiet for a moment then said, "that was my poem, titled 'Quiet'."
Edit: the teacher told him to write an actual poem and perform again 😂
By the way this is my most successful youtube comment ever haha
record broken: shortest poem ever
john cage's 3'44
That's genius. One of the biggest poetry slammers in the world did something alike.
@@nephthyz2990 what did he do? I am curious
Hahahahahahahahaha genius!
I genuinely believe that everyone is a poet. We all have our unique perspectives on life that are formulated by our personal experiences.
At the touch love; every man becomes a poet. A quote attributed to Plato
Everyone is a poet, waiting to get discovered by love or struck by disaster
1. Poem emphasize language's musical qualities 1:01
2. Poems use condensed language 1:13
3. Poems often features intense feelings 1:20
Are songs poems? 2:10
Enter the prose poem 3:03
Conclusion: the evolvement of poetry 4:00
you just saved me, thank you so much!
Thanks!
Thx
Thanks the answer I needed u rock
You really understand poems they are very unique mainly because they can be written in different ways like song poems and even some normal songs.
Video title: What makes a poem...a poem?
Comment section: You know I'm somewhat of a poet myself!!
*poet
Poet*
A good poem embroides scenery and imagery
@@ashieshhh Lol, I didnt saw that for 3 months
@@_jadamalia1 Good to know
"Poetry is what gets lost in translation."
That's conventional everything is poetic enough,some are shallow enough to have lotus float over it, some are deep enough to hold treasures of sinking ships .....
paterson
Brilliant
maybe i ask for too much but maybe this thing was a masterpiece til you tore it all up.
@@cheng6940 maybe' in the tearing, at last' it became' a masterpiece, worthy' of remembrance.
This comment section is a fraternity of poets! I hope we all could meet and share all these in person. But for now whoever's reading this- You're an awesome poet. cheers!
What you think - here's something I just wrote today:
''Flesh and bone
Owns nothing but tombstones
But in its thinking zones
Makes wishingbones to dispose thrones
By creating codes
And making clones
With presupposed shows of wearing robes
And so in its nose it see no wholes
And builds roads that impose loads of drones
And as time flows it gets exposed
As taking loans
Without atones
Create rows of gravestones''
''Flesh and bone
Who ownes nothing but owes
Take the road that’s proposed by He who owns the throne
He shows and knows
And He will dispose a road that has no wholes
And so you won’t be froze by codes that are overexposed
And you will not moan
Missing roads of Ohs and No’s
He’s the one who shows the ropes
He’s the one who creates the codes
He’s the one who owns the zones
He’s the one who sows the woes
And He’s the one who throws the glows at your bones''
Visit me!
made this poem. not capitalized bc why not.
life is a false facade
death is the reality
look at the saltwater of the ocean
life is the water you drown yourselves into oblivion
death is the salt that doesn't sugarcoat
i love your positivity
GOOD POETRY
We love to read good poetry
It’s such a joy to see
When written by a poet’s heart
We know it will be good from the start.
As a poet, you see must write with feeling
If to the reader it will be appealing
And the poet knows he must write it well
If to hold the reader under It’s spell.
“A good poet is one that writes from the HEART”
R. Taub May12, 2015
lovely
Lovvvelyy!
It's so beautiful!
i dont like it
@@Haaniyeaah. also ❤❤❤
For some reason, I was brought almost to tears learning that robots can, in fact, NOT mimic humans in the area of poetry. It makes my heart swell to know this.
yet, this might change within a few years, unfortunately.
@@mobassirahmedhemel4736 It's already changing to an extent now. If you give ChatGPT reasonably detailed instructions it can produce what some may call good poetry. The following poem was written by a machine:
The sky, once bright and clear and blue,
Is now a thing we scarcely knew.
For every night, in every town,
Electric light shines all around.
The stars, once twinkling in the night,
Are now a fading, distant sight.
The moon, so full and round and fair,
Is hidden by the electric glare.
The sky is not the same as before,
A thing we loved and longed for.
It's hard to feel that sense of awe
When we can't see the sky at all.
Oh, how we long to see the stars,
To watch the moon and feel its charms.
But now it seems that all is lost,
Our sky, a thing of the past.
So let us mourn the passing years,
And all the beauty that disappears.
For though the sky may be concealed,
It's still a thing we long to feel.
Fairly unpolished, sure, but not half-bad. And the technology is only due to get better from here.
@@johnmcphee3136 Its true, chatGPT can concoct poetry well enough.
Robots can mimic everything and anything
Well, we're here and unfortunately it HAS. @@mobassirahmedhemel4736
hi
bye
that is a poem about my lovelife :(
Lmao laughed so hard
Ketchup and mustard
LMAO
Oof
My love life poem:
Hearing this guy's soft narrator's voice reciting the lyrics to one of the harshest diss tracks ever written (Biggie) was worth the click.
4:09 "The line between poetry, prose, song and visual art has blurred. "
Is the real definition of contemporary poetry indeed....
Roses are red, BB-8 is round, it's over Anakin I have the high ground.
You underestimate my powers!!!
Don't do it Anakian!
Ricky D aa
Conner Cox The best in the galaxy!!!
Conner Cox lolololollll
The ending was poetic
WhiZ Zithhz RL It's open for interpretation
*Dramatic Vsauce music plays*
ur poetic hah
1930s poets(being simple): today I ate spaghetti...
2021 teachers: spaghetti represents pain and suffering..
The very form of poetry lends itself to being more than the literal words on a page.
Why when you have so few, would you choose those words? And why would you say that they are a poem? Unless it is a statement about breaking perceptions of poetry, transcending poetry, and how everything is the interpretation of the reader, which only creates a cult of personality around the author themselves, and will therefore not allow a poem to exist free from the other poems by the author, and from the authors life
Totally true hahahahhahahahhahah
Hi, I've always liked poetry and I had quite a knack for it considering my age when we learned about it in 6th grade, but I haven't written any poems in the two years since. Now we are learning about poetry again in 8th grade, and here is a Haiku that I wrote for class yesterday.
The Rain -by Me
The rain thuds loudly
Its presence always the same
Yet ever-changing
It's not perfect, but for my first poem in two years, I'm pretty proud of it.
Awesome. Great job dude, really liked it.
I loved ur poem!
It’s beautiful! Please continue writing and don’t ever lose your passion for poetry
Why did such a simple poem touch my heart? Is it because it was about the rain? Or did it seem like a metaphor for something?
Amazing dude your awesome just keep practicing
Poetry is a feeling,
With such a powerful meaning,
Which word came out,
And word came in,
And so it create,
A wonderful being.
wow 😇
"Roses are blue,
Violets are red,
I have to go to the bathroom..."
-Patrick Star
I don't think Patrick star from SpongeBob is that smart
Amazing.
A poem is dance of words
With each stanza waltzing with words
A poem is art without the lines and shapes
But with its canvas filled with words
A poem is a song and an instrument
But with no notes changed just your burdened voice crackling along the waves
Most of all poem is art,
It is alive and manual
Poetry is a world filled with people different from all with rhyme or not,
It is a poem nevertheless.
It's beautiful.
Here's something I just wrote today:
''Flesh and bone
Owns nothing but tombstones
But in its thinking zones
Makes wishingbones to dispose thrones
By creating codes
And making clones
With presupposed shows of wearing robes
And so in its nose it see no wholes
And builds roads that impose loads of drones
And as time flows it gets exposed
As taking loans
Without atones
Create rows of gravestones''
''Flesh and bone
Who ownes nothing but owes
Take the road that’s proposed by He who owns the throne
He shows and knows
And He will dispose a road that has no wholes
And so you won’t be froze by codes that are overexposed
And you will not moan
Missing roads of Ohs and No’s
He’s the one who shows the ropes
He’s the one who creates the codes
He’s the one who owns the zones
He’s the one who sows the woes
And He’s the one who throws the glows at your bones''
Here is one I just wrote today:
From nowhere to nevermind
Living alone on a island in the sky
My soul yarns for itself
But the eyes are not made to see I
When talking out loud in the night
Silence seems to be the loudest line
Soul can you speak to me in my mind?
I haven’t heard you silence in a while
But how can you be listing
And talking to yourself at the same time?
@@turiguliano416 I like it! could you tell me more about the meaning behind?
@@fellith4295
Thak you! Means a lot.
Are you talking about 'From nowhere to nevermind' or 'Flesh and bone'?
Please let me know and I will give you the breakdown on what it means to me, and then you can give me your interpretation too maybe.
:)
Here is one I just wrote today:
From nowhere to nevermind
Living alone on a island in the sky
My soul yarns for itself
But the eyes are not made to see I
When talking out loud in the night
Silence seems to be the loudest line
Soul can you speak to me in my mind?
I haven’t heard you silence in a while
But how can you be listing
And talking to yourself at the same time?
That's beautiful!
Beautifully written ❤
Red as a rose,
Blue as the sea,
The other way round,
Is Poe a tree?
Kendrick Lamar Lyrics (Never Catch Me Flying Lotus ft Kendrick Lamar)
This is poetry -
I can see the darkness in me and it's quite amazing
Life and death is no mystery and I wanna taste it
Step inside of my mind and you'll find curiosity, animosity
High philosophy, hyper prophesied meditation
Reminisce on my wonder years and I wonder here
Sentiments of my words ain't been so sincere
The sentiment of my nerves that I just persevere
The big thought of fallin' off disappeared to my fate
They say that Heaven's real
Analyze my demise, I say I'm super anxious
Recognize I deprive this feeling and then I embrace it
Vandalizing these walls only if they could talk
Conversations won't contemplate to my dark thoughts
abdullah hussian one of the best rappers of all time for me
I love everything about that song; the beat, the melody; and his delivery of that verse.
how about the TPAB poem "I remember you was conflicted, misusing..."
Very much enjoyed your discussion. I, too, am a
poet but specialize in Japanese forms: i. e. haiku, tanka, haibun, kyoka, senryu.
I hope you don’t mind me sharing a tanka and my haiku tribute poem to Matsuo Bashō’s frog with commentary by the late AHA founder and poet Jane Reichhold who considered my poem among her top 10 haiku of all time. What an honor.
Here’s the Bashō poem and commentary:
Bashō’s frog
four hundred years
of ripples
- -Al Fogel
“At first the idea of picking only 10 of my favorite haiku seemed a rather daunting task. How could I review all the haiku I have read in my life and decide that there were only 10 that were outstanding? Then realized I was already getting a steady stream of excellent haiku day by day through the AHA
forum.
The puns and write-offs based on Basho's most famous haiku are so
numerous I would have said that nothing new could be said with this
method, but here Al Fogel proved me wrong. Perhaps part of my delight in this haiku lies in the fact that I agree with him. Here he is saying one thing
about realism-ripples are on a pond after a frog jumps in, but because it refers back to Basho and his famous haiku, he is also saying something about the haiku and authors who have followed him. We, and our work, are just ripples while Basho holds the honor of inventing the idea of "the
sound of a frog leaping is the sound of water".
As haiku spreads around the world, making ripples in more and larger ponds, its ripples are wider-including us all. But his last word reminds us all that we are only ripples and our lives are that ephemeral. It will be the frogs that will remain”.
And my tanka:
returning home
from a Jackson Pollock
exhibition
I smear my face with paint
and turn into art
-All love in isolation
from Miami Beach,
Florida.
Al
This is lovely. Thanks for sharing.
This is one of the poem on rain and a conversation with the earthly man….
And here is the poem-
*Address to the Rain God*
I sat gravely before the window,
watching the dark that laid before me
profoundly thinking for a moment or so,
about the Showery world that I could see.
And up the heaven, I looked henceforth
Towards the paradise, till the eye's sought
'What makes him rain such?'
'Brutish he is' is what I thought.
Above the world I looked far end
And beneath came the God of Rain
Thundering the skies and the heart of men
stiffening the shower that had went insane.
I stood there aquivering with fear
for he stood in front of me
and asked me for my remembrance
knowing well that it is he who caused it.
Politely I said with tongue no less,
"This world is beautiful with creations unparallel"
But the unstoppable rains have made such mess
Why don't you stop that you shall!
'It is you the humans', replied he 'who pray for rain'
The rain that quenches the Earth's thirst
Deepening the swift streams that long last
And then calling for it to return to the den.
And Oh! the inner me felt deafeated
But I stood there losing no faith
But that was prime, this is subordinate
"Has the thirst, vanished not yet!"
The rain has caused havoc on crust
The temporary world is biting the dust
Fields overflowed by the tyrant rain
'Floods and rain', are they same?
The king of splashes was pleased with me,
At least what I thought from what I saw
And replied with a strong voice
With the winds added to his draw.
Glad are you, jolly are all,
Happy are you when the rains do fall.
Irrigating the fields," the mother earth weeps
For the joy, that water beneath seeps.
The joy lasts shorter do remember,
For nothing lasts Forever
and sorrow after joy is a chain of cycle
Each in it's time is completely great
So he told and so he went
Leaving an impression that long lasted
Shaken was I and ended up in faint
Oh the conversation was just what I dreamt.
The story still doesn't end here and I ain't,
For it teaches that nothing is permanent.
Time heals everything, just wait for the day
For joy and sorrow both are great.
Joy comes after Sorrow, misery after happiness
Just don't look behind the eternal fence.
Life is not a bed of thorns, wise men say,
For a man on alms is a king next day
And here is the link
ruclips.net/video/kTBUKLOasr8/видео.html
Shout out to the people who made these sketches. These are great! Ted's animators are amazing!
Vsauce wrote the title
Fearr hw do you know
TheLegend27 Well all the titles he uses are questions( most of the time ) and the questions are always queries about the most basic things being true, or doubting their true nature.
So well this title perfectly fits Vsauce's criterion for choosing a title
Fearr he actually has a video like this about the shortest poem
hannah sab Damn! looks like im getting wayy to analytic then😂😁
Or, did he? (insert weird BGM)
“Cross It All Out”
Writing poetry is cake
You can bake in one take
It’s just a mild chore
To make metaphors
And little difficulty
To toss in some simile
It’s easy as pie
Like a stoner getting high
To write like a Keats
Or a Poe or a Yeats
Then cross out two-thirds
But just the wrong words
That's all that it takes
If you mind
your line breaks
And create clever consonance
When considering your consonants
Then there's the ending
Did u write this ?
It's awesome 🔥
@@thelazylumpofprotoplasm8491 yeppers
This art style is something I've been trying to achieve for a long time. Very good work!
Thanks! It's just pencil and paper shot over a lightbox with a regular ol' camera.
@@aceandson I just really like how your drawings can seem so detailed when in reality they look clean and fairly simple, I've tried to draw in a similar way but I've never really been able to pull it off. It's fascinating and very cool
@@psychic_digit A lot of practice! And teamwork. There's no trick to drawing how you want to draw, just hard work.
With this film, we're helped by the process. Drawing on paper is almost always going to be more naturally textured, that helps with the look of being detailed. Then we "backlit" the art so you can see the layers through the paper. This adds even more visual activity.
But the important thing -just keep doing it!
@@aceandson Thank you :) Keep up the great work!
I'm a simple man; I see biggie and i click
Lucas Wong same lol
Same lol
exactly what i did
My favorite poet/rapper. I think I'm just as good if not a better writer than one of the kings of "Rhythm & Poetry".
Dang! This is a lot of us🤠
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Some day we'll ride down blood gulch avenue,
It's red vs. red,
And blue vs. blue,
It's eye against eye and me against you.
Rowan Brown Nice
👏👏👏
I might be a year late on this comment but AAAAAAAYYYYEEEE!!!!
Duuuuude that's awesome!!!! ❤❤
Really good
One of my favorite poetic lines comes from the opening of Marilyn Manson's song, "The Reflecting God" -
Your world is an ashtray.
We burn and coil like cigarettes.
The more you cry, your ashes turn to mud.
If that doesn't get you viscerally and give you a clear visual, I don't know what will.
While it's hard to technically define poetry, we recognize a poem when we see/hear it.
For sale:
Baby shoes,
never used.
Kinda rude of you not to put who actually wrote that
Carrot Slice hahahaha
It's a extremely short story, not a poem
deep, man
Used baby
For sale;
Never shoes.
Wow! This blows my mind. Teachers have never taught us about this. I think everyone learning poetry should watch this video first so they can have a better concept of what poems are. Thanks for everyone who make this video!
"The robots were caught red-handed", the most happiest words for a poet.
This video taught me a lot.
Inspired to write down a jot.
I think I'll begin,
before the video ends,
and do it whilst lying on my cot.
Poem is the all time way of expressing heart in the most natural way, it's just feels and I am so happy I am a part of it and how much it helped me express my dark moments.
Feelings can kill one's emotion of defeat..but the selection of proof..is to convince what desires you can achieve.. emotions are felt through the monument of entice..so to calculate the infringement..is to perceive the concept of trust.. express yourself sweetie 😉😎🤭
The woods are lovely, dark and deep
But I have promises to keep
And syllabus to complete before I sleep
I have no idea what it is about the line 'miles to go before I sleep' that its just evokes idek what to call it because its not sadness but it feels more like nostalgia similar to how I'd if I see something that reminds me strongly of my childhood. I find it so weird that I feel nostalgia.
You should publish this
@@amnakausar9306 I agree... I felt some kind of connection or nostalgia when I read that line in the poem...
That poem is so tragicly beautiful
@@amnakausar9306 isn't it the one that's called "Stopping by Woods on a snowy evening" by Robert Frost?
What makes a poem a poem?
It's when words become your best chum
To take away your pain or boredom
Doesn't matter if it's long or short
Full of imagery or just plain quotes
As long as it speaks to your soul
That's what's most important above all.
@Masked Pawn Thank you.🙏
This is good
Of all the flowers in the land,
The rose is queen, so fair and grand.
Her petals soft as morning dew,
Her colors bright in every hue.
The rose is love in flower form,
A symbol of emotions warm.
Her fragrance sweet, her beauty rare,
A treasure beyond all compare.
With thorns so sharp and leaves so green,
The rose is nature's perfect scene.
A sight to see in every season,
A symbol of life's endless reason.
For in the rose we find a way,
To celebrate both night and day.
In joy and love and sorrow too,
The rose is there, forever true.
So let us praise this flower fair,
And cherish her with love and care.
For in the rose, we find a friend,
A beauty that will never end.
Written by ChatGPT
I think it lacks direction somewhat but it has a very good sense of flow with a suitable conclusion. Surprising what AI is capable of.
Started off confused, ended off feeling smart asf
@@lemoneproductions420 agreed
Ive written poems.
Here's a line:
Life is a gift you must appreciate,death is a burden you must not underestimate.
Have a lovely day ;)
May I use the "death is a burden you must not underestimate" for an assignment?
s t e a l
for personal use :)
👍
Listen to your heart
No sound but a void
A hole but no key
Even less then empty
Living in confusion
And drown in illusion
Sinking in my own creation
It is my imagination
One year late but this is really good dude/dudette keep it up!
This is actually good!
@@mohamedahmedelrouie446 dudette, love it hahah!
The poetry I find here is that it has taken 4 years and 2 million views for this video to find me on a night where I struggle with meaning of a beating heart. I think poetry is a like like molecules. It’s everywhere, always. There is great poetry in trying to explain poetry.
You've got a beautiful understanding of this art.
I saw a quote online that what makes a poem great is its creative sentences thats full of mysteries for the reader to understand or something like that
Great range of poets in this clip, across cultures and time.
Thank you. This video is absolutely amazing. It really explains the essence and the composition of a poem.
I would love to see a video detailing the changes in poetry throughout time.
"the robots were caught %100 of the time"
ChatGPT: hold my beer.
"Me We" turn the W upside down and you got the modern world.
meme
me me big boy
clever girl
Are you 14 and do you think that this is deep?
meme
I don't think robots could never be better poets since one has to feel something when making a poem.
Great point mate
N. H. II- Peaceful Poems 1-5 and N. H. II- Humble Poems 1-5 are on RUclips, and here is a link to one of the videos:
ruclips.net/video/Sgi6vbn5Qco/видео.html
Thanks, there is a vulnerable beauty to poetry that other mediums simply cannot capture. I try to tap into this myself. Thank you.
roses are red
violets are dandy
get in my van
ill give you some candy
zupermiez it was a good poem
zupermiez
roses are red
please make it stop.
I just keep buying
albums of Kidzbop.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
It appears that
Jacksfilms viewers are here too
Bat Lady of course m8
dude kids these days prefer WiFi.
There are a lot of ways to represent poetry, it can be on a rhyme or a sonnet, it can be narrative or lyrical. Only humans can make it and it is so beautiful how they express themselves. Poetry is based most of the time on feelings and they can be so deep that they can touch others, they use vivid images and they are capable to move society.
I am a poet i discovered it not long ago! I love to express with small poetry stories. I am not afraid to share as I do them for me 😊but if I find that most of the time others that connect love them
❤
The words and the way you used them in this video was a form on poetry to me
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'll go to bed
Because my paper is due
1234Daan4321 mood
Rhyming sucks.
Freeverse
Is cool.
Fite me.
should it not be "won't go to bed"?
A voz desse homem é tão boa de ouvir que eu quase durmo
Expressing what it means to be human and what we experience as such will always break and bend the boundaries of our ability to express it
2:39 These Lyrics are from The album “Ready to die” And The song is “Who shot ya”
A snowless winter
Summer with a sleeping sun
Autumn without colors
Spring, no plants that bloom
A painting without paint
Blue eyes, but no ocean
Flowers with lost petals
Kind words, no emotion
A dreamless sleep
A sleepless night
Lonely thoughts
The moon lost her light
(Wrote it at 3am)
wow, that's beautiful :D
There are places where it doesn't snow in winters, soo.... I haven't seen snow in my life.🙄
So beautiful!!
@@skmuskanrahaman1690 me too i am from Philippines
@@skmuskanrahaman1690 That was his point exactly…
i love how they just casually reference tupac at 2:19 and then the notorious BIG
Its Faster than the speed of light
Which can shine threw a pebble
Can break a Heart of Stone at sight
That's a Woman's Love for a Rebel
A silly wave,
The loudest laugh,
A sunny smile,
but deep, deep down,
inside my heart,
I want to cry
I want to scream and
i want to shout,
I feel the walls breaking,
cracking and shaking,
failing to contain this overwhelming wave
of emotions welling up inside my heart,
I wanna get help but I
don't know where to start.
This isn't the best, but thanks for reading lol
Very good.
And I'll say this to you: I started off reading this with a halfway done eye roll, but then the swift change in message caught me off guard, and I could feel that silent dispair. I was touched. Bravo.
My only critique was the 1st verse. "A silly wave" it's what made me initially biased. But the progression won me over.
What's the title? Give it a sign it off with your name. Don't let it get lost in this video. Post it online on medium or some poetry blog.
I hold the belief that if it flows, it's poetry
if it's staccato, it's rap.
Like Analog and Digital
Aditya Khanna Was this an allusion to EnteTaimnment? :O
Okay you are not German... welp... probably not ._.
I am sorry, I have no idea about what you said :/
Aditya Khanna It is a German rapper ^^ And he made a song called "Analog Digital", and you also mentioned the word rap :P
Rap is also a form of poetry
rap can be staccato, but rap flows. rap = rythm and poetry.
POV: your teacher posted this video that is part of an assignment
cipper lmaoooo yep
Yep xd
Yepppp
Exactly
yup
Imo anything that can evoke an emotion or a feeling is art.
The last sentence of the video is hilarious in a post-chatgpt world
IKR
Hey let's put our favourite poem lines in the comment !!!
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference .
now thats my new favorite
Dark Nebulae This is mine, by William Butler Yeats:
"For to articulate sweet sounds together
Is to work harder than all these, and yet
Be thought an idler by the noisy set
Of bankers, schoolmasters, and clergymen
The martyrs call the world."
Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."
But if it had to perish twice
You barely put any of it! The meaning completely transforms in context
I remember my language teacher telling us about a guy who wrote the title "The Emperor's New Sonnet" on a piece of paper
*_and the rest of the paper was blank_*
Once we were like two peas in a pod.
Her voice, an enchanting Nightingale's song,
Compelled me to nod.
Her laughter and cheerful, vivid memory were so strong,
They eroded life's pains and discord.
But in a moment, everything was gone,
And I'm still waiting like a moron.
Without you, nothing feels like home.
The joyfulness from her presence has gone.
But I'm still waiting like a moron
무엇이 시를 시답게 만들어주는지에 대하여 배워보는 시간이 되었습니다. 시에 특징에 대해서 알아보았습니다. 정말 재미있는 시간이 되었습니다. 감사합니다. 응원합니다!!!
Poetry is to give soul to things
and to identify with them emotionally.
Poetry is a way of life.
🙂 thank you
Feeling, emotion, thought, idea and reflection get converted into poetry if one has the instincts to write to add to creatively, if one seeks to sketch and draw. Images, thoughts, ideas, memories, remembrances, scenes and sights give an impetus to write. A poem may be about the tombstone of Yeats with the own epitaph of his. A poem may be about Shakespearean heroines or Shakespearean criticism. A poem may be a tribute to Wordsworth, Milton, Shakespeare, Yeats. A poem may be about Lincoln, Gandhi, Martin Luther King. it may be about book-reading.
It is clear that seven years ago, they hadn't heard about the poet Chad Gepeté yet.
I'm here because of Tupac and B.I.G.
Im a simple man, i see Biggie, i click it.
@@besiprimitif9513 imo tupac, nas and eminem way better poets than biggie.
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rythm and poetry
k cool u bum
I felt like it was hard to detached
Like it felt cold and my body ached.
It felt horrible to think.
I did not want to think .
I feel better now, and the aching is going away.
But it comes back again if I don’t keep my mind in place.
When a Poem gives itself over to Linguistic resonances both in its creation and recepetion is when Poetry arises. Otherwise it becomes the arena of ideologies. It occurs both at the site of creation and reception(the participation of the author and the audience).
[By Linguistic resonances I mean , for brevity, that sweet spot of dynamics of words autonomously falling in place mutually evoking awe inspiring psychological states!! I don't want to elaborate more and make it a Task/an essay in itself]
i absolutely love the use of colour in this video
Poem is a song
Poem is an art
Poem is what you hold in dear
Beauty in all more than words
There is a poem in everything
Heard if one want to hear
That's really good honestly.
Thank u
In Arabic , poetry is a way more fascinating subject because in almost all poems must rhyme with the structure composed of lines made of two parallel sentences , the second sentence in all lines must rhyme together and these restrictions ignited creativity in a way that almost all poems parallel sentences takes a symmetrical shape from a rhythmic perspective.
We need poem- to really help today world- that is one reason I started my channel to express different emotion that has been going in my life! The poem is the life of expression!
I love when my teacher assigns us to create a poem it fills the void in me
Sadness befalls me,
Love crushes me.
Under the soul, there's nothing
To rid of pain, I’ve given up
I draw
I draw
My soul
My creativity is as fast as a liar's tongue
The speed that I draw is the speed a cheetah runs
I draw
The blood dancing through my veins
I draw
The sea of corpses that sinned
I draw
My life reaching its end
Damn man, that narrator's voice is so soothing
See poetry as a concept than as a structure. It opens us to more poetry in everyday language.
I was inspired to write this poem
Leonora
I remember the way
The sun lights up your eyes,
As we laugh, cry, listen and sigh.
Dream under the summer skies.
I remember the days
We would sing in the wind
And dance under the rain.
Behold, the rainbow and the rays.
The gentle breeze breathes
On your hair,
And your fair face.
Now, I lie in the meadow.
Smiling, laughing,
Crying and sighing
While the flowers say hello.
The days are long.
In the wind, I am dancing,
Singing your favorite song.
But I am all alone.
You are just another memory.
Just another rose.
Alas, the white rose is plucked
And laid on a stone.
I love the animation!! they did a great job!!
I picked up a slice of
rich, creamy, sweet chocolate cake,
and then put it back.
I'm so proud of myself.
I wrote this in 5 secs for a friend yesterday. Based on a true story, but don't expect to get emotional lol
😂😂😂
Funny I was on a train this afternoon and saw something out the window in the gloom that prompted a deep thought. If only I could write a poem to convey it!
I love love love that they included lyrics from BIG's "Who Shot Ya"!!!
🔥 Tell em
You are, to me, like moonlight
You're an autumn chill
After the dreadful heat of summer
You're the sound of rain
After gasping from drought
I reach out my hand
And sense your charge like lightning through my fingers
Familiar like coming home
I speak to you
And it's morning dew by the river at dawn
I think of you
And my body's born of fire
Your mind deep like a cavern
Your voice soft and lambant like fireflies
Your friendship a phoenix born of dormant ashes
And your soul an old friend found again
You are, to me, like moonlight
Immeasurable