"Something Lurks Below The Coal Yard" Creepypasta Scary Story

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  • Опубликовано: 23 сен 2024
  • CREEPYPASTA STORY Author► Randal Ray
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Комментарии • 83

  • @carnitagroves7758
    @carnitagroves7758 Год назад +10

    Me to main character: How'd THAT work out for ya, Sir Snoops A Lot?!

  • @maganechikujoin2020
    @maganechikujoin2020 Год назад +6

    Call if anything unusual happens proceed to never call typical.🤬
    Now i need to look for another new guard.

  • @soulreaver1983
    @soulreaver1983 Год назад +11

    Hpppy Sunday everyone another fantastic video many thanks!🙂👍

    • @SexyGrandmaDarkness
      @SexyGrandmaDarkness Год назад +1

      Hello 👋 my dear friend how are you doing today?I'm great 😊 I hope that you have a Superlicious Sunday too:) be safe OK 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️❤️

    • @soulreaver1983
      @soulreaver1983 Год назад +2

      @@SexyGrandmaDarkness I'm good thanks my friend I hope you are keeping well and having an enjoyable day 🙂

    • @SexyGrandmaDarkness
      @SexyGrandmaDarkness Год назад +1

      @@soulreaver1983 yes 😇😘 I'm having a great day thanks Mt dear friend 🥰 be safe 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️❤️

  • @RelativelyBest
    @RelativelyBest Год назад +21

    Fine example of a horror story that really shouldn't have been written in First Person perspective.

    • @DocBree13
      @DocBree13 10 месяцев назад

      I think it was more effective in the first person than it would have been in the third person.

    • @RelativelyBest
      @RelativelyBest 10 месяцев назад

      @@DocBree13 But if the dude turned into a monster, then who is he narrating the story to? And why is he telling the story as if he's a normal person if he apparently isn't? It just doesn't make sense to have him be the narrator. Besides, the point of first person perspective is that it's inherently subjective; it's meant for unreliable narrators telling stories where you're supposed to read between the lines. This one is a bit too straightforward for that, it really seems to read like a third person story.

  • @carolanett7762
    @carolanett7762 Год назад +8

    Sounds like the beginning of a great horror story.

  • @soviet9922
    @soviet9922 Год назад +5

    Is in first person how he is telling what happened to him ?

  • @teacherjohn_stoic-dreamven7373
    @teacherjohn_stoic-dreamven7373 Год назад +28

    Saw “Coal” in the title, and insta clicked. Read “Coal yard” and was like “Alright, sounds cool. I’ll give it a listen”

  • @aimeeprincessofpower
    @aimeeprincessofpower Год назад +6

    I've worked at a couple of coal-fired power plants interesting places

  • @teslastellar
    @teslastellar Год назад +3

    Cool story 👍 Thanks for the narration 🙂

  • @learninghowto101
    @learninghowto101 Год назад +2

    Last part reminded me of a warewolf story i watched before, titled ginger or gingerly i am not sure but it sounds like that

    • @WickedintheStarlight
      @WickedintheStarlight 7 месяцев назад

      What's a warewolf? Is that a wolf that likes to hang around warehouses? It's spelled werewolf not warewolf.

  • @sherirandall5236
    @sherirandall5236 Год назад +4

    Thank You!!! 🤗

    • @SexyGrandmaDarkness
      @SexyGrandmaDarkness Год назад

      Hello 👋 my Dear friend how are you doing today? I'm good 😊😊 be safe OK 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️❤️

  • @jonathanjackgoodman2764
    @jonathanjackgoodman2764 Год назад +8

    It's been said a million times but it's worth repeating. Never carry a weapon your incapable of using. Blades are very difficult, grab a flip baton and police mace or a .38. these things are almost idiot proof.

  • @jayceec3539
    @jayceec3539 7 месяцев назад

    The power is out for our whole neighborhood. So these stories are much more creepy! Tho the constant ads suck ,when our family doesn't have the $ needed to block them.

  • @amyrobles4780
    @amyrobles4780 Год назад +7

    You know a story is good when you are listening and catch yourself having raised eyebrows and gaspsing. I usually listen as I'm going to sleep and was about to take a nap but don't think I will now. I don't want to see the boogy man! Excellent narration!

  • @carabranch9583
    @carabranch9583 Год назад +3

    IT's good to hear your voice

  • @tammyabner616
    @tammyabner616 Год назад +3

    ❤❤ that was awesome 😮

  • @TheTank1110
    @TheTank1110 Год назад +3

    Kind of reminds me of the troggs from the Fallout 3 DLC

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Год назад

      The Tank
      I found out about Fallout from Fallout Equestria and I'm more of an Elder Scrolls fan.

  • @mr.g5593
    @mr.g5593 Год назад +4

    Thanks Mr.CGS 👋😁🇧🇻

    • @SexyGrandmaDarkness
      @SexyGrandmaDarkness Год назад +1

      Hi there my Sweetlicious Mr. g how are you doing today? I'm great 😊be safe OK 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️❤️

    • @mr.g5593
      @mr.g5593 Год назад +1

      Hello sexy Grandma 👋😊🇧🇻

  • @tecnotrog1
    @tecnotrog1 Год назад +3

    Hey Brett sorry to ask this way but I wanted to up the amount of my membership I can't find the increase membership option help! How do I do it?🦉

    • @SexyGrandmaDarkness
      @SexyGrandmaDarkness Год назад +1

      Hello 👋 my Sweetlicious friend:) how are you doing today? I'm good 😊 be safe OK 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️❤️

    • @tecnotrog1
      @tecnotrog1 Год назад

      @@SexyGrandmaDarkness ♥️🦉

  • @rygygardens
    @rygygardens Год назад +4

    Earbuds in... time to mow 2 acres

    • @SexyGrandmaDarkness
      @SexyGrandmaDarkness Год назад +1

      Hello 👋

    • @rygygardens
      @rygygardens Год назад +3

      @@SexyGrandmaDarkness how are u doing on this beautiful day? Here in MI it's 75° so I'm doing yard work and getting the outdoor garden ready

    • @SexyGrandmaDarkness
      @SexyGrandmaDarkness Год назад

      @@rygygardens I'm gladlicious 😁 that you are enjoying this Awesome springlicious 🌻🌼🌷🌸🌺🌿🪴🌳 weather:) be safe OK 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️❤️

  • @tinalouise1970
    @tinalouise1970 Год назад +1

    Heck hea ! I had a V Star 650. The freedom and the wind and just not being so confined Totally free and stresses went away. I miss my bike . It was purple with a mustang saddle seat . Well at least I had my time with her.
    *Please forgive me . I broke my glasses and out of contacts. But I'm good now. Yep country girl with a hint of closeted nerd. Lol

  • @jayceec3539
    @jayceec3539 7 месяцев назад

    What if Jim never left the bunker?

  • @remnant0888
    @remnant0888 Год назад

    Hmmm intersting and good

  • @grimsgraveyard3598
    @grimsgraveyard3598 Год назад +2

    So did his friend also become a thing like him or do they trade places with the person they bite on the neck I guess? This story shouldn't have been told from only his perspective it doesn't make sense since he wasn't human anymore to type this out and send it. You know like the traditional creepypasta fashion oh the survivor wrote this or I'm a vampire now so I can still write this. When you're already some cave dwelling the descent had a love child with a vampire monster you can't submit a story.

    • @CocoWantsACracker
      @CocoWantsACracker Год назад

      Yeah, pet peeve of mine too. If you call it a creepy pasta, follow the rules for a creepy pasta and make it plausible to have been posted. And scary. Nothing wrong with writing different things, but don't call them creepy pastas then.

  • @angelicalofgren6480
    @angelicalofgren6480 Год назад +4

    Is there a group of skinwalkers living down there?! 😨😱

  • @happymonkey420
    @happymonkey420 Год назад

    Whoop Whoop homie ✌🏻🐵✌🏻

  • @SexyGrandmaDarkness
    @SexyGrandmaDarkness Год назад +7

    Thanks ❤CGS for making my relaxation Sundaylicious Day evening more enjoyable 😊 🎉and kudos to the author of this great story!!!! Be safe everyone OK 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️❤️

  • @MrBacon4321
    @MrBacon4321 Год назад

    So what? They switched? or he infected him or something?

    • @ryanabrahams8061
      @ryanabrahams8061 Год назад +1

      Yea, i wasn't sure if this was a "he turned into one of them" or "it was acrually him all along" story.
      I mean, his boss said it's only been recently hard keeping people around, and he's only recently started. Plus, he didn't like the biker guy.

  • @FloridaMan0561
    @FloridaMan0561 Год назад +6

    It’s pronounced BOO-E knife 😊

    • @SexyGrandmaDarkness
      @SexyGrandmaDarkness Год назад +2

      I have one it's awesome from my Great Great Great..uncle ❤ 😢 miss him still 🥺 be safe OK 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌️❤️

    • @sam2x13
      @sam2x13 Год назад +5

      It can be pronounced either way. Depends on where you're from. Just like how David Bowie pronounced his name.

    • @BostonBaby1000
      @BostonBaby1000 Год назад +5

      Knife made famous by John Bowie? I pronounce his name BOW-ee.

    • @tiffanybenefield1980
      @tiffanybenefield1980 Год назад +5

      ​@@BostonBaby1000 I say his name the same way as you do.

    • @sam2x13
      @sam2x13 Год назад +5

      English is weird like that. Just like the bow of a ship or a bow and arrow. Spelled the same pronounced differently.

  • @tjflacid
    @tjflacid 7 месяцев назад

    That endind was trash

  • @jacquelinevrooman7755
    @jacquelinevrooman7755 Год назад

    I'm buying that underworld bra I saw in the first commercial.

  • @angelicalofgren6480
    @angelicalofgren6480 Год назад +1

    Is there a group of skinwalkers living down there?! 😨😱